------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22123 | kalab | 2007-10-06 17:47:17 -0700 (Sat, 06 Oct 2007) | 1 line After the circle to the end. I think I finished enough to feel if I read again I will be able to begin near the propaganda bomb. The words where a read. I did find a few sentence rewritten for the record. The story has the flow. The words feel as they should. Some corrections with action to show movement, but the words added added more than a word's worth of words. ...The does flow. I think it is told as the record. The record shown that Psycho was the one who brought him back to the focus of going to the building after his thought was lost. ...So the time passes and it is a process to cause dick to create a Psycho to ask or a Psycho for real. ..Don't know. Thought of it. Don't know. Depends on who one is. For there are many other stories beyond these two I see. I try to see a victory for peace.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22099 | kalab | 2007-10-06 10:01:48 -0700 (Sat, 06 Oct 2007) | 1 line More reading and editng. From one side of the circle to the other side of the circle. I think I have read and edited enough to begin on the other side of the circle. The dialog and internal thought and internal dialog refined, and now I think better defined. ...These are the words that are becoming. Some thoughts change to better show with hints and flash of questions to find information without much focus. The flow of thought calm to keep the situation calm. The real real.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22096 | kalab | 2007-10-05 23:42:45 -0700 (Fri, 05 Oct 2007) | 1 line Getting the words read that need to be read to clean the words free of noise that is not needed. It took a while to focus fo the read. ...Thoughts slowing to find the specifics. of the story and not a specific point. Sentence read and read.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22084 | kalab | 2007-10-05 15:21:23 -0700 (Fri, 05 Oct 2007) | 1 line The words read from the walking. The words are. I feel that things were read but not read. The walk flow a go. When I did stop it was because something of the sentence wasn't right. Uusally the verb. The way the sentence flow. ...The removal of the no and yes psycho check not used and should be removed. Near the end of the edit I was focused only on internal and external dialog for the no and not and to get the flow. The was read to teh crossing from the cicle. Fast and slow. These words they do go.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22063 | kalab | 2007-10-05 09:45:45 -0700 (Fri, 05 Oct 2007) | 1 line More words. More reading. More thought. I continue to remove the useless internal dialog. I have made internal with external record. Don't want to have Dick thinking for he has focused though on what is aroound with other senses to focus to think of who or what Psycho is. The words read better with the edtis. The words are near there.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r22057 | kalab | 2007-10-04 22:27:02 -0700 (Thu, 04 Oct 2007) | 1 line The check off of description isn't what is needed. Dick isn't that stupid. False record input. The words are better without the thought. This shows focusing the thought and mind to record the senses. Visual being the most overwhelming, powerful. The words are. Finding verbs. Words are becoming. The walk.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r21078 | kalab | 2007-08-20 05:37:56 -0700 (Mon, 20 Aug 2007) | 1 line The chapter was read from the hovercopter to the end. I like the read. I did wonder and question the scan. I had edited a sentence until I realized it was a though of the scan. ...I believe I read slow enough to read all the verbs missing and write thm to edit the sentence. A sentence edit and not a work edit. There is a difference. ...Word edits was a typo by adding a letter. ...What was read was like. Some dialog, like the end, edited for better voice of character and to show reaction time. ....I read into the submeaning and found it interesting. The fast read was good too so the sub meaning was there for the slow read. ...Some of the meaning though good for the overall story was serendipitous. ...The thought there. Writing on...
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r21062 | kalab | 2007-08-19 01:06:59 -0700 (Sun, 19 Aug 2007) | 1 line I read to the nearing of hovercopter. I read and read to find the words that neeed to be fixed. Grammar edits more than anything., I did like the flow and changed when needed. The words and double meaning in the story what it needs to be. The words are. I think to read on through the chapter for what is written is enough.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r21037 | kalab | 2007-08-18 00:56:26 -0700 (Sat, 18 Aug 2007) | 1 line I read from the beginning. I fround the flow but had to read and reread to make sure what was written was what was needed. For instance, when I read of the second shut of something related to the drone recording I thought mentioned only once. I had to check the twice then found the flow again. Once I assured self of edits I was able to read to the walk to the center of circle. ...I also thought long of the use of danger and immidiate danger thought. ...The words are now better written. and will remain I think in the book for after the circle Dick reasons the record is too much a record in a logic flow to it. ...The thought of the scene and confusion in the description had things removed. ...The words extra dialog for the married thing to show Dick's purpose of saying the reason he knows Betty and Richard are having sex. ...Then it will be shown why. ...More words. ...Less words. ...Pullers now movers. The words read will ot need to be read again this read.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r21020 | kalab | 2007-08-17 00:41:33 -0700 (Fri, 17 Aug 2007) | 1 line I edited by removing enough to want to wait to read the beginning again after next read and edit. The edit makes the action in sync with the other chapter. The words removed make the chapter more complete and foward moving. Just stepping out. ...I do like the beginning better now that more was removed from the first sentence. I still like the lengthy beginning, but it is something I think of when I read it.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19999 | kalab | 2007-06-21 05:21:03 -0700 (Thu, 21 Jun 2007) | 1 line The one obvious bad paragraph I think found and edited. From reading before the strobe pulse to end I found a few places to write and edit. The writing and editing more to the end took time. after reading almost to the end I thought again about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb. And then read it again. Then changed the names and the position of the first play. I read it again and thought it was more of a logic of also what the Propaganda bomb does. It uses thing the mind enjoys and enhances them with things and people you hold dear then creates a feeling of connection with that object of American with the U.S.A.. Or something like that. Dick is able to change the rules by prethinking because he feels it best to keep his mind and not lose it when there is a Psycho on the loose. ...I like the name change. I think it will remain as it is.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19992 | kalab | 2007-06-20 21:01:42 -0700 (Wed, 20 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read from the beginning of the bomb. I read and like the flow. I did include the names Dick and Mustang to the words and it is not a bad idea, but it is also good to use the players. But if this is a propaganda bomb, and dick is setting up the mind to out think the bomb then the names should be used. ...Maybe\? ....I read after and added more detail because Dick is adjusting to the change and seeing things and what is around. A lot is still going on in the mind, so the change and the detail of what is around is donw to the amount to identify path and dangers and location. The words now read. I will read on next edit to the next chapter. I will continue to think of using the names.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19978 | kalab | 2007-06-20 05:46:40 -0700 (Wed, 20 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read and edited. I change a few sentences for clarity. Removed a few because they were redundant. The only real moving of story and losts of though were on the sentences before the propaganda bomb. I thought of the description and thought it neat and off hand and random to think to show Dick's mind focused, but unfocused. Change is the focuse. Knowing it can happen. ...The read from after the strobe flash to the propaganda bomb. The read I liked. The words of the propaganda bomb are near complete. The will be a good beginning to begin to read next edit. The sequence of record now better with the sentence move and merge of the propaganda bomb scene. ...The word and thought I did have sometime when I got to caught up in story were interesting thought I hadn't know of, or read of, in a while in these words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19963 | kalab | 2007-06-19 17:54:44 -0700 (Tue, 19 Jun 2007) | 1 line The change of the COOLER sentence is a few paragraphs from where I began. I thought it would be just as natural and more showing and telling of the people and focus and the noise that is focusing Dick's thought. Dick focus on that that is around. The woman and man are passive aggressive and aggressive. I also noticed while reading that the passage of man forgetting to turn off something just an odd occurrence. One line of internal dialog after the thought. ...It maybe accident that it is written after, but I like how the remembering after the strobe flash after the trip. That way the trip could also be the reason Dick remembers. There were are few more lines written to improve the dialog and the conversation. I wrote more description for the places because it is needed. ...I may change the use of clouds. ...I ended the edit near last edit that was after the walk toward the hovercopter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19947 | kalab | 2007-06-19 05:17:10 -0700 (Tue, 19 Jun 2007) | 1 line ...I remembered after reading the scan that Dick was in the street. I also felt the words that were written after needed to be more and less, so a few more words were written. The thoughts and what was written to show more complete. More with less, or so I feel. ...I read from before the scan. I felt the process of coming to thought again needed more pace and flow. I think it now has something close to what I feel is needed. I did think about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb be Mustang and Dick. But I didn't change because what I add is something that makes the transition and the setup to remember the thought before the propaganda bomb. ...The internal dialog edited for a more natural and less focused flow after the propaganda bomb begins to wear-off. I read from before the propaganda bomb to the end. More reading and editing. I need to also focus an edit on from strobe flash to propaganda bomb. I think I felt it okay. I would like to read once more. ...I think on Wednesday or Thursday I will read through and begin reading the next chapter. Feeling much better about this chapter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19934 | kalab | 2007-06-18 18:11:33 -0700 (Mon, 18 Jun 2007) | 1 line I removed the record of the street name of it is not something at the time dick focuses upon. He does on occasion, but doesn't focus upon it for there are many other things to focus upon. I change a few sentences that has a thought to express, but didn't use the right words to express. More words here. Less words there. I edited the movement of Psycho to 18th. The thought is in the mind over and over and over again. It is how it will read now. I am now liking the read to the propaganda bomb. The We was added because the propaganda bombs finds the thing that makes you feel part of something then makes that something part of the object and subject of propaganda. It take that trigger to remind Dick he is I and what we is not. I like the read from, but it still needs some focus and thought.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19922 | kalab | 2007-06-18 05:08:53 -0700 (Mon, 18 Jun 2007) | 1 line Non dialog sentences missing verbs should not be. ...The thought of the propaganda bomb a good progression into the effect of the propaganda bomb. I like the flow of thought now. It is becoming better shown. There has been more than enough telling of the object. I still want to read over the after the bomb again. I like what I have but the very end my be redundant. I read to the end and I didn't read the next chapter for I want to reread this near end again and again before I move on. I think by the end of the week
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19894 | kalab | 2007-06-17 07:30:41 -0700 (Sun, 17 Jun 2007) | 1 line Lost of changes to thought before and after propaganda bomb. I think I now have the words that need to be to begin to find a natural flow of Dick's thought. Dick is focused. All the other stuff not needed. Enough detail is. The thought and Larry's Fajita shout should remind Dick of what the need of things are. Then the question of Psycho saying about the primary targets is what is needed to complete the thought, but help what was edited today. ...I focused on this passage. I didn't even read to the end because by the time I was happy with what was written. I think the thought to help Dick through the bomb are getting near to what they need to be to be natural and complete.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19870 | kalab | 2007-06-15 20:30:49 -0700 (Fri, 15 Jun 2007) | 1 line The range of edit wasn't the long. From before the propaganda bomb to the rethinking of cowboys. What are the Cowboys\? I clarified the memory attachments, so though it will expand the thought to flow ot other thoughts the amount of memory connects allows the time and mood and walking and the data references for him to remember. The edit was good. I like what has been written, but there my need be more readings of these words. I do need to focus closer on the thought. I skimmed most of this read. maybe I should read it allowed\? I must admit I am becoming jaded of editing these words. But I feel and see the chapter is near completion. I am nearing reading these words like I read the owrds of the first chapter feeling the words written near completion. That feeling is near for these end words. They do deserve just as much time. Sometimes I think I edit too linear therefor and become jaded on focusing for edit upon something for too long so by the time i edit to the end of a chapter I just want to be done and hurry. I don't think this too much with the other chapters. ...I will still be reading everything backward.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19869 | kalab | 2007-06-15 19:58:23 -0700 (Fri, 15 Jun 2007) | 1 line I wanted to begin before the propaganda bomb, but something in me wanted to read and edit the first of the chapter, so I read and I found a few edits. I only read to the corner. The description in the state I thought it to be: near complete. Now that I have reasoned a reason for Dick to think of danger is good now I know what i leads to the purposes Dick is doing it. I read and now I want to show that I read this section of the first, so now I can go read before the propaganda bomb.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19851 | kalab | 2007-06-15 05:19:44 -0700 (Fri, 15 Jun 2007) | 1 line A few edits. A few words read. The edits of sentences so they were slow. I have been having a hard time focusing this morning. Thoughts from tangents of this book and the meaning and relation of the story with the stories of the world in this non-fiction world. I thought of details of the meaning and a couple of time got lost on tangents of how to Publish The Detective Store. I am feeling a little jaded of mind. I am sleepy, but awake. If I was not walking in a couple of ours I'd go for a walk now to clear the mind and begin to focus upon the words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19833 | kalab | 2007-06-14 05:47:10 -0700 (Thu, 14 Jun 2007) | 1 line I think I can now focus upon the scene before the propaganda bomb. I read from the flash kind of effecting Dick. I think the words from it to the propaganda bomb are for the most part complete. I do like the flow of the thought coming back. I did change some sentences because the occrance of passing people needed to pass faster than they were. Dick is confused that is for the trip. When ever the trip happens. One is not focused upon movement for the rate of speed. ...The words did read. I liked them. They actually make the chapter worth having in the book. It is good that they are better than they were. Editing for next write I will try to remember to begin before the propaganda bomb. I do need to focus upon and edit the internal dialog before the bomb hits. I edited some today to remove pointing oout one possible control of Psycho because it could be all, everyone, even Dick.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19820 | kalab | 2007-06-13 06:08:37 -0700 (Wed, 13 Jun 2007) | 1 line A very slow read from the Jeep and two men wrestling to right before the focus of Dick to prepare to enter the cone of white. I found some needed sentence edit which required me to rewrite or write a sentenc. Those did take time. I did read a few sentences that were written before the exact grammar and style of the story. Those few were easy to edit because I only needed separate and make a new sentence. I found a few typos by reading. ...I did become lost in thought about the characters of the book. I kind of just realized Dick is Gay and G43 is for the forty-third President of the United States.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19802 | kalab | 2007-06-12 05:35:50 -0700 (Tue, 12 Jun 2007) | 1 line It's a read from one point to the next. I remember beginning after the strobe pulse that is indirect and reading. I read because I like what I read and because I knew it was not perfect. I therefor edited some sentences. The sentence changes are what too time. I found some missing verbs, so it take time to find the verbs. ...The thought, the internal dialog, read to read as it should. Some adjustments to make it less complete as it should be. ...The read to right before stepping under the hovercopter was the read stop point. I wrote a few more sentecnes to add touch and and sight. There needs to be a smell maybe. Maybe the people\? Maybe there need to be no smell.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19777 | kalab | 2007-06-11 17:45:13 -0700 (Mon, 11 Jun 2007) | 1 line Dick needs to focus self to focus upon people too show show the record of Psycho that people are around and matter and should be seen as life like the plants in the garden. The people add to the scene too. I want the place to feel crowded and now there is a reason for it and purpose for it. ...I began by the White Hotel. I editing by adding people and read on. I removed some internal dialog that was witty and worked with the words but it was too manufactured and I have not desire to have it in the story because when I read it just now it just didn't feel like it belonged. The fact it was a sentence that was a recent write makes me feel better about removing the words. ...I thought about making the flash sequence internal dialog, but then thought I should not. Most time for edit used to better incorporate, write, the process of Dick Discovering thought again after the indirect flash. What I have written in the past was good, but it just feels to need to be a bit more gradual. I think what is written will be what is needed. A gradual understanding of the reality. The reconnection and recreation of the thought. The mind finding ways to recreate the reality.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19768 | kalab | 2007-06-11 05:51:56 -0700 (Mon, 11 Jun 2007) | 1 line The number of pronouns used should incresae without making it seem too much like an increase. The should increase in the record, the description, because Dick's internal and external dialog is trying to use pronouns in conversation to further teach Psycho of self and others with self and of I and me, the self, and of the separation between You and I. Some of the time. The pronouns to help Dick teach Psycho more of self if Psycho is real. Is Psycho real\? I don't know. It could be. I do know the words are nearing. I had to move some around and change description to write of more distance, but I think the edits made now will give the final flow to the words from the STOP of two men wrestling to the after thought of the strobe flash Dick doesn't directly see. The thought after I read and I did like. I would like to begin with the strobe next read but will probably read from the STOP scream again. Or near it as I did this time. The words are...
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19762 | kalab | 2007-06-10 16:31:35 -0700 (Sun, 10 Jun 2007) | 1 line I couldn't find the right sentence and description of the invisible stage coach so I made it a bit thick steel stage coach pulled by many pullers. I read and edited from 18th the almost to the propaganda bomb. The words did flow. The mind is slow. It can't focus right now.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19752 | kalab | 2007-06-10 06:34:10 -0700 (Sun, 10 Jun 2007) | 1 line I thought of the chapter then I read from 18th to end. The words arranged to better read for the sentences moved. Sentences add to show more. To bring the character environment to be more a a character. I had to work and think a lot about the propaganda bomb because it is weird. I see it weird. I read how it is written and I think it is totally wrong then I slow read it as one should that is not the mind thinking and I follow the thought and the way to quickly set up the thought. The internal dialog a subsumed, discursive, thought. ...The end is better without the sentence that once ended. ...The words do read. I like them. There does need to be more for I did read sentence mitakes. Old telling of the story and not showing. Issues with having the right characters for a word. The story. I need to read slowly for I feel like I missed something. I may also want to check the direction. Edit the walk.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19743 | kalab | 2007-06-09 21:56:28 -0700 (Sat, 09 Jun 2007) | 1 line After this write, and after reading the words of the edit, I feel the words from the circle to 18th are what they need to be. I added more words, a new focus, and a completion of thoughts and focuses. These words should be read again and I should now focus after them because by the time I focus on them to edit for an hour and find edits and make long thinking sentence change I get burnt to slowing down the reading. I just want to read. I want to enjoy the story more than just creating it. I wonder if I ever will.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19708 | kalab | 2007-06-09 07:02:37 -0700 (Sat, 09 Jun 2007) | 1 line The last sentence is not needed. I removed it with edit because it just wasn't needed. It is also too direct a thought for Dick right now beause his mind is recovering and beginning to think again of the real not read question of Psycho. Such a question will come and may be placed some how, but that will come with the next read and the read will be more pure and more words if these words are removed. All this thought because of the read of the next chapter and the break in flow between and the need to think to rid teh book of these words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19706 | kalab | 2007-06-09 06:49:58 -0700 (Sat, 09 Jun 2007) | 1 line The words I can really remember reading to edit were the words from the STOP. The men on the jeep wrestling. There were any forms of edits. A further read of the strobe flash. I live. The description feels good. The most description written was ffor voice. like the sound of the recording in my head. The sound of Dick's voice, of everyone's voice, as heard in head is deeper because of the sound traveling though head. Logically, to me right now, is how a voice is different when in side head. ...Moving of a sentence to get comprehension was done before the write of like description. ...I edited the should of Larry's Fajitas because it needed to be different. I didn't was to work with the same record being too much the same. It was shown, but it felt and feels too told and not shown. With is shouted different and with the way Dick says to self once is the way that it is referenced in the thought later as shown in the description already written so it shows many things. ...I like the result of the propaganda bomb. I did edit and change the way Dick thinks his way out of the propaganda bomb to make the transition more natural and logic. I think the change changes the state of the flow part to be complete. An edit of course will be needed. After the read the change to add more description after Dick has a shocking moment, when he realizes again, almost like he is for the first time, he has that slow down of life and change and is able to see a lot of detail at once as the shock hits the life returns as the shock settles. The end ends with the thought of Dick's so it may change unless I have read this before. I am remove the last sentence and place it on the next chapter if it is needed.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19695 | kalab | 2007-06-08 18:17:59 -0700 (Fri, 08 Jun 2007) | 1 line A read from the danger to the question of danger. The internal dialog edited to be more natural and be influenced more by what is around. The thoughts going though mind. I wanted to also prolong the effects of the strobe and have Dick forget something and remember after Psycho uses his name. I think that the thought one focus on will be lost for the strop pulse. So Dick should be thinking about everything, but nothing to leave it it the chaotic mess that does exist. The sound clears the mind of thoughs connected to the prefronal lobe. Infact so does the strobe. The shock gets rid of the thought and the connected. If it is directed it is more effective. Because Dick doesn't catch the flash's full effect it won't make him totally forget. ...The words arecoming. The description is close to what I want, I think. I only think because I have to doubt for the edit. What was removed wasn't needed and was making the story less by the words being part of it.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19688 | kalab | 2007-06-08 05:38:05 -0700 (Fri, 08 Jun 2007) | 1 line I like the switch of jacket shoulders and not naming the shoulder side to write to show Dick is focused on other things. The additional internal dialog description is to show Dick trying to focus on other things beyond the hovercopter. The words read and read. I did lose focus on these words for about fifteen minutes as I thought of the book as a whole. I thought of the story line as I see it as being one that completes the thoughts. I thought of the publication form and the publication time. Then I focused and edit for another half hour. The words read. I read slow Here and there. I focused attention and time to the two sentence rewrites and moves. The thoughts I know see in mind of the book and the chapter so it is becoming easier for me to be able to edit something and rewrite the thread into to the tapestry of words for I know the words, but it still requires time to check my thought of what I see with what is written so it takes time.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19665 | kalab | 2007-06-07 05:37:55 -0700 (Thu, 07 Jun 2007) | 1 line A read of what was read and written during the prior edit session. I found grammar errors. I read sentences here and there. I sort of read in a linear flow from outer circle to street to strobe pulse and after. I read fast to some words beyond, I read that there were some sentences that needed working and there is not time, so maybe I'll edit those setences and read botton to top.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19657 | kalab | 2007-06-06 20:17:02 -0700 (Wed, 06 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read from the walk from the island after the circle. ...Near the first edit. The read as slow and focused. The change did take time to make for the bad sentence were so bad that there needed to be a new one and the small edit that were not grammar edits or typos or misspellings took time to think of because the words are set. The desciption. The words I like. I read to after the pop of the flash to subdue. I like what is written. Thew ords are...The continue to be. I will probably begin the edit near the same place. ...I don't know. Some feels missing maybe. I don't know.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19641 | kalab | 2007-06-06 05:28:21 -0700 (Wed, 06 Jun 2007) | 1 line I move and removed sentences to decrease thought that wasn't needed, decrease the time it takes Dick to cross the road, I rewrote sentences for there were many sentences that read as chaos. I read a some of the words at first, but I really focused, as I am sure the edits will reflect, upon the walk along outer circle down road. The detail written for better flow and description. Not to abstract, but abstract enough to be written. The thought found. Once I began reading after the pop of the drone to stop two wreastling men I thought there were a lot of words, but liked it because Dick is trying to focus away from internal dialog.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19629 | kalab | 2007-06-05 17:31:45 -0700 (Tue, 05 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read from the middle of circle out. I read the words and thought of the walk to the outter circle. I though of the need to show more people. More poeple. While think of this I read of what I wrote this morning about making Psycho track danger for life. This will begin the later question of what is life. This conversation was read for and found and the words have been written. This words are, I think, near completion or they could be rewrtten when I read these words again.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19616 | kalab | 2007-06-05 05:31:45 -0700 (Tue, 05 Jun 2007) | 1 line Editing one sentence near the completion of sentences can be difficult. Some times I stare too long at the change and think of how to do it with less words. Less is more. There was a sentence move because the sentences moved allowed for the focus to refocus upon what is near. The flow to more description. Words were add to make more of other words and complete the scene. I still need to think of scene. And reread now that those few sentence that didn't want to change easily are edited and ready for a read.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19605 | kalab | 2007-06-04 17:53:30 -0700 (Mon, 04 Jun 2007) | 1 line I removed some sentences to questions that didn't need to be asked and were not answered. I read from the light of flash light to the leaving of circle. I think I can leave the circle behind because I feel the circle writing is there. There will be a few other edits of typos, but I think I have most the fixes and written words according to dialog pattern and subject that what was written today is written will enough to begin to write after the circle next edit. The chapter is now stronger from the beginning to the outer circle. I like how the dialog and internal dialog written feels natural and insightful. A natural progression of Dick Trying to discover what is real and what is Psycho and where is everyone else. The flow does keep up now with this chapter. I don't feel like it is limping. I have read to the end of chapter and I do know that the end is near complete, but will need some reads and edits to complete the chapter enough to only need one more read though before the recording and the copy-edit. I thought of publishing dates today during the walk to work. I think I will be able to publish these words early 2008. I am in no hurry now to get the words out. I don't need to worry about the subject matter of the book becoming not a topic of conversation of the many ways it can in the election year. The needed time is because of having a child and wanting to get this book right both in words and with the frame of publication used.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19594 | kalab | 2007-06-04 05:41:13 -0700 (Mon, 04 Jun 2007) | 1 line I wrote the fun thing for the day. The passing off of teaching Psycho what he considers a danger (things that kill) and passes off the task of having, requiring, teaching Psycho that killing things are a danger to life. This is change in the use of the reason Dick calls out the people and rates them with danger or immediate danger. Dick does this now as a teaching tool to Psycho and to protect. The many reasons is for Dick to show Psycho a pattern while protecting and focusing. This is carried through to the story. ...The other words editing while crossing to the circle. Words were changed after because the words were not good enough or too much. Some of the thought flow as just not in the flow it needed to be. Removing a few words fixed some of the flow problems. The words I like. Most do read. I think a few more reads to get the passages through and from circle to be what I want it to be. It is near. The more showing edits of last edit read to be something near what I want it to be...What I see it to be.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19577 | kalab | 2007-06-03 14:57:24 -0700 (Sun, 03 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read here and there. read fast and slow. I began by reading where I stopped for the prior reading. I read and I found things to edit. I began the edit where the last edit ended. I read before and after the location. I began reading faster. I wrote words to make the words flow. I edited passages for they no longer were of the stoy and they were only written almost good. The words removed for they are not needed and too loose. I read to the end. There are a few things I want to read to and think about. The thought and the flow of the thought of the memories from the propaganda bomb. ...The time ticks....The end of the chapter
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19565 | kalab | 2007-06-03 09:37:00 -0700 (Sun, 03 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read. I read from before the cross to after the flash from the drone and the hearing of the hovercopter. The read went well. There were edits for clarity. I was able to slow read and think and see most of the story. I added a few details to show Dick's discovery and focus upon information either by cause or trigger. The words read good. I made some edits to show and not tell with the detail. The words read good. They had a flow when I let my self just read. It was hard and is now getting hard to slow read and not read. I want to just read the words, but I can read in words. As I have found, I do read in words. ...The thought of the book continues. Adding the completing the thought and story that exists. Writing to show and see so one may feel.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19556 | kalab | 2007-06-02 11:45:54 -0700 (Sat, 02 Jun 2007) | 1 line I read the first after finding a grammar mistake with the first chapter and then I read to the corner near congov. I was lost in the thought of the book as a whole while I looked at the screen. I thought of the characters of the book and what they may or may not represent. I thought of the themes and the details and characteristics if the story. I thought of when to move these words to editing the publishing. The process a whole process. The thoughts of the book as a whole came and went as I read and edited a sentence or two. I read and thought and realized this book has many stories with one focus. I only hope it isn't too much. But after reading thenews and listening to people talk this is not really fiction. That's why its in Science Prediction.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19552 | kalab | 2007-06-01 20:25:55 -0700 (Fri, 01 Jun 2007) | 1 line The read from the first. I thought of reading some of the recently editing passage near the first. The main focus was on the corner near congov. Before and after dialog and internal dialog the focus. It wasn't until the end of the edit that I read sentences without verbs. The description I did read here and there in a sort of linear flow and I liked it. There was some internal dialog added for a natural flow and lesson and insite of Dick as he is seeing and thinking.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19543 | kalab | 2007-06-01 05:50:56 -0700 (Fri, 01 Jun 2007) | 1 line Minor dialog change became major changes,. I did not begin the read from the beginning. I did begin the read around first edit. I read the dialog and the dialog was not natural, direct and focused like Dik's dialog should be. Once corrected I read the natural way of talk for Dick to both talk with Psycho and get information to help some how or get what he wants. The dialog more but makes the story less. The names of the primaries were one form, but the name may not be the formed used. I can't believe I haven't change the name from the characteristic name given to them to create with the idea to change. They just became. Now It is time to decide. When I read what was written yesterday and thought not to be read today I liked what I read.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19520 | kalab | 2007-05-31 05:38:31 -0700 (Thu, 31 May 2007) | 1 line From beginning to the last sentence written, the words where read and written. The words written during writing times past read as they should. More written to make less more. To show. To think. To give the scene character. The scene I believe now has the characer needed to continue these words. I feel I can begin after the pool crowd, after the last sentence written, because I think the words I have written should be read at a later time after i forget their existence. I do believe, like the writing of this book, after the first of this chapter, I then was able to find character in the scene, so near the last of this chapter is also what I am thinking of as I write for only a memory can tell of its having character. A character that may need some characteristics, but won't be as trying as the first of this chapter...I feel. I don't know. ...I had always feared this chapter after the last read for it is now the weakest, but could become the strongest if done write. After this chapter I believe the words do flow better if only because of the characters.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19496 | kalab | 2007-05-30 05:34:51 -0700 (Wed, 30 May 2007) | 1 line While searching for the beginning. The mark I left for I wanted to begin there, I seen Psycho's identification number. I thought I needed a marker to remind me to make it mean something more. A data of the creation of atom bomb. The president's social security number. Then I thought I could get the ss maybe somehow but I needed a filler to remind me of the meaning needed I used these numbers from the Hyper-Contentl. I couldn't find Bush' social. Now, but maybe there is a way. He's the president. Some one has to know it. I will use this number instead. It is, as I wrote, of Hyper-Content, so that connection should make me remember there is a file with more definition of what this number is. What is the number\? I think it is the DRM CD Key. ...I searched for: DESCRIBE JEEP WITH INTERNAL DIALOG. I follow the story of the internal dialog. I removed the internal dialog that's been had and wrote the beginning of something interesting. The thought of cars shows how much they are not used. It shows that Mustang the car is talked about with Mustang the Warrior For Hire if that is what Mustang really is. Mustang the bounty hunter. Mustang the wild. Mustang the car to show those care lovers love men. I did focus a lot on the internal dialog story to show many things and continue to tell a story. I will reread now. I think the focus of the car will drip because of the flash and the need to think of something that can better relate to the current situation so Dick remember and doesn't forget and become a danger to those around.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19489 | kalab | 2007-05-29 23:20:52 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007) | 1 line I have decided to replace all the thought to define a danger and immediate danger to be written with the detail of the vehicle gardens dick sees. He will focus internal dialog away this way for the basic thought because that is what everyone does to avoid too much personal thought from being recorded for everyone is being recorded. Dick just want to be sure it is not a terrorist listening in. Dick doesn't know if Psycho can read all his thought, knows it said it could, to be safe it is best just thinking of something else. This is also away to protect the thought from Psycho. The read was good. I wrote dialog to show Dick further teaching Psycho and trying to make the dialog more natural. A long conversation Dick wants to have with Psycho. The dialog addition made things more with less. More because it adds to the character of Dick, Psycho, the Scene, Washington, D.C. and can define the times if one were to think of it. ...The reading began walking from the circle.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19469 | kalab | 2007-05-29 18:06:10 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007) | 1 line I only want to refer to Dick formally and a person or individual to Psycho as Dick or Dick of The Detective Store because that is how Psycho knows Dick and because Dick has actually hidden his last name from the databanks of the system...Maybe. It could be that Psycho just want to call Dick that because only the business defines Dick and not the history of a last name. The last name could be hidden because most do because most know it is attached to your government record. ...Or maybe not. It is just what a Psycho would call Dick. ...I read slow and over and over and over. I read here and there. I am finding things of the chapter I know I want to complete. More smell and more smell is written. Dick notices sweat because Dick thinks his sweat as annoying. The read was good. I was I could have read more linear, but what I read I like and I able to write for the book and the chapter and not be lost. The idea of the calling off something to work in but needed. I am happy I have an out.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19458 | kalab | 2007-05-29 05:54:18 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007) | 1 line I began the edit by writing a sentence. This felt more like a write but only because the changes needed writing. I wanted to show guns guns guns and a clean city. The shine of things, so a sentence was added. I wrote the name for I think Dick would ask the name soon to get Psycho to think of the names as humans or show that he wants to make Psycho think of the idea of a name to further teach Psycho or show that he is trying to help to think and show others something that may not be real. The name of Smith is going to be the named used for both Richard and Betty. If this is a story of America and is Edited by United States of America it is only fitting to have a Smith. The other words edited then written were edited and written because of some confusion. For a few sentences, I wanted the description to be more show and not tell as it was. ...The thought of show and tell is something I think of as I read every sentence. ...The amount read during this edit was not great, but what was read and written is now more complete.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19431 | kalab | 2007-05-28 07:53:37 -0700 (Mon, 28 May 2007) | 1 line There are many things written for an edit, but the write during the edit need to be processed for the scene needed to be edited. There needed to be more detail and description of the area though showing, and some telling, with the internal dialog and dialog. ...I though of adding more dialog with Psycho. Dick is going to begin to try to teach Psycho, so Psycho understands people and life. The lessons will begin with the direct use of pronouns then asking Psycho to use pronouns after asking Psycho for minor help. Writing this still leaves for the possibility Psycho is many things or nothing or just a great story in Dick's mind because he could be a global terrorist. Is Dick\? I don't think Dick is terrorist, but he could be. ...Maybe he only asks if this is real to show he is asking if it is real. All these things are detail that I wanted to add. I wanted to add more guns. I wanted to add more detail about the area. I wanted to show things are clean. They are like a clear old west. ...I think I may change the concret and cobble stone circle road to rubber to better define how the rims are bare and the rubber now the road. The more people written is to show that there are a lot of people everyewere. The night is beginning. I read from some where along the side was to the walk past of the first white hotel. Psycho been seen. The dialog added to show character. To show Dick does care on some level for some reason. I see Dick as saving the world, but he may not be.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19410 | kalab | 2007-05-27 14:34:34 -0700 (Sun, 27 May 2007) | 1 line I am getting to much of a fast reader for I want to read the story and not slow read and edit and write the story that is written and not the one I can fill in when I see a grammar error. My concentration is lost on the edit for I want to read. I read from the beginning to the crossing before the congov truck and before crossing to the center of the circle. I believe next write I will read and edit beginning with the the jeep down the sidewalk somewhere. I want to read into the story with the yes and no and see if it flows. Did I forget. There is a space in description maybe. Maybe there should be because this is Dick focusing in the fact he is talking with a killing machine. The acts of and focus seems consistent. I add some mmore action to show and not tell the manner's of Dick. The flow and the detail I believe to be becoming what it needs to be.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19389 | kalab | 2007-05-27 06:19:14 -0700 (Sun, 27 May 2007) | 1 line I read from the beginning to the walk from the apartment. I think there is some flow. I do get a little lost with all the different pionts of description, but once do find a flow the words are something to be understood. I think it needs to be this chaotic, but there does need to be a poetry to the flow. Some of it feel near, some of it doesn't. I think the change of using verbs does improve the storry. Is will probably be used a lot. The words have better record. ...Some sentence change because the sentence was confusing. All sentence change read time was high. It took time.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19381 | kalab | 2007-05-26 15:42:22 -0700 (Sat, 26 May 2007) | 1 line I can now read the words. I can now find the flow with the thought of dick. I need, and I read a lot of time on the first few paragraphs that need verbs. I didn't use verbs for it is written more like a record. Do there need to be verbs\?
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r19369 | kalab | 2007-05-25 05:15:33 -0700 (Fri, 25 May 2007) | 1 line I read from first and a few paragraphs beyond the point when Dick begins yes no everyone. After reading this, and for about the last seven minutes of this write and edit I thought of the need for the yes no. I still don't know. It words with the flow for I read a few, but I do't known about...Him. I need to think of it.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18610 | kalab | 2007-04-15 16:50:48 -0700 (Sun, 15 Apr 2007) | 1 line The read of the chapter was near the end. I fast read from beginning reading here and there. i read the places i have needed to read and have written these reads and writes of this chapter. The end I think is in a state that needes to exist. The words to define the mind once thinking of thought, forced thought, of the government finding its way to the thought before the connact. The talk is slow and focusd.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18597 | kalab | 2007-04-15 07:50:55 -0700 (Sun, 15 Apr 2007) | 1 line I read from the words, around the words, a bit before, where I read to last night. The words needed some adjusting. Sentences here and there edit to be more complete and define more not less. The words to have the pase. I read from that point to the end. I liked what is read. The change enough. The description enough. Maybe more smells, but Dick isn't thinking too much of smell unless it is powerful enough to change the normal smell. The words do read. The will be read again.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18591 | kalab | 2007-04-14 23:11:48 -0700 (Sat, 14 Apr 2007) | 1 line A read from beginning to after the fountain. I know that here were still sentences that need better words. There needed to be some sort of rewrite because the words were just not write in someof the sentences. The words removed only decrease the worth of the story, so they were removed. The words are good for now. I will try to continue with these words. The story and flow fixed in places. I think there is flow after the fountain,
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18574 | kalab | 2007-04-13 05:36:23 -0700 (Fri, 13 Apr 2007) | 1 line What was written are words to make clear the path of Dick. I tried to focus upon the action, but I did find my self reading over to catch the overall. I like the overall, but found sentences and paragrasphs that was not a paragraph or sentence. The words did flow, but there were rough waves when I wanted no waves. The read of what happens during the strobe pulse is, it think near what it should be. It reads.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18564 | kalab | 2007-04-12 17:46:02 -0700 (Thu, 12 Apr 2007) | 1 line I read after the fountian to the words after when Dick is strobe shocked. The words read. I like the description of after the hotel. Some words were moved because there just didn't belong where they were. The flow up to the stobe shock needed some a few sentences to become more sentences. The thought more general and less exact where needed.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18559 | kalab | 2007-04-12 05:48:47 -0700 (Thu, 12 Apr 2007) | 1 line I believe the description written for the walk from the circle is now in a state that I will be able to read through and begin to read without worrying about confusion. I willl read it first, or try to, during the next edit. ...Words were removed for the edit because they confused and were written for another book. ...I have found that most my consfusion is I try to do too much in a sentence or a paragraph. I also try to create a fake tension sometimes. ...The words I do like. The have better flow. The read to the two men grappling is tension. I like the words. Some change to a word vine because there are no vines on the jeep.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18552 | kalab | 2007-04-11 22:46:02 -0700 (Wed, 11 Apr 2007) | 1 line I read from first edit to last. The description after the white hotel is all fucked. I am lost enough to where I want to begin with the location so I can define it as the first thing I define next write. I think the words order written with this write has made more sentences create a story that is logical and is steady. It reads. There were words removed, but as will all other words removed it was for the best. What I have written for showing walking down the side walk.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18535 | kalab | 2007-04-11 05:34:53 -0700 (Wed, 11 Apr 2007) | 1 line I stared at the words now removed for many minutes thinking of a rewrite when I lost thought and then had a thought to just remove the words. The the idea of having the definition of the tree line and improve the definition and the flow of the walk in. Editing the words by removing the words edited a lot of the confusion I once had because the walking couple think was somehow thought to be needed and was and is a focus of Dick. The new words and the flow that they have found have create more thought and better story and better words. I am not confused now. The story continues and doesn't read to be lost.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18526 | kalab | 2007-04-10 18:13:48 -0700 (Tue, 10 Apr 2007) | 1 line I read from the beginning to the married circle of walkers. I now can begin at the very paragraph I want to and need to begin the rewrite of most of the walk in the circle. The edit of the description of the circle to create the entire circle will be used. I have had ideas this morning about how to write this. I have some of the thoughts in mind. I see it as a place that is conformed wanting to be expressive. I do not see it being in the state of relaxation of open thought as it was when I lived there. It should it exist to show the history, but be changed to show the conservative forces restricting expression. ...The words to the circle I do know like. I think...again...I think I fixed most of the issues with the write and the read of the words to the circle. I feel good enough about it to begin as close as I can to circle without worrying about having too many issues next read of chapter. ...I add the shine of light to face to show how they now point one out if the feel like it.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18521 | kalab | 2007-04-10 06:31:32 -0700 (Tue, 10 Apr 2007) | 1 line I read and edited from the beginning to the walk around the circle. I think the walk to the circle is about complete. I may read through again, but I think I have the clarity, words and flow I want for the walk to the circle. The walk in the circle I am not sure about. I like the bash of men and women married couples swinging, but I am wondering if it is needed. I don't know. It may be too obvious and not needed because the primary and secondary targets are needed and used to bash on man and woman only marriage being this pure thing when it is not. I think I will begin the next read crossing to the circle the rewrite the center of circle scene. What it will be will be a with couples of men and women, but maybe not as clock work like. More natural. While the entire book is exteme this should not be, I feel. There words words I read and noticed misspelled and even corrected them without issue. Typos. During the read I versed my self with punctuation of dialog to see when a capital letter is used to begin dialog.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18516 | kalab | 2007-04-09 18:00:38 -0700 (Mon, 09 Apr 2007) | 1 line The chapter was read from the beginning to Dick with finger extended. The words and thought has minor issue, but it didn't have too many issues. I like the flow. I thought of the need to read the checking of of people. This read I thought for it to remain because it shows Dick getting into the thought of focusing on people to begin to find how may or may not be after him. This could be the psych injection makiing him crazy, or this could be the fact he is Psycho. I think I will keep the thought. I think I will, this chapter, increase the amount of written thought. Not by much, but more than exists.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r18498 | kalab | 2007-04-09 05:48:47 -0700 (Mon, 09 Apr 2007) | 1 line The beginning does begin. I like it. I am question the mental check off of people Dick passes with labeling them danger and more danger. A thought that may be edited again. I haven't decided.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17516 | kalab | 2007-02-21 22:33:25 -0800 (Wed, 21 Feb 2007) | 1 line I have what may be the words to show the propaganda bomb and its effects. The edit near the end of the chapter to remove words that are not needed and are a bit excessive for the story. They point the finger too much at another and not you. The end also to obvious and read like too much of some jaded rant. The words edited and written with words that give more meaning to the story and show the movement of the congov. The congov finding people and beginning to search the area. The way the chapter ends also allows for some tension, which isn't needed and will be played off, or rather written off. I think the chapter for the most part is complete. I will need to read it again for there were enough changes that I need to ensure the flow of the pace is what it needs to be. I need to be sure Dick does notice everything there needs to be seen for the story.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17513 | kalab | 2007-02-21 20:17:41 -0800 (Wed, 21 Feb 2007) | 1 line I had many thoughts for this. I did edit much before or after the propaganda bomb. The propaganda bomb needs something more. I know not what\? I think maybe a better fade out. I will get it on next write to show how the propaganda bomb lasts in the mind creating thoughts in the working mind.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17496 | kalab | 2007-02-20 22:11:17 -0800 (Tue, 20 Feb 2007) | 1 line The read and the edit. From the beginning to the end. I didn't focus too much on the words from the steps to the circle, but I did read them and did edit them. I feel they were good enough to continue. I added a lot of thought for more thought was needed for Dick to think while he walked along the way to Larry's Fajitas. The thought is needed to show Dick is still activily thinking of who it could be that is controlling Psyhco. The thought will also show that it could be a company, a rival company which is something I want to show. I did also edit some of the longer sentences for they were too long and needed to be shortened for clarity and to find the way the record is defined. I add the words to tell of a hyperscan and what it doesn to show that it creates a written record...actually not show, but tell. I removed the talk about Psycho needing fuel and when because it was redundant. I move the talk of waste near the thought and record of Dick's focus on food because that is how the question is shown. I did read to the end, but after focusing from the circle to the propaganda bomb I read fast and on did some editing. Next edit I will begin before the propaganda bomb and read and focus to the end to complete the chapter and move on to the next chapter edit.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17464 | kalab | 2007-02-19 16:01:25 -0800 (Mon, 19 Feb 2007) | 1 line Okay, I read and reread the words of the beginning. I read from the beginning to the words of the description to the circle. I added some description of smell and feel and sounds. I wrote of the light flickering on and off to show the low power. With the next read to edit I will begin and the Married couples in the center of Dupont Circle. I am confortable with what was read and has been written. The story does have some flow and I believe there is enough to advance the story and not lose the reader because of the lack of detail.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17449 | kalab | 2007-02-19 10:34:31 -0800 (Mon, 19 Feb 2007) | 1 line I read and edited from the first to the circle. The words have an okay flow. I may add a bit more description. I may not. I think I like the idea of the yes and no be danger and potential danger. The walk is good. I do get a little confused. I remember having problems with this part of the book. I will probably begin reading the chapter from the beginning again to make sure its got the flow I want.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r17442 | kalab | 2007-02-18 23:00:26 -0800 (Sun, 18 Feb 2007) | 1 line The search and replace of of dash for dialog mark to have the syntax set for edit as I edit the page. The words where read from the first ot about to page deep. The words read, but I need to read, but I want to find reason, now, for the checking off of people which I am now doubting, so I will think of it during the next edit allowing for the mind to be cleared of the other words read and edited to day of the last chapter. I think I will leave it, but use the edit created to day for the words to be clearer and the reason sort of logical. A way or think Dick does to focus and check off people.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15814 | kalab | 2006-12-23 08:07:42 -0800 (Sat, 23 Dec 2006) | 1 line The brief thought of Betty and Richard and the other tragets are thought of as con-gov. The thought isn't to be too much of a focus, but will be something to begin the thought before the meal which is where the thought will become a topic of thought.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15156 | kalab | 2006-11-28 20:17:24 -0800 (Tue, 28 Nov 2006) | 1 line From the propaganda bomb to the end. More words needed but the words written enough for now to complete the chapter in my mind, so I can move on to other words and return to these words when I am not as jaded of them as I am now. I do think what is written is nearly good enough for moving on, but I know when I return to them I will need to edit and write these words more and more and more.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15140 | kalab | 2006-11-28 15:47:55 -0800 (Tue, 28 Nov 2006) | 1 line The write of the words after reading from the cicle. I believe I have something that will be able to be called a propaganda bomb. I do need to write it more. After the read I feeling I can begin on 18th street next write. I need to begin on 18th if I am to finish this chapter and move on to the next. The edit and write almost complete.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15095 | kalab | 2006-11-26 08:53:11 -0800 (Sun, 26 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read the words from beginning. I read and liked to the Propaganda Bomb. I will begin there next write and finish this chapter. Words read as they should and though the switch of pebble to rubber sidewalks for Dupont area, the way it is now will read. More thoughts needed, but what is now is nearing enough for the chapter. The thought of Dick active upon the situation.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15092 | kalab | 2006-11-26 01:20:26 -0800 (Sun, 26 Nov 2006) | 1 line What I read I liked, but I am too tired to remember what I read. I was able to see the scene and feel it when I was reading, bu tonce I stop and thought too long because of a tired mind I was unable to quickly find the flow again all the time . Really tired.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15082 | kalab | 2006-11-25 17:13:45 -0800 (Sat, 25 Nov 2006) | 1 line Random words written during the flight home today. These words had me thinking of the rubber sidewalk thing and how I may have some rubber side walks, but will wait to have them only if needed. I think mainly around the embassies and condominiums there will be rubber sidewalks. Nothing read. Just trasposed words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15072 | kalab | 2006-11-24 23:10:31 -0800 (Fri, 24 Nov 2006) | 1 line Now I no longer need to write of the Mire Factor, but still need to edit the use of all the quagmire. Only factors if it is an objective to leave the city. Which Dick is planning dispite mind being read. The Mire Factor from a show and a term the army used to define the deepness of something being stuck. ...The read of the words began with edits and ended with edits. Too much, but the thought needs to be every other if anything for Dick is thinking thinking thinking...
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15062 | kalab | 2006-11-23 22:55:16 -0800 (Thu, 23 Nov 2006) | 1 line From the circle the words are good. Near the last edit from the first edit words where read. Before and after the last edits more thoughts need to be written. Dick is thinking a lot right now so there should be thought. Thought. I did like what I read, but then again I understand the grammar.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15051 | kalab | 2006-11-23 07:38:01 -0800 (Thu, 23 Nov 2006) | 1 line I read from beginning of entering circle to the a man on stoop saying STOP. The read went well. I think I removed the last of Secrete and edited them to Secret. The words flow wsa okay when I read it this morning. Not too choppy. The thought must increase for Dick is thinking alot right now about the ever changing environment.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r15009 | kalab | 2006-11-22 00:01:56 -0800 (Wed, 22 Nov 2006) | 1 line Okay, I have read from the center of circle to taR BBQ or Rat BBQ. I will begin the Dick in the cone. The sentence needs to be very long. Hunger and foot will bring him back from thinking of something else because of the propaganda bomb. Dick knows football requires food to watch and begin hungry and wanting to watch football Dick is reminded he can't watch football because Dick is on the case and is hungry and going to Larry's Fajitas far from sports and all allowing Dick to regain his focus upon the case and not the thoughts created by the propaganda bomb.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14982 | kalab | 2006-11-20 19:08:04 -0800 (Mon, 20 Nov 2006) | 1 line The pace and the direction almost found. I looked at the picture. I began the edit near 18th and read and wrote on. It took some time to write the scene with the stage coach o Riggs. REading and writing to find the right place too time. The order and pace I believe to be okay. Close to be completed if the chapter were a distance.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14981 | kalab | 2006-11-20 18:18:40 -0800 (Mon, 20 Nov 2006) | 1 line More thoughts to continue the walk to Larry's Fajitas. I began an the top. I read a lot but did not read through the circle. I have decided every land piece that is ground, dirt, will be quagmire with gen plants growing for fuel or food. The Stage coach of the army will be a mix of future and past technology. More thoughts about the walk. I skipped a head to include the taR (Rat) BBQ. Thoughts of hunger.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14971 | kalab | 2006-11-19 23:10:35 -0800 (Sun, 19 Nov 2006) | 1 line The read and edit began after the circle. There wasn't a lot of focus up the words until Q Street then I read and reread and began to edit. The removal of more words will be needed. I do believe by this time next week, I will be editing the next chapter. I quickly read ahead and now there insn't much else written that will remain, but I have ideas in my mind on how to finish the chapter and still continue to develop the story.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14953 | kalab | 2006-11-19 16:19:45 -0800 (Sun, 19 Nov 2006) | 1 line There does need to be more internal dialog with thinking dick between the slines of description for Dick knows thought won't be stopped, but can be controlled. The flash sequence was some thought of writing for there is the sound sequence in the first chapter. And the flash in the back, as long it is seen, effect someone in the area. It also allows Dick to eventually ask the question of Psycho if Psycho can filter what is seen and felt and heard by Dick.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14944 | kalab | 2006-11-19 12:31:43 -0800 (Sun, 19 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read of words. Minor edits. The mind feeling slow and needs to waken before I can edit. What was read was liked and the words seem to be find a flow.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14930 | kalab | 2006-11-17 18:16:52 -0800 (Fri, 17 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read and edited form beginning, the 'top', to the end, the 'bottom'. After forty minutes of reading, editing and writing, I looked at the pictures I took of the path from the P Street apartment to Larry's Fajitas to get a feel for distance and the buildings. I realize after reading beyond the last edit that a lot of these words will be removed until Psycho announces the arrival of Mustang that may need to occur before the reaching of 18th street. Now I think of it it wll occur before Dick reach 18th street. This action will cause dick to question the realness of Psycho and cause Dick to hurry and begin talking with Psycho again, which may mean I won't need to delete everything written that was read after the last edit and write or write because I can't remember what my last action was after I began reading to the end of the file.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14915 | kalab | 2006-11-16 22:56:27 -0800 (Thu, 16 Nov 2006) | 1 line I looked at the actuall photos I took of the walk to the P Street apartment to Larry's Fajitas and I looked at google maps and between the two I realized I need to change the description of the buildings for the building structure should be the same for that will not change. I will label everything a hotel or a condo for there will be no apartments. I may need to shorten the talk of the walk from the circle to 18th. I will probably leave it. I also read and edited the words more than looked at the timage. The words a reading well enough to begin to move on. I hope to have this chapter finished with this edit by Sunday. I realize I may need to change a lot of the last for there are a lot of words and they will probably no support the need for Dick to ignore Psycho. There is the Propaganda bomb too which is going to interesting to write. I have many ideas. Lots of thoughts and sights that are pro America. Slogans and sayings and colors and images and feelings while the helicopter passes. The existence of the helicopter could be a reason for Dick to begin to talk with Psycho.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14905 | kalab | 2006-11-16 18:27:50 -0800 (Thu, 16 Nov 2006) | 1 line Thoughts. Somewhere in this chapter or next or the next or maybe the last I want to add the possible escape from D.C. through a quagmire. Yes, a bog of D.C.. This was inspired by something I heard on All Things Considered today about a book of land words being redefined. The edit and write today had nothing to do with this word an began after the circle and to the point of hte last edit. I think the flow is better. It is better now, but need to improve the chapter by making sure that Dick ignores the existence of Psycho until the Larry's Fajitas and the people exist and even then he is still convinced it could be a Psych Injection. Now that Dick is on 18th there will be the propaganda bomb and the mention of to Dick by Psycho about the arrival of Mustang at Larry's Fajitas.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14893 | kalab | 2006-11-15 22:44:20 -0800 (Wed, 15 Nov 2006) | 1 line Will I ever write through this chapter\? I feel like it is such a convoluted mess that is finally begin edited and written to clarity. I feel this but know there are so many more edites and so many more words needed to complete this chapter and move on. Is it too boring to read. Is there too much or not enough. I think of what it reads like. It is likely I will be the only one able to read these words and understand these words. Maybe... Maybe not. I hope the latter, but I am not getting my hoping too much. I do suppose that this chapter was alway on for the chapters that I knew would be a fucked up mess. This is also how I feel about the chapter from Larry's Fajitas to Always. I do believe the other won't be such a fucking mess. Time will tell that tale.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14885 | kalab | 2006-11-15 18:30:09 -0800 (Wed, 15 Nov 2006) | 1 line Dick will try and ignore Psycho because that is the best way to get rid of a Psych Injection. The walk down the street will increase once Psycho informs Dick that Musstang as arrived at Larry's Fajitas. I am still feeling the words during the walk need a littl more description and a little more analytical thought. The read did begin near the first edit and near the last edit. I feel comfortable with what has been written. up and from the fountain. The walk along the side and hamshire road is coming along and a good place to begin now. Need more thought of Dick.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14865 | kalab | 2006-11-14 18:19:04 -0800 (Tue, 14 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read from the first edit location. I think I can safely begin after the circle and begin the reading there. The words after the circle becoming more fluid and descriptive. Alomst to the point of completeness. I think I have the location of where the streets would be. This may change. I do need to maybe add a bit more description in all the dialog that occurs between Dick and Psycho before the right turn onto 18th. The propaganda bomb will be soon. On 18th.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14846 | kalab | 2006-11-13 22:57:11 -0800 (Mon, 13 Nov 2006) | 1 line More reading. More writing. The story line may be getting too convoluted. It may not be. I read it through smooth. I think the editing of the flow will be difficult for I am finding it difficult. I have looked and the map of the trail of Dick From the P Stree Apartment to Larry's Fajitas again, for about five minutes and will now begin to input location markers with signs to guide the path, or rather create the path.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14826 | kalab | 2006-11-13 18:30:40 -0800 (Mon, 13 Nov 2006) | 1 line From the Contrator Government. The I started and read and edited top to bottom begin near where the edit began. I read slowly and read for flow and logic and sequence of events. There were the typos and the one too many words written removed, changed. There was some thought as to the scene in the center of circle, but I choose only edit for further clarification. More thought on the next two chapters. Specifically the chpater two chapter's away, the taxi ride and the thought of trying to reverse the Psych Injection if it is a Psych Injection. More thought on the noise of the wheels and how it needs to be shown earlier that the wheels are rimmed with steel and are all the wheels. Maybe even the trucks.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14816 | kalab | 2006-11-12 18:32:54 -0800 (Sun, 12 Nov 2006) | 1 line The move thought was good. The expresssion. The you use is and can be thought as smomething to contemplate through the taxi ride to the Always. More thoughts. Read from first to the middle of the circle.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14793 | kalab | 2006-11-12 08:43:27 -0800 (Sun, 12 Nov 2006) | 1 line More reading and reading and reading. More thought of the coversation. I know not now the conversation of the pronouns and where that thought will lead. Maybe it is over. Maybe the clues are there and the words and thought need not exisst until later in the story if I remember to write it. It may be removed. The other words where more of an edit to what has been written and is not logical.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14780 | kalab | 2006-11-11 18:40:55 -0800 (Sat, 11 Nov 2006) | 1 line More words. The circle sequence becoming a scene I will be able to write beyond soon for the words written now need a little more to allow for the flow of Dick's journey to continue with a steady pace. Where are these words going\? Somewhere. Chapter 0111, I suppose.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14762 | kalab | 2006-11-11 14:24:02 -0800 (Sat, 11 Nov 2006) | 1 line The edit from the sidewalk and to the center of circle. The dog removed because dogs are dead. The married couples to who married couples will destroy marriage not a redefinition of it. The state of America is such that marriage will always between a man and a woman and thus its value dimished. Because Dick is gay, he can not marry Mustang in the United States of America even in the future as Dick is, so the cicle is a play for married couple to go swing, for the government to find other's to fuck.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14747 | kalab | 2006-11-09 22:41:59 -0800 (Thu, 09 Nov 2006) | 1 line I am still thinking of the scene of the church needs more meaning. I believe that it does need more meaning, but I will wait to write. The targets, the targets begin two married people, can be viewed as a joke on how the conservatives and haters of the United States believe that the liberals and the non-haters are attacking marrage. This is something I realized and will now emphasize, focus upon. make evident, the connection. I do like were the words are going. I think I can confidently begin in the circle and feel now that the coversation is as it should be. I do need to read more of theREAME army terms for Psycho thought for the dialog needs to be expanded so it isn't useless.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14728 | kalab | 2006-11-08 22:12:31 -0800 (Wed, 08 Nov 2006) | 1 line I believe the words form the beginning as I have read them and edited them now are as they should be. What is good is that I didn't need to edit too much and the scene with the truck and the addition of the Church improve the chapter and the story and all the tropes of the story and chapter. My mental picture engraved in mind after many writes fo the scent, first beginning with words, the becoming more is now, almost, seeing what should be. More thoughts. Next write I hope to begin by the governmennt truck to note of the inner and outter lanes, but also to edit and write more of the dialog with Dick. More definition of the circle is needed for as it is written now it seems so small and the images of again in my mind, fresh from seeing the pictures I took months ago, have thoughts to of words to write.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14714 | kalab | 2006-11-08 18:12:33 -0800 (Wed, 08 Nov 2006) | 1 line For one reason or another, my mental image of the P Street apartment is on the opposite side of the street then I have written the walk on. Dick needs to walk left and will not be walking by the drug store and will only need to cross on street. That's funny. I also should note the double rings of roads somehow. I tried to edit the direction, but my mental picture of how things should be is so strong right now I will need to rethink the pace and direction in my head during the short spans of thought and begin the walk and read from the beginning of the chapter with a fresh mind before I will beable to edit the location of the P Street apartment.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14713 | kalab | 2006-11-08 17:41:01 -0800 (Wed, 08 Nov 2006) | 1 line More walking and thinking. The words read from the circle and that is where the edits began. The words removed needed to be removed for they seemed forced and too much. Too obvious. Very Obvious. The idea of filtering and subduing being built upon. The flow seem okay, but I will probably begin again in the circle after I look at the pictures I took of the walk from the circle shot when I was in D.C. last. I will also try to access Google Maps to begin to get the street name and an idea of the a lay out to help improve the words that are now actually creating an image and not just words. I wish everything began as an image to me.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14700 | kalab | 2006-11-07 22:33:45 -0800 (Tue, 07 Nov 2006) | 1 line More clarity. I think I will be using the term con-gov which will be short for contractor government, but also thought toward the idea that the only way the new cons...neocons...can get a small government is by making everyone a contractor. The contractors are in. This read I did begin from the middle of circle. I need to think of the thought that leads to Psycho trying to prove to Dick it is real.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14687 | kalab | 2006-11-07 18:08:57 -0800 (Tue, 07 Nov 2006) | 1 line The read began from the first and was read through to the place where Pyscho talks of cross talk. I was going to begin from the circle, but I read the first and read of closing the door and thought push was better, so I began the read and write from teh first sentence. As I read Psycho's voice after writing, I think what Psysho's voice is and will become is the voice of Pscycho. During the edit, I realized I a now able to separate what should be thought and what should be internal dialog. The description and detial begn the dialog. Thoughts of were the story are good. I did read the words of the read me to find Cross Talk and did read them for further use throughout the book.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14667 | kalab | 2006-11-06 19:31:19 -0800 (Mon, 06 Nov 2006) | 1 line I believe I can actually now begin to write from the circle to Larry's Fajitas. The words and story and dialog between Psycho and Dick now something worth the words written. The idea of Psycho telling him the case, this part during the walk is what is neeed as is the debate of Dick with Dick if Psycho is physical or a psych injection. Regardless of the remainder of the words and what they will be, I can now begin to write from the fucking circle and maybe finish this chapter by the end of the week and continue on to the next.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14664 | kalab | 2006-11-06 17:55:36 -0800 (Mon, 06 Nov 2006) | 1 line While I wrote I would begin at the circle, I can't continue the conversation if I don't know the state of the conversation, so I began once again near the first and ended where the last edit occured. The dialog and seelog is now something that read ok up and to the description of the Two contractors, which is where I will try to begin next write.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14647 | kalab | 2006-11-05 17:17:56 -0800 (Sun, 05 Nov 2006) | 1 line The thoughts and the edit of the scene. The words seem like shit. And too confusing. I need to move on with the chapter so next edit I will have to begin at the Circle and not at the door because the shit will be clean later once I have a straight head and can focus on the final edit.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14620 | kalab | 2006-11-04 15:47:27 -0800 (Sat, 04 Nov 2006) | 1 line Editing and writing through the chapter. This will be one that will probably be another week to edit unless I can get through it tonight and tomorrow. About four or five more hours. I do have the way Psycho talks now and have more of the pace of the chapter, so I now only need write read and edit and write the words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14617 | kalab | 2006-11-04 12:55:40 -0800 (Sat, 04 Nov 2006) | 1 line Mind too full of military words to think of description. Need to let the mind fill again with non killing words to define people. The list does exist, so I can now referense it when needed.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14604 | kalab | 2006-11-04 07:50:38 -0800 (Sat, 04 Nov 2006) | 1 line The talk of Psycho moves the story along. It will be easy and fitting for to write Psycho's new talk. The idea of using the Army words for the voice of Psychos that slowly change as it talks with Dick creates the character Psycho. The thoughts of the Psych Injection builds, needs to build, to show that this could all be in his head. Some hints of Dick having been in some sort of Army is suggested. Mustang, I believe, will probably be of the Army.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14586 | kalab | 2006-11-03 20:16:40 -0800 (Fri, 03 Nov 2006) | 1 line Thinking of the words of Psycho as a creation of the Army. Thinking of the Dialog and how it would be. The dialog slowly becoming more and more normal through the book. After the club Psycho knows I and doens't use the army language as much. Need to find army words. The thought getting better. The thoughts.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14583 | kalab | 2006-11-03 18:25:00 -0800 (Fri, 03 Nov 2006) | 1 line I think I have found the style of the chapter. This will now be good instead of just okay. Dick will have to note and check off every object of potential harm while talking with Psycho two talks like their mission is a war objects follows Dick to Larry's Fajitas. Psycho talks like an army commander on a mission. Dick doubts Psycho exists, but is waiting for more proof to define Psycho does exist. The proof being if those people do exist. Which will further give proof to Dick to think Psycho is real and not just a Psych injection. The Psych Injection is on so complex or so Dick thinks unless more than on people are in volved in the Psych Injections projection making more people play along. At larry's Fajitas the question then becomes if Must has a Psych Injection. The checking of of all objects will be for this chapter. Thoughts. Still thinking of a Propaganda Bomb.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14576 | kalab | 2006-11-02 19:16:46 -0800 (Thu, 02 Nov 2006) | 1 line More reading and editing. The walk through the circle needs some more work. But the chapter is writing along.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14560 | kalab | 2006-11-01 21:40:31 -0800 (Wed, 01 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read and edit of more words. The last change is where I stopped. I began where the frist change is. The words are reading better. I think I will have enough content written that it will only needed to be edited. The editing will be difficult though for the dialog and seelog does suck. I can't remember much of the chapter except there is the hidding of Psycho. And the helicopter scan and probably will be the Proganda Bomb.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14550 | kalab | 2006-11-01 19:03:34 -0800 (Wed, 01 Nov 2006) | 1 line Read and edit then write of word to the beginning of Psycho and Dick's talk after Dick is walking from dupont circle. Everything was read. I think, so the next edit I should be able to begin where the last edit. I am still thinking of the conversation of Dick and Psycho and if the conversation will exist and if it does exist what that conversation will be. Questions and thoughts.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14547 | kalab | 2006-11-01 17:16:14 -0800 (Wed, 01 Nov 2006) | 1 line Some thoughts of where to go. The confusion of the departure from the apartment.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14535 | kalab | 2006-10-31 22:32:58 -0800 (Tue, 31 Oct 2006) | 1 line The removal of Yasir's name and replacement with Sam is because there should be no name that are not generic, boring, U.S. names for the U.S. had long ago removed any one of different background, so someone like Yasir would have been deported long ago because of his name. I edited to the skater and the first of Psycho casting voice. I read from the beginning. I wasn't looking too deep into spelling mistakes and the like. The dialog and description.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14524 | kalab | 2006-10-31 18:55:18 -0800 (Tue, 31 Oct 2006) | 1 line The chapter needs a lot of work. The dialog and seelog sucks. The flow and thought written needs to be edited more than I had hoped. More reading and more writing and more editing (deleting) of the words. I had hoped this chapter had more words that would remain, but after reading the words there are I feel that all the dialog seems forces and that Dick is some ranting fake character that is shallow and boring. Thoughts: More reading and editing.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r14508 | kalab | 2006-10-30 21:38:36 -0800 (Mon, 30 Oct 2006) | 1 line The words written make for a better walk to Dupont Circle. The change of the K Street sump pumps needed because that is what stinks. The words of Dick talking to some one about lentils my remain, but it may not. I walk more thinking of the walk to Du pont and wanted to write it and want to think of the coversation about Genlentils is needed. I think once Dick goes though Dupont there may be long thought paragraphs when Psycho has to leave because of the heloscans and other events that Psycho must hide from more than just sight during this chapter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13557 | kalab | 2006-09-25 08:56:54 -0700 (Mon, 25 Sep 2006) | 1 line Read the map now linked (as I have read this map to sync the images with direction. Read the map after reading the image of The Detective Store Chapter 0110. The image read as mapped to chapter to create a way to show the direction and define the area. While reading the images, I did see the side walks and thought of defing the broke sidewalk and the stone curb, something used in Demarkation for everything is pebbles here, but Demarkation is not the United States of American and of Yellow of Demarkation the world is not dystopian and utopian and more fictional. ...Anyway, the sidewalks and their now change did link with the side walks of other words, but these side walks will be pebble like, but pebble of sidewalk. The sea grass trimmed or pulled.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13518 | kalab | 2006-09-24 16:58:29 -0700 (Sun, 24 Sep 2006) | 1 line The words to end the chapter and begin to create the flow of the end to answer the question with the next words. I have had the thought a few minutes ago of how Dick and Psycho both ask questions. Psycho askes question to not kill. Dick asks questionsto anwser, detect, for answers for money. The questions of Psycho are hoped to be seen as questions lead to not killing and it is always best to question and be transparent, so the answer may be understood. The questions of Dick now is seen by me as questions to gain something, or questions to try to find truth before acting on the questions answered. The or of Dick depends how Dick is seen. Hell, Dick may not even be seen by others, but if Dick does there are other things I may never see.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13517 | kalab | 2006-09-24 16:34:29 -0700 (Sun, 24 Sep 2006) | 1 line The recognition of Larry's Fajita's should not be until next chapter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13516 | kalab | 2006-09-24 16:29:26 -0700 (Sun, 24 Sep 2006) | 1 line Because the reason to go to the apartment has changed and the need of thinking cap no longer part of the story, the sentence of the end has been edited and writtten. The new words better and prepares the reader for the answer to the question in the nect chapter when Larry see Psycho as a fan.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13489 | kalab | 2006-09-23 06:27:28 -0700 (Sat, 23 Sep 2006) | 1 line Replace needed action with shitty dialog once exsiting in the space that is now filled with words of action and tension to begin to build the chase and the possibility Dick may or may not be as innocent as Dick is acting because Dick may or may not want to tap the Entropy Tap.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13488 | kalab | 2006-09-23 06:07:00 -0700 (Sat, 23 Sep 2006) | 1 line More words removed that were of or for shitty dialog. Or shitty seelog. The words removed improved the read. I need to think of the pace of the chapter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13487 | kalab | 2006-09-23 05:43:33 -0700 (Sat, 23 Sep 2006) | 1 line The end was bad. Every word written around bad dialog and seelog between Dick and Psycho. The entire sequence was too obvious an attempt to be witty, a bad attempt. Now removed, the chapter's remaining words already feel better than they felt while reading the removed words. All other changes are for having a flow between the remaining words.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13478 | kalab | 2006-09-22 16:04:15 -0700 (Fri, 22 Sep 2006) | 1 line Edit of the end and the read to the talke with ohter.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13477 | kalab | 2006-09-22 15:35:39 -0700 (Fri, 22 Sep 2006) | 1 line The thought of the Secret Senators to further define the environement. The thought and rubbing of plant then flows to tallking about the plant with another who may be the government.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13476 | kalab | 2006-09-22 15:12:00 -0700 (Fri, 22 Sep 2006) | 1 line Edit of word by removing them becaue the words made the sentence too jaded creating something too obvious.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13465 | kalab | 2006-09-21 21:13:15 -0700 (Thu, 21 Sep 2006) | 1 line The thought needed to be released to define the dependence of both the Democrats and the Republicans.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13428 | kalab | 2006-09-20 05:50:23 -0700 (Wed, 20 Sep 2006) | 1 line Looked at pictures and plotted path of Dick with pictures and a map. The pictures for chapter six unlike the pictures of chapter four, are of the path. I just need to find the flow of the pictures and the circle of the circle of Dick's path that goes of on a tangent. The image are helpful to remember what the walk is like, the past. I can now begin to further write of the journey for I know the path.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13415 | kalab | 2006-09-19 18:10:56 -0700 (Tue, 19 Sep 2006) | 1 line Quick thought of the need to begin to read and rename the tag of with the new chapter name allowed me to see one grammar edit and remember the need to add a reminder to continue an action.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13414 | kalab | 2006-09-19 18:07:54 -0700 (Tue, 19 Sep 2006) | 1 line Thoughts of words for the flow down the step. The steps down leading to the street. The idea of adding the garden cars is a continuation of creating varations of what a garden car will be if not a garden car besides a hotel room as in jaded. The thought and words feel more natural. Like the walk was hypnotising. I must remember in the last chapter that Dick needs to walk down the stairs and to the door. Probably to see the Cicada sitting there waiting ot be let out.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r13164 | kalab | 2006-09-10 15:36:37 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line The edit of chapter name from Hex to Binary. Binary is the state of the World.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r12358 | kalab | 2006-08-27 12:08:55 -0700 (Sun, 27 Aug 2006) | 1 line Removing the words that are not needed either because they are bad or because they are excessive. The flow of the story (of the beginning of this chapter) read better now. I still need to give more of a feel for the book almost is beginning to feel like a report, which is not bad because it is a report in a way.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r12356 | kalab | 2006-08-27 11:28:20 -0700 (Sun, 27 Aug 2006) | 1 line Words of chapter 5 moved and integrated into the words of chapter 6 to better find the flow of the story and avoid a repeat of action.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r12133 | kalab | 2006-08-18 06:05:47 -0700 (Fri, 18 Aug 2006) | 1 line There were many minutes of me writing Humidity parts upon faces, pulls the sweat from skin took a lot of time to wite. The words read OK. The words read are OK. They are not great in my mind, They many never be. There is something missing maybe from the opening, which is all I focused upon even though I wanted begin to read in the middle to edit the middle. Maybe I will edit this chapter again for I feel it reads like it hasn't been read and written and edited.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r12129 | kalab | 2006-08-17 17:46:07 -0700 (Thu, 17 Aug 2006) | 1 line The heat and as the body sweats. Where is Psycho. Or is that thought thought. The words of Yasir I like and feel that the words are what they need to be. Odd converasation between two people who know each other as friends.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11944 | kalab | 2006-08-09 06:10:17 -0700 (Wed, 09 Aug 2006) | 1 line Words removed becasuse the notes were used and no longer needed to note. The reading went well. Now need to read and write from the end.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11943 | kalab | 2006-08-09 05:48:39 -0700 (Wed, 09 Aug 2006) | 1 line The body needs its own paragraph.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11942 | kalab | 2006-08-09 05:47:41 -0700 (Wed, 09 Aug 2006) | 1 line Adding repitition to deepen the hummm of the sump pumps. It should be body for body should be defined one more time to focus upon the body.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11879 | kalab | 2006-08-06 08:23:36 -0700 (Sun, 06 Aug 2006) | 1 line Fade is thought then fades then is thought and then is lost when other thought is needed to be thought. This is a continuation of all the other similar words inputed to the Word ProstituteTM repository.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11634 | kalab | 2006-07-29 08:45:25 -0700 (Sat, 29 Jul 2006) | 1 line Writing what was written. To write the words and create the flow so the beginning of the chapter can be overlooked and writing may begin with the wakl and the thought. Dick needs to think more wtih Psycho this chapter to further lead him down the path but to try and learn more about Pscyho. Dick must ask Pscho a lot of questions, and will continue wonder who controls Psycho. Psycho does not care. The question need to be many. I also need to begin to order and archive the images to be used for memory, time, and street names and the embassy locations for this chapter and chapter 5.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11598 | kalab | 2006-07-28 17:11:21 -0700 (Fri, 28 Jul 2006) | 1 line The words of the begging of the chapter nearly found. I think. Need to think of were to go with more thought.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11283 | kalab | 2006-07-14 05:42:19 -0700 (Fri, 14 Jul 2006) | 1 line Stage coach something though of adding just now as reading and writing the inclusion os sump pumps of Dupont Circle.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11249 | kalab | 2006-07-13 05:48:01 -0700 (Thu, 13 Jul 2006) | 1 line Reading time and the beginning end frame. This one I will needed to read the pictures for so the streets and pace are defined well enought to follow, but not well enough to become obvious.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11149 | kalab | 2006-07-09 15:35:11 -0700 (Sun, 09 Jul 2006) | 1 line The thought to built up why Dick can not learn more about the people he must meet to persuade to leet in to building, the contractors and the capitalist of United States of America.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11130 | kalab | 2006-07-09 07:03:17 -0700 (Sun, 09 Jul 2006) | 1 line Need to see the image captured months ago soon. After I have and idea of where all the words now need to be written, I will look at the images. Someof the words last written read bad. They seemed forced and something that belongs as some shitty first book that has great idea, but whose auther was not skilled enought to write. The words now to me now read like words for The Detective Store. The thought process continuing to create.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11056 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:34:28 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line The files of the chapters of the detective store forked from mail file and edited to contain only the words for the chapter so more words maybe written and honed and focused (read, written, editted, published) to complete the story and create a book.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11046 | kalab | 2006-07-07 20:51:22 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line Words to be of Chapter 6 of The Detective Store. The definition of the processes of the story of the book The Detective Store. More words to become to show how to read and write and edit and publish.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11037 | kalab | 2006-07-07 18:20:09 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line More thoughts of framing the frame from thoughts of the day. I also decided it should be may and that I need to branch the file now.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r11030 | kalab | 2006-07-07 06:12:12 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line Read and edit. Edit and read. Read and edit. The thought and the comprehension of the first words reading like words of a book. The files need to be split and moved to Words. If my head was not so distant and numb with alcohol, I would have have branched this file today. There is tomorrow.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10968 | kalab | 2006-07-02 20:54:59 -0700 (Sun, 02 Jul 2006) | 1 line Thoughs had about an hour ago while walking up an incline. I noticed when I focused on the horizon the back ground sort of bouced as did the foreground. There is of course the metaphoric qualities of the sentence. The sentence was written last after reading and wrijting read for the location to write the sentnece. I need to branch the file, or fork the file, Maybe I will do that tomorrow. It is gettin gbig and difficult to manage, and find a focus.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10920 | kalab | 2006-06-30 05:45:36 -0700 (Fri, 30 Jun 2006) | 1 line The question of Government wanting to have Dick put head in the Entropy Bowl is something I have written about and thought about and given some ofthe purposes of the writing, to learn, express and provoke, liberty to add in ideas and questions in the story form. I thought after writing the words at the end of the story and thought about how to write the turning back on of Psycho after Psycho has been fueled. More thoughts here and there but reading and writing began at the top fo the page, then I had an idea for for thoughtlog or seelog (not dialog) at the end of the story to reason why Dick resons to stick head in bowl.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10907 | kalab | 2006-06-29 20:52:38 -0700 (Thu, 29 Jun 2006) | 1 line Reading, writing and editing. The words are actually writing where they need to be written. The addition of why The Story begins were it does is because Dick says United States of America and that is one of the keywords used to begin the reading and recording of Dick's mind Of course, because the Government is reading and recording it does not mean they are listening.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10899 | kalab | 2006-06-28 23:00:35 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line The thoughts still need to be more smoooth in the flow I read prior, chapter 3. The actions to test the make of A.I. is what will be. Fun thoughts. The thought after 2 need to be refined, as do the rest of the thoughts.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10889 | kalab | 2006-06-28 18:20:45 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line Thoughts of how to make Dick more of a motive of how and why he hides the thought. Does he just hide it because he can\? Just a thought I have been having about the motive of Dick wanting to access...Or maybe not so much the motive put how to hide the desire. Does he purposuly slipt and think at times of his own desires to access the information and doesn't care if the government is reading his mind and is also figuring that the thoughts alone will or may trigger an alarm for the Government to arrest him. So the thoughts need to be some how written of Dick seeing that he wants the data to see the data and to warn the Government of his plans and alert the Government by hoping the thought filter will see his desires to help a G5.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10879 | kalab | 2006-06-28 06:01:52 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line More reading and editing and words and story. More refine ment. The thought read to be better. Time will define if it is. New thoughts and inventions for books a complete.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10854 | kalab | 2006-06-27 17:42:23 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line More wwords and reading and editing. The thought of how I wrote Psycho to read Dick's mind will be used until Psycho can read and write to Dick's mind.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10851 | kalab | 2006-06-27 06:32:18 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line I do beleive I have almost written chapter ones flow and thought process and trail of thought. Reading and editing and writing. The thought flow of dick almost a flow. Time is near to separate into Words and write a book. The Strobe weapon was something that I just though of. This after editing syber scan. The edits beyond 1 are what I did last as when spending a few minutes reading around. I read I need to get rid of I's.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10832 | kalab | 2006-06-26 06:06:48 -0700 (Mon, 26 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Words read of the first of the files for the files ls long and won't be split (maybe) anytime soon. The first of the chapter was read and some editing and writing done. I am still writing for the flow of the narrative and the story. The thought almost the flow and style for Dick. Psycho and the voiced of inidividuals more delveloped, I believe, but could be read as bad if the first doens't define the narrative in a way to entertain and maintain reading.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10816 | kalab | 2006-06-25 10:14:39 -0700 (Sun, 25 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Reading. I Am lost in what I need to write for Dick to come to the understanding and reason for doing anything. The malfunction reason I thinnk I have written, but it is lost in a lot of repitious dialog that may be needed, but if used should better framed and more natural even for two being trained to control their actions and thought. The file needs to be split so I can begin to define words as chapters and with chapters further focus on the words to define the book.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10811 | kalab | 2006-06-24 20:38:26 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines MOre reading than editing or writing. Mind is somewhere.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10781 | kalab | 2006-06-24 11:30:59 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Mustange and Dick depart. Mustang will be captured by the U.S. Government and thrown in confinement when Mustang leaves Larry's Fajitas and goes to the Government for help. Need some more thought, more discription of hte house for the characters.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10778 | kalab | 2006-06-24 10:27:08 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines More of the departure of Mustang for the apartment. And some removal of excessive Dick sucking.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10775 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:18:42 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Words of Mustang getting on the job.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10774 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:01:51 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Thought of finishing the reason for Psycho's transformation had inspired thought. The words written more to create reason and a reasonable story of how and why Psycho is before Dick.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10754 | kalab | 2006-06-23 18:15:04 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines The thought of the day thrust to page. A expulsion of agression through words. The story of how and why needs is on its way and is almost there. Need create a logic reason and alos a reason to caste the ignorance where it should be caste. Need more description, more sound, more taste, more sight, more touch. Where are they at. NEXT TO A CLUB. Things more about the tought and aremember to build upon them and bring them back up and go off on tangents and think of odd things one thinks of. Remember this si a A.I. Detective thought though, so he has control over his mind.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10743 | kalab | 2006-06-23 05:53:08 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines I wanted to read, edit and write the reason of how Psycho thinks he found life, but I could not find the passage for there are too many words to read to find the words. I instead read and wrote the third and departing chapter. More ideas for time and peronality and movement. The thoughts need to be more often and the thoughts written need to be edited so they are fragments like thoughts.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10727 | kalab | 2006-06-22 17:54:03 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines I read areound trying to find the part in Chapter 2 or 3 I was writing. I become lost a couple times and just read and edited what was read. Most the time, of course, was used to write the words for chapter one. Upon the writing of this log I realize I really need to branch and begin inidividual chapter files.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10715 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:55:48 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines More reading and editing and writing of the last of chapter 2. The chapter needs more reading and writing, but is flowing ot chapter 3.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10714 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:46:40 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines The words for the Third chapter are better than the words the replaced. The words connect the flow. The flow still needs to be read and edited. I may need more words and questions, but that can wait for the next chapter after Psycho reveals self.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10713 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:29:17 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines These words where written yesterday and where timed but needed to be transposed to novel. Theses are terms the military are teaching the public. Any more of these terms heard will be written downn and used.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10698 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:58:20 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines The words to and for the words for the definition and introduction of Neuro. What was written is what I like to read. The grammar fitting.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10697 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:22:59 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines More reading and editing of the frist chapter and trying to find the follow for the grammar.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10679 | kalab | 2006-06-21 06:03:55 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines Read and edit of chapter one. After thinking of on the walks to and from work in short spans during long spans of random thought I choose to not time, I have thought about the use of the somantic and telepathic mark and realize I need to not use the mark as I had. I do now understand that the paragraphs are what is in the long term memory or a part of instinct or conditioning. Look at the crowd could be used as crowd description. Some conditioning is thought and that conditioning needs to be shown and to shown as something that though conditioned needs to be focused.
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10664 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:42:17 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines More reading and editing. I think this will be a week of reading and editing for the file is too big and I woul like to read and edit and think to see what exists and what doesn't. I like what I have read sofar. Lessing use of I is always good. If not good then better for Dick is not a selfish. I have had some thoughts about the end and how it maybe during the rebirth of Psycho, Psycho could become a G5 killing machine again, or Psycho could have been a killing machine all along and was ment to kill Dick because the G5 killing machines and perfect its killing ability so well it wanted to see if it could convince Dick to kill himself. Though this will never be defined, these possibilities need to be thought by Dick. Thought of Dick and the grammaredit will be easier once file is files..
------------------------------------------------------------------------ r10663 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:11:42 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines The Detective Store Synopsis was read after I read chapters while in the Secure and Secrete building. ...The addition of the sentence was made after the synposis was read after the words of the Secrete and Secure Government building was read and writed and edited. The process all align. The synopsis I have found is a good way to find the right location for the good Hyper-Content of the day.
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