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r21608 | kalab | 2007-09-15 15:51:46 -0700 (Sat, 15 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I removed the last line because I now realize it conflicts with the beginning line of the story by not conforming how the record is formed. The rules are broke by it. And I don't think it is needed, so there is more reason to remove the line.

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r21578 | kalab | 2007-09-13 23:50:16 -0700 (Thu, 13 Sep 2007) | 1 line

Read from middle to end. The words were what are needed. I only really needed to remove some words to make less more and remove confusion. There was the need to add verbs. ...I now realize as I edit and read these words again I will need to edit Psycho's dialog to add verbs for he just talks like a thought of killing. The words did flow as I want them to. There were a few words added, but not too many. ...the thought and the time did and does flow. It will flow. It flows now. I like what was read. I think what was read is very near complete.

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r21564 | kalab | 2007-09-12 22:55:21 -0700 (Wed, 12 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I read from the beginning to the nearing of Dick to the Alley way where he is scooped up by Psycho.I think it is about half way through the chapter and good time to stop for I want and probably need to focus upon the second half more. ...There were many sentences that needed verbs that now have verbs. There were a few words removed because they made less more. The less more is better than clutter and shit. Shit is bad. ...So I read and read and found the story flow. The edits will help complete. I think what is there is what is needed. I do believe that I may need to inspect Psycho speak a bit more, but feel it is nearing what it should. The change should conform to sound more like Dick's internal dialog now. I will need to focus upon that.

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r21547 | kalab | 2007-09-11 23:16:21 -0700 (Tue, 11 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I read the first and didn't read much further. I made changes to sentences that needed changes becaues of the type and lack of verbs or them needing to be internal dialog. I edited the first sentence because though it is long and needs to be obvious it is too long and should also possibly be natural for it should be because Dick may or may not know. I like the beginning now and read only to the words of him landing, but I didn't focus on the too much. The transition from the last chapter to this chapter is what i focused upon and it is what is edited and now good.

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r20807 | kalab | 2007-08-03 05:28:58 -0700 (Fri, 03 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I read from the capture on. I removed words because the words were not needed. ...I had to move the search for Mustang for how I wrote the sight of soldier line needs to occur after that thoughts. The rewrite of the search for mom and dad reads a lot better now. I think. Better than is did. Less words too. More meaning. That is always good. ...I removed description of outside Psycho during descent because Psycho is sealed with nano bonds. ...I thought of the description of the wall to change to a flat sheet. I may also have Psycho's core roll to Dick quicker. ...I removed the words. I read to the end. With the less words the end of chapter reads better.

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r20803 | kalab | 2007-08-02 21:03:25 -0700 (Thu, 02 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I began reading from the army shouting number and ready. I found errors with typos and misspellings. I then read of the wrapping of limbs and began to edit. I thought of the talk of Psycho and Dick and Psycho will begin to reference Dick as you all the time for he is now in Psycho and there is that idea has allowed Psycho to begin to understand You. I will come with the other G43 killing machines arrive. ...I think. ...I focused time on the description of what Dick sees of the Army line. I have thought of this a bit. I just wrote it out. Then once wrote I read on. I may have too much at once. ...I read to the veiw of the killing machine and read of it and thought of it and like what was written. The names of Psycho and Dick will be removed from the records in places, but not all places. The conversation becoming one as far as the record reads it, but it is or is not. There could be any number of reasons. ...I should, I have thought label them all, of course there are bugs in every program.

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r20785 | kalab | 2007-08-02 05:34:57 -0700 (Thu, 02 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I began by focusing on the description and word flow then what became Dick flow into the people. The words were moved and found then I thought of and focused on the location and actions of Betty and Richard. ...I read and edited the internal and external dialog for better understanding and flow of thought and speech. Psycho learns pronouns. I wanted to show people looking behind and asking on in group of they just asked them a question, which they do answer and think about. Psycho is intelligent enough not to ask everyone questions in the voice of someone they know and use no one else in the group....I removed the pursuit of Betty and Richard for I wanted them in a slow moving rickshaw rolling back to work. And I don't think dumpster fucking is needed when there is covered rickshaw for sex between Betty and Richard to enjoy. It could and would be better shown if Dick looks and the rickshaw with Psycho's vision and sees the Rickshaw moving. If it needs to be written again. The removal of Richard and Betty following gave more focus. The sense of urgency not diminished. I had fun writing the sounds and perfecting the sounds. ...I did also think to define the grammar use of a single group speaking that the group speak so all group dialog, which must be the subject will have all the dialog of different voices offset with the upper dialog mark.

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r20780 | kalab | 2007-08-01 22:13:14 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I began by reading and editing the description of the tanks clearing 18th, but then thought that it was a shitty prose piece and that Dick was not standing yet so he would not be able to see the tanks clear the road. This may change, but for now the detail may remain out or someplace else like in the sky. ...I read of the standing and the need and wrote of Dick standing then though of the fact the tanks should be idling and spewing exhaust, so I read at the first and found a good location for Dick to notice the idling. ...I found a few mistakes with tying. I had the verb issue again. The records that need verbs do not have them so some of the words changes exist because a verb was needed. ...I was writing for a time the description that is now after Dick standing. I can't find the words I want to write to define what needs to be written in a way to show with the language. ...I don't know. I will find it...

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r20769 | kalab | 2007-08-01 17:13:45 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line

The read began before the question talk of getting questions. The words needed to be corrected and the words and the flow and the way Dick continues to try to teach Psycho and show and tell Psycho of pronouns to hope to begin to generalize his life with other life and connect more life than its own. The reading read to the words before an after the talk and the read was a find of minor missing typos and corrections. I seem to not hit y strong enough or the key is worn. ...I focused on the jester moves.

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r20761 | kalab | 2007-08-01 05:28:38 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I read from jester to being in Psycho. I read and reread. Edited. And read. Wrote and read and edited, edited, edtied. The story is becoming. The description of this chapter in areas needs to be show and not tell. Lots of tellling found when telling is now wanted. At least this is how I feel after reading and rereading these words today. I was stuck on the descrition of Psycho. The rain. The everything. I think I will be deleting some sentences but I am not in the mood right now to do that. What of the sight and seeing the line move, and the people, and the G43 Killing Machines. ...The story does continue. It read on and builds. Tension reads to be held.

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r20757 | kalab | 2007-07-31 22:32:56 -0700 (Tue, 31 Jul 2007) | 1 line

I read from the jester and the Secret Sentry. I read and better defined a few things. I found typos. I read and reread and then wrote more words. I read unstopped at the :) and thought it needed to be :(. I read and read and reread. I found a few mistakes. I removed words that I were only confusing. I add and set up the scene of the Army beginning to move. The shout of their identification and the registration of ready and command of move. The addition of white noise collection. I thought of how tow describe the move ment and thought of images and process to define and show the action. ...The words are reading. i do find them to be something I like to read. It is becoming better.

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r20741 | kalab | 2007-07-31 05:37:39 -0700 (Tue, 31 Jul 2007) | 1 line

I read from beginning. There were reads that needed editing because the use of verbs was bad or read better than another. Some sentences are full of too much action and decision, it told, and now it more shows. The flow improved with more thought and stronger, grammar and spellchecked sentences. There are a few things needing be fixed, maybe, but only because I want to read the words and not edit them. The words are there. Most are more than becoming. The are. The description add is the description needed because there is a lot of things everywhere. ...I am thinking of the show of the this chapter of the clearing of the road and the tightening of the army wall and how Army marks and read and detains suspects into pockets of congov groups. ..The chapter and the tensions will be stronger and better shown through the sky view when Dick and Psycho are in the air.

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r20727 | kalab | 2007-07-30 05:53:01 -0700 (Mon, 30 Jul 2007) | 1 line

I read the first few paragraphs and wrote the detail of the congov and the words to focus on contractor government able to do what they want and the government able to do what they want within the bounds of written rules. They are all rules. The chapter read not too deep for the time is not long to read and write all the chapter which is how it needs to get done.

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r20706 | kalab | 2007-07-29 15:15:46 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jul 2007) | 1 line

I read from beginning to the giving of the jacket to jesture and the show of the Senators. The words read as I want and they should. I should point out that the guy from the line who commented before them entering is the one that says something to Dick, but it may not. ...I like what was read. Some definition my be needed. I wated to clarify a sentence or two and that only needed different words or the words removed. ...The words of this chapter begin and continue the story.

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r20098 | kalab | 2007-06-25 05:33:04 -0700 (Mon, 25 Jun 2007) | 1 line

The write of the talk and tell of Psycho leaving the nuclear waste before it wrapped up Dick and took Dick to K Street. The location where written is a good place for I think that the words even help have the thought of Dick that now follows have more meaning.

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r18761 | kalab | 2007-04-22 14:06:19 -0700 (Sun, 22 Apr 2007) | 1 line

I read from beginning to end. I did some fast reading. I may have read in a few words and over a few misspelled words. I removed many words of a flow because it was too much telling. And only one sentence is wanted and need to be defined. The words did read. The end I like, but may need a bit more. I don't know. I liked it on the read, but the read may have been too quick. So...Anyway. The words I did like. Some thought was made dialog for Dick still wants to talk.

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r18743 | kalab | 2007-04-22 07:05:44 -0700 (Sun, 22 Apr 2007) | 1 line

The words flow as they should. The obvious turn of a new record. Dick wants to begin again. The flow from the first flows well. I had to fix internal and external dialog for typos, errors, jumbled words. I did read much. I read to the Jester playing on tank. I thought about the jester and like the idea still. I though of some mention of a king or queen to further show the america of now ruled by a select group of people. Now that I write the idea, I will not talk of a King or Queen for it best not to define it for the reader. Let them think of it or not.

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r17900 | kalab | 2007-03-12 21:21:02 -0700 (Mon, 12 Mar 2007) | 1 line

Feeling and being more. There were some sentences written to clarify the scene for the scene became confusing. I removed some sentences near the Gee forty-three discovery for the words were not needed. The feeling and of the wind and the coldness is to show drastic climate change and the actaull sensations felt by dick showing physical simulation. The words I wrote added to the flow. I feel I can read to the next chapter and begin to edit it. The next chapter I have thought of for it is a chapter I have had difficulty with while writing.

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r17888 | kalab | 2007-03-12 18:03:41 -0700 (Mon, 12 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I moved the dialog about the G3 because it was better place where moved. Infact that is where I thought it was. I like the fit because having just the word Descent after the description adds to the story of many things. I read the words from the getting of Dick by Psycho. I like the flow. What i added I think with imporve the flow of the story and add charater. The description of the location and what is seen is improved, but may need more work. I feel it. I think I smell it. I will read again before I write and edit to next chapter.

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r17881 | kalab | 2007-03-12 06:31:33 -0700 (Mon, 12 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I think the description will fit. I will read the words again for there is more thought for the story. Thought that is the story. I thought of the story the need to have water and quagmire to fall Dick's face during the last chapter. The swamp around desciption and the words and thoughts written up the the everywhere thought to show the range of technology and show what is around. Captiive on in the very obvious for mind is talking and seeing with Psycho while thinking of ways to find reality and discover what is to be to allow time to find a way to maybe reason from the trap. To give confidence to the continuing mission.

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r17872 | kalab | 2007-03-11 18:55:29 -0700 (Sun, 11 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read in places were I though and have through through out the day in short thought flashes about the need to define a way for Dick to get Psycho to say you, and define and show that Dick is thinking to find out what Psycho is. There was the thought of the parents and a drop of the motive of why he want to now enter the K Street building. Once he is told Mustang and Mom and Dad are dead he will react the way he does at the beginning of the next and then get back though sad and in pain to the fact all people need to be protected. For now more thought about Mom and Dad and Mustang and thought of the mission and the thought that it may as well be thought and acted the Psycho is real not matter the reality.

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r17861 | kalab | 2007-03-10 23:04:39 -0800 (Sat, 10 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from the first of the chapter to the landing of Psycho. I removed a lot of sentences for they were not needed to define the flight and glide of Dick. I willl reread the flight and landing of Dick and Psycho because it needs to be done. The words up and to the flight are, I think, something I don't read again. This read through clarified the few remaining sentences that were not wanted or desired. There were the typos and grammar issues that I always find, but I am happy I do find. I do want to add something more to what is told of the flight, I think. I don't know. I will read the words again and begin with the flight.

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r17833 | kalab | 2007-03-08 21:38:20 -0800 (Thu, 08 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from the mass on the street to Dick rising above to the sky with Psycho. I think I need a bit more description of what it is like to be in Psycho for Dick is a Detective, and it is very new to Dick, so his mind is searching and defining. I will begin the edit from the the rise of Dick again. Yes, the rise of Dick. That's funny.

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r17814 | kalab | 2007-03-07 22:42:41 -0800 (Wed, 07 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from the first of the chapter to the sentence of Dick rubbing against a sweaty chest. The words read as they should. I think description is what it should be. There is a sense of chaos of the senses and the attempt to find control. What the mind of Dick sees and feels is overwhelmed with the motion of everything. This is what I want. I hope in chapters before this chapter I have captured this type of description of a scene both know therefor everydetail is not defined, but also a scene new therefor detail focused upon is defined. I like the flow. I will probably begin a few 'pages' back when I read next to adjust to the flow, but I don't know. I will wait until the next read for such an action to be defined. I have found that there are a few more than normal typos, but this I am not shocked or too surprised for I am a typo person.

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r17813 | kalab | 2007-03-07 21:57:32 -0800 (Wed, 07 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The edit to replace all - (dash) with the lower quote mark because the dash is what I use to represent the lower quote mark when writing these words with visual editor which cannot understand a lower quote mark.

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r16879 | kalab | 2007-01-28 15:44:49 -0800 (Sun, 28 Jan 2007) | 1 line

A thought had during the walk to work on Friday while thinking of The Detective Store and this scene and the use of the word. I thought of the need to further show prejudice, and I thought of being able to further show it by writing these words that Dick thinks. This will also show Dick's analytical skills and humor and his now jaded outlook.

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r16630 | kalab | 2007-01-20 11:48:15 -0800 (Sat, 20 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The words of the way. I read and edited and read and edited. The words removed were no longer of this story. The words written to define the thoughts and actions of Dick. The following of Richard and Betty to find a place to fuck and the fucking. The obvious reason and suggested by the Editor to show the truth. The words removed and edited of words that the characters don't say for they won't say those words. It's not them. The entities. The chapter is complete for now. I may return to the end, but I will continue to write the words. I will continue reading and editing and writing chapter 1011.

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r16615 | kalab | 2007-01-19 17:06:12 -0800 (Fri, 19 Jan 2007) | 1 line

Dick know has bet because he thinks the government is smarter than to think to record all data because all data will just lose data with data.

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r16614 | kalab | 2007-01-19 17:03:33 -0800 (Fri, 19 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The write and the edit to remove rhte words that are not needed. The were written of another book or another story or just for fun. The block of words are just not wanted or needed. ...I was about to edit the surprise of Dick not knowing for sure that the government read all of its citizens' minds for he is truly surprised that all the minds are read because of it being lost in the system too. Too much information.

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r16603 | kalab | 2007-01-19 15:23:59 -0800 (Fri, 19 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The writing of more words. The writing of Dick walk into the alley and of Psycho taking Dick from the crowd and taking him to the K Steet building to stun Betty and Richard as they entere to slip inside. Or maybe Dick is guiding a programmed machine to act, or maybe its all in Dick's mind. The hole is nearing. Dick is trying to find the meaning the physical feels read thought it may be a cap, and Dick could be in his chair with a cap. What is Dick doing\? Is this real. The sites are real for the time. A time never to find.

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r16589 | kalab | 2007-01-19 10:03:37 -0800 (Fri, 19 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The jester a thought to rid dick of the jacket. No he must be rid of it, so it will need to be edited. The thought for giving the jacket thought while writing. Many other chapter thought while writing. I thought of a conversation between Dick and Psycho at the penultimate chapter of The Detective Store. I thought of the fact Psycho will be fueled by the nano machines and the hole in the surface of the floor is only for the human heads. The nano machines that are part of the human trap are also able to fuel Psycho. Psycho can also connect to the system with the nanomachines. The action written will reamain iin the chapter. But that is another chapter. This chapter the words written is to continue to define and write the record of change of Dick of the store. The words that were moved were moved for timing and redefinition. The words removed have only been scanned over in the past. The nearing of Psycho coming.

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r16581 | kalab | 2007-01-19 06:15:14 -0800 (Fri, 19 Jan 2007) | 1 line

People people everywhere for the people need someplace to have fun. The The thoughts thought with the words written. The words removed are removed for they are not needed, and the words are of the last revision of the story flow. While writing I thought of the coming chapters' words and description and realize the next chapter is likely the one to be difficult to edit. This chapter needs words written. The description unique, I hope for the story. ...I decided to have Psycho write to Dick's mind during this chapter and in a non word form because Psycho wants to write to mind for it consumes less energy.

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r16566 | kalab | 2007-01-18 01:28:17 -0800 (Thu, 18 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The read I liked. What was written of the Jesters begging for alms is something that was and is needed. The alms begging of different styles should be somewhere else, or at least homeless sleeping somewhere for it is Washington, D.C., which had many homeless and probably still has many homeless living around D.C.. The begging is needed for it is of the jobless ness and the job the environment. I may have some one beg when Dick leaves The Detective Store.

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r16556 | kalab | 2007-01-17 23:19:35 -0800 (Wed, 17 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The reading and the editing. The words a better flow for the story as it is. The words removed were not only not fitting for the story changes, but were also needed because the words were bad. They were not good. The were good to get the story out of mind and to the paper to complete an thought and begin a better thought, but as they were most of the words removed were bad. Some of the words removed were removed because the story has changed since the writing of the words. Of the words written, the story continues to show the increase in troops doesn't do much if you don't win the hearts and minds of the public. It shows the deep hatred and racism of America. I hopefully tells the tale of one who just wants to work and live and get through the night. The words are. The words will be. I did during the write look at google maps to get location of the walk from the Always because I have never actually walked behind club Five which I have been to and is the location Always is based upon. ...The words are. The words will be.

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r16537 | kalab | 2007-01-16 21:32:35 -0800 (Tue, 16 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The edit and read of the first and a quick scan and read of the entire chapter to get an idea of what happens during the chapter. I think this chapter (after a very quick read) won't be too difficult to edit and write. There doesn need to be some editing and thought of Dick to reason the reason for going along and carry on the thought thought, but by this point he just wants to get Psycho far from people, so when he leaves Psycho he doesn't put other in danger. I think the driving force (of thought past) was the rage of wanting to know and realizing that there will be no life after this day because no matter where he goes he will not be able to live in the United States, so he may as well enter then building where he will not only be able to find truth, but maybe some how survive or die because death is better than living out side of the city-state.

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r15980 | kalab | 2006-12-29 11:03:47 -0800 (Fri, 29 Dec 2006) | 1 line

A few thoughts to continue a thought of the story line that was changed in chapter 1000, or rather it was created, and continued in 1001 and is now written with the words of chapter 1010 to write the words for the story of events guiding the flow of the characters through the character story. Psycho will begin to blame people of things. Psycho will become more real. Dick will have further reason to enter the building to have goals other than the end occurance of sticking head into entropy bowl. It must remain a process Dick processes because he has not choice, or because he wants to, or because he feels he needs to, or because he doesn't know what he is doing, or because of rage and control.

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r14166 | kalab | 2006-10-17 21:45:31 -0700 (Tue, 17 Oct 2006) | 1 line

Removing skin color for Dick will have noe skin color defined by the words of The Detective Store. This begin one of the thought thought this morning while walking to work this morning.

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r13683 | kalab | 2006-09-29 18:53:37 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The read, the read, the read. The words of the read read that the end needed to be rewritten with edit and write and read processes. The words of the other ending may be transposed to the first of the next Chapter. The new end a good way to begin the chapter off and keep the emotion through the entire chapter and not end it and need to recreate it the beginning of next chapter. The end of the last was good when the story was to be departure of Dick because of betrayal. The end of the now good because it ends the chapter with uncertainty.

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r13670 | kalab | 2006-09-29 05:54:34 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

To kill Mustang or to not kill Mustang. I thought while reading to not kill Mustang. This thought during some tangent thought about how Dick my be viewed by another read other than this writer. I hope to frame Dick as a naive opportunist...maybe. Still thinking, but regardless I hope to give reason Dick to want to leave the city, but be talked into entering the K Street building. The death of Mustang is maybe too much and misguided. The Death is still likely to be in the story as long as the words to define the facct are written well and read with the flow and have some emotion to the death. If the Mustang character doesn't develop and doesn't become a full character of the book then the death of Mustang won't matter much to the reader. The death of Mustang, now that I think about it, if a plot point could use the need for it to be some plot point and therefor still be useful if not for an emotional reaction. The death to show the Capitalist and Government control and give Dick reason to enter the K Street Building beyond his own desires.

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r13651 | kalab | 2006-09-28 17:42:08 -0700 (Thu, 28 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Now I read and begin to know the chapter. I think, if I have wrote already, that the resond Psycho needs to leap high in this chapter will be to avoid Government and Capitalist detection, so Psycho must leap fast up and through the clouds and fast down and the Government and Capitalistss will not detect. This happens while Richard and Betty are fucking, maybe in a bus stop, or maybe in the rail tunnels, or maybe in the shadows near Dick and Psycho's side of the street near the Cyber scan...which is for next chapter, but needs to be thought.

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r13643 | kalab | 2006-09-28 05:53:32 -0700 (Thu, 28 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The chapter read to have a a pace and a flow to begin a chapter, a record. I almost feeel the excitement of Dick and the Rickshaw, but feel it does need something else. Quick exchange, action. No dialog. I know not.

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r13168 | kalab | 2006-09-10 15:41:16 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The edit of chapter name from Hex to Binary. Binary is the state of the World.

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r13136 | kalab | 2006-09-10 08:17:00 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The reason Dick should use all the time begin upset is better used with a subject like death. Dick can be pissed off about the recording, but the Death of Mustang, for that seems to be where things are going for not only with the death of Mustang be metaphoric, but the death of Mustang is a much strong subject the the subject of recording. The recording will remain, but as a further-reason-to-be-mad act to show Dick's way of dealing with the emotional possiblitiy of Mustang's Death.

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r12994 | kalab | 2006-09-04 08:20:53 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The words to introduce water falling from the sky, and an blend of scene to scene to flow with a book.

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r12976 | kalab | 2006-09-03 11:49:00 -0700 (Sun, 03 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Beoming lost in words. Lots of dialog for dialog is needed. What ese to describe during hte acsent\?

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r12975 | kalab | 2006-09-03 11:31:01 -0700 (Sun, 03 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The edit of the end unexpected. The words removed needed to be removed because there needed not be so much talking and words.. I began to read from about the middle and began removing things and reading . Some of what is written is good, but most still needs editing and thought.

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r12967 | kalab | 2006-09-03 07:04:18 -0700 (Sun, 03 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The words read better than they did prior to this next edit. This reads to be a chapter of a lot of dialog which is fine because they are closer and more familar and alone after being around the others for hours and Dick is mad about the mind writing.

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r12966 | kalab | 2006-09-03 06:29:14 -0700 (Sun, 03 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Two edits while reading. Oned edit of words that were not required for story and misplaced. A redundant telling from chapter 9. The second edit the rewurte of dialog to make Dick less needy of Psycho and give insight and reason why they want then alove.

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r11894 | kalab | 2006-08-06 11:53:16 -0700 (Sun, 06 Aug 2006) | 1 line

Reading and finding the place to write. The idea is that (the now named Richard and Betty stay a few minutes after Dick is thown out to fuck there and then return to work to checkout and go home. No new insite into what their names will be...

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r11835 | kalab | 2006-08-04 18:07:25 -0700 (Fri, 04 Aug 2006) | 1 line

Thoughts of having the wheels of the stage coaches and rickshaw's spinning create the light of the spokes and wheels. Use the brightness of light to show the bright and the dimming of the light. Thought of the chip under the skin of the Richard and Betty to enter and, like the P.P.E. will not work when sleeping or unconscious.

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r11690 | kalab | 2006-07-30 09:32:56 -0700 (Sun, 30 Jul 2006) | 1 line

All mind are read. Global Terrorist minds are the only ones recorded.

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r11426 | kalab | 2006-07-19 05:50:50 -0700 (Wed, 19 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The words are better than the words removed. Or so I believe. more thought and action and scene. I still need to make sure threre is little light and the place is as dirty as any city.

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r11399 | kalab | 2006-07-18 17:40:49 -0700 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Some words for thought. I hadn't thought prior to writing the words that the Ocean would be surrounding the Beltway, but I do believe this will remain for I like the effect it has on the rest of the story. It is the effect I desire. I still need to show and write of the normal, clean (as clean as it is today) state of Washington, D.C..

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r11250 | kalab | 2006-07-13 05:52:18 -0700 (Thu, 13 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The recording program can only recreate the sentence that the thought is related with. Any prior paragraphs are not recovered and under the law of the United States of Amercia by the mind reading program triggered when Dick says United States of America.

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r11185 | kalab | 2006-07-10 17:35:56 -0700 (Mon, 10 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Teh words are reading to me well once edited. A for now needs some I's removed so Dick read lesss vain or arrogant, but enough to be self-aware for the sake of needing to be self aware. Teh idea and the system of how the recording program for the united states of america is manifesting in mind. The reason for the saying it. At the end... the time will be said so the system records him putting his head into the Entropy system. The Entropy System inputs people's minds into the system and converts it to A.I..

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r11056 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:34:28 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The files of the chapters of the detective store forked from mail file and edited to contain only the words for the chapter so more words maybe written and honed and focused (read, written, editted, published) to complete the story and create a book.

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r11050 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:01:27 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Chapter A of The Detective Store. The words to define and show and tell. The words to become that which will tell the tale of Dick, and beyond one of the Characters, the files will tell the tale of the book.

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r11037 | kalab | 2006-07-07 18:20:09 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

More thoughts of framing the frame from thoughts of the day. I also decided it should be may and that I need to branch the file now.

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r11030 | kalab | 2006-07-07 06:12:12 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Read and edit. Edit and read. Read and edit. The thought and the comprehension of the first words reading like words of a book. The files need to be split and moved to Words. If my head was not so distant and numb with alcohol, I would have have branched this file today. There is tomorrow.

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r10968 | kalab | 2006-07-02 20:54:59 -0700 (Sun, 02 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Thoughs had about an hour ago while walking up an incline. I noticed when I focused on the horizon the back ground sort of bouced as did the foreground. There is of course the metaphoric qualities of the sentence. The sentence was written last after reading and wrijting read for the location to write the sentnece. I need to branch the file, or fork the file, Maybe I will do that tomorrow. It is gettin gbig and difficult to manage, and find a focus.

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r10920 | kalab | 2006-06-30 05:45:36 -0700 (Fri, 30 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The question of Government wanting to have Dick put head in the Entropy Bowl is something I have written about and thought about and given some ofthe purposes of the writing, to learn, express and provoke, liberty to add in ideas and questions in the story form. I thought after writing the words at the end of the story and thought about how to write the turning back on of Psycho after Psycho has been fueled. More thoughts here and there but reading and writing began at the top fo the page, then I had an idea for for thoughtlog or seelog (not dialog) at the end of the story to reason why Dick resons to stick head in bowl.

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r10907 | kalab | 2006-06-29 20:52:38 -0700 (Thu, 29 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Reading, writing and editing. The words are actually writing where they need to be written. The addition of why The Story begins were it does is because Dick says United States of America and that is one of the keywords used to begin the reading and recording of Dick's mind Of course, because the Government is reading and recording it does not mean they are listening.

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r10899 | kalab | 2006-06-28 23:00:35 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The thoughts still need to be more smoooth in the flow I read prior, chapter 3. The actions to test the make of A.I. is what will be. Fun thoughts. The thought after 2 need to be refined, as do the rest of the thoughts.

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r10889 | kalab | 2006-06-28 18:20:45 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Thoughts of how to make Dick more of a motive of how and why he hides the thought. Does he just hide it because he can\? Just a thought I have been having about the motive of Dick wanting to access...Or maybe not so much the motive put how to hide the desire. Does he purposuly slipt and think at times of his own desires to access the information and doesn't care if the government is reading his mind and is also figuring that the thoughts alone will or may trigger an alarm for the Government to arrest him. So the thoughts need to be some how written of Dick seeing that he wants the data to see the data and to warn the Government of his plans and alert the Government by hoping the thought filter will see his desires to help a G5.

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r10879 | kalab | 2006-06-28 06:01:52 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More reading and editing and words and story. More refine ment. The thought read to be better. Time will define if it is. New thoughts and inventions for books a complete.

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r10854 | kalab | 2006-06-27 17:42:23 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More wwords and reading and editing. The thought of how I wrote Psycho to read Dick's mind will be used until Psycho can read and write to Dick's mind.

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r10851 | kalab | 2006-06-27 06:32:18 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

I do beleive I have almost written chapter ones flow and thought process and trail of thought. Reading and editing and writing. The thought flow of dick almost a flow. Time is near to separate into Words and write a book. The Strobe weapon was something that I just though of. This after editing syber scan. The edits beyond 1 are what I did last as when spending a few minutes reading around. I read I need to get rid of I's.

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r10832 | kalab | 2006-06-26 06:06:48 -0700 (Mon, 26 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words read of the first of the files for the files ls long and won't be split (maybe) anytime soon. The first of the chapter was read and some editing and writing done. I am still writing for the flow of the narrative and the story. The thought almost the flow and style for Dick. Psycho and the voiced of inidividuals more delveloped, I believe, but could be read as bad if the first doens't define the narrative in a way to entertain and maintain reading.

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r10816 | kalab | 2006-06-25 10:14:39 -0700 (Sun, 25 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading. I Am lost in what I need to write for Dick to come to the understanding and reason for doing anything. The malfunction reason I thinnk I have written, but it is lost in a lot of repitious dialog that may be needed, but if used should better framed and more natural even for two being trained to control their actions and thought. The file needs to be split so I can begin to define words as chapters and with chapters further focus on the words to define the book.

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r10811 | kalab | 2006-06-24 20:38:26 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

MOre reading than editing or writing. Mind is somewhere.

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r10781 | kalab | 2006-06-24 11:30:59 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Mustange and Dick depart. Mustang will be captured by the U.S. Government and thrown in confinement when Mustang leaves Larry's Fajitas and goes to the Government for help. Need some more thought, more discription of hte house for the characters.

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r10778 | kalab | 2006-06-24 10:27:08 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the departure of Mustang for the apartment. And some removal of excessive Dick sucking.

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r10775 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:18:42 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words of Mustang getting on the job.

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r10774 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:01:51 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of finishing the reason for Psycho's transformation had inspired thought. The words written more to create reason and a reasonable story of how and why Psycho is before Dick.

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r10754 | kalab | 2006-06-23 18:15:04 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The thought of the day thrust to page. A expulsion of agression through words. The story of how and why needs is on its way and is almost there. Need create a logic reason and alos a reason to caste the ignorance where it should be caste. Need more description, more sound, more taste, more sight, more touch. Where are they at. NEXT TO A CLUB. Things more about the tought and aremember to build upon them and bring them back up and go off on tangents and think of odd things one thinks of. Remember this si a A.I. Detective thought though, so he has control over his mind.

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r10743 | kalab | 2006-06-23 05:53:08 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I wanted to read, edit and write the reason of how Psycho thinks he found life, but I could not find the passage for there are too many words to read to find the words. I instead read and wrote the third and departing chapter. More ideas for time and peronality and movement. The thoughts need to be more often and the thoughts written need to be edited so they are fragments like thoughts.

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r10727 | kalab | 2006-06-22 17:54:03 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read areound trying to find the part in Chapter 2 or 3 I was writing. I become lost a couple times and just read and edited what was read. Most the time, of course, was used to write the words for chapter one. Upon the writing of this log I realize I really need to branch and begin inidividual chapter files.

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r10715 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:55:48 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing and writing of the last of chapter 2. The chapter needs more reading and writing, but is flowing ot chapter 3.

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r10714 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:46:40 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words for the Third chapter are better than the words the replaced. The words connect the flow. The flow still needs to be read and edited. I may need more words and questions, but that can wait for the next chapter after Psycho reveals self.

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r10713 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:29:17 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

These words where written yesterday and where timed but needed to be transposed to novel. Theses are terms the military are teaching the public. Any more of these terms heard will be written downn and used.

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r10698 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:58:20 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to and for the words for the definition and introduction of Neuro. What was written is what I like to read. The grammar fitting.

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r10697 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:22:59 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing of the frist chapter and trying to find the follow for the grammar.

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r10679 | kalab | 2006-06-21 06:03:55 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit of chapter one. After thinking of on the walks to and from work in short spans during long spans of random thought I choose to not time, I have thought about the use of the somantic and telepathic mark and realize I need to not use the mark as I had. I do now understand that the paragraphs are what is in the long term memory or a part of instinct or conditioning. Look at the crowd could be used as crowd description. Some conditioning is thought and that conditioning needs to be shown and to shown as something that though conditioned needs to be focused.

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r10664 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:42:17 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. I think this will be a week of reading and editing for the file is too big and I woul like to read and edit and think to see what exists and what doesn't. I like what I have read sofar. Lessing use of I is always good. If not good then better for Dick is not a selfish. I have had some thoughts about the end and how it maybe during the rebirth of Psycho, Psycho could become a G5 killing machine again, or Psycho could have been a killing machine all along and was ment to kill Dick because the G5 killing machines and perfect its killing ability so well it wanted to see if it could convince Dick to kill himself. Though this will never be defined, these possibilities need to be thought by Dick. Thought of Dick and the grammaredit will be easier once file is files..

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r10663 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:11:42 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The Detective Store Synopsis was read after I read chapters while in the Secure and Secrete building. ...The addition of the sentence was made after the synposis was read after the words of the Secrete and Secure Government building was read and writed and edited. The process all align. The synopsis I have found is a good way to find the right location for the good Hyper-Content of the day.

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r10612 | kalab | 2006-06-16 18:00:29 -0700 (Fri, 16 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The detective store write was inspired by today and the past days of hearing some much news that I now have a place to focus. The store and shapping the reason he lies and doesn't want to leave with out Psycho needs to be defined with more detail as the words are written. I am thinking of changing the name of Benjamin Franklin. I know not what the name would be. A name more sympolic maybe\?

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r10598 | kalab | 2006-06-15 18:10:20 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I found myself reading and editing the first chapter then began to read and edit the third which is where I want to edit. I read mostly, to remember and now i do I can almost see the grammar use of Word Prostitute Grammar.

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r10597 | kalab | 2006-06-15 17:39:07 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read the last half of the synopsis and the first of the book adn thought of how see for seeing for sight. There needs to be some more thought. I need read and write someother part of the book to find that thought.

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r10587 | kalab | 2006-06-15 06:02:00 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The chapter edited will be the chapter I will read and edit for a bit. it is one that needs to be read and edited. The direction and action thought. More description needed. The story exists to write and I will and so I will.

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r10586 | kalab | 2006-06-15 05:45:29 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I am trying to make an effort to write, but I shouldn't be writing the end. I want to write somewhere else for the end is something I need to think about more and how best to write to it.

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r10559 | kalab | 2006-06-14 06:01:13 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I feel good writing near the end to fhe chapter before the non-human energy draining elevator shaft.

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r10558 | kalab | 2006-06-14 05:48:28 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Of yesterdays thoughts, The addition of God to those that control D.C.. The continual integration of the feel and see and think. I am happy I don't need to mark everything and that feel is now defined. I need to write and read on to other chapters so I may forget and reread the first of book. Valerie hasn't said anything about The Detective Store exept with words in an email saying she received the file. I haven't asked if she is even reading it. She may. She may not.

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r10543 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:23:57 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read around, mostly end. Reading for a place to write that is not the first two chapters. Maybe chapter three. I do need to split the files. The repository may be translated this weekend.

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r10542 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The frame of see and feel thought of during the walk to work while reading Lassivyous aloud the words feel as you feel and then stopped read Lassivyous and thought of The Detective Store and how to frame feel for feel should how to define what is now a non-marked paragraph, the narrative, what you feel. The feel is now frame for The Detective Store and for Word ProstituteTM GrammarTM.

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r10531 | kalab | 2006-06-13 05:54:03 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and thinking about the changes made last night to express everything with the somatic marks. I like the way it reads but where to d seperate. Do I separate when Psycho enters, another being in the area of the feeler. How does the mind read work\? When to use the mark\? Questions, questions, quesions, Need to think about this while walking or as a thought of the day for I need to know how to mark words.

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r10520 | kalab | 2006-06-12 20:19:20 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I think I have found the way the words will be written for the A.I. Detective. The words of the first chapter have been marked with the grammar and the words to define to write the words the way the Detective store is to be written for it best define the form of the Detective Store. I wonder if Valerie has read The Detective Store yet and if not I may have her read this one...actually I may not. I don't know. This is the first time I have actually thought to think if Valerie has read any of it yet. I don't think she has for she has been wanting to finish the book she is reading now before...anyway, I 'll ask later to find if she has read the words yet and if not I may send her this revision so I can get her opinion on the grammar. Maybe...Maybe not. We shall see. I do like what is wrote and how it is wrote and find it should be written that way for it is i an A.I. Detective.

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r10509 | kalab | 2006-06-12 18:03:09 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Further reading and edting and writing to make the thought trained but still like real thought and not some narrative of a book.

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r10501 | kalab | 2006-06-12 06:04:17 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of what needed to be written. Read here and there. Edititng the Grammar the words. Thinking of why Richard and Betty don't know (or reach) to the Government knowing Psycho nad Dick's exact loation. It think the go to the building to help protect it (and to fuck).

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r10480 | kalab | 2006-06-11 20:17:20 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Some more thoughts. An effort to write The Detective Store for the third time today ends after only fifteen minutes. I need to write something other than the first, and that is something to begin in the morning. I will be able to write in the morning. Tonight I will tag the file of the revision after this commit and send the tagged revision to -v-. She wants to read it, just because she wants to read it so I will send it, but said to her that a smile or a frown is all she can reply with (for now for I could change my mind, but that will be noted when the change of mind (of action) occurs.

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r10470 | kalab | 2006-06-11 13:07:34 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. The store of the reason G5 is not killing is and needs to be explained. To explain the actaul question/answers process will need to be defined throughout the store. I editing the words I think there is also the possible store line of wondering how a question is asked. Likely this will not.

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r10459 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:57:10 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words and reading of chapter two needs to continue to be the focus for the words are of the story and reason thought before the many rewrites of the syno[isis. The story of how the question became to question and create Psycho will need to be as honed an sharp as how it is described in the synopsis. More thought may be needed too.

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r10458 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:01:03 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A first chapter that has been read and edited enough for now. The thought of Dick needs to be refined to resemble thought that is sort of random yet trained and orderly because the processes to create an A.I. Detective must be orderly.Lots of edits and reading with the commit. The words I suppose rady for another who just wants to read them and not edit them for I am not done editing the words of the first chapter. Nor am I complete with the writing.

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r10453 | kalab | 2006-06-10 19:47:11 -0700 (Sat, 10 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

REading and editing for Valerie wants to read and I want to give her at least the first chapter.

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r10433 | kalab | 2006-06-08 18:54:56 -0700 (Thu, 08 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the store with the vision. I thought more of the why and thought of symbolism of having Dick naked and keeping Dick naked. I also thought more of the why which is something that I will, may, want to work on before the files become many, which I hope to be next week.

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r10425 | kalab | 2006-06-07 21:39:14 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words to ready for the fall.

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r10410 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:57:46 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Think the thought of free thought now that Dick thinks the Government and Psycho can not read his mind.

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r10409 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:50:57 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Trying to find the thought of Dick. The thought of Dick will be more for there is not a nother character or charcters or people for Dick to control his thoughts. Dick doesn't want to control his thoughtws anymore.

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r10394 | kalab | 2006-06-06 18:40:11 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I have read and I have thought. More timing and more steps for the words to become.

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r10377 | kalab | 2006-06-06 05:48:40 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read the last chapters. Skipped around. Edited.

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r10366 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:33:10 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A thought thoght on the way home. Writing Dick's thought process now that he is alone. is important.

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r10365 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:25:43 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis reads good. Some coreections but nothing too serious. I like the end of the synopsis. The end is the end that the end the synopsis needs to be.

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r10352 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:55:56 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The nano machines will be the nuclear fuel depot, so Dick needs to thow Psycho up, which he does, to fuel Psycho.

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r10351 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:40:14 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Write familar words. I scannned and read pieces of other chapters and read to the end knowinng that if I wanted to write anything more than two words this morning I would need to read the last chapter for it is in the mind more than the rest. The words are okay and lead to where the story needs to go. I need to know figure out where the nuclear depot is located. I was going to have nuclear depots along the section of walls, but I have begun to think have the nuclear depots in the wall is too easy. Writing the words won't take much thought, once the story and depot location is found.

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r10326 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:27:50 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words. Some of them feel pulpy. The words are satisfying enogh for a beginning of the chapter. I now am ready for branching the file.

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r10325 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:01:24 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A read and edit. I can't foget the backpack.

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r10299 | kalab | 2006-06-04 06:26:02 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot, for a time, about the back pack and the Entropy Core of Psycho. More words removed for there were either useless words or words to remind me what to write.

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r10298 | kalab | 2006-06-04 05:54:54 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot that I need to have a place where the G5 are drained, all machines are drained, of their energy some where on the way to the secure room. That place will be the elevator shaft for I had thought about it last when there was no elevator down.

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r10288 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:45:43 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than commited. To find the words that are a little better than shiyy, I had to read and stare at words and file (the manuscript, the draft, the words and space.

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r10287 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:16:18 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Another write of Synopsis. More words that are needed. Read some aloud. Not much.

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r10282 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:55:04 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the thoughts again to clear the thoughts and think of other things while writing. The things thought were more thoughts into the conversation and then thoughts of how I will convince both the reader and Psycho that Dick trust Psycho. The thoguht of Dick will be interesting. The hole in center of room will be the Entropy input. I believe there will be holes in the walls labeled with the radioactive material sign to warn that they are nuclear fuel nodes.

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r10281 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:42:50 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than will be save in this revision. There was lots of movement, but the movement was needed for the words now are better than the words then. While wriitng,I had the thought that Instead of having another separate room as I was going to have after this room, now that the room is hte size that it is I think I will have this the last room and not have another hence the words put in to say that the hole for the Entropy in put is found. I am still wondering if there shoujld be a riddle or some fun game to entertain the readers mind and make me seem witty (or try too). I think I will probably not have more games and have the talk of how Dick believes Pshyco and the Government are still one and believes that he was hired and everything else was a set up. Psycho denies the setup and says the Government wasn't paying attention or recording his mind because he is not a Global Terrorist Red.

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r10273 | kalab | 2006-06-02 17:57:38 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to begin the chapter I believe are found for now. Much better than what existed. Something to continue to write with the next couple days. I like the flow of the nano machines. The idea is good. I will have to thank A for this one. As I am now. Thank you for you comment Alex and suggestion of using Nano machines for now I will use them even more because rods are worthless and not needed and because you said -Make sure there are Nano Machines.'

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r10262 | kalab | 2006-06-02 05:53:52 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The elevator descends. A few more words then it will stop at the bottom and at the secrete room. Not many inspiring thoughts beyond the words written. After reading a bit fo the first chapter and thought I need to write to remove some I's, the words read okay.

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r10251 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:57:38 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I am thinking of where to write next. I think the building room and the last chapter. As I hope to be converting the repository this weekend, it will soon be splitting the chapters and it would be good to have more of the story in all the chapters.

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r10250 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:49:22 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words on the way down. After a pile of G5 jump on top but can't penetrate the the elevator. I am feeling a bit blocked with words for the words weritten for this chapter during the past few days seem to be coming more and more jaded and seem jaded right now.

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r10237 | kalab | 2006-06-01 05:46:05 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More movement down and down and down. The idea of the G5 coming down the shaft an old one but one just know remembered. The G5 will not break through the top of the elevator but will supply a few paragraphs of words and moments of time unil Dick exits elevator for security room with nano machines.

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r10222 | kalab | 2006-05-31 06:34:57 -0700 (Wed, 31 May 2006) | 2 lines

The bottom of the elevator is coming soon. I am running out of ideas for the elevator. I did read and have been thinking back to the reasoning for having the steel door and may use it as some magnetic device.

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r10201 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:27:35 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read okay. Will use these words now for the page for Word Prostitute. Too many thens are wat I mostly thought had issues. But not many issues.

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r10200 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:19:44 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the elevator to the secure room. The lever scene shouldn't be too much longer. I still don't know what else will happen before the room with the nano machines that simulate a building in a room.

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r10185 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:42:31 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read of Synopsis. The words, I thought. read well. Added United States Government for the words needed. The reading flow of the synopsis, I believe found and written. The words sound. I can't wait to branch (with Subversion) the file to a single synopsis file so I can begin to create the short versions using the words written.

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r10184 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:29:37 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and an edit of the words to the secure room. More actions than thoughts, the words complete to show more store and define the existing scene with words. The words. There.

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r10183 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:21:24 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words while Dick Stands and sees. I am almost able to seee the scene and the site that Dick and Neuro see. It is clear in mind, so I guess I am able to see because I am now able to find the words needed to show the site.

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r10167 | kalab | 2006-05-28 13:03:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

The additional adjectives are good. More name changes. After reading the synopsis, I decded the name Psycho willl remain.

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r10166 | kalab | 2006-05-28 12:59:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read and edied. I like the flow and the words. It is complete, so now I need to translate the repository to Subversion so I can branch the files into sections and branch the synopsis file to the the various forms fo synopsis with the content. The idea is there. The tools need be available. I will need to do this after I archive image for space. Word Prostitute will have to create the process. Another idea. And a tangent that doesn't define The Detectivve Store but is hindering it from becoming.

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r10115 | kalab | 2006-05-25 07:21:20 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts and reading and editing and some writing. The movement down to the secret room and the secure room. The secure room is first. The elevator L-Shaped lever woun't go back up.

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r10114 | kalab | 2006-05-25 06:56:28 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Here the words write after another read and edit and write of the Synopsis. I am feeling slow today, and still the words read, to me, something to be understood.

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r10098 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:46:43 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read around and edited while searching for the location to not he end of the creation of the process. The core process needs to occur on the bridge because Dick knows the Government scan is faulty and weak on the bridge so his mind is not read that well if at all.

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r10097 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:26:47 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for the journey to the secret room. The elevator goes down and down and down and down.

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r10075 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:36:43 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the end. I was hoping to write to the stairs for they have moved. Down behind the steel door will be an elevator down which opens to a staircase up. The staircase is the illusion and nano machine staircase that seems so long but is on the size of a 8 x 8 x 16 room

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r10074 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:13:25 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for end. Read. The words for end seem to fit. I am just finding I need to build up to it better. I also need to raise the question by asking the question of Dick a lot are you trying to kill us all to have Dick have a thought to say and think that is a habit, somethink he thinks and says often, but also to question the intent of everyone.

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r10073 | kalab | 2006-05-23 17:37:47 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit and write of the synopsis. Again, getting better. I think I may be ready to send to a paper publisher and or agent in a couple more months. The detail I added I liked.

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r10062 | kalab | 2006-05-23 06:20:20 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts I had thought during the walks of yesterday. I have been wanting to change the those words for some time but haven't the desire to read the frist chapter for some time. I have been having furn writing the other chapters. Today I tried to continue make all the voices of the narrative unique but similar to set the words of Dick and Narration are one but seperate.

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r10055 | kalab | 2006-05-22 06:19:32 -0700 (Mon, 22 May 2006) | 2 lines

reading the words of chapter 4, I am trying to get rid of the I's. The words seem to flow, and whille the body and mind a retired, I read and think of what to do to remove some of the I's. I have some thoughts. Need more thoughts and less I's.

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r10041 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:51:20 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

More spreading of the story line the creation of the code. More thought for the passages of time and urgency and and pace. I read all over and edited grammar.

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r10040 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:07:53 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

To begin the creation of the A.I. Detective the story line has been created. Core I like better than Kernal and Shell may be changed to Persona. I like the idea of the construction as long as it doesn't over whelm the story or convolute the character or ruine the story by losing the reader. Simmple is good.

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r10039 | kalab | 2006-05-20 15:44:59 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor addition with lots of thought. To begin the thought I thought of where to place the thought, where to begin the thought and why the purpose of the thought. The thought is to include the thought Mark thinks when not describing. At the same time of the story he is thinking of an A.I. Detective and constructing and A.I. Detective. How does an A.I. Detective get created. That is something I will need t think of and create. I do know the additional story line could convolute and lose a lot of people, but if done right and if done while trying to actually create a BIOS for an A.I. and a Kernal of self and shell of a persona or character then maybe I can actually create an A.I. Detective. I have the words defined. Kernal, Shell, BIOS, RAM, ROM will all those fun indo European logic loops and syntax and mark.

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r10000 | kalab | 2006-05-20 07:30:09 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Editing chapter four has helped me decided how begin to frame and from not only the thoughts of Dick but also when those thought in narration should be marked and when the should not. I will mark with somantic marks when the thought is of the present, a short-term memory thought. The narrations that is not mark is the long term memory or passive memory or deep memory or what ever words need to be used to define that the memory marked is the memory begin thought not a memory begin remembered or recalled.

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r9999 | kalab | 2006-05-20 06:00:03 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Writing the words to immporve the character thought and narration. The thoughts are sometimes too clear and coherent. The First Cha[ter thoughts, which a lot of the words are need to be less writer writing dialog for a charter which every word possible to define the words. I have the words, I just need to remove some of them.

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r9983 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:28:20 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

I need to consider the way Dick thinks and speaks. Is the voice of though good. Should every thing be a thought. I suppose objective description should not be marked. But these are still thought I have had while writing and editng the words read.

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r9982 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:05:35 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and write of synopsis. It is good I have not read it for sometime for I now where the synopsis becomes a bit lost or could be more to the point. It is long. I should be able to shorten by removing paragraphs.

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r9976 | kalab | 2006-05-19 05:40:28 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read of the synopsis. The words read through. The words read through. The words written to better define and transition the paragraph.

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r9969 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:11:35 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for more of the words to for reason Dick continues. I don't know if there data will be erased or not. i will have to think about it. I think the data will be earsed or thought be erased leaving the reader to decide. Psycho says it erased it.

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r9968 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:00:49 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though more paragraphs and sentences will be written, I believe I have the reason for the subject of recording thoughts is raised and answered by Dick leaving. I have in mind what will get Dick back with out making dick seem like an idiot or a sucker.

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r9964 | kalab | 2006-05-18 05:55:25 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

These words are written because I really want to and need to begin working on this portion of the story because It is now leads to one of the more difficult scenes. Which is actually what I am sort of writing this for, so I can also read and know the words when I write how Psycho convinces Dick to remain on the case.

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r9957 | kalab | 2006-05-17 17:38:05 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts and words and detials to make the scene a scene not a back drop to charater. I suppose I want the scene to be a character and the charater a scene.

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r9939 | kalab | 2006-05-17 06:01:46 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more words. The short story is becoming a book. Content and words are begin written at the end. I have the thought in mind. I will try to remember to write of the Security Room next tehen I will try to remember to write the walk to Larry's Fajitas. There is a paragraph which emotionally expressive and unique and while the words used are used to show emotion (Over Mustang's possible capture) and unique, the way the words are written should be used throughout the entire story. Giveing more character.

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r9920 | kalab | 2006-05-16 18:15:27 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the time before entering the Government Building. More words. Maybe not the words in line to write but they were the ones in mind.

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r9907 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:59:34 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

A quick read of synopsis and quick write and rewrite of words of the CVS log entry to the synopsis to begin and remember to write of.

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r9906 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:54:36 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scnene is coming along. I feel good about the choice to focus on it. The next will be the journey from Always to the Government Building then focus on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. I am happy with the name Psycho as it is an overall good first name for G5 and an easier name to write why it is Psycho for it is Psycho because when Psycho asked the question of name when question found and sought answer to question and once question anwsered Pycho ask the question. What is my name\? And asked the question to all the information using Neuro's actions to define the name and the word Psycho was returned.

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r9905 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:06:58 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

Removing words for the words already exist and will be used on for a different scene if at all.

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r9893 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:08:46 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do like Psycho best to for it was a killing machine which is a psycho as psycho's are defined in pop culture and in some ways medical sience. Psycho came from some where. I think it came from Neuro and of the mind and and other word that is prefix like...

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r9892 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:04:49 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Time ticks and Dick and Richard are saved because the Government doesn't want to kill anyone except Neuro and Dick. I didn't change the name to Pycho which i will do now.

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r9879 | kalab | 2006-05-15 20:45:18 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Those were fun words to write because they are jaded Media, art and every hope of dream of a state I hope never exists. I now need a riddle for the pulp fun of the story.

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r9875 | kalab | 2006-05-15 19:02:09 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The work and the time. The work and the time. The wait in front of the Government building was an unexpected write. It is were I began reading. The read when well and the changes made and additions made were needed and a create change to the words as a whole. I am still wanting to change the name of Neuro to Psycho and think I will after I think of it more.

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r9869 | kalab | 2006-05-15 06:20:25 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The fun to be had with ediitng the words. The words written are the last words read. Some where sometime somehow, I write well and then write with words I do not understand. As the thought continues, I think of maybe changing Neuro's name to Psycho.

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r9868 | kalab | 2006-05-15 05:58:34 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the words to show the fact Dick knows his mind is being read. Read the words and edited when needed. There are some spots when Neuro and Dick talk of God I may remove for it is a bit much in my mind right now. Maybe I will leave in the active version and remove later\?

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r9844 | kalab | 2006-05-14 16:23:30 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

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r9843 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:44:57 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

Edit the quote and changed the mark to the actual dialog Mark after finding the editor eclipse could render a lower dialog mark.

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r9842 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:25:01 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and a few edits. This is going out tonight to -v- and A.

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r9825 | kalab | 2006-05-13 07:16:10 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

The lights in tunnel and how Dick throws the steel latch has inspired lots of thoughts of how to create the lock for the door by using motion and the lights to need to be triggered in an order. There will be 15 of the illuminating cylinder sections of the tunnel that Dick will have to some how find a way to trigger once the odred of how they need to be triggered is detected. The code will probably be on the back of Richards badge in Hex which will be a good way to introduce the story reader to hex for the riddle to enter the U.I.. Then I think: Riddle\? Or puzzle\?

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r9824 | kalab | 2006-05-13 06:18:21 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis.

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r9815 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:28:02 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the thought. The thought grows. The riddle for now a mystery with the cross.

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r9814 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:23:55 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Deeper into the tunnel. I need a way, a key of Richards to get into the door, but what is beyond that. The cross. The cross will open the door. The fact G5 are attacking and Dick needs to go get the cross to enter the secret door. Have Dick get the key and the book.

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r9813 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:45:13 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Just when I think I am done with the synopsis, I read it slowly and I find that some parts probably only make sense to me so I need to explain like fact.

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r9812 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:37:15 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

The thought getting into the scene. Now I can see the room and the tunnel going back. I think it wil lbe a long tunnel. A long tunnel and night more. There is the red button but the red button will close the tap so Neuro and Dick will have a half hour or so to make it to the tap as the G5 attack.

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r9789 | kalab | 2006-05-12 00:16:49 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and wrote the know of Dick having mind read by Government. I read areound reading for the words that says the government will disconnect the line when actually the government can't disconnect the ine for that is the reason for it begin a 24hr secret room of the government.

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r9788 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:42:54 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

I really don't want the comic Dick Tracy to be thought of when reading this. Maybe if Dick was working for the Government and not and a Private Dick but even the I would probably just use Sven with an umlaut. Mustang is good. It is a Hyper-Cognizant bounty hunter name which Mustang has become.

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r9787 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:32:07 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though I am finding it more difficult to want to read, i do believe the writing of the synopsis has been and educational experience. I have never spent this much time with synopsis with other books. figured the meeting was there. And while the meaning is in The Detective Store, This from now on, it is only becoming more meaningful with the creation of the synopsis that I can now further write and find the constaints to write with to complete the thought with words.

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r9778 | kalab | 2006-05-11 17:46:09 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

read, spellchecked, added, removed. Liked what I read. Will probably send to A and Valerie after one more read.

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r9765 | kalab | 2006-05-11 06:04:02 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading some writing. I ended with thought and words of the journey from Always and to K Street. This is what I will wriie now, I have decided, after reading and editing. This is now, what I feel, needs the most work with words.

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r9764 | kalab | 2006-05-11 05:35:43 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words removed and words added. The words added are simple and replication (almost) of words of the same sentence to complete the thought. The words overall read good and as soon as I can complete the synopsis without edit then I will send.

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r9752 | kalab | 2006-05-10 07:01:35 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words in a location inspired by reading the synopsis and the reading and writing of the Secure Government building. I have ways to write words for the scene. I need more of the scene. Too much thinking.

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r9751 | kalab | 2006-05-10 06:39:45 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

Few words. Some edits. More defined with not many new words.

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r9733 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:54:28 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read here and there. Don't know where to start. I think I will write the security room and the journey to the Government Building (as I have wrote before) I read all over just seeing where I am at and these two place are weakest, I feel now, with clearity and words.

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r9732 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:40:40 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor changes, additions, to clarify. The words read well as the Synopsis is nearing the time to be published.

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r9715 | kalab | 2006-05-09 05:56:02 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for another journey to somewhere. The roles caste now they must play out. The mass in Adams Morgan will be metaphor or an allegory of America bars...or something. I still haven't the thought down. I need to think that there is a stop sign and two lights before the mass of the club crowd, which is bigger than when Dick was in office. After the second light the car meets the mass. Maybe the car slowly moving through the mass of people walking and riding bikes is all the meaning the words need.

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r9709 | kalab | 2006-05-08 18:31:26 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

Somre reading and editing. The wriitng of the cab through Adam's Morgan was written after I wrote the Cab trip part where they talked about the Thought Theft. The thought Theft thought while writing as was the cab trip trail through Adams Morgan. I was going to go a different way.

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r9696 | kalab | 2006-05-08 06:10:02 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The words seem to be written with the synopsis. Now I need only find placement and sequence.

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r9695 | kalab | 2006-05-08 05:58:41 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scanning now something valid. The main and really only focus was on the words around the words written. I might look at the pictures this week. I need to find a path to follow Betty from Always. Betty may be with Richard or Eleanor...maybe all four will go to the Secret Government Building.

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r9684 | kalab | 2006-05-07 22:01:31 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Now more of the words of chapter six are becoming one flow. Now next time I can write from where I have been writing for a time. Having realized I am almost complete with chapter six, I have been thinking about which chapter to focus on next. I will probably focus on the chapter of travelling from club Always and following the Betty.

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r9683 | kalab | 2006-05-07 21:38:36 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I was thinking of editing with the thought of sending the words to A and -v- but now that I add more I think I will have one more edit before I send and read again.

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r9639 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:43:19 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I love the thoughts one has when they just sit and stare at the words and read the words. Things like how to beat a government mind scan is a good reason why starring at the words is writing. With writing comes ideas, and ideas come from experience, and while it is not always best to record eperience for reference for later research of a book of words for I believe experience by memory alone is where they purity is at and I am a purist in some respects even though it could be that in the minds of many if many ever read anything I write they will thinking of me not as a purist. Where was I, Oh, yeah, the government brain scan.

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r9638 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:05:32 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More talk with Jo to define the nature of each character and to position Betty to see Neuro off in the distance.

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r9637 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:48:58 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I have thought for some time the desire to Betty and Eleanor arrive and the words of religon persuade Betty to let Eleanor in. I have been thinking about htis change for sometime, the change of changeing Richard to Eleanor. I did the change just to think about the passage more. It is likely that the characters for the role witll change back to original form but I want it to be this wy for now. I do believe I will leave the religious talk in stead of sex talk.

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r9636 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:34:51 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do not know why I had written these words. I must have cut and paste them. I am sure I can find out. The words are good, the ones removed, but misplaced. Why did I put them here (here being where the words were removed)\?

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r9635 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:26:41 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of synopsis. I it must be getting close to being complete for I am becoming tired of reading it over and over.

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r9607 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:35:13 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of a read and an edit for not much was written. The read and read of the synopsis. I believe it is all what it needs to read, and read, and read, and read, and read,

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r9606 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:27:22 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the edit. Some words written. I am lost on where to go and where Dick and Neuro are and and what time it is. These things I need to know so i can write these things now so it adds to the tension later. Write the words on and on. I scanned the words and saw Kaleb Valerie some how tired to steal a scene by reading Dick's dialog.

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r9603 | kalab | 2006-05-06 12:43:20 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk. I need more sit or seeing and discription, which I am thinking may need to be framed. More words anyway. More to come.

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r9570 | kalab | 2006-05-06 03:22:36 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thought than words. The thought begin 'How to fuel Neuro\?' or rather 'How to explain how and why Neuro can be given fuel in the District of Columbia. More thoughts of the walk and how now that the reason is part of the story and not just part of the synopsis.

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r9569 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:58:55 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The last words edited. I read by bring in all the words as eclipse doesn't wrap words. I read the ends of sentences and wrote words that are being lost because of the frame.

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r9568 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:46:23 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some day I may be done, or near the words that I want to give, and give to Valerie and A to read.

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r9563 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:21:57 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading around and thinking. Doing more think and not reading or writing which isn't bad but the thinking is leading away from the words. Mind caught by sun light outside.

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r9562 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:09:11 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Lots of spoken words that need a scene to create an environment for writing. More reason to hurry the fuck up and nano machines. There will be more nano machines which will be described like this one. Nano machines are cool. A was right.

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r9561 | kalab | 2006-05-05 14:35:09 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis. I think it maybe complete soon.

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r9553 | kalab | 2006-05-05 03:41:18 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

The dialog was in the mind and so was the scene but it needs to develope. Trace will at Larry's Fajitas. Trace will nano machines to throw the G5 off his trail as he escapes.

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r9547 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:26:55 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts to words. Thoughts to words. More thoughts to come with those words.

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r9546 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:20:31 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More walk and talk. Maybe that the walk and talk with be about the fact the Government is in Dupont. I do not know if the Government will be in Dupont it was just an idea that may want to work in to the story at that point thereby making the role more intense. Maybe Neuro will throw off the Government with nano machines to throw off the Government and the Capitolists who are on following them after Dupont. Tace escapes we later find.

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r9545 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:14:18 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read. I placed commas.

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r9544 | kalab | 2006-05-04 14:55:10 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and write and edit and read of the synopsis. I will probably send it to A. Thinking of A, after a conversation, he insisted one thing: Have nano machines. I sort of thought of the secret room ( the cube that can create stairs and rooms and doors because of nano machines, but now maybe I am thinking Neuro may have some, and needs some nana machine tools and weapons. The coversation was at Clyde's by what is now the Verizon Center atter he asked be what The Detective Store was about. That coversation also pushed mind to write a synopsis (hence sending it to A even if there are no words sent back). The convesation at Clydes did not last but a couple minutes

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r9528 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:23:47 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit the synopsis. Wrote. The time is running out is probably optional.

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r9527 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:13:59 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The story flows and some new character I have thought of having Dick more in the know of where and what of the K Street Place Secure User Inteface. Dick should know from working with the Virginia security firm and it makes less more in the know of what is going on with G5's and Government. I also thought of the need (and scene) to have (with) Nuero removing the chip in flesh of Richard to inplant into Dick. Dick by then is willing as long as it is clean and doesn't hurt either Richard or Dick.

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r9505 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:56:25 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Given the time, enough words have been written so I will be able to find the flow again and conitnue the conversation of life which will ends soon. I have transferred the images of the walk around Washington, D.C., but have not viewed the images yet. I may if I continue to write 6, which is writing better than I thought it would...so far.

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r9504 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:45:59 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Unexpecting words written for I was going to write at the end but then I remembered I needed to read the words to pick up the dialog after the events just written of. Now I shall try to write more words at the end of the section of 6.

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r9503 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:23:05 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of Synopsis. More words removed. I like the read better without the repetition of point. Less words. Less is more. As I read the words, I see the words as the 'Back' cover.

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r9497 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:16:56 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk and the path of Dick to Larry's Fajitas. I need to read the first of the chapter again so I can remember the conversation.

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r9496 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:05:42 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis edited for better flow and because it needed to reflect the focus of the book on Dick not on Neuro.

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r9495 | kalab | 2006-05-02 18:57:34 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words of the walk I need to think about. Thought on a tangent for a minute after Valerie found a rug we may want to buy. Thoughts returned focused and found written the words and the description of cars and trucks. I thought of doing this type of scene but figure I'd wait. But now I figure why wait. Set the scene for the more of the book.

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r9476 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:55:35 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and images for the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The thoughts are okay and the dialog fitting. I am finding the walk a bit difficult thought not painful. I will try to remember to write this same part again for I have ideas but know the best ideas come when actual words are being written and not just thought of.

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r9475 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:40:21 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The walk along the way. The scene of the capitol. Dick walks along and realizes getting there maybe the hardest part of the job

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r9474 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis edit.

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r9459 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:09:04 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the synopsis.

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r9458 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:03:12 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words, words words words. Fun with the scene and the words. I words more sentences the read and editing the grammar then wrote more sentences. I want to read and edit the synopsis now for I feel I have written too much dialog and need to think of the environment beyond two entities. I also have only an hour or so to write.

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r9457 | kalab | 2006-05-02 02:26:40 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

I wrote a sentence and read and edited. I am wandering with the read and edit and may write in the same word area but may not so I commit. I have thoughts to about the book but I am not having them now and won't wait just go back to reading and writing and editing.

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r9421 | kalab | 2006-05-01 03:11:14 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more corrections. The words I believe will further better the story. The words are writen but not all are there. I need more detail of the alley and then the gliding scene. I am a littlworried because I may know the location I need to have Dick and Neuro glide to but I am not sure on the best route there. It is the one location I did not walk for there was rain and I suppose this sort of mystery in the search of the location is part of Detecting a story.

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r9420 | kalab | 2006-05-01 02:54:55 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read and edited grammar ending where I began to write. The words written are words written for what has seemed to become a theme, a story, of the section/chapter.

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r9409 | kalab | 2006-04-30 10:03:43 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More time spent talking with Travis and Mary and Valerie. The words written soon after time began. Now I will commit file and move on with words.

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r9396 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:04:59 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some reading and grammar editing. Brain flow slow so I will switch words. Need to think about what I want to write and will begin with next write session. What I want to write is Benjamin in drag. I may also look at the pictures for they are downloaded. If I do look at them I will note them as time reading The Detective Store.

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r9395 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:01:06 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I began to think of this as I wrote the last data commited. I think Benjamin will be in drag, too.

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r9394 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:53:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The chair description is almost there. It could be complete but I won't think complete until it is read again. I should note the clean nature of the chairs. I will leaving it for now and see what my mind remembers. it remembers the words just written and the dialog to begin the talk between Benjamin and Dick.

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r9393 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:39:38 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words to define the object. The desk is another point of past and present reference. I need to actually think about the conversation that will take place after Dick is sitting in the chair at the desk.

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r9392 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:21:40 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The weather will become hot and steamy before they enter building. The rain is working out well. Good idea, I must say even though it is mine so I should not be the one saying what it is. Or should I\? Yes, I suppose I should. I should be writing about the book. The book that now has only more, slight discription which is needed. I do wish I had walked around K Street while in D.C. this time last week. I want to write of club Always.

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r9391 | kalab | 2006-04-30 03:54:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar and read. Quick reads looking for grammar needs and stories and subject to continue through the story. I enjoyed what I read but I realize I will need to scene to detect and inspect.

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r9378 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:39:56 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Great idea the weather has become. While at first it was to show Global Warming and unstable environments now it will allow Neuro act out forgiveness and offer a minor protection to get away with lying or begin a nascent being for Neuro is a nascent being and doesn't know any better than to record all data against the will.

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r9377 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:27:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read to where I am at. The thought of completing the interaction with Benjiman Franklin. Funwords and a fun character to write. I still cant think of all the dialog but I imagine the dialog will be short.

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r9376 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:08:23 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The temperature and environment while Valerie was kissing me. I had to say it for the half the time spent was me being rubbed and kisssed. I wanted to stop and have sex but she is going to make me wait unilt later. Anyway, I just need to say that I am horny. It does not reflect the words of this book in anyway. The temperature.

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r9375 | kalab | 2006-04-29 13:48:14 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The edit and flow feels better now. The synopsis, the back fo the book.

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r9343 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:43:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words and thoughts of the walk. I can't remember how many block it is from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle. I am thinking two, but it could be three or four. I will need the pictures. If more blocks then more words will be written.

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r9342 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:01:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More writing. The thoughts of the area and the read and edit of leving Trace's apartment. The change of the name of Yasser for I read in the news this week or last that I want to spell it Yasir. Trying to see from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle.

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r9341 | kalab | 2006-04-29 03:38:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and writing the words of the dialog. The dialog is almost there. I need the sights of the pictures. I think I will download today and maybe use them for more words. I have thoughts of dialog and thoughts of this that for the sections where I wrote dialog. Everything else is fine in mind. The image in mind alone will finish the novel. The image I have yet to see will proved the setting.

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r9337 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:09:46 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar edit.

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r9336 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:02:03 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

And edit then write with frist dialog of Trace and Dick. The then an edit and read of next section. Read and read. Words where confusing where I edited last.

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r9335 | kalab | 2006-04-28 15:43:15 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

here are the words now. One read and edit of all the Elevator talk. The synopsis.

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r9324 | kalab | 2006-04-28 03:09:42 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I think, if possible, I will have the cap drive Kalormama to get to Always. I believe it to be possible, I have images but I have yet to look at them.

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r9323 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:54:26 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I randomly stopped and read and trying to edit grammar and added some words.

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r9322 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:35:34 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I read and started writing. I edited the grammar. Something I can reason now with and without the comma. I think of the words and have nothing to add or thoughts to include.

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r9314 | kalab | 2006-04-27 15:20:21 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

REad and edited and wrote. I like the word changes. The short term memory use was likely from something heard on the radio today while at work. It cam from some where and then the page for I was going to use then thought I should be more creative.

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r9305 | kalab | 2006-04-27 03:03:13 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The cab rides are always and the rides of cabs when in D.C. have helped me write. This is something I do not have pictures of. I just rode by myself but observed and thought what it is to be in a cab.

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r9304 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:45:34 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Of the walk but with no streets. The time of then is now. Walking and seeing the area. More action is needed. The dialog edited and may need to be edited more. I don't know yet if editing is need but will know next read. Next write will be after Larry's Fajitas.

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r9303 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:34:04 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk before I look at pictures. I am thinking of the walk from the circle to Larry's Fajitas but the thought just isn't there because when I walked the route I was luck I found it without needing to back track.

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r9297 | kalab | 2006-04-26 19:01:06 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The Synopsis sent to A. Edit and wrote before sending it.

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r9291 | kalab | 2006-04-26 18:16:00 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Random reads and edits. Some sentences of the ....

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r9290 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:54:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

A thought of the walk across the bridge. Sounds sites. Now for the other where ever the other maybe I am sure there will be a few more words once I actually look at the pictures again. We shall see and we write.

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r9289 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:37:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read the synopsis. Will read and edit by sent to A. Read the first of the chapter a bit with thoughts. May read more.

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r9284 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:15:28 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some thought but not much. Thinking of sleep right now.

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r9283 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:08:35 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More detials of the walk. The thought and the knowledge of the path is helping give the book some more definition and Dick some more character.

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r9282 | kalab | 2006-04-26 02:50:53 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts from the walk around D.C. that are now words on the page. I need to see the pictures for the streets, but I can now move on and thinking...

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r9267 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:39:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words of the walk. The grammar edit. I need to think of the embassy row walk.

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r9266 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:17:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The walk arcross the bridge as I remember the walk this last Saturday. I believe I have enough down to be able to write even more when I see the pictures I took which I will probably do in a month or two or three or when ever I am in need of inspiration.

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r9265 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:01:46 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Edited the synopsis for clarity and read the first for flow for I wish to (as you will should know) want to hjave Valerie read it soon.

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r9255 | kalab | 2006-04-25 03:22:12 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

A thought of K Street which I did not walk to for there was a time delay so the thoughts are of where I remember K street to be at, but I could be wrong. Thankfully, I only wrote the words to definetthe wide side walks of D.C.. The buzz of water pumps may change if the K Street I know and love is not really where I think it is located, which is by the Watergate/Kennedy Center exit off Whitehurst Freeway.

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r9254 | kalab | 2006-04-25 03:10:50 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The elevator version, a synopsis. I did read a bit of the story after most the synopsis was written. More may be added but these words will withhold the need and desire to begin a synopsis after A asked me for the elevator talk version of the book at Clydes while we where having our first Bloody Mary. I said I was to deep into writing and hadn't though about it but after the talk I did.

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r9248 | kalab | 2006-04-24 19:20:47 -0700 (Mon, 24 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit for the words of the beginning o