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r21618 | kalab | 2007-09-15 23:15:29 -0700 (Sat, 15 Sep 2007) | 1 line

...The words are. I read from the middle near where I last stopped the read and edit and read and edited to the end. I only need to change a few sentences for verbs. One sentence need a complete rewrite, but that wasn't too difficult. One most the fixes to sentences were completed by me removing words. The words were to much at time and by removing htem more was found. I did find some confusion as Dick was near the building. There was a lot of displacement of Dick, which was fixed by deleting words. The thought I did like and I like the dialog the meaning both hidden and obvious. The words are and now Dick is in a position because he his the type, like us all, to be lead somewhere by media the later regret the choice and even though we may protest we still do what we are told. Our form of civil disobedience not really disobedient. Dick is trapped, but wanting to live makes death a difficult if not impossible if Dick is not entering because he wants to. Maybe he is. Maybe...

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r21610 | kalab | 2007-09-15 16:55:21 -0700 (Sat, 15 Sep 2007) | 1 line

The previous log was not for this file put for the previous file but while writing out the log on command line I typed 1011 and not 1010, so disregard log entry 21607. The change I did make to the words for the changes committed for 21607 was a change to remove the letter e from the word apartement to have the word correctly spelled apartment. I the paused to read the beginning again and read the first and remember that the previous chapter ended with an action of Dick. And then I thought it should not, so I changed it and wanted to commit and did then I moved one to editing 1011. ...I editing 1011 beginning with the beginning and read and edit to the nearing of the K Street building. There were more than a few sentences needing to be reordered for the record to read. Some sentences need verbs. Some paragraphs needed sentences removed because the words were just not need or really bad and therefore not needed. I read more of the story and focus a lot on the reasoning of Dick and what make and convinces him to pivot and go into the K Street building. He goes because it is the only choice he is given for life. ...Or is it\? There is enough information before and after for the reader to define to self. I read and believe I can begin where I left off for the remaining edits will be few and the thought and edit of the push to get Dick inside logic and within character.

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r21607 | kalab | 2007-09-15 15:51:31 -0700 (Sat, 15 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I removed the last line because I now realize it conflicts with the beginning line of the story by not conforming how the record is formed. The rules are broke by it. And I don't think it is needed, so there is more reason to remove the line.

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r21579 | kalab | 2007-09-13 23:52:26 -0700 (Thu, 13 Sep 2007) | 1 line

A read of words to insure the followed the flow desired at the beginning and they do. I did make a few minor changes to etter define the area where dick is at. I wanted to add more symbolism to the pole that dick first is aware of. ...The story continues.

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r20815 | kalab | 2007-08-04 08:50:29 -0700 (Sat, 04 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I read the chapter. I did need to write some words to better define and show. I removed words because they only convoluted the story. What remains is a chapter. I think it has an slmost complete feel. I did read and hopefully framed the long thought and show the rage building up in Dick to become enraged. The words to flow. Somewhere they do flow.

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r20808 | kalab | 2007-08-03 05:50:30 -0700 (Fri, 03 Aug 2007) | 1 line

After reading the beginning and the chapter and read of the thought where Dick is telling Psyhco of the reality of the test no matter the reality. Some of the worfds removed for they were not needed and removing them made the story more. The words I did like and now I am not too worried about the edit of the chapter. I think it will take only a couple of day to edit. The words and flow and idea seems to exist. The only change will be, I think the next chapter.

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r18790 | kalab | 2007-04-24 05:54:05 -0700 (Tue, 24 Apr 2007) | 1 line

The words are there. From beginning to end the words were read. The words do now read. There was a need (needs) to edit the words to better create the voice of the character. I read slow and I read fast. I edited my sentences. I add some words to define the character say or thinking the thoughts. The words do flow better now than they did before. I am finding all those little mistakes I make. As with all the edits of this cycle, I used the program TextEdit. The program helps me see the words better than the terminal which I may change to get a better font and size and color to see the words. I use the terminal more than textedit to edit. ...Anyway. The story continues to the next chapter.

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r18775 | kalab | 2007-04-23 05:57:48 -0700 (Mon, 23 Apr 2007) | 1 line

The read to the look at how to enter the K Street building. Some words searched and replace so they are a common form. A few punctuation mark errrors. Slow reading and think. Too slow. I will likely begin reading again at the first next read. I like what I read. The thought is there. The dialog is confused, so is the thought. As confused as Dick can be in a situation like the one he exists. The thought finding the reality that no matter teh reality Dick must discover a way to avoid harming those who need not be harmed.

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r18762 | kalab | 2007-04-22 14:11:33 -0700 (Sun, 22 Apr 2007) | 1 line

The words that begin the chapter should begin the chapter. I read from the beginning to the last edit which wasn't too many lines of words. I wanted to read on, but there are many other things to read. I need to lose the focus to read if there is interest in the chapter only.

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r17984 | kalab | 2007-03-17 13:29:28 -0700 (Sat, 17 Mar 2007) | 1 line

This is a very good warning for entry. Fun. I wanted to end with something other than the thought of Dick. This warning, I think, will be read between the lines that will exists. Less is more. Show is more often than not better than tell. I do want to tell, so I write these words. ...I may change Move Away, but it has its roots that they are thewords there were written. These words also have some layer to show the gentrification of Washington, D.C.. The thoughts of the words. They were written then copied then pasted and erased to show pace and increase of action and timing. I think I have the words writtten to show the speeding and slowing of time yet an even logical pace. The focus slows time. ...Thoughts for another focus of writing. The words read. I didn't begin anywhere near the top reading. I read and I think I had an edit that line.

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r17974 | kalab | 2007-03-17 08:29:41 -0700 (Sat, 17 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read to the end. I removed a paragraph of dialog for it needed to be close to the question for the real flow. I removed words that were jumbled messes of sentences. I wrote words to replace some of the words deleted. I may a few more paragraphs to better define the flow record and the recording to define the state of... ...I have read to the end. Now I will read the beginning of the next chapter and read the mind to edit the end of this chapter.

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r17971 | kalab | 2007-03-16 22:43:34 -0700 (Fri, 16 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read and edited. Removing more words was needed. There were the sentences that where just wrong. The words that did not need to be. Words were read. I didn't read anything new tonight. I hope tomorrow's first write will be will words not yet read. The words read I like. The words I didn't like were for the most part removed.

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r17962 | kalab | 2007-03-16 05:55:37 -0700 (Fri, 16 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The read and the write was good. I began walk walking to the place to pause and to the white light. The end of the read and edit is the last place edited. ...I like the words for today and as I read them today. The removing of words I have done during the past days has removed words that were just not needed. Without the words, the descriptions and progresssion of the story is, to me, better. Those other sentences could not be worked during the edit process, so they used the edit process delete or remove. I don't have a standard name to call the process yet. The though of Dick flow because his mind is primed to think like a Detective. An internal dialog honed to convay in the record a fluent and readable account and use mind to work for Dick, but also convolute the acts and speach with thought that is fluid. Dick is smart, very smart, but sometime thinks in his own mind too much becaue he has to because it's his job. He needs to be clear of thought to create a good A.I. Detective. The thought should not fault, the talk should. But there is not conversation, but with Psycho. Dick is now in his mind more than feeling part of the reality once he begins to live in his own mind uncertian of where the body is.

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r17959 | kalab | 2007-03-15 22:12:44 -0700 (Thu, 15 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from a couple of paragraphs before the first edit and read to the last edit. Not much focused. There were some words remove because the words were not needed and crazy not logical or thought with flow. Jumbled crap I think I wrote this week. I was able to delete words and found the words that were needed and wanted. The story does flow. My mind now too tired to finish.

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r17951 | kalab | 2007-03-15 17:42:44 -0700 (Thu, 15 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I want to simply the journy of dick. The description was too much, so I deleted a lot of abstract showing/telling description. I removed the jacket because the jacket is gone. This chapter will take more time. I hope by the weekend to be through it for I assume the remaining chapters are in similar states for they were written quick and the words have not had much editing. ...I think. I can't remember.

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r17943 | kalab | 2007-03-15 06:00:52 -0700 (Thu, 15 Mar 2007) | 1 line

What read from top quick. I found some errors and edited. I read after the walk back. The focus of words to find the right thought. There were words removed because they had not place or need for the story. The words almost read to be of a different story. I actually found during edit reference. Sentences needed to be removed for the dialog was bad. Most the dialog was bad. It is getting better. This part of the chapter doesn't feel as refined as other chapters. The beginning of the chapter I like. And I think I will like this part of the chapter more after I read to edit again. There is a flow becoming, but the record hasn't been transcribed. It will be. The next edit I plan on reading the words to and upon the corner. I will find the street and continue with the edit.

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r17930 | kalab | 2007-03-14 06:09:19 -0700 (Wed, 14 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The story is getting closer to Richard and Betty. I began the read with a quick read, a very quick read, from top to the description of building. It is a description that is detailed to show a focused yet abstract mind lost in the thought of causing a death and the death of one loved. The words from the corner were the words I focused upon. I wrote more thought to show Dick is focused again, but with a more determined purpose of hoping to help save his mom and dad. Mustang must be thought of... The thought of probability of it being all in Dick's mind (through psych injections or psyh cap or an puppet and staging of an event. The flow of words does seem to fall like rain. The words and thought pouring. I read close to Richard and Betty coming to the K Street building. ...I edit some sentences becaue they just did flow will with the words of the book. The words were too much for Psycho knows the rules, The recording device too. And Dick thinks and speak to make big thoughts with logical thought.

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r17921 | kalab | 2007-03-13 21:43:00 -0700 (Tue, 13 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read to the description of the buildings and focused most on the events before and after Dick turning to walk toward the white light. I thought of the need to maybe remove all time. I may. I may not. I don't want this to be about time, but I feel it needs to be in the story. I will think of the time timed after midnight. I like the idea of no time after midnight. I read the words after the turn to return, and I do like them but will read them again. I removed words that were not needed for they were of a flow that was uncertian of carrying anything to the end of the chapter or the book. What I read I like. The description I believe to be set. There is no more need to write many words. I do need to edit. I will begin with the turn again tomorrow when the mind is fresh.

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r17914 | kalab | 2007-03-13 17:55:49 -0700 (Tue, 13 Mar 2007) | 1 line

With the move of the words that needed to be move because they fit better after the stop of Mustang from walking. I like the move for the deep thought is had when it is not needed to focus on everything in a changing envorinment. The fact he stops to focus to gather thoughts. To slow down the action to think. Too much information. The read from the first I like. I may need to add a few more words to get the best flow of action, dialog, and thought, but I do believe most the words and space are there to complete the beginning of the chapter. The scene I think will read better with the stop of the curb. The thought. The sump pumps.

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r17906 | kalab | 2007-03-13 06:02:01 -0700 (Tue, 13 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read and edited and wrote the beginning of the chapter to find the place and write the flow from and to K Steet. I have out now the thoughts of Dick to show and tell motivation right now because Dick's mind is going very fast with thought of Murder in an unknown reality or reality. Every possible metaphore is hoped to be in the words of description. Iti is simple for the memory, but complex in the depth. I will likely read the first of the chapter again to feel the flow of the words as I read beyond Dick's turn around to walk to the white light and the reason why. The reason why is better. The flow and thought I think are where they should be...Or how they should be. When the should be.

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r17901 | kalab | 2007-03-12 21:24:19 -0700 (Mon, 12 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The hyphen of beginning dialog mark has been replace for the words. Nothing has been read. The only edit was the search and replace of the grammar mark, so I may edit while reading.

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r16682 | kalab | 2007-01-21 14:38:03 -0800 (Sun, 21 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The read through at the edits. No many words removed. There does need to be a removal of space for there are in somplaces too much space. There will be paragraphs of some of the action of dialog that are of a subject of action and time. The words and the chapter for now I think are in a state that with ease I will be able to complete. I will now read the next chapter and read the chapter to begin to complete The edit of The Detective Store with the write and the read.

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r16669 | kalab | 2007-01-21 08:18:32 -0800 (Sun, 21 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The words read to find the thought. The thought of the thought deep. I think I have some thought flow to write with but will only know when these words are read again. I think after two more reads I will be reading, writing, editing, publishing the words of the next chapter. The words have enough flow to be near completion. I probably have several more sentences to remove and paragraphs to edit by removing, but most of the words are the words to be written, and the words needed to complete the words. More seelog is needed for Dick is think. The thoughts of death of Dick of character and now I am beginning to see the thoughts of Dick.

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r16658 | kalab | 2007-01-21 05:55:16 -0800 (Sun, 21 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The read and the write then the read and the edit. More words removed, so more can be defined and a path the end choosen. The processes of edit needed to remover and write the words to move the story along. I wrote the meeting of Dick and Richard and Betty three times and the last wrote is the one that will remain. More words removed because they because telling when it will be shown. It will be shown now.

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r16646 | kalab | 2007-01-20 15:55:00 -0800 (Sat, 20 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The removal of words that are too much detail and dialog that doens't read to be real or something talked about. The telling and not showing. The chapter is still longer than I thought it would be. I think its current length. The writing in the chapter not too bad. I think there will be more dialog, but not much more than exsists. The action what it should be. The was may be com paragraphs for some of the conversation of a topic or subject in this chapter. I do think now it would best to write the amound of words is what should be of this chapter, the current amount of words.

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r16631 | kalab | 2007-01-20 12:05:30 -0800 (Sat, 20 Jan 2007) | 1 line

I read real fast the words written. I scanned the length. There are more words than I thought. I will be removing many. ...Maybe. The time for Richard and Betty arriving willl need to be thoughts. The words are liable to all change.

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r15598 | kalab | 2006-12-14 22:55:23 -0800 (Thu, 14 Dec 2006) | 1 line

A thought of the thought alarm. More description in words before with words before may be needed. This thought here and now are words that will remain, but likely through edits. Another thought and words to write on the remaining chapters.

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r13872 | kalab | 2006-10-05 18:33:26 -0700 (Thu, 05 Oct 2006) | 1 line

An edit of the seelog to make the sentene more thought like focused on something other than grammar. The thought of maybe moving the instance of when this occurs to sometime earlier in the story when there is more of lull.

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r13871 | kalab | 2006-10-05 18:30:19 -0700 (Thu, 05 Oct 2006) | 1 line

Write of thought thought while reading the news. The addition of the question of suppression. While writing I thought of the thought of the writing the fall of Dick in the stair shaft. During the write of the words I realized I need to edit all the seelog needs to be editing for thinking and seeing. Seeing being explained as when Dick thinking thought while focusing thought to Psycho.

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r13709 | kalab | 2006-09-29 23:31:16 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The remaining thought. The subsidy remark may confuse in future. I hope I allow it to remain. The site removed was removed because it was too obvious.

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r13708 | kalab | 2006-09-29 23:22:09 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

I have actually thought of the meaning of the slave and while it was once slave labor it will change for that has been displayed and shown the entire book with teh people pulling carts for people after the animals have all died for they can not be sustained. The humans need to further represent forms of control like slavery and after hearing of a U.S. Congressman soliciting sex with a Congress Page to a Congress Page I can help put add the Page in to the story for it is a pair of government contractors, but even the government helps out the capitalists to be capitalist for they are capitalists. Should Dick think it\?

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r13707 | kalab | 2006-09-29 23:12:25 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The read and edit of the beginning. The thought of when Dick tells Mustang at club to not go back to apartment. The thought added adds a denial calm that will build and release to a rage.

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r13685 | kalab | 2006-09-29 19:22:47 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The thoughts of Dick and the questions for Psycho to answer in one rage of spat of questions of why there isn't anyone around Psycho exept him now.

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r13684 | kalab | 2006-09-29 19:15:07 -0700 (Fri, 29 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The first sentence edited to fit the need of the flow. The first needs to be read and edited and written. Thoughts of the G43 and their arrival. For Chapter 1010 I believe there will be dots seen through Psycho's sight. The dots will be told to be G43. They goggles even zoom to see G43, but could be an illusion. The thought of the big drill was in mind, but that is next chapter. The Big Drill maybe be removed. I think Dick will finally believe they are G43 after the break they break the glass and enter the S.S. Building as Dick runs into Tube. I believe only G43 are needed. The Question will arise this chapter why Betty and Richard are not informed. Because they are bate and sinful people and therefore expendable. Richad and Betty are sent to still convince Dick and Psycho that there is no trap.

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r13241 | kalab | 2006-09-12 06:00:08 -0700 (Tue, 12 Sep 2006) | 1 line

After thinking. And after realizing what has already been written and what story lines exist, I decided that having Mustang die the way he now dies will not only justify killing a character, but also detail and already complete story line. While Mustang and how Mustang dies improves the story for it adds more dimension, I believe the drive for Dick to enter the S.S. building of K Street will be both of the wonder if Mustang survived the Entrropy Tap and the need discover what survived and the need to detect and find if mom and data are alive.

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r13169 | kalab | 2006-09-10 15:42:01 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The edit of chapter name from Hex to Binary. Binary is the state of the World.

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r13137 | kalab | 2006-09-10 08:35:52 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Edit to begin to rewrite the subject of the rage. Thoughts of how to best change what was one of the main plot points betrayal will set be a sub thought, subject, of the story. The thought of changing the chapter names to binary is probable ot bettter define the binary reality of U.S. Government. The change of chapter is likely for I have done it in the mind, but I will wait to change all the files names after I write it in the Synopsis and wait at least a couple of hours.

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r13135 | kalab | 2006-09-10 08:10:08 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Having the reason Dick gets upset and experiences the emotion of departure for he no longer feels bound to think of himselfs and then comes to feel to just not think of others to find information if Mustang, Mom and Dad are alive, or a reason, if caught, to further show he is innocent and forced to enter the S.S. building to find the truth, or maybe free self of the system or maybe create 'terror'.

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r13123 | kalab | 2006-09-09 12:17:19 -0700 (Sat, 09 Sep 2006) | 1 line

A slow write because of the thought that will be needed to write this transistion and this scene. The death of Mustang efffecting Dick is difficult to define. The how-to-give-convincing-enough-evidence-for-Dick-to-go-into-the-building reason may make this to fucking pulp like. The idea of giving the feeling and thoughts is just something to convince the reader that Dick has a moral reason for not caring anymore. It is assumed that who killed Dick is the Government or a Capitalist, but it could be Psycho who killed Mustang, or it could be a lie and Mustang could be a lie. The effects of Psycho's proof will convince Dick to go in with skepticism and the thought that in the S.S. Building Dick may be able to find the truth. Dick only finds that the truth does exist within, but only a version of truth.

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r13117 | kalab | 2006-09-08 18:03:47 -0700 (Fri, 08 Sep 2006) | 1 line

So, in thinking while I have been writing this seession of what to do with Mustang to invoke a logic reaction that would provoke Dick to enter the S.S. building without seeming like a villian. While this will drasitcally alter what was going to be the survival of Mustang will now be the death of Mustang (maybe) because now the Government wsill be able to see and say that Mustang is alive if the story is to get that complex. One of the additional reasons for killing Mustang is to show how the death of a loved one can pull one into the binary world of right and wrong. This death of Mustang will make it even more 'evil' to think that when Psycho is turned back on and accuses Dick of setting up the situation to get inside, to plant the seed of doubt of Dick's motives, will, could, make Dick seem more evil than he did prior allowing the reader to choose their own oaftermath after Dick completes the job by trying to tap the system and create an A.I. Detective.

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r13112 | kalab | 2006-09-08 06:20:58 -0700 (Fri, 08 Sep 2006) | 1 line

More words and dialog and editing to create doubt while creating reason and proof enough for Dick to know there exists enough information to be returning for many reasons now like life and saving Mustang, and seeing the inside of the S.S. K Street building, tapping the entropy tap, helping Psycho, trapping Psycho, All these ideas may yet to be defined. The words written were mainly to further define a way one who loves someone would react, under control, after learning of their lovers detainment, which would be caused by the lover (Dick). The reaction still needs editing.

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r13105 | kalab | 2006-09-07 18:31:30 -0700 (Thu, 07 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The words are an attempt to ease the frustration of Dick and reverse the course and the walk of Dick slowly as to not make it seem like Dick is stooge or like Dick is just manipulating system.

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r13104 | kalab | 2006-09-07 18:10:32 -0700 (Thu, 07 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The seelog and dialog becoming. The rage of dick shown. The scene with more description becomes a character. More showing. The reason of Dick leaving needs to be built up in the other chapters. I need to write more of it from the P Street Apartment to Larry's Fajitas about Dick being mad about the mind reading. The question of recording is almost approached, but is cut short with thought and with the arrival at Larry's Fajitas. I do want to leave open the thought of maybe Dick knows all this and this is an act and a way to act within a system that records everything and Dick knows it and therefore thinks and thinks up one story of facts of his life recording it over and over and over to lay a base for Dick to be able to act as if innocent while going through the thought of how to complete the case and not let the Capitalists or the Government know.

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r13093 | kalab | 2006-09-06 21:13:51 -0700 (Wed, 06 Sep 2006) | 1 line

More read and read and edited and thought. Some writing. The words to shift the scene and clear the rain, the flood of the metaphor. I had thought while writing about how the 'Great Flood' and the stories of Noah could have been created by Natural Global Warming if possible for I am not that educated on if a hyper warming can be caused by anything, by CO2s and farts. The thoughts of BeltWay wall, but didn't think long of it. The thought of it was the though of it and how it would work. Then I realized ...I was lostin thought. words anda thought do read okay. I am thinking maybe there is too much talk and seeing.

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r13092 | kalab | 2006-09-06 20:30:43 -0700 (Wed, 06 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Reading and editing. The paragraph was separated because the building should be separate from the warm rain to allow the reader to focus on both. The change is seelog and dialog and to try to make both thought and speak natural. The seelog needs to be further refined for some of it reads to be too distant from thought even for someone who needs to speak with internal dialog a lot to reasonn and create constructs to help reason without speaking ot anohter and the need to create A.I. Detectives with internal dialog.

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r13077 | kalab | 2006-09-06 05:59:32 -0700 (Wed, 06 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Much removed. The read read. Some things thought to be removed. The thought of Mustang should be more to the point, but I need to read it fresh to read it and know if what I think now is something beyond a desire to delete, so I can rewrite.

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r13076 | kalab | 2006-09-06 05:49:35 -0700 (Wed, 06 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Read and removal of words that should have been removed several revisions ago. Too much dialog still. I will need to edit it. The story and frame of the chapter Too much dialog. I look up at the shell and see the last words and I see not enough seeing. I think I will also be aware of the need to begin to improve Pscyho's seeing because of now begin able to read to the human mind. Psycho shouldl, I think, for humor, be able to see to dogs and birds at first. this could be shown with chapter 4 or 6 ...I think it is four and six. To P street. From P street.

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r13055 | kalab | 2006-09-05 05:35:20 -0700 (Tue, 05 Sep 2006) | 1 line

To better frame the chapter for publication, the words are moved. I hope this will also allow for the story to flow in such a way to begin action of a reader reading only C. Or the end of B.

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r13026 | kalab | 2006-09-04 16:16:44 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

A quick read of the words to find what exists of the chapter. What was read was liked. Some of what was read was out oof place and will need to be edited in the future.. The dialog changed to see long then condensed is better fitted now then it was before the change.

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r13025 | kalab | 2006-09-04 16:07:24 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The dialog read better for the words written. The flow seems to fit the mood and pace. The description added to the Fuck you further define fuck you with another metaphor or analogy or what ever the end result will read as. The play between what is said or seen seems to be fitting and defining.

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r13024 | kalab | 2006-09-04 15:47:18 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Some thoughts of the scene to be and these seen to be seen. The writing was of the writing thought during the past few hours here and there while living life. The idea is a version of the description of Always to keep the description uniform. The rewrite of seelog and dialog...how about thoughtlog and dialog\?...changed because the flow is still rough and needs to be more focused to continue to the end. I need to read and maybe write the end of Chapter A again. Maybe one more read write later so I can focus on the middle of B as if it were a symphony\?

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r12995 | kalab | 2006-09-04 08:24:02 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

Some ideas to add to the chapter the words need for the story to begin to take away from the chpater words written, but are too many for the scene.

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r12993 | kalab | 2006-09-04 08:19:12 -0700 (Mon, 04 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The beginning of of chapter reads like words that should be written. Some adjusts, edits, with be in the future. The first needs to be edited against Chapter A. The dialog between Pshyco and Dick may be too much. There does need to be more description of the surrounding area to define the solid stone buildings.

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r11895 | kalab | 2006-08-06 12:08:03 -0700 (Sun, 06 Aug 2006) | 1 line

More reading and editing trying to write the voice of Psycho. I think I have it, but now I need only use it and read and edit those words of Psycho so Psycho can speak like Psycho.

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r11732 | kalab | 2006-07-31 05:46:52 -0700 (Mon, 31 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Words read and some wrote. Those removed no longer were words of the current story.

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r11719 | kalab | 2006-07-30 20:27:37 -0700 (Sun, 30 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Reading and editing to read and edit the rerun words. The space and merging the gap. The street names and direction need to be added his chapter and all the chapters. I want to and every new street and direction once there is change between one of the N NW W SW S SE E NE.

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r11717 | kalab | 2006-07-30 20:12:08 -0700 (Sun, 30 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The read and the write and the edit. I read then wrote then read then editing in the order the words are ordered. The words written I hope to have and character. There may still be too many words and there may need to be more thought found through out the passage. I hope for the passage and transition of anger to be so instant. But for reason I want to have the instant of anger become instant of concern for own self preservation of the now and not the later.

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r11388 | kalab | 2006-07-18 06:00:40 -0700 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The movement moves along. More action and words. to create the scene as it is and not how it was. The alley now the dark city streets because there is only enough energy to light K Street.

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r11298 | kalab | 2006-07-14 18:46:59 -0700 (Fri, 14 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Reading and writing. The words are becoming complete. The thoughts becomeing something more than just words. Ideas of the sump pump are something that will add to the use of sub pumps and other water control devices. Need more light and some more trash. A bridge or two if crossed could be almost falling down (except the Duke Elligton Bridge and maybe not ther other that goes for Calvert to Du pont... I suppose I should log some where th remeber thought of needing to commit the image of the walk to time the walk of Dick and image and name the streets and path into Word ProstituteTM DepotTM. Word ProstituteTM is still thinking of where to commit the files.. the photos.

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r11205 | kalab | 2006-07-11 05:56:17 -0700 (Tue, 11 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Story line to be kept. The seeing to and the recording of Dick, who Psycho is recording to create, or so Psycho informs Dick. Dick wants to beleive Psycho because Dick still wants to, as a Detective and an A.I. Detective, wants to see the technology and the creation. Dick is honest with Psycho for Dick convinces himself Psycho is being honest with him, so Dick tell Pyscho the Artistic Intellingence are best create with Artistic Intelligence can create a good A.I. Detective. A copy can create an A.I. Detective, but not a very good one.

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r11056 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:34:28 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The files of the chapters of the detective store forked from mail file and edited to contain only the words for the chapter so more words maybe written and honed and focused (read, written, editted, published) to complete the story and create a book.

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r11051 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:03:56 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

A split in the stream of story. The story of creation. The Detective Store is told and shown. B a part of F of F chapters of The Detective Store. Follow the trail and the creation of data for your own way.

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r11037 | kalab | 2006-07-07 18:20:09 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

More thoughts of framing the frame from thoughts of the day. I also decided it should be may and that I need to branch the file now.

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r11030 | kalab | 2006-07-07 06:12:12 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Read and edit. Edit and read. Read and edit. The thought and the comprehension of the first words reading like words of a book. The files need to be split and moved to Words. If my head was not so distant and numb with alcohol, I would have have branched this file today. There is tomorrow.

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r10968 | kalab | 2006-07-02 20:54:59 -0700 (Sun, 02 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Thoughs had about an hour ago while walking up an incline. I noticed when I focused on the horizon the back ground sort of bouced as did the foreground. There is of course the metaphoric qualities of the sentence. The sentence was written last after reading and wrijting read for the location to write the sentnece. I need to branch the file, or fork the file, Maybe I will do that tomorrow. It is gettin gbig and difficult to manage, and find a focus.

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r10920 | kalab | 2006-06-30 05:45:36 -0700 (Fri, 30 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The question of Government wanting to have Dick put head in the Entropy Bowl is something I have written about and thought about and given some ofthe purposes of the writing, to learn, express and provoke, liberty to add in ideas and questions in the story form. I thought after writing the words at the end of the story and thought about how to write the turning back on of Psycho after Psycho has been fueled. More thoughts here and there but reading and writing began at the top fo the page, then I had an idea for for thoughtlog or seelog (not dialog) at the end of the story to reason why Dick resons to stick head in bowl.

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r10907 | kalab | 2006-06-29 20:52:38 -0700 (Thu, 29 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Reading, writing and editing. The words are actually writing where they need to be written. The addition of why The Story begins were it does is because Dick says United States of America and that is one of the keywords used to begin the reading and recording of Dick's mind Of course, because the Government is reading and recording it does not mean they are listening.

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r10899 | kalab | 2006-06-28 23:00:35 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The thoughts still need to be more smoooth in the flow I read prior, chapter 3. The actions to test the make of A.I. is what will be. Fun thoughts. The thought after 2 need to be refined, as do the rest of the thoughts.

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r10889 | kalab | 2006-06-28 18:20:45 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Thoughts of how to make Dick more of a motive of how and why he hides the thought. Does he just hide it because he can\? Just a thought I have been having about the motive of Dick wanting to access...Or maybe not so much the motive put how to hide the desire. Does he purposuly slipt and think at times of his own desires to access the information and doesn't care if the government is reading his mind and is also figuring that the thoughts alone will or may trigger an alarm for the Government to arrest him. So the thoughts need to be some how written of Dick seeing that he wants the data to see the data and to warn the Government of his plans and alert the Government by hoping the thought filter will see his desires to help a G5.

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r10879 | kalab | 2006-06-28 06:01:52 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More reading and editing and words and story. More refine ment. The thought read to be better. Time will define if it is. New thoughts and inventions for books a complete.

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r10854 | kalab | 2006-06-27 17:42:23 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More wwords and reading and editing. The thought of how I wrote Psycho to read Dick's mind will be used until Psycho can read and write to Dick's mind.

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r10851 | kalab | 2006-06-27 06:32:18 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

I do beleive I have almost written chapter ones flow and thought process and trail of thought. Reading and editing and writing. The thought flow of dick almost a flow. Time is near to separate into Words and write a book. The Strobe weapon was something that I just though of. This after editing syber scan. The edits beyond 1 are what I did last as when spending a few minutes reading around. I read I need to get rid of I's.

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r10832 | kalab | 2006-06-26 06:06:48 -0700 (Mon, 26 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words read of the first of the files for the files ls long and won't be split (maybe) anytime soon. The first of the chapter was read and some editing and writing done. I am still writing for the flow of the narrative and the story. The thought almost the flow and style for Dick. Psycho and the voiced of inidividuals more delveloped, I believe, but could be read as bad if the first doens't define the narrative in a way to entertain and maintain reading.

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r10816 | kalab | 2006-06-25 10:14:39 -0700 (Sun, 25 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading. I Am lost in what I need to write for Dick to come to the understanding and reason for doing anything. The malfunction reason I thinnk I have written, but it is lost in a lot of repitious dialog that may be needed, but if used should better framed and more natural even for two being trained to control their actions and thought. The file needs to be split so I can begin to define words as chapters and with chapters further focus on the words to define the book.

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r10811 | kalab | 2006-06-24 20:38:26 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

MOre reading than editing or writing. Mind is somewhere.

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r10781 | kalab | 2006-06-24 11:30:59 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Mustange and Dick depart. Mustang will be captured by the U.S. Government and thrown in confinement when Mustang leaves Larry's Fajitas and goes to the Government for help. Need some more thought, more discription of hte house for the characters.

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r10778 | kalab | 2006-06-24 10:27:08 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the departure of Mustang for the apartment. And some removal of excessive Dick sucking.

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r10775 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:18:42 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words of Mustang getting on the job.

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r10774 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:01:51 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of finishing the reason for Psycho's transformation had inspired thought. The words written more to create reason and a reasonable story of how and why Psycho is before Dick.

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r10754 | kalab | 2006-06-23 18:15:04 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The thought of the day thrust to page. A expulsion of agression through words. The story of how and why needs is on its way and is almost there. Need create a logic reason and alos a reason to caste the ignorance where it should be caste. Need more description, more sound, more taste, more sight, more touch. Where are they at. NEXT TO A CLUB. Things more about the tought and aremember to build upon them and bring them back up and go off on tangents and think of odd things one thinks of. Remember this si a A.I. Detective thought though, so he has control over his mind.

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r10743 | kalab | 2006-06-23 05:53:08 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I wanted to read, edit and write the reason of how Psycho thinks he found life, but I could not find the passage for there are too many words to read to find the words. I instead read and wrote the third and departing chapter. More ideas for time and peronality and movement. The thoughts need to be more often and the thoughts written need to be edited so they are fragments like thoughts.

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r10727 | kalab | 2006-06-22 17:54:03 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read areound trying to find the part in Chapter 2 or 3 I was writing. I become lost a couple times and just read and edited what was read. Most the time, of course, was used to write the words for chapter one. Upon the writing of this log I realize I really need to branch and begin inidividual chapter files.

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r10715 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:55:48 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing and writing of the last of chapter 2. The chapter needs more reading and writing, but is flowing ot chapter 3.

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r10714 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:46:40 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words for the Third chapter are better than the words the replaced. The words connect the flow. The flow still needs to be read and edited. I may need more words and questions, but that can wait for the next chapter after Psycho reveals self.

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r10713 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:29:17 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

These words where written yesterday and where timed but needed to be transposed to novel. Theses are terms the military are teaching the public. Any more of these terms heard will be written downn and used.

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r10698 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:58:20 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to and for the words for the definition and introduction of Neuro. What was written is what I like to read. The grammar fitting.

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r10697 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:22:59 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing of the frist chapter and trying to find the follow for the grammar.

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r10679 | kalab | 2006-06-21 06:03:55 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit of chapter one. After thinking of on the walks to and from work in short spans during long spans of random thought I choose to not time, I have thought about the use of the somantic and telepathic mark and realize I need to not use the mark as I had. I do now understand that the paragraphs are what is in the long term memory or a part of instinct or conditioning. Look at the crowd could be used as crowd description. Some conditioning is thought and that conditioning needs to be shown and to shown as something that though conditioned needs to be focused.

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r10664 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:42:17 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. I think this will be a week of reading and editing for the file is too big and I woul like to read and edit and think to see what exists and what doesn't. I like what I have read sofar. Lessing use of I is always good. If not good then better for Dick is not a selfish. I have had some thoughts about the end and how it maybe during the rebirth of Psycho, Psycho could become a G5 killing machine again, or Psycho could have been a killing machine all along and was ment to kill Dick because the G5 killing machines and perfect its killing ability so well it wanted to see if it could convince Dick to kill himself. Though this will never be defined, these possibilities need to be thought by Dick. Thought of Dick and the grammaredit will be easier once file is files..

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r10663 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:11:42 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The Detective Store Synopsis was read after I read chapters while in the Secure and Secrete building. ...The addition of the sentence was made after the synposis was read after the words of the Secrete and Secure Government building was read and writed and edited. The process all align. The synopsis I have found is a good way to find the right location for the good Hyper-Content of the day.

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r10612 | kalab | 2006-06-16 18:00:29 -0700 (Fri, 16 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The detective store write was inspired by today and the past days of hearing some much news that I now have a place to focus. The store and shapping the reason he lies and doesn't want to leave with out Psycho needs to be defined with more detail as the words are written. I am thinking of changing the name of Benjamin Franklin. I know not what the name would be. A name more sympolic maybe\?

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r10598 | kalab | 2006-06-15 18:10:20 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I found myself reading and editing the first chapter then began to read and edit the third which is where I want to edit. I read mostly, to remember and now i do I can almost see the grammar use of Word Prostitute Grammar.

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r10597 | kalab | 2006-06-15 17:39:07 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read the last half of the synopsis and the first of the book adn thought of how see for seeing for sight. There needs to be some more thought. I need read and write someother part of the book to find that thought.

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r10587 | kalab | 2006-06-15 06:02:00 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The chapter edited will be the chapter I will read and edit for a bit. it is one that needs to be read and edited. The direction and action thought. More description needed. The story exists to write and I will and so I will.

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r10586 | kalab | 2006-06-15 05:45:29 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I am trying to make an effort to write, but I shouldn't be writing the end. I want to write somewhere else for the end is something I need to think about more and how best to write to it.

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r10559 | kalab | 2006-06-14 06:01:13 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I feel good writing near the end to fhe chapter before the non-human energy draining elevator shaft.

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r10558 | kalab | 2006-06-14 05:48:28 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Of yesterdays thoughts, The addition of God to those that control D.C.. The continual integration of the feel and see and think. I am happy I don't need to mark everything and that feel is now defined. I need to write and read on to other chapters so I may forget and reread the first of book. Valerie hasn't said anything about The Detective Store exept with words in an email saying she received the file. I haven't asked if she is even reading it. She may. She may not.

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r10543 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:23:57 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read around, mostly end. Reading for a place to write that is not the first two chapters. Maybe chapter three. I do need to split the files. The repository may be translated this weekend.

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r10542 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The frame of see and feel thought of during the walk to work while reading Lassivyous aloud the words feel as you feel and then stopped read Lassivyous and thought of The Detective Store and how to frame feel for feel should how to define what is now a non-marked paragraph, the narrative, what you feel. The feel is now frame for The Detective Store and for Word ProstituteTM GrammarTM.

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r10531 | kalab | 2006-06-13 05:54:03 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and thinking about the changes made last night to express everything with the somatic marks. I like the way it reads but where to d seperate. Do I separate when Psycho enters, another being in the area of the feeler. How does the mind read work\? When to use the mark\? Questions, questions, quesions, Need to think about this while walking or as a thought of the day for I need to know how to mark words.

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r10520 | kalab | 2006-06-12 20:19:20 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I think I have found the way the words will be written for the A.I. Detective. The words of the first chapter have been marked with the grammar and the words to define to write the words the way the Detective store is to be written for it best define the form of the Detective Store. I wonder if Valerie has read The Detective Store yet and if not I may have her read this one...actually I may not. I don't know. This is the first time I have actually thought to think if Valerie has read any of it yet. I don't think she has for she has been wanting to finish the book she is reading now before...anyway, I 'll ask later to find if she has read the words yet and if not I may send her this revision so I can get her opinion on the grammar. Maybe...Maybe not. We shall see. I do like what is wrote and how it is wrote and find it should be written that way for it is i an A.I. Detective.

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r10509 | kalab | 2006-06-12 18:03:09 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Further reading and edting and writing to make the thought trained but still like real thought and not some narrative of a book.

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r10501 | kalab | 2006-06-12 06:04:17 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of what needed to be written. Read here and there. Edititng the Grammar the words. Thinking of why Richard and Betty don't know (or reach) to the Government knowing Psycho nad Dick's exact loation. It think the go to the building to help protect it (and to fuck).

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r10480 | kalab | 2006-06-11 20:17:20 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Some more thoughts. An effort to write The Detective Store for the third time today ends after only fifteen minutes. I need to write something other than the first, and that is something to begin in the morning. I will be able to write in the morning. Tonight I will tag the file of the revision after this commit and send the tagged revision to -v-. She wants to read it, just because she wants to read it so I will send it, but said to her that a smile or a frown is all she can reply with (for now for I could change my mind, but that will be noted when the change of mind (of action) occurs.

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r10470 | kalab | 2006-06-11 13:07:34 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. The store of the reason G5 is not killing is and needs to be explained. To explain the actaul question/answers process will need to be defined throughout the store. I editing the words I think there is also the possible store line of wondering how a question is asked. Likely this will not.

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r10459 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:57:10 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words and reading of chapter two needs to continue to be the focus for the words are of the story and reason thought before the many rewrites of the syno[isis. The story of how the question became to question and create Psycho will need to be as honed an sharp as how it is described in the synopsis. More thought may be needed too.

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r10458 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:01:03 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A first chapter that has been read and edited enough for now. The thought of Dick needs to be refined to resemble thought that is sort of random yet trained and orderly because the processes to create an A.I. Detective must be orderly.Lots of edits and reading with the commit. The words I suppose rady for another who just wants to read them and not edit them for I am not done editing the words of the first chapter. Nor am I complete with the writing.

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r10453 | kalab | 2006-06-10 19:47:11 -0700 (Sat, 10 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

REading and editing for Valerie wants to read and I want to give her at least the first chapter.

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r10433 | kalab | 2006-06-08 18:54:56 -0700 (Thu, 08 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the store with the vision. I thought more of the why and thought of symbolism of having Dick naked and keeping Dick naked. I also thought more of the why which is something that I will, may, want to work on before the files become many, which I hope to be next week.

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r10425 | kalab | 2006-06-07 21:39:14 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words to ready for the fall.

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r10410 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:57:46 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Think the thought of free thought now that Dick thinks the Government and Psycho can not read his mind.

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r10409 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:50:57 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Trying to find the thought of Dick. The thought of Dick will be more for there is not a nother character or charcters or people for Dick to control his thoughts. Dick doesn't want to control his thoughtws anymore.

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r10394 | kalab | 2006-06-06 18:40:11 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I have read and I have thought. More timing and more steps for the words to become.

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r10377 | kalab | 2006-06-06 05:48:40 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read the last chapters. Skipped around. Edited.

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r10366 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:33:10 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A thought thoght on the way home. Writing Dick's thought process now that he is alone. is important.

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r10365 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:25:43 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis reads good. Some coreections but nothing too serious. I like the end of the synopsis. The end is the end that the end the synopsis needs to be.

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r10352 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:55:56 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The nano machines will be the nuclear fuel depot, so Dick needs to thow Psycho up, which he does, to fuel Psycho.

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r10351 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:40:14 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Write familar words. I scannned and read pieces of other chapters and read to the end knowinng that if I wanted to write anything more than two words this morning I would need to read the last chapter for it is in the mind more than the rest. The words are okay and lead to where the story needs to go. I need to know figure out where the nuclear depot is located. I was going to have nuclear depots along the section of walls, but I have begun to think have the nuclear depots in the wall is too easy. Writing the words won't take much thought, once the story and depot location is found.

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r10326 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:27:50 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words. Some of them feel pulpy. The words are satisfying enogh for a beginning of the chapter. I now am ready for branching the file.

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r10325 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:01:24 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A read and edit. I can't foget the backpack.

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r10299 | kalab | 2006-06-04 06:26:02 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot, for a time, about the back pack and the Entropy Core of Psycho. More words removed for there were either useless words or words to remind me what to write.

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r10298 | kalab | 2006-06-04 05:54:54 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot that I need to have a place where the G5 are drained, all machines are drained, of their energy some where on the way to the secure room. That place will be the elevator shaft for I had thought about it last when there was no elevator down.

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r10288 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:45:43 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than commited. To find the words that are a little better than shiyy, I had to read and stare at words and file (the manuscript, the draft, the words and space.

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r10287 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:16:18 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Another write of Synopsis. More words that are needed. Read some aloud. Not much.

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r10282 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:55:04 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the thoughts again to clear the thoughts and think of other things while writing. The things thought were more thoughts into the conversation and then thoughts of how I will convince both the reader and Psycho that Dick trust Psycho. The thoguht of Dick will be interesting. The hole in center of room will be the Entropy input. I believe there will be holes in the walls labeled with the radioactive material sign to warn that they are nuclear fuel nodes.

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r10281 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:42:50 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than will be save in this revision. There was lots of movement, but the movement was needed for the words now are better than the words then. While wriitng,I had the thought that Instead of having another separate room as I was going to have after this room, now that the room is hte size that it is I think I will have this the last room and not have another hence the words put in to say that the hole for the Entropy in put is found. I am still wondering if there shoujld be a riddle or some fun game to entertain the readers mind and make me seem witty (or try too). I think I will probably not have more games and have the talk of how Dick believes Pshyco and the Government are still one and believes that he was hired and everything else was a set up. Psycho denies the setup and says the Government wasn't paying attention or recording his mind because he is not a Global Terrorist Red.

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r10273 | kalab | 2006-06-02 17:57:38 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to begin the chapter I believe are found for now. Much better than what existed. Something to continue to write with the next couple days. I like the flow of the nano machines. The idea is good. I will have to thank A for this one. As I am now. Thank you for you comment Alex and suggestion of using Nano machines for now I will use them even more because rods are worthless and not needed and because you said -Make sure there are Nano Machines.'

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r10262 | kalab | 2006-06-02 05:53:52 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The elevator descends. A few more words then it will stop at the bottom and at the secrete room. Not many inspiring thoughts beyond the words written. After reading a bit fo the first chapter and thought I need to write to remove some I's, the words read okay.

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r10251 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:57:38 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I am thinking of where to write next. I think the building room and the last chapter. As I hope to be converting the repository this weekend, it will soon be splitting the chapters and it would be good to have more of the story in all the chapters.

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r10250 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:49:22 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words on the way down. After a pile of G5 jump on top but can't penetrate the the elevator. I am feeling a bit blocked with words for the words weritten for this chapter during the past few days seem to be coming more and more jaded and seem jaded right now.

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r10237 | kalab | 2006-06-01 05:46:05 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More movement down and down and down. The idea of the G5 coming down the shaft an old one but one just know remembered. The G5 will not break through the top of the elevator but will supply a few paragraphs of words and moments of time unil Dick exits elevator for security room with nano machines.

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r10222 | kalab | 2006-05-31 06:34:57 -0700 (Wed, 31 May 2006) | 2 lines

The bottom of the elevator is coming soon. I am running out of ideas for the elevator. I did read and have been thinking back to the reasoning for having the steel door and may use it as some magnetic device.

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r10201 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:27:35 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read okay. Will use these words now for the page for Word Prostitute. Too many thens are wat I mostly thought had issues. But not many issues.

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r10200 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:19:44 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the elevator to the secure room. The lever scene shouldn't be too much longer. I still don't know what else will happen before the room with the nano machines that simulate a building in a room.

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r10185 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:42:31 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read of Synopsis. The words, I thought. read well. Added United States Government for the words needed. The reading flow of the synopsis, I believe found and written. The words sound. I can't wait to branch (with Subversion) the file to a single synopsis file so I can begin to create the short versions using the words written.

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r10184 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:29:37 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and an edit of the words to the secure room. More actions than thoughts, the words complete to show more store and define the existing scene with words. The words. There.

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r10183 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:21:24 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words while Dick Stands and sees. I am almost able to seee the scene and the site that Dick and Neuro see. It is clear in mind, so I guess I am able to see because I am now able to find the words needed to show the site.

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r10167 | kalab | 2006-05-28 13:03:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

The additional adjectives are good. More name changes. After reading the synopsis, I decded the name Psycho willl remain.

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r10166 | kalab | 2006-05-28 12:59:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read and edied. I like the flow and the words. It is complete, so now I need to translate the repository to Subversion so I can branch the files into sections and branch the synopsis file to the the various forms fo synopsis with the content. The idea is there. The tools need be available. I will need to do this after I archive image for space. Word Prostitute will have to create the process. Another idea. And a tangent that doesn't define The Detectivve Store but is hindering it from becoming.

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r10115 | kalab | 2006-05-25 07:21:20 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts and reading and editing and some writing. The movement down to the secret room and the secure room. The secure room is first. The elevator L-Shaped lever woun't go back up.

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r10114 | kalab | 2006-05-25 06:56:28 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Here the words write after another read and edit and write of the Synopsis. I am feeling slow today, and still the words read, to me, something to be understood.

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r10098 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:46:43 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read around and edited while searching for the location to not he end of the creation of the process. The core process needs to occur on the bridge because Dick knows the Government scan is faulty and weak on the bridge so his mind is not read that well if at all.

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r10097 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:26:47 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for the journey to the secret room. The elevator goes down and down and down and down.

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r10075 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:36:43 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the end. I was hoping to write to the stairs for they have moved. Down behind the steel door will be an elevator down which opens to a staircase up. The staircase is the illusion and nano machine staircase that seems so long but is on the size of a 8 x 8 x 16 room

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r10074 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:13:25 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for end. Read. The words for end seem to fit. I am just finding I need to build up to it better. I also need to raise the question by asking the question of Dick a lot are you trying to kill us all to have Dick have a thought to say and think that is a habit, somethink he thinks and says often, but also to question the intent of everyone.

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r10073 | kalab | 2006-05-23 17:37:47 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit and write of the synopsis. Again, getting better. I think I may be ready to send to a paper publisher and or agent in a couple more months. The detail I added I liked.

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r10062 | kalab | 2006-05-23 06:20:20 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts I had thought during the walks of yesterday. I have been wanting to change the those words for some time but haven't the desire to read the frist chapter for some time. I have been having furn writing the other chapters. Today I tried to continue make all the voices of the narrative unique but similar to set the words of Dick and Narration are one but seperate.

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r10055 | kalab | 2006-05-22 06:19:32 -0700 (Mon, 22 May 2006) | 2 lines

reading the words of chapter 4, I am trying to get rid of the I's. The words seem to flow, and whille the body and mind a retired, I read and think of what to do to remove some of the I's. I have some thoughts. Need more thoughts and less I's.

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r10041 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:51:20 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

More spreading of the story line the creation of the code. More thought for the passages of time and urgency and and pace. I read all over and edited grammar.

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r10040 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:07:53 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

To begin the creation of the A.I. Detective the story line has been created. Core I like better than Kernal and Shell may be changed to Persona. I like the idea of the construction as long as it doesn't over whelm the story or convolute the character or ruine the story by losing the reader. Simmple is good.

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r10039 | kalab | 2006-05-20 15:44:59 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor addition with lots of thought. To begin the thought I thought of where to place the thought, where to begin the thought and why the purpose of the thought. The thought is to include the thought Mark thinks when not describing. At the same time of the story he is thinking of an A.I. Detective and constructing and A.I. Detective. How does an A.I. Detective get created. That is something I will need t think of and create. I do know the additional story line could convolute and lose a lot of people, but if done right and if done while trying to actually create a BIOS for an A.I. and a Kernal of self and shell of a persona or character then maybe I can actually create an A.I. Detective. I have the words defined. Kernal, Shell, BIOS, RAM, ROM will all those fun indo European logic loops and syntax and mark.

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r10000 | kalab | 2006-05-20 07:30:09 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Editing chapter four has helped me decided how begin to frame and from not only the thoughts of Dick but also when those thought in narration should be marked and when the should not. I will mark with somantic marks when the thought is of the present, a short-term memory thought. The narrations that is not mark is the long term memory or passive memory or deep memory or what ever words need to be used to define that the memory marked is the memory begin thought not a memory begin remembered or recalled.

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r9999 | kalab | 2006-05-20 06:00:03 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Writing the words to immporve the character thought and narration. The thoughts are sometimes too clear and coherent. The First Cha[ter thoughts, which a lot of the words are need to be less writer writing dialog for a charter which every word possible to define the words. I have the words, I just need to remove some of them.

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r9983 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:28:20 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

I need to consider the way Dick thinks and speaks. Is the voice of though good. Should every thing be a thought. I suppose objective description should not be marked. But these are still thought I have had while writing and editng the words read.

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r9982 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:05:35 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and write of synopsis. It is good I have not read it for sometime for I now where the synopsis becomes a bit lost or could be more to the point. It is long. I should be able to shorten by removing paragraphs.

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r9976 | kalab | 2006-05-19 05:40:28 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read of the synopsis. The words read through. The words read through. The words written to better define and transition the paragraph.

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r9969 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:11:35 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for more of the words to for reason Dick continues. I don't know if there data will be erased or not. i will have to think about it. I think the data will be earsed or thought be erased leaving the reader to decide. Psycho says it erased it.

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r9968 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:00:49 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though more paragraphs and sentences will be written, I believe I have the reason for the subject of recording thoughts is raised and answered by Dick leaving. I have in mind what will get Dick back with out making dick seem like an idiot or a sucker.

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r9964 | kalab | 2006-05-18 05:55:25 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

These words are written because I really want to and need to begin working on this portion of the story because It is now leads to one of the more difficult scenes. Which is actually what I am sort of writing this for, so I can also read and know the words when I write how Psycho convinces Dick to remain on the case.

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r9957 | kalab | 2006-05-17 17:38:05 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts and words and detials to make the scene a scene not a back drop to charater. I suppose I want the scene to be a character and the charater a scene.

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r9939 | kalab | 2006-05-17 06:01:46 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more words. The short story is becoming a book. Content and words are begin written at the end. I have the thought in mind. I will try to remember to write of the Security Room next tehen I will try to remember to write the walk to Larry's Fajitas. There is a paragraph which emotionally expressive and unique and while the words used are used to show emotion (Over Mustang's possible capture) and unique, the way the words are written should be used throughout the entire story. Giveing more character.

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r9920 | kalab | 2006-05-16 18:15:27 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the time before entering the Government Building. More words. Maybe not the words in line to write but they were the ones in mind.

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r9907 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:59:34 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

A quick read of synopsis and quick write and rewrite of words of the CVS log entry to the synopsis to begin and remember to write of.

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r9906 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:54:36 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scnene is coming along. I feel good about the choice to focus on it. The next will be the journey from Always to the Government Building then focus on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. I am happy with the name Psycho as it is an overall good first name for G5 and an easier name to write why it is Psycho for it is Psycho because when Psycho asked the question of name when question found and sought answer to question and once question anwsered Pycho ask the question. What is my name\? And asked the question to all the information using Neuro's actions to define the name and the word Psycho was returned.

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r9905 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:06:58 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

Removing words for the words already exist and will be used on for a different scene if at all.

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r9893 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:08:46 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do like Psycho best to for it was a killing machine which is a psycho as psycho's are defined in pop culture and in some ways medical sience. Psycho came from some where. I think it came from Neuro and of the mind and and other word that is prefix like...

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r9892 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:04:49 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Time ticks and Dick and Richard are saved because the Government doesn't want to kill anyone except Neuro and Dick. I didn't change the name to Pycho which i will do now.

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r9879 | kalab | 2006-05-15 20:45:18 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Those were fun words to write because they are jaded Media, art and every hope of dream of a state I hope never exists. I now need a riddle for the pulp fun of the story.

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r9875 | kalab | 2006-05-15 19:02:09 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The work and the time. The work and the time. The wait in front of the Government building was an unexpected write. It is were I began reading. The read when well and the changes made and additions made were needed and a create change to the words as a whole. I am still wanting to change the name of Neuro to Psycho and think I will after I think of it more.

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r9869 | kalab | 2006-05-15 06:20:25 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The fun to be had with ediitng the words. The words written are the last words read. Some where sometime somehow, I write well and then write with words I do not understand. As the thought continues, I think of maybe changing Neuro's name to Psycho.

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r9868 | kalab | 2006-05-15 05:58:34 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the words to show the fact Dick knows his mind is being read. Read the words and edited when needed. There are some spots when Neuro and Dick talk of God I may remove for it is a bit much in my mind right now. Maybe I will leave in the active version and remove later\?

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r9844 | kalab | 2006-05-14 16:23:30 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

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r9843 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:44:57 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

Edit the quote and changed the mark to the actual dialog Mark after finding the editor eclipse could render a lower dialog mark.

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r9842 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:25:01 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and a few edits. This is going out tonight to -v- and A.

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r9825 | kalab | 2006-05-13 07:16:10 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

The lights in tunnel and how Dick throws the steel latch has inspired lots of thoughts of how to create the lock for the door by using motion and the lights to need to be triggered in an order. There will be 15 of the illuminating cylinder sections of the tunnel that Dick will have to some how find a way to trigger once the odred of how they need to be triggered is detected. The code will probably be on the back of Richards badge in Hex which will be a good way to introduce the story reader to hex for the riddle to enter the U.I.. Then I think: Riddle\? Or puzzle\?

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r9824 | kalab | 2006-05-13 06:18:21 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis.

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r9815 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:28:02 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the thought. The thought grows. The riddle for now a mystery with the cross.

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r9814 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:23:55 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Deeper into the tunnel. I need a way, a key of Richards to get into the door, but what is beyond that. The cross. The cross will open the door. The fact G5 are attacking and Dick needs to go get the cross to enter the secret door. Have Dick get the key and the book.

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r9813 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:45:13 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Just when I think I am done with the synopsis, I read it slowly and I find that some parts probably only make sense to me so I need to explain like fact.

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r9812 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:37:15 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

The thought getting into the scene. Now I can see the room and the tunnel going back. I think it wil lbe a long tunnel. A long tunnel and night more. There is the red button but the red button will close the tap so Neuro and Dick will have a half hour or so to make it to the tap as the G5 attack.

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r9789 | kalab | 2006-05-12 00:16:49 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and wrote the know of Dick having mind read by Government. I read areound reading for the words that says the government will disconnect the line when actually the government can't disconnect the ine for that is the reason for it begin a 24hr secret room of the government.

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r9788 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:42:54 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

I really don't want the comic Dick Tracy to be thought of when reading this. Maybe if Dick was working for the Government and not and a Private Dick but even the I would probably just use Sven with an umlaut. Mustang is good. It is a Hyper-Cognizant bounty hunter name which Mustang has become.

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r9787 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:32:07 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though I am finding it more difficult to want to read, i do believe the writing of the synopsis has been and educational experience. I have never spent this much time with synopsis with other books. figured the meeting was there. And while the meaning is in The Detective Store, This from now on, it is only becoming more meaningful with the creation of the synopsis that I can now further write and find the constaints to write with to complete the thought with words.

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r9778 | kalab | 2006-05-11 17:46:09 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

read, spellchecked, added, removed. Liked what I read. Will probably send to A and Valerie after one more read.

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r9765 | kalab | 2006-05-11 06:04:02 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading some writing. I ended with thought and words of the journey from Always and to K Street. This is what I will wriie now, I have decided, after reading and editing. This is now, what I feel, needs the most work with words.

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r9764 | kalab | 2006-05-11 05:35:43 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words removed and words added. The words added are simple and replication (almost) of words of the same sentence to complete the thought. The words overall read good and as soon as I can complete the synopsis without edit then I will send.

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r9752 | kalab | 2006-05-10 07:01:35 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words in a location inspired by reading the synopsis and the reading and writing of the Secure Government building. I have ways to write words for the scene. I need more of the scene. Too much thinking.

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r9751 | kalab | 2006-05-10 06:39:45 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

Few words. Some edits. More defined with not many new words.

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r9733 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:54:28 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read here and there. Don't know where to start. I think I will write the security room and the journey to the Government Building (as I have wrote before) I read all over just seeing where I am at and these two place are weakest, I feel now, with clearity and words.

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r9732 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:40:40 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor changes, additions, to clarify. The words read well as the Synopsis is nearing the time to be published.

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r9715 | kalab | 2006-05-09 05:56:02 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for another journey to somewhere. The roles caste now they must play out. The mass in Adams Morgan will be metaphor or an allegory of America bars...or something. I still haven't the thought down. I need to think that there is a stop sign and two lights before the mass of the club crowd, which is bigger than when Dick was in office. After the second light the car meets the mass. Maybe the car slowly moving through the mass of people walking and riding bikes is all the meaning the words need.

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r9709 | kalab | 2006-05-08 18:31:26 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

Somre reading and editing. The wriitng of the cab through Adam's Morgan was written after I wrote the Cab trip part where they talked about the Thought Theft. The thought Theft thought while writing as was the cab trip trail through Adams Morgan. I was going to go a different way.

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r9696 | kalab | 2006-05-08 06:10:02 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The words seem to be written with the synopsis. Now I need only find placement and sequence.

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r9695 | kalab | 2006-05-08 05:58:41 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scanning now something valid. The main and really only focus was on the words around the words written. I might look at the pictures this week. I need to find a path to follow Betty from Always. Betty may be with Richard or Eleanor...maybe all four will go to the Secret Government Building.

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r9684 | kalab | 2006-05-07 22:01:31 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Now more of the words of chapter six are becoming one flow. Now next time I can write from where I have been writing for a time. Having realized I am almost complete with chapter six, I have been thinking about which chapter to focus on next. I will probably focus on the chapter of travelling from club Always and following the Betty.

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r9683 | kalab | 2006-05-07 21:38:36 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I was thinking of editing with the thought of sending the words to A and -v- but now that I add more I think I will have one more edit before I send and read again.

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r9639 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:43:19 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I love the thoughts one has when they just sit and stare at the words and read the words. Things like how to beat a government mind scan is a good reason why starring at the words is writing. With writing comes ideas, and ideas come from experience, and while it is not always best to record eperience for reference for later research of a book of words for I believe experience by memory alone is where they purity is at and I am a purist in some respects even though it could be that in the minds of many if many ever read anything I write they will thinking of me not as a purist. Where was I, Oh, yeah, the government brain scan.

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r9638 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:05:32 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More talk with Jo to define the nature of each character and to position Betty to see Neuro off in the distance.

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r9637 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:48:58 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I have thought for some time the desire to Betty and Eleanor arrive and the words of religon persuade Betty to let Eleanor in. I have been thinking about htis change for sometime, the change of changeing Richard to Eleanor. I did the change just to think about the passage more. It is likely that the characters for the role witll change back to original form but I want it to be this wy for now. I do believe I will leave the religious talk in stead of sex talk.

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r9636 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:34:51 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do not know why I had written these words. I must have cut and paste them. I am sure I can find out. The words are good, the ones removed, but misplaced. Why did I put them here (here being where the words were removed)\?

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r9635 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:26:41 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of synopsis. I it must be getting close to being complete for I am becoming tired of reading it over and over.

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r9607 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:35:13 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of a read and an edit for not much was written. The read and read of the synopsis. I believe it is all what it needs to read, and read, and read, and read, and read,

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r9606 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:27:22 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the edit. Some words written. I am lost on where to go and where Dick and Neuro are and and what time it is. These things I need to know so i can write these things now so it adds to the tension later. Write the words on and on. I scanned the words and saw Kaleb Valerie some how tired to steal a scene by reading Dick's dialog.

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r9603 | kalab | 2006-05-06 12:43:20 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk. I need more sit or seeing and discription, which I am thinking may need to be framed. More words anyway. More to come.

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r9570 | kalab | 2006-05-06 03:22:36 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thought than words. The thought begin 'How to fuel Neuro\?' or rather 'How to explain how and why Neuro can be given fuel in the District of Columbia. More thoughts of the walk and how now that the reason is part of the story and not just part of the synopsis.

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r9569 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:58:55 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The last words edited. I read by bring in all the words as eclipse doesn't wrap words. I read the ends of sentences and wrote words that are being lost because of the frame.

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r9568 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:46:23 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some day I may be done, or near the words that I want to give, and give to Valerie and A to read.

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r9563 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:21:57 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading around and thinking. Doing more think and not reading or writing which isn't bad but the thinking is leading away from the words. Mind caught by sun light outside.

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r9562 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:09:11 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Lots of spoken words that need a scene to create an environment for writing. More reason to hurry the fuck up and nano machines. There will be more nano machines which will be described like this one. Nano machines are cool. A was right.

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r9561 | kalab | 2006-05-05 14:35:09 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis. I think it maybe complete soon.

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r9553 | kalab | 2006-05-05 03:41:18 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

The dialog was in the mind and so was the scene but it needs to develope. Trace will at Larry's Fajitas. Trace will nano machines to throw the G5 off his trail as he escapes.

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r9547 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:26:55 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts to words. Thoughts to words. More thoughts to come with those words.

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r9546 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:20:31 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More walk and talk. Maybe that the walk and talk with be about the fact the Government is in Dupont. I do not know if the Government will be in Dupont it was just an idea that may want to work in to the story at that point thereby making the role more intense. Maybe Neuro will throw off the Government with nano machines to throw off the Government and the Capitolists who are on following them after Dupont. Tace escapes we later find.

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r9545 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:14:18 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read. I placed commas.

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r9544 | kalab | 2006-05-04 14:55:10 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and write and edit and read of the synopsis. I will probably send it to A. Thinking of A, after a conversation, he insisted one thing: Have nano machines. I sort of thought of the secret room ( the cube that can create stairs and rooms and doors because of nano machines, but now maybe I am thinking Neuro may have some, and needs some nana machine tools and weapons. The coversation was at Clyde's by what is now the Verizon Center atter he asked be what The Detective Store was about. That coversation also pushed mind to write a synopsis (hence sending it to A even if there are no words sent back). The convesation at Clydes did not last but a couple minutes

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r9528 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:23:47 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit the synopsis. Wrote. The time is running out is probably optional.

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r9527 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:13:59 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The story flows and some new character I have thought of having Dick more in the know of where and what of the K Street Place Secure User Inteface. Dick should know from working with the Virginia security firm and it makes less more in the know of what is going on with G5's and Government. I also thought of the need (and scene) to have (with) Nuero removing the chip in flesh of Richard to inplant into Dick. Dick by then is willing as long as it is clean and doesn't hurt either Richard or Dick.

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r9505 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:56:25 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Given the time, enough words have been written so I will be able to find the flow again and conitnue the conversation of life which will ends soon. I have transferred the images of the walk around Washington, D.C., but have not viewed the images yet. I may if I continue to write 6, which is writing better than I thought it would...so far.

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r9504 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:45:59 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Unexpecting words written for I was going to write at the end but then I remembered I needed to read the words to pick up the dialog after the events just written of. Now I shall try to write more words at the end of the section of 6.

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r9503 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:23:05 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of Synopsis. More words removed. I like the read better without the repetition of point. Less words. Less is more. As I read the words, I see the words as the 'Back' cover.

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r9497 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:16:56 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk and the path of Dick to Larry's Fajitas. I need to read the first of the chapter again so I can remember the conversation.

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r9496 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:05:42 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis edited for better flow and because it needed to reflect the focus of the book on Dick not on Neuro.

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r9495 | kalab | 2006-05-02 18:57:34 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words of the walk I need to think about. Thought on a tangent for a minute after Valerie found a rug we may want to buy. Thoughts returned focused and found written the words and the description of cars and trucks. I thought of doing this type of scene but figure I'd wait. But now I figure why wait. Set the scene for the more of the book.

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r9476 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:55:35 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and images for the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The thoughts are okay and the dialog fitting. I am finding the walk a bit difficult thought not painful. I will try to remember to write this same part again for I have ideas but know the best ideas come when actual words are being written and not just thought of.

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r9475 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:40:21 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The walk along the way. The scene of the capitol. Dick walks along and realizes getting there maybe the hardest part of the job

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r9474 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis edit.

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r9459 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:09:04 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the synopsis.

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r9458 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:03:12 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words, words words words. Fun with the scene and the words. I words more sentences the read and editing the grammar then wrote more sentences. I want to read and edit the synopsis now for I feel I have written too much dialog and need to think of the environment beyond two entities. I also have only an hour or so to write.

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r9457 | kalab | 2006-05-02 02:26:40 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

I wrote a sentence and read and edited. I am wandering with the read and edit and may write in the same word area but may not so I commit. I have thoughts to about the book but I am not having them now and won't wait just go back to reading and writing and editing.

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r9421 | kalab | 2006-05-01 03:11:14 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more corrections. The words I believe will further better the story. The words are writen but not all are there. I need more detail of the alley and then the gliding scene. I am a littlworried because I may know the location I need to have Dick and Neuro glide to but I am not sure on the best route there. It is the one location I did not walk for there was rain and I suppose this sort of mystery in the search of the location is part of Detecting a story.

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r9420 | kalab | 2006-05-01 02:54:55 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read and edited grammar ending where I began to write. The words written are words written for what has seemed to become a theme, a story, of the section/chapter.

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r9409 | kalab | 2006-04-30 10:03:43 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More time spent talking with Travis and Mary and Valerie. The words written soon after time began. Now I will commit file and move on with words.

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r9396 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:04:59 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some reading and grammar editing. Brain flow slow so I will switch words. Need to think about what I want to write and will begin with next write session. What I want to write is Benjamin in drag. I may also look at the pictures for they are downloaded. If I do look at them I will note them as time reading The Detective Store.

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r9395 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:01:06 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I began to think of this as I wrote the last data commited. I think Benjamin will be in drag, too.

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r9394 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:53:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The chair description is almost there. It could be complete but I won't think complete until it is read again. I should note the clean nature of the chairs. I will leaving it for now and see what my mind remembers. it remembers the words just written and the dialog to begin the talk between Benjamin and Dick.

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r9393 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:39:38 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words to define the object. The desk is another point of past and present reference. I need to actually think about the conversation that will take place after Dick is sitting in the chair at the desk.

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r9392 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:21:40 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The weather will become hot and steamy before they enter building. The rain is working out well. Good idea, I must say even though it is mine so I should not be the one saying what it is. Or should I\? Yes, I suppose I should. I should be writing about the book. The book that now has only more, slight discription which is needed. I do wish I had walked around K Street while in D.C. this time last week. I want to write of club Always.

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r9391 | kalab | 2006-04-30 03:54:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar and read. Quick reads looking for grammar needs and stories and subject to continue through the story. I enjoyed what I read but I realize I will need to scene to detect and inspect.

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r9378 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:39:56 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Great idea the weather has become. While at first it was to show Global Warming and unstable environments now it will allow Neuro act out forgiveness and offer a minor protection to get away with lying or begin a nascent being for Neuro is a nascent being and doesn't know any better than to record all data against the will.

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r9377 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:27:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read to where I am at. The thought of completing the interaction with Benjiman Franklin. Funwords and a fun character to write. I still cant think of all the dialog but I imagine the dialog will be short.

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r9376 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:08:23 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The temperature and environment while Valerie was kissing me. I had to say it for the half the time spent was me being rubbed and kisssed. I wanted to stop and have sex but she is going to make me wait unilt later. Anyway, I just need to say that I am horny. It does not reflect the words of this book in anyway. The temperature.

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r9375 | kalab | 2006-04-29 13:48:14 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The edit and flow feels better now. The synopsis, the back fo the book.

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r9343 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:43:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words and thoughts of the walk. I can't remember how many block it is from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle. I am thinking two, but it could be three or four. I will need the pictures. If more blocks then more words will be written.

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r9342 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:01:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More writing. The thoughts of the area and the read and edit of leving Trace's apartment. The change of the name of Yasser for I read in the news this week or last that I want to spell it Yasir. Trying to see from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle.

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r9341 | kalab | 2006-04-29 03:38:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and writing the words of the dialog. The dialog is almost there. I need the sights of the pictures. I think I will download today and maybe use them for more words. I have thoughts of dialog and thoughts of this that for the sections where I wrote dialog. Everything else is fine in mind. The image in mind alone will finish the novel. The image I have yet to see will proved the setting.

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r9337 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:09:46 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar edit.

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r9336 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:02:03 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

And edit then write with frist dialog of Trace and Dick. The then an edit and read of next section. Read and read. Words where confusing where I edited last.

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r9335 | kalab | 2006-04-28 15:43:15 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

here are the words now. One read and edit of all the Elevator talk. The synopsis.

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r9324 | kalab | 2006-04-28 03:09:42 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I think, if possible, I will have the cap drive Kalormama to get to Always. I believe it to be possible, I have images but I have yet to look at them.

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r9323 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:54:26 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I randomly stopped and read and trying to edit grammar and added some words.

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r9322 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:35:34 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I read and started writing. I edited the grammar. Something I can reason now with and without the comma. I think of the words and have nothing to add or thoughts to include.

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r9314 | kalab | 2006-04-27 15:20:21 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

REad and edited and wrote. I like the word changes. The short term memory use was likely from something heard on the radio today while at work. It cam from some where and then the page for I was going to use then thought I should be more creative.

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r9305 | kalab | 2006-04-27 03:03:13 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The cab rides are always and the rides of cabs when in D.C. have helped me write. This is something I do not have pictures of. I just rode by myself but observed and thought what it is to be in a cab.

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r9304 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:45:34 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Of the walk but with no streets. The time of then is now. Walking and seeing the area. More action is needed. The dialog edited and may need to be edited more. I don't know yet if editing is need but will know next read. Next write will be after Larry's Fajitas.

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r9303 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:34:04 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk before I look at pictures. I am thinking of the walk from the circle to Larry's Fajitas but the thought just isn't there because when I walked the route I was luck I found it without needing to back track.

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r9297 | kalab | 2006-04-26 19:01:06 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The Synopsis sent to A. Edit and wrote before sending it.

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r9291 | kalab | 2006-04-26 18:16:00 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Random reads and edits. Some sentences of the ....

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r9290 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:54:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

A thought of the walk across the bridge. Sounds sites. Now for the other where ever the other maybe I am sure there will be a few more words once I actually look at the pictures again. We shall see and we write.

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r9289 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:37:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read the synopsis. Will read and edit by sent to A. Read the first of the chapter a bit with thoughts. May read more.

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r9284 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:15:28 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some thought but not much. Thinking of sleep right now.

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r9283 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:08:35 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More detials of the walk. The thought and the knowledge of the path is helping give the book some more definition and Dick some more character.

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r9282 | kalab | 2006-04-26 02:50:53 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts from the walk around D.C. that are now words on the page. I need to see the pictures for the streets, but I can now move on and thinking...

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r9267 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:39:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words of the walk. The grammar edit. I need to think of the embassy row walk.

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r9266 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:17:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The walk arcross the bridge as I remember the walk this last Saturday. I believe I have enough down to be able to write even mor