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r21700 | kalab | 2007-09-18 23:26:06 -0700 (Tue, 18 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I remove and move the last sentence from this chapter to the beginning of the next for the it belongs in a paragraph and that paragraph is of the next chapter for Dick thinks a keywords of the record scan beginning a new record.

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r21698 | kalab | 2007-09-18 23:19:56 -0700 (Tue, 18 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I read from beginning to end. The word from beginning to end to read. A did have to remove some of the words because they just were not needed. Most these words were the description of the area. ...I focused upon the internal dialog. I wanted to make it read more natural, but also the dialog needed to be as it would be for the scene. Fast when Dicks tense and collected and complete when he has time to think. I think I have everything written that needs to be writte for the chapter. It reads and i want it. I will needed to read and study again cyanide, but that can be done next edit when I spellcheck.

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r21666 | kalab | 2007-09-17 22:56:30 -0700 (Mon, 17 Sep 2007) | 1 line

I feel, now, that the beginning is what the beginning needs to be. The words after had some edits to make the thought more pace and fast because dick is tense and thinking fast so the thoughts and actions need to increase. The acts of Dick and the delay of the door opening could mean open was the words that was needed or the door was just delayed in opening or something else. The tempo is near what it needs to be if not what it needs to be. These words are. They are and they move on. I only read to the pushing of Psycho's core into the cube. I will read further next edit.

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r20845 | kalab | 2007-08-05 22:34:38 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line

Edit to change fuck cap to sex cap because sex cap is better is more general of what it does. Fuck cap also makes other use of fuck read to be jaded. ...I also checked the lower case of the descriptoin of the items of the pack.

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r20843 | kalab | 2007-08-05 22:20:00 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line

I read from beginning to end. I read the beginning then the end and while reading the end I realized that there was no reason for Dick to carry the pack all the way up the stairs, so I set to editing that after readin through and removing what I think to be all the words about a sliver of something. ...Those words are oremoved. Other words were removed because they were words that supported the story when action was in a different sequence. ...I had a feeling and a need to rewrite and edit and think of how to write the walk up the stairs. The walk how it was written had some good ideas, but over all was sloppy because the stair are in sections of five. The action is now, I feel better with the flow. The colors are and are not that bad. I like the pack staying on the lower floor. This will still allow for the flash light to break his hand.

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r20840 | kalab | 2007-08-05 15:09:09 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line

Words needed to be removed because some of the internal dialog was too much for the panic and search for air focus and the breathing and confusion. I removed and will remove and more mention of the shard of whatever for I removed that part entirely for it is pointless and not needed and has no reason to exist. It's a distraction and it is now removed. ...I tried to read the entire chapter, but I was lost on the separation between mind and body when coughing and how to define. i began by making paragraphs more sentences to divide objects. ...I also began by defining body as performing the action to show more of the loss of control. the changes made have helped this idea or showing of loss of control of body. ...The thought to the machine needed to show it is a command to. ..More removed that just had no reason to be with these words. ...I read to the getting out of the elevator with focus trying to move and edit. After the exit from elevator I skimmed and read fast to the last to get an idea of what needs to be written. I have these words being a focus in Mind. I still need to read and edit the elevator descent...Maybe. maybe not. I do like what exists after the moving and removing.

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r20834 | kalab | 2007-08-05 08:41:13 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line

The read to begin the chapter may need some editing. ...I read to the thought of clearing the cube Dick is in. The idea to have dick use the seeing thought to something mark is used because it should. It was an edit that was there and read though and to find. I did kind of fast read. after staring at the first of the chapter and finding and removeding the right words to edit. The words I do like more. There may be some sort of thought of door opening in or out, but maybe not because Dick knows. There is a thought start and begin again. I have the last chapter in mind when reading and think i could edit the beginning to remove or add content to make more without hindering the end of the prior chapter.

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r20828 | kalab | 2007-08-04 18:15:52 -0700 (Sat, 04 Aug 2007) | 1 line

The ball rolling removed. There was no need for some of the thought for the thought was not needed. I read the first then had to read the end of last chapter. The end of last chapter is has all the motion of Psycho so I removed that. The attention is now on upon the door and getting in and then the elevator. ...Once in the elevator there needed to be some description edited by removing for it wasn't needed. Some needed to be changed to be made better. I thought of the whole chapter for a couple of couple of minute spans and thought more of the motion and what Dick does. I remember needed to write and read this chapter a lot the last time I focused upon it. I read to be something that is a bit over written, but not too much. I read the decent and the thought of light.

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r18806 | kalab | 2007-04-25 05:43:22 -0700 (Wed, 25 Apr 2007) | 1 line

From beginning to end. The flow of the words better now that a few have been removed. Again there was duplicate action. I removed the action. There was a flow. I liked. I did read things over and over to be sure I read detailed sections of the story. ...I think the showing of contaminated lungs is good. it will read. The words to me do read and are near complete. From beginning to end the words were read and the words read were and are liked.

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r18796 | kalab | 2007-04-24 17:46:17 -0700 (Tue, 24 Apr 2007) | 1 line

I read from the beginning to the removal of the period. The only change. The words to begin what need to be written. The words to show the action as one continuous motion. The alamr. The thought.

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r18217 | kalab | 2007-03-26 17:29:22 -0700 (Mon, 26 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The taking of the medstick is needed, so Dick can be smart and inject self with the nano machines before hiting the ground to increase chance of life. The action is different for now both hands are full of items. I like the movements more they way they now are.

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r18154 | kalab | 2007-03-25 06:58:45 -0700 (Sun, 25 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The edit to read to be sure Psycho's core is in backpack during the fall. The change of case of the objects. All edits needed and thought of while editing the next chapter.

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r18107 | kalab | 2007-03-22 17:54:23 -0700 (Thu, 22 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The though for the new scene of the Gee Forty-three turning into nano-machines is a thought I have thought for more than just today. The thought will add more thought and questions of Dickc while he is walking to the edge of the room with the beam of light in the center during the next chapter. The thought and the description is now better. I do like the shadow upon the floor. That's probably a few words I can think of as keepers.

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r18078 | kalab | 2007-03-21 05:56:54 -0700 (Wed, 21 Mar 2007) | 1 line

The final thought before falling. The thought to remind self of why self is doing what it is doing. Why leap down and throw a flash light up\? ...Too stetch the know security flaw.

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r18056 | kalab | 2007-03-20 05:43:48 -0700 (Tue, 20 Mar 2007) | 1 line

While reading the beginning of the next chapter, I thought of the reason, which I didn't write, for calling it, the security system, stairs to heaven. I wrote why, which is because it is an endless staircase that will always go up and the only why to break the system is go down. I thought of this and the fact I need to begin detailing names as I once did and then I realized I probably misspelled heaven.

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r18054 | kalab | 2007-03-20 05:27:53 -0700 (Tue, 20 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from elevator ride, near the front of the chapter, slowly to end. I found some issues with a few words needed to complete a thought. A needed to fill in a grammar error or two. I didn't feel like I need to add more words to the end. I may take a few more away. Even the space I like. I will probably read the end on more time for the sake of knowing the words that are could remain and become the words that be.

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r18036 | kalab | 2007-03-19 17:55:46 -0700 (Mon, 19 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read from the beginning to were the last edit and write was to add the fan revolving before the light as Dick steps from the cube that went down. I added more definition of the door and the dust to add needed thought and detail. The cough I improved...I think. I may not have improved, but I like how the scene read and I may begin reading the words as Dick leaves the elevator. I think the thought is what is needed, I added more, but if any more is needed it isn't too much. I remember writing these words not to long ago and remember the flow I wanted then and I want now. The words I did like.

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r18032 | kalab | 2007-03-19 05:49:24 -0700 (Mon, 19 Mar 2007) | 1 line

I read about two pages of the first words. The grammar edit is to show that this is a new chapter and new frame there for the dialog and thought marks are new. Though this rule is optional for chapters this chapter needs to have the new beginning of internal and external dialog marks for it is a new record. The words I read I like. The words read well. The carry the pace and they bring up the pace.

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r16936 | kalab | 2007-01-30 17:49:20 -0800 (Tue, 30 Jan 2007) | 1 line

There are words that will probably need to be added to this chapter to complete it, but for now the words that I have read from the beginning to the end of the end reads of words ready to be edited for the final edit. The chapter feels almost complete. There may need to be a few more visual details, but I think that the record is the record of Dick being recorded during his climb to break the security. ...Some of the seelog was edited because it was not natural for Dick's mind that is not too focused on article or complete and full sentences.

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r16911 | kalab | 2007-01-29 18:05:22 -0800 (Mon, 29 Jan 2007) | 1 line

Read where written. The edits. The words that need to be written are few. The fow is good. Dick will run up the stairs for he just want to move to forget, and he wants to continue on with the path that is before him for him by him or to him. The puppert is really controlled by everyone including himself. The puppet of Dick. The words will walk the stairs. The thoughts of whose to blame to of course continue to define Dick as a true citizen of United States of America. The climb to the top. The climb to the bottom. Dick walk because walking the path is life.

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r16878 | kalab | 2007-01-28 15:41:09 -0800 (Sun, 28 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The edit of the action as the action has been shown. The write of the events of Dick going down and down. The pack on back for dick is not needed to drap, and Dick will now be walking from the cube. The scene of the stairs altered by deleting the sentences of events of Dick of another story that is not this one. The chapter read to be nearing completion. I will probably write more words for description of the chapter during the read focus and edit. The words to read, and I like the story when read. I did not read from the beginning of the chapter this write, so I will need to rely upon memory of what as been read and the memory is at least good.

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r16844 | kalab | 2007-01-27 06:22:33 -0800 (Sat, 27 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The words from top to bottom. The thoughts of Dick going down. Dick commanding the elevator with God like power for he is commanding with mind and going down and down and down into the depths of a hell or a heavan. Dick knows not, but Dick is going into the womb of America. Down and down and down and down and down Dick goes for he may know. He may known becaue he may have and is creating everything.

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r16827 | kalab | 2007-01-26 05:38:57 -0800 (Fri, 26 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The write in elevator first. The read and the edit began with the coughing. The read and edit and write began around the same sentence where last wrote. The words wrote to finding the code to clear the air. The thought is he is a Detective and finding command is a form of detection. Dick getting naked was moved to inside the cube because the clear air moves the nakedness into the cube. There is also some sort of metaphor or trope I can use to further define the story Dick connecting with the womb of America. I thought of maybe having the cube, in Dick's mind, when the door first opens to define the cube as the size of the closet in office. Hmmmmm...that's a trope...that's a vague something. ...The stairs will only have some counting. The steps and the description will be more words than thought for as I read and edited and wrote the words near the nead while climbing the stairs I realized how long it should take Dick to reach the top of the platform because of his damaged lungs.

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r16811 | kalab | 2007-01-25 17:48:39 -0800 (Thu, 25 Jan 2007) | 1 line

Thoughts and words I think of writing for the slow going down. The thought will be long and the description needed. The thought focused yet distracted. The thoughts of Dick are coming, but are coming slow. The descrition found, but more is needed to show the focus and the chaos, and how quickly both change in an instant. The thought switches.

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r16800 | kalab | 2007-01-25 05:44:59 -0800 (Thu, 25 Jan 2007) | 1 line

There needed to be light. There needed to be less movement for Dick is a big being and doens't need to move much to reach the sides of the cube. The World will calm and the thought will focus upon the situation and the time the reason why Dick is in the cube. The realization that there is a feeling of a need to know and help and solve a problem that is beyond Dick. Dick is a detective afterall. The light has been added, the coughing and reaction to environment improved.

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r16780 | kalab | 2007-01-24 05:36:40 -0800 (Wed, 24 Jan 2007) | 1 line

The slow read and edit. I began with the beginning. I read, I focused. I wrote. The edit of the move of words is needed for Dick will not be naked until after he is out of the cube. I am also thinking of just replacing all description, word, elevator to cube thus editing. The words do read, but some does need to be written. I now remember this is going to need some writing, which I am happy to do. I am wondering how graphic to be about Dick's naked body beyond thinking he should do sit-ups.

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r16754 | kalab | 2007-01-23 17:47:38 -0800 (Tue, 23 Jan 2007) | 1 line

There will be no A.I. Detective ever made for Dick either doesn't need to or isn't thinking. It. He either has planned in advance to create the A.I. Detective after the input or doesn't know there is an input. The thought removed, the words read from first to sentences near the edit last (if the beginning of the file is firs) of page. The words read well. After the last edit I look up cyanide on CDC website and read the site again. More thoughts of the book. I did think of the last chapter for a few minutes during the final minutes of the read, edit, write of this file. The words to have some flow.

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r16745 | kalab | 2007-01-23 05:48:09 -0800 (Tue, 23 Jan 2007) | 1 line

I read the first and scanned read the the lenght just to see form. It was while writing the later chapters that I found the form of the book for I do not believe this chapter will be difficult to edit or complete writing. I read the end to know where it ends. It ends with the fall, which is good. The chapter is more than I thought it would be. I will need to write if all the comments I have made are an indictation of what has not been created and is thought to be created. ...The sentence removed becaue the entropy core is already against the door. before Dick reached the door. The action out of place...now.

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r15614 | kalab | 2006-12-15 17:26:42 -0800 (Fri, 15 Dec 2006) | 1 line

A thought while typing the words and thinking how once Dick is behind the elevator walls is the place for him to begin to write the A.I. Detective.

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r13929 | kalab | 2006-10-08 15:56:06 -0700 (Sun, 08 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The look through the bag the frist time. This instance may occur again in the prior chapter before, or before the door is opened.

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r13928 | kalab | 2006-10-08 15:39:10 -0700 (Sun, 08 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The end of the chapter now written to complete the build up of the breaking of the security system. Dick needs to search the back in elevator while searching for a gas mask which isn't in the pack. Dick needs to build up the sweat after the run up the stairs through. Dick shold also be reading and thinking about the obvious state of the environment to avoid thinking.

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r13905 | kalab | 2006-10-06 17:07:12 -0700 (Fri, 06 Oct 2006) | 1 line

SO... The thought is the answer to the question of why Psycho is not abosrbed or recognized by the nano machines as they leave the elevator. I figure the reason why is that Psycho will not only be in bag preventing direction conection recognition, and because it is in security system mode. The security system is old.

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r13875 | kalab | 2006-10-05 18:53:55 -0700 (Thu, 05 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The action of the push to be remembered for a later write.

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r13874 | kalab | 2006-10-05 18:51:37 -0700 (Thu, 05 Oct 2006) | 1 line

Some of the contents of the pack Dick gets from Psycho. Dick should leave all the items on the floor, kicking them to the wall.

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r13828 | kalab | 2006-10-03 21:22:01 -0700 (Tue, 03 Oct 2006) | 1 line

Words to begin to define the chapter. I still do not know what will be in the pack so Dick can fool the security system. Overwhelm it with action. The idea is that Dick will toss some thing up while falling to not only hope the theory of nano machine holding something through up to complete the illusion is true, or at least will push the nano machine A.I. to its limits.

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r13764 | kalab | 2006-10-01 14:00:24 -0700 (Sun, 01 Oct 2006) | 1 line

More story line to define the chapter. The end read and the change of the last sentence to give focus to the action. More thought of the nature of the staircase. The need to go down up and down.

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r13763 | kalab | 2006-10-01 13:51:49 -0700 (Sun, 01 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The body of the chapter for the descent planned by plotting the action and the focues. The thought helping form in my mind the image and sounds with the words. The words a guide for more words to begin the thought. The know of what happened.

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r13756 | kalab | 2006-10-01 09:30:21 -0700 (Sun, 01 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The words to make the the chapter filled with words. The thought of Dick and his loved ones and their states. The other words more to begin define the test Dick does to see if the staris are nano-machines. The words removed were removed for they were not needed.

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r13755 | kalab | 2006-10-01 08:46:42 -0700 (Sun, 01 Oct 2006) | 1 line

The sentence was from the previous change and the next chapter and moved because the state of falling and writing it and recording in the record here adds to the tension as everyone knows what happens when on falls from great heights.

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r13753 | kalab | 2006-10-01 08:37:34 -0700 (Sun, 01 Oct 2006) | 1 line

Words removed because they were words that eithr made seelog read like it is a bad script and too obvious for thought. The words removed because the sentence not needed. Word written to add teh description of Psycho's core.

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r13740 | kalab | 2006-09-30 15:45:01 -0700 (Sat, 30 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The walk up the stairs will need some point of inspection of location, some event that shows how people try to convince themselves they are going the right way when they are really going the wrong way. The words added to begin th thought of the walk up. The stairs better than whay was written. I need to make the beginning floor gratted too.

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r13739 | kalab | 2006-09-30 15:13:01 -0700 (Sat, 30 Sep 2006) | 1 line

A few more words to even the flow. The reading up to the last word wrote beginniing with the beginning. The removal of the lever is needed for the pressure of the closed door and on the bottom of the elevator activate down. The elevator will be plastic on the inside and lead or something that will help protect one in the elevator from nuclear radiation. The magnatism is what makes the elevator go down.

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r13738 | kalab | 2006-09-30 14:33:17 -0700 (Sat, 30 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The door knob is useless, so it is to be removed from this chapter and the next chapter.

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r13722 | kalab | 2006-09-30 08:59:59 -0700 (Sat, 30 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The sentence add was a sentence of the last chapter. The words read and the words bcoming known. The first sentence does read better with the door being locked at the end of the last chapter. A thought of a citizen of U.S.A..

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r13171 | kalab | 2006-09-10 15:44:46 -0700 (Sun, 10 Sep 2006) | 1 line

The edit of chapter name from Hex to Binary. Binary is the state of the World.

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r12288 | kalab | 2006-08-24 18:07:57 -0700 (Thu, 24 Aug 2006) | 1 line

Thoughts of something I had thought after wanting to write of the hissing sound heard today while walking hte read stairs. That thought may be written, but I opened this file and read and then thought of something I think I had been thinking on the walk home from the second job today. That thought being that it would be best and leave the story more open to interpretation of the motives of Dick.

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r11789 | kalab | 2006-08-02 17:55:11 -0700 (Wed, 02 Aug 2006) | 1 line

The chapter now has less repition and repeating action. The thought needed are thought nad need now be written after I read other words and think of these words to write. The path down will be easy to complete. Now I need only think about the climb up which I have thought about just about everytime I walk up the stairs ot work with anohter other than Word ProstituteTM

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r11748 | kalab | 2006-08-01 05:29:29 -0700 (Tue, 01 Aug 2006) | 1 line

A read and some edit. The glass comes from the light in the ceiling aboove. More something may not be needed. Maybe. There are the doors for the other offices and services of the K Street S.S. building.

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r11442 | kalab | 2006-07-19 19:03:09 -0700 (Wed, 19 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Read and write. Thinking of the riddle near the end and why Dick revives Psycho. For help with the key to open or because Dick believes he needs Psycho\? The words read seemed okay. I began with the first and read and liked it. Read to here and saw the space so I wrote the words. The words do contain a few more I's than I like to read and Dick should be defining.

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r11226 | kalab | 2006-07-12 05:54:21 -0700 (Wed, 12 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The words written as the need to be. They read well. Words written inhanse the story and create what is seen. The site is there. I had the thought of how the G5 killing machines would be fueled. The depot maybe has a tube to transport only the core and not the body up and down. I will need to think to include with C. The thought of having Dick know of an entropy scan and has studied thema and is driven by the chance of seeing an entropy scan, and also knows, believes, that thinkingof Entropy Scan's is likely a key for the Capitalists and the Government to trigger an automated distribution of the event to the human agents of the case.

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r11056 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:34:28 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

The files of the chapters of the detective store forked from mail file and edited to contain only the words for the chapter so more words maybe written and honed and focused (read, written, editted, published) to complete the story and create a book.

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r11053 | kalab | 2006-07-07 21:09:43 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Chapter D. The chapter to begin to complete the tale of The Detective Store. The chapter to begin to help show to a process how to complete a book. The file to be the data of Chapter D to flow from and with all the words.

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r11037 | kalab | 2006-07-07 18:20:09 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

More thoughts of framing the frame from thoughts of the day. I also decided it should be may and that I need to branch the file now.

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r11030 | kalab | 2006-07-07 06:12:12 -0700 (Fri, 07 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Read and edit. Edit and read. Read and edit. The thought and the comprehension of the first words reading like words of a book. The files need to be split and moved to Words. If my head was not so distant and numb with alcohol, I would have have branched this file today. There is tomorrow.

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r10968 | kalab | 2006-07-02 20:54:59 -0700 (Sun, 02 Jul 2006) | 1 line

Thoughs had about an hour ago while walking up an incline. I noticed when I focused on the horizon the back ground sort of bouced as did the foreground. There is of course the metaphoric qualities of the sentence. The sentence was written last after reading and wrijting read for the location to write the sentnece. I need to branch the file, or fork the file, Maybe I will do that tomorrow. It is gettin gbig and difficult to manage, and find a focus.

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r10920 | kalab | 2006-06-30 05:45:36 -0700 (Fri, 30 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The question of Government wanting to have Dick put head in the Entropy Bowl is something I have written about and thought about and given some ofthe purposes of the writing, to learn, express and provoke, liberty to add in ideas and questions in the story form. I thought after writing the words at the end of the story and thought about how to write the turning back on of Psycho after Psycho has been fueled. More thoughts here and there but reading and writing began at the top fo the page, then I had an idea for for thoughtlog or seelog (not dialog) at the end of the story to reason why Dick resons to stick head in bowl.

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r10907 | kalab | 2006-06-29 20:52:38 -0700 (Thu, 29 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Reading, writing and editing. The words are actually writing where they need to be written. The addition of why The Story begins were it does is because Dick says United States of America and that is one of the keywords used to begin the reading and recording of Dick's mind Of course, because the Government is reading and recording it does not mean they are listening.

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r10899 | kalab | 2006-06-28 23:00:35 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

The thoughts still need to be more smoooth in the flow I read prior, chapter 3. The actions to test the make of A.I. is what will be. Fun thoughts. The thought after 2 need to be refined, as do the rest of the thoughts.

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r10889 | kalab | 2006-06-28 18:20:45 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

Thoughts of how to make Dick more of a motive of how and why he hides the thought. Does he just hide it because he can\? Just a thought I have been having about the motive of Dick wanting to access...Or maybe not so much the motive put how to hide the desire. Does he purposuly slipt and think at times of his own desires to access the information and doesn't care if the government is reading his mind and is also figuring that the thoughts alone will or may trigger an alarm for the Government to arrest him. So the thoughts need to be some how written of Dick seeing that he wants the data to see the data and to warn the Government of his plans and alert the Government by hoping the thought filter will see his desires to help a G5.

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r10879 | kalab | 2006-06-28 06:01:52 -0700 (Wed, 28 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More reading and editing and words and story. More refine ment. The thought read to be better. Time will define if it is. New thoughts and inventions for books a complete.

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r10854 | kalab | 2006-06-27 17:42:23 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

More wwords and reading and editing. The thought of how I wrote Psycho to read Dick's mind will be used until Psycho can read and write to Dick's mind.

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r10851 | kalab | 2006-06-27 06:32:18 -0700 (Tue, 27 Jun 2006) | 1 line

I do beleive I have almost written chapter ones flow and thought process and trail of thought. Reading and editing and writing. The thought flow of dick almost a flow. Time is near to separate into Words and write a book. The Strobe weapon was something that I just though of. This after editing syber scan. The edits beyond 1 are what I did last as when spending a few minutes reading around. I read I need to get rid of I's.

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r10832 | kalab | 2006-06-26 06:06:48 -0700 (Mon, 26 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words read of the first of the files for the files ls long and won't be split (maybe) anytime soon. The first of the chapter was read and some editing and writing done. I am still writing for the flow of the narrative and the story. The thought almost the flow and style for Dick. Psycho and the voiced of inidividuals more delveloped, I believe, but could be read as bad if the first doens't define the narrative in a way to entertain and maintain reading.

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r10816 | kalab | 2006-06-25 10:14:39 -0700 (Sun, 25 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading. I Am lost in what I need to write for Dick to come to the understanding and reason for doing anything. The malfunction reason I thinnk I have written, but it is lost in a lot of repitious dialog that may be needed, but if used should better framed and more natural even for two being trained to control their actions and thought. The file needs to be split so I can begin to define words as chapters and with chapters further focus on the words to define the book.

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r10811 | kalab | 2006-06-24 20:38:26 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

MOre reading than editing or writing. Mind is somewhere.

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r10781 | kalab | 2006-06-24 11:30:59 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Mustange and Dick depart. Mustang will be captured by the U.S. Government and thrown in confinement when Mustang leaves Larry's Fajitas and goes to the Government for help. Need some more thought, more discription of hte house for the characters.

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r10778 | kalab | 2006-06-24 10:27:08 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the departure of Mustang for the apartment. And some removal of excessive Dick sucking.

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r10775 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:18:42 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words of Mustang getting on the job.

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r10774 | kalab | 2006-06-24 08:01:51 -0700 (Sat, 24 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of finishing the reason for Psycho's transformation had inspired thought. The words written more to create reason and a reasonable story of how and why Psycho is before Dick.

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r10754 | kalab | 2006-06-23 18:15:04 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The thought of the day thrust to page. A expulsion of agression through words. The story of how and why needs is on its way and is almost there. Need create a logic reason and alos a reason to caste the ignorance where it should be caste. Need more description, more sound, more taste, more sight, more touch. Where are they at. NEXT TO A CLUB. Things more about the tought and aremember to build upon them and bring them back up and go off on tangents and think of odd things one thinks of. Remember this si a A.I. Detective thought though, so he has control over his mind.

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r10743 | kalab | 2006-06-23 05:53:08 -0700 (Fri, 23 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I wanted to read, edit and write the reason of how Psycho thinks he found life, but I could not find the passage for there are too many words to read to find the words. I instead read and wrote the third and departing chapter. More ideas for time and peronality and movement. The thoughts need to be more often and the thoughts written need to be edited so they are fragments like thoughts.

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r10727 | kalab | 2006-06-22 17:54:03 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read areound trying to find the part in Chapter 2 or 3 I was writing. I become lost a couple times and just read and edited what was read. Most the time, of course, was used to write the words for chapter one. Upon the writing of this log I realize I really need to branch and begin inidividual chapter files.

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r10715 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:55:48 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing and writing of the last of chapter 2. The chapter needs more reading and writing, but is flowing ot chapter 3.

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r10714 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:46:40 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words for the Third chapter are better than the words the replaced. The words connect the flow. The flow still needs to be read and edited. I may need more words and questions, but that can wait for the next chapter after Psycho reveals self.

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r10713 | kalab | 2006-06-22 05:29:17 -0700 (Thu, 22 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

These words where written yesterday and where timed but needed to be transposed to novel. Theses are terms the military are teaching the public. Any more of these terms heard will be written downn and used.

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r10698 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:58:20 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to and for the words for the definition and introduction of Neuro. What was written is what I like to read. The grammar fitting.

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r10697 | kalab | 2006-06-21 17:22:59 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing of the frist chapter and trying to find the follow for the grammar.

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r10679 | kalab | 2006-06-21 06:03:55 -0700 (Wed, 21 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit of chapter one. After thinking of on the walks to and from work in short spans during long spans of random thought I choose to not time, I have thought about the use of the somantic and telepathic mark and realize I need to not use the mark as I had. I do now understand that the paragraphs are what is in the long term memory or a part of instinct or conditioning. Look at the crowd could be used as crowd description. Some conditioning is thought and that conditioning needs to be shown and to shown as something that though conditioned needs to be focused.

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r10664 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:42:17 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. I think this will be a week of reading and editing for the file is too big and I woul like to read and edit and think to see what exists and what doesn't. I like what I have read sofar. Lessing use of I is always good. If not good then better for Dick is not a selfish. I have had some thoughts about the end and how it maybe during the rebirth of Psycho, Psycho could become a G5 killing machine again, or Psycho could have been a killing machine all along and was ment to kill Dick because the G5 killing machines and perfect its killing ability so well it wanted to see if it could convince Dick to kill himself. Though this will never be defined, these possibilities need to be thought by Dick. Thought of Dick and the grammaredit will be easier once file is files..

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r10663 | kalab | 2006-06-20 18:11:42 -0700 (Tue, 20 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The Detective Store Synopsis was read after I read chapters while in the Secure and Secrete building. ...The addition of the sentence was made after the synposis was read after the words of the Secrete and Secure Government building was read and writed and edited. The process all align. The synopsis I have found is a good way to find the right location for the good Hyper-Content of the day.

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r10612 | kalab | 2006-06-16 18:00:29 -0700 (Fri, 16 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The detective store write was inspired by today and the past days of hearing some much news that I now have a place to focus. The store and shapping the reason he lies and doesn't want to leave with out Psycho needs to be defined with more detail as the words are written. I am thinking of changing the name of Benjamin Franklin. I know not what the name would be. A name more sympolic maybe\?

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r10598 | kalab | 2006-06-15 18:10:20 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I found myself reading and editing the first chapter then began to read and edit the third which is where I want to edit. I read mostly, to remember and now i do I can almost see the grammar use of Word Prostitute Grammar.

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r10597 | kalab | 2006-06-15 17:39:07 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I read the last half of the synopsis and the first of the book adn thought of how see for seeing for sight. There needs to be some more thought. I need read and write someother part of the book to find that thought.

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r10587 | kalab | 2006-06-15 06:02:00 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The chapter edited will be the chapter I will read and edit for a bit. it is one that needs to be read and edited. The direction and action thought. More description needed. The story exists to write and I will and so I will.

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r10586 | kalab | 2006-06-15 05:45:29 -0700 (Thu, 15 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I am trying to make an effort to write, but I shouldn't be writing the end. I want to write somewhere else for the end is something I need to think about more and how best to write to it.

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r10559 | kalab | 2006-06-14 06:01:13 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I feel good writing near the end to fhe chapter before the non-human energy draining elevator shaft.

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r10558 | kalab | 2006-06-14 05:48:28 -0700 (Wed, 14 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Of yesterdays thoughts, The addition of God to those that control D.C.. The continual integration of the feel and see and think. I am happy I don't need to mark everything and that feel is now defined. I need to write and read on to other chapters so I may forget and reread the first of book. Valerie hasn't said anything about The Detective Store exept with words in an email saying she received the file. I haven't asked if she is even reading it. She may. She may not.

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r10543 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:23:57 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read around, mostly end. Reading for a place to write that is not the first two chapters. Maybe chapter three. I do need to split the files. The repository may be translated this weekend.

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r10542 | kalab | 2006-06-13 17:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The frame of see and feel thought of during the walk to work while reading Lassivyous aloud the words feel as you feel and then stopped read Lassivyous and thought of The Detective Store and how to frame feel for feel should how to define what is now a non-marked paragraph, the narrative, what you feel. The feel is now frame for The Detective Store and for Word ProstituteTM GrammarTM.

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r10531 | kalab | 2006-06-13 05:54:03 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and thinking about the changes made last night to express everything with the somatic marks. I like the way it reads but where to d seperate. Do I separate when Psycho enters, another being in the area of the feeler. How does the mind read work\? When to use the mark\? Questions, questions, quesions, Need to think about this while walking or as a thought of the day for I need to know how to mark words.

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r10520 | kalab | 2006-06-12 20:19:20 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I think I have found the way the words will be written for the A.I. Detective. The words of the first chapter have been marked with the grammar and the words to define to write the words the way the Detective store is to be written for it best define the form of the Detective Store. I wonder if Valerie has read The Detective Store yet and if not I may have her read this one...actually I may not. I don't know. This is the first time I have actually thought to think if Valerie has read any of it yet. I don't think she has for she has been wanting to finish the book she is reading now before...anyway, I 'll ask later to find if she has read the words yet and if not I may send her this revision so I can get her opinion on the grammar. Maybe...Maybe not. We shall see. I do like what is wrote and how it is wrote and find it should be written that way for it is i an A.I. Detective.

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r10509 | kalab | 2006-06-12 18:03:09 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Further reading and edting and writing to make the thought trained but still like real thought and not some narrative of a book.

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r10501 | kalab | 2006-06-12 06:04:17 -0700 (Mon, 12 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Thought of what needed to be written. Read here and there. Edititng the Grammar the words. Thinking of why Richard and Betty don't know (or reach) to the Government knowing Psycho nad Dick's exact loation. It think the go to the building to help protect it (and to fuck).

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r10480 | kalab | 2006-06-11 20:17:20 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Some more thoughts. An effort to write The Detective Store for the third time today ends after only fifteen minutes. I need to write something other than the first, and that is something to begin in the morning. I will be able to write in the morning. Tonight I will tag the file of the revision after this commit and send the tagged revision to -v-. She wants to read it, just because she wants to read it so I will send it, but said to her that a smile or a frown is all she can reply with (for now for I could change my mind, but that will be noted when the change of mind (of action) occurs.

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r10470 | kalab | 2006-06-11 13:07:34 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and editing. The store of the reason G5 is not killing is and needs to be explained. To explain the actaul question/answers process will need to be defined throughout the store. I editing the words I think there is also the possible store line of wondering how a question is asked. Likely this will not.

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r10459 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:57:10 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words and reading of chapter two needs to continue to be the focus for the words are of the story and reason thought before the many rewrites of the syno[isis. The story of how the question became to question and create Psycho will need to be as honed an sharp as how it is described in the synopsis. More thought may be needed too.

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r10458 | kalab | 2006-06-11 08:01:03 -0700 (Sun, 11 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A first chapter that has been read and edited enough for now. The thought of Dick needs to be refined to resemble thought that is sort of random yet trained and orderly because the processes to create an A.I. Detective must be orderly.Lots of edits and reading with the commit. The words I suppose rady for another who just wants to read them and not edit them for I am not done editing the words of the first chapter. Nor am I complete with the writing.

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r10453 | kalab | 2006-06-10 19:47:11 -0700 (Sat, 10 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

REading and editing for Valerie wants to read and I want to give her at least the first chapter.

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r10433 | kalab | 2006-06-08 18:54:56 -0700 (Thu, 08 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the store with the vision. I thought more of the why and thought of symbolism of having Dick naked and keeping Dick naked. I also thought more of the why which is something that I will, may, want to work on before the files become many, which I hope to be next week.

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r10425 | kalab | 2006-06-07 21:39:14 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Words to ready for the fall.

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r10410 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:57:46 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Think the thought of free thought now that Dick thinks the Government and Psycho can not read his mind.

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r10409 | kalab | 2006-06-07 05:50:57 -0700 (Wed, 07 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Trying to find the thought of Dick. The thought of Dick will be more for there is not a nother character or charcters or people for Dick to control his thoughts. Dick doesn't want to control his thoughtws anymore.

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r10394 | kalab | 2006-06-06 18:40:11 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I have read and I have thought. More timing and more steps for the words to become.

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r10377 | kalab | 2006-06-06 05:48:40 -0700 (Tue, 06 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Read the last chapters. Skipped around. Edited.

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r10366 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:33:10 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A thought thoght on the way home. Writing Dick's thought process now that he is alone. is important.

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r10365 | kalab | 2006-06-05 18:25:43 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis reads good. Some coreections but nothing too serious. I like the end of the synopsis. The end is the end that the end the synopsis needs to be.

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r10352 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:55:56 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The nano machines will be the nuclear fuel depot, so Dick needs to thow Psycho up, which he does, to fuel Psycho.

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r10351 | kalab | 2006-06-05 05:40:14 -0700 (Mon, 05 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Write familar words. I scannned and read pieces of other chapters and read to the end knowinng that if I wanted to write anything more than two words this morning I would need to read the last chapter for it is in the mind more than the rest. The words are okay and lead to where the story needs to go. I need to know figure out where the nuclear depot is located. I was going to have nuclear depots along the section of walls, but I have begun to think have the nuclear depots in the wall is too easy. Writing the words won't take much thought, once the story and depot location is found.

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r10326 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:27:50 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words. Some of them feel pulpy. The words are satisfying enogh for a beginning of the chapter. I now am ready for branching the file.

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r10325 | kalab | 2006-06-04 15:01:24 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

A read and edit. I can't foget the backpack.

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r10299 | kalab | 2006-06-04 06:26:02 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot, for a time, about the back pack and the Entropy Core of Psycho. More words removed for there were either useless words or words to remind me what to write.

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r10298 | kalab | 2006-06-04 05:54:54 -0700 (Sun, 04 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

I forgot that I need to have a place where the G5 are drained, all machines are drained, of their energy some where on the way to the secure room. That place will be the elevator shaft for I had thought about it last when there was no elevator down.

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r10288 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:45:43 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than commited. To find the words that are a little better than shiyy, I had to read and stare at words and file (the manuscript, the draft, the words and space.

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r10287 | kalab | 2006-06-03 13:16:18 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Another write of Synopsis. More words that are needed. Read some aloud. Not much.

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r10282 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:55:04 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the thoughts again to clear the thoughts and think of other things while writing. The things thought were more thoughts into the conversation and then thoughts of how I will convince both the reader and Psycho that Dick trust Psycho. The thoguht of Dick will be interesting. The hole in center of room will be the Entropy input. I believe there will be holes in the walls labeled with the radioactive material sign to warn that they are nuclear fuel nodes.

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r10281 | kalab | 2006-06-03 08:42:50 -0700 (Sat, 03 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words written than will be save in this revision. There was lots of movement, but the movement was needed for the words now are better than the words then. While wriitng,I had the thought that Instead of having another separate room as I was going to have after this room, now that the room is hte size that it is I think I will have this the last room and not have another hence the words put in to say that the hole for the Entropy in put is found. I am still wondering if there shoujld be a riddle or some fun game to entertain the readers mind and make me seem witty (or try too). I think I will probably not have more games and have the talk of how Dick believes Pshyco and the Government are still one and believes that he was hired and everything else was a set up. Psycho denies the setup and says the Government wasn't paying attention or recording his mind because he is not a Global Terrorist Red.

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r10273 | kalab | 2006-06-02 17:57:38 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The words to begin the chapter I believe are found for now. Much better than what existed. Something to continue to write with the next couple days. I like the flow of the nano machines. The idea is good. I will have to thank A for this one. As I am now. Thank you for you comment Alex and suggestion of using Nano machines for now I will use them even more because rods are worthless and not needed and because you said -Make sure there are Nano Machines.'

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r10262 | kalab | 2006-06-02 05:53:52 -0700 (Fri, 02 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

The elevator descends. A few more words then it will stop at the bottom and at the secrete room. Not many inspiring thoughts beyond the words written. After reading a bit fo the first chapter and thought I need to write to remove some I's, the words read okay.

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r10251 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:57:38 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I am thinking of where to write next. I think the building room and the last chapter. As I hope to be converting the repository this weekend, it will soon be splitting the chapters and it would be good to have more of the story in all the chapters.

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r10250 | kalab | 2006-06-01 17:49:22 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More words on the way down. After a pile of G5 jump on top but can't penetrate the the elevator. I am feeling a bit blocked with words for the words weritten for this chapter during the past few days seem to be coming more and more jaded and seem jaded right now.

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r10237 | kalab | 2006-06-01 05:46:05 -0700 (Thu, 01 Jun 2006) | 2 lines

More movement down and down and down. The idea of the G5 coming down the shaft an old one but one just know remembered. The G5 will not break through the top of the elevator but will supply a few paragraphs of words and moments of time unil Dick exits elevator for security room with nano machines.

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r10222 | kalab | 2006-05-31 06:34:57 -0700 (Wed, 31 May 2006) | 2 lines

The bottom of the elevator is coming soon. I am running out of ideas for the elevator. I did read and have been thinking back to the reasoning for having the steel door and may use it as some magnetic device.

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r10201 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:27:35 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read okay. Will use these words now for the page for Word Prostitute. Too many thens are wat I mostly thought had issues. But not many issues.

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r10200 | kalab | 2006-05-30 18:19:44 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the elevator to the secure room. The lever scene shouldn't be too much longer. I still don't know what else will happen before the room with the nano machines that simulate a building in a room.

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r10185 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:42:31 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read of Synopsis. The words, I thought. read well. Added United States Government for the words needed. The reading flow of the synopsis, I believe found and written. The words sound. I can't wait to branch (with Subversion) the file to a single synopsis file so I can begin to create the short versions using the words written.

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r10184 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:29:37 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and an edit of the words to the secure room. More actions than thoughts, the words complete to show more store and define the existing scene with words. The words. There.

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r10183 | kalab | 2006-05-30 05:21:24 -0700 (Tue, 30 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words while Dick Stands and sees. I am almost able to seee the scene and the site that Dick and Neuro see. It is clear in mind, so I guess I am able to see because I am now able to find the words needed to show the site.

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r10167 | kalab | 2006-05-28 13:03:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

The additional adjectives are good. More name changes. After reading the synopsis, I decded the name Psycho willl remain.

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r10166 | kalab | 2006-05-28 12:59:14 -0700 (Sun, 28 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis read and edied. I like the flow and the words. It is complete, so now I need to translate the repository to Subversion so I can branch the files into sections and branch the synopsis file to the the various forms fo synopsis with the content. The idea is there. The tools need be available. I will need to do this after I archive image for space. Word Prostitute will have to create the process. Another idea. And a tangent that doesn't define The Detectivve Store but is hindering it from becoming.

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r10115 | kalab | 2006-05-25 07:21:20 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts and reading and editing and some writing. The movement down to the secret room and the secure room. The secure room is first. The elevator L-Shaped lever woun't go back up.

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r10114 | kalab | 2006-05-25 06:56:28 -0700 (Thu, 25 May 2006) | 2 lines

Here the words write after another read and edit and write of the Synopsis. I am feeling slow today, and still the words read, to me, something to be understood.

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r10098 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:46:43 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read around and edited while searching for the location to not he end of the creation of the process. The core process needs to occur on the bridge because Dick knows the Government scan is faulty and weak on the bridge so his mind is not read that well if at all.

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r10097 | kalab | 2006-05-24 05:26:47 -0700 (Wed, 24 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for the journey to the secret room. The elevator goes down and down and down and down.

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r10075 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:36:43 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the end. I was hoping to write to the stairs for they have moved. Down behind the steel door will be an elevator down which opens to a staircase up. The staircase is the illusion and nano machine staircase that seems so long but is on the size of a 8 x 8 x 16 room

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r10074 | kalab | 2006-05-23 18:13:25 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for end. Read. The words for end seem to fit. I am just finding I need to build up to it better. I also need to raise the question by asking the question of Dick a lot are you trying to kill us all to have Dick have a thought to say and think that is a habit, somethink he thinks and says often, but also to question the intent of everyone.

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r10073 | kalab | 2006-05-23 17:37:47 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit and write of the synopsis. Again, getting better. I think I may be ready to send to a paper publisher and or agent in a couple more months. The detail I added I liked.

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r10062 | kalab | 2006-05-23 06:20:20 -0700 (Tue, 23 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts I had thought during the walks of yesterday. I have been wanting to change the those words for some time but haven't the desire to read the frist chapter for some time. I have been having furn writing the other chapters. Today I tried to continue make all the voices of the narrative unique but similar to set the words of Dick and Narration are one but seperate.

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r10055 | kalab | 2006-05-22 06:19:32 -0700 (Mon, 22 May 2006) | 2 lines

reading the words of chapter 4, I am trying to get rid of the I's. The words seem to flow, and whille the body and mind a retired, I read and think of what to do to remove some of the I's. I have some thoughts. Need more thoughts and less I's.

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r10041 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:51:20 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

More spreading of the story line the creation of the code. More thought for the passages of time and urgency and and pace. I read all over and edited grammar.

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r10040 | kalab | 2006-05-20 16:07:53 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

To begin the creation of the A.I. Detective the story line has been created. Core I like better than Kernal and Shell may be changed to Persona. I like the idea of the construction as long as it doesn't over whelm the story or convolute the character or ruine the story by losing the reader. Simmple is good.

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r10039 | kalab | 2006-05-20 15:44:59 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor addition with lots of thought. To begin the thought I thought of where to place the thought, where to begin the thought and why the purpose of the thought. The thought is to include the thought Mark thinks when not describing. At the same time of the story he is thinking of an A.I. Detective and constructing and A.I. Detective. How does an A.I. Detective get created. That is something I will need t think of and create. I do know the additional story line could convolute and lose a lot of people, but if done right and if done while trying to actually create a BIOS for an A.I. and a Kernal of self and shell of a persona or character then maybe I can actually create an A.I. Detective. I have the words defined. Kernal, Shell, BIOS, RAM, ROM will all those fun indo European logic loops and syntax and mark.

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r10000 | kalab | 2006-05-20 07:30:09 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Editing chapter four has helped me decided how begin to frame and from not only the thoughts of Dick but also when those thought in narration should be marked and when the should not. I will mark with somantic marks when the thought is of the present, a short-term memory thought. The narrations that is not mark is the long term memory or passive memory or deep memory or what ever words need to be used to define that the memory marked is the memory begin thought not a memory begin remembered or recalled.

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r9999 | kalab | 2006-05-20 06:00:03 -0700 (Sat, 20 May 2006) | 2 lines

Writing the words to immporve the character thought and narration. The thoughts are sometimes too clear and coherent. The First Cha[ter thoughts, which a lot of the words are need to be less writer writing dialog for a charter which every word possible to define the words. I have the words, I just need to remove some of them.

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r9983 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:28:20 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

I need to consider the way Dick thinks and speaks. Is the voice of though good. Should every thing be a thought. I suppose objective description should not be marked. But these are still thought I have had while writing and editng the words read.

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r9982 | kalab | 2006-05-19 17:05:35 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and write of synopsis. It is good I have not read it for sometime for I now where the synopsis becomes a bit lost or could be more to the point. It is long. I should be able to shorten by removing paragraphs.

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r9976 | kalab | 2006-05-19 05:40:28 -0700 (Fri, 19 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read of the synopsis. The words read through. The words read through. The words written to better define and transition the paragraph.

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r9969 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:11:35 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some words for more of the words to for reason Dick continues. I don't know if there data will be erased or not. i will have to think about it. I think the data will be earsed or thought be erased leaving the reader to decide. Psycho says it erased it.

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r9968 | kalab | 2006-05-18 18:00:49 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though more paragraphs and sentences will be written, I believe I have the reason for the subject of recording thoughts is raised and answered by Dick leaving. I have in mind what will get Dick back with out making dick seem like an idiot or a sucker.

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r9964 | kalab | 2006-05-18 05:55:25 -0700 (Thu, 18 May 2006) | 2 lines

These words are written because I really want to and need to begin working on this portion of the story because It is now leads to one of the more difficult scenes. Which is actually what I am sort of writing this for, so I can also read and know the words when I write how Psycho convinces Dick to remain on the case.

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r9957 | kalab | 2006-05-17 17:38:05 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts and words and detials to make the scene a scene not a back drop to charater. I suppose I want the scene to be a character and the charater a scene.

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r9939 | kalab | 2006-05-17 06:01:46 -0700 (Wed, 17 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more words. The short story is becoming a book. Content and words are begin written at the end. I have the thought in mind. I will try to remember to write of the Security Room next tehen I will try to remember to write the walk to Larry's Fajitas. There is a paragraph which emotionally expressive and unique and while the words used are used to show emotion (Over Mustang's possible capture) and unique, the way the words are written should be used throughout the entire story. Giveing more character.

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r9920 | kalab | 2006-05-16 18:15:27 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the time before entering the Government Building. More words. Maybe not the words in line to write but they were the ones in mind.

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r9907 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:59:34 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

A quick read of synopsis and quick write and rewrite of words of the CVS log entry to the synopsis to begin and remember to write of.

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r9906 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:54:36 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scnene is coming along. I feel good about the choice to focus on it. The next will be the journey from Always to the Government Building then focus on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. I am happy with the name Psycho as it is an overall good first name for G5 and an easier name to write why it is Psycho for it is Psycho because when Psycho asked the question of name when question found and sought answer to question and once question anwsered Pycho ask the question. What is my name\? And asked the question to all the information using Neuro's actions to define the name and the word Psycho was returned.

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r9905 | kalab | 2006-05-16 05:06:58 -0700 (Tue, 16 May 2006) | 2 lines

Removing words for the words already exist and will be used on for a different scene if at all.

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r9893 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:08:46 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do like Psycho best to for it was a killing machine which is a psycho as psycho's are defined in pop culture and in some ways medical sience. Psycho came from some where. I think it came from Neuro and of the mind and and other word that is prefix like...

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r9892 | kalab | 2006-05-15 23:04:49 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Time ticks and Dick and Richard are saved because the Government doesn't want to kill anyone except Neuro and Dick. I didn't change the name to Pycho which i will do now.

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r9879 | kalab | 2006-05-15 20:45:18 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Those were fun words to write because they are jaded Media, art and every hope of dream of a state I hope never exists. I now need a riddle for the pulp fun of the story.

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r9875 | kalab | 2006-05-15 19:02:09 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The work and the time. The work and the time. The wait in front of the Government building was an unexpected write. It is were I began reading. The read when well and the changes made and additions made were needed and a create change to the words as a whole. I am still wanting to change the name of Neuro to Psycho and think I will after I think of it more.

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r9869 | kalab | 2006-05-15 06:20:25 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

The fun to be had with ediitng the words. The words written are the last words read. Some where sometime somehow, I write well and then write with words I do not understand. As the thought continues, I think of maybe changing Neuro's name to Psycho.

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r9868 | kalab | 2006-05-15 05:58:34 -0700 (Mon, 15 May 2006) | 2 lines

Wrote the words to show the fact Dick knows his mind is being read. Read the words and edited when needed. There are some spots when Neuro and Dick talk of God I may remove for it is a bit much in my mind right now. Maybe I will leave in the active version and remove later\?

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r9844 | kalab | 2006-05-14 16:23:30 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

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r9843 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:44:57 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

Edit the quote and changed the mark to the actual dialog Mark after finding the editor eclipse could render a lower dialog mark.

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r9842 | kalab | 2006-05-14 15:25:01 -0700 (Sun, 14 May 2006) | 2 lines

A read and a few edits. This is going out tonight to -v- and A.

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r9825 | kalab | 2006-05-13 07:16:10 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

The lights in tunnel and how Dick throws the steel latch has inspired lots of thoughts of how to create the lock for the door by using motion and the lights to need to be triggered in an order. There will be 15 of the illuminating cylinder sections of the tunnel that Dick will have to some how find a way to trigger once the odred of how they need to be triggered is detected. The code will probably be on the back of Richards badge in Hex which will be a good way to introduce the story reader to hex for the riddle to enter the U.I.. Then I think: Riddle\? Or puzzle\?

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r9824 | kalab | 2006-05-13 06:18:21 -0700 (Sat, 13 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis.

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r9815 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:28:02 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the thought. The thought grows. The riddle for now a mystery with the cross.

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r9814 | kalab | 2006-05-12 18:23:55 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Deeper into the tunnel. I need a way, a key of Richards to get into the door, but what is beyond that. The cross. The cross will open the door. The fact G5 are attacking and Dick needs to go get the cross to enter the secret door. Have Dick get the key and the book.

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r9813 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:45:13 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Just when I think I am done with the synopsis, I read it slowly and I find that some parts probably only make sense to me so I need to explain like fact.

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r9812 | kalab | 2006-05-12 17:37:15 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

The thought getting into the scene. Now I can see the room and the tunnel going back. I think it wil lbe a long tunnel. A long tunnel and night more. There is the red button but the red button will close the tap so Neuro and Dick will have a half hour or so to make it to the tap as the G5 attack.

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r9789 | kalab | 2006-05-12 00:16:49 -0700 (Fri, 12 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and wrote the know of Dick having mind read by Government. I read areound reading for the words that says the government will disconnect the line when actually the government can't disconnect the ine for that is the reason for it begin a 24hr secret room of the government.

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r9788 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:42:54 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

I really don't want the comic Dick Tracy to be thought of when reading this. Maybe if Dick was working for the Government and not and a Private Dick but even the I would probably just use Sven with an umlaut. Mustang is good. It is a Hyper-Cognizant bounty hunter name which Mustang has become.

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r9787 | kalab | 2006-05-11 23:32:07 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Though I am finding it more difficult to want to read, i do believe the writing of the synopsis has been and educational experience. I have never spent this much time with synopsis with other books. figured the meeting was there. And while the meaning is in The Detective Store, This from now on, it is only becoming more meaningful with the creation of the synopsis that I can now further write and find the constaints to write with to complete the thought with words.

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r9778 | kalab | 2006-05-11 17:46:09 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

read, spellchecked, added, removed. Liked what I read. Will probably send to A and Valerie after one more read.

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r9765 | kalab | 2006-05-11 06:04:02 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading some writing. I ended with thought and words of the journey from Always and to K Street. This is what I will wriie now, I have decided, after reading and editing. This is now, what I feel, needs the most work with words.

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r9764 | kalab | 2006-05-11 05:35:43 -0700 (Thu, 11 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words removed and words added. The words added are simple and replication (almost) of words of the same sentence to complete the thought. The words overall read good and as soon as I can complete the synopsis without edit then I will send.

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r9752 | kalab | 2006-05-10 07:01:35 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words in a location inspired by reading the synopsis and the reading and writing of the Secure Government building. I have ways to write words for the scene. I need more of the scene. Too much thinking.

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r9751 | kalab | 2006-05-10 06:39:45 -0700 (Wed, 10 May 2006) | 2 lines

Few words. Some edits. More defined with not many new words.

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r9733 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:54:28 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read here and there. Don't know where to start. I think I will write the security room and the journey to the Government Building (as I have wrote before) I read all over just seeing where I am at and these two place are weakest, I feel now, with clearity and words.

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r9732 | kalab | 2006-05-09 17:40:40 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

Minor changes, additions, to clarify. The words read well as the Synopsis is nearing the time to be published.

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r9715 | kalab | 2006-05-09 05:56:02 -0700 (Tue, 09 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for another journey to somewhere. The roles caste now they must play out. The mass in Adams Morgan will be metaphor or an allegory of America bars...or something. I still haven't the thought down. I need to think that there is a stop sign and two lights before the mass of the club crowd, which is bigger than when Dick was in office. After the second light the car meets the mass. Maybe the car slowly moving through the mass of people walking and riding bikes is all the meaning the words need.

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r9709 | kalab | 2006-05-08 18:31:26 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

Somre reading and editing. The wriitng of the cab through Adam's Morgan was written after I wrote the Cab trip part where they talked about the Thought Theft. The thought Theft thought while writing as was the cab trip trail through Adams Morgan. I was going to go a different way.

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r9696 | kalab | 2006-05-08 06:10:02 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The words seem to be written with the synopsis. Now I need only find placement and sequence.

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r9695 | kalab | 2006-05-08 05:58:41 -0700 (Mon, 08 May 2006) | 2 lines

The scanning now something valid. The main and really only focus was on the words around the words written. I might look at the pictures this week. I need to find a path to follow Betty from Always. Betty may be with Richard or Eleanor...maybe all four will go to the Secret Government Building.

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r9684 | kalab | 2006-05-07 22:01:31 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Now more of the words of chapter six are becoming one flow. Now next time I can write from where I have been writing for a time. Having realized I am almost complete with chapter six, I have been thinking about which chapter to focus on next. I will probably focus on the chapter of travelling from club Always and following the Betty.

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r9683 | kalab | 2006-05-07 21:38:36 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of the synopsis. I was thinking of editing with the thought of sending the words to A and -v- but now that I add more I think I will have one more edit before I send and read again.

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r9639 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:43:19 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I love the thoughts one has when they just sit and stare at the words and read the words. Things like how to beat a government mind scan is a good reason why starring at the words is writing. With writing comes ideas, and ideas come from experience, and while it is not always best to record eperience for reference for later research of a book of words for I believe experience by memory alone is where they purity is at and I am a purist in some respects even though it could be that in the minds of many if many ever read anything I write they will thinking of me not as a purist. Where was I, Oh, yeah, the government brain scan.

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r9638 | kalab | 2006-05-07 04:05:32 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

More talk with Jo to define the nature of each character and to position Betty to see Neuro off in the distance.

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r9637 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:48:58 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I have thought for some time the desire to Betty and Eleanor arrive and the words of religon persuade Betty to let Eleanor in. I have been thinking about htis change for sometime, the change of changeing Richard to Eleanor. I did the change just to think about the passage more. It is likely that the characters for the role witll change back to original form but I want it to be this wy for now. I do believe I will leave the religious talk in stead of sex talk.

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r9636 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:34:51 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

I do not know why I had written these words. I must have cut and paste them. I am sure I can find out. The words are good, the ones removed, but misplaced. Why did I put them here (here being where the words were removed)\?

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r9635 | kalab | 2006-05-07 03:26:41 -0700 (Sun, 07 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of synopsis. I it must be getting close to being complete for I am becoming tired of reading it over and over.

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r9607 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:35:13 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More of a read and an edit for not much was written. The read and read of the synopsis. I believe it is all what it needs to read, and read, and read, and read, and read,

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r9606 | kalab | 2006-05-06 13:27:22 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the edit. Some words written. I am lost on where to go and where Dick and Neuro are and and what time it is. These things I need to know so i can write these things now so it adds to the tension later. Write the words on and on. I scanned the words and saw Kaleb Valerie some how tired to steal a scene by reading Dick's dialog.

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r9603 | kalab | 2006-05-06 12:43:20 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk. I need more sit or seeing and discription, which I am thinking may need to be framed. More words anyway. More to come.

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r9570 | kalab | 2006-05-06 03:22:36 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thought than words. The thought begin 'How to fuel Neuro\?' or rather 'How to explain how and why Neuro can be given fuel in the District of Columbia. More thoughts of the walk and how now that the reason is part of the story and not just part of the synopsis.

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r9569 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:58:55 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

The last words edited. I read by bring in all the words as eclipse doesn't wrap words. I read the ends of sentences and wrote words that are being lost because of the frame.

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r9568 | kalab | 2006-05-06 02:46:23 -0700 (Sat, 06 May 2006) | 2 lines

Some day I may be done, or near the words that I want to give, and give to Valerie and A to read.

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r9563 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:21:57 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Reading around and thinking. Doing more think and not reading or writing which isn't bad but the thinking is leading away from the words. Mind caught by sun light outside.

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r9562 | kalab | 2006-05-05 15:09:11 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

Lots of spoken words that need a scene to create an environment for writing. More reason to hurry the fuck up and nano machines. There will be more nano machines which will be described like this one. Nano machines are cool. A was right.

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r9561 | kalab | 2006-05-05 14:35:09 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

More reading and writing of the synopsis. I think it maybe complete soon.

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r9553 | kalab | 2006-05-05 03:41:18 -0700 (Fri, 05 May 2006) | 2 lines

The dialog was in the mind and so was the scene but it needs to develope. Trace will at Larry's Fajitas. Trace will nano machines to throw the G5 off his trail as he escapes.

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r9547 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:26:55 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Thoughts to words. Thoughts to words. More thoughts to come with those words.

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r9546 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:20:31 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More walk and talk. Maybe that the walk and talk with be about the fact the Government is in Dupont. I do not know if the Government will be in Dupont it was just an idea that may want to work in to the story at that point thereby making the role more intense. Maybe Neuro will throw off the Government with nano machines to throw off the Government and the Capitolists who are on following them after Dupont. Tace escapes we later find.

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r9545 | kalab | 2006-05-04 15:14:18 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read. I placed commas.

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r9544 | kalab | 2006-05-04 14:55:10 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and write and edit and read of the synopsis. I will probably send it to A. Thinking of A, after a conversation, he insisted one thing: Have nano machines. I sort of thought of the secret room ( the cube that can create stairs and rooms and doors because of nano machines, but now maybe I am thinking Neuro may have some, and needs some nana machine tools and weapons. The coversation was at Clyde's by what is now the Verizon Center atter he asked be what The Detective Store was about. That coversation also pushed mind to write a synopsis (hence sending it to A even if there are no words sent back). The convesation at Clydes did not last but a couple minutes

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r9528 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:23:47 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

Read and edit the synopsis. Wrote. The time is running out is probably optional.

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r9527 | kalab | 2006-05-04 03:13:59 -0700 (Thu, 04 May 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The story flows and some new character I have thought of having Dick more in the know of where and what of the K Street Place Secure User Inteface. Dick should know from working with the Virginia security firm and it makes less more in the know of what is going on with G5's and Government. I also thought of the need (and scene) to have (with) Nuero removing the chip in flesh of Richard to inplant into Dick. Dick by then is willing as long as it is clean and doesn't hurt either Richard or Dick.

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r9505 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:56:25 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Given the time, enough words have been written so I will be able to find the flow again and conitnue the conversation of life which will ends soon. I have transferred the images of the walk around Washington, D.C., but have not viewed the images yet. I may if I continue to write 6, which is writing better than I thought it would...so far.

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r9504 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:45:59 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Unexpecting words written for I was going to write at the end but then I remembered I needed to read the words to pick up the dialog after the events just written of. Now I shall try to write more words at the end of the section of 6.

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r9503 | kalab | 2006-05-03 02:23:05 -0700 (Wed, 03 May 2006) | 2 lines

Another read and edit of Synopsis. More words removed. I like the read better without the repetition of point. Less words. Less is more. As I read the words, I see the words as the 'Back' cover.

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r9497 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:16:56 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk and the path of Dick to Larry's Fajitas. I need to read the first of the chapter again so I can remember the conversation.

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r9496 | kalab | 2006-05-02 19:05:42 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Synopsis edited for better flow and because it needed to reflect the focus of the book on Dick not on Neuro.

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r9495 | kalab | 2006-05-02 18:57:34 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words of the walk I need to think about. Thought on a tangent for a minute after Valerie found a rug we may want to buy. Thoughts returned focused and found written the words and the description of cars and trucks. I thought of doing this type of scene but figure I'd wait. But now I figure why wait. Set the scene for the more of the book.

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r9476 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:55:35 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and images for the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The thoughts are okay and the dialog fitting. I am finding the walk a bit difficult thought not painful. I will try to remember to write this same part again for I have ideas but know the best ideas come when actual words are being written and not just thought of.

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r9475 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:40:21 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The walk along the way. The scene of the capitol. Dick walks along and realizes getting there maybe the hardest part of the job

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r9474 | kalab | 2006-05-02 15:12:58 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The synopsis edit.

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r9459 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:09:04 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit of the synopsis.

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r9458 | kalab | 2006-05-02 03:03:12 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

Words, words words words. Fun with the scene and the words. I words more sentences the read and editing the grammar then wrote more sentences. I want to read and edit the synopsis now for I feel I have written too much dialog and need to think of the environment beyond two entities. I also have only an hour or so to write.

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r9457 | kalab | 2006-05-02 02:26:40 -0700 (Tue, 02 May 2006) | 2 lines

I wrote a sentence and read and edited. I am wandering with the read and edit and may write in the same word area but may not so I commit. I have thoughts to about the book but I am not having them now and won't wait just go back to reading and writing and editing.

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r9421 | kalab | 2006-05-01 03:11:14 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

More words and more corrections. The words I believe will further better the story. The words are writen but not all are there. I need more detail of the alley and then the gliding scene. I am a littlworried because I may know the location I need to have Dick and Neuro glide to but I am not sure on the best route there. It is the one location I did not walk for there was rain and I suppose this sort of mystery in the search of the location is part of Detecting a story.

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r9420 | kalab | 2006-05-01 02:54:55 -0700 (Mon, 01 May 2006) | 2 lines

I read and edited grammar ending where I began to write. The words written are words written for what has seemed to become a theme, a story, of the section/chapter.

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r9409 | kalab | 2006-04-30 10:03:43 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More time spent talking with Travis and Mary and Valerie. The words written soon after time began. Now I will commit file and move on with words.

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r9396 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:04:59 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some reading and grammar editing. Brain flow slow so I will switch words. Need to think about what I want to write and will begin with next write session. What I want to write is Benjamin in drag. I may also look at the pictures for they are downloaded. If I do look at them I will note them as time reading The Detective Store.

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r9395 | kalab | 2006-04-30 05:01:06 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I began to think of this as I wrote the last data commited. I think Benjamin will be in drag, too.

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r9394 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:53:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The chair description is almost there. It could be complete but I won't think complete until it is read again. I should note the clean nature of the chairs. I will leaving it for now and see what my mind remembers. it remembers the words just written and the dialog to begin the talk between Benjamin and Dick.

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r9393 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:39:38 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words to define the object. The desk is another point of past and present reference. I need to actually think about the conversation that will take place after Dick is sitting in the chair at the desk.

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r9392 | kalab | 2006-04-30 04:21:40 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The weather will become hot and steamy before they enter building. The rain is working out well. Good idea, I must say even though it is mine so I should not be the one saying what it is. Or should I\? Yes, I suppose I should. I should be writing about the book. The book that now has only more, slight discription which is needed. I do wish I had walked around K Street while in D.C. this time last week. I want to write of club Always.

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r9391 | kalab | 2006-04-30 03:54:50 -0700 (Sun, 30 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar and read. Quick reads looking for grammar needs and stories and subject to continue through the story. I enjoyed what I read but I realize I will need to scene to detect and inspect.

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r9378 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:39:56 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Great idea the weather has become. While at first it was to show Global Warming and unstable environments now it will allow Neuro act out forgiveness and offer a minor protection to get away with lying or begin a nascent being for Neuro is a nascent being and doesn't know any better than to record all data against the will.

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r9377 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:27:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read to where I am at. The thought of completing the interaction with Benjiman Franklin. Funwords and a fun character to write. I still cant think of all the dialog but I imagine the dialog will be short.

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r9376 | kalab | 2006-04-29 14:08:23 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The temperature and environment while Valerie was kissing me. I had to say it for the half the time spent was me being rubbed and kisssed. I wanted to stop and have sex but she is going to make me wait unilt later. Anyway, I just need to say that I am horny. It does not reflect the words of this book in anyway. The temperature.

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r9375 | kalab | 2006-04-29 13:48:14 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The edit and flow feels better now. The synopsis, the back fo the book.

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r9343 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:43:58 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words and thoughts of the walk. I can't remember how many block it is from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle. I am thinking two, but it could be three or four. I will need the pictures. If more blocks then more words will be written.

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r9342 | kalab | 2006-04-29 04:01:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More writing. The thoughts of the area and the read and edit of leving Trace's apartment. The change of the name of Yasser for I read in the news this week or last that I want to spell it Yasir. Trying to see from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle.

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r9341 | kalab | 2006-04-29 03:38:16 -0700 (Sat, 29 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and writing the words of the dialog. The dialog is almost there. I need the sights of the pictures. I think I will download today and maybe use them for more words. I have thoughts of dialog and thoughts of this that for the sections where I wrote dialog. Everything else is fine in mind. The image in mind alone will finish the novel. The image I have yet to see will proved the setting.

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r9337 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:09:46 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Grammar edit.

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r9336 | kalab | 2006-04-28 16:02:03 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

And edit then write with frist dialog of Trace and Dick. The then an edit and read of next section. Read and read. Words where confusing where I edited last.

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r9335 | kalab | 2006-04-28 15:43:15 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

here are the words now. One read and edit of all the Elevator talk. The synopsis.

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r9324 | kalab | 2006-04-28 03:09:42 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I think, if possible, I will have the cap drive Kalormama to get to Always. I believe it to be possible, I have images but I have yet to look at them.

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r9323 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:54:26 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I randomly stopped and read and trying to edit grammar and added some words.

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r9322 | kalab | 2006-04-28 02:35:34 -0700 (Fri, 28 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

I read and started writing. I edited the grammar. Something I can reason now with and without the comma. I think of the words and have nothing to add or thoughts to include.

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r9314 | kalab | 2006-04-27 15:20:21 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

REad and edited and wrote. I like the word changes. The short term memory use was likely from something heard on the radio today while at work. It cam from some where and then the page for I was going to use then thought I should be more creative.

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r9305 | kalab | 2006-04-27 03:03:13 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The cab rides are always and the rides of cabs when in D.C. have helped me write. This is something I do not have pictures of. I just rode by myself but observed and thought what it is to be in a cab.

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r9304 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:45:34 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Of the walk but with no streets. The time of then is now. Walking and seeing the area. More action is needed. The dialog edited and may need to be edited more. I don't know yet if editing is need but will know next read. Next write will be after Larry's Fajitas.

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r9303 | kalab | 2006-04-27 02:34:04 -0700 (Thu, 27 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk before I look at pictures. I am thinking of the walk from the circle to Larry's Fajitas but the thought just isn't there because when I walked the route I was luck I found it without needing to back track.

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r9297 | kalab | 2006-04-26 19:01:06 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The Synopsis sent to A. Edit and wrote before sending it.

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r9291 | kalab | 2006-04-26 18:16:00 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Random reads and edits. Some sentences of the ....

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r9290 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:54:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

A thought of the walk across the bridge. Sounds sites. Now for the other where ever the other maybe I am sure there will be a few more words once I actually look at the pictures again. We shall see and we write.

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r9289 | kalab | 2006-04-26 17:37:05 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Read the synopsis. Will read and edit by sent to A. Read the first of the chapter a bit with thoughts. May read more.

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r9284 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:15:28 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some thought but not much. Thinking of sleep right now.

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r9283 | kalab | 2006-04-26 03:08:35 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More detials of the walk. The thought and the knowledge of the path is helping give the book some more definition and Dick some more character.

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r9282 | kalab | 2006-04-26 02:50:53 -0700 (Wed, 26 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More thoughts from the walk around D.C. that are now words on the page. I need to see the pictures for the streets, but I can now move on and thinking...

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r9267 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:39:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words of the walk. The grammar edit. I need to think of the embassy row walk.

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r9266 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:17:28 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The walk arcross the bridge as I remember the walk this last Saturday. I believe I have enough down to be able to write even more when I see the pictures I took which I will probably do in a month or two or three or when ever I am in need of inspiration.

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r9265 | kalab | 2006-04-25 16:01:46 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Edited the synopsis for clarity and read the first for flow for I wish to (as you will should know) want to hjave Valerie read it soon.

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r9255 | kalab | 2006-04-25 03:22:12 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

A thought of K Street which I did not walk to for there was a time delay so the thoughts are of where I remember K street to be at, but I could be wrong. Thankfully, I only wrote the words to definetthe wide side walks of D.C.. The buzz of water pumps may change if the K Street I know and love is not really where I think it is located, which is by the Watergate/Kennedy Center exit off Whitehurst Freeway.

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r9254 | kalab | 2006-04-25 03:10:50 -0700 (Tue, 25 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The elevator version, a synopsis. I did read a bit of the story after most the synopsis was written. More may be added but these words will withhold the need and desire to begin a synopsis after A asked me for the elevator talk version of the book at Clydes while we where having our first Bloody Mary. I said I was to deep into writing and hadn't though about it but after the talk I did.

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r9248 | kalab | 2006-04-24 19:20:47 -0700 (Mon, 24 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The read and edit for the words of the beginning of the book and the 1 Chapter. I think with words now flow better. I do think the talking with other and thought of the words of the weekend helped me focus to clarify the words read and written. The words are were they need to be. Or so I think I believe, I also added a few comas to help another thought of maybe adding the comma to the Word Prostitute Grammar. I have the thoughts from the walk around D.C. NW this weekend to walk the path of the book. The thoughts I have are in photos but are also in mind. The coming days I will focus, or try to focus, on writing specific details that are still in the thoughts of mind.

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r9230 | kalab | 2006-04-21 00:53:57 -0700 (Fri, 21 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

How Dick detects by the flow and patterns of Neuro's hover before him that Neuro is a ball of limbs. The words for the DNA story are begin written. Don't know where they will be going. I need to read and edit more for after reading and edting more I realize I need to read and edit more, but not too much. The words and scenes are what is good for now. The words, for the most part, seem mostly complete when written. It is, I guess, more a matter of Story change as I write and think and in mind and I need to read and edit so I can not only write the other pages but also write the words that need to be written so the story is logical.

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r9218 | kalab | 2006-04-20 15:28:07 -0700 (Thu, 20 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Reading and edit the words not read in a while. Words that need to be read and edited. Losts of thought and reading of the words from The Detective Store to P Street Apartment. I need to seperate the chapters so the manuscript may become a book.

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r9211 | kalab | 2006-04-20 03:40:36 -0700 (Thu, 20 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More edits than words. I may have read and want to get the words to Valerie of chapter 1. I My change the dialog of Neuro to talk and think in the third person. For example (seeing or saying): Neuro walked or I walked. Some but not all will be Neuro instead of I. The Neuro's instead of I's should be few but effective.

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r9198 | kalab | 2006-04-19 03:05:07 -0700 (Wed, 19 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The new beginning to chapter four is a chapter reader. The words were written after reading ad editing and some writing to new words of chapter B. I do think some how Trace will be Mustang and I thought of maybe Neuro begin Patho but like Neuro.

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r9193 | kalab | 2006-04-18 15:58:49 -0700 (Tue, 18 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The words are there. Larry will be in the Story. A better story and tell this will be with Larry as a character. Something thought of in the past hour with the focus of either removing larry and collage talk all together. This is better. Larry will be fun to write with.

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r9192 | kalab | 2006-04-18 15:31:59 -0700 (Tue, 18 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More talk at the table. Words move. I am wondering if Larry should be a character. I have been thinking of another name change for Trace/Sven to something of animal in origin. Probably a bird like Eagle or Falcon. Maybe Lion, Bear or Mustange.

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r9178 | kalab | 2006-04-18 02:51:37 -0700 (Tue, 18 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Questions on the way to Larry's Fajitas party created from what was there already and by editing and reading the first chapter which I want Valerie to read.

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r9150 | kalab | 2006-04-17 03:08:55 -0700 (Mon, 17 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The entrance into club is coming. The event from door number 2 was conceived now and while writing and reading and editing. I like the way the scene turned out. Or rather the additional data to create the setting and characters of an idea.

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r9149 | kalab | 2006-04-17 02:50:06 -0700 (Mon, 17 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words for the walk from P Street. No thoughts on much else of the story which are new or are more thought to have more thought and therefor not needed to be written. I am still thinking of the unique pattern in the Y chromosome.

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r9127 | kalab | 2006-04-16 11:22:32 -0700 (Sun, 16 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More of the though and the walk from P Street Apartment.

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r9126 | kalab | 2006-04-16 10:59:58 -0700 (Sun, 16 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Now I need to read the passage again and think of a riddle needed to open the door. Maybe I will move the time riddle to the door\?

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r9102 | kalab | 2006-04-16 05:04:52 -0700 (Sun, 16 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More reading than writing. I like what is read. There needs to be more reading and editing but the story and book is growing. Now I will only need to convert the Word Prostitute repository to Subversion.

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r9101 | kalab | 2006-04-16 04:36:11 -0700 (Sun, 16 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More of the conversation and the dinner which will be brief. The way they finish their dinners. Richard eats all of his food. Betty a quarter. Eleanor half. George eats only the meat.

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r9090 | kalab | 2006-04-15 18:54:56 -0700 (Sat, 15 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Some action, more dialog. These words are a good beginning. Maybe more, maybe less. The question is asked and needs to be answered.

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r9068 | kalab | 2006-04-15 13:16:12 -0700 (Sat, 15 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words for entering the club. Some final changes to Trace like Tracy. I don't know the flow to Benjamin. More words. No new thoughts. Need to write the DNA mapping of Y chromosone to story to make question overload.

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r9052 | kalab | 2006-04-15 04:00:04 -0700 (Sat, 15 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Entering the club to be in the club. More need to be added and the floors described. Entering on 4 will allow for a good flow to get to floor two and define the current atmosphere in the club.

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r9051 | kalab | 2006-04-15 03:17:29 -0700 (Sat, 15 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

More words of the record argument. The resolution is still being thought but there is something there. I need the scene. I have it in mind but I need to think or be there.

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r9038 | kalab | 2006-04-14 19:36:36 -0700 (Fri, 14 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

Thought I have been having about the need for a human to enter the YouI. The thought is more compelte and now has added more plot and tension to the story without overwhelming the story. A good ending point.

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r9037 | kalab | 2006-04-14 19:25:10 -0700 (Fri, 14 Apr 2006) | 2 lines

The talk continues one. The thought of maybe changing Betty's name was thought. Thoughts and mind with decide. I am not sure about the timing of the smile.

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