r30995 | kalab | 2009-02-22 11:05:33 -0800 (Sun, 22 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit to replace a question mark for the question mark isn't bad, but not what is wanted. Now I will check all question marks.
r30985 | kalab | 2009-02-21 22:26:09 -0800 (Sat, 21 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the use of unzip for the typ e of tool to pull the pants tight to lower body is not defined. I actually see this more as buttons or ties. Unfasten was used in chapter 0101, and I will remain constent, or try too, with the previous us and thought.
r30983 | kalab | 2009-02-21 21:51:14 -0800 (Sat, 21 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit because the window was already down, and it is. The sentence is not needed. Jo rolled down window when talking with Betty. He never rolled it up.
r30916 | kalab | 2009-02-16 23:46:34 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit chapters with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl and the new pattern.
r30913 | kalab | 2009-02-16 21:27:14 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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r30899 | kalab | 2009-02-16 14:15:24 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read the print version aloud. ...Edit to remove t-shirt from words for it is not on Dick's body. ...Edit to write a verb to a sentence that needs a verb. ...Read the print to the end and read aloud. ...Read diff.
r30875 | kalab | 2009-02-14 23:17:07 -0800 (Sat, 14 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud of the page. ...Edit the sounds length for following sentence define the duration enough. ...Edit K Street from some of Dick's thought for Dick uses K more than K Street. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30842 | kalab | 2009-02-11 23:27:30 -0800 (Wed, 11 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from some point in the story to edit the final print. I began were the meet Ash. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma. ...Read aloud to the end. ...Read diff.
r30822 | kalab | 2009-02-09 22:28:16 -0800 (Mon, 09 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud the print version. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma. This is not entirely needed, but I reason that it is best. Why not\? It needs to follow the standard. There is not say verb. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for I have made a similar change. This change is not really needed, but I have changed a comma for a period earlier, so why the fuck not. The verb is not a speaking verb, so I will change it. Read aloud print version to I open rear door, look behind. ...Read diff.
r30791 | kalab | 2009-02-08 14:08:55 -0800 (Sun, 08 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the word terrorist as it is a key word that changes the record, and Dick doesn't think it. I used checkpattern to again check all the keywords. This was the only change needed.
r30780 | kalab | 2009-02-07 23:54:10 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the use of semi-colons to be sure each instance is needed.
r30777 | kalab | 2009-02-07 23:06:19 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit to check for periods that could be commas for the internal or external dialog is followed by a verb using /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl.
r30773 | kalab | 2009-02-07 22:21:14 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit a comma for a period for a period is needed.
r30770 | kalab | 2009-02-07 21:59:23 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit the pattern of ellipsis and commas for internal dialog using /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl. ...Copy-edit a typo of a period.
r30766 | kalab | 2009-02-07 21:14:00 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit ellipsis for space. ...Edit one sentence using ellipsis to periods for that is the desire effect.
r30764 | kalab | 2009-02-07 20:30:24 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit to remove inner and outer from the description of the sidewalk ring for it is not only needed, but the perception should remain.
r30734 | kalab | 2009-02-03 21:20:03 -0800 (Tue, 03 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl for a standard use of desk top was found without the space twice in book. I want the space to be used for desktop without the space is a graphic interface term for a computer and not the top of a physical desk.
r30687 | kalab | 2009-01-31 23:37:41 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for there are two cheeks that are broken. ...Edit for the floor will not be defined as cement it is just solid for the record. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30684 | kalab | 2009-01-31 22:32:23 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit podium for podiums for there are three. ...Copy-edit many for may for may is the word needed. ...Edit Team Leader for how does Dick know. It is just Secret Sentry. ...Edit for Dick would ask and does ask if Psycho can stop the cyanide. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30681 | kalab | 2009-01-31 21:15:42 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for froward should be forward. ...Copy-edit space for some one to be someone for that is the current record standard. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30671 | kalab | 2009-01-31 14:31:51 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Read aloud and edit to Betty and I stand on curb.
r30663 | kalab | 2009-01-30 23:22:14 -0800 (Fri, 30 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit a period for a comman for the pattern needs a comma. ...Copy-edit for thumps to be plural. ...Edit for the door is open so Dick only pulls on the door. ...Edit to have third cycle be the subject for it is the cylethat Dick would be upset at. ...Copy-edit for there are many roofs with people dancing. ...Read aloud and edit to Bass and treble flow through mass. ... Read diff.
r30652 | kalab | 2009-01-29 22:47:41 -0800 (Thu, 29 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit a question mark for a comma. this is not needed. It would have worked either way, but I am reading aloud to edit, so... ...Edit to show thumps and show no thumps. ...Read aloud and edit to I open rear door, look behind. ...Read diff.
r30624 | kalab | 2009-01-26 23:11:26 -0800 (Mon, 26 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit to write the show of people eating hot dogs for that is what people eat near. ...Copy-edit suites for suits. ...Copy-edited for it rises is more wave like as in sound waves. ...Write more sound of movers for the moves more than chant. ...Edit direction for left works, but right is better. ...Copy-edit medium from median for it should median. ...Edit to write for to make the words spoke sane. ...Edit to have this use of offense and deffense be with s. ...Edit to write of rickshaws in sentence that defines them and uses them. ...Copy-edit for head should be heads. ...Edit for there was no verb. ...Edit to remove commas, but leave them. ...Copy-edit the s from spread for the verb is not needed. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.
r30614 | kalab | 2009-01-25 22:42:23 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit the apostrophy from the sentence for the possession conflicts with the prose read of the other words. ...Edit to write of movers shouts of because it has better flow of the words. ...Edit for I want slowly before exhale. This edit like the previous is not need, but I have edited this too much and now I am probably killing the prose for the flow. I do like it better. Everything is. ...Edit to remove the towel from neck and show putting the towel on neck. ...Copy-edit caps of thought. ...Copy-edit for upper case not wanted. ...Edit to steps feels to be strides and the incline is a decline for he is running down. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30601 | kalab | 2009-01-25 14:44:46 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for I want the dialog to have Killing Machine to be plural. ...Edit for I like bumps more than pumps for that sentence. Not right or wrong just feeling the flow with it. ...Copy-edit from minds should be mind. ...Copy-edit for two sentences are feeling beter now, but not needed. ...Edit to remove the lights and have Psycho just hover. Less is more. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30599 | kalab | 2009-01-25 13:24:01 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for I still want the possession of the lamps' for the mind hasn't found the prose yet. It will. This is just an edit of reading it too much. ...Edit for jeans for pants for jeans are a type of pant that is not plastic. ...Edit the off and on after blink for blink is enough. This is another not needed edit but less is more. ...Edit for flash for blink then think that flash is needed for it is more intense as it is ready to pulse. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.
r30591 | kalab | 2009-01-24 21:43:00 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit because I read of this subject have two verbs that conflict and stop the flow of the sentence. This is an edit I made when copy-editing dialog marks earlier, but it was erased after I wrote over the file during the diff by fucking up the command line command.
r30589 | kalab | 2009-01-24 21:20:56 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. No edits found. I removed white space to create a deltaof change.
r30587 | kalab | 2009-01-24 20:42:01 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. No edits found. I removed white space to create a deltaof change.
r30585 | kalab | 2009-01-24 19:48:25 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. Edit to remove white space to show change of file. No syntax issues found.
r30581 | kalab | 2009-01-24 14:07:20 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for syntax from beginning of chpater. ...Copy-edit a comma for a comma because it is needed. ...Edit a stare to a look is best. ...Copy-edit for a case is needed. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma where it is needed. ...Copy-edit syntax to the end of the chapter.
r30575 | kalab | 2009-01-23 23:01:59 -0800 (Fri, 23 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks. ...Edit to replace a comma that could be or couldn't be. I decided it could be. ...Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks to the end.
r30566 | kalab | 2009-01-22 22:10:25 -0800 (Thu, 22 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks from the beginning to end. I found no errors. I did removes some double white space between characters.
r30564 | kalab | 2009-01-22 21:12:14 -0800 (Thu, 22 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit the dialog and internal dialog marks of the chapter. Remove to unwanted white spaces to have change for this entry as not copy-edit were found.
r30553 | kalab | 2009-01-21 23:54:18 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for issues with internal and external dialog marks. No issues were found. I did remove some white space, so there is a delta to archive.
r30551 | kalab | 2009-01-21 23:30:10 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks internal and external. I found not errors. I did remove some end space from the file.
r30549 | kalab | 2009-01-21 22:56:36 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit internal and external dialog marks. There was one change that needed two. I changed it because the move was a group move so the dialog mark should not have been reset.
r30531 | kalab | 2009-01-20 17:08:01 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl to check the pattern of the keywords that switch the record.
r30518 | kalab | 2009-01-20 12:02:56 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with new revision of /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl.
r30512 | kalab | 2009-01-20 09:32:08 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit the use of twice for two because two fits the pattern. ...Copy-edit a comma for it is not needed. ...Copy-edit for the thought to what is space or nothing that the ellipsis. ...Copy-edit Kill 2310 for it has to close of numbers. I like the idea of items of one index not being of the other because of the pace and not seeing things. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30510 | kalab | 2009-01-20 08:31:10 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit for I liked stand right there. This is not needed, but... ...Copy-edit for the case of Gee Forty-three. ...Copy-edit a period is need to end a sentence. ...Edit to begin to show text as a sense, but only mention it this once. ...Copy-edit for a consistent, mostly, name of walls. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.
r30504 | kalab | 2009-01-19 22:01:34 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for there is another review mirror. ...Copy-edit for cannon has two n's. ...Copy-edit s for a consistent standard. ...Edit for a was confused with ceiling column. ...Copy-edit for a double is a confusing article. ...Copy-edit by writing a commma to separate subjects. ...Copy-edit for a comma is needed. ...Copy-edit for an at that not needed is. ...Edit the movement of George's head it is not seen. ...Edit for the sentence ended in a comma. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30500 | kalab | 2009-01-19 17:18:45 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for proper pronoun. ...Copy-edit because I feel a comman is what is wanted. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for the period is a needed end. ...Edit sentence that needed change. ...Edit to write of the smell of the fart for I want it. ...Edit article not needed. ...Copy-edit to cap V for it feels to be a standard of something. ...Copy-edit for possesion is needed. ...Copy-edit for periods are needed and not commas. ...Edit to better locat the blue stagecoach. ...Copy-edit for it is spoked. ...Copy-edit moves pace with all commas. ...Copy-edit for proper name lablel. ...Copy-edit and write complete words for stagecoach. ...EDit for backs not chests lift from seats. Both would work I suppose. ...Copy-edit for a comma. ...Edit for the driver is the mover. ...Copy-edit the case because I want. ...Copy-edit for a comma. ...Read aloud and edit to ,,That's a little odd,'' says George looking back. ...Read diff.
r30495 | kalab | 2009-01-19 11:32:47 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit write of the process hand shaking. It is the standard. ...Edit for the But is not said. ...Copy-edit for the S.S. to be what it is. ...Copy-edit another S.S. to be Secret Sentry and not Secret Service. ...EDit the words of lunch because i Have been thinking of these words too much. ...Edit for it is not conditional. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30493 | kalab | 2009-01-19 08:23:14 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit write of the process hand shaking. It is the standard. ...Edit for the But is not said. ...Copy-edit for the S.S. to be what it is. ...Copy-edit another S.S. to be Secret Sentry and not Secret Service. ...EDit the words of lunch because i Have been thinking of these words too much. ...Edit for it is not conditional. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30486 | kalab | 2009-01-18 22:48:27 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for weird is better. ...Copy-edit for it should be singular form. ...Copy-edit for window. ...read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30481 | kalab | 2009-01-18 19:03:30 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl.
r30475 | kalab | 2009-01-18 16:49:37 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for eyelids. ...Edit sentences of motion because Dick only need to roll to cause the pain. ...Edit really bad sentence. ...Copy-edit for leg is the standard of the paragraph. ...Edit for up just wasn't what I wanted. ...Edit for -v- had and edit and question of the timing and happening of Psycho busting out of the pack. Thought I didn't care to have the foreshadowing, I do see the point. I was thinking of just leaving it until I read of and remembered the slipping of the pack and the regrabbing of the stap. That would create a force for Psycho to bust out, so I wrote that in. The edit should read. ...Edit particles hitting head for they not be needed. ...Edit all the dust shit. It's not needed. ...Copy-edit for eyelids. ...Copy-edit a work that need not be. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30473 | kalab | 2009-01-18 15:40:27 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit words for Betty is looking forward. ...Edit for stand shows more than stop. ...Edit by moving the words. ...Edit by removing a word because it is not parked and is not neded. ...Edit because they have new power and can float. ...Copy-edit for it is limb blanket. ...Edit the description of psycho for it was done. The blanket be used but for more description. ...Edit for the puff is like smoke. ...Copy-edit to show the metaphor. ...Edit for I like the puff. It is better. I like verb. It is worth all the words replaced. ...Edit for limbs to not explode of turn to dust. They puff. ...Edit for i do like hisses as a verb. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...read diff. ...Edit for look down should be through for it fits with the logic because we are in a gravity environment. ...EDit parks for stops becaue there isn't much action done that would justify defining the process some parking. ...Edit for the steel door will slide open.
r30471 | kalab | 2009-01-18 14:13:20 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit sentence because it sucks still. ...Edit to maybe have 'tank motors idle.' to be 'tank's motors idles.' the change it back for I like the prose. ...Copy-edit for suits is plural so the s is needed. ...Copy-edit extra word. ...Edit for the sentence would be if Dick was relaxing and the pace slow. Water drips, drips, drips, ...Edit thougt for the thought needs a flow. ...Edit because a screen is a type of panel and the word panel is redundant. ...Edit for Dick nows range is far because it is distance and not value of an object which would much (is this worth). ...Copy-edit s for the plural is not needed. ...Copy-edit eyes to be eye for sockets is all tis needed to be plural. ...Copy-edit a from. ...Edit by moving words to have subject and verb before the dialog because therew wan't dialog for a few words more than...blah, blah, blah, blah... ...Copy0edit of it is on the horizon and not in the horizon. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30464 | kalab | 2009-01-17 14:09:08 -0800 (Sat, 17 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from Richard peers at Army stagecoach. ''Must be important to expose.'' ...Copy-edit for peoples' to be people's edit of it is. ...Edit for pole should be for rod because it pole is being used. ...Edit the of. ...Copy-edit the extra period. ...Copy-edit for it should be sigular verb form I feel. ...Copy-edit for the blue stagecoach to be red for the blue isn't yet. ...Edit the word glowing and article to better the words. ...Copy-edit comma and period. ...Copy-edit article to define the gun as it shouuld. ...Edit for Dick nods and doens't shake. ...Copy-edit for the possession isn't needed. ...Copy-edit a mangled Psycho. ...Copy-edit for the verb fume should be plural. ...Copy-edit the possesion of the words because the prose remains and is the same as the following description. ...Copy-edit for a singular verb. ...Edit an of. ...Edit a sentence for verb. ...Copy-edit make to be making as it should. ...Copy-edit for possession of Betty's head. ...Copy-edit to add the period. ...Edit to remove Dupont circle from the words. ...Copy-edit verb to be plural form hang. ...Copy-edit for the a article conflicts with the plural form of a subject. Edit for Eleanor is speaking words that Richard says. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Copy-edit for poll needs to be pole. ...Copy-edit the need for possession of Jo's hand. ...Edit the verb for stand is the state of the people. ...Edit to remove Dupont Circle from the record. ...Copy-edit to write plural. Copy-edit to remove fingers. ...Copy-edit for the plural s is not needed for the standard. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for I feel a comman is wanted....Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.
r30454 | kalab | 2009-01-16 22:16:04 -0800 (Fri, 16 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30435 | kalab | 2009-01-14 23:59:31 -0800 (Wed, 14 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from I bring lowball glass to nose. <|George early thirties.> ...Edit bring for raise for it is not better or worse, just what I want. Copy-edit to change faJITa to Larry's FaJITa then change back to faJITa for it isn't proper. I like it without the change, and the record likes it. ...Copy-edit for a period should be a question mark. ...Copy-edit for mouths fills. there is only one mouth. ...Copy-edit for I didn't like the of. ...Copy-edit for it is JIT. ...Copy-edit for the Fajita case doens't fit into the standard for George's Fajita. ...Copy-edit to keep standard of faJITa. ...Edit for the plates are small. ...Copy-edit for and should be at. ...Copy-edit Larry FaJITa to be Larry's FaJITa. ...Copy-edit what I wrote prior. ...Edit for I want Maybe later to be a question and not a stantement. ...Copy-edit for the should be then. ...Edit for Betty didn't use then. It was two sentences. ...Edit for the low is better to be and. ...Edit for George does say your. ...Edit with thought 'warm from stomach' to warmth of stomach then change back in mind to what it is. ...Edit for the point is not a to but an at. Mustang points at food. ...Edit because I now hate the words up. It tells. ...Copy-edit for the now pants' standard. ...Edit sentence of George walking around tables by removing it for he doesn't. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.
r30420 | kalab | 2009-01-13 21:25:01 -0800 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit -v-'s copy-edits. ...Edit -147,6 +147,8 by writing a bit more thought to show all are nano. It should and will be enough to define the question raised by Valerie. ...Edit -525,9 +529,11 to have the nano be nano drops like some mass of nano that constitutes some think. Like the ceiling is falling apart. I changed it. ...Edit -463,8 +465,10 by leaving it as is for the question about the previous thought should remain because it is a thought. They are weird and not always that clear. ...Edit the copy-edits. Leave the stitches breaking when they do without foreshadowing because that is how things happen. There is no foreshadowing. And it is Dick's plan to remain at the side. I think it should remain. I will of course continue to think of this until it is published.
r30418 | -v- | 2009-01-13 20:45:29 -0800 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edits of -v-. I note from -v-: hmmm....it's sort of too convenient how the seams on his backpack suddenly break right at that time. did you mention anything earlier about how the pack to sort of "foreshadow" that I missed\?
r30401 | kalab | 2009-01-12 22:53:40 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from A Secret Sentry pulls Secret Sentry rickshaw. They yell, ,,MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! MOVE...'' ...Edit for only one Secret Sentry. ...Edit for the object should be singular stagecoach. ...Edit for 18th should be eighteenth. ...Copy-edit for caps of K and M. ...Copy-edit extra period. ...Edit for a verb. It needs to be. ...Copy-edit for K and M twice. ...Edit for. ...Read aloud to end. read diff.
r30389 | kalab | 2009-01-12 16:01:57 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and record from beginning. ...Edit-copy for the apostrophe for I made it some possession standard from mistakes. Fuck the prose I suppose\? ...Copy-edit for plural version of the verb. ...Copy-edit aphostrophe for possession standard. ...copy-edit for case. ...copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...fuckings caps. ...Edit to show where it was from...Copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...Copy-edit fucking caps. ...Edit for object subject. ...Copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...copy-edit for Matrix YouI. Read aloud and record. ...read diff.
r30383 | kalab | 2009-01-12 12:15:53 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from beginning. ...Copy-edit periods for commas and space. ...Copy-edit hyphen. ...Edit for the article is not needed in the speech. ...Edit for it is nothing and not something. Nothing. So dick something. ...Edit for Psycho says killing machines. ...Edit for they work for Secret Sentry. ...Copy-edit for it is Two-way mirror and not window. ...Edit for there was no verb. ...Edit dinner for lunch then remember the secondary target eat dinner because they eat first shift. This is their dinner, so leave dinner and don't change to lunch. ...Edit Dupont Circle from talk. That could trigger. ...Copy-edit for he doesn't feel hallow. ...Read aloud to end. ...REad diff.
r30381 | kalab | 2009-01-12 10:41:47 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from beginning. ...Edit for up is not needed with the better ceiling. I like the change, but it wasn't needed. ...Edit not needed and I would have this, but why not have the flow go forth a bit more here. Rid of the 'to' and have it be The Dective Store entrance. ...Edit for there is only one Vibration and it crescendoes with an e. ...Edit for the verb needs to be plural without s. ...Copy-edit for the pattern. ...Copy-edit creek for creak. ...Copyedit for verb to of plural form for there are voices. ...Edit for I want entrance. ...Read aloud to end. ...That was odd. Saying the sentence was weird. I like the sound, but it felt weird being spoke.
r30363 | kalab | 2009-01-11 21:58:17 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit -v-'s copy-edits. ...Edit -75,7 +75,7 for the I is needed and wanted.
r30361 | -v- | 2009-01-11 21:48:13 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30356 | kalab | 2009-01-11 16:40:23 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for case. ...Copy-edit for name of wall. ...Edit to The door is open.
r30354 | -v- | 2009-01-11 16:24:19 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit by -v-. A comment from -v-: I found this chapter sort of confusing, but maybe it won't be as confusing once I read more\?
r30350 | kalab | 2009-01-11 14:36:55 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read from beginning. ...Edit for dim is with brighten. ...Edit eyelids close to eyelids cover eyes, but that is standard not analytical word needed, so revert to open and close. ...Edit for it needed to be flutter. Blink is something they always do. ...Edit by thinking of the use of Democrat and Republican and those not be words that would trigger a terror search or new record. They remain for they would be removed because the parties wouldn't want their records to change thereby maybe setting a trigger of lots of terrorist thought. ...Copy-edit for two-way needs a hyphen. ...Copy edit one way to be switched for the more common two-way as used before. ...Copy-edit possesive of shorts'. ...Copy-edit to it is two way. ...Read to the end. ...Read the diff. ...Edit for all two-way to be of the mirrored wall for that is and will be the common term. ...Read the diff.
r30320 | kalab | 2009-01-10 14:24:16 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits of -v-. ...Edit -219,7 +219,7 back to the original for the complete sentence wasn't heard. ...Edit -779,7 +780,7 because we both missed a word that needs to be intersection. ...Edit the copy-edits of -v-.
r30316 | kalab | 2009-01-10 13:36:11 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-Edit to check for dialog mark. ...Copy-edit comma for a period for it is needed. ...Copy-Edit to check for dialog mark.
r30309 | kalab | 2009-01-10 11:21:49 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Copy-edit the comma before dialog mark that is better as a period, but not wrong if a comma. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks.
r30303 | kalab | 2009-01-10 08:57:00 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits. I will look at the diff between -v-'s copy-edits and the following files as I hastily made changes to the file. ...Edit to change the edit at -63,13 +63,13. I like the If. I can see how it could be thought to be different. ...Edit the paragraph describing the tap. I had to change the flow and the words. I did send the change of the paragraph ot the copy-editor but have not heard back, so I will input the change. ...Edit the sentence that confused Valerie with the use of tap. I can see how it is confusing possible, so I have removed words for now it seems that the thing being ensured is access and not tap. The access is what is wanted to.
r30301 | kalab | 2009-01-10 08:26:35 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit copy-edits. Edit -219,7 +219,7 for be not need be. Want the though as it was. I resisted of replacing the period with a space and for. ...Edit copy-edits.
r30285 | -v- | 2009-01-08 22:09:05 -0800 (Thu, 08 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30257 | kalab | 2009-01-06 22:05:26 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits. I found no issues with the copy-edits. I did find a case of a word to be incorrect which was a copy-edit. I did see that here was an extra space which was removed.
r30255 | kalab | 2009-01-06 21:44:32 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for internal and external dialog marks. No issues or error found beyond space.
r30253 | kalab | 2009-01-06 21:32:00 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30229 | kalab | 2009-01-05 20:58:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Copy-edit for jester says and not the, or both, jesters say. This will improve the flow of the words. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Edit for says Psycho for it need be. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks.
r30218 | kalab | 2009-01-05 15:23:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Copy-edit the singular verb that needed to be plural. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Copy-edit one that should be on. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Edit for I want Betty to say. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. Copy-edit extra scan thought needed but not. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. Edit because the dialog was weird. ...Copy-edit dialog mark.
r30210 | kalab | 2009-01-05 10:58:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit copy-edits. ...Edit -5,13 +5,13 for I was confusing. This is correct, but I also want possesion. ...Edit -191,7 +191,7 for it is If and not Is. ...Edit -225,7 +225,7 because copy-edit was too confused and needed to edit. Edit for verb to be fume. ...Edit -259,7 +259,7 to leave it thought it confused the patterns seen by the copy-editor. -v- is correct that the pattern is good. I like the comment. It makes me feel more comfortable focus is had. I did leave the words because there is not sight and everything went more silent because of the strobe flash. It is a beginning of a pattern that a cheer becomes. ...Something. I think I wll leave it. ...Copy-editor comment for -385,7 +385,7 and -497,7 +497,7 show me a reaon of the reasons the sentences are written as they are written. ...Edit -1035,7 +1035,7 is an edit I made after sending -v- the words for this should be shorts.
r30206 | kalab | 2009-01-05 09:47:13 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for a period. ...Edit for the elipsis to be of the echo. ...Copy-edit for the additional period that is just hanging out there. ...Copy-edit staps to stabs for the correct word. ...Copy-edited two ares for one are. ...Edit too much and have to pains to satisfy the plural form of the verb and not to convulute. The prose is gone. I do regret, but won't change. ...Edit the grab and the how to get into position to fix the ankle for it was crap. ...Edit to write more of the broken teeth. To show and feel. Then the body tenses. ...Edit for two sentences both to show the slow process and to show the movement and thought of it. The focus. The center light to a beam. ...Edit to write of beam and tell then show. It is a telling. Is is a telling. ...Edit for the waves flow through something and not over or on something. ...Copy-edit for singular verb form. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for it is two sentences. ...Copy-edit to keep the subject of the paragraph the same. ...Edit to write of the stap that is held and released. ...Edit for thought to be for all of the wall. ...Edit to better flow the ripple. ...Copy-edit for singular verb. ...Edit verb for move is better. ...Edit for to I like more than toward, right now. ...Edit for hangs is enough. ...Edit the verb for scurry is okay for now. this could be edited too much. ...Edit to move the words to focus on the forarm then Psycho. The pain is all but numb. ...Edit to the end.
r30199 | kalab | 2009-01-05 05:52:18 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from and to the end. Edit because I am editing 1101 and wanted to read the end then had another question of through and now know it should be into for the mass is unknown and felt that way by Dick.
r30186 | kalab | 2009-01-04 15:14:50 -0800 (Sun, 04 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit walk instead of walk. ...Edit because the sentence wasn't complete enough for Psycho. ...Edit the verb to be one verb. ...Copy-edit because I wrote follow and not flow. ...Edit to show the intersections. ...Copy edit for the object is signs and this is English. ...Edit for the foot and water is the basic and I want the basic. ...Write of intersection pool. ...Edit for the left to right is the way. ...Edit for the time is to waste. ...Edit scan for look for I have questioned scan more than once to being too non-human machine. ...Edit because the sentence needs a verb. ...Edit to end.
r30176 | kalab | 2009-01-04 07:00:31 -0800 (Sun, 04 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginnig. ...Edit by writing the dialog of I early to show truth beyond recorded data or created data. This shows that Mustang can be felt to be likely dead because Psycho as a learining being has learned from it. ...Edit for a thought to be of I. ...Edit kill for death because the probability is of Mustang dieing. ...Copy-edit dialog marks to show continued speaker. ...Edit for the scen has a thought of dick. One of anger and mortal humor. ...Edit verb step for walk to then remove the sentence. ...Edit the show of the shout. I thought to remove, but wanted, I only needed to show the build up to the shout. Then the shout showed the release of anger and tension. The body reacting to the reality. The release with words. This reads better. ...Copy-edit by removing an extra can. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Edit to better write Psycho's dialog. ...Copy-edit for process kill is some standard. ...Copy-edit dialog marks. ...Copy-edit dialog marks. ...Copy-edit case of word to be lower for it is not the beginning a proper noun or needed for speech. ...Edit for the transmit will be a question. ...Edit for the dialog is not needed. ...Edit to <|The womb.
r30163 | kalab | 2009-01-03 16:19:19 -0800 (Sat, 03 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit scrap for scrape for that is it. ...Copy-edit for the verb has more of an object than up. ...Edit for the subject is of no mind. Only action. No thought to be read for entrapment. ...Edit for there is a flow chart. ...Copy edit for the case to show a scream\! ...Copy-edit for there is no need for a possesive apostrophy. ...Edit for a better verb. ...Edit to remove all the words supporting what was first I but won't be until the death of Mustang. ...Edit to write dialog of Dick asking about the darkness. ...Edit to write of the need to have Psycho look at sigint. ...Copy-edit for to follow one must lead. ...Edit to move the thought to the questions and the questions of Mustang. The question of how he is. The report then follows. I like the long thought then the question of wase from some where. ...Edit for waste, so the thought of waste of data and time to be the waste of dump question then hte question of Mustang. ...Edit to end.
r30161 | kalab | 2009-01-03 14:34:23 -0800 (Sat, 03 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from Richard's jaw pulses. He peers at Eleanor. He huffs. All windows are down. ...Copy-edit because Eleanor dialog continues. ...Edit for the turn of the head is a turn and not a whip. ...Copy-edit there for their. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma becaused the verb says needs an object in the sentence. ...Copy-edit for walk along is not needed for walk sidewalk is enough. ...Copy-edit for it was redundant. ...Edit for it is not across. ...Edit for the formation to be a Two by Two. ...Copy-edit for foward is gone. ...Edit to end.
r30154 | kalab | 2009-01-03 10:36:05 -0800 (Sat, 03 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from Army soldiers shine flashlights' lights on the peoples' faces. Jo's window is down. Dick's window is down. Betty's window is down. ...Edit the of from the book. One too many. ...Edit for Eleanor's window is down. ...Edit to have the left and right instead of side written. ...Copy-edit for singular verb. ...Edit to define what clears the intersection with direction. ...Edit and write to define the scene as seen and defined to know where the movement is and is not.... ...Edit for forward should be forth that is the direction for now. ...Edit to remove forward for it is known and not change. The movement defined. If it moves back then maybe it would be needed. ...Edit for mass will make in logical. Fills like a mass to be in. People are between. ...Edit to remove okay words with fewer good word. ...Edit for the drone stare happens if their eyes remain open. George Betty won't caste drown stare for their eyes are closed. ...Edit for the elbow press and do not hold. ...Copy-edit the possesive to be correct for People. ...Copy-edit another forward for the edit has been made. ...Edit to remove eyelids for eyelids blink to just blink. Blink defines the action. ...Copy-edit to have the singular form of the verb. ...Edit of removing the to for an and and remove another word. ...Edit becaus I can. I don't think I have made this better or worse by removing words. ...Copy-edit forward for forth for that is the edit. ...Copy-edit forward from the words for the direction has not changed. ...Copy-edit for out is not known. At is the record state. ...Copy-edit another forward. ...Copy-edit comma for a period. ...Copy-edit period for a comma. ...Copy-edit comma for a period because there is no verb for the object dialog. ...Edit to The blue and red spoked stagecoaches roll in left lane and right lane with a muffled, ,,Move, move, move, move...''
r30143 | kalab | 2009-01-02 22:17:12 -0800 (Fri, 02 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30113 | kalab | 2009-01-01 14:34:33 -0800 (Thu, 01 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit from subprimary should be subprime target. ...Edit for I am like think to before see. See is more jaded. ...Copy-edit additional word. ...Copy-edit a plural that is no or a possesive that is not. ...Copy-edit a plural. ...Copy-edit the dialog mark. ...Edit to write of the drying of the sweat. It is noticed. ...Edit for the two sentences should be one for he does sit. ONly verb is needed. ...Edit to make the double subject the second object. ...Copy-edit e from plural stackes. ...Copy-edit to ass the s to glasses. ...Copy-edit a space missing between words. ...Copy-edit a comman to a period. ...Edit to better show the subject of the tray. ...Copy-edit for the object is a FaJITa. ...Copy-edit because the fajita should be singular. ...Edit to show the Richard biting. ...Copy-edit to add a c to excitement. ...Copy-edit all FaJITas to be lower case faJITa if not used with Larry. ...Copy-edit question mark for a period for it is s question. ...Copy-edit another c for exciting. ...Edit for the drink is whiskey. Better to use whiskey. ...Edit to the end.
r30104 | kalab | 2009-01-01 06:45:24 -0800 (Thu, 01 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from High heels click past. Small silver twenty-two caliber pistols are strapped to ankles. ...Edit for the people are sub targets. ...Edit for the pole spins. ...Edit by removing thought not thought. ...Edit and write the subprime words and write of the secondary targets. Edit to make sure the terms are consistent and use loosely and not as often for there is deconditioning. ...Edit for the target of secondary. ...Edit for a complete sentence of Psycho talk. ...Edit for case and for the new word subprime targets. sub targets would have to be for there is a uniform way of classifying. ...Edit for Dick does think of clue people. ...Edit for Psycho uses full name. ...Edit for the focus to be football. ...Remove useless thought and action. ...Edit for the drop isn't a drop until it falls. ...Edit for space or empty feel to be told. Shown that most walk way and some few walk through. ...Copy-edit for mom and not mon. ...Edit thought from the thought of propaganda. The opening sentence outside the flow when it should not. ...Edit to have dick standing for it is a big cone but not that big or it is or is not. I just like the idea of standing and thinking then walking. ...Edit to move a sentence for space to make having a similar sentence on purpose. A double take back. Or athought back. ...Edit for surround means a complete circle or to encompass. I feel it much for the tables outline. Tables fill sidewalk and the people are not numbered. ...Edit for Dick doesn't yawn. ...Edit to show Dick slow stepping through the mass of people. ...Edit to the end.
r30053 | kalab | 2008-12-28 13:23:12 -0800 (Sun, 28 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit the Propaganda Bomb and how Dick recovers from it. The bomp is like a strobe flash or sound or smell. It tries to disuade and have think of the other things or inhanse a thought to catch the act. It doesn't really make one for get just change focus. It is like a strobe pulse, but isn't the same, so I wanted the difference to be read. I will need to read over what was edited and written. I think I like it better. When I read it I don't feel the same thing is happening, but it is near complete. This is going. I don't know. I feel it better. I did feel when I read it last night and the time before that the propaganda bomb may need editing. I have decided to do it. It did lessen the work couunt too. Less is more for the Propaganda Bomb.
r30033 | kalab | 2008-12-27 01:24:32 -0800 (Sat, 27 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the self mock. The words now flow from the beginning. The beginning didn't flow or go anywhere. ...Edit by write words for people. ...Edit to spill a verb. ...Edit by writing more of people. ...Edit for it si a curb corner. Curb is the object. ...Edit and write to show the passing of vehicles and the empty road. Emtpy feels fitting of the cross. ...Copy-edit the verb to be plural. ...Edit for humidity is the word the other words tried to define. ...Edit by remove sentence of another story. ...Edit to show the focus and not tell of it. ...Edit to <|White oak.> Trees grow from open quagmire holes. White oaks grow between sidewalk and vehicle gardens.
r30018 | kalab | 2008-12-26 13:44:47 -0800 (Fri, 26 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit a period to end a sentence. ...Edit up from sit up for sit up feels redundant. ...Copy-edit for heat should be heart. ...Edit and write thought of maybe Psycho being next killing machine. ...Edit for the vibration is no more. The sentenece needed to be removed. ...Copy-edit to remove old verby. ...Edit up for lift up is redundant. ...Edit and write the complete step. ...Edit to remove see for think. See is more jaded. See will be used. Think is much better for The Detectives Store. ...Edit to the end.
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the action of head up and down is too much. It doesn't happen. ...Edit object and remove words. ...Edit to The white door is closed.
r30007 | kalab | 2008-12-25 23:29:18 -0800 (Thu, 25 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit had for it is too proper and redundant for G-43. ...Edit to write of how secret sentry removed parents fast. ...Edit the dialog to make better for psycho. ...Edit and write talk of doubt. ...Copy-edit for way of editting. ...Edit for the close of eyelids is a body action. ...Edit to remove dialog of dick for it need not and is not. ...Edit and write the direction and the definition. ...Edit and Write of think to and the mark to have it be as it should. ...Edit for Psycho stepping to show movement to walk. ...Edit sentence from because it need not be. ...Edit for Dick is at a stand. ...Edti for the peer is a look. ...Edit have the current be written of it is the current objective. ...Edit for Betty steps. ...Edit to end.
r29994 | kalab | 2008-12-25 14:56:37 -0800 (Thu, 25 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for a comma for a comma is needed. ...Copy-edit for Panels is part of the proper name. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is the same action of the sentence paragraph before. ...Edit to write of the red bow tie because it needs be. ...Edit for the Army line is a row. ...Edit with for along for the dance is along. ...Edit to A jester thrusts pelvis close to extended congov sole. A jester dances along Always people line.
r29970 | kalab | 2008-12-24 16:06:07 -0800 (Wed, 24 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to write of touching the pad thereby getting rid of an of and being more direct for the pad then glows. ...Copy-edit to replace a period with a comma. ...Edit and write the words to show there is some action that result from Jo want Dick to be gone having heard some of the dialog and remembered it after the sound drone emitted sound. ...Edit for the light blink more than flash. ...Copy-edit comma to period for it should be a period. Edit to write over because they don't jostle with the street. ...Edit for the sidewalk edge is a curb. ...Edit for the talk is before the location for the subject must be followed by a verb for best comprehension. ...Edit for the house is not. A building is. ...Edit for the outer lines are two, so the verb must be plural. ...Edit for the Army lines word need not be. ...Copy-edit to change the case of Taxi to taxi for it is not a proper noun. ...Edit dialog of Psycho for Psycho shouldn't say wonder or you. Wonder is to metaphoric. ...Edit for the words to walk to the center of the sidewalk felt weird. They felt bad, so I have changed them. ...Edit The from subject for there is no sepecific subject. ...Edit to Oil smoke flows past.
r29896 | kalab | 2008-12-18 21:14:15 -0800 (Thu, 18 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from The taxi rolls forward upon rubber street between rubber sidewalks. ...Copy-edit for dialog mark. ...Edit for the rubber is not needed. ...Copy-edit parts from sentence. ...Edit for the safety tube is the detonation tube. ...Edit for the subject to begin a new sentence before the dialog screamed. ...Edit to People chatter. Organ pipes blow. Bass bumps.
r29842 | kalab | 2008-12-16 07:07:48 -0800 (Tue, 16 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit and remove words of Psyhco reporting. ...Edit and remove words of Dick, Psycho talk about this and that. It doens't happen. Psycho in reporting phase and not to Dick just to log. There is no reason for the dialong. ...Write the report of Psycho knowing of government wanting to kill Psyhco. ...Edit to remove more dialog of Psycho that doesn't exist. It need not for it is (are) reports. ...Edit to remove the rolling down of Jo's window for it is down. Edit for the intersection description to be better. The lighting bad. The intersection more descriptoing. The people of the truck around. ...Edit to show the traffic flowing across. ...Copy-edit for reflection. ...Edit to ,,You love to spend government money,'' says Eleanor.
r29815 | kalab | 2008-12-15 08:31:24 -0800 (Mon, 15 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit becuse plural walls is too much. ...Copy-edit an s for Psycho. ...Edit for the shuffle is better with. ...Edit for the tapping is a bit much. ...Edit to write people line to define. ...Copy-edit d for s. ...Edit to write color. ...Edit for the type of fish is known. It is more than just fish. ...Edit look direction. Seen not need to be told. ...Edit the of. ...Edit the sentence to better show Better talking and showing name to face for the man with wavy hair. ...Edit to write of the shake. ...Edit dialog from words for they are not needed. ...Edit for one sits on. ...Copy-edit for quote. ...Edit for at Now is all that is needed. ...Copy-edit a n from the word at. ...Edit to <|Midnight because no imagination.>
r29797 | kalab | 2008-12-14 12:42:19 -0800 (Sun, 14 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to remove a space from beginning of sentence. ...Edit to change the words seen to read to further clarify a question had of -v-.
r29785 | kalab | 2008-12-14 04:40:49 -0800 (Sun, 14 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit pants for shorts because it needs to be shorts. I thought this edit though I have sent the chapter to -v-. I want this changed. I am now editing the next chapter, and I questioned if I wanted the apostrophe after the s for shorts' pocket and remembered that I used the words pants for this chapter.
r29780 | kalab | 2008-12-13 22:28:35 -0800 (Sat, 13 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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A beep beeps, and a buzz buzzes.
r29764 | kalab | 2008-12-13 12:26:02 -0800 (Sat, 13 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Government. Police. Help? Shot?> ...Edit for the sounds is from building. ...Edit for plural. Mint is the smell of the fade. ...Edit into for it is redundant. ...Edit to write smilar action. The flow beter. ...Edit thought of day for it is not needed. Why thinking it\? There are other way to think and focus. ...Copy-edit for they. ...Edit for upon is better than across. ...Edit to remove catch for it was confusing. It confused. ...Copy-edit for quote. ...Edit for the fume is betterl. The smell is unique of each. ...Edit for fume is better. ...Copy-Edit by adding a comma for the dialiog after the verb. ...Edit for weave is to much a metaphor. This is not a tapestry. ...Edit the name for it is too near proper and Vert is derived because the sign might be covered. ...Edit the words from because without pause is not needed. ...Copy-edit for a plural verb. ...Edit for one inhales to smell. ...Edit for drips and drops is redundant. ...Edit for a plural links for links should be plural. ...Edit and leave the Calvert instead of it being Vert because the sign isn't named and it isn't some local name that is a metaphor. ...Edit for the metaphor turn left for running is not needed. There is not driving. ...Edit for yellow dots appear for they appear. It need not be seen. ...Edit by removing sweep for bikes don't sweep. ...Edit to Shadow extends then contracts, <|to me.> Cars roll past.
r29671 | kalab | 2008-12-06 21:24:23 -0800 (Sat, 06 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit for a verb with is. ...Edit for the verbs are all that are needed. ...Edit to write plural verbs. ...Edit to have some thing between teeth. ...Edit for the size of the bowl definition is a thoughts size of. ...Edit to remove words of action of it is shown for Dick to be looking. ...Edit for Dick can't stand for the left knee is stiff and doesn't bend and the pain is felt when the right is moved to stand. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit to the end. This likely the end. A quick spell check and a search and replace until it is to the copy editor.
r29634 | kalab | 2008-12-02 22:29:23 -0800 (Tue, 02 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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r29623 | kalab | 2008-12-01 22:28:54 -0800 (Mon, 01 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the doesn't open isn't something I really like because doesn't is, well, not feeling good. I did write the thought. ...Edit for is closed for that flows better. ...Edit to remove useless sentence. ...Edit to decrease thought for the thought need not be. The simile is pointless and not thought with such grace or mocking during this moment. ...Edit remove object because the thought needs to be quick. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit for hisses is better than filles. ...Edit to remove more words of redundant description. ...Edit to removed useless thought. ...Write during exhale more thoughts of words. ...Edit for the turn off and turn on metaphores sucks. Dark is. Light is. Are better. ...Edit for one word thought is better. ...EDit for steel-grate and check U.S. Intranet for it. ...Edit for Case that is the name of the system. ...Edit to try to have something of a mixed metaphor with square spiral. ...Edit to end.
r29603 | kalab | 2008-11-30 15:19:28 -0800 (Sun, 30 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit for confirmed dead is the term of Psycho. ...Edit for killed is the process. Dead is the result. Psycho should speak in terms of process. ...Edit for the though is not. The felt or record picks it up. The Over me. was too telling and felt like an echo. ...Edit for the action is while or before Psycho says No. Psycho doesn't wait to replay so the Psycho says was written. ...Edit to show thinking of water to not think of action instead of tell. ...Edit for the thought. I think I removed it for some fucking dumb reason. It has been written because it's hard not to think of the act to begin the sub thought. ...Edit words of Psycho for the second dialog is the only dialog that is needed to be. ...Edit for there are no shadows on K. ...Edit for the thought of Mustang's death to be of an effect. Then a nothing is. ...Edit a nothing is by removing it. The one written prior is better placed for the story. The was an easy edit to complete. ...Write to show the movement of rickshaw. ...Edit because the step is already written. ...Edit because the telling is not needed after the show. That is why it is of record. ...Edit for attached can be assumed or shouldn't be assumed. ...Edit to move description before the set of the rickshaw for that is felt before the calm before the focus to rickshaw begins. ...Edit for the idea a tone is needed. And because the use of ring is greater than tone and less words ring will be used. ...Edit to remove Alarms thought for it is not needed, not a focus and too telling. ...Edit by writing of the pain to show the ring and the pain has spread. ...Edit to remove redundant words of description that also slow the story down. ...Edit to the end.
r29590 | kalab | 2008-11-30 06:40:29 -0800 (Sun, 30 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit because the Benjamin doesn't exclaim. ...Edit to move words for the scan happens sooner. ...Edit to remove the words of the epithet then see United States of America, and the past life, demands it be of the book. ...Edit for the stagecoaches are purple and wheels maybe not seen. ...Edit for Dick needs to stand after the thought not dead yet. And I want Dick to sit for a moment. He has had a busy night. Feels safe with Army near and just wants to relax and be calm. ...Edit for what is of the record is when standing, so I moved words to read only of. ...Edit for look for Dick need not stare. ...Edit to better show dick leave the position of Mark and read. ...Edit to better use the given definition and description to show the jester being shocked and put down. ...Edit to have Dick show a thought that remaining in a sheltered is safe for it will keep the Psychos away. ...Edit to remove sentence for only the drop is noticed. ...Edit to show the sweating progression in the uniform sweat with the definition. ...Edit to remove thought of clue people for it is already been thought. He has the thought of we which is what catches Dick's mind. ...Edit to Drones hover. White, red, blue light pulses from drones.
r29571 | kalab | 2008-11-29 13:27:43 -0800 (Sat, 29 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to show that there is separation of the congov. ...Edit for jostle is enough to define the movement. ...Edit to removed the of for rattle and thumb for it may confuse. ...Edit to better define the filling of space with fewer words and better order. ...Edit for I lean is enough to define. ...Edit to use the proper name of the formation and using standing to make things better. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit for lean is better than lower and used before. ...Edit to Blue, blue, blue shines from Always windows.
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Edit from ,,Is the Reagan Hotel still the only building taller than the Washington Monument?'' says Richard. ...Edit the use of no. And if there is no red light that assumes maybe another light...Editing too much. ...Edit for the rickshaws to climb for it is the last logical edit that began last edit near the end. This edit may bee too much. ...Edit another of the light for Intersection is clear and then leave the no read light is. ...Edit to show what is meant by congov because there are many Contractor government. Most are. And write sentence for the effect of the transformation to active congov. ...Edit to show more of Jo staring and not forgetting. ...Edit for the congov to be specific to show that most are congov and a lot are S.S.. ...Edit because the topic would arise between Betty and Richard. This could be too much of an edit again. I don't think it makes it worse, but really how much better. I fucking added a lot of words. That's questionable. ...Edit to remove words to balance. Makes the tension between Richard and Eleanor better. ...Edit to check Murder of as a group for crows. ...Edit for it is do and not did. ...Edit to remove words that read redundant. ...Edit for the general buildings is enough for the variety is much. ...Edit because I read of one for one and I think of the need to show active S.s. and then active can be told. Or tell then show. ...Edit to remove the active S.S. and write only of S.s. being seen by Richard. That willl define the congov. i feel better having changed the words back before the edit earlier. ...Edit to better define the congov and people. This is picky, but a good edit. Once that is not needed, but does make things better though more words have been written. ...Edit to write the continuing look of Jo at Dick and the desire for the small business to just be rid of the mess and hope for the government to work with. The club does the same thing. Dick is also nicer, so its hard to hate. ...Edit to the end.
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Edit from ,,Now they're not secret,'' says Richard. ...Edit dialog of Richard by removing for he need not say. ...Edit the move sentences to write a verb and have flow and better define the sound. ...Edit for jostle is needed. ...Edit for dick wouldn't want to use a word lie objective. ...Write the light. ...Edit for the foces to not be told but be shown to those who have the record. ...Edit the roll of the blue stange coach for I hate even as something that defines. ...Edit to Jo lifts hand at blue stagecoach. ,,You move.'' His palm presses steering wheel's center.
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Edit from <|Government contracts.> ...Edit to better the words of the action of Jo putting money under mat. ...Edit thought for short more natural flow. ...Edit space of thumps and car to be none. ...Edit for street lamps. ...Edit because the Jester shouts. ...Edit to People chatter. Organ pipes blow. Bass bumps.
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Edit from Eleanor shrugs and slides Larry FaJITa slice in mouth, chews. ...Edit for the chew to be swallowed. ...Edit to remove words that are not needed for the words define an action yet to take place. ...Edit to write the words other places to show the calling for check. ...Edit show discomfort of Eleanor. ...Edit to show some tension. ...Edit to show Dick finishing the scotch. Thought it is needed to be done, so I went back and did some search and found the complete of the drink of the scotch. ...Edit to write better words for the scotch. ...Edit for it is congressmen. ...Edit the end for less is more. ...Edit to the end.
r29451 | kalab | 2008-11-23 13:29:52 -0800 (Sun, 23 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from <|Bourbon.> ...Edit the description to show the tray and the holding in the first description. ...Edit to move sentence to follow a better flow. Unless all a paragraph. ....Edit for beer column is enough. ...Edit to have the busboy empty the plates from the table top. ...Edit for Dick doesn't need to be directed to look for it is shown, so I removed the unneeded I look. ...Edit to better define the people leaving and entering at a close and timed rate. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit the busboy leaving to show home leaving after the people sit. ...Edit to remove the old instance of busboy leaving. ...edit to have the fume be a perfume for it is pleasant. ...Edit to show Dick critique whiskey then show it love. ...Edit by writing the drinks to be place in the center of the table. ...Edit for the glass to be set before better. ...Edit sentences for the S.S. already has the tray and there is no other tray to grab. ...Edit to Deep peat fumes float. <|In a sea of bliss.>
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words that put Dick between the vehicle gardens that he already stepped from. Edit more of the words. ...Edit of and better show the vents. ...Edit of. ...Edit the thoughts to focus on vehicle gardens and the hearing and slip of the Army. ...Edit to remove sentence that is not needed. ...Edit case that needed not be. ...Edit to remove plural of lob scan. ...Edit for step up is gone for climb. ...Edit the sight of server and carp, so Dick is on the level. ...Edit to I look up. I step to the third level. <|...Full.>
r29423 | kalab | 2008-11-22 07:13:56 -0800 (Sat, 22 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Heart beats fast. ...edit to remove the thought again of the name. For the thought flows from. ...Edit the forwards because they suck. ...Edit thought to be focused on a vehicle garden. The earlier repetition has the command deeper in mind. ...Edit so sweat is not beading or beads. ...Edit for passing is not needed. ...Edit to all lean to show all the action of people. ...Edit words showing shape of people when it is not needed. ...Edit to write of what pulls back on the pull and of the other arm. ...Edit and read fast and thinking about the streets. I looked at google maps to check the walk and the distant and the pace for both the thought. During this edit I made Dick stand more after the indirect strobe pulse. I followed the street to street to 18th and like the increasesed pace. Now I wonder if the focus of the hovercopter is enough. ...Edit to write the street after all is said and done. I counted five streets that need to be for the story to be. I have written one. ...Edit the flap of leaves because the hovercopter is a distant away. ...Edit words for the words are just no needed. Intersection being one of them. ...Edit and write more of the road being used for stagecoaches. ...Write of a road because one is needed. Thought and focus are left. The recording isn't getting much because the focus is vehicle garden and the hovercopter. ...Write of the street. ...Edit to have another street crossing and for that crossing to be S. ...Have the army be on S and not Riggs. ...Edit to show lots of people are slowing the walk. Show Dick now on street as he was. ...Edit to show Dick is standing instead of walk and is moving slow through people. ...Edit to the end the base to remove the walking. ...Edit and read to the end. The end feel the flow. ...Edit the propaganda bomb and the pace of the slow walk. ...Edit the streets. ...Edit to the end.
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r29372 | -v- | 2008-11-18 19:59:00 -0800 (Tue, 18 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to make plural the dogs. ...Edit a comma for it is needed to seperate the object verb. ...Edit thought to better question self and if Psycho is alive. ...Edit to A chimta bangs Go-Go.
r29312 | kalab | 2008-11-16 06:16:42 -0800 (Sun, 16 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,He was asked for a name by a child during question subprocess of the kill process that still is finding questions that use the process kill to answer.'' ...Edit and move sentence for placement and answer should be quick and not rude to leave Mustang waiting. There is not thought feeling the reason, so move sentence and remove words. ...Edit a 'look at' because the writing of is the showing of the look at near make is a tell. ...Edit to move sentence to the new pace of getting water and pouring. ...Edit a paragraph that feels like too many words and nervousness beyond thinking with talk. ...Edit to ,,Mustang.'' <|Cool and calm Mustang.>
r29303 | kalab | 2008-11-15 20:14:37 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit for the process and subprocess and process to begin to kill. The edit made the words better. ...Edit the question for it to be a logical question. ....Edit on tangent shit syntax. ...Edit articles and to to make short better. ...Edit to put for verbs. ...Edit articles. ...Edit more process logic through and through. ...Edit to the end of the process thing.
r29299 | kalab | 2008-11-15 16:39:33 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,The Gee Forty-three calls self Psycho.'' ...Edit yes to Psycho for that type of langauge confuses and is not spoke by Mustang. ...Edit the removing of objects. No need to pull out. This is sort of quick and fast. ...The tos. Psycho for the one wantting in needs to be specified. ...Edit for Mustang questioning is all that is needed and thought. If he completed it like before then it would be a tell and not natural feeling. Weird. Like it was echoed. ...Edit to show and tell of the reason for the agression and push. ...Edit for question to be a subprocess. ...Edit to ,,He was asked for a name by a child during question subprocess of the kill process that still is finding questions that use the process kill to answer.''
r29288 | kalab | 2008-11-15 06:35:20 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A silhouette group form people. ...Edit Psycho's dialog for it felt off and had...It needed to be better of less metaphoric. ....Edit of and sound for they felt as if they were not needed. ...Edit to write the general types around to match wit known. Or thought to be known. ...Edit for more specifics and write for the coutnach tank. ...Edit of. ...Edit to better write of the corner. More description. ...Edit beyond for in is more descriptive. ...Edit some more vehicle gardens for they feel unneeded after the specifics added. The thought has waned. ...Edit for the corner cafe is a good description to use. ...Edit words from for they are not needed. ...Edit to the end.
r29261 | kalab | 2008-11-13 21:44:42 -0800 (Thu, 13 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from <|...Policing.> ...Edit to better write the paragraphs of crowd going from uncomfortable and knowing to mindless and secure. ...Edit for words to be short for the on hook is after window for it is outside window. ...Edit to show the reach through window for the hook. ...Edit of for collar and edit for it be a hook. Less words. ...Edit for it need not be of desk corner. ...Edit of and write of the entire olive tree. ...Edit for the thought of mom dad and Mustang fast and quick because the emotion could lose focus and focus is needed for their survival. ...Edit because lights of is just not needed. ...Edit to write cuff links for they are kinky and status symbol. ...Edit for blacksuit group is better than the version with the of. ...Edit bass club beat for there are no ofs and I like better. ...Edit for the smells to be fumes. The overwhelm and are too much of everything. ...Edit to show for knocking with a lot of force to say sorry for they are in a moving mass. ...Edit to remove ofs to better the words. Show of the mass and fumes. ...Edit for the fumes. ...Edit tips of toes for toes are a tip of foot and are enough. ...Edit the page line and the possession. ...Edit the puffs to come from some window. ...Edit the black sleeves with less words and less withs and a better flow. ...Edit to show Go-Go drums. ...Edit because full of is bad. ...Edit to better write and show the push back of the movers. ...Edit a lot of worthless dialog with basic time and good dialog with fewer words. ...Edit the shout then say of movers so it has a flow. ...Edit for by limo description with less words is better. ...Edit to remove the to of on to for it need not be. ...Edit to better the use of direction. With the witty write I will not remove the use of left and right. ...Edit the space for a better flow with the use of left and right. ...Edit to better define the panting or the yards. ...Edit for it need not be wide. ...Edit to better show the bikers with limo. ...Edit for the words of the fumes and sounds to be better edited and after the nothing. ...Edit by moving to better find the flow to run. ...Edit for few words to be of petrol truck. ...Edit pass and past for by for by feels better. ...Edit to remove the stare and have a by vehicle gardens. It is an improvement. ...Edit for look down and below need now be in the same sentence. ...Edit for the path is blocked. ...Edit to People block path.
r29253 | kalab | 2008-11-13 14:53:29 -0800 (Thu, 13 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit more pick up for grab is better. ...Edit of and water for less is better and not needed. ...Edit for cub and water flies. ...Edit pickup for grab and have no of water. ...Edit to only have the words that are needed. Only blows. ...Edit for quagmire stench. ...Edited for stench to be removed and moved. ...Edit for a split of sentence. ...Edit for better definition of horn honks. ...Edit for cup action needs to bettern for the grab it is empty already. It will be empty and realized before attempting to drink. ...Edit smell to remove of and have the fumes be. ...Edit ofs. ...Edit for the look to be at window wall. ...Edit for a better way to show smooth which is with less words. ...Edit the places wipe for hit is hot and humid. ...Edit ofs for better flow. ...Edit to the end.
r29248 | kalab | 2008-11-13 12:02:55 -0800 (Thu, 13 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit a mark error with closing dialog mark. ...Edit of for Wind gust. ...Edit of and removed people for less words. ...Edit of and edit space by making another sentenece. ...Edit to have step for the walk doens't completely define. ...Edit another of and have space to show focus change. ...Edit to remove moves and use a better object. ...Edit end of to remove the of. ...Edit another of. ...Edit because outside need not be written for record. ...Edit for smell of sweat for the smell is read to think. ...Edit end of for less words and on less of. ...Edit of of plane for it need not be. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit to remove thought of locked for it is known by the handle not moving. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit for the dance to slow. Slow is better. ...Edit the pickup. ...Edit more overs. ...edit end of because it is just towel. ...Edit to end. The words read good. A few things to better the book and one the story.
r29220 | kalab | 2008-11-12 11:50:07 -0800 (Wed, 12 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit for the beginning paragraph to be one sentence for the pace. ...Edit for Dick doen't pull on white door for there is nothing to grip. ...Edit to make the sentences I think I see to be one and show the flow to see. ...Edit to have the sentence of thought come after door opening. ...Edit placement of seeing Psycho with the cube for it is seen and looked for. ...Edit two sentence to one to make the action of rolling Psycho out ot be quick and fluid. ...Edit to remove words not needed. The record will show the direction for tense. ...Edit to show the look down with the seeing of the floor. ...Edit by reading a definition of the taste of cyanide. Then the thought to be written to be shown. ...Edit to show the walls. The action not needed. Less is more. ...Edit sentence from because it is not needed. The thought of Dick maybe taken off cloths need not be had for he has dealt with gas before. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit words from sentences to removed the obvious like saliva from mouth. And remove the thought. The thought not focused on command. ...Edit the space to better show the choas and the emotional pains similar to physical pain. ...Edit space for better flow. ...Edit thought not of the command or not a sudden collection of records to express a subsumed description. To complete the thought. ...Edit to have the command end with a period to enter which is a slow thought. The thought speeds after there is not found command and Dick wants to breathe. ...Edit commas for periods to seperate the commands. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit to have an apostrophy s after handkerchief, but then remove because the record has now compounded the object and may use it as such. ...Edit to make verbless words sentences. ...Edit to make two sentences one. The saliva. ...Edit words by removing useless words that feel and face when the verb pop and the compound object is all that is needed. ...Edit so it is Saliva drips. That is all that is needed, and it is less. ...Edit to remove all the thought of Dick near telling the the thoughts to are commands when it is not needed for the clean are and the light before define this. And Dick doesn't think this for he doesn't need to test he already knows and wants to live. ...Edit question to a thought with no need for an answer. A command or a calm string of words that could be a question. ...Edit by writing a better reason to get out of the cube and not go back up. It is trying to consume or destroy Psycho, but Dick takes the thing out. He steps out and doesn't die because of the fact he wants to help mom and dad. He does believe mUstang dead or beyond hope. ...Edit for the space and the action of the body swaying after the cyanide and now climbing stairs and gove better reasons for the hand to be going along wall. ...Edit to give space and time for the press agianst wall. ...Edit by writing climb for go up. Climb is all that is needed. ...Edit article from thought for thought is quick. ...Edit words from there and here thought to have it be better. I like it better as it is. This works and flows better. ...Edit to give space to the thought to show some place of pain and focus and a light mind. ...Edit of because the dialog is brief near a thought. ...Edit the descrption of sweat for less is more. Let the reader see the sweat. ...Edit to lessen the show of the wiping of head and better show how it is done to only the face. Less words and no ofs, too. ...Edit to have Thought grammar mark. ...Edit to remove words for climb to be less. Edit because I don't want to be looking up all the time. ...Edit to give more space to the step. ...Edit to remove thought about it being an illusion for the thought need not be. It is better without. ...Edit the I turn on because the press the green button is better. I may want to try to remove turn on as an act and words used when having a dial be the on - off. ...Edit to better the words. ...Edit to the end of chapter.
r29200 | kalab | 2008-11-10 20:27:14 -0800 (Mon, 10 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit of and center for both are too many words. Edit to have all the fall in one paragraph, so they are near or at the same time. ...Edit to remove sentences I feel are not needed. Richard already sits. ...Edit to free up space. The action happens at or near the same time. ...Edit disconnect of then realize it is what I want. ...Edit and write to better and show a diesel engine. ...Edit to better show what is pulled by having two subjects. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit an of. ...Edit to better write the definition of the army and show the standard name. ...Edit to The giant drill tip slowly rises from long semi-trailer with six three-jointed legs. <|The size of building beams.>
r29180 | kalab | 2008-11-09 15:10:48 -0800 (Sun, 09 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit sentences of rain to remove and add space. Things are distinct. Specific things in focus. Remove the excess definition. The focus is wanning to nothing. ...Edit by writing sentence similar to on removed in a span after nothing for after nothing the focus is specific and abstract. The record knows not how to comprehend the thought. ...Edit space to slow and steady and separate. The mind is slow and the record is unable to define all feelings or word and feeling mix of. ...Edit Body feels for is because is the state of body in mind. ...Edit for space. ...Edit by writing an abstract definition after nothing is like the beginnings of the text record having an understanding of how to translate Dick. ...Edit of. Edit the space. ...Write the thought is calm after possibility of it being a lie. Or is it a lie to self to cope. Or it is not real and only in Dick's mind to trick the system. Or it is a illusion. Or it is real. ...Edit for more space. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is a duplicate and good only once because twice on begins to read into it too much. The more space. And words removed to better the space. ...Edit to have thought become more complex after lots of space. ...Edit for single sentence paragraphs to show the focus the thought the confusion and the love. The intensity and the pain. The fear and the comprehension lost the found. And when found the space becomes more steady and paragraphs have more than one sentence. The intensity now a focus. ...Edit until thought becomes multi sentenced paragraphs.
r29165 | kalab | 2008-11-08 13:45:38 -0800 (Sat, 08 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words of talk that feels to be too long. ...Edit to lessen the words to define the stride. ...Edit for less words to define the face with the face. ...Edit to replace capture with detain because detain is more of an American word. ...Edit the stopping and starting of the walk to show the losing of focus. ...Edit to remove the words that are not needed. Lessen the amount of thought for thought is framed and skipping in shock. ...Edit of for the of is not needed. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is not needed. ...Edit to show the process of looking but not seeing. ...Edit article for there is more than on pond. ...Edit pond for pool for that is better. ...Edit of. ...Edit to have roll be wrap for it is wrapped. ...Edit the of of pool of water. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit of and use wall instead of side for side better defines. ...Edit by removing words to show more of a grin. ...Edit to better for the thought by splitting it up and showing body language. ...Edit to remove words that create for a long process of crossing. And edit the words of a sentence by removing them to better the pace and the thought and the story. ...Edit to write to show the darkness and rain being seen. ...Edit the limbs of Psycho over that covers to remove and of. ...Edit to remove ofs. ...Edit to remove the look up. I am tired of look up. ...Edit to remove another of. ...Edit to remove words of movement that to me reads odd. The walkig nead and between and on felt like he was running zigzag. It was not needed so it was removed. ...Edit to remove more words then write words to show the site of the window walled building. ...Edit another of. ...Edit to removed description of the only door on the bloock. because that is shitty definition. ...Edit to ''We will enter with Richard and Betty,''
r29142 | kalab | 2008-11-07 05:55:21 -0800 (Fri, 07 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit for the blurr past may need to only be blurr. It feels to be enough. ...Edit for it is between. The spame. ...Edit and write a sentence to show the sidewalk people move to fill space for it is needed. ...Edit timing of silt congov from reading minds to better show the direction and entrap. ...Edit for I felt to have the object be the page, but then I thought that I liked the thigh. ...Edit for pick up to be removed. ...Edit for less words to be. ...Edit for the man to be better defined. Gray, suit and tie. Suited feels to be enough. And the with is gone. I feel the sentence had with overload, and one needed to be removed. ...Edit an of. ...Edit the waring of jacket. The verb put on jacket felt dirty. It was a shitty way for this to be defined. ...Edit sentence to better write of the subjects. ...Edit of and seemingly pointless definition of the tank columns. ...Edit to Lights flash. Windows shake.
r29094 | kalab | 2008-11-02 15:04:48 -0800 (Sun, 02 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,Is this it?'' says Betty. ...Edit the lame now subject and thought. ...Edit the talk of Richard now. Show Richard be tense. ....Edit to remove is. Edit to better define the scene and the suits. Suits is a classic. ...Edit the plural of a verb. ...Edit to remove and of and a redundant group. Ten will define. ...Edit to better and show the steam. ...edit the suit row for there is not of and now is shown. The words read better. ...Edit the clash of cymbal to have no of nad use less words to define more. ...Edit and write with suit hall and suits in the paragraphs to better the metaphor, the slang and use less words. ...Edit by removing words. ...Edit more of and there is not need to define edge. ...Edit Ben's dialog for the dialog was shit. Complete shit. So much shit that I think I have wiped up mess, but there could be a stain left. Maybe. ...Edit to the end.
r29046 | kalab | 2008-10-28 21:16:37 -0700 (Tue, 28 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit of for heads is better. ...Edit to move sound where the sound better flows. The dialog of Betty is after the Always pounds. The sounds of the silent march has better timing. ...Edit to write of Psyhco still not using I. I liked the idea of have a sentence that has no verb. ...Edit the plural to singular subject for the second verb of the sentence. ...Edit to write an of where need. The object begins with row and is of lines. ...Edit to remove words of Soldier for the paragraph as defined that part. This is instructions, commands, remembered. ...Edit boom sound sentence to have a subject and object. The sentence felt not to below using the dialog. Maybe, but I like what is. ...Edit to continue the line and row definition. ...Edit to better place and write the people and the congov. congov huddles are better. ...Edit by writing of the takes to include. ...Edit to better have the motion of the grab and pull of door handle. ...Edit to better show the shaking of finger. ...Edit to show with less words Richard peering at betty. ...Edit two sentences of Dick stopping the walk in. There is not need to stop. What is the reason\? None. ...Edit the though from George's talk for it makes the follow up dialog negetive when it is something George likes. ...Edit stop for silences for it is better. ...Edit for the remove of up for up is given with the showing and the number and the definition. It is down to stepping up stairs. ...Edit take for pull for pull is better and shows more than take. PUll has a motion. ...I edited to George frowns.
r29023 | kalab | 2008-10-26 23:14:22 -0700 (Sun, 26 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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...Edit from I smile. ,,A touch down pass and two interceptions.'' ...Edit name because it felt without flow or something too long and complex to be a flash of created metaphor. Without the name I feel to keep the words. ...Edit the dialog to let the verb say keep commas after verbs of saying. Cap setences and begin a new with the subject and the verb. ...Edit of from the line of. the subject line is weaker than people. That's why I some times hate the of. For this book it is just not how Dick thinks. It is how Psycho thinks. ...Edit the with thumps because it has been written of. ...Edit to better show the incline and decline without being redundant. ...Edit thumps silence for the silence changes for the record to record. ...Edit to try to show the parking circle. ...Edit ot have Richard be explicit about what hotel, so Dick need not. ...Edit to have the act of people be simple like Jostle to show all that has been defined in the previous sentences. ...Edit to write jostle again for it is of the definition, but the definition will be pulled to a stand. ...Edit to move jostle because the walk across street is straight. ...Edit reaction of George because he isn't that impressed having been in D.C. that longest of the four. ...Edit of of with before for that will do. ...Edit to have walk be step for step is better. ...Edit the of to be no more. ...Edit the manifest of congov to better show the congov point out the taxi. ...Edit the approach of congov to better show the congov approach the taxi by removing the sentence. ...Edit to show the drive and not a roll. The edit the Transmission thumps. ...Edit to Jo pulls stick-shift back.
r29002 | kalab | 2008-10-26 06:51:24 -0700 (Sun, 26 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Jo looks at my reflection on review mirror. ...Edit ofs of sentence. ...Edit words from dialog of George for a more natural flow and for the chacter's words. ...Edit by removing then says for the two words need not be. ...Edit to move JO's dialog after Dicks. And have Dick answer another question. The stare of Jo will be. ...Edit to make the people walk a line. ...Edit to remove more dialog from Betty. Iread and it stops the flow. No longer. ...Edit for fumes for smells is. ...Edit to have the thump written as it is needed. Edit to have betty not. Sort of continue the flow of thought. The lull that peaks again the lulls. ...Edit to Row house lights dim, flicker then shine.
r28981 | kalab | 2008-10-25 07:33:57 -0700 (Sat, 25 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I lay arm on Ash's shoulders. ...Edit for smell of need not be. ...Edit for rolls slowly is not needed. It rolls. ...Edit because the verb part felt odd. It read wierd. Nudge reads better. ...Edit to use proper noun for She would have dfined, but wasn't used. Of course, it is Dick's friends, so her is enough. I then rewrote the word to be she. ...Edit smell of for it isn't need to be told of a smell when one is shown with the verb. ...Edit the between people for that isn't what is needed. ...Edit and write to show the push and the press. ...I step back toward is... ....Edit to show place of grab of Ash. ...Edit the grip and what is grapped and how the grab is loosened. I don't want Dick to pull or pry for he isn't rude. He talks. ...Edit for the hang of arm to be fluid and have a flow. ...Edit the walk to not have a return statement. Step and wedge is enough. ...Edit for action to show with space that Richard only moves after the door is opened. ...Edit betty's additional dialog for it is not needed. Federal is not law. And D.C. has not state law. ...Edit the comma for period to set off the sentence from the dialog. No says or talk verb for a comma. ...The sound and feeling of transmission is felt and heard with the two words sentence. The soft thumps is not good. ...Edit because the whole blue green yellow metaphore of vision confuses in this chapter. ...Edit for the movement of George needs less not more. ...Edit and write George acting and talking. ...Edit to better show the people as a mass instead of a collection of groups. Edit and write to better write the bikers. ...Edit to write the smell of sweat. The smells. ...Edit the thumps sound to be more simple as it should be. ...Edit to better write of the sweat. ...Edit to write to show the people part for the taxi. ...Edit the wind from apple pie fumes for I feel it is not something needed. Less is more here. ...Edit thought after thought and act of hold lungs. Show. Hold breath is too much a metaphor. ...Edit the dialog to better show than tell of what is. I like George dialog now. It doesn't feel to be fill in dialog for something to be edited to be better. ...Edit the thought of dick for better flow and removed thought because the thought metaphor sucks. ...Edit to show George holding a finger up. and trigger a thought of the same action earlier with a simple one. ...Edit and write And to have the thought be at the same isntance as Eleanor Speaking. Or near if not the same time. ...Edit more dialog to better. ...Edit dick's talk to be during exhale. ...Edit to shorten and better dialog. Lost in thought. ...Edit to ,,Thank you.'' I look at saliva spots. I fold handkerchief over saliva spots and put into pocket.
r28955 | kalab | 2008-10-22 22:26:48 -0700 (Wed, 22 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from Betty blinks, looks at me, says, ,,What?'' and I edit to write the dialog of Dick asking he if he triggers the pulses. Trigger is better. Thought of this during walk. See FunWork212.
r28926 | kalab | 2008-10-20 22:41:06 -0700 (Mon, 20 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit of for the cold. ...Edit another of. Is mint feels better. ...Edit to remove the borders and the of and everything. ...Edit the of of Dick's thought for they are not there. ...Edit more ofs more and more and more. ...Edit to remove redundant words about walking people on sidewalks. ...Edit to write me of with of Eleanor's dialog. ...Edit more ofs. Ofs of curbs. ...Edit space to merge a sentence with a sentence to make a paragraph. ...Edit for less fucking ofs. ofs ofs ofs ofs ofs. ...Edit after Betty for near Betty for the words flow better and after read to be confusing. ...Edit to remove more words. ...Edit to Taxi jerks, pops, rolls over street.
r28902 | kalab | 2008-10-19 15:19:32 -0700 (Sun, 19 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I grab lowball glass. Rim hovers below nose. ...Edit to have the FaJITa to be named. ...Edit to have the lowball glass. ...Edit to have a verb be a verb. BITE is better. Makes the words near good. ...Edit to write the plural as it should be for a drop. ...Edit sentence of busboy corner something to be a sentence one can actually read for it read like shit. Now it reads. ...Edit words from swallows for George doesn't swallow all for he still has some in cheek. I like the words removed for they read as they should. ...Edit for Richard just drinks beer. No more is needed. It is recorded it is in a beer mug, so how else. The words were worthless. ...Edit to complete the name of the food item. ...Edit how the taco is bitten to use less words. ...Edit to write of Richard gagging. Shows the speed and talking and chewing effect. ...Edit to I chew. <|Why?>
r28888 | kalab | 2008-10-19 07:53:40 -0700 (Sun, 19 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from George and I shake hands. <|Firm. Sweaty.> ...Edit to rewrite the notice and of the wrinkles at outter edges of eye. I really didn't want the of. ...Edit to rid of water and of. for the contents a not known. ...Edit the definition of position to romve the over and place it to known object location. ...Edit water of. I really don't like water of. ...Edit upright for I just didn't like. Read of sitting position and find http://www.medterms.com/script/main/art.asp\?articlekey=25488. So I wrote the sentece Spine is neutral. ...Edit Dick's dialog to define the Larry's FaJITa better. ...Edit of hair lock for the of needed to be removed. ...Edit to remove the words that talk of eye corner and socket. The talk is just too much and not enough and not needed, so I removed most of the sentence and wrote something with less. It feels better. the looking at a stare. ...Edit verb tense. ...Edit by writing to show Eleanor waiting for Now to some how reject or accept the order. ...Edit of of an item. ...Edit case. ...Edit to complete the subject and change table to people for it is the people dick is inspecting for detection. ...Edit by writing what is in the cup. Here I thought about editing all the cup ofs but then resisted. For this is one of the few ofs I think I want. ...Edit into mouth because it read weird. ...Edit table to booth for they are the booth people. that is a better definition. ...Edit of from carafe for there is only one and no of water is needed. ...Edit definition of glass and plactic cups to show tyoe. Then read for a glass to use for drinks. Eleanor's drink glasss is stupid. I read this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cocktail_glass. Cocktail is what was written. ...Edit to have the contents only be defined by slushy. Slushy for the frozen drink. ...Edit the move of the glasses from tray by george to use the new definition and way to show the drinks and not tell. ...Edit by actually writing an of to conform to the cup of water standard. Write to show George licking slush for it is. And he is holding it, so... ...Edit to use location and definition of booth used to define the booth in prior sentences. ...Edit by moving sentence of betty's reply for it happens soon after dick saying or talking. ...Edit to write lowball as the glass type for the scotch. I spread this edit around as far as I edited. ...Edit to <|Acting or uncomfortable.>
r28871 | kalab | 2008-10-18 10:58:31 -0700 (Sat, 18 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I think, <|People.> I turn chest and slide between standing groups. ...Edit the emit of sound for it wasn't emitting as I wanted it to emit. ...Edit black from words for the color if something of change should have already been seen or define and unless it changed color it lacks the change or the direct focus to of these words. ...Edit thought to remove the ask of time and to keep in flow with the thought. ...Edit the thought to have better flow and use the slang scan fear. ...Edit to remove of and remove the unwanted word of soft. ...Edit athought of it is focused on football. The recording of the sounds is enough. It maybe annoying, but not worth the further expression. ...Edit and write their to make the voice theirs. ...Edit the verbs of the sump pumps for one was in the sentence already. ...Edit the other side because other side of street has an of I don't want. The ofs can be used here and there. There have been enough spoke by Psycho to have some influence on record. ...Edit sentences to a paragraph because it is all about the same object. I also want it all of once and have not thought of a squence. ...Edit of from the words for the gardens and the plural are lost. ...Edit I think for that has been written enough. ...Edit the words of seeing for it is not needed. And the words thinking is dumb. Edit the thought to have the end zone be the goal of getting those who care out and preventing Psycho from killing or making it appear like he wants to stop. Thought thought is so thought these days. ...Edit of group because three is used and there is no need to group three if is defined. And there was the of. ...Edit of and write words as they were written before. The remove the words because they don't feel needed. ...Edit the hoverchopter thought to remove words of action. The thought needs to begin and just go. No record has time or thought of the body. That is its reason. ...Edit to write of a bumper for that is what he steps behind. ...Edit to write the connction of Dick to a position. ...Edit and write the feel and think to have the feeling of setting up the game before. ...Edit thought to flow to remembering the game and the endzone. ...Edit for plural cuffs as he nears Endzone. ...Edit to have plural for two must exist if on were to step between. ...Edit to the end.
r28853 | kalab | 2008-10-16 22:06:55 -0700 (Thu, 16 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A quagmire around red condominium grows corn. The corn is surrounded by steel chain link fence. ...Edit from for it is not needed. Behind is a location and the of. Begin the sentence as it is now for it shows a flash by being right there. Flash of tells. This now shows. ...Edit to make one word from two for they should be one word. ...Edit words of sound that was not even a sentence. ...Edit to write of fumes for rubber is and odd air. ...Edit the step forward for the walk is enough. ...Edit to write of a whirl and remove the of for a better sentence. ...Edit to write with, and edit made and written of with an unsaved version. ...EDit fore over is better over the road. Edit the flow over for a better verb and the the last sentence to finish it. Through is odd. ...Edit to write a t that was missing. ...Edit to make plural. It reads to me to be plural. ...Edit to have the sentence for showing the big stop. ...Edit then for it is bad for the flow. Edit because behind works here better than with for it completes the showing of the scene. ...EDit to make the sentence a great sentence. ...Edit to ,,Hello,'' I say.
r28836 | kalab | 2008-10-15 23:57:52 -0700 (Wed, 15 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A quagmire around red condominium grows corn. The corn is surrounded by steel chain link fence. ...Edit misspelled word. ...Edit for the dance to be with and not to for one dances with another. ...Edit the article for it is not needed. ...Edit verb tense by editing the S. ...Edit and write to rid of and create a better sentence. A sentence now good. ...Edit article and of from the sentence. ...Edit to have the subject be twice and remove words and of to have the subject show and not tell. ...Edit of and make sentence goo to define the passing of subject. Row house I like. ...Write flow of thought. ...Edit after losing place and seaching for place and seeing a space. ...Edit to The cicadas buzz. The buzz rises and falls, rises and falls. ...Edit here and there. I edited this twice, but had a problem with the file ending when I edited and saved this with openoffice. I hope I have all the edits prior. I found most.
r28781 | kalab | 2008-10-12 16:15:10 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to The tree ring is. ...Edit to remove inner from the tree ring run because it writes as if there are two and not just the inside. And it isn't needed. ...Edit words of Psycho report because Outer is not needed. The area is enough of a Psycho report. Specifics are only upon request. ...Edit sensors to remove and of and better define the sensor location and type. ...Edit comma for period because a period should end the sentence. ...Edit to show the skater pass. ...Edit to show the spin and walk backward. Edit words that follow that are now redundant. ...Edit write the forward toward man-on-horse. The center of the circle. ...Edit top of for roof to be the object. The roof is better than top for a roof is the top of a building. ...Edit sentences to paragraph as it should. ...Edit for top of for roof for it is better. ...Edit to make number of thoughts being read to be different than the amount scanned minutes ago for the parameter has changed and people's position. ...Edit to have another sentence of people. ...Edit stare or kiss to stare and kiss because or means they are doing one or the other. ...Edit and write of the light from the head of dupont. ...Edit of the pole then I wanted to edit of the lamp. ...Edit all lamps to be of pole Lamp pole. ...Edit the flicker of the lights how it is broke and not off. I hated the no light. ...Edit to Lamp pole top scanner lights flicker and dim, brighten.
r28773 | kalab | 2008-10-12 10:06:07 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I was looking at maps for the last edit and realized the complete name to being with is Dupont Circle.
r28769 | kalab | 2008-10-12 06:51:37 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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A thought to have to have Dupont. Without the of for it is that way unless being mocking as it is the next chapter. The add of have of Dupont is to set teh record.
r28754 | kalab | 2008-10-11 11:37:32 -0700 (Sat, 11 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Smiles fade. ...Edit dialog of Dick talking for it is off. ...Edit the fridge out for the fridge is not. The water is warm and in a cabinet. ...Edit and write of Mustang putting bottle in the cabinet. ...Edit for Mustang to as if all congov. ...Edit Dick's answer to just yes for they know and can talk without need to reask a question. Then edit the yes to a nod, so Dick can swallow. ...Edit words of hair description because they are not needed. ...Edit comma for the period for a comma is needed. ....Edit of water. ...Edit I am to I'm for it flows better. ...EDit to remove the share of stare. ...Edit to write of the tone of the door closing. ...Edit the Thinking Cap. What happened to it. The show of the apartement and character is needed for it. So I added the thought of it. So I wrote I toss Thinking Cap to desktop. Then I read of the thought of Mustang not needing it realizing. ...Edit the words defining the getting of the handkerchief because fewer words are needed and better and make this at least good. ...Edit to have Dick not take the thinking cap for he realizes it won't help and didn't it more out of a nervous unthinking reaction. It made him feel he was doing something. And thought of that when\? When the hell does Dick think of this. ...Edit Thinking Cap for Thought Cap for Thought Cap caps the thought from being read. ...Edit to have a reason to get the Thought Cap now I know what it does now. And this some thing left because he knows it won't matter or work. ...The thought cap is now felt and thought. ...Edit to write the wipe of arm pits. .Edit to write of sound in mind. ...Edit and write of Psycho not using congov. ...Edit dialog of Psycho to have record be read. I read as it should. ...Edit article from the thought. Same is enough. ...Edit to the end.
r28744 | kalab | 2008-10-10 22:44:23 -0700 (Fri, 10 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Bhangra sonus fades from a shout to a whisper. ...Edit flung for hung for flung is an action or a metaphor for chaotic state. I don't want a metaphor. ...Edit the action on shirt to be better. More of an inspection. ...Edit to question mark a question. ...Edit and write because the flint and steel thing is not this story. I like the match. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit to be better define the light and the candle light. write a better word. ...Edit for the faint is a shitty adjective. Flame is better. ...Edit both of from the words for it need not be. ...Edit for both and now because the words were use less. ...Edit to Sweat drops into box.
r28726 | kalab | 2008-10-09 23:11:50 -0700 (Thu, 09 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Vehicle gardens are. <|Aston Martins.> ...Edit the word contain for it was not need. ...Edit path to vehicle garden for it lost me and then I thought that the sidewalk was enough. ...Edit of and words of side of face to be just face. ...Edit to remove and of and better the form of silhouette to group. ...Edit of from roof of because without it the flow is just fine. ...Edit a comma for a period for the period is need before the internal dialog. ...Edit going to move because going is shit and move can be the verb. ...Edit a sentence to better clarify the running across street. ...Edit words 'I think.' that are of no thought. ...Edit another of. ...Edit the ofs of intersection to better the description and rid the words of ofs. ...Edit of and write of talking. ...Edit a sentence to a paragraph. ...Edit to move thought to follow the sentence it needs to follow. ...Edit the smell of burnt hair to remove the of and use a better verb. ...Edit to the end.
r28692 | kalab | 2008-10-06 23:05:17 -0700 (Mon, 06 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to The mass expands and contracts. ...Edit plural for only one finger is the focus. ...Edit a then for I don't want the thought to be that fluid. ...Edit of from words for the smell is. ...Edit because the group or large group identifies too many people as if a separate part. The people mass is, so it will be. ...Edit to make a long sentence short with out an of and a better definition. The of killed and built the sentence. ...Edit to change an challenge the verb and shorten the sentence of Dick pushing through/between people. ...Edit sentence of people raising fist at people to show people around and not just infront. ...Edit the site of the arch and write of what is glimpsed while passing. ...Edit to remove shitty prose about sight and gaze and write something fluid and better of prose. ...Edit to attempt to make the black sleeve definition better. ...edit to better write of the menthol steam puiffs out window. Before it read to be redundant. ...Edit top of for there is an of and it is not needed. ...Edit useless verb of are from the talk. ...Edit article the for it is not needed. ...Edit a moment of aware movement and looking and positioning in mind of head to see what is. Right then forward. ...Edit of and make Calvert intersection. ...Edit the removal of a smell of for it is better without. the sentence still whole. ...Edit to show the light shines on people (and street). ...Edit for grease smoke is much better than smell of grease. ...Edit to remove the obvious up and down that is shown. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit sky is clear for that should infer that there are no clouds. Less words is better. ...Edit to have fumes and no of. ...Edit to write an and because it is needed. ...Edit another of for people groups is better than groups of people. Ofs are shit for this book. ...Edit a sentence for only one is needed to show the running along the fence. ...Edit an of. ...Edit another of from book. ...Edit another fucking of. ...Edit another of then better write the sentence of the floating bag. ...Edit to Plastic bag expands and floats then falls.
r28651 | kalab | 2008-10-04 11:38:45 -0700 (Sat, 04 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit the words up for motor up for it is not needed and too much. Makes the words bad. ...Edit and write to show the blinking after the siren begins to show a change of the closed eyelids. ...Edit to better the sentence to have the object action stop. ...Edit exits of for there is an of and it is not needed. Less words. ...Edit out another pick up. Lift is better for this pickup. ...Edit for the beat of mind is as good as heat beat. And heat beat in the sentence flows with focus before and has less words. ...Edit sentences for it conflicts with Dick's relaxing. ...Edit another of because I don't feel it is needed. ...Edit the spread of light to be thought people. Crowd was not what is wanted. it is not how Dick sees people. ...Edit because the door to room is closed. Should it be\? I will check the beginning real quick. I just read. It is open, so this will change. ...Edit to move the passing of plastic drawers and fix the overall action of Dick putting on a shirt. Remove the words that had him opening a plastic drawer for they are now passed. ...Edit sentence to show basket on shelf. ...Edit another pick up. I think I will get rid of them all. ...Edit another pick up for lift. ...edit for the whistle pitch to increase for sound ptich increases. And the pitch of whistle stupid. Because there is a high and a low then increase feels right though raise and lower may be better. I will use raise. ...Edit to write the end of the whistle. ...Edit and write the pull and grab of the ruler. ...Edit of from Dick's thought. ...Edit of dirty door for it is not needed. ...Edit door to be consistent as a clear plastic door. ...Edit lost of ofs in sentence of shadows and silhouettes. ...Edit open by removing of it for it is expected after the push. The thought only had if the door doesn't do what is expected, which is open. ...EDit thought by moving it after a paragraph of description for the flow is better and the words improved after all the description. ...Edit another of ANOTER. ...Edit article for a is better than One. ...Edit space for the sentence is a separate subject from the paragraph is appeared to form. ...Edit and write more of the mass and the people and show the mass with movement and pressure. ...Edit to better write of the drone's hum. ...Edit cloud of for it is redundant and redundant is not wanted. And there is an of. ...Edit the smells for better flow and no ofs. ...Edit the step though the crowd to show and feel the crowd better. Didn't like what was written. ...Edit to People are one mass.
r28644 | kalab | 2008-10-03 22:28:36 -0700 (Fri, 03 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I pivot head up and down and look at center of floating ball of limbs. ...Edit article for it need not be. ...Edit word for stop is enough to define the verb stopped. ...Edit thought for it is not needed for it is shit. ...Edit Psycho dialog to better define Psycho saying in object form and objective form of sentence. ...Edit different because that is not needed so it was removed. ....Edit the remove of all R.O.D.. Removed the sentences of it and the words are better. Feel good about it gone. I hated the with. That sucked but for some stupid reason I allowed it to remain. Now that R.O.D. is gone I feel better. ...Edit while ridding the R.O.D. and make a sentence and an early dialog of Psycho words of Psycho by removing R.O.D. and simplifying sentences. ....I read and scanned to fine all the R.O.D.(s) and remove them. ...Edit from the area of the first R.O.D. removal. ...Edit and write to complete the the sentence with a verb. ...Edit Psycho dialog to remove redundant feeling with. The reason they have to find them will be questioned. ...Edit and write sentence for Dick to question thought. ...Edit and write a sentence of aaction. ...Edit the verbs of two sentences to follow the nod flow. ...Edit and write a sentence to complete a reason for Dick to need to do this fundamentally. ...Edit to <|And mom and dad?>
r28605 | kalab | 2008-09-29 22:00:05 -0700 (Mon, 29 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning of the chapter. ...Edit the with water because the object having water was defined in the sentence of the paragraph. ...Edit the state of the fill of the cup to show ti empty. ...Edti to <|Could be a global, company, congov?> I wipe face with end of towel. <|Maybe government?>
r28587 | kalab | 2008-09-28 15:49:00 -0700 (Sun, 28 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit it thought to make more brief like a thought. the object of the thought known and don't need to be thoughout even for the reader of the story. ...The chair can only create the pressure to cause the floor to creak, so edit and write to have them both creak. ...Edit to remove words to wipe towl over face. with just doesn't feel good to use all the time. ...Edit the article because it is not used for the prior sentence. ...Eyes peer is better than strain and reason why. I like better now. ....Edit the ha-ha laugh because it is not needed and stupid and should be written with quotes if written at all. ...Edit sentence for Dick doesn't peak and is staring. ...Edit out ellipsis for the pause and reconstitute of thought is not needed. ...Edit wrap for hang for he hangs it around neck. ...Edit and write thought that is okay, but not really Dicks' first thought. His first thought is to doubt. Or give the impression of something esle. The words This is bad could mean many things too until it is defined by the thoughts that follow and that is also more reason for this better thought. ...Edit to remove with with towel and then remove lots of words that are redundant. ...Edit the of and a better way to write of the voice of child with few words, too. ...Edit for wiping with towel over for that is the best description feel because it doesn't have the with. ...Edit the dialog of Psycho for government to be Department Offense Defense for that is what is used in the previous sentence. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit and write a sentence of dialog of Psycho to show and complete the thought flow. ...Edit another wipe with. ...Edit to A smile fades.
r28568 | kalab | 2008-09-27 22:03:03 -0700 (Sat, 27 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The taxi's roof occupancy light turns off. ...Edit to remove turn off for it is bad words for the sentence. Thought of dim, but it is more of a flicker. ...Edit becuase the sentence was seeming from now wear and relying on words not written. ...Edit the cap for it is lower. ...Edit common for period for there is more of a practiced pause. ...Write rickshaw to keep the object. ...Write Doorway is to show the object. ...Edit the sentences to paragraphs. ...Edit to <|No business.> I tilt head and see upside-down town. <|Republicans do pay good to fuck a global.>
r28545 | kalab | 2008-09-25 22:03:49 -0700 (Thu, 25 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit the word mass from paragraph for it isn't need at the time, and I had issues with how to write the hyphenated verb with or without an s. ...Edit to add possession to the people's mass for it feel better. The mass as far as a mass singers or something on sings like singing mass is better defined. This shows more religion than group if Dick is religious. ...Edit to write focus as think for focus is too much confusion. ...Edit then don't edit the words people mass with possession for it needs to remain people mass for it is now part of the record. Then I removed the words mass. ...Edit and write to replace mass with dance for the new metaphor is of the record. ...Edit and write close eyes to sigh because he is not closing eyes then I would need to open eyes and I think close eyelids over eyes is the records showing of the process. ...Edit and write the words of building row description for there felt to be a lot missing from the words in the flow. I think the flow is better now. ...Write to edit sentence to show that Dick is looking through a doorway and not in the room he is in. ...Edit to place the ceiling fan above and not in room. ...Edit to remove redundant opposite. ...Edit paragraph about standing people by writing of the people standing. ...Edit words to split paragraph to have a paragraph work from the people's head defined by the thought prior to show the focus sway. ...Edit a space. ...Edit above for over to, welll, because I want to. ...Edit mass for dance for that is the last and combined metaphor. ...Edit to write wheels just because it is specific. ...Write comma for it is needed. ...Edit to define everything as all for they are all connected. What was written was not enough. ...Edit the rattle for the glass and the ruler are what needs to be defined. ...Write something written to show the focus of the fact the ruler is still holding window open. ...Edit coat for covers for the connotations because of the denotations of coat are too many. ...Edit sentence to maybe better define the act of Dick leaning back. ...Edit a few to just Cicadas for a few is, well, it doesn't feel right. ...I edited to The chair squeaks. ...The overall edit felt good. I realize the first chapter is something that I need to work and work. it did help the fact I have sent this to someone though I have yet to hear from them. The thought alone make me want to correct. I edited to The chair squeaks, but I hope the next edit to begin with I feel and think, <|The money job.>
r28492 | kalab | 2008-09-22 10:30:07 -0700 (Mon, 22 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The pack hits stair. Sound echoes. ..,Edit for Vibration spreads. ...Edit dialog for a single thought will be enough and is better. I edited to end.
r28467 | kalab | 2008-09-18 14:52:39 -0700 (Thu, 18 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from the beginning. ...Edit the lead to open for the door opens to something. ...Edit forward for it is defined with open. ...Edit the placement of the wrapping of red button for it needed to be the first action with limbs. ...Edit to show the height and size of the load better. ...Edit by removing words not needed for anything. ...Edit to use metaphor to define record accepted metaphor. the record hasn't the metaphor recently. With in 1111. ...Edit to show sliding. ...Edit to end.
r28446 | kalab | 2008-09-17 06:37:06 -0700 (Wed, 17 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from A wave of hollow pain fills body then fades. ...Edit syntax of a mission thought mark. ...Edit words by removing for they are not needed. ...Write and edit of a Nothing is for I feel one is needed then. The existing, but fading feeling. ...Write and edit a sentence that needed to be for there was the pool stopped before. And there is a meaning on protecting above while getting wet below. ....Edit K Street to K when Dick is thinking or speaking. This may change, but I feel it should be this way for it would be a word to scan and change record to begin to warn of the thought that could be bad or good. And living there he likes to use the letters alone. The way of being there. ...Edit by removing water. ...Edit by moving and showing Psycho moving before dick an Dick following Psycho for Psycho always leads. The flow is better. ...Edit out an of. ...I edited to Water drips from nose, drips from shirt cuff, drips from collar.
r28423 | kalab | 2008-09-15 21:52:44 -0700 (Mon, 15 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit words for they are not needed. ...Edit thought by removing words to find the flow. ...read the worrds from beginning to end. I feel that it is near something complete, but don't know the something. I do know that I edited what was needed and to the end.
r28421 | kalab | 2008-09-15 20:52:10 -0700 (Mon, 15 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words defining the pour more than than the pour. ...Edit to remove ofs. Edit to write a sentence of Psycho answering questions. ...Edit to remove words to make more of who is in the door. ...I edit to the end. ...I think I follow the chapter. I believe that it is near something. I think the idealism of Dick and thought to may save people drives his motives. I think this action is in character.
r28394 | kalab | 2008-09-14 06:12:01 -0700 (Sun, 14 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and read aloud from the beginning. ...I edited for the face to be shown after the head is. ...Edit and write by moving a sentence and writing a sentence to show Dick doesn't move that fast after being tossed from Always. ...Edit to change the sentence. ...Edit by moving a sentence of dialog that occurs quicker to show the process speed of Psycho and better story flow. ...Edit space between stage coaches. ...I edited to <|Follow jester away from Psycho,> I think.
r28369 | kalab | 2008-09-13 08:43:22 -0700 (Sat, 13 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I began editing from the beginning of the chapter. ...I edit the headrest to head rest then the specifics need not be. The following sentence I wrote headrest and an of because it needed to be shown. Then the headrest was written to show what is pressed by Richard. ...More definition to define row helps the show and shows a more technical military name which is never a bad thing. ...Until they split the Army is a column. ...The edit of the soldier line is better. the detail is needed because Dick knows exactly what it is. ...I move sentence to better have a flow with the new paragraph of the end splitting. ...I edited the column to be lines and the row to have lines. The row will is now better used with all the specific direction the terms and use of how to define is better. The edit a lot but makes the description of a lot more fluid and shown. ...I wrote of Dick moving to show an instance of self awareness of poistion. ...I wrote a couple ofs so I removed one. ...Betty smiles and Richared is seen by Dick for reason for Richard to say they stare. A few words edited here and there to better the very near good story and details of that story. ...Write a sentence to define a line from Always' door. ...I edited to One man steps away. One man does not move.
r28258 | kalab | 2008-09-01 16:00:39 -0700 (Mon, 01 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The tanks turn turrets left and right. ...write for the sound. Then talk of the sound. The sound i felt needed to be written. Then the dialog. ...Write to show Dick doing something for there is a moment of seeing. ...Edit for less words and one less obvious verbs. The smiles then the words. ...Edit singular verb for plural. ...Edit to have fewer words for Exit sign for fewer are needed for clarity and prose. ...Edit for it is into. ...Edit the smile out for there is no need. ...Edit an of. ...Edit for sound to stop and not fade for it doesn't fade. ...Edit the object being. ...Write of Geoge plugging nose after the fart to show what was removed from telling. ...Write of Richard showing the snapping of the mood. ...Edit for I say be before words. ...Write for surface. ...Edit for article of a column. ...Edit landing for walkway for landing it is not. A walkway it is. ...Outside handle should remain consistent and now is. . ...Edit and write the words used and should be used to define the door that shuts. ...Edited to end of chapter.
r28237 | kalab | 2008-08-31 15:45:12 -0700 (Sun, 31 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Richard looks at me and smiles. Richard pivots head side to side. ...Edit pops for thumps for I have been and like thumps. ...Edit thought to rid of not and less words with why remember. ...Edit an of for poles is better without. ...Write hand for that is how it was written for the other. The record within constraint. ...EDit thuds for thumps. ...Edit an of for me for my. ...Write with of proper way to dance. ...Edit floor for level for there are levels. ...Edit for rolling wheels. ...Write to define the action of slowing blue. ...Edit the fact Eleanor is speaking for Richard. ...Edit sentence for it is not needed. ...Edit and of and bad way of writing the sentence. ...Write the Richard saying the slang ot better to conversation flow the acknowledge of the team favorite. ...Edit to remove words that are not needed. ...Edit dialog of have and need to make clear that the talk and jumbled and not thought out. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
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I edited from <|Even if cap. Injection.> and read back. ....Write words I wrote A BANG booms and echoes through the sky...People jumps and put hands to chest. They look side to side and up. from last edit into story after thought for I liked it and I wanted the words to be, but they were not were they needed to be. This is. ...Edit sentence for the object is redundant and the words at end confuse. ...Write and edit to have the verb say used some what less to then show an action of the character. ...Write out words of Dick becoming and showing a little more paranoia. And the read for the looks and the thought about believing it is taken care of and not a scare tactic. There are levels of belief one needs now from the government. ...Edit for better scene and few words with armored Army. ...Edited verb for less words. ...Edited to Eleanor turns handle on door.
r28207 | kalab | 2008-08-30 11:08:04 -0700 (Sat, 30 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Richard's pupils focus upon me. ...Edit to write an active verb and remove useless words. ...Edit to rid an of. ...Write And me because the thought is created by the action. ...Edit and write to better the show of Richard's tense jaw. ...Edit and extra e not needed. ...Write of the yawn as it should be. ...Edit thought because I was going to remove it. I removed some words. ...Edit to removed words not needed. ...Edit for action to be before the words of Eleanor. ...Edit walk to shuffle step for there are people. ...Edit butt for ass for butt is better. ...Edit to remove words for only squint is needed. ...I edited to George shrugs. He looks forward.
r28181 | kalab | 2008-08-28 06:22:39 -0700 (Thu, 28 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and wrote from The stagecoach before taxi stops. ...Edit after reading North East knowing the Northwest I changed during recent edit to Northwest needed to be North East. Edit to remove ad adjective because it was too much for the sentence with the use of the of....Edit or rewrote the sentence because it was only almost complete. There is much better, ...Edit pedestrian for people and person for pedestrian is not lexical or rather of a group of words not of this record. The write a sentence about the people moving from front of taxi. ...Edit Richard from dialog because the sue of the name is informal, and he last spoke, I left a later use of his name as Betty speaks because it was commanding and sort of mother like. Disappointed. ...Edit to leave the Richard for it is commanding then remove a Richard of Oh, relax for it is not commanding and he just spoke. ...Edit clench for pulse for pulse was confusing. ...Write the call of Dick when bettyu speaks for she want his attention from silence. ...Write another yawning after Betty. ...Edit adjective for Dick is not into the ass detail. His thought are n other things. ...Write ass to butt, edit of and edit and write the sentence. ...I edited to <|Am I a yellow?>
r28144 | kalab | 2008-08-25 06:02:32 -0700 (Mon, 25 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Tell congov.>. ...Edit jump suits of body suits for not all party members wear jump suits, and I feel most are. ...Edit the thought from for there is no answer for there was an answer before the words. ...Edit dialog by removing words that george doesn't say. I want the confusion of the fact white may be shinning. ...Write smile to better to give read to thought and the nature of Dick. ...Edit to remove few words for one good. ...Edit by changing volume from soft to strong, so betty need not always shout. ...Edit of to stagecoach movers. ...edit sound with an is for fewer and better words. ...I edited to Soft thuds hit below.
r28120 | kalab | 2008-08-23 16:04:31 -0700 (Sat, 23 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from Oak fumes. Deep peat fills nose and head. It feels to fume from eyes. ...Edit to clarify a sentence. ...Edit punctuation. ...Edit a sentence to write a verb. ...Edit Betty while eating. The close of the eyes is weird. ...Edit the act of George swallowing the fajit for eat is too much and feels to take more time than is written. ...I edited to remove a stupid useless sentence about the food. ...Edit dialog of Richard for he wouldn't then say create excitement. ...Write to better define the cutting of food by Eleanor. ...Edit words by removing dialog of dick that isn't needed. ...Write more dialog of George. ...Edit a with for a holding for the verb is better. ...Edit Eleanor's full name for it is not needed. ...Edit the drink of scotch and the description to write a verb. ...Edit for George adjusts brim. ...Edit by removing words and replacing them with words the are fewer and less metaphoric. ...Edit to use level to define the levels of the place. And floor to define the surface below feed. The level is better. This may not be universal. Thought it may. ...I edited to the end.
r28108 | kalab | 2008-08-22 22:45:56 -0700 (Fri, 22 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Why before midnight?> ...Edit to remove words that are not needed an beyond the detail and focus of the mind for the record. ...Edit mark for it becomes a question. ...Write for Eleanor must look up from something. ...Edit to have it be louder and not above. Above used with sound is a metaphor I am not liking. ...Edit, write the use of my for the record uses the words my. ...Edit a comma for a period for it needs to be a period. ...Edit the walk of busboy because busboy doesn't need to walk to be by now after grabbing tray. ...Edit to remove at that is not needed. ...Edit to use pronoun and not a proper. ...Edit to remove around for around is not a good word to use. Surround is better with sound. ...Edit by removing the word body for it is not needed and only confuses. ...Edit sentence that to me had confusion for the verb sit defined to me that an action to place. Sitting is much better. ...Write action of dick. ...Write, edit for another action required. ...Write, edit for some fucked reason I wrote the record of Dick smelling a cup of bourbon not in hand or action that would require focus in the record. It is now. ...Edit the word to to toward for to write as if the body is stopping on Now. ...Edit and write the lifting and lowering of brow of Betty for the process was near complete. It now is. ..Edit and write an and to complete. ..Write then to separate object and subject. ...Edit articles that conflict and are not needed. ...Edit to removed words of people in a booth. I used time to thing of at and booth and around and what the fuck it all meant. What is now is something that is better, I feel. ...Edti to better the people leaving action. There was confusion for me. Not now. ...Edit the drinking of bourbon to make good. ...I edited to <|Working me.>
r28018 | kalab | 2008-08-17 14:20:49 -0700 (Sun, 17 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I began edit at Empty seat is before Mustang. ..Edited by removing words for the were not needed. ...Edited two sentences to one because the second should have been part of the first. ...The chin description is too much and the description not needed. The hair is better. ...To right is direction. ...There were a few grammar edits needed. ....Richard smells of beer. ...I edited to We stare into other's eyes.
r27992 | kalab | 2008-08-16 06:15:05 -0700 (Sat, 16 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Leaves flap and flutter. ...I wrote flutter because I like flutter. ...I check dialog syntax before the beginning words for I found on off. Then another. ...I edited to the end.
r27977 | kalab | 2008-08-15 14:30:24 -0700 (Fri, 15 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence for the stars are first seen. ...I removed thought to edit the thought for the thought was internal dialog too much. ...The shout of sam louder thought to get rid of the ofs. ...Edit for fume is the verb. ...Green has two and moves slow. Human and other labels don't define. If party then few. ...I edited to I step to corner of block.
r27920 | kalab | 2008-08-10 18:52:28 -0700 (Sun, 10 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the street call out for it is to be more grid like and like the thought record of the previous chapter. ...Oak should be the description. It is still seen for the wood. ...I edited by removing a sentence for it was redundant of action and a the lesser of the two descriptions of moving the box with a sentence. ...I edited tools for implements for tools is a better metaphor and accurate description. ...Removed dialog that doesn't need to be for it confused the flow of the dialog focuse. ...Edit dialog because an explination needs not be. ...Lighten up is redundant metaphor. Only lighten is needed. ...The granola bar needs to be on cooling rack. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
r27881 | kalab | 2008-08-06 19:21:43 -0700 (Wed, 06 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed article because it is a general recognition of sound. ...I edited to I hear clank and spirt of sump pumps.
r27869 | kalab | 2008-08-06 06:06:43 -0700 (Wed, 06 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I edited the second paragraph to be a better description and then entrance. ...I removed words because I need not have a specific creator or controller of Psycho. And Psycho was not created for the government. ...I edited slow to Silence is. Bass shakes wall and windows.
r27835 | kalab | 2008-08-04 06:46:17 -0700 (Mon, 04 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words for the end was not needed. I wrote of dancing object because it had better flow with the paragrpah. I wrote words for head needs to be show or told of guiding bodies of the abstract tangent. ...Everything windowed wall is just window wall. ...Leopards are all dead, so some thing like liver spots is a better metaphor. ...I moved words to better define the motion. ...I wrote a what thought to flow to the feel and think, what was being thought. ...Removed thought for the thought was too tangential. ...I removed words from thought to better flow. ...I edited from beginning to end. The chapter is near being a chapter.
r27785 | kalab | 2008-07-30 23:26:25 -0700 (Wed, 30 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words that read more like redundant words. Like stab. ...I removed thought for the thought is not that focused. ...I edited to the end.
r27762 | kalab | 2008-07-29 06:18:10 -0700 (Tue, 29 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from beginning. ...I removed a not needed word. ...I moved to better time and flow. ...I spoken words be thought words. ...I like the effort of defining the tunnel. I did think why tunnel\? Psycho calls it a tunnel. ...I wrote more detection of the green button and steel door. ...I removed dialog of Psycho not needed or able to caste easy. ...I moved words because Dick would want the limb off before getting lost in detail about the state of Psycho's blanket. ...I have the attempt to close the door note, but Psycho's programmed need to survive can minimally control all the Gee Forty three nano machines to create a basic limb nano particles grip to the ground to get the force to pull. ...I had to read and rewrite the moving of Dick to better define what goes on and the shown resistance to be controlled by the limbs. I think the changes are good. ...I edited to end.
r27743 | kalab | 2008-07-28 16:41:41 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote I feel it true to define the feeling of connection loss beyond words. ...Moved thought to edit timing to after a reconnection to reality through the body feeling. ...write another feeling it true. Edit the feeling and thought to be more quick and confusing. A sured feeling of truth to what could be a total lie, but it is beginning to feel true. ...Dick has no jacket. ...The description needed to be moved. ...I edited to the end.
r27741 | kalab | 2008-07-28 15:57:33 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked an of better than an if. It was needed. ...Edited placement of thought to be after the flow stops with Richard's question. ...The sentence moved because it was best out of the paragraph and had nothing to do with the paragraph. ...I edited to the end.
r27727 | kalab | 2008-07-28 12:23:06 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words for the smell was not. ...Thought removed for that thought is thought after and better after. ...Butt is better than ass. ...Words removed from two near sentence after of is felt to be very bad. With of and more word removal the words are more. ...I thought is silly that the type of taxi wasn't defined, so I began searching with taxi cars and taxicabs and then types of cars I know and if they were to make could cabs and then through that found Checker Taxi and read the history and the car will be a Checker Taxi. It's perfect. ...Sound change for fewer words. .I had Dick better command people to enter the car. George comes after called. ...I read more about the car to find what kind of transmissions they had. They were automatic typically. I think i can make something of this when Richard critiques the fiber glass or plastic body parts. ...I found need to place knees. ...I arranged sentences to complete the thought. ...A few less ofs and words and better writing. ...Edit the transmission acting up. I feel it is near complete and correct as I have experienced transmission issues. ...I wrote dialog to talk about the transmission for Jo brings it up to talk about it. Richard takes if further. ...I wrote words here and there for the stop of taix and go of taxi across intersection. ...I continued the placement of soft thumps. ...I didn't like the talk into the politics. I wanted to also have Republican and Democratic a terrorist watch word. So I changed the dialog. Made it better I think. ...I wrote body language of Dick looking at the speakers to reply to to show focus and truth. ...Clubs hitting window would be fun to write but I just replaced club with building for club is just thinking of hitting. ...Another ass became butt for butt was better. Maybe for the b. ...Then I removed the butt because the window should be down. ...I read of the roll down after fart, so I checked for the state of window and I had to change a plural to singular, but nothing else to have dick roll down the window. ...I edited the use and the description of the red wheels to use the spokes and be seen as glowing. ...I like the rage of Richard post A.P.P.. Both wind up to rage I think are written as they should and as seen. ....I had to better the position of the taxi and order the action and the braking and the slower speed. ...I removed the mention of the chinese embassy because it would trigger maybe. The road is the one travelled so it to is a good word used. ...I edited to the end.
r27692 | kalab | 2008-07-27 09:06:37 -0700 (Sun, 27 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Two drones float. ...I removed words not needed. I wrote a word to define the quadrant. ...I removed a word to open the definition. I changed the question to current tense instead of total....I was going to remove read from end of dialog, but thought and remembered that Psycho always qualifies or define vague answers to define its version of the question. ...The congov look away. ...Because it the plural use. ...I found a few syntax issues. ...I removed dialog that needs not be for the question is answered. ...Dick cares not if Psycho is seen above the people for they won't shoot at each other. I edited the dialog and removed the thought of looking for a guard for it is not as important a subject for Dick because he is not going into the building. Psycho and shooting is the better subject and now the thought as reason and flow. ...Condo is a row house. ...I wanted the sentences to be a paragraph for they are of a lead subject completed by sentences. ...I removed of and used few words to define the hearing of the gyration of hovercopter. ...A thought removed that was confused. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
r27661 | kalab | 2008-07-25 22:15:59 -0700 (Fri, 25 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I edited a left for a right for there were a few many lefts. There has to be right. ...I removed the guns thing because Psycho doesn't care about guns for guns will not stop Psycho. ...Of removed and useless words. ...I thought of the how Dick begins to have Psycho talks againg and was silent and reasons the reporting by feeling and saying and not feeling and thinking. Psycho believes a question. So while editing to Rickshaws, bikes, stagecoaches roll around traffic circle. I edited Rickshaws, bikes, stagecoaches roll around traffic circle, and I changed the dialog to show and tell of the reporting and reason for not seeing voice.
r27641 | kalab | 2008-07-24 20:02:16 -0700 (Thu, 24 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked sizzle better than sizzling and now it reads better. ...Dick doesn't smile. ...There is no wine . ...I edited to <|Where's Psycho?>
r27606 | kalab | 2008-07-22 06:31:57 -0700 (Tue, 22 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Grammar issues and dialog mark and periods and commas. ...Some left over words. ...I will write skates for there are inline and paired. ...I edited to The traffic left to right and right to left stops before intersection.
r27604 | kalab | 2008-07-22 05:26:27 -0700 (Tue, 22 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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Edit dialog syntax for case after reading the first few paragraphs of 0011 and realizing I didn't case the internal dialog.
r27583 | kalab | 2008-07-21 06:29:04 -0700 (Mon, 21 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...The taxi can not honk horn so written as it should be. ...I removed words and a repeated action. ...The edit to explain the mission of Psycho for life... ...I found more reason for the yawn. To see if the machine yawns and if the machine thinks it a communication from dick or response at all. ...I rewrote a sentence after removing a question that need not be and after finding better words for the meaning. ...I edited to <|Two actors. One bad writer. Psycho...Please...>
r27575 | kalab | 2008-07-20 22:03:04 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edit with spellcheck leading the way the dialog mark. The words did flow from beginning to end.
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I edited from the beginning to the end now that I know the dialog mark.
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I edit from the beginning to the end of the chapter. I followed through the spellcheck by checking grammar of dialog mark.
r27569 | kalab | 2008-07-20 20:14:10 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited for spelling and dialog mark from beginning to end. I was able to read a bit. Liked it. Lots of commas replaced by periods.
r27558 | kalab | 2008-07-20 10:32:05 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning to the end of the chapter. I followed through the chapter with the spellcheck. I would then read the internal and external dialog mark. Things are coming together.
r27541 | kalab | 2008-07-19 21:16:25 -0700 (Sat, 19 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning to Eleanor looks forward, jaw tense. Eyes wide and reflect the flame light. I edited from grammar and spelling and found af ew minor things that I wanted to change. The grammar is becoming.
r27534 | kalab | 2008-07-19 17:43:37 -0700 (Sat, 19 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from end of prior edit to the end. I edit mark. I did edit some dialog for better flow. It was simple. I did scan the words, but most of the editing was using the spellchecker advance the page. The grammar feels to be better.
r27517 | kalab | 2008-07-18 23:04:45 -0700 (Fri, 18 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited the chapter for spelling and grammar. I think I found most of the spelling and grammar. The chapter was edited from beginning to end.
r27479 | kalab | 2008-07-15 20:56:17 -0700 (Tue, 15 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited the chapter for spelling errors. I found some. The main focus of the edit was the grammar. The grammar with punctuation marks and dialog and internal dialog marks. I need a standard. i need to see how the commas and periods are used in flow of action. I don't know. I think I now know. I am getting close to knowing. I need to read more of grammar dialog marks and write the standard.
r27464 | kalab | 2008-07-14 21:04:49 -0700 (Mon, 14 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I spellchecked and correct some punctuaion issues found with the thought. I still need to think how thought flows. I did find a misspelled word.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I had to rid the book of another of. ...It should be flashlight and not flash light. ...I edited to the end of the book only finding minor issues and liking what was read.
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I edited from the beginning. ....I wrote thought at the beginning for the thought needed to be to show the new seer. ...I wrote thought after in the building to express Dick's sense of the situation. ...There was a verb missing and a plural verb state that need not be. ...I edited to the end.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence from the paragraph for it was not the subject of the paragraph. ...Puddles much better than sheets. ...I removed the second talk about the asking permission because it is out of flow and not there really. Nothing in it for anything. ...The thought after of teaching I is better and is more of the story than what was written of being taught to be less of a Psycho. ...I replace road with street. ...I edited to the end.
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I edited from the beginning of the chapter. ...I had to edit the many ofs of a sentence. ...Another of removed. i want the of removed because Psycho used the same of and thought Psycho may be Dick I don't want it to be further defined. ...George is referring to the barrels. I don't see George knowing what a turret is. ...I removed the dialog of Dick defining always like an advertisement for it is not of Dick to do this and it is out of place and odd. The flow is off to, so all the sentences were removed. ...Edit because they go between not through. ...I read of a heel and edited all heels with soles for sole is more meaning and definition and obvious double meaning. ...I edited the global S.S. warning to its standard form. ...The sound of shoes needed less ofs and better writing. ...Minor verb and description edits of the flow down the stairs. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
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I edited from Eleanor stares forward then at me then at Jo's head. ...Name and speaker where off. So I changed. ...There were syntax issues. ...Then Richard needed to be Betty. Confusion somewhere between the two. ...Edited thought for flow. ...Edited an of. ...I removed detail that was out of place and not needed. ...Of removed. ...Liked the thought flow. I wanted to ad a quick thought to show the thrown loop of focus. ...I removed more thought for the thought of Dick now is calm and few. ...I remove more ofs. Many ofs. ...I didn't like speed as a verb. Roll is better. ...Moved sweat description for it happened before and the dialog flows better. ...I edited to Rickshaw before taxi stops. Taxi stops. Two people walk along side of queue and shine light beams at faces of guiders, movers and passengers.
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I edited from Pizza smell and sweat fill cab then fade. ...Edited of grammar for edit was needed. ...I edited nation for greatest for George wouldn't say nation. ...I wrote of the walkers for everyone is in the street. ...I removed a sentence for there is the... ...I had to fix the words for Richard looking for Army after the apple pie. ...The dialog now flows better. It is better. There are more things. ...I edited to standardize the global terrorist call. ...I edite teh we're going to always because Betty forgets then remembers again. ...I edited to Blue spoked stagecoach stalls in mass of people.
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I edited from <|Psycho reading mind\?> I uncover eyes with eyelids. <|Controlling drone.> ...I edited to Jo twists the key.
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I edited from the beginning. I edited Street for Road for Street is the word to use. ...Richard needs to be more specific and shades is more specific. ...I left random thought for dick is feeling loose from the alcohol. ...The window is not down and it is not automatic, so it Dick opens the door. I also removed ofs. ...There is a need to define the type of congov. ...I removed a thought about scanning. Dick doesn't think this. ...I edited to We shift legs, butts and shoulders. We look out taxi windows.
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I edited from the beginning. ...An of was removed. ...I edited to Richard's jaw joint pulses. He steps forward, puts hands on Eleanor's shoulder.
r27304 | kalab | 2008-07-06 13:27:08 -0700 (Sun, 06 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I replaced road with street for road seems more long and connecting between towns or cities. ...A needed to go with the first sentence. ...Psycho can not give an exact time for Psycho is unable to know what energy will be used. ...I edited to here The man pivots his head side to side. I am liking what I read.
r27298 | kalab | 2008-07-06 09:58:00 -0700 (Sun, 06 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed the white of illluminate for it wasn't defined before. ...Around is better than around. ...Meter is feet for the metric system is not primary measurement. ...Of removed. ...Pass instread of past for pass is a verb. ...One of removed. ...Seats are waited. Other unneeded words removed. The question thing arose with the questions to Dick. I had to write more of the area and the things that are. I wanted more sights and sound around the white hotel. ...I had the specific type of tree and car first be a thought because it is specific then loading and general. ...I write of the move sounds that is everywhere. I wrote of a merge. I wrote of a feel and think as thought feels to reason. ...I edited to <|Always a deep quagmire.>
r27293 | kalab | 2008-07-06 06:41:58 -0700 (Sun, 06 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited thought for the thought needed to have an unfocused thought flow. ...I remove sentences for the need not be. ...More words removed for they need not be. ...I few changes for action. ...I edited to end.
r27231 | kalab | 2008-07-02 06:20:14 -0700 (Wed, 02 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked the beginning. I had to change the forth because the ing and the of really hit me deep. The thought of the record needs to be. ...I had to change the moved of hands to head. ...The description of the sound in mind needs to use mass and still have bass. The paragraph has it. ...I want it spirt not spurt. ...Mouth is better than jaw. ...I like what has become of the thought. ...the crossing traffic is the same traffic on the other street, so It should be more people and only on stagecoach. I edited more to even the people walking for there are people walking. There is more nonpeople traffic than on the road dick is on. ...The taxi is still in the crowd The bikers are not. ...Like river's edge more. And there is one less of. ...I liked the thought and the action. there exists now a flow to the words: The river is a pond. ...I stopped edit at The river is a pond.
r27196 | kalab | 2008-06-30 05:52:57 -0700 (Mon, 30 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the sentence because the metaphor need to flow and descriptive and specific. Sexy was not. ...I removed sentences for they were not needed and redundant. ...I the use of return is much better for it is a very old command. ...I wrote words. I removed words that were out of place. ...I moved thought for it needed to be before the talk and after the thought. ...I edited smell to be good. ...I edited to the end.
r27183 | kalab | 2008-06-29 16:26:45 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with a spell check. ...I found internal dialog marks missing. ...I edited from the beginning. ...The second though needed to be better for it need to complete the paragraph seen and the thought of the beginning. Time passes and the thought begin again. The rewrite and write was needed. ...There was another sentence I wanted to complete define the building for the paragraph...I moved a thought for better flow. ...I removed all other time because only the one is wanted or needed after reading the first time I thought to remove. ...The type of people for Lawyers, politicans , interns internal dialog for I have decided for it to be. The thought of doing it as internal has been in mind for a time. Now I want it so the adjectives are internal. They are metaphors before description. A label. ...I removed more ofs. One removal create a good sentence paragraph. ...I thought of leaving out the yellow talk, but then thought to leave it for the feel and think set it off. I conformed and labeled the leather cyclists. ...I have to think of how dick is positioned. ...More ofs and flow found. I read and read. ...I removed more words that were useless. ...I made the most of leather cyclists. And i moved sentences to better flow the time of the flash and the after desciption. ...I edited to the end.
r27156 | kalab | 2008-06-28 17:09:24 -0700 (Sat, 28 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I want it all happening at once after the hit. The scream is what is needed after all feels to happen at one time. It is better with the and. ...I like the hit. Things are at the flow and path liked. ...I edited to I stuff sex cap in mouth.
r27142 | kalab | 2008-06-28 06:33:28 -0700 (Sat, 28 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I had the two sentence become action at the same time by using and. I like better for only one sentence or general action is to be defined. It reads better. ...I like lead better than open. ...I needed to edit the fall of Betty and Richard. It is now written as it should be. ...The talk of red button needed to be more fluid. ...I removed a sentence because it didn't need to be. The wrote a question, so Psycho could be answering some one. ...I read to the open of the steel door then thought that the reason Psycho can't enter the white door with body is because it is two different nano, and only the core can enter the nano pool. ...Dick needed to stand. ...there were syntax errors. ...I edit to end.
r27100 | kalab | 2008-06-25 06:27:25 -0700 (Wed, 25 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from beginning. ...I wrote how for I want Dick to ask the question because Psycho never just gives information. ...I shortened questions because mind is looking for thought to complete not begin. The short. The burst.Psycho doesn't answer because he is selective about the question answered. . ...bluild not block. ...Another verb. ...I moved a sentence because both the flow and build is better for the release. ...The page is better as a child. Labor, indentured, slave, force labor, any labor for the poor. ...I need Dick in the revolving door, so he can stop it. He needs to step in. The flow is better. The setup is better. ...I edited to the end.
r27092 | kalab | 2008-06-24 20:17:32 -0700 (Tue, 24 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from: Drones hover. White light pulses from bases of drones. ...I wanted to complete the scream. ...There were grammar issues. ...I needed to clarify the entering of building. ...There were some you removed. ...I edited to <|Become lost in data.>
r27072 | kalab | 2008-06-23 06:19:15 -0700 (Mon, 23 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wanted to add more show of people getting out of the soldiers. ...I edited and changes seeing Eleanor for Dick doesn't bend down and see Eleanor. ...I have the door being show open. ...I removed Psycho dialog for on one was needed and only after the edit. ...I changed the dialog to have congov read the thoughts for that's how it would work. Congov fucking it all up. ...Then the talk with the Army needed to be changed. Richard asks the question of knowledge is better for it is basic. The other question was too analytical for the moment, and Richard is only analytical when calm and focused and working. ,,,i wrote stairs for the climbing for it is needed. ...The decent down was written better. ...The walk out was edited thinking of Ben being in front because there isn't enough room for side. They walk out. ...I edited to the end.
r27050 | kalab | 2008-06-22 05:53:06 -0700 (Sun, 22 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Bass and treble flow through mass. ...People stand...was enough to define. Removed talk because it wsan't. ...George is a talker. More than most...There was dialog that was George and not Betty. ...There was shorter dialog for better talk asn some slang that won't be defined. Belt Wall. There is no more way. ... I like the words with Ash and the action. Some ...The taxi must be shown to stop. ...The hands left and right is an obvious metaphor. ...The thought of having all the ofs thoughts when they are an expression of a deep metaphor. Or one just sort of still thought and not how the mind lablels the symbol of data. ...I like word flow and the sound of the transmission stopping once stopped. ...I removed dialog because the talk and raction was not needed. The dialog before and after better for it. ...I had to change the dialog to focus on Richard paranoid. I needed to go further with the idea I felt, and I think it makes it all better. ...I edited to George coughs. Betty coughs. Eleanor sneezes.
r27031 | kalab | 2008-06-21 08:40:33 -0700 (Sat, 21 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...There was the need for the dark word. ...Just illuminate is enough. ...Only dialog of Dick requires not verb to show process out. ...I removed Psycho talk for it was not asked. ...There small things that needed to be changed. ...I moved dialog for the flow was better one sentence up. ...Moved another sentence of algae to better set off and show the sentence of people being for people are. ...I edited to I lean toward Richard, twist handle on door counter-clockwise. <|Tell Betty, at Always. Then get out.>
r26991 | kalab | 2008-06-17 21:32:21 -0700 (Tue, 17 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began edit at Mustang and others look, <|at me,> and talk. ...I wrote some description of Richard and George. ...Ofs were removed. ...There was a verb issue. ...I edited to <|Bourbon.>
r26975 | kalab | 2008-06-16 21:06:59 -0700 (Mon, 16 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I read aloud from the beginning. I read paragraphs then decided to check stage coaches and make them stagecoaches. I stopped the edit.
r26969 | kalab | 2008-06-16 16:16:47 -0700 (Mon, 16 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited an read aloud from the beginning. ...The reading was good. Found some minor things. A dialog bar missing. There were things. I liked the read. Where did this come from\? ...The curve needed to be better written. ...Ofs were written out or removed with words. The removal was good. I edited and read a loud. ...Less ofs where need make for better description. ...I wrote data warehouse to drop the idea and show what was the other way. ...I liked the story. There is a flow. ...I edite to Sweat drop forms on nose. <|Psych injection will reason reaction.>
r26957 | kalab | 2008-06-16 11:05:37 -0700 (Mon, 16 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning aloud. ...I had issues with plurals. But the read did flow. ..It's bumps not pumps. And I didn't like Goose. Define the feeling of a goose bump. ...I have to have three moves. ...The work with plurals is becoming. ...Ofs I removed some ofs for they were making the ofs used useless. ...comma not good. need new sentence. ...The blonde boy thing is a bit much. Young man doesn't do ti. I don't want to define further. Not needed. A couple of people. Focused away. ...The read is better. ...Of and plurals. ...A few less words of description that was contrary to what was seen. ...river banks is better. ...Group is better defined by people for people is a group of people no need for group. ...Ofs and verbs needed reading. ...Ofs and case and pluras and verbs. Better with the words removed. ...I edited and read aloud to the end.
r26949 | kalab | 2008-06-16 06:15:50 -0700 (Mon, 16 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Everything is. I did not read aloud. ...I wrote an I say because it felt like the flow needed.. ...I have reason why They arrive needed to be used for a misplaced leaving and weird eating. ...I had pussy cunt for cunt is deeper meaning these days in the nation's capital as sexism is becoming more. ...The end should not needed for the cunt is enough end dialog with others. When pussy is was to be working with that thoughts of action, but reallly Dick is not going to hear a singles shout of shouts of pussy. Cunt yes. ...I edited to the end.
r26921 | kalab | 2008-06-15 05:37:15 -0700 (Sun, 15 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I read aloud. ...I realized with out hearing the subject, the object.of dialog ...I seen the red and blue description. And the dialog. It goes. The please is needed to show Dick is polite or shown to be polite. ...I edited the sphere colors. I read them not aloud after the third and forth and other readings of the flashing colors. ...I edited to The window rattles. And I want to begin at The window rattles. next edit now that the flashes see to be what they need to be to The window rattles.
r26910 | kalab | 2008-06-14 18:46:13 -0700 (Sat, 14 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I was editing, I am editing, chapter 0011. I read of a glass and have been wanting it to be cup, so changed it to cup then thought of this chapter probably having some glass that should be cup.
r26890 | kalab | 2008-06-12 21:44:10 -0700 (Thu, 12 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and read aloud from the beginning. ...I added a question mark then a maybe because it need be. ...I then began to edit without reading aloud and only in mind. ...I edited to The red and blue flash dims.
r26888 | kalab | 2008-06-12 20:20:36 -0700 (Thu, 12 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and read aloud from Drop drips to mass of people. ...I wrote think fast to have the reader think....The door was misplaced. ...Head is saying yes to Mustang moving for... ...Hinges creek is better. ...After is better than all those other words for the thought flow. ...Iss needed. ...I edited and read aloud to the end. I liked.
r26856 | kalab | 2008-06-11 09:00:08 -0700 (Wed, 11 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from I stand on left leg. ...I had the arm reach for it did. ...I wrote out ofs that were too of. ...not rainbow colors is bad. gray is good. ...I think I like the end. ...I edited to the end.
r26808 | kalab | 2008-06-08 06:06:11 -0700 (Sun, 08 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I moved a sentence to show then tell. The words better formed to show. I removed the move or motions to move because I like where things are before Dick moving....I like the length of the fall because the time should sort of slow as Dick focuses on it. ...For the hit I removed forehead and socket because it is not. That would be and is too much. Make only one cheek and add jaw being broke ...I remove words of a sentence to make prose of broken face pain. ...I had a couple of verb issues. One ing one missing. ...Then another missing verb. ...I removed a thought for it was not needed. ,..I removed more thought for it was not thought. ...I removed the internal dialog is brief. Focus is room and pain. ...I edited to Sweat drips from nose and falls into a bowl in floor. Read the head hitting was tense.
r26786 | kalab | 2008-06-07 06:46:50 -0700 (Sat, 07 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote a sentence to show the fall to fall. First the citizen then the contractor. ...I edited and wrote words to show the pose after the fall. ,..I worte site move away for the action. The flash thought quick, ...An object was needed. ...I say was something fun. The read was flowing and good. .,,I wrote words to complete the question. ... There is no windowed. ...I had the door open after the green button. This are rewriting Psycho's words for they were to far from Psycho. The door opens. A white door is behind completes. ...I removed two sentences for the open was open no need to talk and the excitement of Dick too much. Dick is calm and waiting to stop Psycho. ,,,of gone. ...I had description internally create the use of the record. The thought becomes the recorded perception. ...I removed sentences of the opening. Good the open happens sooner for more words were removed.
r26749 | kalab | 2008-06-04 06:22:03 -0700 (Wed, 04 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed thought and action to continue the skipped process of belief and denial. ...I moved thought to better set the thought in its flow. The thought moved in a couple of paragraphs. ...I edited by deleting and maybe rewriting ofs. The words then better. ...I removed a sentence for it was some thing that could be removed. It was nothing. ...I made a question where one was needed. ...White Noise talk is better. ...I like the radar detecting something. It needed to close. Few words. ...I used level and not story for level is better. ...I had to do the friction ray, some thing thought of by what was read for there would be tool that tries to stop the human body with some force or pain. It doesn't effect Psycho. .It is aimed only at Dick. I like the Ray burn. The Ray burn is the effect one gets from the friction ray. ...I have the rod warning of move away see three time with more going as Dick runs. There isn't that much time of moves to be. The go. ...I like the levels of pain to be more sever once warmed up or closer or believed. The charging. ...I edited the move away. ...I edited to the end.
r26714 | kalab | 2008-06-02 06:02:25 -0700 (Mon, 02 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning the edit. No reading aloud. ..I thought of sight and thought of the green glow of touch pads...I edited words from book for they were not needed. ...I chcange the name of Army column to be a formation Dick knows. ...I wrote out ofs and made the words better. ...I add possession and a difference in the words of pyshco and Dick. ...I removed a replication of action. ...I removed ofs and words. ...The soles of secret sentry was an of that need not be. ...Another sentence that was better without the of. ...Soles is much more accurate than heels and is a better double word. Call it a metaphor if one will. A twisted hint of some thing else. ... I wrote words to set off dialog and define it. And define other forms of input. ...The S.S. never kneel just shake a finger. ... I moved words because their placement was better before to show the walk. They just stepped in. The walk beings after Dick steps between George and Betty. ...I then add more description by giving the name of the hall they enter a proper noun that is referenced often. ...freeze in just needed to be hold. in was the reason to begin the change. in\? ...There were a few verby issues with the first movement. ...There are women in suites too. ...A show of act and verb for some of the unconnected dialog. ...I had a comma need. ...I edited to the end.
r26683 | kalab | 2008-06-01 09:15:58 -0700 (Sun, 01 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from: Jo jams stick-shift forward. ...I read aloud and like. I thought of an of of person and people and the words were what I wanted to have written. ...I removed of mass and group of people to people group and people mass. The words are near better. ...And was need to two actions for says. ...rows of removed for row houses defines the row. ...I removed instances of Adam's Morgan because the boundries of Adam's Morgan is unbound in mind. And because I don't know how the record reacts with the use in the none internal or external words. I know internal or external trigger new record, but don't know if the id or internal mind data. A definition of fact and not a focus of thought. I removed because it seem to specific. I edited by reading aloud to The soft thumping stops. And I like it.
r26670 | kalab | 2008-05-31 22:54:07 -0700 (Sat, 31 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at: Taxi jerks, pops, rolls over street. ...I change the soft thud to thuds for there is more than one. ...I found a verb issue and corrected it. ...For some reason I wanted to make the congov a color for more description The color white used because white things are thought to be pure. ...Another verb that was need. is was the verb. ...The word from is better then at for caste I feel. ...I wrote words of the soft thuds of transmission. A noise that will soon fade from notice or record all the time. ...I edited the sound that is when the second congov shouts of terrorists. ...I removed a from when defining silence for I felt there need not be a direction. ...I wrote more to redefine the people. Because there is a recent record with the people and because Dick's attention is not on the people the record additions are not many for many is not needed. ...I am trying to remove all speak and thought of the word terrorists from Dick's speech and thought. I think I have most so far. ...I read after the talk with Ash then thought then need to write to show that Betty and George and most remember most of being with Dick giving reason for them to still feel friendly. ...I removed some ofs for some needed to be removed. ...I wrote People are just to show that there are many. ...I checked the state of Dick's window being up and down and made sure it followed the state. ...I edited to: <|Apple Pie Paranoia.>
r26660 | kalab | 2008-05-31 09:51:50 -0700 (Sat, 31 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with There is no smell of oak. The taste is immature. ...I wrote a thought of the age of the barrel for I had a tangent thought and realization than a very old and used and non quality barrel would create a less oak body. ,,,I wrote Richard dialog because it needed to be writen to show Dick getting friendly with Richard. ...I removed an of. ...I didn't like picks up. Gets feels better. ...I moved the We eat for it was best after the throat clearing and better shows some amount of time. ...Dick is eating tacos and fajitas but still fajitas remain. ...I wrote an and for it was needed. ...I moved the see of the column of congov upstairs for it is better placed. ...I need to add a verb. I edit to the end.
r26620 | kalab | 2008-05-28 06:00:42 -0700 (Wed, 28 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I read and edited and like what I read. ...There was the change in dialog about the dump to show the exact reason and not some off the wall reason why and why not the dump will kill. ...I edited the graveyard to better defjine the record and define ...The fir tree should be an oak. ...The gray is black or white for color of cloths. ...I moved description to where the focus is. ...The empty seat location needed to be edited for placement. Side is better than by. ...I removed dialog because the words were not needed and I didn't want George saying them or Betty. ...I remove tree from pine tree for pine is a scent the tree doesn't smell like the sent. ...I read and liked what was read. the flow found. There were a few stops, but those stops are pauses if they remained. I edited to: <|Grip still Mustang.>
r26607 | kalab | 2008-05-27 05:31:26 -0700 (Tue, 27 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with Smell of shit and piss flows past. ...I removed a singular state from a verb by removing the verbs s. ...I edited a paragraph for another sentence because I want to have the turn left obvious for it is in mind. The turn also had a sentence with too many after words. Step left for now feels to be enough. ...I removed words of dialog that didn't need to be spoke and were not on mind or from lips. ...I wrote a sentence are the change of Dick look at faces instead of feet and the faces not make eye contact. The glasses of S.S. or congov are not many. ...Holding is better than with.And a with is gone. ...I liked flow better than run. ...I liked the propaganda bomb. ...I removed a double the. ...I mad eone sentence two. ...I edited to the end.
r26586 | kalab | 2008-05-26 11:47:25 -0700 (Mon, 26 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from Red-hand glows. ...There were slow case letters that needed to be uppercase. ...I needed the upon for step for just sidewalk confused. ...I had step to sidewalk and didn't need curb. ...I edited to <|No door guards.>
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote people of crowd for people crowd to better define the sentence. ...I removed an of. ...I move word and removed space to better define that around and have less time ...I edited the subtarget dialog response for better comprehension. The words of why and amount needed to be defined as they are now defined. ...I removed words and space to better show and see the world known around. ...I edited dialog of warning to better define the flow and the words and the feel. ...I edit wheels to wheel for it is one on the rubber road. ..., I edted to The smell of rubber and sweat is.
r26552 | kalab | 2008-05-24 22:19:35 -0700 (Sat, 24 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginnning. I added minor detail and some thought to better the flow. ...I edit the thought and talk of Dick to better show the flow of talk they get for they know each other well. The have the smae thoughts. ...I edited the granola carrying and whipping to remove what was not needed and to show more reason that Mustang is testing the realness of Dick. ...I edited near the end to quicken the departing embrace for they are both in a hurry. The both need to go and the great pause isn't hurry mode. A quick kiss is. ...I edited to the end.
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I began the edit with: Lights shine, SHINE, then pass. ...I removed description from the actions of drive for there is no sorry said. ...I removed the reply by dick to use human minds for he is focused on other things and at the time thinks only of the limit of time. Three hours. This is also answered after always, so it need not be answered at this point of the story. ...I completed the story at: Red light on street lamp Flor fades.
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I began the edit at the beginning. ...I edited the pace of the thought and the action to inhale and exhale to show focus to then rid focus as a verb and use a sense. The sense must be used. Feel and focus. Is better. ...I the edited and wrote Dick moving to plug ears after hearing the wind up of motor. I like the one sentence for it quickens the pace, the time. The reason Dick is able to plug ears. And show the awareness. ...Drone stare. I wrote that and didn't use that as a already defined metaphor. I used drone stare to define the stare that spreads. That was an obvious edit. ...I edited in mind for where else would it be\? ...I wrote hanging of shirt because Dick likes a clean shirt. ...Better definitions of page through showing Page Pins. ...I think I want stagecoach as on word. I feel this is a standard. It may be the other way,. I now like it as one word. ...I wrote more of the shouting of move for it is overwhelming and hard to ignore. I think what is written completes the idea and creates more of a book. I had to write, but that is okay for the words written are worth the words and meaning. I then removed the old one sentence of defining the sound and found that it could be removed, so there was a balance. ...I wrote and ended edit with I feel and think, <|Mustang will.> This to complete the reality and feeling and show the connection between Dick and Mustang.
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I read from the beginning. ...The limb catching definition didn't need all those words. ...I removed a the for it may imply all. ...I read a lot then read the need to fix the reason for the being alive. The question loop. The question loop was then edited for answers for questions is. ...I read on and found the mention of the G44 again. I read and liked it. ...I defined the building a Secret Sentry for it is. ...I removed thought because the thought was not needed. One sentence between dialog. No. ...I had to answer the question of the steel door. ...I used the dance metaphor for it is part of the record definition for outside. ...I edited to the end. I liked the words and the words written complete the book.
r26451 | kalab | 2008-05-18 19:59:21 -0700 (Sun, 18 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning of the chapter. ...I got rid of an of. ...I moved words to better define the subject. ...I continued the dance metaphor. ...I continued the metaphor by replacing mass with dance. Dance was a dance. Smooth and going. ...I used the choreograph word for taxi for the thought is still in Dick's mind. There is there reality there are a lot of dance clubs. ...I removed and of and Group of for the plural bikers is enough. Group feels redundant. ...There was a need for a plural then a verb. ...The replace of to with and for to is objective and and is better for it is what happened. ...I changed the singing metaphors to dance then nothing as the dance ends as does the metaphor for the screaming stops. ...I wrote the internal dialog of maybe wanting a hot dog for dinner to begin the reference to sam's hot dogs. ...I edit to the end.
r26368 | kalab | 2008-05-06 23:27:22 -0700 (Tue, 06 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I like the new beginning of the sound. And the words written bring me into the scene better and the thought better and the flow better than it did before the prior edit. ...I read felt the need to removes some words that included face because it just wasn't need to show the change in attention of the vision. Then I edited it all for it wasn't of the flow of the story and the narrative. ...There were edits to show the sex flow back and forth. ...There was a word to be more specific and make things better. ...I removed and move and change minor this and that for this and that reasons. ...I removed and it to make a thought more relaxed and free flowing. ...I removed some specific description of which hand scratch the stomach for it is not needed. It in facts makes the record dumb. The mind wouldn't focus. The record is the mind. ...I changed words to make a confusing sentence something of sense. ...I remove s sentence for the site would have changed the thought and I didn't want to change the thought. ...I had to make one sentence two to clarify. ...I edited to the end.
r26317 | kalab | 2008-05-04 09:47:40 -0700 (Sun, 04 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I didn't like the beginning for the definition of the light below was vacant. The scene felt empty and incomplete. There were some minor changes made to have the flow be. There weren't much changed. ...I removed words to increase story. A few ofs removed which made for better definition and story. ...There were a couple of verbs missing. They were written. ...I removed a sentence defining center tap when walk back to it for it was not needed. ..I edited the room in all description to be a circle to follow the definition of the all. ...I edited right forearm to left forearm for it is the left that saves from Psycho. ...I edited to the end. I need to read just the end over and over and find the words. I think I have them. Maybe, but see it some times and not others.
r26300 | kalab | 2008-05-03 13:43:07 -0700 (Sat, 03 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I wrote the I hold breath to define that critical fact. ...I need to decide if it will be Gee Forty-three or Gee forty-three. Think it will be Gee Forty-three. ...I removed the use of back pack for pack is enough. ...I moved a thought because it needed to occur sooner and before. ...I removed an action of mouth close with told cause that can be shown. It's obvious it is closing to help the breath. ...I edited to The white door pops open.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I thought about changing the beginning. I thought if it needed. And if not then what could it be. It may change if I feel or see Dick isn't that suspecting of America. It could be changed with terrorist. It will be for that is perfect. Terrorist has already been removed and replace with the slang global. I will need to search am ensure that terrorist isn't thought or spoke by Dick. ...I remove 'from the sky' for where else can rain fall from when out in the open.. ...I removed more words of rain description for they were redundant. ...I replace upon with over for water flows over. ...I replace create with are for are is better. ...I replace Psycho seeing eight bits of data to Dick's mind with talk because it destracts and there is no reason for it. This caused following changes of Dick's words and thought that did and does make the story better. ...I removed begin because begin is not needed. ...I edited a detailed description of a face and wrote just face for that is the drip. ...I mOved sentence to better define Psyhco's reason for not entering though window. ...I edited to the end. With the changes, this chapter is very near complete.
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I edit the words of the beginning. ...I edit the description of shoes for shiny white shoes is only needed. Less is more. I wrote the description of the Secret Sentry again. ...I edited the talk of Psycho about asking questions then reading the minds for their some times automated response. ...I edit to to from for Dick walks from. ...The moving from tank and the walking from tank are two different things. I had to edit the walking away. ...I replace queue with people line for the words written so far and the record doesn't use queue. ...I replace want with like because want is a better word. ...I wrote the words of the people going through the Army line. The descriptoin needed so cleaning up and it reads better now. I also wrote the action of people being disarmed. ...Edit to the end. The changes made to the chapter make me feel better about it, but I don't full like it with this read. Too many edits to know.
r26172 | kalab | 2008-04-24 07:30:04 -0700 (Thu, 24 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I removed two sentences of dialog for they ask and answer a question Dick knows. I thought long about the words of Dick and the asking of the human mind by Psycho. I think I have words that are near complete. They are better and focus more on what I am trying to write. I could be missing the mark, but I may not. I also tried to make dick's response more natural wthout removing the use of you to teach Psycho...I edited an action of Dick to an action of blacksuits because it was a separate thought that didn't been to be told. The congov use is better as blacksuits. ...I removed the sentence of congov shouting for global terrorist. This is not needed. ...I should label the formation Mark and Read for that is the formation's name. ...I like the site of big wheeled stagecoach wheels that tower over people and can be seen by Dick.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I thought of dick questioning more of Psycho in the office about what dick and betty do, and I might write a few more evasive answers if I feel Dick is not trying to detect enough. ...I needed to continue and complete the creation and showing of the Army wall. I did that. ...I removed some commas that were followed by and of a series. ...I wrote Secret Sentry for the raised heels and then congov to throw and define congov lot. ...I removed sentence for thhe mind scan is not visible. ...Laughter is is all that is needed. ...I removed the direction of dialog from Richard to Betty to everyone. ...I removed dialog before open and a thought because the action is quick and the dialog long. dick doesn't thing or annouce as little as possible. The thought was edited that was too much of a pointer. Dick has his mind trained. I t does slip with now for there is some tension. ...I read to the end of the chapter. I like the chapter. The flow is there. I did think of needed to write the description of some one having their gun pulled from their stunned numbed hand. I really liked the travel out of Always. It is nearing good or at least okay which is good enough to publish.
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I began the edit from: People walk from condominiums. ...I removed corners from a sentence for it didn't need to be. and the lights are more than at corners. ...I wrote ten instead of six because there are ten congov. ...I wrote an exclamation point after Richard's second fuck for it is exclaimed. ...Having had read the words many times I see the taxi veering left and not right through tunnel. ...I had to edit the position of the stage coach or red in left lane as it should while under the tunnel. ... edited to the end. I like the read.
r26129 | kalab | 2008-04-22 06:36:03 -0700 (Tue, 22 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with: Jo's elbows hold steering wheel. ...I read back a couple of sentence and combined one with some for someone. I don't like the separate words. ...I removed a thought for it went too far. the thought would stop before the count of possible Psycho people. ...I moved the description of all the people standing in the streets because it needed to be read before the movers. The position was bad. ...I edited the popping of transmission out of gear because Jo is not holding the stick shift, but is plugging ears. The sentence needed to be edited and show and not told. ...I removed a sentence that was redundant of description written the sentence before. ...I then read back to read the move sound of the red and blue spoked coaches. I read a words that needed to be spreads and was spreas. ...I wrote move move move move move where needed. I think having written the words the story is better. It was only move. ...I wrote no music is for Dick notice the music has faded and is gone. ...I have Richard say stagecoaches to show the transition of definition and have the transition for the record to record with out spoke. ...I edited the write of the sound of the oxygenators. Like any good white noise you only notice the beginning and the end. ...Spins is better than the other description. ...I write an and and change smiling to smile then I removed the words because Jo smiles soon after. ...I edited some of the dialog of Dick talking Football with Richard because it needed better words and flow. ...I wrote but... to vaguely complete the dialog. ...I edited very well to good for good is more defining and command like for the congov to say. I think because of the movement that Dick will notice the algae exhaust. ...I had to edit Regan to Reagan ,which I sometime spell Ragan. ...I then thought of the need to edit chapter 0100 for I probably spelled it the same. ...I edited the look of George past Dick to removed the description of what George may be looking at. ...I wrote description to define the congov. ...I edited to: Six congov approach right of taxi. Four congov approach left of taxi.
r26121 | kalab | 2008-04-21 21:22:10 -0700 (Mon, 21 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from Breeze blows through taxi window. ...I had to edit the words after the beginning of the edit because I feel Richard should have spoke some of the words. ...I edited from in to on because one walks on a street and not in it unless it is s tube. ....I read to the next edit. The words and action and things feel like the flow is. The things are felt and seen. The dialog what it needs to be. ...The edit of Us focused to We focus that is better. ...I wrote to have Ash smell of whiskey for he is drunk. ...Richard saying should be a shout because of all the noise. ...A two sentence paragraph needed two verbs. The were written. ...I removed an of taxi to taxi windows for the flow is better and an of was rid. ...I moved a dialog sentence of the better flow as found sentences later. ...I edited to An ass leans upon window.
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I began the edit with: Car pops, slows behind stagecoach. ...I made soft thumps plural for it needed to be. ...the description of nose is what it is for it is the words to be. ...I was going to remove the giving of cash, but thought it best to leave. ...I edited to The mass swarms upon the streets and sidewalks, left and right..
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I began the edit at: I grab glass of scotch. Rim hovers bellow nose.. ...I needed a then. ...I removed a sentence to remove the words because Betty doesn't take the salt. ...I wrote a sentence we eat for time does pass and feel the need to generally show what is. ...I rid the words of another with. ...I used a conjunction to join two sentence that could be two the replaced a to with an at for it is at Eleanor. ...I removed some smiling and winking of Dick for he was to be more calm. I replace with a slow head nod. ...I added words to have Dick burping because of beer then exhaling. I am using nod with pivot for pivot is more exaggerated or expressive. ...I replaced Con with Conn for it should be Conn. ...I removed words of a thought desription that no longer is. ...I replaced a comma with a period. I wrote a sentence of we following betty for it was kind of felt to be needed after editing the sentence of a head and drink. The head and drink was able to remove a with ...I edited to the end. The words felt to flow.
r26076 | kalab | 2008-04-19 17:57:45 -0700 (Sat, 19 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at the beginning. ...I removed a sentence that was not needed for it was defining motion that happened in the chapter before. ...I wrote the process of Dick buttoning up his shirt before the tie is tied. ...I removed internal dialog that was too out of flow with the action and the thought. It felt too forced and fake. ...The action to the line to enter the place of Larry's Fajita's I reallly liked. I think it is of a flow. The editing of the past to crosss the street has improved the words and the story. I did read it a couple of time and think I read it slow enough to focus. ...I removed thought telling of level three. This was not needed. ...I removed words that read to have Dick step on level three twice. ...I minor edit to dialog to give reason Dick doesn't order the Larry's Fajita. ...I edited I to me for it should be me. ....I edited to <|Bourbon.> The words have the flow wanted. I liked. Nearing done or so it feels.
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I began the edit from the stop seen. ...I removed street for that is too specific and the record would trigger. For Q it would not. I removed a sentence that should have been two sentence, but really should have been removed. ...I removed the thought for hunger and the inspection of thin fence because Dick is focused on Psycho and the seeing and expecting of a thin fence is a thought of lack of integrity and some thing that is more thief like than detective. ...There was a non plural and word that needed to be one word. ...I removed words because I want exhales gone and the speaking has no base or reason even if the reason is chaos. I made the step left more explicit. ...I removed report. ...I thought of the fact Psycho is still reporting about Mustang talking with Richard about Redskins. So I returned to the turning off of reporting and included with exception mom, dad, Mustang or clue people. ...I then edit to Shrubs emit rise and fall of the cicadas buzz.
r26015 | kalab | 2008-04-15 21:57:58 -0700 (Tue, 15 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with The movers drip sweat. The movers pull past. ...I edit the position of a lean. ...I edited traffic to the description of traffic to the actually objects. ,,,I added a verb where needed. ...I sync verbs of speech so they are now the same. I again edited the scan and focus of the layout of the area of the circle to show some focus and better define to Dick the scene. I added more repetition of definition to show a focus of placement. ...I edit a though to Dick to define some thing as gentree though the official record defines it as a tree. ...I replace a comma with an and because an and was needed. ...I removed most of a sentence for it was repeated with the following paragraph and was better with the detail removed to be in the following paragraph. ...I moved the thought for it had to be after the action of Psycho's fading voice. ...I removed description because the fact is lees is more and the desciption in and leaving the circle was just not needed and convoluted things. ...I also thought of the need to have Psycho's number mentioned in the introduction of Psycho. I think I will. I will let this be a thought until the next read and edit through. ...I edited to: A murder of drones forms a circle. I had thoughts of the words that make me feel the words are near complete.
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I edited from the beginning of the chapter. ...I replaced take flight for that is to metaphoric. ...I remove description of the door because it has long been logged and no longer is a focus of anything Dick thinks. ...I remove else because it is a thought and the thoughts are short and free of useless words. ...The action of every other step was removed for it was not needed and was not some thing focused. ...I edited the walk up to better show the entire walk. ...I liked the change of replacing step with stair where needed. ...I edited another verb of words of sound that I now realize I sort of just read over. ...I removed a sentence for the words need not be. ...I removed the pivot of Dick pivoting head up and down because it is sign that he wants to convince and Dick doesn't need to convince. It is true. It is an action that just is not Dick. ...There was a dialog mark that was incorrect and corrected. there was a removal of word that was not needed and the thought better. ...I removed a sentence that was confusing exchange between Mustang and Dick. The dialog sentence is now better. ...I need to write of Dick standing for it is not read....I edited a sentence by removing it. ...I changed mane to hair for mane is way to metaphoric. ...I edited the walk down stairs to better show the pace and the flow of footsteps. This will be better. ...I edited to the end.
r25972 | kalab | 2008-04-13 14:21:13 -0700 (Sun, 13 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at: The sound of combution is. ...I better defined a car passing from behind. I think I had a better show of what could go on. ...I removed a few words here and there. ...I edit the description of cars to better show flow. ...I edit the beginning of the description of the Chinese embassy to show cause of the focus which is because Dick believes dick sees a shadow of maybe Psycho. ...I replaced Con with Con for I think I am using two n's. ...I wrote dialog of description for it is better as description. ...The words as a whole have some flow. ....I edited to the end of the chapter and found the words new done. ...I did write for the chapter the growth of white oaks for they are nut bearing tree.
r25960 | kalab | 2008-04-13 08:38:41 -0700 (Sun, 13 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning of the chapter. ...I edited a sentence by removing it for ti was too metaphoric, and it had a repeated meaning not needed for a focused mind. ...I do think I will lessen the amount of ofs used for they slow the thought and pace of many of the words. ...I edited a sentence of description that needed to have less words and now does. ...I moved a sentence to better place and time the words. ...I added a verb. ...I moved sentence that define the siren soon after the siren to show how the siren spreads soon after its beginning. ...More editing of the people and their actions. I actual wrote an of. I think and of is good when the object remains the focus of the paragraph, but needs to be attached to another object. ...I am finding some of the description to be cluttered in places. ...I edited to the opening of plastic drawers. I had the thought of editing chapter 1 again to focus on ofs. I think the withs a done, but now the ofs are.
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I change terrorist to global for that is what it needs to be. ...I replace all the words of core with sphere. ...I edited thought for better flow. ...I edited this and that. I made sure sphere was everywhere. The dialog with Dick and Psycho has a flow. It is a bit much, but this is a detective asking questions in a secure place. ...I moved a sentence to better have the flow. ...I like the chapter. Some changes were made, but not many. I edited to the end.
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I began the edit at the beginning of chapter. ...I change frame of door to door frame to use the better from read with the two sentences of the paragraph. And to sync the paragraph I thought to change to be the same. ...I wrote out another of for better alliteration and better definition with upon and not over. ..I move the physical description of what Psycho is wearing for it should occur sooner and it was stopping the flow, so there wss no way this is how the reacord reads. The story reads better. ...I will have Psyhco use lots of ofs and Dick use less. Few. But some. To show but not tell if one is learning from the other or could be the other or be just some that happens to be. ...I read the words of of of the prior chapter. It is uses a lot. And I think it is use a lot during the book. Maybe that is just how the record is and it is why Psycho speaks like the record because that is what Psycho reads. ...Remove of of Dicks' thought. ...edit to remove the use, the metaphor, next door because it is a metaphor. ...I rationalize the craziness of the ofs by thinking that the record is Pycho and the Psycho is the rocord. The thoughts of Dick will not and should not have to many ofs. No more than now. ...I don't know what the word meld was written for. Why. Connect is better. ...I thought of the ofs. I use ofs a lot. I think I will not use many ofs after this book. The next not many. I will think of removing ofs of ths chpater fi needed. It could be used as some thing to slow or show a different focus. ...I edited to the end. Even with the of question the chapter feels very near complete.
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I began the edit on the line Mouth is dry. ...I remove the to that defines a purpose of action that need not be. ...I edited the removal doctors description because there are few doctors and the focus is the subjects. ...I moved a sentence to better create the needed flow of action that change the focus by distraction and direction. ...I wrote an adjective to define the position. ...I edit words to better describe the dress of the leather bikers. ...There was a sentence that needed to be take from one paragraph to the prior. I edited to this change to put bike description with bikers.
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I began the edit at The darkness becomes blood red. ...I had to edit the words of the stepping for they didn't feel; like there was a step. There was lots of changes to the words and actions of the stepping. The entire action nearing fucked. The edit will help clarify. ....I removed description of the walls for it was too much. ...Ire mvoed more description words for they were not needed and counter to the entire story. .. I need to add a verb to words. ...I edited to the end. The removing of all the Psycho and Dick talk makes the story end as needed. At lease, that is how i read it now.
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I edited from the beginning. ... I removed a word because it was not needed. ...I edited and enjoyed the story flow. ...I head to change the sentence about teeth to broken teeth for it is what came to mind when I edited the words. ...Dick reach for medstick after a thought. The thought to show focus. ...I made one sentence two for the inhale and exhale is separate from saliva spraying. ...I removed the words thoughout room because there really hasn't been a room defined for the pain is the only thing defined. ...I removed the word here from thought because here made the thought too complete. ...I felt I needed to better define the rainbow glow. ...I edited to the rainbow glow.
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I began the edit near the thought to clean the air. ...There was the two descriptions of the mouth that needed to be changed. ...I replace and's with comma's because I wanted things to happen fast. The coughing. ... ...I edited o the separating of items.
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I edited from the beginning and edited to the change of state of mind to nothing is. ...The words have the flow.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote a missing letter. ...I moved the definition of podium position for the order read to me better now after the edit move of words. This change also shows the difference between Richard speaking and the record. ...I removed two telling sentence for they don't need to be spoke to tell. Even if they did I would remove them for it is like reading a bad script when the two sentences were read. ....I read of the core and what the core was and is. I edited around there and stopped.
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I edited from the beginning of the chapter as I always do. Or if I have not edited from the beginning on a prior edit an stop edit before the chapter is read. ...I wrote chest burn for it does. Dick's chest burns. ..I wrote the It before the will of the thought because the pain make the thought focused and complete. ...I like the action and verb of bang better than the words once used to define. ...I like the use of is and are to define state of body during the emotion and reality and thought and belief of Mustang being dead and parent really in danger. ....I don't like tos. I prefer ands snd verbs. ...I edited to Imsorry.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the congov with yellow tie to be the red tie secret sentry of the prior chapter. ...The thought of Dick after is too con gov the congov a silent what of insulting without alarming or incite Psycho has to feel to intercede.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I still like the beginning. Though I am jaded of editing The Detectives Store, reading the sentence did want me to read more words....I thought of defining the high of the buildings and thought I will write something Richard asks which is which building is taller than the washington monument Dick will say, The Regan Hotel. then the height of the buildings and the height of the flight of the drones is defined. ...I changed a says to a look because a says was written. A Always to the There because she is just general. ...Jo looks at not in mirror. ...I thought of small definition of words a lot. How to present. The types of congov . I thought of all of The Detective Store. ...I had to make some thing and write more of the congov that was with yellow tie is now red for it is Secret Sentry. There is the talk of Richard to show Richard has befriended Dick and is a worker maybe of higher level than the field worker. ...Maybe I won't define. Maybe Richard is just thinking he wants to show off and shouldn't. This will better the words and actions of this simae Secret Sentry of the next chapter. ...I wrote sentence for we step for there is a feeling of we stepping up with the thought goes. ...I removed Dick relaxing body for he is shocked and numb and not tense and resisting. ...I edited to the edit. The reading smooth to the end.
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I began the edit with I remember name. I read and edited. I edit read. ...I found a work that wanted to be handkerchief. ...I edit read. ....I read and edited and wrote spoked when needed. After Dick tales of the stagecoaches as red and blue the spoken must be written. ...I the edit read back near to the first site of the stagecoaches and made sure all I seen was spoke stagecoach. ...I corrected a couple more lower case stagecoach at the beginning of sentence caused by find and replace for full document prior edit. ...I read edit the same words again. I still like the conversation prior to I remember the name. It was a quick edite read. ...then I began to edit read in the middle of the race where I left off. ...I edit read to the beginning of the lobe scan. I liked what was read. I think the flow of the race is enough that I can begin here next time. I am still happy with what was read and think the edits will be clean up of typos and punctuation. maybe an s for a begin Stagecoach.
r25687 | kalab | 2008-04-01 11:52:09 -0700 (Tue, 01 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edit began with talking with Ash. I began and read aloud to Ezra. The words. ...I wrote the slang shades to elude to the type of congov and show more detail of knowledge. George having been longer in the city. ...I removed a sentence for the position of back is not a focus. The raising on stilts. ...I wrote I think to show focus of the creation of the direct thought. To set it off. ...Edit to change a dialog that should be Betty. ...I edited through the words of talking of free jazz and I like the free flow. ...The apple pie I liked. Ezra was looking at me paying attention. ....Ezra liked the way move when reading aloud. He smiled. ...I edited to to I think I can see an S.S. to speak and a little after.
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I began the edit with making sure Richard looks back and makes a comment after congov walk to taxi then run because of the red and blue stage coaches. ...After the edit of this I thought to make sure all glasses were spectacles. ...I read and edit for a location to put the report that Psycho has dumped waste, but I think that will be saved for next chapter.
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I begin with the ordering of scotch. ...I edit and read the words of the scotch. I liked. ...I moved a sentence defining the FaJITa to have ti come after the plate is defined and before the actual label is applied to the object. ...The words of dinner are there. there was a need to move sentence to better the order. And I addded more of Dick chewing and eating unlike everyone else. ...I read to the end of the eating when they were leaving and I realized that some one will have to say some thing to Mustang. The words written feel complete. I edited to the end.
r25619 | kalab | 2008-03-30 06:52:41 -0700 (Sun, 30 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the walk across street to define a shyffle. ...I edited a sentence with no verb. ...I remove words and half a sentence and made two sentence paragraphs a paragraph to better define the object. ...I made paragraph to group the action of Dick. ...I edited the stepping through to Larry's Fajita to better time with walk across given the words, the story and the timing of where and when. ...I edited away some dialog that I read a couple of time and it just wasn't lasting or needed or real or of this scene. ...I neeed to define congov in some instances more than I have been. I did during this edit and I can think of on e other instance where I probably need to use blacksuits or Secret Sentry instead of congov. That is next chapter. ...I removed words to better define the flows and bed of truck. And clarify the definition. ...I thought for more than a few minutes about the Psycho and the mention of dumping nuclear waste. While I reasoned that I will contineu to leave this in for the nano machines could contain a nano nuclear reactor (or the core. The outter shell. I thought of removing this. I thought of replacing it with some way to and explination of running out of power, but that has been done. Leaving this will further show Psycho is at the end of a power cycle. I only need to remember to dump the waste. Psycho will dump the waste while Dick is in Larry's Fajitas. I need to remember for next chapter to dump the waste or report. In fact, Dick will suggest to go find a safe place to dump while inside so Psycho is detected. ...I better defined the vehicle gardens and what is in them. I wrote of a Hummer for I thought a Hummer wold make and will make a great cage for rats and pigeons. ...I remvoed more words defining people with red things on. Two sentence paragraphs. They were useless. ...I read on to the entrence. I like what is now written for the journey to the doors. I think next edit the read will be smoothing adn the edit minimal for the slow edit now found many of what I think are the last things needed to complete the book. ...I searched and replace all the , and with and for all things of a series. ...I edited to the walk up the stairs and the beginning of the search for Mustang and clue people.
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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence becuase the clouds are noticed before the stars. ...I removed a sentence that was left after a move or for some reason there was a duplicate. ...I will not begin to edit the comma and of a , and of a series of items. I think think is how the record is. This is the record. ...I replaced all Connecticut with Conn for the system could be triped. ...A ministry is better a church for a church is a building. coffee shop\? More like a cafe. No need to define what is drank. ...I replace 'out into' with to because I can't reason or think of what the out into means. ...I removed words that were redundant description and making things over defined. I removed more words. That felt good because the one gone made many. ...I found better adjectives to define because the ones used were misplaced. ...I moved and wrote a couple of sentences to better define the talk and though of Dick and Psycho. ... I changed detective company to just company of a thought for dick has no reason and begins with the general. ...I replaced side walk with sidewalk. ...I edite by moving and removing of words at the beginning of the walk through the circle and with the S.S.. The order was off and the flow of the record seemed to skip somwhere. The flow is better now with the removal of conflicting definition and moving of description to find the words flow. ...I need to look more at all the flow and scene and found thing that didn't mean much. ...I read the walk out to the edge of circle and I wrote words to show standing on edge waiting for light. Stands by people waiting. Doesn't draw attention because everyone is talking with some one. ...I moved sentences to define the people after the crowd for the people come are the crowd. ...I moved redundant location and seeing of Psycho. I removed two sentences but the meaning remaind. ...I edit read a couple of missing verbs. Only a couple. ...The words from the beginning to the crossing of the circle are very near complete. The changes made I think will just about put this chapter or this part to rest in the mind. I like it. I can read it. I can feel the prose and see the story and know the characters. ...I edited on. ...I wanted to show and complete the action of the stage coach almost hitting the two men grappling. ...I removed sentence paragraphs of thought and description of input of a specific vehicle guardian because of it's detail of the body. This si not going to be a thought or a focus for Dick would have noticed and defined it long ago. Only the plants change to register change and make record if a focus. ..Removing more rubber adjectives for it is known most of the time I have written or read and transposed the record of mind to page. ...I removed more words and wrote to edit the description after the flash. And after the flash I had to write the recognition of the hovercopter. ...I like better the beginning of thought and self and record after the strobe flash. It is becoming. ...The walk to the propaganda bomb is what is needed. There some verb issues, but those were easy to edit once edit read. ...Near the end I wrote a with for it was the best way to define. ...I read to the end. ...The edit read of the propaganda bomb read some thing I liked. Not as deep as the half flash, but effective for the people around to control the crowd incase something does happen. ...The edit to the end made me feel the chapter is very close to some feeling of complete.
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I edited from before crossing con. I removed that that was not needed and was showing too much with words....I read and made better the scene of Dick closing eyes then opening for flash The right of defining people was neat, but dick's eyes are closed and right then he is either focused on thought or more controlled thought. ,,,I read and liked what was read. ...I edited and read and like what I read. ...Then I edited for Mass for full name has been edited to part name so the system won't trigger the record if this is a record of anything. ...I worked with commas and ands to passe the action. Slow or fast. I edited to the edited to the end. The words feel to be good.
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I began with body through people. ...The edit of writing a verb for pin sentence had me edit and read the paragraph again and then I want to better write the Page line sentence and did. ...I edited to the walking across of street. I will begin after the cross next edit.
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I edited from the beginning. I removed the use of song as some metaphor tool for it was not needed. ...I removed the verb of hear in sentence near beginning because that has been shown. ...I edited by removing words that were just not needed. They were too much of everything. They where remove and made words more. ...I edited articles to focus the and a or rather a and the. ...There was refining of words and object and subects and verbs. Some to make it better. Some that needed correction. Nothing was really added and there were words taken away and moved to better define and show. ...I read the shaking and thought the walls vibrate. ...I like the sound and the flow to the thought. It is the action of the record. ...then I read more thought that needed to be removed. Then I edited and removed. I edited read the words. ...I edited read the words will be the way of defining all reads. I edited read the words and edited wrote by removing. ...I really like the flow from desk to exit. The walk down stairs. The thought the show the movement is good. At least, I believe it to be. ...The edit of the hall better for is is not passive. The along sort of slowed thing down. ...I need a verb for a long sentence i like long. ...
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I read from the beginning to the end. I edited from the beginning to the end. There were changes of removing words. More removing worfds than anything. Lots of words were removed to make more of what is. What is is something very near complete. I edited from beginning to end. The flow and dialog what is needed. Some of the description written and refined to show a bit more. The focus is on the words and the minor details to find out facts of the situation. The thought read and thought and read and thought. I like the thought and the flow. Most the old prose description has been edited. The chapter read. I liked it.
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From first sentence, I edited. ...There are two sidewalks. ...There was a need to make a sentence to shorten the sentence and focus on the object. ...There was the need to write internal dialog to focus the thought. This with Clean and dim. ...Before I edited by moving internal dialog for the dialog to be set off properly ,,,I realized when editing that there is no dialog. Only internal dialog...Thought. ...I removed plastic for there was no reason for there to be the mention of plastic. ...I had to add sweat early for it felt too long of the story fo there not to be sweat and checking the record there is sweat, so there is sweat. ...I read from the beginning three times. I am a bit disappointed at the amount of editing having not read much of the chapter, but I do like what was edited and written. What needs to be thought is now thought. It is becoming like the other chapters. This first good, but it is now of the style of the other chapters. And though there should be prose as there still is because the thought is more relaxed and not focus on a case, thought is thought and should be shown as such. It, the chapter, is better for it. ...The words come along. ...I edited to the end. After about the middle, it was more smooth and thought and edited. Most of the edit time was with th ebeginning. I am sure the amount of change will show this. I read and read the end. I liked. A few issues found, but good. Near...
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I had a flash thought while getting fishstick out of oven. I had after thought of the past edit. Something about stairs. ....I thought of the falling and the fact Dick is alone. And was with people. Then I thought of why Dick didn't try to talk to the suits. So I felt it was because he was shocked. A shock rod. He will look at the column and try to tell Benjamin. I wrote words so the scene is complete. I think what I wrote is good. I figure the reason Dick doesn't struggle or shout to Betty and George and Richard is because he is shocked with shock rod and lost. The focus returns out. He looks for Betty in tube. ...I edited the beginning. I think I have the words to show Dick. This completes more of the chapter. It shows what is needed to show may things.
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I read from the beginning. ...I read and found less in more is more now. I left a with because a with was needed. I found a missing period. ..I liked the hope and lost. ...I wrote the elipsis for some reason. Read good. I like the words. I edited to the press of the first medstick push. ...I think it is near good. There were words that were better in a few sentences. ...I edited a few verb instances. The verb instances made the sentence better after the change. ...I removed orders of some confusing prose, so the words were prose. ...I removed a thought that just wasn't a thought. Not one had for reason or insanity or pain. ...I added the thought for the test because it is. ...read and read. ...I changed flat to smooth for it is not flat. ...I move thought for the thought was written out of order. I like the words. ...What dick felt and thought after the shakes is that it is safer on the edge for the drill is likely drilling for middle. ...Dick is drawn to the center thinking the nano machines are going to connect Psycho to the system in the center and dick want to stop it. And it could be, but it could be a way to draw Dick to the center to be killed by the drill. The other feel and think thought was just removed for it is not a thought of the record. ...I read to the changing of the ceiling. I edit to the same location.
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I began at the beginning. ...The description of tunnel light flashing needed an edit. It is better now. It is more.. ...I think I have decided that in will not be comma and (, and), but will be just and. for a series of words. ...I moved a sentence to better time of entering. ...I like the edits made for last edit. The banging is better and easier to explain for no shaft is really needed. ...The leaving of cube and the light description needed to change flicker is better than flash for it is more of a flickerr. and not a flash. And there is only one fan. ...I wrote more showing of the effects of the gas. ....The description of staircase at end was copied. the other description felt confusing. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
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I read from the beginning to the minor correction of making in to into into. After this I stopped the edit.
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I read from the beginning and then edited the prior chapter. ...I edited a word for water hasn't built up that fast. ...I read to the edge of the pond and near the scuring of Psycho to white light. ...I like the words now. I think the reason is sane and of charater. What is shown is what is felt. ...I think. Becoming complete.
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I read from the beginning of the chapter to begin the edit. ...I removed a to and removed some words that were redundant in description. ...I wrote sentences to describe a congov coming and walking up to Dick on the ground. ...I remove dialog of the whole answer question internal and external dialog. I read and read and read this section. I had to edit some words by removing or replacing. I believe the words better written. ...I actually move a sentence because Psycho reacts quick, but not that quick to skip the mind. The skip was a good idea. I think I will use it for some thing else. Instead. Psycho moves then Psycho grabs Dick. ...I read to end. I removed some words to make the description better.
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I read from description of Dick speaking to Betty and gang about always. The the scream of the global read. ...I reordered words with space to better show how the event is. It read better in the talk of Richard now asking as he does. ...I like the Army change. Better. ...I removed words of lines and focused on a sidewalk object and found what was needed for words. ...dick needs to be aware of the man behind and is aware. I needed to make more of the man behind you always need to look out for. ...One sentence made two because one sentence was two sentences of the record. ...I wrote more description of walking between. I like what was read. It is what feels to be need. Most so far is complete. I like that. ...I read to the questioning of the strenght of the tube.
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I began with the stop of the soft-thumps. I read and removed a few words. I read and liked the people waving. The edit last edit created a better sentence. ...The talk by the Hotels I like. Feels good. I did write words of sweat after focus is shifted after Betty and Richard talk of cool and dry. ...I had the color of stage coaches inncorrect for I want red left and blue right while hidden under the tunnel. ...The write of the drones is to show drones in the sky. Many more than normal....the write of more of Betty talking with hands and not words is good because she is lost in thought and not totally away she is talking with hands. But that is find. I am sure this is also me learning or beginning to learn sign. ...I wrote better description for the stage coaches entering the people of U turn of Con. ..I edit moves to chants. I like the verb chants. And giving the subject move sounds chants behind. I kind of like. I may edit next thinking too abstract. But I think the record is unique and inn the frame the best record. ..I read to the end. I removed the second to last sentence for Dick doesn't need or doesn't say twice thank you and I know the next chapter has Dick saying thank you and that is just not an accurate record.
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I read from after the scan. I will leave the changes in order for the next edit. I haven't read the last log, but I am sure it is what it needs to be. ...Then I change the lobe scan write to mind and not spoke. ...After writing and thinking of the sentence for the lobe scan beginning, i wrote dialog to tell how weird it is. It's a good reason to begin Betty and George's dialog. And the Richard. ...I scanned the internal dialog during the scan and found a few punctuation errors with a missing horizontal bars. ...I remove a second shift of Jo's taxi. Two found. The first on used, but moved it in a position that is about between the two instances.
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I began with George saying, You get to tell the S.S.. ...I read of the description of the intersection and read a sentence that was okay, but confusing, so edited the sentence by removing words and wrote another that was more showing and clear and understood. ...There were a couple of verb writing issues. ...I removed another with. ...I moved a few sentence around the space to better order the timing and the thought and the action for that is how it happened. ...I had to rewrite the sentence of congove raising white tent because it was out of order. ...I moved a sentence before another to have a better description flow and how what is seen and what is revealed. ...There were sentence issues that were depressing because the words shouldn't be that fucking out of order. The stage coach passing from behind taxi is where the fucked ordered words were. ...The words A GLOBAL TERRORIST RED IS IN AREA. BE AWARE was written a couple more times as they pass because it needs and is shouted more. ...I removed words of Dick saying he is a yellow. this was removed because after Dick sees Eleanor's gun he becomes less than honest for fear of his life. ...And still more sentences that were not of the order or decription needed. ...I thought about the honesty of Dick in the taxi before the sound is heard that makes them forget even thought Eleanor has a gun. I think he will still be honest and open until he sees that Eleanor grabs the gun, before she forgets, making it know to him that honesty of an uncertain truth to some one with a gun is not a wise idea. ...I also have the gun moved to the jacket, or under the jacket, so that correction was made. ...I had to arrange the actions of Richard and the group before the siren sounds. The act of Richard yellig needed to be pushed back to before the siren sounds and not spaced through the action. I also had to make sentences paragraphs to make the action at the same time or not so spaced. The result I think is better telling. The words are of an edit that shouldn't be, but it. ...I believe the flow and order better now. ...I had to read both movements of the Red and Blue stage coach to be sure the sequence works. ...I have George and Eleanor looking at dick after the siren to show that they many not know who he is or not as well as they did before. ...I forgot that the record has Jo being more watchful of Dic after the siren because he doesn't forget teh prior conversation and the screaming. I think I will have this staring the entire drive. Jo doesn't say anything because he is more scared of what any one will do and just wants them out. ...I read to them talking about dancing to Jazz and Free jazz again. I like what was read. There were more edit than i would hope, but the edits made have mde the chapter very close to completion.
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I began with the scream: YOU'RE THE FUCKING RED... ...I edited the sentence because having the pupils move felt weird. This was the second read of the sentence. ...I wrote an three words sentence to write further define and show Richard waking. ...I moved a sentence to write the true order. ...I read the words of as for with and as need to go. I created another sentence. Better now. Even was able to remove a word. That word was as. ...I had to make one paragraph two then edit the first paragraph sentence because it was needed and now helps set up other description. ...I became picky with description. I just didn't think that many words were needed and found if I seen a better verb and used it or placed it that the words became better. ...I removed an as in dialog because it made the dialog feel more natural. And it was an as. ...I removed adjectives of Jo guiding taxi for they were not needed. ...I lift multi subject paragraphs as one to better show the action at once or the order. ...Wrote dialog to improve the flow of thought. ...I changed yes to something to open and give a effortless answer. ...I found another with when defining three congov. The sentences were made better. ...I edit Dick's though after the stilted congov are seen to make in vague then sharp then vague like a focused then relaxed thought. ...I moved around some sentence after writing silence is to show sound probably triggering the talk of Betty, who is tired of the silence. and wlik everyone else is looking for some thing to talk about. Everyone, but Jo and Eleanor and sort of Richard. ...I read to the apple pie.
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I began with the comment about the guy saying Adam Morgan long and loud.... removed a with with a new sentence. ...I moved a few sentences around to better flow after the 18th street preacher. ...I then thought ohave a thought of dick think Psycho is the red, but Dick reasons that the government probably can't detect Psycho. ...there was the edit to make two sentences that needed to be one. ...I read to the talk of the cycles and going to museums.
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I read from the beginning. I and a word to point to a speaker. ...I read. ...I removed a with and worthless detail. ...I read. ...I read to Eleanor talking with Dick about willing to go.
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...I began with a verb correction. I began a little before the conversation to dump. I read and found issue with Dick having a belly for he and everyone doesn't eat much. The jacket old, nice, but difficult to replace. ...I had to write Psycho answer to question. ...I rewrote a witty scenario using graveyard. I left out graveyard with the edit last write. The sentence change and now the reinclusion of the words graveyard complete it. ...I removed words of a sentence to make the chatter really come from everywhere....I edited and read. And then I reread to read slow. The words read. The verbs I want were written and read. I did have to reread to make sure I was reading slow enough to catch the filled in verb. ...I rid the words of a comma who because it should be she and a new sentence. ...I found the order of objects didn't properly define the movement of main object. ...I grammar error with continued dialog. Glasses needed to be glass cups. ...I read to the arrival of food. I like what was read.
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I began with the thought and internal dialog of Dick thinking of football for the propaganda bomb. ...There was a grammar issue with the internal dialog. ...I read of a verb missing and wrote it. ...I wrote of the hovercopter blade to make it a blade and not something else. ...There were a few verb issues that shouldn't have been, but they were and they were corrected. ...then I found a few more verb issues and that sucked, but they were corrected, too. ...I fond some space issues. I read and like the beginning and the end of the Propaganda Bomb. I think it flows as it should. The chapter feels to be done. ...I read to the end.
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I began from the inner circle.... I wrote a sentence paragraph and edited by removed sentences from a paragraph. I read. ...I found the correct dialog quotes and changed them....Edited words for words and Edited and wrote on sentence to be two. ...There was the edit of the plural and possessive. ...I edited the telling of guns. I want to do the showing. ...I made a paragraph of sentences more paragraphs. ...I remove paragraphs sentences and words. Didn't need the thought, but wanted the thought action.
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I read from the beginning. ...I first edited by removing words for they words less were more. ...I remove repeated description. And more words of useless description. It felt good just yanking the words and reading on. ...I focused on the fact all the windows should be closed for they don't want to lose the cool. ...Another with removed. ...And another with was removed. The description written as a sentence. ...I made the internal dialog better with editing. ...I read to the end of the chapter. The chapter is.
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I began after leaving the mass of Adam's Morgan main and waking toward the Duke's Bridge. ...I removed a few words because the adjectives were not needed. There was sentence that was not needed. ...I remove I from a sentence and created a better sentence. ...I read and I read and I read and I liked what I read. A period here. A comma there. A few words removed. A feel and a think and some thought to play with words and show the suspect mind of Dick. The words read. ...I read of the people of the row houses and found the need to made some changes for subject and verb. ...I read the withs and liked most the withs. ...I read to the edit. There were a few verb edits. I like the chapter. The flow is feeling near complete.
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...I read from the beginning. I read to after the sound of the siren from the drone faded and Dick remember about Psycho. I think what is now written is what is needed. There were a few thoughts and words removed because the thought or description was a bit much. More than needed.
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I removed Psycho voice detection because it was too much. ...I removed a few more words of the thought to make the thought not too focused for a new entity is before. ...I removed more thought with a feeling of being embarrassed which feels to flow better than the thought. It defines what I wanted to define. ...I read the beginning then realize Psycho was using I a lot and should not be as of the beginning of the story, so the Is of Psycho were removed. ...I removed 'maybe' from the thought of A.I. Detectives for Dick has used A.I. Detectives. ...I edit more instances of Psycho using I or you when it should not. ....I removed more I's from the words of Psycho. ...I wrote an I to make one long sentence two. ...There was a verb correction. ...There were words written that are now written. ...I read to the end of the chapter.
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I began with 'Clean air fills lungs.' ...I removed thought from the second paragraph read. It needed to go. Lots of thought is not much thought. Know the facts. Feel the facts. Remove the thought a few paragraphs after because the thought was stupid. ...I wrote description and showed and refused to tell. I removed more internal dialog for Dick just knows and feels. . I wrote more of a cough because it is more of a cough. ...I removed thought for it need not be told to Dick, the self. I though of changing hand but not know that one is used more than another is some thing I can read while eating. Eating is left. Dick is able to use hands left or right to do what left and right can do. ...I read to the end.
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I began with adding the attempt to roll Psycho out. But ca't then I thought of the down command and removed that because the down of the elevator is automatic. Somehow. I know how...Maybe. ...In fact there is no down feeling. The sound will get more distant above. ...I read from the beginning to the roll.
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I only need to move a sentence. Thought this edit while editing prior chapter, the last edit. I thought I would need to edit the order of Dick seeing the people in richshaw but it is written as it should be, so I only had to move a sentence.
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I began with Psycho creating a heat coil for Dick. ...I replaced watched with read for everything is a read process for the record and for the machine. ...I got lost in the action of Dick and read near the beginning and felt like writing more walking. I read and found the words to be. ...I edited the walk. I read the walk to better reason and think of the walk and the stands. This took much time. I moved words. I wrote sentences. I removed sentences. I did lots of focused reading of the description. I did focus upon the internal dialog, but the walking was the primary focus of the edit during most the edit. Then I edited to the corner of the building and the white light of K Street. I then realized that I need Dick in action to stop Richard and Betty as soon as he gets to the corner because to show and tell of urgency Dick leaves the corner as soon as he reaches the corner to either warn the guards or Tell Richard and Betty. I removed many words. It was like a balance. I wrote. Then I removed. I removed a lot of words to better time the trying to get to not enter. ...I read to the end. Everything happens fast now. That is good. The chapter is becoming better and better. Words written. Words edited. It is some thing now.
r24902 | kalab | 2008-02-24 15:54:47 -0800 (Sun, 24 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning. ...I liked the new beginning with the change of the prior. As read as only a chapter it should begin this way for it is the easy way to begin to question other than self. The prior chapter will show Dick has reason and even after given reason to blame another blames self. The meaning changes with the prior chapter and knowing more about Dick and the situation. With the introduction to information, more is understood. The character is defined. And bad is not able to be assumed. It will be defined true of false. ....I felt upon and not against for the rain isn't against the pond and Dick's total mind doesn't define things as against. Dick knows the use of lots of against in the record will show the congov, those reading, there is conflict in Dick's total mind. ...had time to think and I thought of the walk and definition of Psycho. I thought of brush or scurry and scurry was better. Dick sees it as a scurry. ...I had a great thought in having Nothing is to define when everything is lost in total mind. There is no focus because there is just no thought no mind. Nothing is. Everything is is another. Some time, but anohter writing if ever for another. The Nothing is done twice is a bit much and I will question the next edit, but I like because Dick is strained from everything is. ...I edited a building definition show for it was an odd tell if felt. It felt it needed to show. ...I wrote more thought process of internal dialog. I wrote another nothing is to show the stop and final total lose for Dick to control all thought for he has allowed the reality to be that Mustang may be dead and he can't reason away. Almost lost. Or maybe it is all a ploy\? A set up. To get Dick in. ...I wrote and edited to the sentnce of psycho giving the okay to not feel bad or guiltly for killing Mustang.
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I began with the beginning and thought to add the direct thought soon after blaming America of blaming self for one can only blame self. ...I don't think that Dick should blame America first. Or should he\? How should he\? Thinking right now of it. I am thinking either America didn't kill Psycho or America didn't or...Hmmmmmmmmmm...I think I will have it be near the same. The blame of self. I will change the end of the last chapter to have the blame of Mutang's death be given to U.S. by Psycho. ...I read to the mind write of Psycho to Dick's mind and a ltttle after. The feeling of the death thought overwhelming is where or very near to the completion I want.
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I read from the beginning. ...Only the congov the ass. The government just controlled by congov. ...Thought of the epithet was of the time. I read a bit beyond the epithet by not far beyond. ...We are a nation of epithets.
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I read from the beginning....I wrote I think to the first thought to follow what I think is a standard of some odd sort. ...I wrote or rather I copied sounds that occur and are used to show the shield of the words spoke by Richard later to show how the sound greets Dick as he leaves the taxi. ...I also wrote some smells of all that is. ...I wrote description that is more specific of the turrets. I wrote ...there were a few edits to fix the formation of the Army wall to better define. ....I had tha thought of Dick be the thought to :Psycho. The seeing. ...I had to add a verb that a sentence needed. ...I read to Richard getting out of cab.
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I began with the people running from Jo's taxi. ...I then added a verb to the sounds from behind. ...Then I read of Jo's taxi and thought that it should be just taxi and changed all that I read. ...I better write the look of the guiders of stage coach and the stage coaches roll down hill. I think the showing is better now and Dick's telling is not needed. ...I reordered the shift of stick shift to better show the true use of a standard transmission. ...I had to change some thing Richard says to some think Dick says because Dick saying and talking about the sub hotels is more likely and not some thing Riehard would care about after the disappearance of the bikers...I wrote to add the moving of vehicles into a single. ...I read to Betty seeing Psycho. Or think she saw Psycho. Or maybe seeing a new drone.
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I read from the stage coach race. I read to the new words written defining the Regan Hotel. I read between and found a few verb errors. I had to clarify in mind the football talk. All done.
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I began the edit near the end of last. The first edit was of removing words from thought to make the flow of thought more realistic. ......Then on page I read short jean shorts. The words are now jean shorts. ...I had to move a sentence for the strobe pulse. The moved sentence is now better moved. ...There were a couple of space issues where one needed to find the right place ment of words. ...I moved the sight of sign until asked that Dick answers that read to George asking for name. I like the flow a lot better and the move was good. It made all words in two places better. ...I found the need to describe. The description is where it is at. The sounds from inside none. The words after give time to silence. Dick focuses on sound. ...I edited and made better the restart of the car. The ignition sound is closer to being defined. The flow after putter out of car is now much better. The words are what I want to be felt. The state is now there. ...Found less thought was better all the time. Words were removed from much thought.,,,Removed thought of Joe and Richard about tip because Richard knows. The words were more after the words were removed. ...I had to write more about the soft thumps. I think Jo had acutally created a way to soften the thuds of bad transmission. ...I edited then wrote the question of Betty asking about Free Jazz and Dick answering. The answering preprecise because it needs to be. Dick has said it before. ...The words did flow. There were what was needed and felt to be needed. The lost and utterance of Dick about Free Jazz and the free thought. The thought of him thinking it with words or internal dialog. ...I read to after the sound of the conarmy drone. I thought of changing the conarmy to congov, but decided to leave it. ...The words are becoming. The edits are.
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I began with the beginning. ...I had the need to removed a word from description. I read the words t define the congov mock and found some of the words worthless. Too much to be a frame of Dick's now thought flow. ...I found some internal dialog edits where the sentence needed to be incomplete and fragments for Dick's time and thought not that quick. I also ordered events into paragraphs to make things happen almost at the same time. ...I edited to the shaking of hand of Dick and Jo.
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I began with the arm around shoulder. I read and read and then edited. I had to slow things down. ...I removed thought and action because it was not needed and not of the story record. ...I changed removed altered sentences for better dialog. I wrote words, but removed words to better stage the scene character. The acts short. The food shoved in. I like. ...I read and edited to the beginning of the eating and asking of Betty how the squab is.
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...I began wit the begin. I read and read edit for the verb The verbs were needing some change to be the way they needed. There were a couple different verb fixes, but they were read and changed. Once edited, changed, the sentence read as sentences of the book. ..There was some space added to paragraphs by making three because the paragraphs. ...I thought again if it was going to be ,and or just and with the last of sequence of objects or items. ...there were some need for a work or two of though or of feeling to show the realizeation and the mind of Dick. ...I read longer than expected without feeling to make change. I like the flow of Dick not talking an talking. This is some thing I think I actually have done good and not bad. ...I read to a server stops. I like it. I will read on tomorrow. The words are near something.
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I began somewhere. began and I did read through the hot dog request to the pedestrian. ...I did write a sentence to define and show a stage coach an not just elude to one. Dick does pivot left. .,,I read the inspecting circle a lot. I do not
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I thought yesterday or the day before the need to have opening and closing of window something to talk about because one doesn't want the window to let out the coolness. This I have written in with a few words. I think it words. I am sure there are errors, but it is here. The words make more of less.
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I read from the departure of Mustang. An edit to better define the departure with what is shown to be shown. These words still have something.
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dick was running over bridge when I began to read the record. I read and read and read most words to be the words of the story. ...I had to think of crossing the street to the Regan Hotel. simple is better because it is an act. Unless wanted some action there. ...I moved sentence of white truck moving to better define white truck moving. The action paces and process as the record is. I found more truth of the record. ...Verb changes and additions. The usual. ...I read to the end. I like the read. It is very near some thing done. Now reading on to next chapter.
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One sentence off change the possession and plurality of verb, after I began the edit, I made one paragraph two. ...Then there were semi colon were now periods. ...I have words for what is needed. There were descriptions that need more clarity. ...I made description better while words less. Not much thought edted. The words editing. Most was punctuation. ... A change for blacksuites. ...I believe the blacksuits are a type of congov. They were black suits and enforce the physical will of others. The act. ...I added more detail of the Jersey Dikes that hold back. The step between. ...The crossing needed some show of sweaty palms. ...There was some small addiions to make a lot more, to show more, with less. ...I read the words of running and I liked. ...I read to the run across of the Duke bridge. I edited to that word location too.
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Description I feel I like. I enjoy the internal dialog. I did need to edit and write some dialog for it is. Not much. The word balance and letter balanced with the edit with decrease of words. ...There was a need to make one sentence two. It was needed. There was a sentence that was confusion Kalab prose shit. Now it is a sentence. It is prose, but readable by more than the writer. Not very good for the official record. ...I believe most the thought and description near complete. I did have to remove a word here and there when thought.
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I began with the talk about payment to Dick. The first thing I found was the punctuation. ...I edited redundant action. ...The thought was a focus of the flow. The flow needed to be corrected to make it short and brief as he talks but not that brief. ...I read the dialog and sort of felt good for it. There was noise in the room preventing true focus to edit. ...I moved some dialog because it gave the flow better than it was. ...I read to the end. I think the flow was there and is there.
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Beginning from the beginning I removed more words from the opening sentence for looking at the mirrored wall is not needed because the focus is on the being at the door. I moved the words to a few paragraphs later to be sure the focus is quick. The look for more people outside. A sanity check. Something that will be shown and not told. ...More removing of thought words. Less is more. ,,,I found Psycho using a pronoun which shouldn't be. ...I editing the beginning of Psycho's reason for questions to make the sentences short by making it two and by better framing the reason. ...I had a need to fix the placement of the towel. ...I read the chapter from beginning to end. I liked it. I did make some changes that were needed. I need to read the next chapter to be sure Dick mocks Psycho's process of finding life.
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I began in the middle by removing space. I read an remove some description that wasn't. ...I remove all the thought about the Democrat and Republican case because it is out of flow. I don't want it there. I did rewrite it to use the think and feel and allude. I had to remove the big obvious thought and replace it with a thought and feel and little thought along the way. this change made me feel the need to write more description to show a relaxed state. ...There were verb issues which disturbed me. They were fixed. ...I removed some thought about individuals that remained from an old thought of the book. This is just not what is needed. ...There were more issues with this chapter than thought. Too much writing was needed for me to feel good about it. I did complete the read of the chapter.
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I removed the ellipsis and the word The from the first thought for it wasn't need and felt too stages. It felt too much like the beginning of something and not the continuation of thought. ...I removed words that didn't fit. There weren't that many words removed. They were good words, but they felt lost when read in the paragraph or sentence read. ...There were a few issues with commas and punctuation, but overall, the words written, I liked. I read to the middle of the chapter.
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Pain is and pain was where I began with the edit. A few more pain words were added. The act. The thought. The focus. ...I felt more needed to be written after Dick wakes from nano surgery. I did balance the word creation with editing by removing words. Most were of thought. Pain and focus and silence in mind are reasons Dick could not be thinking. ....I almost edited the sentences of leg pain, but read them and realize their for was complete. ...I removed thought for it is becoming internal and connected to deeper understanding with few words. All those thing to silence maybe find a way to think with only self. ...With pain going and more questions of a Detective become the thought is exact. ...There was lots of focus on thought. So I focused on thought and edited thought. The description of rainbows I had to find and and read and reread and make a few removals of words of description. ...I think now I have removed more words than wrote, so there is the same balance I want. Dick focused on action and everything. ...I removed sentences of a thought because Dick is not think of that right then. ...I read to the end. I like the confusing conversation with Dick and Psycho for it is rushed. The thought lost. The mood different. I did write the question of Dick to all of dick created Psycho for it needs to be. ...I read to end.
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I began the edit by removing an apostrophy s. ...I made paragraphs of sentences of a paragraph because the thought is not in same instance or with the other instance or related. Or a stream. Like a connected action. Possible an unthought of thought of a trained mind wanting to get in. Or just thought needing to out because it realizes it is in. ...I removed thought from a long thought span for the thought was too detailed and more detailed then Dick would want it to be even if not focused on other thought and actions and things. ...I removed words of description and thought for they were not needed even the a little bit. The where worthless. ...I had a few verb state issues, but not many. ...I removed more words of some nano dust for that is old thought. ...I arranged some coughing and added some to make the pain felt. ...Near the end I had some edits for the fall and the set up. It seems the change I last made were only some of the changes needed to be made. I pretty much began at the beginning of being in the lift and read to the end. I like most. There were corrects, but things are reading good.
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I read from the beginning. I focused upon the thought. The thought is near better now that I removed words to focus on the quick thought. There was too many words in a span of excitement. Dick knows to begin to trust instinct and an agile mind. ...IThe thought of subject was a focus, and I think now the words are better and the thought more honed with a flow and reason and want to slow it down. ...The words are. ...I read to Plastic walls are smooth.
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I read the beginning. I still like what is read. The changes of prior edit are read and like. Good thought. There was one change, but it was minor and needed to show slight change instead of a lot of spinning. ...The words are what need to be to flow flow from the prior chapter.
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I began with the trip of Dick. I removed thought. I read and made some verb corrections. After reading to the end I found that the chapter is very near complete. The edits of the chapter made during last edit did what was needed to create a story and a character of the scene.
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I began with a misspelled words. I saw it and didn't need to check. ...I then rid a paragraph of pavement for the word is for some thing paved not for the rubber sidewalk. ...I read to find the flow from the prior chapter and found that it was already found in the words read.
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I removed a reference of me for me is a thought of self and I didn't want one there. ...I made an edit to remove up from raise up for it is redundant. Why do people write rise up\? Why not just rise\? ...I read to the column of soldiers to better define the formation. ....I like the pace and what was read. It is becoming some thing.
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I began with the apple smell. I wrote words to make more the story and feeling and the sound. ...There was a paragraph that needed to be a sentence. ...There were a few things here. I believe all of all was good. ...Then read more. ...I read from the center and the speaking of terrorist and thought of putting away of neckerchief, so I read back and edited then wrote. The sneeze words make the story more. ...I read and read and read and read and reread with the edit. ... thought the gen prefix more, but won't decide now. I have a few more chapters. ...Then I read and read and read for the edit more and found a minor error here and there. Overall I like what was read and read and read. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.
r24351 | kalab | 2008-01-27 22:27:46 -0800 (Sun, 27 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with the reading of the mat falling for it was the last thing I remember editing last. ...I removed some words because they were not needed. They made everything more. ...I moved a sentence about eh army preacher to be sure the text was what was needed in order. it was. ...I read a few words before I actually found an error. The error was verb error. No surprise. I corrected it. ...More removing of thought words for they were not needed. ...I add the sniper harness to the story for it will support the description of the prior chapter and give an idea of how Dick may have programmed drone to allow himself to thing he is being lifted from always to K Street if that is the reality. ...As I read more and more I like the words more and more. there were still words to be removed, but the words were easy to find and define as ones that would be removed and add more to the story. ...There were moments when I had to slow the edit down because it became more of a read than an edit. ...I edited to the Apple Pie Paranoia thought.
r24287 | kalab | 2008-01-24 00:28:50 -0800 (Thu, 24 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I don't know if I want the record template to have a comma, and after a series or just and to lead to the last item of a series. ...I began the read with the beginning (as I always seem to do). The beginning does change. ...I thought of a twist on an old saying. ...early to bed early to rise to make me healthy, wealthy and wise. ...My way of writing for me or some thing or some where ....Just the word. ...Early to bed early to rise to become a morning person. ...So,...The words read I liked. ...I found more than a few instances when there were words missing or still there from last write and I forgot to remove or unwrite. ...I had a few cabs that neeeded to be taxi. ...there were minor issues like a missing S. ...What I read I like. some time I just wanted tore read and read and not edit. Most of the time actually. It's getting more difficult to edit and not just read. ...I need to edit the speaking loud for it is loud when they are getting into taxi. ...I read to everyone getting in to the taxi. ...I am too tired to edit and to comfortable with reading. I like it now.
r24270 | kalab | 2008-01-23 06:08:33 -0800 (Wed, 23 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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...I began near the order with Hurry who will now be Hurry instead of that servant. I edited. ...I edited and wrote some action other than smiling. I Dick didn't smile much. Dick will smile, but only when needed. Dick does love to smile. ...Made change in dialog of Mustang an Dick's meeting for it then had more meaning, and the order is better on how the prior sentence sets up the dialog, so everything feels the change makes the story better. I am removing the use of last names. unles during introduction. ...I read to the ordering of food and after. I began reading. It has been a tiring morning.
r24248 | kalab | 2008-01-22 11:55:09 -0800 (Tue, 22 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read the first paragraph and wanted moving more than stage coach. ...The thought to spot Dick is what is needed. I like the flow and the lead to follow dick to more clues.
r24220 | kalab | 2008-01-21 05:25:28 -0800 (Mon, 21 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the circle. I read and edited redundant definition. The changes are needed. They are missing and making everything else better. I found naming of street issues that were easy to fix. ...There were ing verb issues that were easy to correct for the record form. ...I like the use of internal dialog to help his attention to focus upon cars and change the process to not think of congov and tension or anything. ...I read to the strobe pulse that pulses Dick. I like it.
r24206 | kalab | 2008-01-20 19:13:04 -0800 (Sun, 20 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning and found words that were not needed. I found a description that needed better object and verb definition and less words. ... I wrote words to show what was in the cages of the Jeep quarter panel and as a show and act of something that needs to be seen. ...The thought of Dick should become less detailed for Dick doesn't want to give away the details. ...I found my usual cryptic description prose defining a few things. ...There were the usual verb issues. Those issues were fixed.
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I began with the talk of Dick and Mustang. ...I liked most of the dialog. I did edit and write some description. time and focus created some thing to like. The talk does create (more) the character Dick. ...There were a couple places were the dialog was rewritten and edited and written to better find the flow of the conversation and what they do say to another. I had to omplete an action and that action completed the dialog and the flow of the story.
r24168 | kalab | 2008-01-19 09:46:24 -0800 (Sat, 19 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read the beginning for the flow. ......I removed the D.C. Cafe name from last for it should be in this for D.C. is the trigger of a location. ...The beginning now is. ...The few words read after, and I liked.
r24155 | kalab | 2008-01-18 05:40:25 -0800 (Fri, 18 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I removed two a's before I changed anything else. The article was too much and conflicted with a plural. ...I removed parts of sentences because there was over description. ...The change of river to pond because the water way is full and not flowing. The Watergate dam is not pumping fast enough. ...I removed words that were not needed. They explained too much without logic so really the words explained nothing to someone other than me.. There were edits to change a word, but not many unless words were removed. ...I need to remove the street names. ...I think. ...Let me think of this. I just realized that if the parse is to be some what simple yet flawed...Dick's state of record would break on Florida. That being written. What do I do to complete the definition. ...Thoughts. ...I changed the street names to different for they are named different because the district complained that their records were getting filled with lots of files created because people were thinking and talking about the street names which some of are states. ...Every state will be a few less words. I like the idea of con street. ...After the thought and the edit of changed some street names, the flow of the edit was lost. I just wanted to read.
r24133 | kalab | 2008-01-17 05:39:39 -0800 (Thu, 17 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. ...I edited distant to soft because soft is a more used adjective and soft is what it is and not distant. Soft to sort of control the mass and hard, the hard is in chapter 1000. I change movement off head to sync with thought of mind. ... I edited internal dialog to better order the thought and rid the thought of thought not thought by Dick. ...I like the thought of Dick in sentence that are similar to the spoken. The talking and not yet calm and focused has the mind prime. The thoughts do slow during the end until the words are with action. The do become complete when the thought is seen. ...I changed EMPTY and the action for EMPTY to full. ...I broke up a few paragraphs to separate action with input. It is better now. ...I defined an alley way far better than it was. Good enough to probably leave after next edit. ...I thought of the end for a brief moment and the thought and site conversation about the percentage was only a poll of data and it was not accurate. this has obvious to the current state of polling. ...There were some nasty sentences that were lost in poetry that needed to be written and not abstractly thought. I there will be a few more. The are almost fun to find a way to rewrite for another and still see what I see with the convoluted words. ...I edited from the beginning of the chapter to the crossing of the intersection.
r24113 | kalab | 2008-01-16 05:10:44 -0800 (Wed, 16 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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...I read and begin with a removal of a word. I don't know if Rock Creek is a key. I removed it for that reason and because I think I will have the local to call it the creek. The words read from the beginning. I only read a few paragraphs.
r24102 | kalab | 2008-01-15 19:54:12 -0800 (Tue, 15 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I begin from the top I read and liked. I found an edit with the use of last was not as good as using prior. There wasn't much wring but and obvious typo. The typo lead to a minor swap and words and removal of confusion. The words read from beginning were good. I like. I thing the flow from the chapters to this is.
r24100 | kalab | 2008-01-15 19:12:10 -0800 (Tue, 15 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began with reading of the short. I removed the from internal dialog for the article is not a record and too focused. ...I found a few more is verb issues. I found a few verb issues. overall the sentence read with a flow to form to the frame, but felt to read that is something shown and some thing to be doing. I read and reread some things. The edit was an even flow of reading and feeling and seeing then finding a verb issue a typo. I read from beginning to end and the flow I felt to be what is need and had. This is it. A few more typos to be found an few verbs to be fixed, but this is very near complete.
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I read after the hit. I had to rewrite one sentence. It is better. I feel the pain more. ...I read and slowed to edit. at times but most just read and read again. I editing that which I didn't read last edit. ...the wods to better define the reason Dick didn't press the nano med to skull during fall. ..I liked the internal dialog. I did have to edit questions for Dick mind is going fast and focuse and not needing complete everything. He is not speaking or seeing to another. He is thinking to self and self is a unique version of a language. Unless focused, internal dialog is in a self dialog. ...I wrote one sentence to further show reason to believe the need to stop Psycho by stopping from the center. ...I liked the end. I did have to move a paragraph for better thought flow. I like the thought flow that was removed, but it was redundant and Dick is thinking fast and knows mind must be calm and focused and doesn't succumb too much re thoguht and rethinking the same question twice when there are too many questions to ask. ...the transition to running to the center is much better now. The action picks up. ...I removed some thought and seeing of Psycho and Dick for it isn't needed. The talk feels some thing. I don't know. I like the end of the chapter and the end of it all. I like the chapter. ...I think I need to think about the coversation between Dick and Psycho at the end for I have thought of all the others with more time (I think.) The thought does need to be refined.. ...
r24044 | kalab | 2008-01-14 06:49:00 -0800 (Mon, 14 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I like the beginning. ...I am happy to have removed the sentence that had Dick putting the med stick into head because Dick doesn't want to live if the fall will kill him for not only has he lost some hope and believe death on a mission is not suicide, but he knows if he suffers enough harm to have killed he doesn't want to be alive due to nano healing. ...Or maybe this is a way to show every one he is not a terrorist. ...Maybe\? Maybe, it is all in his head. I read from the beginning to the hit and read through to the first injection of the nano meds. The search of the stick. ...Words are reading.
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I like the frustration of Dick slamming shoulder against the white door to get out tension and chaos of hopelessness. I felt the want. I seen some of it. I read and I slow read and found a few sentences that need less words for more clarity. ...I removed all the nano particles on the floor for there are none. ...I read to the stripping of Dick. I read from the beginning. The words read and edited can wait to be edited again. I do believe I was slow enough and focused enough to edit beyond what it was and near to what it will be.
r24023 | kalab | 2008-01-13 19:47:38 -0800 (Sun, 13 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I like the beginning of the chapter. It is not the convoluted mess it was at the beginning of last read. it is becoming. I did need to remove a few more words because they were still not needed. ...What was written was to complete the description and the spoken and required action. ...I read from beginning to end and I think I like the chapter enough to really like the chapter. I feel what was removed is what will be removed and needs to be removed and that everything is good. Or very near good. I liked what was read.
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I thought about change the beginning of the chapter, but thought against it. I read and like the words and the story and had only typo like edits. If I were not tired and having a time focusing to edit and remain awake I would edit on. The beginning I wonder.
r23996 | kalab | 2008-01-13 06:16:25 -0800 (Sun, 13 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I removed words that were not needed. there were some words that were too much, but the way that they were written read to be for other works. Just not these. ...I read and changed shaft to column because column can be a shaft and defines bottom to top. Shaft can be side to side. ...I rewrote cylinder as column after Dick calls it a column. ...I removed some sentences for their description is of no fact for it didn't occur. There just isn't the logic now that the flow has been edited. I removed thought for thought is not being had by Dick right now for Dick has thought near all. I read to the end and found edits, but the flow and the words were very good. I liked. The changes needed. Now to read on.
r23981 | kalab | 2008-01-11 23:26:24 -0800 (Fri, 11 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I felt to remove the sue of Fuck for it is already know data and Dick doesn't get tense right then for it is not felt. It is not felt then it is not of the record. ...I read from the beginning to the parking of the limbo. The flow from chapter to chapter now better.
r23968 | kalab | 2008-01-10 21:44:49 -0800 (Thu, 10 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began the read after the strobe shock. I found a few typos. I read a sentence that need to have the subject become the object and the object the subject. I moved a sentence to better order the record action. I removed internal dialog for the internal dialog was about who has a gun and that is already known. ...I removed words that had Dick lying. I removed the words because I Dick doesn't lie because he is honest and because it just was not needed. It wasn't some thing said. I did like the talk of the strobe pulse. Removing what I didn't like required me to remove what I did like, but the total edit makes the words feel better. I read a little after Dick talks with Ash. I like what I read. What was removed made it better.
r23929 | kalab | 2008-01-09 05:02:08 -0800 (Wed, 09 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit were last left of. The speed limit and the beginning of the Global read call. I read it all and found I still like the words. I believe they are what are needed. I read and removed a few words. I read and I also read and changed a few words. I read from that point to Eleanor making a face and need two sentences instead of one, but the showing was needed. ...I read to the talk of Richard under reason for paying for the ride through. I fixed is answer to not be as spaced. It read better.
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I edited to change the beginning because the more I think about it the more I realize that Dick will use D.C. instead of Washington.. The location of the sentence to define Eleanor having a gun has been written. The tell will show a lot, so it is more of a show than tell, but even people tell things to each other. ...I removed more words that just were not needed. I wrote a word or two to complete a written thought. ...I did like what I read. I like reading with Betty, George, Richard and Eleanor. I like them as characters and i think they are likable as they are likable beings. ...I read from the beginning to near the talk of fuel in the car. The words read good. I read slow.
r23886 | kalab | 2008-01-06 23:29:00 -0800 (Sun, 06 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the ordering to the end. I had to remove a few thoughts to make better. I remmeber rewriting some thing but it wasn't that much. I just wanted less words. I wrote senteces to improve the act of Dick getting water and pouring the water. The words removed and replaced to make Dick a character. Dick is alive with these words. The chapter is read and edited for now.
r23865 | kalab | 2008-01-06 00:22:06 -0800 (Sun, 06 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the walk to circle and mostly remove words and actions and thought that Dick doesn't have and conversations that don't occur. I left some of the reaction or talk delayed with using detail, but that delay is needed for Psycho can be slow replying for it is still learning English. I read and read and liked what I read. I think I read it well. I think. I must have removed a lot last edit, but that is good for there needs on the record to exist. I actually was able to read to the end of the chapter. A chapter that had a lot of words removed. It will be better without the words.
r23836 | kalab | 2008-01-04 04:56:10 -0800 (Fri, 04 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. I had to remove words to make things read as they should. I feel a lot better about the beginning. I did write to for further show and less tell. A quick dialog so thought may stop. ..I moved words to better order the flow of action and sequence. The mind isn't pulled and the record is not as it was read, so things needed to be moved. I read from beginning to Dick walking down the street to the circle.
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I read from the talk of Mustang to the end. I did write more words than I thought, but what was written were few words compared to many and they were words that were written to show and not tell. The showing is better in this case. I did remove more thought to make the thought had less and more focused for Dick thinking undercontrol with Dick acting under control with Dick being in control of self. I like what was read. If I read as deep as I did I think the corrections and changes create a chapter near complete.
r23801 | kalab | 2008-01-01 23:10:01 -0800 (Tue, 01 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read the beginning to continue the edit of the prior chapter and begin the edit of this chapter. I read and edited from the beginning to the door of the apartment of Mustang. Few but meaningful things removed, but the removing made everything else feel more meaningful. Too much for what is written though I did like were reasons for some edits. A few edits.
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I read through. I removed and changes some internal dialog to continue to perfect the words. I read through the beginning to the mass of people. I did write a sentence of description for smell. The smell should be pretty powerful when it changes and there for Dick notices a new smell. ...The words are. Most of the tales is what it needs to be. The line to walk is done without showing the outline. It has a smooth flow for the words and sentences and paragraphs. ...I read to the first intersection. The flow of the words mostly there. I will begin the next read at this location or near it.
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A read through thought to be focused. I almost read from beginning to end loud. It was intent in the mind. I felt it. Now I feel the need to relax. The thinking and removing of a few words or writing a few to complete this or that intense now that it is getting near the state of reading easily through. from beginning to end this chapter was now read.
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That chapter was smooth. I had to remove a few words that made the words that remain more. I like what was read and I like what was written and how it was written. It read to be to be the chaos that is chaos in bored thought of a becoming relaxed mind. ...I will read on to the next chapter.
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I began with beginning. I am in a work removing mood. Thought but no loose thought for Dick for Dick knows the text of life exists. I read from beginning to end removing lots of thought and replacing lots of words with a word for lots more thought. More thought for thoughts with one words is better than many jumbled words. ...I wrote words to use words written and said. The words added from quick edits to copy dialog from other chapters that were for this chapter is further near complete. It is somewhere. I liked the read.I think I will llike it better when read now that the excess thought and unthought thought is now not of the record of truth.
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I read from begging to end felt only to remove thought and some action like leftovers of edits of past edits. What was removed made the words left more. Better. That much was too much. The timing of the coughing was reasoned and ordered by edit to read as they should. The meaning found in the words. I like what is now read. The chapter feels so near complete. Complete now that the nano dust is gone for is should be gone until it falls into Dick's eye. I liked the chapter. More reads should be smoother and required less if not no moving of words.
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During the last edit and write while writing of Dick pushing against the revolving door and for the first time I thought of the revolving door and seen it then thought of maybe having Dick think how big it is for it is big. I thought where it is place now fits. It feels right now, but may change or just be removed. I do like the meaning and subversive meaning. ...I also read the end to read the end and moved a sentence for better time and flow.
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I didn't begin with the beginning. Instead, I began with Dick thinking thought to stop Psycho. I read and removed a few more instances of thought. I add a few words of warning from Dick. I added a hint of thought of what Dick is doing and hope to show that Dick is at first trying to get them not to enter then trying to stop Psycho from entering after the alarm systems or something prevent Dick from warning Richard and Betty. Dick also tries to sound the alarm, but he will find once he enters that the guards are waking from sleeping and trying to see what is going one. Too late to react against Psycho. ...The chapter is better. I think i will return to it after a few edits. I do feel that it is far better and more logical and more in character for the book and the characters. Dick does what Dick things best to stop Psycho only to find he can't.
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I began with the beginning though I really had not desire to read and edit the from the beginning but I need to. It does need to be done, so it will get done. ...I add description bacause Dick is in some shock and notices detail. That stark moment of remembering exactly what is going on around. ...I removed more internal dialog for the focus is basic. Not fully complete sentences, but still complete in logic. ...I removed more internal dialog. The shock detail is needed. I better define some thing observed by Dick and not thought thus making even the meaning of the font type more. ...I removed more dialog that was point less and really not of the mood. The lack of thought, but deep thought. ...I think I have the logic and reason Dick turns around. Everything else is another good intention to hell. What is the thought once inside. ...Just trying to remain alive. Survival. I think I have the in. I think I have the turn around and the means with curiosity that has Dick going in to it. ... I think I have Psyhco's curry to the white light edited to scurry properly and not stop and start so much. ..I like the sequence of Dick saying Fuck you to Psycho now. With the written words, it is now much more.
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I read some of this chapter with last edit to see if the words from chapter 1011 were good to place in these words, but they were not, but reading had an idea that gew to an edit. That edit was to tell that the office of Dick is protected from congov reading things (and only congov). The will show why Dick doesn't think beyond walls of office.
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I removed lots of thought and the focus mantra because it is not needed until the sound begins to shout in mind. The pain. I can forget the pain. The pain will occur next chapter and only be on Dick. ...The pain must exit. The pain of th esounds is shared withthe pain of the flesh being vibrated. ...
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I removed talk that will be talk for chapter 3 (probably three). After the edit it was time to just delete all the words of internal dialog I had any question of it need or it likely hood tha these are the thoughts of Dick. They just are not. So, because they are not, I removed them. ...I read on and read and wrote the part of Dick trying to shout and warn Betty and Richard, but finds that no sounds come from mouth. The sound is being removed for security reasons, but it is also preventing Dick from trying to tell Richard and Betty to run. I like having had add the words to show Dick trying to warn, and with the removed dialog, I feel whate was written and what remains of the edit creates an ending and shows who Dick is and where Dick lives.
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The beginning is much better now than when it was a before the edit. The words were what is seen. I didn't change much for I didn't have strong feelings or many feelings to change anything. I only had a feeling about change when reading the thought of Dick in
r23528 | kalab | 2007-12-18 20:57:19 -0800 (Tue, 18 Dec 2007) | 1 line
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I removed government for not only the government killed Mustang in Dick's mind. For Dick thinks Congov and he killed Mustang. ...Reading the beginning of the chapter and what I remember of the last chapter during the read and the edit that reading the first of this makes me like the end of the last more. ...I found removing words made things better. I rewrote some dialog and thought to better define the thought of Dick. The thought then the action would have him and does have him thinking. ..I removed dialog and internal dialog knowing that I needed to improve the thought process to the point of dick deciding to enter the K Street Building. I think I have a though process that is of some logic and sense and of the character. I will have to read it again and probably again and again. ..I did add more Psycho dialog to have Psycho say to Dick that inside the building Psycho could show the turh about Mustang and his mom and dad. ...I read from the beginning to the turn of dick to enter the building.
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I hope to show with this chapter that you can't walk away from a psycho because it will always be after you. I read the thoughts. I didn't focus much on the action and movement for I want the thought to help show if not show all. I think it is near something that is complete or works, but it may not be. I thought about what was written and liked, but I don't know if the internal dialog flow is all Dick now. Need to focus upon it.
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I began to read and like what was read, but the mind wants to rest and can't keep up with the tension which is good. Really I just need a nap. I will take one. I did read the beginning few paragraphs. I like the description now.
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read and reread from the beginning ot the flick fo the cicada. I like the flow fo the words after. What has been written works. I can begin to change the placement of Psycho and get to the edit of the motivation for Dick entering K Street building.
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I removed the second thought because it was not needed nor did it make anything better than it was. It was something that was too much for the instance or rush of trying to land gracefully. I read to the direction Dick is given of location of Psycho as him going the other direction for Dick is going in an other direction away from Psycho.
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I began with the beginning. I added fuck for I want to show and tell of Dick realizing Richard and Betty change the tap Pycho wants to enter. I used the I feel because I don't want some stream of consciousness bullshit. It's felt when the time is said. Betty got a little more The soldier movements getting better. I need to create a sentence of a compound sentence for clarity. I also edited a few verb sentences. I few sentences were made in to two sentences to better define the show and not convolute the scene with too many verb types. The single very offers more clarity. The words are near something. I did change dialog, but only because Dick saying move was not what would say. ..I removed a useless words that were repeating and confusing. I don't know why I ever wrote the follow at the end of the sentence that had follow. ...I read to the 'I look at detonation tube. I read aloud from the beginning to Ezra. I found lots of things i may have missed.
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I began with what is now an injection of congov and soldiers into the streets of D.C.. I had to rewrite and write some words about the shifting of the gears to show the fact the transmission is shot for first gear. I should include starting out with second on the hill. ...Maybe. If I remember it the next go around then I will create the words. ...The words of the moving troops was what had me reading from the beginning of the tunnel drive to the drive and stop because I wanted to get it right. I knew I only sort of edited the scene last read. Now I wanted to change. I did. The words are better now. The show what I am beginning to feel and see. The words now can be read and not lose interest. The bad words just skipped maybe\? I got them this time. Now I like to read.
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I read before the stop of car. I read through the words and did have to change the description here and there. Not many issues. I moved dialog for better effect. I add dialog to ltell many thinks. All these things are coming together. There were a few mistakes with spellings of some words, but not all was a loss. ...The words read. They read how I want them to be seen or at least how I am seeing it now. The words and how they are written and the words that they tell have created (after reading and reading with the focus being the edit of the words written have found something to be felt or seen. The words can actually define now some thing to me. ...I read to the end and found only a few things new to change. A few out of many that were every near good.
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I read the need to edit a thought, and I wanted to begin at a location before the thought of the stage coach. I don' think Dick needs to think of the stage. Of course he is Drunk, or no so much Drunk, but rather feeling buzzed with the high proof alcohol. I won't mention or tell, but rather show, because it could be Dick is just nervous or it could be because Dick is guiding the thought. I know what is left. ...I had to write Richard getting intense. I think I did. ... I re moved some internal dialog that was not needed. More than enough showing...And what became of it was something more complete and ready to written and read. I wrote a feel and think. The feel better blended with the words removed and the words rewritten. Most internal dialog. ...I read through the race and the scan and ended with the scan. More thought...Internal dialog was removed.I also moved sentence to better pace the action and the thought and to show the focus and attention. Some of it just seemed to spread and separate. I liked the thought and the constant. It has better flow.
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I read word of Ash standing and almost falling. The words begin and continue. They read through. I had to move Ash to show more than tell. I did remove some internal dialog of Ash for Dick wouldn't think of involving another than could be killed. I read and read. There were a few verb edits. The pace in car felt as it should. It flowed. ...The Apple Pie scene words and flows in and how. It does what is needed to be done. It goes and goes. It is where it needs to be here and done. ...I removed thought for the thought that was removed was getting too much. I do want the thought after the Apple Pie to remain for it does cause a paranoid reaction to cause the thoughts in mind to enhance and expose themselves. I read to the taxi passing by the Army.
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I edited the preacher talk to make in more of a song. I also had all the words in caps for all the words are loud for everyone to hear about all the other noise. I read this and I read past. And I read it again.
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When I opened the file, I skipped a head for some reason and read. It took three sentences then I found a grammar error. I corrected it. Then I found the location last read and read before it fast to it. Then read with the world indentured alien in mind. Algae was used instead of sugar for there is more water surface and no sugar. ...I wrote to words of the cleanness of the taxi and a few more to define a clean people and area to show at least that things are clean and effort is put in to making things look good even if they don't function. I also wanted to show Richard after speaking Jo to show Richard is being the truth sayer for Jo and to make Dick assured that he can believe Jo. This to sightly show that Richard is demeaning Jo. I also wanted to show a beginning of slight drunk talk with the desire to just pass the thought and time with idle chatter. I want to show how Dick gets information through talking and observing like any Detectives should. ...I changed car to taxi for I want it to be seen as a taxi. ...I removed words describe how George sits. i did like the description, but it just wasn't needed. ...I had to remove excessive description of some one shouting. I also wrote to add another shouter for I wanted more than one. I think the increase amount is needed. ...while the reds are being called out I changed the order of Jo asking if they had a good night for the silence and Ricahard's mumblings provoke Jo to talk to break silence. I ended after the sentence displacement and better order of events.
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An edit for less is more for these words. I read to the building of the scene and the charater for the scenc is created and is becoming. The words do flow from one to the next so the next chapter, now this chapter, will be what is read next read.
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...I read from the walk up the second store to the third floor to the table and through the talk and to the receieving of the food. I removed more thought of Dick because the thoughts that Dick would not only want to repress but wouldn't have for the thought is complete. The actions of Dick and everyone else are near complete. The main focus of the edit was the flow and the grammar and typos. ther were only a few verb edits that were fixed. There were a few grammar edits that were needed. A couple of sentences had bad flow so words were removed or rearranged. The thought and talk removed about this that has improved. I am happy that what was read is near a complete state. A complete state that is near complete, but still needs some reading. I will begin after the reception of the food next edit. Or I will likely begin at the point I ended.
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I read from the beginning. I am glad I did for there were minor things that needed to be edited and words that needed to be removed. Less thought and dialog with Psycho.. The action and some of the sentences needed better order for comprehension flow, story and style. The story just was getting lost in abstract prose. Now the abstraction won't lose a read of the words prior. There were a few verb issues but that was corrected. There was lots of rereading and thinking and inner meaning thought. The removing of more description from Psycho because Dick only needs to look for Mustang. ...I read from the beginning to the stepping to the lobe scan. The words read and reread to not repeat definition. I like much better now and will have a better feeling of reading the action inside. ...I thought of the beginning of next chapter and some things to read for when exiting.
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...I read from where I left off after last read, which was during the ordering. I didn't get beyond the ordering for I was lost most in thought about what I would and would not need to change about the book now that Psycho wants Dick to enter the building before midnight. Yes, this is the choice I havce made yesterday while walking to work and thinking of The Detective Store. Not only is the meaning have more meaning, but it will require less editing and better fits the story. ...I read and liked what read. Ther ewere a few things there where corrected. but most of the thought during this write was about timing of midnight before or after, and I have decided it was after.
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The obvious call to show all where he is. Not caring or maybe want to be shown as not caring. ...I just read the other chapter. I have the flow still with this chapter. The scene character continues to develop.
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Read and write to the crossing of the leaving if circle. The walk to the other side. The walk to the crowd. The crowd more detailed now and better. Or at least I feel it is better, but it has been worse. The description feels to becoming something. I like what I read while stepping through the people. ...I did try to add more people or show more people for I want show more people for there are a lot of people. ...I did have verb issues. Once I fixed the verb issues, the sentence improved. A small change like that and things get better. ...I removed some thought and talk in response to thought for the thought was not needed and should not be thought and is not thought by Dick, so why have it on story record\? ...I read to after the flash and near the Mustangs. I feel better for the edits.
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I read the words from the hot dog to the white hotel. I am across the circle. A few words that needed to be changed. Those pesky verbs. The overall story is something that is there. The flow and movement now found now that all thoght of action or targets is out of mind and not thought or spoke unless thought or spoke by Psycho. The story is becoming. It is near complete of something. I will begin the next read after the circle. The words read good. Near something of done.
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The words were read. The words were read and read. I like the words more now that the converstaion about the primaries are gone from chapter. They are not needed. The are where they needed to be. They just didn't fit, so they were removed. There were more words found that were related to the subject, so they were removed during this edit. ...I read from the beginning to the beginning of walk across the lanes to the circle. ...Only a few sentenc movings and verb changes. I good read. The words read good now that the coverstation that was is gone.
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These are the rest of the edits I didn't seem to save before the last publish to the depot.
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A few change to improve the words and complete the thought I want injected into the words. I also need to find the flow of the story, but I didn't read much, so the words are likely to need to be edited once again. The words and thought do and are needed, I think. They will be something I will need to think of.
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I have been looking at the sentences witten for a half hour. They need to be more complete. They need to be moved probably. They raise a good question. I was looking nad thining hoping for an answer. This is something that I will have to think of more. I can't believe I couldn't think of what Psycho says.
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I read to the beginning of the circle walk. I took me a long time to remove words that I had written and liked. Most of the edit was the thinking of why it was good, but not right and needed to be thought. I did go off on thought tangent a couple of time but only for a few minutes. I did think of the publication when I began to read and think of all the communication he day. ...The words removed made less words better. They sound and flowed pretty, but not what was needed. ...There were verb issuses. More were corrected. am sure therea re move. The dialog and description to becmoing. I took away from here and their to make better. It is all near complete.
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I read from beginning to end. I removed words to make the flow better and the story better. There were a few more words for dialog to have the flow go. I was readding and I was actually seeing and feeling the words. No longer are these words just letters and space. The have come beyond text in my mind. I think of a good reason. I do feel that these words are near complete. There are, there werre, a few mistakes I found that once fixed shown and told a story that formed thought in mind. These words are very new something. They are very near.
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I have read the chaper. I did begin from the run from the Chinese Embacy. I looked at the map fo the area to edit the run after Regan Hotel. The words are becoming they are near. With the removal of the words removed with this edit the words are more. They smellling becoming and the knowning. The meaning of the words becoming. They are. The.
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I didn't want to remove the sentence <|...Like pork prodded to run the ramp to be actioned for sale. Meat primed for porking with congressmen's barrels. Psycho is everywhere.> But this sentence is too much thought about describing something for the focus and slowed process of Dick's mind. It's too much, and it is just not right for the chapter. It has been removed and now everything else is better for it. ...There were more sentences than thought that needed to be ordered better or improved by changing the use of the verb. The words are becoming. The internal dialog is now better. I did removes some to remove thought too direct and obvious. Dick knows not to think about a subject too much if is a subject of government interest. Feelings and emotions few to avoid showing passion and reason and more data to collect and record. ...I read from the walk down stairs to the walk to D.C. Cafe. I could have read to the end, but I wanted to reread some of the chapter to find more possible changes, and I did want to need to read the next chapter, so I stopped very near the end, a few sentences after the last edit of the page.
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I read the beginning. I read from the standing to the leaving and the first feeling of the mass as one with the mass. I think it is near. I read the exit from the hall and the mass a lot. I made changes. These changes removed words because there were too many. Thoughts were edited for a more natural flow. There wasn't much editing thought to be needed for the internal dialog because it is near complete. These words are better than when last edited. The edits are becoming more difficult to make because sometime I just don't want to delete what is described or read, but I just see things correct and that once word or sentence is not. ...There was the obvious verb issues. The second sentence. Now I a few more needing to find the verb have found the verb.
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A read of the beginning. I slow read of the beginning read and edit that is now creates a beginning the should begin. The words now have more meaning. ...I didn't read too far in to the chapter. I thought most about the beginning sentence.
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A read and a think of this chapter and all chapters. The words do flow. Some beginning words changed because they needed to be changed. The words do flow. And they will flow.
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A couple edits. One to change a work to better use the local lingo and give a more acurate definition of the height. The words move for edit was because the thought, the internal dialog, should flow after the object. ...I read the beginning to edit and read the flow from one chapter to next. The chapter flow feels as it should.
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Reading for free thinking with a focused mind not wanting to focus. Does things to keep the mind afloat. I did read the last chapter near after the beginning ofht read and edit. I wanted to read the beginning again and make sure it read in mind how it reads on page and it does. The ending now feelings complete with the book. The words of this chapter had issues with verbs. Rather, it was not the words it was the sentences for sentences have verbs. The words do read. The thought and internal dialog needed cleaning. REmoving words to edit is not always easy some times, but knowing the words are saves somewhere makes it easier to remove them.
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I began this read with the intention of just reading the chapter then begin to read chapter 0001. I read the three sentences. I like all three. I thought of the first because the first must flow with the previous sentence, the last sentences and flow of chapter 1110. I read the first and didn't feel like it was a natural flow. The sentence also felt slow. More a point than a subtle point. I thought of the other sentences and thought to write It's the United States of America because it flows with the prior sentences and is more interesting a thought and speech without the prior sentences. Thinking of the other words made these words better.
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I read from about the middle to end. As Dick looked into the tap the first time. The words read. there was a removal of words and a write to change how Psycho conntects to the nano machines. I want the way it is written now to show the action of the system to get Pscyho. I read and thought about the completion, the why, the thoughts of Dick. i though and think that the end is near complete, but I need to read again and agian before I find the end. The words are here. The words are written, but they still need more reading for me to find and undertand. The words are.
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I read from the beginning to the center and the look at the tap and I am finding what I read to be what i want it to read. The flow and the words and the space to define the pain and process are all there. There were a few things that need to be chanaged, but overall I like the show of a mind slowed because of pain. A person not wanting to die, but knowing it may be. The words and the actions are beginning to complete the story.
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I read the beginning to check the flow from chapter to chapter, and the flow is good. I did make a couple of syntax fixes, but nothing too difficult. I didn't read much beyond the beginning of the chapter.
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The change of second paragraph was for the verb. It is better now. Everything else was minor clean up. I like the way it is written. I wanted to read more, but I am tired. I read to the entering of Dick.
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The internal dialog needs some major help. I used most of the time writing and editing the internal dialog of dick. It just didn't read and feel like the thoughts of someone confused, worried and wondering. I also added Dick's growing thought about what is inside the building that has maybe cost him so much. He is a detective after all and now that the truth may be revealed inside, he is slowly beginning to think: <|What is inside\?>. The internal dialog with the edits I feel is better. I do feel that i will need to begin at the beginning of the chapter next read because there were more than just the internal dialog edits. The internal dialog edits were actually the only write and edits needed. The scene and the actions of Psycho and Dick do need some editing, but are near what is needed for completion. I only edited as far as Dick beginning to return to the white light. The walk to discover the information to ease the curiosity of human nature.
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I read from beginning to end, and I like the chapter. There were a few sentences and paragraphs that needed a bit of a rewrite. They were edited. There were more than a few senteces needing verbs. I had found that the internal dialog mark and the seeing mark to Dick needed to be corrected in a couple locations. Most actually, but it is becoming and I think i was able to get all the grammar issues with this mark corrected. The flow of thought was good, but there some words and thoughts of Dick that just were not needed or part of the character, so they were removed with ease. ...The read was complete. I thad thought about inner meaning of the sentences and did enjoy the thought and found the meaning to be there if one wanted or not if one just wanted to enjoy the story. ...I did correct the jester scene and the shocking and the blessing of a sneeze ot show disconcern for violence. ...The overall chapter and the specifics I like. Soon this chapter will becomeplete after a couple of edits.
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I read from beginning to end. It did take a few minutes to warm up to the idea of reading and editing, but once the mind became aware I was able to edit. I found the chapter to flow smoothly. I like the description. I had a few edits for verbs in sentences. A few sentences were removes because they were of a dialog sequence that just didn't need to be written or read. The words from the beginning ot end did flow. The action I think is enough to define to the read what needs to be defined to the reader. Dick's record is becoming and something that I think is near completion. I will read these words again and again, but for now I will read on to the next chapter knowing what is read is what is needed.
r22277 | kalab | 2007-10-13 23:10:36 -0700 (Sat, 13 Oct 2007) | 1 line
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The write of change. The reading of knowing. The edits when needed. ... I read from the last scan to the end of the chapter. I think there is the thought that is needed to begin to complete the chapter. I can see the area and I am beginning to feel it I think. I could be wrong for the words are of my own mind. I could be reading them too much and seeing what I want. The story and the dialog and the interaction I do like. I will now read the next chapter and begin to move on with the words.
r22247 | kalab | 2007-10-12 23:01:01 -0700 (Fri, 12 Oct 2007) | 1 line
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I read what I read last edit. I read it again to be sure it is near complete, and though I did need to make a few changes I am happy to write that I will begin the edit tomorrow at the stage coach race. The words are there. I did remove some internal dialog and change some internal dialog, but that was to make the thought more fluid.
r22216 | kalab | 2007-10-10 18:35:16 -0700 (Wed, 10 Oct 2007) | 1 line
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...The words and the talk have some flow from the read of the second shout of the Global to the smell to after the smell. I had to read to find what I wanted to show and once I seen I found that i need to write and edit and read. I have written and read and read the words and now think they are better. Some internal dialog was removed for it wasn't needt. Actions have been move because the timing was off. Some dialog added to better show time and character. The words of thiss are complete and done for now. I have lost the focus for the story for I am lost in only these words having had focused upon them as much as I have for this edit.
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I read from curb to The Detective Store. The words do flow. I read slow some of the scenes and made minor corections. Some more dialog was written to make complete the talk. The words of description edited and the edit made better. More fluid and close to complete. The words are feeling near complete. The dialog I do like. There is the feeling of a flow. There is something. Now it is nearing go. The next edit will begin at The detectives Store. ...I did near the end maybe read too much and get lost in the words because I was having fun reading. I did reread and slow to an edit and find the needs of correction. It is becoming more and more. ...The chapter longer than I thought it was. I may not complete with this by this time tomorrow.
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I read the first three sentences of the 1000 and thought of the sweat that needed to be shown for 0110. I read and decided for the sitting and after. While reading the sitting, I did write sweat and read for it. Near something. I also then focused on making sure the names of people at table are not written of with name before they should be written of by name. All this while writing of sweat so the change of cool to hot is more maybe felt or remembered. These change are good change to go and read back.
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I read from the beginning to the getting in of taxi. I read and I read and I found that I wanted to make the movers behind the taxi to increase their should and there for the tesion. The record remembers the change of them getting louder. They get louder and Dick goes into action before people get tense, things flash or congov take notice. Or Psychos has to act. Or people start becoming mean and yelling. ...So the words needed to be written and thought and read more than a few time to see what there is to see then rewrite to see what it should. I think I worked the words to see what needs to be. ...I did during the edit have a few verb changings that were needed. There were some grammar issues with seeing from mind to Psycho. ...The words are coming. Most are there. This has been a start I have worked with. Most seems there. Read and editing and editing and reading.
r22152 | kalab | 2007-10-07 14:29:07 -0700 (Sun, 07 Oct 2007) | 1 line
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Only a slight change to some words. More eating. Dick gets his food now by eating fast as it should be shown. What is seen now is good enough thought I may have more eating fast of Dick. No one else but Mustang eats. The converstation I like. The flow down the stairs is there. The walk the talk. I see it somehow. The words and the sentence tell the tale I want them to. Or at least they are beginning to.
r22130 | kalab | 2007-10-06 21:49:37 -0700 (Sat, 06 Oct 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning to the last introduction. I removed the process of Dick getting information from Psycho. The voices and images are not needed as long as there are names and Mustang, who is good at observing without being noticed. The words of what is and what will be. The words from the road to the sidewalk to the inside now better for it reminds the record of state and on would when thinkning, as I do. The walk and find of the way in more natural and fluid showing Dick moving and looking and waiting and not thinking about everything. Just going with the flow to think and focus on what is. ...These words are. The are becoming. After I removed the show and telling to dick, with the name and knowing Mustang Dick finds the names shown in the record. I like the proces and the read much better. More, much more than existed. The words are becoming. The edit can begin with the table.
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After the circle to the end. I think I finished enough to feel if I read again I will be able to begin near the propaganda bomb. The words where a read. I did find a few sentence rewritten for the record. The story has the flow. The words feel as they should. Some corrections with action to show movement, but the words added added more than a word's worth of words. ...The does flow. I think it is told as the record. The record shown that Psycho was the one who brought him back to the focus of going to the building after his thought was lost. ...So the time passes and it is a process to cause dick to create a Psycho to ask or a Psycho for real. ..Don't know. Thought of it. Don't know. Depends on who one is. For there are many other stories beyond these two I see. I try to see a victory for peace.
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Getting the words read that need to be read to clean the words free of noise that is not needed. It took a while to focus fo the read. ...Thoughts slowing to find the specifics. of the story and not a specific point. Sentence read and read.
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More words. More reading. More thought. I continue to remove the useless internal dialog. I have made internal with external record. Don't want to have Dick thinking for he has focused though on what is aroound with other senses to focus to think of who or what Psycho is. The words read better with the edtis. The words are near there.
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I read and read from the box to othe end. I read before the box. I thought of the form and the flow of the talk, and I found it to be what is needed for it to be. ...The Words Are Nearing Completion. There were a few sentences with verbs needed. And a couple of change to follow word flow. The word flow there. The end and the speed up of the record becaue dick is more calm after talking with Mustang.
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...Thinking, thinking, thinking. I read and made minor edits. I began lost in thought if it should be hot dogs. I feel it should. There is something about Sam's Hot Dogs that feel right. The smell. The taste. All these things make for a story that needs to be told some day in some short piece of words. ..All the cars may have onions for the hot dogs. ...The thought...But what about the left...The rats. The hot dog of rats. Thoughts.
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I read to the sounds of the door. I wrote to the sounds of the door openning. I like what was read. I found that verbs are missing. I added some. I am sure that more will need to be added as I read on through the chapter.
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More reading and editing. I like what I read of crossing the bridge and the run to intersections. There were a few sentences that need to be written out, so they were. The verbs of Dicks' thoughts sometimes being removed. The object not needed for complete thought. ...The object become one. I like the focus of Dick to not go inside head and thought. The focus works all ways. ...The story becoming. I thought of making vehical gardens garden vehicles. A change back. ...The words read on.
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I edited from middle of crowd to open running. I edited some of the enternal dialog to get rid of a keywords and slightly alter to improve everything. The words I read are becoming. I still found more verbs needed for some of the sentences. I am getting rid of the use of I or me in long thought. The worfds are becoming.
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I began with the beginning and ended with the walk down the stairs. I read and reread and thought and edited by removing worfds. I made more basic and fast the internal diaog. I focused on time and timing of words thought that are as, so they should be at time like broke language.Object verb. ...The though should maybe, and I think does, chage as he enters crowd. Thoughts... I liked what I read.
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The beginning and after the beginning to near the last edit which was around the read of the discovery of self after siren. ...The words didn't need much change. I only added to extend and make more natural and slow the rediscovery of client Psycho. The words read.
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Got into the words too much and just wanted to read. I read from the beginning to about the 2/3'ds point. Lot of reading. Lots of writing. More words and thought. ...I like the dialog. The thought is becoming. I had to decrease some internal dialog for Dick's mind was talking and acting and thinking was fast to keep the pace. ...the dialog I like. I think I have the flow for the one big change and the onte that took the movement, when I edited the reason how Dick was selected, to better define how it is took some time and focus. The words I like. I think the words are near something. Getting better. ...I did need to include some verbs with sentences that needed verbs.
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I read from beginning to end. There were a few sentences that needed berbs, but not many. I focused on the dialog both external and internal and found it needins some correction. The correction will be better. The talk of Psycho has the pace it needs for it hasn't learn much from Dick. I like the chapter. Most the bad places seem gone. Now i will read on to the next chapter.
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Some change for clarity. ...The words read were not much. I did read the prior chapter to make sure everything is sync'd. The words read. The words of the chapter seem to be in better shape than the prior, but I could be wrong and find it bad when I read it next edit.
r21784 | kalab | 2007-09-22 23:26:18 -0700 (Sat, 22 Sep 2007) | 1 line
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...I removed the internal dialog telling of some Democart and Republican cases. I removed it because it seems unnatural and really isn't needed, and it may or may not be something that has happened, but it just has no really place. I believe what I have left will make the thouht more for it will hint at something and not tell. The hint feels more like show. it too me time to decided to remove these words for these words were something I worked with for a while and were words that I felt were needed for a long time. So I thought and thought then just removed and reread and liked the chapter better withou8t. ...Other edits include having the blow job offered and not takin for Dick is in a committed relation ship. The rest were sentence improvements to make the sentence of the record as the should be. I will probably begin where I began this time which was a few sentences before the first smell of pizza. More editing of the chapter is needed.
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I read from the point of the chapter after the nano machine fix Dick to the end when Dick is broken down. There were more than a few sentences that needed to be rewritten for this chapter because they did fit the standard form for the record. The words were fragments and not complete, so I needed to make them complete and now they are complete. I think. I coulc have missed a few, but not many. I also focused on the removing of articles from thought because thought is now quick and much considering the pain the pace. Dick's actions further refined. Word were removed to make less more. Some clutter with verbose shit, but that shit was removed. I have what the record needs. i read and I edited and reread and I edited and I reread and I think it is nearing something that other will read soon.
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I remove and move the last sentence from this chapter to the beginning of the next for the it belongs in a paragraph and that paragraph is of the next chapter for Dick thinks a keywords of the record scan beginning a new record.
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I read from beginning to end. The word from beginning to end to read. A did have to remove some of the words because they just were not needed. Most these words were the description of the area. ...I focused upon the internal dialog. I wanted to make it read more natural, but also the dialog needed to be as it would be for the scene. Fast when Dicks tense and collected and complete when he has time to think. I think I have everything written that needs to be writte for the chapter. It reads and i want it. I will needed to read and study again cyanide, but that can be done next edit when I spellcheck.
r21665 | kalab | 2007-09-17 22:44:36 -0700 (Mon, 17 Sep 2007) | 1 line
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The words are. I read from beginning to edit. I had to make some grammar edits to the see log. I had to make some change to a few sentences to clarify description. I removed two sentences that contained the old idea of having the key a cross. The eidts of pace and timing during the last edit were what were and are needed. The words do flow. the action and is what is needed now. The pace and timing feels as if it is on track to be what it needs to be. The chapter is something I can leave in the past and I read on to the next. The ending read as it probably should. I will read the next chapter and make changed if needed. I did like what was ready.
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I read the first few sentences. The last edit was were I stopped. I like the beginning, but did need to change revolving to spinning because spinning is all Washington D.C. does to the information. The words are what they need to be. I like what was written during next write. I read the end of the last chapter and the beginnnig of this chapter a couple of time and feel the connection is there and that I won't need to make the changes that I made during the edit of the previous chapter when I removed a sentenc. It is all coming together. It is all here. Now on with this chapter and the next and the next.
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The previous log was not for this file put for the previous file but while writing out the log on command line I typed 1011 and not 1010, so disregard log entry 21607. The change I did make to the words for the changes committed for 21607 was a change to remove the letter e from the word apartement to have the word correctly spelled apartment. I the paused to read the beginning again and read the first and remember that the previous chapter ended with an action of Dick. And then I thought it should not, so I changed it and wanted to commit and did then I moved one to editing 1011. ...I editing 1011 beginning with the beginning and read and edit to the nearing of the K Street building. There were more than a few sentences needing to be reordered for the record to read. Some sentences need verbs. Some paragraphs needed sentences removed because the words were just not need or really bad and therefore not needed. I read more of the story and focus a lot on the reasoning of Dick and what make and convinces him to pivot and go into the K Street building. He goes because it is the only choice he is given for life. ...Or is it\? There is enough information before and after for the reader to define to self. I read and believe I can begin where I left off for the remaining edits will be few and the thought and edit of the push to get Dick inside logic and within character.
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I removed the last line because I now realize it conflicts with the beginning line of the story by not conforming how the record is formed. The rules are broke by it. And I don't think it is needed, so there is more reason to remove the line.
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Read from middle to end. The words were what are needed. I only really needed to remove some words to make less more and remove confusion. There was the need to add verbs. ...I now realize as I edit and read these words again I will need to edit Psycho's dialog to add verbs for he just talks like a thought of killing. The words did flow as I want them to. There were a few words added, but not too many. ...the thought and the time did and does flow. It will flow. It flows now. I like what was read. I think what was read is very near complete.
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I read the first and didn't read much further. I made changes to sentences that needed changes becaues of the type and lack of verbs or them needing to be internal dialog. I edited the first sentence because though it is long and needs to be obvious it is too long and should also possibly be natural for it should be because Dick may or may not know. I like the beginning now and read only to the words of him landing, but I didn't focus on the too much. The transition from the last chapter to this chapter is what i focused upon and it is what is edited and now good.
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More words read. This time to the entrance into Always. I had to make some corrections to the flow of the words to better define. I removed words and only added words to add a verb and an object to make sure the record is recorded as it should. I wrote on. And I wrote on and on and on. I read things over and over. When I did add words I made sure it added to the detail of the story or an action that wasn't defined. Mostly I removed reords from sentences because the words on the sentence only add confusion not definition. The words I did read I like. The words that remain I now feel should remain. I feel comfortable enough to beginning inside Always next read.
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I read the beginning. I like the way it began. I made a minor verb change. The words have some flow. Didn't read too far.
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Before my mind loses focus, I will stop the edit. The edit had some write for I wrote words that were mostly dialog to complete a though or an action or create more character for character. I want to show the tension between the primary and secondary targest. I wanted to sho how Betty and Richard get along more than Eleanor and Betty. I wanted to show the chase and the chase was already shown. I edit dialog by adding the pionter to the people who were talking and separating some of the dialog both for clarity and pace. The words I like. What was added was more more not less. The more is everywhere for I really did like what was read during the story. I want to read more, but the mind is becoming tired and I don't want to do some sloppy edit job. ...I began the edit near the beginning of the race of the red and blue stage coaches and ended it as they neared Du Pont Circle.
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The words added to better define the confusion of the action after teh sound scan. The words do flow. Not much edited.
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More reading. I read where I last left. I even made an edit by changing a b to a p. There were are sentence edits to better from frame the words and the actions. The edits were need to relieve confusion. The words I did like and I read to site of Th eDetective Store being scanned. The words i like and I found a good flow and time until I found a sentence that needed to be change. Good thing that even after stopping for edits I was able to continue on with out much issue or need to focus. I like what was read.
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I read from the curb to the drive. To the last edit committed with this filed change. The words are there. I did find a few sentences with space issues. I also needed to add some verbes to description sentences. And I found that some sentences were out of sync. I only needed to move them around to make the flow and feel better. After making a change, I read the sentences before again and again. This caused a slow progression forward with the words. I think the chapter to the ending point is complete. I will begin again where I ended. These words are nearing. Nothing new added. The edits done.
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I read from the beginning againg to the curb of while getting ready to get in to the cab. ...The words needed more close and slow reading to find those sentences that needed a verb or two where a verb or two was not. I also moved some sentences here and there to be sure that the order more natural. ...While reading, I thought the need to better show and tell of Dick's focus on conversation with Psycho by adding a few more instances where what he undestands and what is record is not what is said because the focus is somewhere else. This needs to be done only a few more times for Dick's mind is a mind trained to think quickly and of many things at once. ...So I read and read and had to only write a few words to clarify detail and show. The words I like and I feel I CAN begin reading at the curb next edit.
r21186 | kalab | 2007-08-25 22:08:28 -0700 (Sat, 25 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read the remainder of the chapter and only found minor error that needed to be corrected. I think the flow of thought and action is what is needed. There is natural feel about the conversation that I like and will maintain I hope through the remaining chapter. I do like this chapter and don't feel right now there is much more than needs to be changed. After all the fixing and changing and editing I do believe these words to be complete or very near complete that I will be able to copy them to editing and begin the final edit for publication.
r21140 | kalab | 2007-08-23 22:07:27 -0700 (Thu, 23 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning of the conversation to the drinking of the scotch. The words flow I did like. The meaning I liked. Some of the thought I thought needed to be changed so it was changed. The actions of this and that good enough for the words. the thought and dialog I thought flowed and felt natural. Good enough. Ready. Nearing ready. I will read on at the Scotch.
r21098 | kalab | 2007-08-21 05:18:57 -0700 (Tue, 21 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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The read was of the beginning and crossing the street and making the crossing be shown why it takes long to cross and show the many people and show the slow traffic and show the area. The words read and read and read. ...The first read was read for for everything. I think I found most common mistakes. The words and standards and paces followed. I even swapped the terms that have become the description. ...The words found to be what is needed. I can move on after the crossing for the crossing is near something of complete.
r21078 | kalab | 2007-08-20 05:37:56 -0700 (Mon, 20 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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The chapter was read from the hovercopter to the end. I like the read. I did wonder and question the scan. I had edited a sentence until I realized it was a though of the scan. ...I believe I read slow enough to read all the verbs missing and write thm to edit the sentence. A sentence edit and not a work edit. There is a difference. ...Word edits was a typo by adding a letter. ...What was read was like. Some dialog, like the end, edited for better voice of character and to show reaction time. ....I read into the submeaning and found it interesting. The fast read was good too so the sub meaning was there for the slow read. ...Some of the meaning though good for the overall story was serendipitous. ...The thought there. Writing on...
r21037 | kalab | 2007-08-18 00:56:26 -0700 (Sat, 18 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. I fround the flow but had to read and reread to make sure what was written was what was needed. For instance, when I read of the second shut of something related to the drone recording I thought mentioned only once. I had to check the twice then found the flow again. Once I assured self of edits I was able to read to the walk to the center of circle. ...I also thought long of the use of danger and immidiate danger thought. ...The words are now better written. and will remain I think in the book for after the circle Dick reasons the record is too much a record in a logic flow to it. ...The thought of the scene and confusion in the description had things removed. ...The words extra dialog for the married thing to show Dick's purpose of saying the reason he knows Betty and Richard are having sex. ...Then it will be shown why. ...More words. ...Less words. ...Pullers now movers. The words read will ot need to be read again this read.
r21019 | kalab | 2007-08-17 00:38:09 -0700 (Fri, 17 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to end. The write were most edits from verbs. There were a few sentences and words added to the other words for more showing and better definition of action. I removed or completed actions depending on their meaning an if less was more. ...I had to edit and complete the end better for I didn't need or want all the kissing for it is only needed for what was written. The drink and edit of genmilk because all the genetic created items will just be gen appended for define the genetice. Mustang will not call it genmilk. Dick does. ...The words I like. I add says and pronouns. The words written were few and made more. ...I had the verbs needed, but I still found a few that needed to be written. ...I am beginning to like the use of is and are at the end of the sentence.
r21009 | kalab | 2007-08-16 17:51:50 -0700 (Thu, 16 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read the remainder. I did feel there were too many verb edits, but t not enough to think this is near complete. I did read some words fast, so all the senteces that either need verbs or need to be thought may not be changed, ...I did focus to change the description and the lead to the definition of Chinese Embassy. I figure only internal and external dialog is what triggers the record. I do want to show the focus that Dick inspects when he passes for it never changes. The detail. I think it is near something near good. Or at least ready to be read and complete. I will read on to the next chapter, but may read the last again before the next chapter as I did hurry through it.
r20978 | kalab | 2007-08-14 06:08:51 -0700 (Tue, 14 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to end. A few verb edits. I did focus on changing some of to to show result of process. I changed these to ands. The words of this chapter in better form than the words of the prior chapter. There were some things that needed to be done for not every thing was and is perfect (until published). The Psycho says, some thing played with and made into a standard non standard and once lost and changed in record because of a consious question of origin of the voice. That was something addition I focusied on during the edit like last chapter. How the record of what is recorded and how it is acuralte in internal and external dialog, and with the description, but that chnages with question and perception and that is bettter shown. The words I like.
r20962 | kalab | 2007-08-13 06:20:16 -0700 (Mon, 13 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I was a bit disappointed with the state of this chapter. Everything is in the words but the form less refined in some place than I hoped. Most of the edits were edits and writes because the verb just wasn't there. I suppose it takes time to find a the pattern for the record. ...The voice of the child was lowered for the child is two and just asks a question having not had seen its parents' death. And edit and a write. ...I write to identify every instant when Psycho speaks. ...I read from beginning to end. For a second chapter I believe there are just about enough words. ...The words needed more edits then I thought possible. It could have been the need to write so much last edit. or think of it. For now. I like. I will read on for I think I have most of the edits. Near the edit of the edit I kinda slacked off because I just wanted to read.
r20858 | kalab | 2007-08-06 16:54:52 -0700 (Mon, 06 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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The slow read from beginning t end read words and actions that were not needed. I remove when in doubt for during the pain and the process of focus less is much more. ...The words are coming out. I have read and seen the book more now. Where there was space added it was added because I don't want to confuse the flow of the story with objects and subjects creating chaotic prose. ...I do like the words. They are near. The words removed were not needed. ...I will need to read and read and read again for grammar errors, but I think the flow is found in the words. ...Of course I write this and know I stared ling and hard at the end thinking of the internal dilog at the end about dieing will remain and if I will and The smell of shit and piss drips before face (for the smeill of the quagmire. ...Maybe that should in the next chapter. Of course in any chapter near the end would have focus upon it and there for seem comical or something beyond...I don't know what beyond.
r20845 | kalab | 2007-08-05 22:34:38 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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Edit to change fuck cap to sex cap because sex cap is better is more general of what it does. Fuck cap also makes other use of fuck read to be jaded. ...I also checked the lower case of the descriptoin of the items of the pack.
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I read from beginning to end. I read the beginning then the end and while reading the end I realized that there was no reason for Dick to carry the pack all the way up the stairs, so I set to editing that after readin through and removing what I think to be all the words about a sliver of something. ...Those words are oremoved. Other words were removed because they were words that supported the story when action was in a different sequence. ...I had a feeling and a need to rewrite and edit and think of how to write the walk up the stairs. The walk how it was written had some good ideas, but over all was sloppy because the stair are in sections of five. The action is now, I feel better with the flow. The colors are and are not that bad. I like the pack staying on the lower floor. This will still allow for the flash light to break his hand.
r20834 | kalab | 2007-08-05 08:41:13 -0700 (Sun, 05 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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The read to begin the chapter may need some editing. ...I read to the thought of clearing the cube Dick is in. The idea to have dick use the seeing thought to something mark is used because it should. It was an edit that was there and read though and to find. I did kind of fast read. after staring at the first of the chapter and finding and removeding the right words to edit. The words I do like more. There may be some sort of thought of door opening in or out, but maybe not because Dick knows. There is a thought start and begin again. I have the last chapter in mind when reading and think i could edit the beginning to remove or add content to make more without hindering the end of the prior chapter.
r20828 | kalab | 2007-08-04 18:15:52 -0700 (Sat, 04 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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The ball rolling removed. There was no need for some of the thought for the thought was not needed. I read the first then had to read the end of last chapter. The end of last chapter is has all the motion of Psycho so I removed that. The attention is now on upon the door and getting in and then the elevator. ...Once in the elevator there needed to be some description edited by removing for it wasn't needed. Some needed to be changed to be made better. I thought of the whole chapter for a couple of couple of minute spans and thought more of the motion and what Dick does. I remember needed to write and read this chapter a lot the last time I focused upon it. I read to be something that is a bit over written, but not too much. I read the decent and the thought of light.
r20816 | kalab | 2007-08-04 09:04:20 -0700 (Sat, 04 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I don't know what to do about the frist. With the from now written, I feel I reads as I want it to read. ...The words are find after or near complete. ...I did add more move aways to show the frequency of the warning, alarm. The words fun to read.
r20808 | kalab | 2007-08-03 05:50:30 -0700 (Fri, 03 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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After reading the beginning and the chapter and read of the thought where Dick is telling Psyhco of the reality of the test no matter the reality. Some of the worfds removed for they were not needed and removing them made the story more. The words I did like and now I am not too worried about the edit of the chapter. I think it will take only a couple of day to edit. The words and flow and idea seems to exist. The only change will be, I think the next chapter.
r20803 | kalab | 2007-08-02 21:03:25 -0700 (Thu, 02 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I began reading from the army shouting number and ready. I found errors with typos and misspellings. I then read of the wrapping of limbs and began to edit. I thought of the talk of Psycho and Dick and Psycho will begin to reference Dick as you all the time for he is now in Psycho and there is that idea has allowed Psycho to begin to understand You. I will come with the other G43 killing machines arrive. ...I think. ...I focused time on the description of what Dick sees of the Army line. I have thought of this a bit. I just wrote it out. Then once wrote I read on. I may have too much at once. ...I read to the veiw of the killing machine and read of it and thought of it and like what was written. The names of Psycho and Dick will be removed from the records in places, but not all places. The conversation becoming one as far as the record reads it, but it is or is not. There could be any number of reasons. ...I should, I have thought label them all, of course there are bugs in every program.
r20780 | kalab | 2007-08-01 22:13:14 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I began by reading and editing the description of the tanks clearing 18th, but then thought that it was a shitty prose piece and that Dick was not standing yet so he would not be able to see the tanks clear the road. This may change, but for now the detail may remain out or someplace else like in the sky. ...I read of the standing and the need and wrote of Dick standing then though of the fact the tanks should be idling and spewing exhaust, so I read at the first and found a good location for Dick to notice the idling. ...I found a few mistakes with tying. I had the verb issue again. The records that need verbs do not have them so some of the words changes exist because a verb was needed. ...I was writing for a time the description that is now after Dick standing. I can't find the words I want to write to define what needs to be written in a way to show with the language. ...I don't know. I will find it...
r20761 | kalab | 2007-08-01 05:28:38 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from jester to being in Psycho. I read and reread. Edited. And read. Wrote and read and edited, edited, edtied. The story is becoming. The description of this chapter in areas needs to be show and not tell. Lots of tellling found when telling is now wanted. At least this is how I feel after reading and rereading these words today. I was stuck on the descrition of Psycho. The rain. The everything. I think I will be deleting some sentences but I am not in the mood right now to do that. What of the sight and seeing the line move, and the people, and the G43 Killing Machines. ...The story does continue. It read on and builds. Tension reads to be held.
r20741 | kalab | 2007-07-31 05:37:39 -0700 (Tue, 31 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning. There were reads that needed editing because the use of verbs was bad or read better than another. Some sentences are full of too much action and decision, it told, and now it more shows. The flow improved with more thought and stronger, grammar and spellchecked sentences. There are a few things needing be fixed, maybe, but only because I want to read the words and not edit them. The words are there. Most are more than becoming. The are. The description add is the description needed because there is a lot of things everywhere. ...I am thinking of the show of the this chapter of the clearing of the road and the tightening of the army wall and how Army marks and read and detains suspects into pockets of congov groups. ..The chapter and the tensions will be stronger and better shown through the sky view when Dick and Psycho are in the air.
r20726 | kalab | 2007-07-30 05:47:06 -0700 (Mon, 30 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read the chapter. I wrote as much I edited and removed. The words becoming. I gave definition to the person of the beginning of the next chapter. I read and and read and though there are spots were there is change. There was a story, pace and natural prose reads to me to be nearing something. Maybe the next chapter should be read. ...Those words I have wrote recent for the chapter now read better (after removing the mindless sentence).
r20705 | kalab | 2007-07-29 15:00:49 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to end. I read of things I liked. I corrected a few things but just wanted the read and round the read and the description enough. The end description of Dick leaving always may need more complete Object verb sentences, but the fragments could be good for the confusion. For there is not the pure record with chaos, so I t will probably remain. ...The walk to the Army I feel reads to be what is need to be something more than just filler for description. I did think for few minutes about the actions of the Army next. Next chapter they will begin to move. I liked the chapter. I feel it is very near what is needed for the chapter.
r20689 | kalab | 2007-07-29 06:49:10 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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The read from the beginning to them entering Always was read and edited. I removed what needed to be removed. A paragraph and sentences that were not written. Talking is something that no only helps Dick not think, but is some thing required as Richard is nervous of what is going on and feels the need to try and calm himself. I wrote more of the Army line to increase the amount of control being created, but also I hope to set up the image of a parameter of Army that tightens and filters everyone to the epicenter, the White House (or maybe it is K Street. This filtering will give proof that soon if Dick does nothing then all his past records that are now loaded and he needs to be accounted for. This is a good set up for further reason for Dick need to chuse to put the head in the tap. ...Maybe. I will have to read again. The words added and removed do create a balance that I believe is something worth reading.
r20682 | kalab | 2007-07-28 20:06:39 -0700 (Sat, 28 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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Read from after the scan to the drive. I removed the people after the departure from scan because there shouldn't be that many people. I like what I did read to the stop of the cab and the time Dick focuses more on the environment outside the cab. I read things over and over and found a better flow by removing detail or writing or editing. I think I need more definition when the near 18th and Connecticut. I actually looked on Google Maps to see it and find the flow the government takes to pick up people to service them at the White house and the surrounding goncov buildings. Top secret for they are close to K Street. The path is how I had thought it and remembered. ...More detail. I think in the next chapter I have the detail defined as they leave the cab. Maybe if there is more detail there then the reason that Dick only focuses on outside when outside because now Psycho could be really. Or there is more reason for Psycho to be real... ...I wrote more dialog at the end. It may remain for it seems general and revealing of character and shows and tells and creates. I read things and read things. And I want the scene to be as impressive as I think it is. The words did read on and on and on. More words to read and things to do. I do need to keep up the intensity on the next chapter. I should read that right now.
r20662 | kalab | 2007-07-27 16:27:23 -0700 (Fri, 27 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the talk of the of the coach to nearing the passing of Du Pont Circle. The read was in pace and flow. I did like what I read. The words were there. I like the sequence of the race and of the scan.
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I read after the U.S. A. to the clearing of intersection. I made more than one edit to clarify definition of scene and action. I moved internal dialog of the Apple Pie Paranoia of Jo. The definition of the people walk past more clear. There were changes for this and that. Things are better now then before the edit. I think the definition is enough, maybe more sweat, and is better and more defining now clear. ...I wrote of the sneeze and cough to show of character scene and to show the characters and their reaction to the change and how the clean up and the temptation of maybe a gun. ...I had hoped to read to the stage coaches, but I began to read then and thought the race can wait to find these things and create these words. To read and write a better flow.
r20628 | kalab | 2007-07-25 17:49:03 -0700 (Wed, 25 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from An Army tank and after the edit and write of the sentence, I read on. The definition of the sound became an issue that taught me choir and orchestra and symphony to create and show dick lick symphonies. The definition better. The machines seen and show. The third party with the machine wins but only for so long. They all end up lost in the crowd. The race an obvious attempt to change the subject that the record will denote and is and doesn't need to mark because it is so obvious. A few more verbs and another 'to be' verbs. Need for the flow fits. ...So before all the reading past. Something I should write about now because it was thought while writing the symphony part. The thought is that I think pullers should now be called movers because it is a better name and because they say move, move, move so naturally we will call them movers. ...Pullers will be movers. ...I think the definition in the cab during the ride is okay. There will probably need to be more thought or more description because Dick is either trying not to think or thinking a lot so on or the other is needed. Of course I am also thinking he is not think or recorded just in a slowed mental state having had reasoned and be in a sort of meditative state. Maybe a few more details or comments. Sudden comments. I now have a thought of the words so I hope to read from the beginning again before dick notices the race coming with the two coaches of Senators.
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I began reading around where as is and read on to after the apple pie and nearing the second call out of the terrorist. I liked the flow of the internal and external dialog of everyone. I like the flow and the logic. There was some need to simplify the words and the thought because less was more. ...At times I may need more thought, but I think with this read and edit I have the locations where thought is needed. It flowed well. In fact I could have missed typos and misspelled words because the words were just there. For the most part. The characters and their talk becoming them.
r20603 | kalab | 2007-07-23 20:38:05 -0700 (Mon, 23 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I began the read before the smell propaganda bomb. Then read through. I focused on the flow and the thought then read on through. After the bomb fades the focus is more clear for a second or two then the thought begins again. The though recycles the thought to make sure that is the thought Dick believes and will base the actions he believes to be real. The movement forward for the people begins. The crossing of the street and leaving of the people is here. I need to begin again where the flash occurs to edit the words written the prior read and edit.
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I began to edit by moving a sentence of dialog before other occurrences for the dialog should occur after Betty speaks because Dick needs and does answer the question right after Betty asks to further show it is the truth if it is the truth. ...I have decided Dick's record should be defined by acts and traits of the people in cab for that is what he is focused upon. These words that were written to help further define. ...I do like the flow better with the description given making both the showing of actions makes the words more show than tell. ...I noticed more than a few grammar errors, so I fixed them to make the errors more correct. ...I read and read and tried to add the detail the question of who has the the gun because it is a question any smart would ask during any situation just to be sure who one should avoid. ...The extra internal dialog is because Dick is thinking when not being aware. ...I add more verbs. ...I add and wrote and I think next write and edit will begin after the flash. The clean beginning to get the clean view.
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The reading I like up and to the point of them talking about the moving to a different place which to me read to be out of place, so I removed it. I have been thinking of removing and now I have. What I have replace with the words with the other worfds is far better word and flow than existed before. I alos add more body motion to show that maybe Richard claims Dick is global red to change the subject about the Democrats and Republicans having sex with people they are not married to for he and Betty are having sex, so Richard screams. ...I think what was written ( which to the the time of the write has better flow and better placement. I am glad I removed the moving suggestions. With it gone, all the other words read to be better. Now i can read through these words and read on to other words.
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I read from the taxi moving to the moment Eleanor asks Dick if he is a read. I read and reread words an sentences to make sure they were what has needed. I removed what was not needed and imporved what was. I think the detail written is enough of id s is taking in a lot, so the record quick and small. The mannerisms few for they all want to remain calm while they sit and listen to the calls for a global terrorist. I stopped because I want to be able to focus on what happens next. I also stopped because I began to think I was getting lost in the words to much and just wanting ot read and not being able to slow self to edit.
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I read again from the beginning to the taix. I add enough description to show and thoughts and dialog to show. I do feel I like the flow as it is though it may change after I read it again after I complete reading the next chapters for I hope to begin to read at the taxi next read feeling comfortable that what has been written for the first is enough to begin the chapter. These words to become and are becoming. Here it goes. One more word, or more words.
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I read from beginning to the entering the taxi. I thought of the description and changed what needed to be change because it was just not right. The change were few. The words did flow. I didn't feel the need to write more dialog. Some of the description slightly altered. Not much more than that was really done. The read too place. I had to slow self down to focus and find those minor mistakes I may still have read over. The flow there. I may make a couple of adjustements, but the talk and walk and what is is. It reads. I thought of the book as a whole and the meaning of actions of this chapter while sitting here read and writing. I like what I read.
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I read the first paragraphs. I move the description of people actions from the humidity because having both together was confusing. ...I like the beginning and don't feel the need to change it. the words the follow are the flow I feel that is need to continue on with the chapter.
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I began the read and edit at the conversation of jobs. I made some minor adjustments of the internal dialog to make the flow more logical and natural. I read and reread the words about the discussion of going to always. I like it but I am questioning my choice to not add more description of the area because Dick knows the area and because he is focused upon other things like talking and think and eating. The food. The food should be defined. The hunger should be defined. The lack of hunger should be defined. I will define it when I have a better, more clear, mind.
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I read and I wrote from the taste of scotch to the getting of food. The edit was linear because I read and wrote. I did fast read to the point, but didn't focus on any one thing and didn't find the errors that could have been, but found no obvious issues. ...I read the words fast and slow. I had to write the food getting for it reads that I forgot to have Betty get her food. There were edits to space to show action was all at once. ...I do like the added dialog. I believe it adds more with lass and the flow now seems something to be read. The words are going good. I read until a page or two (if a page were 8 x 11 and the font ten) the getting of food to the beginning of eating. I thought of adding more crowd interaction, but I will not before the food for I think there is enough definition of the environment and Dick is now focused on the people, the contractors, so the action of other are not a focus and do not call for attention unless a major change in position or sound. ...I will begin to edit next, I believe, where they begin to eat. The words that read to then read to be ready. The change I should wait to may find to edit.
r20310 | kalab | 2007-07-06 05:27:36 -0700 (Fri, 06 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read before the arm throw and after the arm of Richard being thrown around Dick's shoulder. I read after. Then I sat and got lost in thought in how to write the vague thought I had yesterday with the last journal of change. I think the reason for Richard and thought is shown and told by Dick. This could man anything. I think the words found while thought was lost looking into the scene the words create and stepping from the story to compose the words. After finally changing what Dick is given for food, read the edit of the bourbon and made sure it was both ordered correctly and flowed with the shoulder grab, which inspired more words to add more with the less. ..It took me a time to begin to define the taste of the scotch. I did end with the taste of scotch. I will have to come back to it. I should begin with food next read.
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Losing focus for the edit and just want to read or write. The words are there, but the thought is distant for I keep slipping into read mode just wanting to read and enjoy the story and not take it apart sentence by sentence, word by word. I read from Eleanor's order to the arrival of food. I have more words written and a few removed. The ones written make the story more and not less. The dialog to make it flow from the page as it should. Confusion and all. The scene becoming a character. The touch is needed. I Dick wants to wipe something like his collar line. He wants to wipe it down, but doesn't want to be rude, so hbe does not. I may write this. ...The words as a whole were fun to read. With the additional definition, I believe I can begin the story as the food arrives. The order order was correct. ...I change glass to cup and glasses to goggles because glasses and glass are just too nondescript. The change I believe is what is in need. I did do a search and replace on the term, so I can only edit to find if the changes are good for all instances that used glass or glasses.
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The words written to make the dialog flow and feel natural. The description read to be good. I like the variation. The characters are becoming. The scene has been. More senses to e written. The focus of mannerisms for ease the purpose are being watched, but soo the focus will widen and smells and tastes willl be overwhelmed with food. I need to improve the food words. ...I read from the talke of Rude to the order of Eleanor. The words written and wrote fit. I hope to begin with the order next. I have read these words enough. I know the words to be written.
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Reading for smell and hearing. The sounds and smells of a restaurant are needed for a restaurant. I read from the line into the the ordering of food. The focus was on writing more detail about the people and their mannerisms that Dick always looks at to see how one acts and if one is acting. The focus of what makes them separate people. It is needed to identify, so Dick looks, but Dick feels to define the person with the mental profile. More data Dick collects. ...There were some change to the dialog to make it better. ...I thought more of what each character looks like. I have the image in mind, but they are still becoming with time. The words did read. Most of them ready for something. I ddi focus upon the dialog because it had the interaction with the people. The words read.
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I read from BROOD and i found actions of Dick pouring water. These lines were moved and place after words written of words and water. I read to change what Richard calls squab to pigeon because its pigeon to him and not squab. Squab is too European. ...I read of the water and found the place for the water sentences and found way to use the sentences to add more detail and add more showing of how Dick is civil and nice. Dick, despite who he may be, is a courteous and a gentleman. I read over and over and read the words to find what was needed to write. I am happy with the words. I think I have the only water process. I like the ordering, but I need to read past the setting of drinks. That's where I think I will begin next read and edit.
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I read from BROOD to the talk of the water. The read was easy. The words did flow, I think. I found some errors. Once I found the palm sized description, I found a better place to show how the description was created then becomes part of record for the day at least or the remainder of the record. I like the read. It was easy. There were a few places where thought is a lot and thought makes a wander and a jump but I feel that is what is needed. Not everything is smooth. Some moments in life are difficult. There is no universal timing we humans can reset. The words have a flow. I like. The lack of sleep has me unable to focus, but still I seen the book and found the typing errors.
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...All those years of being into 60's American cars, and I can't spell chrome. ...The read of the words was good. ...Well, most of them. I did have to write and edit the walk from the door to the table to sit. the words were jumbled. They told a story and didn't show a story enough, so the words were use and move and edited and written and read. They read better now. I feel they will later. I replace waiter with server for server is more likely to be a dominate word once the words is connected by computers, machines, serving us data. Waiter was just... ...When searching for water I read Clear by the door guard and thought it best to use good. I want to use good for it has many way to be defined. I want good to be used occasionally in the book to. ...I read from the entrance to the beginning of the ordering. Then I read here and there as I edited words to change. I found a few places to improve with the thought I have in mind for now.
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The write of the talk and tell of Psycho leaving the nuclear waste before it wrapped up Dick and took Dick to K Street. The location where written is a good place for I think that the words even help have the thought of Dick that now follows have more meaning.
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I read from the look around after being across the street. I read from somewhere. What I wrote I think is actually pretty good and actually became better than I thought it could. The use of the 911 Aquarium to have a fish pulled out and lead the group with Dick left. There is symbolism. The gun checkin begin to the right soon after is more of this symbolism that wrote from a thought of just adding more detail and input Dick thinks and focuses upon to be able to understand the scene surrounding. The words did flow. Some changes that followed made for better internal dialog and description. Even if the new description and way Dick enters is not all that better I feel improves the story.
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More editing internal dialog to give more flow. I found another memory sentence without a verb. Moved a sentence to better time the event. The need to remove the double action of putting back on the jacket was removed because the jacket was on. The words were easy to remove. The change form Margaritas being the free drink was because I reasoned whisky and the genCorn and genWheat and genRye would give away free whiskey which can be made local and not very expensive tequila. Whiskey is more American. I removed the inclusion of Larry's Lounge because it was too confusing. I did want to give more words to the idea and though I thought of it once I did think I realized it didn't need to exist. It is a shout-out, but I an do that with promoting telling people about how the name Larry's Fajitas was created (because across the street there is a bar called Larry's Lounge. It is place Valerie and I would go when meeting people to eat at Laural (or however that is spelled) Plaza. It was also a good half way meeting point to meet friends living in Dupont Circle. Valerie and I, because I could never remember the name of the place with the Fajitas starting calling the place Larry's Fajitas). No, to me, it represents the control of someone with at least an American name but very influenced by the past cultures. The place is high brow for it is different. ...I read from beginning of chapter to the entrance of Larry's Fajitas. I feel I can begin in the line to the entrance of Larry's Fajitas next write. Time will tell the tale.
r20035 | kalab | 2007-06-23 06:08:36 -0700 (Sat, 23 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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I focused upon the edit of the internal dialog that was once mental recordings of memory. The read of the first. The change of a few things to make the internal dialog flow better. The feel I like. The focus of the edited faded a couple of time for I am sleep. What was interesting is the thought I had while closing the eyelids over eyes.I thought of The Detectives Store's themes and plot points and process and flow. The information is becoming. If I were more awake, I would edit more.
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I editing the location description to something more basic. The location is establish at the first of the chapter, so that is another reason to remove the words T and 18 with intersection. ...I moved a sentence for it had a trigger to inspire a thought. ...I removed an article for it was not needed. I removed a few articles. I turned mind record to internal dialog for it is a focus of a detective after all. I moves some sentences and add the description to show the movement of the people from road and the traffic moves. I see it. The talk of the nuclear waste something to be thought still. I removed the topic from the previous chapter. The sequence shows more now than just nuclear to be pooped. The words feel like they are okay ...I read from the beginning to near the entrance. The reading was more quick. I started to read too fast. I liked. The first needed some reading and needs a bit more, but the flow is found and with a few more details, the beginning will be near complete.
r19999 | kalab | 2007-06-21 05:21:03 -0700 (Thu, 21 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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The one obvious bad paragraph I think found and edited. From reading before the strobe pulse to end I found a few places to write and edit. The writing and editing more to the end took time. after reading almost to the end I thought again about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb. And then read it again. Then changed the names and the position of the first play. I read it again and thought it was more of a logic of also what the Propaganda bomb does. It uses thing the mind enjoys and enhances them with things and people you hold dear then creates a feeling of connection with that object of American with the U.S.A.. Or something like that. Dick is able to change the rules by prethinking because he feels it best to keep his mind and not lose it when there is a Psycho on the loose. ...I like the name change. I think it will remain as it is.
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I read and edited. I change a few sentences for clarity. Removed a few because they were redundant. The only real moving of story and losts of though were on the sentences before the propaganda bomb. I thought of the description and thought it neat and off hand and random to think to show Dick's mind focused, but unfocused. Change is the focuse. Knowing it can happen. ...The read from after the strobe flash to the propaganda bomb. The read I liked. The words of the propaganda bomb are near complete. The will be a good beginning to begin to read next edit. The sequence of record now better with the sentence move and merge of the propaganda bomb scene. ...The word and thought I did have sometime when I got to caught up in story were interesting thought I hadn't know of, or read of, in a while in these words.
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...I remembered after reading the scan that Dick was in the street. I also felt the words that were written after needed to be more and less, so a few more words were written. The thoughts and what was written to show more complete. More with less, or so I feel. ...I read from before the scan. I felt the process of coming to thought again needed more pace and flow. I think it now has something close to what I feel is needed. I did think about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb be Mustang and Dick. But I didn't change because what I add is something that makes the transition and the setup to remember the thought before the propaganda bomb. ...The internal dialog edited for a more natural and less focused flow after the propaganda bomb begins to wear-off. I read from before the propaganda bomb to the end. More reading and editing. I need to also focus an edit on from strobe flash to propaganda bomb. I think I felt it okay. I would like to read once more. ...I think on Wednesday or Thursday I will read through and begin reading the next chapter. Feeling much better about this chapter.
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Non dialog sentences missing verbs should not be. ...The thought of the propaganda bomb a good progression into the effect of the propaganda bomb. I like the flow of thought now. It is becoming better shown. There has been more than enough telling of the object. I still want to read over the after the bomb again. I like what I have but the very end my be redundant. I read to the end and I didn't read the next chapter for I want to reread this near end again and again before I move on. I think by the end of the week
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The range of edit wasn't the long. From before the propaganda bomb to the rethinking of cowboys. What are the Cowboys\? I clarified the memory attachments, so though it will expand the thought to flow ot other thoughts the amount of memory connects allows the time and mood and walking and the data references for him to remember. The edit was good. I like what has been written, but there my need be more readings of these words. I do need to focus closer on the thought. I skimmed most of this read. maybe I should read it allowed\? I must admit I am becoming jaded of editing these words. But I feel and see the chapter is near completion. I am nearing reading these words like I read the owrds of the first chapter feeling the words written near completion. That feeling is near for these end words. They do deserve just as much time. Sometimes I think I edit too linear therefor and become jaded on focusing for edit upon something for too long so by the time i edit to the end of a chapter I just want to be done and hurry. I don't think this too much with the other chapters. ...I will still be reading everything backward.
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A few edits. A few words read. The edits of sentences so they were slow. I have been having a hard time focusing this morning. Thoughts from tangents of this book and the meaning and relation of the story with the stories of the world in this non-fiction world. I thought of details of the meaning and a couple of time got lost on tangents of how to Publish The Detective Store. I am feeling a little jaded of mind. I am sleepy, but awake. If I was not walking in a couple of ours I'd go for a walk now to clear the mind and begin to focus upon the words.
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A very slow read from the Jeep and two men wrestling to right before the focus of Dick to prepare to enter the cone of white. I found some needed sentence edit which required me to rewrite or write a sentenc. Those did take time. I did read a few sentences that were written before the exact grammar and style of the story. Those few were easy to edit because I only needed separate and make a new sentence. I found a few typos by reading. ...I did become lost in thought about the characters of the book. I kind of just realized Dick is Gay and G43 is for the forty-third President of the United States.
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Dick needs to focus self to focus upon people too show show the record of Psycho that people are around and matter and should be seen as life like the plants in the garden. The people add to the scene too. I want the place to feel crowded and now there is a reason for it and purpose for it. ...I began by the White Hotel. I editing by adding people and read on. I removed some internal dialog that was witty and worked with the words but it was too manufactured and I have not desire to have it in the story because when I read it just now it just didn't feel like it belonged. The fact it was a sentence that was a recent write makes me feel better about removing the words. ...I thought about making the flash sequence internal dialog, but then thought I should not. Most time for edit used to better incorporate, write, the process of Dick Discovering thought again after the indirect flash. What I have written in the past was good, but it just feels to need to be a bit more gradual. I think what is written will be what is needed. A gradual understanding of the reality. The reconnection and recreation of the thought. The mind finding ways to recreate the reality.
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I couldn't find the right sentence and description of the invisible stage coach so I made it a bit thick steel stage coach pulled by many pullers. I read and edited from 18th the almost to the propaganda bomb. The words did flow. The mind is slow. It can't focus right now.
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After this write, and after reading the words of the edit, I feel the words from the circle to 18th are what they need to be. I added more words, a new focus, and a completion of thoughts and focuses. These words should be read again and I should now focus after them because by the time I focus on them to edit for an hour and find edits and make long thinking sentence change I get burnt to slowing down the reading. I just want to read. I want to enjoy the story more than just creating it. I wonder if I ever will.
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Write to add more description after reading and editing the first paragraph to read to the next chapter to read if the flow of the words is good or bad. The read was short, therefore, not much to write.
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A read from the danger to the question of danger. The internal dialog edited to be more natural and be influenced more by what is around. The thoughts going though mind. I wanted to also prolong the effects of the strobe and have Dick forget something and remember after Psycho uses his name. I think that the thought one focus on will be lost for the strop pulse. So Dick should be thinking about everything, but nothing to leave it it the chaotic mess that does exist. The sound clears the mind of thoughs connected to the prefronal lobe. Infact so does the strobe. The shock gets rid of the thought and the connected. If it is directed it is more effective. Because Dick doesn't catch the flash's full effect it won't make him totally forget. ...The words arecoming. The description is close to what I want, I think. I only think because I have to doubt for the edit. What was removed wasn't needed and was making the story less by the words being part of it.
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A read of what was read and written during the prior edit session. I found grammar errors. I read sentences here and there. I sort of read in a linear flow from outer circle to street to strobe pulse and after. I read fast to some words beyond, I read that there were some sentences that needed working and there is not time, so maybe I'll edit those setences and read botton to top.
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I move and removed sentences to decrease thought that wasn't needed, decrease the time it takes Dick to cross the road, I rewrote sentences for there were many sentences that read as chaos. I read a some of the words at first, but I really focused, as I am sure the edits will reflect, upon the walk along outer circle down road. The detail written for better flow and description. Not to abstract, but abstract enough to be written. The thought found. Once I began reading after the pop of the drone to stop two wreastling men I thought there were a lot of words, but liked it because Dick is trying to focus away from internal dialog.
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Editing one sentence near the completion of sentences can be difficult. Some times I stare too long at the change and think of how to do it with less words. Less is more. There was a sentence move because the sentences moved allowed for the focus to refocus upon what is near. The flow to more description. Words were add to make more of other words and complete the scene. I still need to think of scene. And reread now that those few sentence that didn't want to change easily are edited and ready for a read.
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I wrote the fun thing for the day. The passing off of teaching Psycho what he considers a danger (things that kill) and passes off the task of having, requiring, teaching Psycho that killing things are a danger to life. This is change in the use of the reason Dick calls out the people and rates them with danger or immediate danger. Dick does this now as a teaching tool to Psycho and to protect. The many reasons is for Dick to show Psycho a pattern while protecting and focusing. This is carried through to the story. ...The other words editing while crossing to the circle. Words were changed after because the words were not good enough or too much. Some of the thought flow as just not in the flow it needed to be. Removing a few words fixed some of the flow problems. The words I like. Most do read. I think a few more reads to get the passages through and from circle to be what I want it to be. It is near. The more showing edits of last edit read to be something near what I want it to be...What I see it to be.
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I read. I read from before the cross to after the flash from the drone and the hearing of the hovercopter. The read went well. There were edits for clarity. I was able to slow read and think and see most of the story. I added a few details to show Dick's discovery and focus upon information either by cause or trigger. The words read good. I made some edits to show and not tell with the detail. The words read good. They had a flow when I let my self just read. It was hard and is now getting hard to slow read and not read. I want to just read the words, but I can read in words. As I have found, I do read in words. ...The thought of the book continues. Adding the completing the thought and story that exists. Writing to show and see so one may feel.
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The read from the first. I thought of reading some of the recently editing passage near the first. The main focus was on the corner near congov. Before and after dialog and internal dialog the focus. It wasn't until the end of the edit that I read sentences without verbs. The description I did read here and there in a sort of linear flow and I liked it. There was some internal dialog added for a natural flow and lesson and insite of Dick as he is seeing and thinking.
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From beginning to the last sentence written, the words where read and written. The words written during writing times past read as they should. More written to make less more. To show. To think. To give the scene character. The scene I believe now has the characer needed to continue these words. I feel I can begin after the pool crowd, after the last sentence written, because I think the words I have written should be read at a later time after i forget their existence. I do believe, like the writing of this book, after the first of this chapter, I then was able to find character in the scene, so near the last of this chapter is also what I am thinking of as I write for only a memory can tell of its having character. A character that may need some characteristics, but won't be as trying as the first of this chapter...I feel. I don't know. ...I had always feared this chapter after the last read for it is now the weakest, but could become the strongest if done write. After this chapter I believe the words do flow better if only because of the characters.
r19489 | kalab | 2007-05-29 23:20:52 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007) | 1 line
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I have decided to replace all the thought to define a danger and immediate danger to be written with the detail of the vehicle gardens dick sees. He will focus internal dialog away this way for the basic thought because that is what everyone does to avoid too much personal thought from being recorded for everyone is being recorded. Dick just want to be sure it is not a terrorist listening in. Dick doesn't know if Psycho can read all his thought, knows it said it could, to be safe it is best just thinking of something else. This is also away to protect the thought from Psycho. The read was good. I wrote dialog to show Dick further teaching Psycho and trying to make the dialog more natural. A long conversation Dick wants to have with Psycho. The dialog addition made things more with less. More because it adds to the character of Dick, Psycho, the Scene, Washington, D.C. and can define the times if one were to think of it. ...The reading began walking from the circle.
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I began the edit by writing a sentence. This felt more like a write but only because the changes needed writing. I wanted to show guns guns guns and a clean city. The shine of things, so a sentence was added. I wrote the name for I think Dick would ask the name soon to get Psycho to think of the names as humans or show that he wants to make Psycho think of the idea of a name to further teach Psycho or show that he is trying to help to think and show others something that may not be real. The name of Smith is going to be the named used for both Richard and Betty. If this is a story of America and is Edited by United States of America it is only fitting to have a Smith. The other words edited then written were edited and written because of some confusion. For a few sentences, I wanted the description to be more show and not tell as it was. ...The thought of show and tell is something I think of as I read every sentence. ...The amount read during this edit was not great, but what was read and written is now more complete.
r19410 | kalab | 2007-05-27 14:34:34 -0700 (Sun, 27 May 2007) | 1 line
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I am getting to much of a fast reader for I want to read the story and not slow read and edit and write the story that is written and not the one I can fill in when I see a grammar error. My concentration is lost on the edit for I want to read. I read from the beginning to the crossing before the congov truck and before crossing to the center of the circle. I believe next write I will read and edit beginning with the the jeep down the sidewalk somewhere. I want to read into the story with the yes and no and see if it flows. Did I forget. There is a space in description maybe. Maybe there should be because this is Dick focusing in the fact he is talking with a killing machine. The acts of and focus seems consistent. I add some mmore action to show and not tell the manner's of Dick. The flow and the detail I believe to be becoming what it needs to be.
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I can now read the words. I can now find the flow with the thought of dick. I need, and I read a lot of time on the first few paragraphs that need verbs. I didn't use verbs for it is written more like a record. Do there need to be verbs\?
r19365 | kalab | 2007-05-25 00:32:45 -0700 (Fri, 25 May 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to end. I am ready to move and read to the next chapter. I feel the dialog both internal and external can be understood many different wanted ways and read to be natural for Dick and Mustang. It is all almost complete. It needs more read thoughts, but only after I read the remainder of the book because this is feeling very near copyedit. The chapter being done for now. ...Th eedits were needed for clarity. I like the interaction with Mustang. ...Thinkings reviewed I think of things that were redundant.
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I read fast from first to the Dick in the apartment. Then I read slow. Or it felt like it was slow because I found more mistakes with the words after Dick enters the apartement. I did a little more telling this chapter, but it also a show and tell, so I don't feel too bad about being direct. I wanted to be more vague, but they have to have the conversation of Dick informing Mustang. It's not like I can summerize it with a paragraph. The conversation, I hope, has more words and dialog to help the dialog feel more natural. A few mistakes once in a while is needed. There are pauses. There are stops. There are things said because of thought that need to be shown to tell the tale. The words are becoming. I like the read. Next time I begin the edit of The Detective Store I will begin with this chapter again, but not many reads remain for this edit of The Detective Store chapter.
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I read from the smell of the cookies and remembered I wanted to change the cookies to something more healthy and wouldn't require sugar or chocolate. I had thought of using figs, and I may still, but after researching I thought not to use them because they are not accessible to D.C., so how would they be grown except as gen. They may still be used. I don't know. I do know I have granola bars which was something I thought of after thinking of having fig bars. The words were not read passes, and I began reading with search and return engine about the food. I have made this change, and I will pause the edit for I can't see the story as I want.
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The words of the first read. There was the addition of words spoke to continue the creation of the character scene. The time the thought. The flow I like. I stop now because I want and sort of need to focus upon other things. I did have the thought while reading that the fact I had written so much of the first before finding the frame and form of the story that it requires a lot more editing than the final chapter and a few of these middle chapters. The dialog already written for any form. ...Lost that thought. Is what I am trying to write is that I see the difference in how these words were thought and written first than the words of the first chapter that I find a need to edit the flow.
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The words were slow read. I did get lost during a time in some of the scenes. The flow. I think I now see the words. ...I only read and edit from first edit to the Jersey Dikes. I was paused and thinking, sometimes too much, about how to write the scene with the scene in my mind. Now that the words are considered to be written they are had to writew with a scene. Hard, but not difficult. ...I will try to begin at the Dikes for next read.
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Slow reading for the run. There were sentences and movement and definition and hidden meaning to be read and edited. The book and the between the lines book becoming. I read from the mind thinking of Psycho reading thoughts to the running across Connecticut. ...The words have been written and thought. More sweat maybe. For Dick is sweat and notices the sweat. The notice of the object to run around shouldn't be the only object of change observed by the mind of Dick.
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The end. The pace of movement focused upon the expanding plastic ball. To show many things. The end of the chapter. The end of the chapter. This is what was thought during the morning walk. The Word Prostitute(R) subversion log entry prior to this on defines the many ways Word Prostitute(R) sess these words.
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I changed the end because the end needed to be changed. I began at the walk to the jersey dikes. From there I read and I do think the read read well. I like the words. I like were the words are reading. There were some needed corrects to make the thought more natural. Too exact while running is good for Dick, even he wants to be lazy of thought to be more vauge.. ...I add the catch of the pastic bag. Now that I think of if I don't have Dick doing any thing with the plastic bag. I think Dick will forget about the plast until the end of the run at the door. That what may be at the end, but I want to read the first of the next chapter before I choose to make that choice. ...The words are becoming. I did need to edit some of the sentences for clarity, but the overall way it is written is how it needs to be written. There may and could be more description of the character scene.
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...I read from the cicada, maybe a litll before, to the end of the crowd. The locations where the first edit began and the last edited ended. The words becoming more and better. I think the flow it better than what it was. I editing the intersection crossing because it was not written well enough. I saw nothing. The words flow better.
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More reading from beginning to end. I just need to find the right words because some of the words are just bad. I did need to think about the words that were deleted. Some of them I thought of long time. Others were just bad, The word and grammar and form thought and further edited. ...The story is clear. I think I will try to begin the edit after the exit of the office. I believe I removed or change things needed to be thought of. Punctuation will come.
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Read from the beginning to where I add words to the chapter to better show and not tell. The words need some work. They are good in places and lost and confused other places. I did read a lot and deep. I found things that I do have a tendency to over look. The change of proper name of club seemed better, more fitting. I need to think of tastes more, I think now as I write this. The story does more along. The internal dialog as it needs to be, but I do want to try to remove articles because it is focused thought, but still thought and all the rules or detail is sometimes lost from the focus when looking for proof of a killing machine while thinking. ...There were grammar mistakes, but all in all all is not bad. There grammar is defined, so the grammar is in mimd. It's easy for me to see if I slow read and don't replace with my mind.
r19052 | kalab | 2007-05-08 19:55:44 -0700 (Tue, 08 May 2007) | 1 line
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The knowing of when you are going to die that you don't want to be some place you have come to hate. Dick doesn't, I think, hate D.C.. Dick hates Adams Morgan and all the sin and corruption of companies and government. The beginning better now that I ended the prior chapter with something that is not Dick's thoughts. The end of the last chpater also is better. The change is what was needed. The beginning of the chapter show me some weird paranoid push for Psycho to get out. How crazy is the mind\?
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The flow from chapter to chapter is a good flow. The end of the prior may change to add more description to separate the occurance of action of Dick. ...I added more question to show a mind thinking of everything. The thought beginning flows as it should. The first of chapter was read, but only a few 'pages' into the chapter were read.
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I read and I read. I read things I always correct to quick to read over for it should be that way, but it was not. I edited. I edited the words. Now the words are near complete. I read from the beginning to the talk of Dick to Psycho to gain time. ...I ch