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r30995 | kalab | 2009-02-22 11:05:33 -0800 (Sun, 22 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit to replace a question mark for the question mark isn't bad, but not what is wanted. Now I will check all question marks.

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r30985 | kalab | 2009-02-21 22:26:09 -0800 (Sat, 21 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the use of unzip for the typ e of tool to pull the pants tight to lower body is not defined. I actually see this more as buttons or ties. Unfasten was used in chapter 0101, and I will remain constent, or try too, with the previous us and thought.

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r30983 | kalab | 2009-02-21 21:51:14 -0800 (Sat, 21 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit because the window was already down, and it is. The sentence is not needed. Jo rolled down window when talking with Betty. He never rolled it up.

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r30916 | kalab | 2009-02-16 23:46:34 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit chapters with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl and the new pattern.

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r30913 | kalab | 2009-02-16 21:27:14 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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r30899 | kalab | 2009-02-16 14:15:24 -0800 (Mon, 16 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read the print version aloud. ...Edit to remove t-shirt from words for it is not on Dick's body. ...Edit to write a verb to a sentence that needs a verb. ...Read the print to the end and read aloud. ...Read diff.

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r30875 | kalab | 2009-02-14 23:17:07 -0800 (Sat, 14 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud of the page. ...Edit the sounds length for following sentence define the duration enough. ...Edit K Street from some of Dick's thought for Dick uses K more than K Street. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30842 | kalab | 2009-02-11 23:27:30 -0800 (Wed, 11 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from some point in the story to edit the final print. I began were the meet Ash. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma. ...Read aloud to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30822 | kalab | 2009-02-09 22:28:16 -0800 (Mon, 09 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud the print version. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma. This is not entirely needed, but I reason that it is best. Why not\? It needs to follow the standard. There is not say verb. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for I have made a similar change. This change is not really needed, but I have changed a comma for a period earlier, so why the fuck not. The verb is not a speaking verb, so I will change it. Read aloud print version to I open rear door, look behind. ...Read diff.

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r30791 | kalab | 2009-02-08 14:08:55 -0800 (Sun, 08 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the word terrorist as it is a key word that changes the record, and Dick doesn't think it. I used checkpattern to again check all the keywords. This was the only change needed.

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r30780 | kalab | 2009-02-07 23:54:10 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the use of semi-colons to be sure each instance is needed.

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r30777 | kalab | 2009-02-07 23:06:19 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit to check for periods that could be commas for the internal or external dialog is followed by a verb using /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl.

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r30773 | kalab | 2009-02-07 22:21:14 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit a comma for a period for a period is needed.

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r30770 | kalab | 2009-02-07 21:59:23 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit the pattern of ellipsis and commas for internal dialog using /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/checkpattern.pl. ...Copy-edit a typo of a period.

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r30766 | kalab | 2009-02-07 21:14:00 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit ellipsis for space. ...Edit one sentence using ellipsis to periods for that is the desire effect.

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r30764 | kalab | 2009-02-07 20:30:24 -0800 (Sat, 07 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Edit to remove inner and outer from the description of the sidewalk ring for it is not only needed, but the perception should remain.

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r30734 | kalab | 2009-02-03 21:20:03 -0800 (Tue, 03 Feb 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl for a standard use of desk top was found without the space twice in book. I want the space to be used for desktop without the space is a graphic interface term for a computer and not the top of a physical desk.

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r30687 | kalab | 2009-01-31 23:37:41 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for there are two cheeks that are broken. ...Edit for the floor will not be defined as cement it is just solid for the record. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30684 | kalab | 2009-01-31 22:32:23 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit podium for podiums for there are three. ...Copy-edit many for may for may is the word needed. ...Edit Team Leader for how does Dick know. It is just Secret Sentry. ...Edit for Dick would ask and does ask if Psycho can stop the cyanide. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30681 | kalab | 2009-01-31 21:15:42 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for froward should be forward. ...Copy-edit space for some one to be someone for that is the current record standard. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30671 | kalab | 2009-01-31 14:31:51 -0800 (Sat, 31 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Read aloud and edit to Betty and I stand on curb.

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r30663 | kalab | 2009-01-30 23:22:14 -0800 (Fri, 30 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit a period for a comman for the pattern needs a comma. ...Copy-edit for thumps to be plural. ...Edit for the door is open so Dick only pulls on the door. ...Edit to have third cycle be the subject for it is the cylethat Dick would be upset at. ...Copy-edit for there are many roofs with people dancing. ...Read aloud and edit to Bass and treble flow through mass. ... Read diff.

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r30652 | kalab | 2009-01-29 22:47:41 -0800 (Thu, 29 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit a question mark for a comma. this is not needed. It would have worked either way, but I am reading aloud to edit, so... ...Edit to show thumps and show no thumps. ...Read aloud and edit to I open rear door, look behind. ...Read diff.

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r30624 | kalab | 2009-01-26 23:11:26 -0800 (Mon, 26 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit to write the show of people eating hot dogs for that is what people eat near. ...Copy-edit suites for suits. ...Copy-edited for it rises is more wave like as in sound waves. ...Write more sound of movers for the moves more than chant. ...Edit direction for left works, but right is better. ...Copy-edit medium from median for it should median. ...Edit to write for to make the words spoke sane. ...Edit to have this use of offense and deffense be with s. ...Edit to write of rickshaws in sentence that defines them and uses them. ...Copy-edit for head should be heads. ...Edit for there was no verb. ...Edit to remove commas, but leave them. ...Copy-edit the s from spread for the verb is not needed. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.

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r30614 | kalab | 2009-01-25 22:42:23 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit the apostrophy from the sentence for the possession conflicts with the prose read of the other words. ...Edit to write of movers shouts of because it has better flow of the words. ...Edit for I want slowly before exhale. This edit like the previous is not need, but I have edited this too much and now I am probably killing the prose for the flow. I do like it better. Everything is. ...Edit to remove the towel from neck and show putting the towel on neck. ...Copy-edit caps of thought. ...Copy-edit for upper case not wanted. ...Edit to steps feels to be strides and the incline is a decline for he is running down. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30601 | kalab | 2009-01-25 14:44:46 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for I want the dialog to have Killing Machine to be plural. ...Edit for I like bumps more than pumps for that sentence. Not right or wrong just feeling the flow with it. ...Copy-edit from minds should be mind. ...Copy-edit for two sentences are feeling beter now, but not needed. ...Edit to remove the lights and have Psycho just hover. Less is more. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30599 | kalab | 2009-01-25 13:24:01 -0800 (Sun, 25 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for I still want the possession of the lamps' for the mind hasn't found the prose yet. It will. This is just an edit of reading it too much. ...Edit for jeans for pants for jeans are a type of pant that is not plastic. ...Edit the off and on after blink for blink is enough. This is another not needed edit but less is more. ...Edit for flash for blink then think that flash is needed for it is more intense as it is ready to pulse. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.

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r30591 | kalab | 2009-01-24 21:43:00 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit because I read of this subject have two verbs that conflict and stop the flow of the sentence. This is an edit I made when copy-editing dialog marks earlier, but it was erased after I wrote over the file during the diff by fucking up the command line command.

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r30589 | kalab | 2009-01-24 21:20:56 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. No edits found. I removed white space to create a deltaof change.

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r30587 | kalab | 2009-01-24 20:42:01 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. No edits found. I removed white space to create a deltaof change.

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r30585 | kalab | 2009-01-24 19:48:25 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit file for internal and external dialog syntax. Edit to remove white space to show change of file. No syntax issues found.

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r30581 | kalab | 2009-01-24 14:07:20 -0800 (Sat, 24 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for syntax from beginning of chpater. ...Copy-edit a comma for a comma because it is needed. ...Edit a stare to a look is best. ...Copy-edit for a case is needed. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma where it is needed. ...Copy-edit syntax to the end of the chapter.

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r30575 | kalab | 2009-01-23 23:01:59 -0800 (Fri, 23 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks. ...Edit to replace a comma that could be or couldn't be. I decided it could be. ...Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks to the end.

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r30566 | kalab | 2009-01-22 22:10:25 -0800 (Thu, 22 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog and internal dialog marks from the beginning to end. I found no errors. I did removes some double white space between characters.

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r30564 | kalab | 2009-01-22 21:12:14 -0800 (Thu, 22 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit the dialog and internal dialog marks of the chapter. Remove to unwanted white spaces to have change for this entry as not copy-edit were found.

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r30553 | kalab | 2009-01-21 23:54:18 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for issues with internal and external dialog marks. No issues were found. I did remove some white space, so there is a delta to archive.

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r30551 | kalab | 2009-01-21 23:30:10 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks internal and external. I found not errors. I did remove some end space from the file.

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r30549 | kalab | 2009-01-21 22:56:36 -0800 (Wed, 21 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit internal and external dialog marks. There was one change that needed two. I changed it because the move was a group move so the dialog mark should not have been reset.

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r30531 | kalab | 2009-01-20 17:08:01 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl to check the pattern of the keywords that switch the record.

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r30518 | kalab | 2009-01-20 12:02:56 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with new revision of /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl.

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r30512 | kalab | 2009-01-20 09:32:08 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit the use of twice for two because two fits the pattern. ...Copy-edit a comma for it is not needed. ...Copy-edit for the thought to what is space or nothing that the ellipsis. ...Copy-edit Kill 2310 for it has to close of numbers. I like the idea of items of one index not being of the other because of the pace and not seeing things. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30510 | kalab | 2009-01-20 08:31:10 -0800 (Tue, 20 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit for I liked stand right there. This is not needed, but... ...Copy-edit for the case of Gee Forty-three. ...Copy-edit a period is need to end a sentence. ...Edit to begin to show text as a sense, but only mention it this once. ...Copy-edit for a consistent, mostly, name of walls. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read the diff.

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r30504 | kalab | 2009-01-19 22:01:34 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for there is another review mirror. ...Copy-edit for cannon has two n's. ...Copy-edit s for a consistent standard. ...Edit for a was confused with ceiling column. ...Copy-edit for a double is a confusing article. ...Copy-edit by writing a commma to separate subjects. ...Copy-edit for a comma is needed. ...Copy-edit for an at that not needed is. ...Edit the movement of George's head it is not seen. ...Edit for the sentence ended in a comma. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30500 | kalab | 2009-01-19 17:18:45 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for proper pronoun. ...Copy-edit because I feel a comman is what is wanted. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for the period is a needed end. ...Edit sentence that needed change. ...Edit to write of the smell of the fart for I want it. ...Edit article not needed. ...Copy-edit to cap V for it feels to be a standard of something. ...Copy-edit for possesion is needed. ...Copy-edit for periods are needed and not commas. ...Edit to better locat the blue stagecoach. ...Copy-edit for it is spoked. ...Copy-edit moves pace with all commas. ...Copy-edit for proper name lablel. ...Copy-edit and write complete words for stagecoach. ...EDit for backs not chests lift from seats. Both would work I suppose. ...Copy-edit for a comma. ...Edit for the driver is the mover. ...Copy-edit the case because I want. ...Copy-edit for a comma. ...Read aloud and edit to ,,That's a little odd,'' says George looking back. ...Read diff.

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r30495 | kalab | 2009-01-19 11:32:47 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit write of the process hand shaking. It is the standard. ...Edit for the But is not said. ...Copy-edit for the S.S. to be what it is. ...Copy-edit another S.S. to be Secret Sentry and not Secret Service. ...EDit the words of lunch because i Have been thinking of these words too much. ...Edit for it is not conditional. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30493 | kalab | 2009-01-19 08:23:14 -0800 (Mon, 19 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit write of the process hand shaking. It is the standard. ...Edit for the But is not said. ...Copy-edit for the S.S. to be what it is. ...Copy-edit another S.S. to be Secret Sentry and not Secret Service. ...EDit the words of lunch because i Have been thinking of these words too much. ...Edit for it is not conditional. ...Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30486 | kalab | 2009-01-18 22:48:27 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from the beginning. ...Edit for weird is better. ...Copy-edit for it should be singular form. ...Copy-edit for window. ...read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30481 | kalab | 2009-01-18 19:03:30 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit with /Word_Prostitute/Word_Prostitute/Product/Goods/Tools/Perl/pl/copy-edit.pl.

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r30475 | kalab | 2009-01-18 16:49:37 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for eyelids. ...Edit sentences of motion because Dick only need to roll to cause the pain. ...Edit really bad sentence. ...Copy-edit for leg is the standard of the paragraph. ...Edit for up just wasn't what I wanted. ...Edit for -v- had and edit and question of the timing and happening of Psycho busting out of the pack. Thought I didn't care to have the foreshadowing, I do see the point. I was thinking of just leaving it until I read of and remembered the slipping of the pack and the regrabbing of the stap. That would create a force for Psycho to bust out, so I wrote that in. The edit should read. ...Edit particles hitting head for they not be needed. ...Edit all the dust shit. It's not needed. ...Copy-edit for eyelids. ...Copy-edit a work that need not be. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30473 | kalab | 2009-01-18 15:40:27 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit words for Betty is looking forward. ...Edit for stand shows more than stop. ...Edit by moving the words. ...Edit by removing a word because it is not parked and is not neded. ...Edit because they have new power and can float. ...Copy-edit for it is limb blanket. ...Edit the description of psycho for it was done. The blanket be used but for more description. ...Edit for the puff is like smoke. ...Copy-edit to show the metaphor. ...Edit for I like the puff. It is better. I like verb. It is worth all the words replaced. ...Edit for limbs to not explode of turn to dust. They puff. ...Edit for i do like hisses as a verb. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...read diff. ...Edit for look down should be through for it fits with the logic because we are in a gravity environment. ...EDit parks for stops becaue there isn't much action done that would justify defining the process some parking. ...Edit for the steel door will slide open.

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r30471 | kalab | 2009-01-18 14:13:20 -0800 (Sun, 18 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from beginning. ...Edit sentence because it sucks still. ...Edit to maybe have 'tank motors idle.' to be 'tank's motors idles.' the change it back for I like the prose. ...Copy-edit for suits is plural so the s is needed. ...Copy-edit extra word. ...Edit for the sentence would be if Dick was relaxing and the pace slow. Water drips, drips, drips, ...Edit thougt for the thought needs a flow. ...Edit because a screen is a type of panel and the word panel is redundant. ...Edit for Dick nows range is far because it is distance and not value of an object which would much (is this worth). ...Copy-edit s for the plural is not needed. ...Copy-edit eyes to be eye for sockets is all tis needed to be plural. ...Copy-edit a from. ...Edit by moving words to have subject and verb before the dialog because therew wan't dialog for a few words more than...blah, blah, blah, blah... ...Copy0edit of it is on the horizon and not in the horizon. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30464 | kalab | 2009-01-17 14:09:08 -0800 (Sat, 17 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from Richard peers at Army stagecoach. ''Must be important to expose.'' ...Copy-edit for peoples' to be people's edit of it is. ...Edit for pole should be for rod because it pole is being used. ...Edit the of. ...Copy-edit the extra period. ...Copy-edit for it should be sigular verb form I feel. ...Copy-edit for the blue stagecoach to be red for the blue isn't yet. ...Edit the word glowing and article to better the words. ...Copy-edit comma and period. ...Copy-edit article to define the gun as it shouuld. ...Edit for Dick nods and doens't shake. ...Copy-edit for the possession isn't needed. ...Copy-edit a mangled Psycho. ...Copy-edit for the verb fume should be plural. ...Copy-edit the possesion of the words because the prose remains and is the same as the following description. ...Copy-edit for a singular verb. ...Edit an of. ...Edit a sentence for verb. ...Copy-edit make to be making as it should. ...Copy-edit for possession of Betty's head. ...Copy-edit to add the period. ...Edit to remove Dupont circle from the words. ...Copy-edit verb to be plural form hang. ...Copy-edit for the a article conflicts with the plural form of a subject. Edit for Eleanor is speaking words that Richard says. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Copy-edit for poll needs to be pole. ...Copy-edit the need for possession of Jo's hand. ...Edit the verb for stand is the state of the people. ...Edit to remove Dupont Circle from the record. ...Copy-edit to write plural. Copy-edit to remove fingers. ...Copy-edit for the plural s is not needed for the standard. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for I feel a comman is wanted....Read aloud and edit to the end. ...Read diff.

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r30454 | kalab | 2009-01-16 22:16:04 -0800 (Fri, 16 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30435 | kalab | 2009-01-14 23:59:31 -0800 (Wed, 14 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and edit from I bring lowball glass to nose. <|George early thirties.> ...Edit bring for raise for it is not better or worse, just what I want. Copy-edit to change faJITa to Larry's FaJITa then change back to faJITa for it isn't proper. I like it without the change, and the record likes it. ...Copy-edit for a period should be a question mark. ...Copy-edit for mouths fills. there is only one mouth. ...Copy-edit for I didn't like the of. ...Copy-edit for it is JIT. ...Copy-edit for the Fajita case doens't fit into the standard for George's Fajita. ...Copy-edit to keep standard of faJITa. ...Edit for the plates are small. ...Copy-edit for and should be at. ...Copy-edit Larry FaJITa to be Larry's FaJITa. ...Copy-edit what I wrote prior. ...Edit for I want Maybe later to be a question and not a stantement. ...Copy-edit for the should be then. ...Edit for Betty didn't use then. It was two sentences. ...Edit for the low is better to be and. ...Edit for George does say your. ...Edit with thought 'warm from stomach' to warmth of stomach then change back in mind to what it is. ...Edit for the point is not a to but an at. Mustang points at food. ...Edit because I now hate the words up. It tells. ...Copy-edit for the now pants' standard. ...Edit sentence of George walking around tables by removing it for he doesn't. ...Read aloud and edit to end. ...Read diff.

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r30420 | kalab | 2009-01-13 21:25:01 -0800 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit -v-'s copy-edits. ...Edit -147,6 +147,8 by writing a bit more thought to show all are nano. It should and will be enough to define the question raised by Valerie. ...Edit -525,9 +529,11 to have the nano be nano drops like some mass of nano that constitutes some think. Like the ceiling is falling apart. I changed it. ...Edit -463,8 +465,10 by leaving it as is for the question about the previous thought should remain because it is a thought. They are weird and not always that clear. ...Edit the copy-edits. Leave the stitches breaking when they do without foreshadowing because that is how things happen. There is no foreshadowing. And it is Dick's plan to remain at the side. I think it should remain. I will of course continue to think of this until it is published.

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r30418 | -v- | 2009-01-13 20:45:29 -0800 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edits of -v-. I note from -v-: hmmm....it's sort of too convenient how the seams on his backpack suddenly break right at that time. did you mention anything earlier about how the pack to sort of "foreshadow" that I missed\?

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r30401 | kalab | 2009-01-12 22:53:40 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from A Secret Sentry pulls Secret Sentry rickshaw. They yell, ,,MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! MOVE...'' ...Edit for only one Secret Sentry. ...Edit for the object should be singular stagecoach. ...Edit for 18th should be eighteenth. ...Copy-edit for caps of K and M. ...Copy-edit extra period. ...Edit for a verb. It needs to be. ...Copy-edit for K and M twice. ...Edit for. ...Read aloud to end. read diff.

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r30389 | kalab | 2009-01-12 16:01:57 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud and record from beginning. ...Edit-copy for the apostrophe for I made it some possession standard from mistakes. Fuck the prose I suppose\? ...Copy-edit for plural version of the verb. ...Copy-edit aphostrophe for possession standard. ...copy-edit for case. ...copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...fuckings caps. ...Edit to show where it was from...Copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...Copy-edit fucking caps. ...Edit for object subject. ...Copy-edit for singular form of verb. ...copy-edit for Matrix YouI. Read aloud and record. ...read diff.

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r30383 | kalab | 2009-01-12 12:15:53 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from beginning. ...Copy-edit periods for commas and space. ...Copy-edit hyphen. ...Edit for the article is not needed in the speech. ...Edit for it is nothing and not something. Nothing. So dick something. ...Edit for Psycho says killing machines. ...Edit for they work for Secret Sentry. ...Copy-edit for it is Two-way mirror and not window. ...Edit for there was no verb. ...Edit dinner for lunch then remember the secondary target eat dinner because they eat first shift. This is their dinner, so leave dinner and don't change to lunch. ...Edit Dupont Circle from talk. That could trigger. ...Copy-edit for he doesn't feel hallow. ...Read aloud to end. ...REad diff.

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r30381 | kalab | 2009-01-12 10:41:47 -0800 (Mon, 12 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read aloud from beginning. ...Edit for up is not needed with the better ceiling. I like the change, but it wasn't needed. ...Edit not needed and I would have this, but why not have the flow go forth a bit more here. Rid of the 'to' and have it be The Dective Store entrance. ...Edit for there is only one Vibration and it crescendoes with an e. ...Edit for the verb needs to be plural without s. ...Copy-edit for the pattern. ...Copy-edit creek for creak. ...Copyedit for verb to of plural form for there are voices. ...Edit for I want entrance. ...Read aloud to end. ...That was odd. Saying the sentence was weird. I like the sound, but it felt weird being spoke.

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r30363 | kalab | 2009-01-11 21:58:17 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit -v-'s copy-edits. ...Edit -75,7 +75,7 for the I is needed and wanted.

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r30361 | -v- | 2009-01-11 21:48:13 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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r30356 | kalab | 2009-01-11 16:40:23 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for case. ...Copy-edit for name of wall. ...Edit to The door is open.

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r30354 | -v- | 2009-01-11 16:24:19 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit by -v-. A comment from -v-: I found this chapter sort of confusing, but maybe it won't be as confusing once I read more\?

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r30350 | kalab | 2009-01-11 14:36:55 -0800 (Sun, 11 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Read from beginning. ...Edit for dim is with brighten. ...Edit eyelids close to eyelids cover eyes, but that is standard not analytical word needed, so revert to open and close. ...Edit for it needed to be flutter. Blink is something they always do. ...Edit by thinking of the use of Democrat and Republican and those not be words that would trigger a terror search or new record. They remain for they would be removed because the parties wouldn't want their records to change thereby maybe setting a trigger of lots of terrorist thought. ...Copy-edit for two-way needs a hyphen. ...Copy edit one way to be switched for the more common two-way as used before. ...Copy-edit possesive of shorts'. ...Copy-edit to it is two way. ...Read to the end. ...Read the diff. ...Edit for all two-way to be of the mirrored wall for that is and will be the common term. ...Read the diff.

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r30320 | kalab | 2009-01-10 14:24:16 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits of -v-. ...Edit -219,7 +219,7 back to the original for the complete sentence wasn't heard. ...Edit -779,7 +780,7 because we both missed a word that needs to be intersection. ...Edit the copy-edits of -v-.

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r30316 | kalab | 2009-01-10 13:36:11 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-Edit to check for dialog mark. ...Copy-edit comma for a period for it is needed. ...Copy-Edit to check for dialog mark.

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r30309 | kalab | 2009-01-10 11:21:49 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Copy-edit the comma before dialog mark that is better as a period, but not wrong if a comma. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks.

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r30303 | kalab | 2009-01-10 08:57:00 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits. I will look at the diff between -v-'s copy-edits and the following files as I hastily made changes to the file. ...Edit to change the edit at -63,13 +63,13. I like the If. I can see how it could be thought to be different. ...Edit the paragraph describing the tap. I had to change the flow and the words. I did send the change of the paragraph ot the copy-editor but have not heard back, so I will input the change. ...Edit the sentence that confused Valerie with the use of tap. I can see how it is confusing possible, so I have removed words for now it seems that the thing being ensured is access and not tap. The access is what is wanted to.

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r30301 | kalab | 2009-01-10 08:26:35 -0800 (Sat, 10 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit copy-edits. Edit -219,7 +219,7 for be not need be. Want the though as it was. I resisted of replacing the period with a space and for. ...Edit copy-edits.

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r30285 | -v- | 2009-01-08 22:09:05 -0800 (Thu, 08 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edits of -v-.

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r30257 | kalab | 2009-01-06 22:05:26 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit the copy-edits. I found no issues with the copy-edits. I did find a case of a word to be incorrect which was a copy-edit. I did see that here was an extra space which was removed.

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r30255 | kalab | 2009-01-06 21:44:32 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for internal and external dialog marks. No issues or error found beyond space.

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r30253 | kalab | 2009-01-06 21:32:00 -0800 (Tue, 06 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks and internal dialog marks.

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r30229 | kalab | 2009-01-05 20:58:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Copy-edit for jester says and not the, or both, jesters say. This will improve the flow of the words. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks. ...Edit for says Psycho for it need be. ...Copy-edit for dialog marks.

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r30218 | kalab | 2009-01-05 15:23:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Copy-edit the singular verb that needed to be plural. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Copy-edit one that should be on. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Edit for I want Betty to say. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. Copy-edit extra scan thought needed but not. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. Edit because the dialog was weird. ...Copy-edit dialog mark.

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r30210 | kalab | 2009-01-05 10:58:40 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit copy-edits. ...Edit -5,13 +5,13 for I was confusing. This is correct, but I also want possesion. ...Edit -191,7 +191,7 for it is If and not Is. ...Edit -225,7 +225,7 because copy-edit was too confused and needed to edit. Edit for verb to be fume. ...Edit -259,7 +259,7 to leave it thought it confused the patterns seen by the copy-editor. -v- is correct that the pattern is good. I like the comment. It makes me feel more comfortable focus is had. I did leave the words because there is not sight and everything went more silent because of the strobe flash. It is a beginning of a pattern that a cheer becomes. ...Something. I think I wll leave it. ...Copy-editor comment for -385,7 +385,7 and -497,7 +497,7 show me a reaon of the reasons the sentences are written as they are written. ...Edit -1035,7 +1035,7 is an edit I made after sending -v- the words for this should be shorts.

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r30206 | kalab | 2009-01-05 09:47:13 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Copy-edit for a period. ...Edit for the elipsis to be of the echo. ...Copy-edit for the additional period that is just hanging out there. ...Copy-edit staps to stabs for the correct word. ...Copy-edited two ares for one are. ...Edit too much and have to pains to satisfy the plural form of the verb and not to convulute. The prose is gone. I do regret, but won't change. ...Edit the grab and the how to get into position to fix the ankle for it was crap. ...Edit to write more of the broken teeth. To show and feel. Then the body tenses. ...Edit for two sentences both to show the slow process and to show the movement and thought of it. The focus. The center light to a beam. ...Edit to write of beam and tell then show. It is a telling. Is is a telling. ...Edit for the waves flow through something and not over or on something. ...Copy-edit for singular verb form. ...Copy-edit a comma for a period for it is two sentences. ...Copy-edit to keep the subject of the paragraph the same. ...Edit to write of the stap that is held and released. ...Edit for thought to be for all of the wall. ...Edit to better flow the ripple. ...Copy-edit for singular verb. ...Edit verb for move is better. ...Edit for to I like more than toward, right now. ...Edit for hangs is enough. ...Edit the verb for scurry is okay for now. this could be edited too much. ...Edit to move the words to focus on the forarm then Psycho. The pain is all but numb. ...Edit to the end.

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r30199 | kalab | 2009-01-05 05:52:18 -0800 (Mon, 05 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from and to the end. Edit because I am editing 1101 and wanted to read the end then had another question of through and now know it should be into for the mass is unknown and felt that way by Dick.

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r30186 | kalab | 2009-01-04 15:14:50 -0800 (Sun, 04 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit walk instead of walk. ...Edit because the sentence wasn't complete enough for Psycho. ...Edit the verb to be one verb. ...Copy-edit because I wrote follow and not flow. ...Edit to show the intersections. ...Copy edit for the object is signs and this is English. ...Edit for the foot and water is the basic and I want the basic. ...Write of intersection pool. ...Edit for the left to right is the way. ...Edit for the time is to waste. ...Edit scan for look for I have questioned scan more than once to being too non-human machine. ...Edit because the sentence needs a verb. ...Edit to end.

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r30176 | kalab | 2009-01-04 07:00:31 -0800 (Sun, 04 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginnig. ...Edit by writing the dialog of I early to show truth beyond recorded data or created data. This shows that Mustang can be felt to be likely dead because Psycho as a learining being has learned from it. ...Edit for a thought to be of I. ...Edit kill for death because the probability is of Mustang dieing. ...Copy-edit dialog marks to show continued speaker. ...Edit for the scen has a thought of dick. One of anger and mortal humor. ...Edit verb step for walk to then remove the sentence. ...Edit the show of the shout. I thought to remove, but wanted, I only needed to show the build up to the shout. Then the shout showed the release of anger and tension. The body reacting to the reality. The release with words. This reads better. ...Copy-edit by removing an extra can. ...Copy-edit dialog mark. ...Edit to better write Psycho's dialog. ...Copy-edit for process kill is some standard. ...Copy-edit dialog marks. ...Copy-edit dialog marks. ...Copy-edit case of word to be lower for it is not the beginning a proper noun or needed for speech. ...Edit for the transmit will be a question. ...Edit for the dialog is not needed. ...Edit to <|The womb.

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r30163 | kalab | 2009-01-03 16:19:19 -0800 (Sat, 03 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit scrap for scrape for that is it. ...Copy-edit for the verb has more of an object than up. ...Edit for the subject is of no mind. Only action. No thought to be read for entrapment. ...Edit for there is a flow chart. ...Copy edit for the case to show a scream\! ...Copy-edit for there is no need for a possesive apostrophy. ...Edit for a better verb. ...Edit to remove all the words supporting what was first I but won't be until the death of Mustang. ...Edit to write dialog of Dick asking about the darkness. ...Edit to write of the need to have Psycho look at sigint. ...Copy-edit for to follow one must lead. ...Edit to move the thought to the questions and the questions of Mustang. The question of how he is. The report then follows. I like the long thought then the question of wase from some where. ...Edit for waste, so the thought of waste of data and time to be the waste of dump question then hte question of Mustang. ...Edit to end.

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Edit from Richard's jaw pulses. He peers at Eleanor. He huffs. All windows are down. ...Copy-edit because Eleanor dialog continues. ...Edit for the turn of the head is a turn and not a whip. ...Copy-edit there for their. ...Copy-edit a period for a comma becaused the verb says needs an object in the sentence. ...Copy-edit for walk along is not needed for walk sidewalk is enough. ...Copy-edit for it was redundant. ...Edit for it is not across. ...Edit for the formation to be a Two by Two. ...Copy-edit for foward is gone. ...Edit to end.

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Edit from Army soldiers shine flashlights' lights on the peoples' faces. Jo's window is down. Dick's window is down. Betty's window is down. ...Edit the of from the book. One too many. ...Edit for Eleanor's window is down. ...Edit to have the left and right instead of side written. ...Copy-edit for singular verb. ...Edit to define what clears the intersection with direction. ...Edit and write to define the scene as seen and defined to know where the movement is and is not.... ...Edit for forward should be forth that is the direction for now. ...Edit to remove forward for it is known and not change. The movement defined. If it moves back then maybe it would be needed. ...Edit for mass will make in logical. Fills like a mass to be in. People are between. ...Edit to remove okay words with fewer good word. ...Edit for the drone stare happens if their eyes remain open. George Betty won't caste drown stare for their eyes are closed. ...Edit for the elbow press and do not hold. ...Copy-edit the possesive to be correct for People. ...Copy-edit another forward for the edit has been made. ...Edit to remove eyelids for eyelids blink to just blink. Blink defines the action. ...Copy-edit to have the singular form of the verb. ...Edit of removing the to for an and and remove another word. ...Edit becaus I can. I don't think I have made this better or worse by removing words. ...Copy-edit forward for forth for that is the edit. ...Copy-edit forward from the words for the direction has not changed. ...Copy-edit for out is not known. At is the record state. ...Copy-edit another forward. ...Copy-edit comma for a period. ...Copy-edit period for a comma. ...Copy-edit comma for a period because there is no verb for the object dialog. ...Edit to The blue and red spoked stagecoaches roll in left lane and right lane with a muffled, ,,Move, move, move, move...''

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r30143 | kalab | 2009-01-02 22:17:12 -0800 (Fri, 02 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from ''I love America,'' says Richard. Jo's window is down. Dicks' and Betty's window is down. ...Copy-edit for They. ...Edit to write of drone stare. ...Edit to make a fragement a sentence for eyes opening wide. ...Edit flash for blink for flash should be used more for strobe pulses and other light. I like the blink. ...Edit the rolling down of window because it is down already and I have not read of Betty rolling it up. It was down when they entered after dick leaned through the door frame to talk with Jo. ...,,I hope to leave it some day,'' says Eleanor.

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r30113 | kalab | 2009-01-01 14:34:33 -0800 (Thu, 01 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit from subprimary should be subprime target. ...Edit for I am like think to before see. See is more jaded. ...Copy-edit additional word. ...Copy-edit a plural that is no or a possesive that is not. ...Copy-edit a plural. ...Copy-edit the dialog mark. ...Edit to write of the drying of the sweat. It is noticed. ...Edit for the two sentences should be one for he does sit. ONly verb is needed. ...Edit to make the double subject the second object. ...Copy-edit e from plural stackes. ...Copy-edit to ass the s to glasses. ...Copy-edit a space missing between words. ...Copy-edit a comman to a period. ...Edit to better show the subject of the tray. ...Copy-edit for the object is a FaJITa. ...Copy-edit because the fajita should be singular. ...Edit to show the Richard biting. ...Copy-edit to add a c to excitement. ...Copy-edit all FaJITas to be lower case faJITa if not used with Larry. ...Copy-edit question mark for a period for it is s question. ...Copy-edit another c for exciting. ...Edit for the drink is whiskey. Better to use whiskey. ...Edit to the end.

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r30104 | kalab | 2009-01-01 06:45:24 -0800 (Thu, 01 Jan 2009) | 1 line
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Edit from High heels click past. Small silver twenty-two caliber pistols are strapped to ankles. ...Edit for the people are sub targets. ...Edit for the pole spins. ...Edit by removing thought not thought. ...Edit and write the subprime words and write of the secondary targets. Edit to make sure the terms are consistent and use loosely and not as often for there is deconditioning. ...Edit for the target of secondary. ...Edit for a complete sentence of Psycho talk. ...Edit for case and for the new word subprime targets. sub targets would have to be for there is a uniform way of classifying. ...Edit for Dick does think of clue people. ...Edit for Psycho uses full name. ...Edit for the focus to be football. ...Remove useless thought and action. ...Edit for the drop isn't a drop until it falls. ...Edit for space or empty feel to be told. Shown that most walk way and some few walk through. ...Copy-edit for mom and not mon. ...Edit thought from the thought of propaganda. The opening sentence outside the flow when it should not. ...Edit to have dick standing for it is a big cone but not that big or it is or is not. I just like the idea of standing and thinking then walking. ...Edit to move a sentence for space to make having a similar sentence on purpose. A double take back. Or athought back. ...Edit for surround means a complete circle or to encompass. I feel it much for the tables outline. Tables fill sidewalk and the people are not numbered. ...Edit for Dick doesn't yawn. ...Edit to show Dick slow stepping through the mass of people. ...Edit to the end.

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r30053 | kalab | 2008-12-28 13:23:12 -0800 (Sun, 28 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit the Propaganda Bomb and how Dick recovers from it. The bomp is like a strobe flash or sound or smell. It tries to disuade and have think of the other things or inhanse a thought to catch the act. It doesn't really make one for get just change focus. It is like a strobe pulse, but isn't the same, so I wanted the difference to be read. I will need to read over what was edited and written. I think I like it better. When I read it I don't feel the same thing is happening, but it is near complete. This is going. I don't know. I feel it better. I did feel when I read it last night and the time before that the propaganda bomb may need editing. I have decided to do it. It did lessen the work couunt too. Less is more for the Propaganda Bomb.

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r30033 | kalab | 2008-12-27 01:24:32 -0800 (Sat, 27 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the self mock. The words now flow from the beginning. The beginning didn't flow or go anywhere. ...Edit by write words for people. ...Edit to spill a verb. ...Edit by writing more of people. ...Edit for it si a curb corner. Curb is the object. ...Edit and write to show the passing of vehicles and the empty road. Emtpy feels fitting of the cross. ...Copy-edit the verb to be plural. ...Edit for humidity is the word the other words tried to define. ...Edit by remove sentence of another story. ...Edit to show the focus and not tell of it. ...Edit to <|White oak.> Trees grow from open quagmire holes. White oaks grow between sidewalk and vehicle gardens.

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r30018 | kalab | 2008-12-26 13:44:47 -0800 (Fri, 26 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit a period to end a sentence. ...Edit up from sit up for sit up feels redundant. ...Copy-edit for heat should be heart. ...Edit and write thought of maybe Psycho being next killing machine. ...Edit for the vibration is no more. The sentenece needed to be removed. ...Copy-edit to remove old verby. ...Edit up for lift up is redundant. ...Edit and write the complete step. ...Edit to remove see for think. See is more jaded. See will be used. Think is much better for The Detectives Store. ...Edit to the end.

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r30009 | kalab | 2008-12-26 00:05:35 -0800 (Fri, 26 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the action of head up and down is too much. It doesn't happen. ...Edit object and remove words. ...Edit to The white door is closed.

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r30007 | kalab | 2008-12-25 23:29:18 -0800 (Thu, 25 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit had for it is too proper and redundant for G-43. ...Edit to write of how secret sentry removed parents fast. ...Edit the dialog to make better for psycho. ...Edit and write talk of doubt. ...Copy-edit for way of editting. ...Edit for the close of eyelids is a body action. ...Edit to remove dialog of dick for it need not and is not. ...Edit and write the direction and the definition. ...Edit and Write of think to and the mark to have it be as it should. ...Edit for Psycho stepping to show movement to walk. ...Edit sentence from because it need not be. ...Edit for Dick is at a stand. ...Edti for the peer is a look. ...Edit have the current be written of it is the current objective. ...Edit for Betty steps. ...Edit to end.

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r29994 | kalab | 2008-12-25 14:56:37 -0800 (Thu, 25 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Copy-edit for a comma for a comma is needed. ...Copy-edit for Panels is part of the proper name. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is the same action of the sentence paragraph before. ...Edit to write of the red bow tie because it needs be. ...Edit for the Army line is a row. ...Edit with for along for the dance is along. ...Edit to A jester thrusts pelvis close to extended congov sole. A jester dances along Always people line.

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r29970 | kalab | 2008-12-24 16:06:07 -0800 (Wed, 24 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to write of touching the pad thereby getting rid of an of and being more direct for the pad then glows. ...Copy-edit to replace a period with a comma. ...Edit and write the words to show there is some action that result from Jo want Dick to be gone having heard some of the dialog and remembered it after the sound drone emitted sound. ...Edit for the light blink more than flash. ...Copy-edit comma to period for it should be a period. Edit to write over because they don't jostle with the street. ...Edit for the sidewalk edge is a curb. ...Edit for the talk is before the location for the subject must be followed by a verb for best comprehension. ...Edit for the house is not. A building is. ...Edit for the outer lines are two, so the verb must be plural. ...Edit for the Army lines word need not be. ...Copy-edit to change the case of Taxi to taxi for it is not a proper noun. ...Edit dialog of Psycho for Psycho shouldn't say wonder or you. Wonder is to metaphoric. ...Edit for the words to walk to the center of the sidewalk felt weird. They felt bad, so I have changed them. ...Edit The from subject for there is no sepecific subject. ...Edit to Oil smoke flows past.

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r29896 | kalab | 2008-12-18 21:14:15 -0800 (Thu, 18 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from The taxi rolls forward upon rubber street between rubber sidewalks. ...Copy-edit for dialog mark. ...Edit for the rubber is not needed. ...Copy-edit parts from sentence. ...Edit for the safety tube is the detonation tube. ...Edit for the subject to begin a new sentence before the dialog screamed. ...Edit to People chatter. Organ pipes blow. Bass bumps.

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r29842 | kalab | 2008-12-16 07:07:48 -0800 (Tue, 16 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit and remove words of Psyhco reporting. ...Edit and remove words of Dick, Psycho talk about this and that. It doens't happen. Psycho in reporting phase and not to Dick just to log. There is no reason for the dialong. ...Write the report of Psycho knowing of government wanting to kill Psyhco. ...Edit to remove more dialog of Psycho that doesn't exist. It need not for it is (are) reports. ...Edit to remove the rolling down of Jo's window for it is down. Edit for the intersection description to be better. The lighting bad. The intersection more descriptoing. The people of the truck around. ...Edit to show the traffic flowing across. ...Copy-edit for reflection. ...Edit to ,,You love to spend government money,'' says Eleanor.

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r29815 | kalab | 2008-12-15 08:31:24 -0800 (Mon, 15 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit becuse plural walls is too much. ...Copy-edit an s for Psycho. ...Edit for the shuffle is better with. ...Edit for the tapping is a bit much. ...Edit to write people line to define. ...Copy-edit d for s. ...Edit to write color. ...Edit for the type of fish is known. It is more than just fish. ...Edit look direction. Seen not need to be told. ...Edit the of. ...Edit the sentence to better show Better talking and showing name to face for the man with wavy hair. ...Edit to write of the shake. ...Edit dialog from words for they are not needed. ...Edit for one sits on. ...Copy-edit for quote. ...Edit for at Now is all that is needed. ...Copy-edit a n from the word at. ...Edit to <|Midnight because no imagination.>

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r29797 | kalab | 2008-12-14 12:42:19 -0800 (Sun, 14 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to remove a space from beginning of sentence. ...Edit to change the words seen to read to further clarify a question had of -v-.

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r29785 | kalab | 2008-12-14 04:40:49 -0800 (Sun, 14 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit pants for shorts because it needs to be shorts. I thought this edit though I have sent the chapter to -v-. I want this changed. I am now editing the next chapter, and I questioned if I wanted the apostrophe after the s for shorts' pocket and remembered that I used the words pants for this chapter.

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r29780 | kalab | 2008-12-13 22:28:35 -0800 (Sat, 13 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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A beep beeps, and a buzz buzzes.

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r29764 | kalab | 2008-12-13 12:26:02 -0800 (Sat, 13 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Government. Police. Help? Shot?> ...Edit for the sounds is from building. ...Edit for plural. Mint is the smell of the fade. ...Edit into for it is redundant. ...Edit to write smilar action. The flow beter. ...Edit thought of day for it is not needed. Why thinking it\? There are other way to think and focus. ...Copy-edit for they. ...Edit for upon is better than across. ...Edit to remove catch for it was confusing. It confused. ...Copy-edit for quote. ...Edit for the fume is betterl. The smell is unique of each. ...Edit for fume is better. ...Copy-Edit by adding a comma for the dialiog after the verb. ...Edit for weave is to much a metaphor. This is not a tapestry. ...Edit the name for it is too near proper and Vert is derived because the sign might be covered. ...Edit the words from because without pause is not needed. ...Copy-edit for a plural verb. ...Edit for one inhales to smell. ...Edit for drips and drops is redundant. ...Edit for a plural links for links should be plural. ...Edit and leave the Calvert instead of it being Vert because the sign isn't named and it isn't some local name that is a metaphor. ...Edit for the metaphor turn left for running is not needed. There is not driving. ...Edit for yellow dots appear for they appear. It need not be seen. ...Edit by removing sweep for bikes don't sweep. ...Edit to Shadow extends then contracts, <|to me.> Cars roll past.

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r29671 | kalab | 2008-12-06 21:24:23 -0800 (Sat, 06 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit for a verb with is. ...Edit for the verbs are all that are needed. ...Edit to write plural verbs. ...Edit to have some thing between teeth. ...Edit for the size of the bowl definition is a thoughts size of. ...Edit to remove words of action of it is shown for Dick to be looking. ...Edit for Dick can't stand for the left knee is stiff and doesn't bend and the pain is felt when the right is moved to stand. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit by removing more words. ...Edit to the end. This likely the end. A quick spell check and a search and replace until it is to the copy editor.

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r29634 | kalab | 2008-12-02 22:29:23 -0800 (Tue, 02 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. Edit to remove space and up.

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r29623 | kalab | 2008-12-01 22:28:54 -0800 (Mon, 01 Dec 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit for the doesn't open isn't something I really like because doesn't is, well, not feeling good. I did write the thought. ...Edit for is closed for that flows better. ...Edit to remove useless sentence. ...Edit to decrease thought for the thought need not be. The simile is pointless and not thought with such grace or mocking during this moment. ...Edit remove object because the thought needs to be quick. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit for hisses is better than filles. ...Edit to remove more words of redundant description. ...Edit to removed useless thought. ...Write during exhale more thoughts of words. ...Edit for the turn off and turn on metaphores sucks. Dark is. Light is. Are better. ...Edit for one word thought is better. ...EDit for steel-grate and check U.S. Intranet for it. ...Edit for Case that is the name of the system. ...Edit to try to have something of a mixed metaphor with square spiral. ...Edit to end.

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r29603 | kalab | 2008-11-30 15:19:28 -0800 (Sun, 30 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit for confirmed dead is the term of Psycho. ...Edit for killed is the process. Dead is the result. Psycho should speak in terms of process. ...Edit for the though is not. The felt or record picks it up. The Over me. was too telling and felt like an echo. ...Edit for the action is while or before Psycho says No. Psycho doesn't wait to replay so the Psycho says was written. ...Edit to show thinking of water to not think of action instead of tell. ...Edit for the thought. I think I removed it for some fucking dumb reason. It has been written because it's hard not to think of the act to begin the sub thought. ...Edit words of Psycho for the second dialog is the only dialog that is needed to be. ...Edit for there are no shadows on K. ...Edit for the thought of Mustang's death to be of an effect. Then a nothing is. ...Edit a nothing is by removing it. The one written prior is better placed for the story. The was an easy edit to complete. ...Write to show the movement of rickshaw. ...Edit because the step is already written. ...Edit because the telling is not needed after the show. That is why it is of record. ...Edit for attached can be assumed or shouldn't be assumed. ...Edit to move description before the set of the rickshaw for that is felt before the calm before the focus to rickshaw begins. ...Edit for the idea a tone is needed. And because the use of ring is greater than tone and less words ring will be used. ...Edit to remove Alarms thought for it is not needed, not a focus and too telling. ...Edit by writing of the pain to show the ring and the pain has spread. ...Edit to remove redundant words of description that also slow the story down. ...Edit to the end.

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r29590 | kalab | 2008-11-30 06:40:29 -0800 (Sun, 30 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit because the Benjamin doesn't exclaim. ...Edit to move words for the scan happens sooner. ...Edit to remove the words of the epithet then see United States of America, and the past life, demands it be of the book. ...Edit for the stagecoaches are purple and wheels maybe not seen. ...Edit for Dick needs to stand after the thought not dead yet. And I want Dick to sit for a moment. He has had a busy night. Feels safe with Army near and just wants to relax and be calm. ...Edit for what is of the record is when standing, so I moved words to read only of. ...Edit for look for Dick need not stare. ...Edit to better show dick leave the position of Mark and read. ...Edit to better use the given definition and description to show the jester being shocked and put down. ...Edit to have Dick show a thought that remaining in a sheltered is safe for it will keep the Psychos away. ...Edit to remove sentence for only the drop is noticed. ...Edit to show the sweating progression in the uniform sweat with the definition. ...Edit to remove thought of clue people for it is already been thought. He has the thought of we which is what catches Dick's mind. ...Edit to Drones hover. White, red, blue light pulses from drones.

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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to show that there is separation of the congov. ...Edit for jostle is enough to define the movement. ...Edit to removed the of for rattle and thumb for it may confuse. ...Edit to better define the filling of space with fewer words and better order. ...Edit for I lean is enough to define. ...Edit to use the proper name of the formation and using standing to make things better. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit for lean is better than lower and used before. ...Edit to Blue, blue, blue shines from Always windows.

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r29554 | kalab | 2008-11-29 08:49:13 -0800 (Sat, 29 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,Is the Reagan Hotel still the only building taller than the Washington Monument?'' says Richard. ...Edit the use of no. And if there is no red light that assumes maybe another light...Editing too much. ...Edit for the rickshaws to climb for it is the last logical edit that began last edit near the end. This edit may bee too much. ...Edit another of the light for Intersection is clear and then leave the no read light is. ...Edit to show what is meant by congov because there are many Contractor government. Most are. And write sentence for the effect of the transformation to active congov. ...Edit to show more of Jo staring and not forgetting. ...Edit for the congov to be specific to show that most are congov and a lot are S.S.. ...Edit because the topic would arise between Betty and Richard. This could be too much of an edit again. I don't think it makes it worse, but really how much better. I fucking added a lot of words. That's questionable. ...Edit to remove words to balance. Makes the tension between Richard and Eleanor better. ...Edit to check Murder of as a group for crows. ...Edit for it is do and not did. ...Edit to remove words that read redundant. ...Edit for the general buildings is enough for the variety is much. ...Edit because I read of one for one and I think of the need to show active S.s. and then active can be told. Or tell then show. ...Edit to remove the active S.S. and write only of S.s. being seen by Richard. That willl define the congov. i feel better having changed the words back before the edit earlier. ...Edit to better define the congov and people. This is picky, but a good edit. Once that is not needed, but does make things better though more words have been written. ...Edit to write the continuing look of Jo at Dick and the desire for the small business to just be rid of the mess and hope for the government to work with. The club does the same thing. Dick is also nicer, so its hard to hate. ...Edit to the end.

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Edit from ,,Now they're not secret,'' says Richard. ...Edit dialog of Richard by removing for he need not say. ...Edit the move sentences to write a verb and have flow and better define the sound. ...Edit for jostle is needed. ...Edit for dick wouldn't want to use a word lie objective. ...Write the light. ...Edit for the foces to not be told but be shown to those who have the record. ...Edit the roll of the blue stange coach for I hate even as something that defines. ...Edit to Jo lifts hand at blue stagecoach. ,,You move.'' His palm presses steering wheel's center.

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r29487 | kalab | 2008-11-24 22:57:02 -0800 (Mon, 24 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from <|Government contracts.> ...Edit to better the words of the action of Jo putting money under mat. ...Edit thought for short more natural flow. ...Edit space of thumps and car to be none. ...Edit for street lamps. ...Edit because the Jester shouts. ...Edit to People chatter. Organ pipes blow. Bass bumps.

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Edit from Eleanor shrugs and slides Larry FaJITa slice in mouth, chews. ...Edit for the chew to be swallowed. ...Edit to remove words that are not needed for the words define an action yet to take place. ...Edit to write the words other places to show the calling for check. ...Edit show discomfort of Eleanor. ...Edit to show some tension. ...Edit to show Dick finishing the scotch. Thought it is needed to be done, so I went back and did some search and found the complete of the drink of the scotch. ...Edit to write better words for the scotch. ...Edit for it is congressmen. ...Edit the end for less is more. ...Edit to the end.

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Edit from <|Bourbon.> ...Edit the description to show the tray and the holding in the first description. ...Edit to move sentence to follow a better flow. Unless all a paragraph. ....Edit for beer column is enough. ...Edit to have the busboy empty the plates from the table top. ...Edit for Dick doesn't need to be directed to look for it is shown, so I removed the unneeded I look. ...Edit to better define the people leaving and entering at a close and timed rate. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit the busboy leaving to show home leaving after the people sit. ...Edit to remove the old instance of busboy leaving. ...edit to have the fume be a perfume for it is pleasant. ...Edit to show Dick critique whiskey then show it love. ...Edit by writing the drinks to be place in the center of the table. ...Edit for the glass to be set before better. ...Edit sentences for the S.S. already has the tray and there is no other tray to grab. ...Edit to Deep peat fumes float. <|In a sea of bliss.>

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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words that put Dick between the vehicle gardens that he already stepped from. Edit more of the words. ...Edit of and better show the vents. ...Edit of. ...Edit the thoughts to focus on vehicle gardens and the hearing and slip of the Army. ...Edit to remove sentence that is not needed. ...Edit case that needed not be. ...Edit to remove plural of lob scan. ...Edit for step up is gone for climb. ...Edit the sight of server and carp, so Dick is on the level. ...Edit to I look up. I step to the third level. <|...Full.>

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Edit from Heart beats fast. ...edit to remove the thought again of the name. For the thought flows from. ...Edit the forwards because they suck. ...Edit thought to be focused on a vehicle garden. The earlier repetition has the command deeper in mind. ...Edit so sweat is not beading or beads. ...Edit for passing is not needed. ...Edit to all lean to show all the action of people. ...Edit words showing shape of people when it is not needed. ...Edit to write of what pulls back on the pull and of the other arm. ...Edit and read fast and thinking about the streets. I looked at google maps to check the walk and the distant and the pace for both the thought. During this edit I made Dick stand more after the indirect strobe pulse. I followed the street to street to 18th and like the increasesed pace. Now I wonder if the focus of the hovercopter is enough. ...Edit to write the street after all is said and done. I counted five streets that need to be for the story to be. I have written one. ...Edit the flap of leaves because the hovercopter is a distant away. ...Edit words for the words are just no needed. Intersection being one of them. ...Edit and write more of the road being used for stagecoaches. ...Write of a road because one is needed. Thought and focus are left. The recording isn't getting much because the focus is vehicle garden and the hovercopter. ...Write of the street. ...Edit to have another street crossing and for that crossing to be S. ...Have the army be on S and not Riggs. ...Edit to show lots of people are slowing the walk. Show Dick now on street as he was. ...Edit to show Dick is standing instead of walk and is moving slow through people. ...Edit to the end the base to remove the walking. ...Edit and read to the end. The end feel the flow. ...Edit the propaganda bomb and the pace of the slow walk. ...Edit the streets. ...Edit to the end.

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r29402 | kalab | 2008-11-20 22:11:32 -0800 (Thu, 20 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from <|Who could it be? If anyone? Enemies?> I walk. <|No money.> ...Edit group from the words for group is defined by people. ...Edit to remvoe the of and give a proper sentence to the shout. ...Edit to <|Always a deep quagmire.>

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The copy-edits of chapter 0001.

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r29337 | kalab | 2008-11-16 15:28:05 -0800 (Sun, 16 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning and for about the first page.

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r29329 | kalab | 2008-11-16 10:15:23 -0800 (Sun, 16 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit to make plural the dogs. ...Edit a comma for it is needed to seperate the object verb. ...Edit thought to better question self and if Psycho is alive. ...Edit to A chimta bangs Go-Go.

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r29312 | kalab | 2008-11-16 06:16:42 -0800 (Sun, 16 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,He was asked for a name by a child during question subprocess of the kill process that still is finding questions that use the process kill to answer.'' ...Edit and move sentence for placement and answer should be quick and not rude to leave Mustang waiting. There is not thought feeling the reason, so move sentence and remove words. ...Edit a 'look at' because the writing of is the showing of the look at near make is a tell. ...Edit to move sentence to the new pace of getting water and pouring. ...Edit a paragraph that feels like too many words and nervousness beyond thinking with talk. ...Edit to ,,Mustang.'' <|Cool and calm Mustang.>

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r29303 | kalab | 2008-11-15 20:14:37 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit for the process and subprocess and process to begin to kill. The edit made the words better. ...Edit the question for it to be a logical question. ....Edit on tangent shit syntax. ...Edit articles and to to make short better. ...Edit to put for verbs. ...Edit articles. ...Edit more process logic through and through. ...Edit to the end of the process thing.

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r29299 | kalab | 2008-11-15 16:39:33 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,The Gee Forty-three calls self Psycho.'' ...Edit yes to Psycho for that type of langauge confuses and is not spoke by Mustang. ...Edit the removing of objects. No need to pull out. This is sort of quick and fast. ...The tos. Psycho for the one wantting in needs to be specified. ...Edit for Mustang questioning is all that is needed and thought. If he completed it like before then it would be a tell and not natural feeling. Weird. Like it was echoed. ...Edit to show and tell of the reason for the agression and push. ...Edit for question to be a subprocess. ...Edit to ,,He was asked for a name by a child during question subprocess of the kill process that still is finding questions that use the process kill to answer.''

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r29288 | kalab | 2008-11-15 06:35:20 -0800 (Sat, 15 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A silhouette group form people. ...Edit Psycho's dialog for it felt off and had...It needed to be better of less metaphoric. ....Edit of and sound for they felt as if they were not needed. ...Edit to write the general types around to match wit known. Or thought to be known. ...Edit for more specifics and write for the coutnach tank. ...Edit of. ...Edit to better write of the corner. More description. ...Edit beyond for in is more descriptive. ...Edit some more vehicle gardens for they feel unneeded after the specifics added. The thought has waned. ...Edit for the corner cafe is a good description to use. ...Edit words from for they are not needed. ...Edit to the end.

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r29261 | kalab | 2008-11-13 21:44:42 -0800 (Thu, 13 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from <|...Policing.> ...Edit to better write the paragraphs of crowd going from uncomfortable and knowing to mindless and secure. ...Edit for words to be short for the on hook is after window for it is outside window. ...Edit to show the reach through window for the hook. ...Edit of for collar and edit for it be a hook. Less words. ...Edit for it need not be of desk corner. ...Edit of and write of the entire olive tree. ...Edit for the thought of mom dad and Mustang fast and quick because the emotion could lose focus and focus is needed for their survival. ...Edit because lights of is just not needed. ...Edit to write cuff links for they are kinky and status symbol. ...Edit for blacksuit group is better than the version with the of. ...Edit bass club beat for there are no ofs and I like better. ...Edit for the smells to be fumes. The overwhelm and are too much of everything. ...Edit to show for knocking with a lot of force to say sorry for they are in a moving mass. ...Edit to remove ofs to better the words. Show of the mass and fumes. ...Edit for the fumes. ...Edit tips of toes for toes are a tip of foot and are enough. ...Edit the page line and the possession. ...Edit the puffs to come from some window. ...Edit the black sleeves with less words and less withs and a better flow. ...Edit to show Go-Go drums. ...Edit because full of is bad. ...Edit to better write and show the push back of the movers. ...Edit a lot of worthless dialog with basic time and good dialog with fewer words. ...Edit the shout then say of movers so it has a flow. ...Edit for by limo description with less words is better. ...Edit to remove the to of on to for it need not be. ...Edit to better the use of direction. With the witty write I will not remove the use of left and right. ...Edit the space for a better flow with the use of left and right. ...Edit to better define the panting or the yards. ...Edit for it need not be wide. ...Edit to better show the bikers with limo. ...Edit for the words of the fumes and sounds to be better edited and after the nothing. ...Edit by moving to better find the flow to run. ...Edit for few words to be of petrol truck. ...Edit pass and past for by for by feels better. ...Edit to remove the stare and have a by vehicle gardens. It is an improvement. ...Edit for look down and below need now be in the same sentence. ...Edit for the path is blocked. ...Edit to People block path.

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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit more pick up for grab is better. ...Edit of and water for less is better and not needed. ...Edit for cub and water flies. ...Edit pickup for grab and have no of water. ...Edit to only have the words that are needed. Only blows. ...Edit for quagmire stench. ...Edited for stench to be removed and moved. ...Edit for a split of sentence. ...Edit for better definition of horn honks. ...Edit for cup action needs to bettern for the grab it is empty already. It will be empty and realized before attempting to drink. ...Edit smell to remove of and have the fumes be. ...Edit ofs. ...Edit for the look to be at window wall. ...Edit for a better way to show smooth which is with less words. ...Edit the places wipe for hit is hot and humid. ...Edit ofs for better flow. ...Edit to the end.

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r29248 | kalab | 2008-11-13 12:02:55 -0800 (Thu, 13 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit a mark error with closing dialog mark. ...Edit of for Wind gust. ...Edit of and removed people for less words. ...Edit of and edit space by making another sentenece. ...Edit to have step for the walk doens't completely define. ...Edit another of and have space to show focus change. ...Edit to remove moves and use a better object. ...Edit end of to remove the of. ...Edit another of. ...Edit because outside need not be written for record. ...Edit for smell of sweat for the smell is read to think. ...Edit end of for less words and on less of. ...Edit of of plane for it need not be. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit to remove thought of locked for it is known by the handle not moving. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit for the dance to slow. Slow is better. ...Edit the pickup. ...Edit more overs. ...edit end of because it is just towel. ...Edit to end. The words read good. A few things to better the book and one the story.

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r29220 | kalab | 2008-11-12 11:50:07 -0800 (Wed, 12 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit for the beginning paragraph to be one sentence for the pace. ...Edit for Dick doen't pull on white door for there is nothing to grip. ...Edit to make the sentences I think I see to be one and show the flow to see. ...Edit to have the sentence of thought come after door opening. ...Edit placement of seeing Psycho with the cube for it is seen and looked for. ...Edit two sentence to one to make the action of rolling Psycho out ot be quick and fluid. ...Edit to remove words not needed. The record will show the direction for tense. ...Edit to show the look down with the seeing of the floor. ...Edit by reading a definition of the taste of cyanide. Then the thought to be written to be shown. ...Edit to show the walls. The action not needed. Less is more. ...Edit sentence from because it is not needed. The thought of Dick maybe taken off cloths need not be had for he has dealt with gas before. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit words from sentences to removed the obvious like saliva from mouth. And remove the thought. The thought not focused on command. ...Edit the space to better show the choas and the emotional pains similar to physical pain. ...Edit space for better flow. ...Edit thought not of the command or not a sudden collection of records to express a subsumed description. To complete the thought. ...Edit to have the command end with a period to enter which is a slow thought. The thought speeds after there is not found command and Dick wants to breathe. ...Edit commas for periods to seperate the commands. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit to have an apostrophy s after handkerchief, but then remove because the record has now compounded the object and may use it as such. ...Edit to make verbless words sentences. ...Edit to make two sentences one. The saliva. ...Edit words by removing useless words that feel and face when the verb pop and the compound object is all that is needed. ...Edit so it is Saliva drips. That is all that is needed, and it is less. ...Edit to remove all the thought of Dick near telling the the thoughts to are commands when it is not needed for the clean are and the light before define this. And Dick doesn't think this for he doesn't need to test he already knows and wants to live. ...Edit question to a thought with no need for an answer. A command or a calm string of words that could be a question. ...Edit by writing a better reason to get out of the cube and not go back up. It is trying to consume or destroy Psycho, but Dick takes the thing out. He steps out and doesn't die because of the fact he wants to help mom and dad. He does believe mUstang dead or beyond hope. ...Edit for the space and the action of the body swaying after the cyanide and now climbing stairs and gove better reasons for the hand to be going along wall. ...Edit to give space and time for the press agianst wall. ...Edit by writing climb for go up. Climb is all that is needed. ...Edit article from thought for thought is quick. ...Edit words from there and here thought to have it be better. I like it better as it is. This works and flows better. ...Edit to give space to the thought to show some place of pain and focus and a light mind. ...Edit of because the dialog is brief near a thought. ...Edit the descrption of sweat for less is more. Let the reader see the sweat. ...Edit to lessen the show of the wiping of head and better show how it is done to only the face. Less words and no ofs, too. ...Edit to have Thought grammar mark. ...Edit to remove words for climb to be less. Edit because I don't want to be looking up all the time. ...Edit to give more space to the step. ...Edit to remove thought about it being an illusion for the thought need not be. It is better without. ...Edit the I turn on because the press the green button is better. I may want to try to remove turn on as an act and words used when having a dial be the on - off. ...Edit to better the words. ...Edit to the end of chapter.

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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit of and center for both are too many words. Edit to have all the fall in one paragraph, so they are near or at the same time. ...Edit to remove sentences I feel are not needed. Richard already sits. ...Edit to free up space. The action happens at or near the same time. ...Edit disconnect of then realize it is what I want. ...Edit and write to better and show a diesel engine. ...Edit to better show what is pulled by having two subjects. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit an of. ...Edit to better write the definition of the army and show the standard name. ...Edit to The giant drill tip slowly rises from long semi-trailer with six three-jointed legs. <|The size of building beams.>

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r29180 | kalab | 2008-11-09 15:10:48 -0800 (Sun, 09 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit sentences of rain to remove and add space. Things are distinct. Specific things in focus. Remove the excess definition. The focus is wanning to nothing. ...Edit by writing sentence similar to on removed in a span after nothing for after nothing the focus is specific and abstract. The record knows not how to comprehend the thought. ...Edit space to slow and steady and separate. The mind is slow and the record is unable to define all feelings or word and feeling mix of. ...Edit Body feels for is because is the state of body in mind. ...Edit for space. ...Edit by writing an abstract definition after nothing is like the beginnings of the text record having an understanding of how to translate Dick. ...Edit of. Edit the space. ...Write the thought is calm after possibility of it being a lie. Or is it a lie to self to cope. Or it is not real and only in Dick's mind to trick the system. Or it is a illusion. Or it is real. ...Edit for more space. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is a duplicate and good only once because twice on begins to read into it too much. The more space. And words removed to better the space. ...Edit to have thought become more complex after lots of space. ...Edit for single sentence paragraphs to show the focus the thought the confusion and the love. The intensity and the pain. The fear and the comprehension lost the found. And when found the space becomes more steady and paragraphs have more than one sentence. The intensity now a focus. ...Edit until thought becomes multi sentenced paragraphs.

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r29165 | kalab | 2008-11-08 13:45:38 -0800 (Sat, 08 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words of talk that feels to be too long. ...Edit to lessen the words to define the stride. ...Edit for less words to define the face with the face. ...Edit to replace capture with detain because detain is more of an American word. ...Edit the stopping and starting of the walk to show the losing of focus. ...Edit to remove the words that are not needed. Lessen the amount of thought for thought is framed and skipping in shock. ...Edit of for the of is not needed. ...Edit to remove a sentence that is not needed. ...Edit to show the process of looking but not seeing. ...Edit article for there is more than on pond. ...Edit pond for pool for that is better. ...Edit of. ...Edit to have roll be wrap for it is wrapped. ...Edit the of of pool of water. ...Edit more ofs. ...Edit of and use wall instead of side for side better defines. ...Edit by removing words to show more of a grin. ...Edit to better for the thought by splitting it up and showing body language. ...Edit to remove words that create for a long process of crossing. And edit the words of a sentence by removing them to better the pace and the thought and the story. ...Edit to write to show the darkness and rain being seen. ...Edit the limbs of Psycho over that covers to remove and of. ...Edit to remove ofs. ...Edit to remove the look up. I am tired of look up. ...Edit to remove another of. ...Edit to remove words of movement that to me reads odd. The walkig nead and between and on felt like he was running zigzag. It was not needed so it was removed. ...Edit to remove more words then write words to show the site of the window walled building. ...Edit another of. ...Edit to removed description of the only door on the bloock. because that is shitty definition. ...Edit to ''We will enter with Richard and Betty,''

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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit for the blurr past may need to only be blurr. It feels to be enough. ...Edit for it is between. The spame. ...Edit and write a sentence to show the sidewalk people move to fill space for it is needed. ...Edit timing of silt congov from reading minds to better show the direction and entrap. ...Edit for I felt to have the object be the page, but then I thought that I liked the thigh. ...Edit for pick up to be removed. ...Edit for less words to be. ...Edit for the man to be better defined. Gray, suit and tie. Suited feels to be enough. And the with is gone. I feel the sentence had with overload, and one needed to be removed. ...Edit an of. ...Edit the waring of jacket. The verb put on jacket felt dirty. It was a shitty way for this to be defined. ...Edit sentence to better write of the subjects. ...Edit of and seemingly pointless definition of the tank columns. ...Edit to Lights flash. Windows shake.

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r29094 | kalab | 2008-11-02 15:04:48 -0800 (Sun, 02 Nov 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from ,,Is this it?'' says Betty. ...Edit the lame now subject and thought. ...Edit the talk of Richard now. Show Richard be tense. ....Edit to remove is. Edit to better define the scene and the suits. Suits is a classic. ...Edit the plural of a verb. ...Edit to remove and of and a redundant group. Ten will define. ...Edit to better and show the steam. ...edit the suit row for there is not of and now is shown. The words read better. ...Edit the clash of cymbal to have no of nad use less words to define more. ...Edit and write with suit hall and suits in the paragraphs to better the metaphor, the slang and use less words. ...Edit by removing words. ...Edit more of and there is not need to define edge. ...Edit Ben's dialog for the dialog was shit. Complete shit. So much shit that I think I have wiped up mess, but there could be a stain left. Maybe. ...Edit to the end.

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r29046 | kalab | 2008-10-28 21:16:37 -0700 (Tue, 28 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit of for heads is better. ...Edit to move sound where the sound better flows. The dialog of Betty is after the Always pounds. The sounds of the silent march has better timing. ...Edit to write of Psyhco still not using I. I liked the idea of have a sentence that has no verb. ...Edit the plural to singular subject for the second verb of the sentence. ...Edit to write an of where need. The object begins with row and is of lines. ...Edit to remove words of Soldier for the paragraph as defined that part. This is instructions, commands, remembered. ...Edit boom sound sentence to have a subject and object. The sentence felt not to below using the dialog. Maybe, but I like what is. ...Edit to continue the line and row definition. ...Edit to better place and write the people and the congov. congov huddles are better. ...Edit by writing of the takes to include. ...Edit to better have the motion of the grab and pull of door handle. ...Edit to better show the shaking of finger. ...Edit to show with less words Richard peering at betty. ...Edit two sentences of Dick stopping the walk in. There is not need to stop. What is the reason\? None. ...Edit the though from George's talk for it makes the follow up dialog negetive when it is something George likes. ...Edit stop for silences for it is better. ...Edit for the remove of up for up is given with the showing and the number and the definition. It is down to stepping up stairs. ...Edit take for pull for pull is better and shows more than take. PUll has a motion. ...I edited to George frowns.

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...Edit from I smile. ,,A touch down pass and two interceptions.'' ...Edit name because it felt without flow or something too long and complex to be a flash of created metaphor. Without the name I feel to keep the words. ...Edit the dialog to let the verb say keep commas after verbs of saying. Cap setences and begin a new with the subject and the verb. ...Edit of from the line of. the subject line is weaker than people. That's why I some times hate the of. For this book it is just not how Dick thinks. It is how Psycho thinks. ...Edit the with thumps because it has been written of. ...Edit to better show the incline and decline without being redundant. ...Edit thumps silence for the silence changes for the record to record. ...Edit to try to show the parking circle. ...Edit ot have Richard be explicit about what hotel, so Dick need not. ...Edit to have the act of people be simple like Jostle to show all that has been defined in the previous sentences. ...Edit to write jostle again for it is of the definition, but the definition will be pulled to a stand. ...Edit to move jostle because the walk across street is straight. ...Edit reaction of George because he isn't that impressed having been in D.C. that longest of the four. ...Edit of of with before for that will do. ...Edit to have walk be step for step is better. ...Edit the of to be no more. ...Edit the manifest of congov to better show the congov point out the taxi. ...Edit the approach of congov to better show the congov approach the taxi by removing the sentence. ...Edit to show the drive and not a roll. The edit the Transmission thumps. ...Edit to Jo pulls stick-shift back.

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Edit from Jo looks at my reflection on review mirror. ...Edit ofs of sentence. ...Edit words from dialog of George for a more natural flow and for the chacter's words. ...Edit by removing then says for the two words need not be. ...Edit to move JO's dialog after Dicks. And have Dick answer another question. The stare of Jo will be. ...Edit to make the people walk a line. ...Edit to remove more dialog from Betty. Iread and it stops the flow. No longer. ...Edit for fumes for smells is. ...Edit to have the thump written as it is needed. Edit to have betty not. Sort of continue the flow of thought. The lull that peaks again the lulls. ...Edit to Row house lights dim, flicker then shine.

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Edit from I lay arm on Ash's shoulders. ...Edit for smell of need not be. ...Edit for rolls slowly is not needed. It rolls. ...Edit because the verb part felt odd. It read wierd. Nudge reads better. ...Edit to use proper noun for She would have dfined, but wasn't used. Of course, it is Dick's friends, so her is enough. I then rewrote the word to be she. ...Edit smell of for it isn't need to be told of a smell when one is shown with the verb. ...Edit the between people for that isn't what is needed. ...Edit and write to show the push and the press. ...I step back toward is... ....Edit to show place of grab of Ash. ...Edit the grip and what is grapped and how the grab is loosened. I don't want Dick to pull or pry for he isn't rude. He talks. ...Edit for the hang of arm to be fluid and have a flow. ...Edit the walk to not have a return statement. Step and wedge is enough. ...Edit for action to show with space that Richard only moves after the door is opened. ...Edit betty's additional dialog for it is not needed. Federal is not law. And D.C. has not state law. ...Edit the comma for period to set off the sentence from the dialog. No says or talk verb for a comma. ...The sound and feeling of transmission is felt and heard with the two words sentence. The soft thumps is not good. ...Edit because the whole blue green yellow metaphore of vision confuses in this chapter. ...Edit for the movement of George needs less not more. ...Edit and write George acting and talking. ...Edit to better show the people as a mass instead of a collection of groups. Edit and write to better write the bikers. ...Edit to write the smell of sweat. The smells. ...Edit the thumps sound to be more simple as it should be. ...Edit to better write of the sweat. ...Edit to write to show the people part for the taxi. ...Edit the wind from apple pie fumes for I feel it is not something needed. Less is more here. ...Edit thought after thought and act of hold lungs. Show. Hold breath is too much a metaphor. ...Edit the dialog to better show than tell of what is. I like George dialog now. It doesn't feel to be fill in dialog for something to be edited to be better. ...Edit the thought of dick for better flow and removed thought because the thought metaphor sucks. ...Edit to show George holding a finger up. and trigger a thought of the same action earlier with a simple one. ...Edit and write And to have the thought be at the same isntance as Eleanor Speaking. Or near if not the same time. ...Edit more dialog to better. ...Edit dick's talk to be during exhale. ...Edit to shorten and better dialog. Lost in thought. ...Edit to ,,Thank you.'' I look at saliva spots. I fold handkerchief over saliva spots and put into pocket.

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r28955 | kalab | 2008-10-22 22:26:48 -0700 (Wed, 22 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from Betty blinks, looks at me, says, ,,What?'' and I edit to write the dialog of Dick asking he if he triggers the pulses. Trigger is better. Thought of this during walk. See FunWork212.

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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit of for the cold. ...Edit another of. Is mint feels better. ...Edit to remove the borders and the of and everything. ...Edit the of of Dick's thought for they are not there. ...Edit more ofs more and more and more. ...Edit to remove redundant words about walking people on sidewalks. ...Edit to write me of with of Eleanor's dialog. ...Edit more ofs. Ofs of curbs. ...Edit space to merge a sentence with a sentence to make a paragraph. ...Edit for less fucking ofs. ofs ofs ofs ofs ofs. ...Edit after Betty for near Betty for the words flow better and after read to be confusing. ...Edit to remove more words. ...Edit to Taxi jerks, pops, rolls over street.

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r28902 | kalab | 2008-10-19 15:19:32 -0700 (Sun, 19 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I grab lowball glass. Rim hovers below nose. ...Edit to have the FaJITa to be named. ...Edit to have the lowball glass. ...Edit to have a verb be a verb. BITE is better. Makes the words near good. ...Edit to write the plural as it should be for a drop. ...Edit sentence of busboy corner something to be a sentence one can actually read for it read like shit. Now it reads. ...Edit words from swallows for George doesn't swallow all for he still has some in cheek. I like the words removed for they read as they should. ...Edit for Richard just drinks beer. No more is needed. It is recorded it is in a beer mug, so how else. The words were worthless. ...Edit to complete the name of the food item. ...Edit how the taco is bitten to use less words. ...Edit to write of Richard gagging. Shows the speed and talking and chewing effect. ...Edit to I chew. <|Why?>

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r28888 | kalab | 2008-10-19 07:53:40 -0700 (Sun, 19 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from George and I shake hands. <|Firm. Sweaty.> ...Edit to rewrite the notice and of the wrinkles at outter edges of eye. I really didn't want the of. ...Edit to rid of water and of. for the contents a not known. ...Edit the definition of position to romve the over and place it to known object location. ...Edit water of. I really don't like water of. ...Edit upright for I just didn't like. Read of sitting position and find http://www.medterms.com/script/main/art.asp\?articlekey=25488. So I wrote the sentece Spine is neutral. ...Edit Dick's dialog to define the Larry's FaJITa better. ...Edit of hair lock for the of needed to be removed. ...Edit to remove the words that talk of eye corner and socket. The talk is just too much and not enough and not needed, so I removed most of the sentence and wrote something with less. It feels better. the looking at a stare. ...Edit verb tense. ...Edit by writing to show Eleanor waiting for Now to some how reject or accept the order. ...Edit of of an item. ...Edit case. ...Edit to complete the subject and change table to people for it is the people dick is inspecting for detection. ...Edit by writing what is in the cup. Here I thought about editing all the cup ofs but then resisted. For this is one of the few ofs I think I want. ...Edit into mouth because it read weird. ...Edit table to booth for they are the booth people. that is a better definition. ...Edit of from carafe for there is only one and no of water is needed. ...Edit definition of glass and plactic cups to show tyoe. Then read for a glass to use for drinks. Eleanor's drink glasss is stupid. I read this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cocktail_glass. Cocktail is what was written. ...Edit to have the contents only be defined by slushy. Slushy for the frozen drink. ...Edit the move of the glasses from tray by george to use the new definition and way to show the drinks and not tell. ...Edit by actually writing an of to conform to the cup of water standard. Write to show George licking slush for it is. And he is holding it, so... ...Edit to use location and definition of booth used to define the booth in prior sentences. ...Edit by moving sentence of betty's reply for it happens soon after dick saying or talking. ...Edit to write lowball as the glass type for the scotch. I spread this edit around as far as I edited. ...Edit to <|Acting or uncomfortable.>

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r28871 | kalab | 2008-10-18 10:58:31 -0700 (Sat, 18 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I think, <|People.> I turn chest and slide between standing groups. ...Edit the emit of sound for it wasn't emitting as I wanted it to emit. ...Edit black from words for the color if something of change should have already been seen or define and unless it changed color it lacks the change or the direct focus to of these words. ...Edit thought to remove the ask of time and to keep in flow with the thought. ...Edit the thought to have better flow and use the slang scan fear. ...Edit to remove of and remove the unwanted word of soft. ...Edit athought of it is focused on football. The recording of the sounds is enough. It maybe annoying, but not worth the further expression. ...Edit and write their to make the voice theirs. ...Edit the verbs of the sump pumps for one was in the sentence already. ...Edit the other side because other side of street has an of I don't want. The ofs can be used here and there. There have been enough spoke by Psycho to have some influence on record. ...Edit sentences to a paragraph because it is all about the same object. I also want it all of once and have not thought of a squence. ...Edit of from the words for the gardens and the plural are lost. ...Edit I think for that has been written enough. ...Edit the words of seeing for it is not needed. And the words thinking is dumb. Edit the thought to have the end zone be the goal of getting those who care out and preventing Psycho from killing or making it appear like he wants to stop. Thought thought is so thought these days. ...Edit of group because three is used and there is no need to group three if is defined. And there was the of. ...Edit of and write words as they were written before. The remove the words because they don't feel needed. ...Edit the hoverchopter thought to remove words of action. The thought needs to begin and just go. No record has time or thought of the body. That is its reason. ...Edit to write of a bumper for that is what he steps behind. ...Edit to write the connction of Dick to a position. ...Edit and write the feel and think to have the feeling of setting up the game before. ...Edit thought to flow to remembering the game and the endzone. ...Edit for plural cuffs as he nears Endzone. ...Edit to have plural for two must exist if on were to step between. ...Edit to the end.

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r28853 | kalab | 2008-10-16 22:06:55 -0700 (Thu, 16 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A quagmire around red condominium grows corn. The corn is surrounded by steel chain link fence. ...Edit from for it is not needed. Behind is a location and the of. Begin the sentence as it is now for it shows a flash by being right there. Flash of tells. This now shows. ...Edit to make one word from two for they should be one word. ...Edit words of sound that was not even a sentence. ...Edit to write of fumes for rubber is and odd air. ...Edit the step forward for the walk is enough. ...Edit to write of a whirl and remove the of for a better sentence. ...Edit to write with, and edit made and written of with an unsaved version. ...EDit fore over is better over the road. Edit the flow over for a better verb and the the last sentence to finish it. Through is odd. ...Edit to write a t that was missing. ...Edit to make plural. It reads to me to be plural. ...Edit to have the sentence for showing the big stop. ...Edit then for it is bad for the flow. Edit because behind works here better than with for it completes the showing of the scene. ...EDit to make the sentence a great sentence. ...Edit to ,,Hello,'' I say.

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r28836 | kalab | 2008-10-15 23:57:52 -0700 (Wed, 15 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from A quagmire around red condominium grows corn. The corn is surrounded by steel chain link fence. ...Edit misspelled word. ...Edit for the dance to be with and not to for one dances with another. ...Edit the article for it is not needed. ...Edit verb tense by editing the S. ...Edit and write to rid of and create a better sentence. A sentence now good. ...Edit article and of from the sentence. ...Edit to have the subject be twice and remove words and of to have the subject show and not tell. ...Edit of and make sentence goo to define the passing of subject. Row house I like. ...Write flow of thought. ...Edit after losing place and seaching for place and seeing a space. ...Edit to The cicadas buzz. The buzz rises and falls, rises and falls. ...Edit here and there. I edited this twice, but had a problem with the file ending when I edited and saved this with openoffice. I hope I have all the edits prior. I found most.

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r28781 | kalab | 2008-10-12 16:15:10 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to The tree ring is. ...Edit to remove inner from the tree ring run because it writes as if there are two and not just the inside. And it isn't needed. ...Edit words of Psycho report because Outer is not needed. The area is enough of a Psycho report. Specifics are only upon request. ...Edit sensors to remove and of and better define the sensor location and type. ...Edit comma for period because a period should end the sentence. ...Edit to show the skater pass. ...Edit to show the spin and walk backward. Edit words that follow that are now redundant. ...Edit write the forward toward man-on-horse. The center of the circle. ...Edit top of for roof to be the object. The roof is better than top for a roof is the top of a building. ...Edit sentences to paragraph as it should. ...Edit for top of for roof for it is better. ...Edit to make number of thoughts being read to be different than the amount scanned minutes ago for the parameter has changed and people's position. ...Edit to have another sentence of people. ...Edit stare or kiss to stare and kiss because or means they are doing one or the other. ...Edit and write of the light from the head of dupont. ...Edit of the pole then I wanted to edit of the lamp. ...Edit all lamps to be of pole Lamp pole. ...Edit the flicker of the lights how it is broke and not off. I hated the no light. ...Edit to Lamp pole top scanner lights flicker and dim, brighten.

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r28773 | kalab | 2008-10-12 10:06:07 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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I was looking at maps for the last edit and realized the complete name to being with is Dupont Circle.

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r28769 | kalab | 2008-10-12 06:51:37 -0700 (Sun, 12 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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A thought to have to have Dupont. Without the of for it is that way unless being mocking as it is the next chapter. The add of have of Dupont is to set teh record.

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r28754 | kalab | 2008-10-11 11:37:32 -0700 (Sat, 11 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Smiles fade. ...Edit dialog of Dick talking for it is off. ...Edit the fridge out for the fridge is not. The water is warm and in a cabinet. ...Edit and write of Mustang putting bottle in the cabinet. ...Edit for Mustang to as if all congov. ...Edit Dick's answer to just yes for they know and can talk without need to reask a question. Then edit the yes to a nod, so Dick can swallow. ...Edit words of hair description because they are not needed. ...Edit comma for the period for a comma is needed. ....Edit of water. ...Edit I am to I'm for it flows better. ...EDit to remove the share of stare. ...Edit to write of the tone of the door closing. ...Edit the Thinking Cap. What happened to it. The show of the apartement and character is needed for it. So I added the thought of it. So I wrote I toss Thinking Cap to desktop. Then I read of the thought of Mustang not needing it realizing. ...Edit the words defining the getting of the handkerchief because fewer words are needed and better and make this at least good. ...Edit to have Dick not take the thinking cap for he realizes it won't help and didn't it more out of a nervous unthinking reaction. It made him feel he was doing something. And thought of that when\? When the hell does Dick think of this. ...Edit Thinking Cap for Thought Cap for Thought Cap caps the thought from being read. ...Edit to have a reason to get the Thought Cap now I know what it does now. And this some thing left because he knows it won't matter or work. ...The thought cap is now felt and thought. ...Edit to write the wipe of arm pits. .Edit to write of sound in mind. ...Edit and write of Psycho not using congov. ...Edit dialog of Psycho to have record be read. I read as it should. ...Edit article from the thought. Same is enough. ...Edit to the end.

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r28744 | kalab | 2008-10-10 22:44:23 -0700 (Fri, 10 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Bhangra sonus fades from a shout to a whisper. ...Edit flung for hung for flung is an action or a metaphor for chaotic state. I don't want a metaphor. ...Edit the action on shirt to be better. More of an inspection. ...Edit to question mark a question. ...Edit and write because the flint and steel thing is not this story. I like the match. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit to be better define the light and the candle light. write a better word. ...Edit for the faint is a shitty adjective. Flame is better. ...Edit both of from the words for it need not be. ...Edit for both and now because the words were use less. ...Edit to Sweat drops into box.

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r28726 | kalab | 2008-10-09 23:11:50 -0700 (Thu, 09 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from Vehicle gardens are. <|Aston Martins.> ...Edit the word contain for it was not need. ...Edit path to vehicle garden for it lost me and then I thought that the sidewalk was enough. ...Edit of and words of side of face to be just face. ...Edit to remove and of and better the form of silhouette to group. ...Edit of from roof of because without it the flow is just fine. ...Edit a comma for a period for the period is need before the internal dialog. ...Edit going to move because going is shit and move can be the verb. ...Edit a sentence to better clarify the running across street. ...Edit words 'I think.' that are of no thought. ...Edit another of. ...Edit the ofs of intersection to better the description and rid the words of ofs. ...Edit of and write of talking. ...Edit a sentence to a paragraph. ...Edit to move thought to follow the sentence it needs to follow. ...Edit the smell of burnt hair to remove the of and use a better verb. ...Edit to the end.

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r28692 | kalab | 2008-10-06 23:05:17 -0700 (Mon, 06 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit to The mass expands and contracts. ...Edit plural for only one finger is the focus. ...Edit a then for I don't want the thought to be that fluid. ...Edit of from words for the smell is. ...Edit because the group or large group identifies too many people as if a separate part. The people mass is, so it will be. ...Edit to make a long sentence short with out an of and a better definition. The of killed and built the sentence. ...Edit to change an challenge the verb and shorten the sentence of Dick pushing through/between people. ...Edit sentence of people raising fist at people to show people around and not just infront. ...Edit the site of the arch and write of what is glimpsed while passing. ...Edit to remove shitty prose about sight and gaze and write something fluid and better of prose. ...Edit to attempt to make the black sleeve definition better. ...edit to better write of the menthol steam puiffs out window. Before it read to be redundant. ...Edit top of for there is an of and it is not needed. ...Edit useless verb of are from the talk. ...Edit article the for it is not needed. ...Edit a moment of aware movement and looking and positioning in mind of head to see what is. Right then forward. ...Edit of and make Calvert intersection. ...Edit the removal of a smell of for it is better without. the sentence still whole. ...Edit to show the light shines on people (and street). ...Edit for grease smoke is much better than smell of grease. ...Edit to remove the obvious up and down that is shown. ...Edit to remove an of. ...Edit sky is clear for that should infer that there are no clouds. Less words is better. ...Edit to have fumes and no of. ...Edit to write an and because it is needed. ...Edit another of for people groups is better than groups of people. Ofs are shit for this book. ...Edit a sentence for only one is needed to show the running along the fence. ...Edit an of. ...Edit another of from book. ...Edit another fucking of. ...Edit another of then better write the sentence of the floating bag. ...Edit to Plastic bag expands and floats then falls.

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r28651 | kalab | 2008-10-04 11:38:45 -0700 (Sat, 04 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning. ...Edit the words up for motor up for it is not needed and too much. Makes the words bad. ...Edit and write to show the blinking after the siren begins to show a change of the closed eyelids. ...Edit to better the sentence to have the object action stop. ...Edit exits of for there is an of and it is not needed. Less words. ...Edit out another pick up. Lift is better for this pickup. ...Edit for the beat of mind is as good as heat beat. And heat beat in the sentence flows with focus before and has less words. ...Edit sentences for it conflicts with Dick's relaxing. ...Edit another of because I don't feel it is needed. ...Edit the spread of light to be thought people. Crowd was not what is wanted. it is not how Dick sees people. ...Edit because the door to room is closed. Should it be\? I will check the beginning real quick. I just read. It is open, so this will change. ...Edit to move the passing of plastic drawers and fix the overall action of Dick putting on a shirt. Remove the words that had him opening a plastic drawer for they are now passed. ...Edit sentence to show basket on shelf. ...Edit another pick up. I think I will get rid of them all. ...Edit another pick up for lift. ...edit for the whistle pitch to increase for sound ptich increases. And the pitch of whistle stupid. Because there is a high and a low then increase feels right though raise and lower may be better. I will use raise. ...Edit to write the end of the whistle. ...Edit and write the pull and grab of the ruler. ...Edit of from Dick's thought. ...Edit of dirty door for it is not needed. ...Edit door to be consistent as a clear plastic door. ...Edit lost of ofs in sentence of shadows and silhouettes. ...Edit open by removing of it for it is expected after the push. The thought only had if the door doesn't do what is expected, which is open. ...EDit thought by moving it after a paragraph of description for the flow is better and the words improved after all the description. ...Edit another of ANOTER. ...Edit article for a is better than One. ...Edit space for the sentence is a separate subject from the paragraph is appeared to form. ...Edit and write more of the mass and the people and show the mass with movement and pressure. ...Edit to better write of the drone's hum. ...Edit cloud of for it is redundant and redundant is not wanted. And there is an of. ...Edit the smells for better flow and no ofs. ...Edit the step though the crowd to show and feel the crowd better. Didn't like what was written. ...Edit to People are one mass.

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r28644 | kalab | 2008-10-03 22:28:36 -0700 (Fri, 03 Oct 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from I pivot head up and down and look at center of floating ball of limbs. ...Edit article for it need not be. ...Edit word for stop is enough to define the verb stopped. ...Edit thought for it is not needed for it is shit. ...Edit Psycho dialog to better define Psycho saying in object form and objective form of sentence. ...Edit different because that is not needed so it was removed. ....Edit the remove of all R.O.D.. Removed the sentences of it and the words are better. Feel good about it gone. I hated the with. That sucked but for some stupid reason I allowed it to remain. Now that R.O.D. is gone I feel better. ...Edit while ridding the R.O.D. and make a sentence and an early dialog of Psycho words of Psycho by removing R.O.D. and simplifying sentences. ....I read and scanned to fine all the R.O.D.(s) and remove them. ...Edit from the area of the first R.O.D. removal. ...Edit and write to complete the the sentence with a verb. ...Edit Psycho dialog to remove redundant feeling with. The reason they have to find them will be questioned. ...Edit and write sentence for Dick to question thought. ...Edit and write a sentence of aaction. ...Edit the verbs of two sentences to follow the nod flow. ...Edit and write a sentence to complete a reason for Dick to need to do this fundamentally. ...Edit to <|And mom and dad?>

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r28605 | kalab | 2008-09-29 22:00:05 -0700 (Mon, 29 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from the beginning of the chapter. ...Edit the with water because the object having water was defined in the sentence of the paragraph. ...Edit the state of the fill of the cup to show ti empty. ...Edti to <|Could be a global, company, congov?> I wipe face with end of towel. <|Maybe government?>

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r28587 | kalab | 2008-09-28 15:49:00 -0700 (Sun, 28 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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Edit from beginning. ...Edit it thought to make more brief like a thought. the object of the thought known and don't need to be thoughout even for the reader of the story. ...The chair can only create the pressure to cause the floor to creak, so edit and write to have them both creak. ...Edit to remove words to wipe towl over face. with just doesn't feel good to use all the time. ...Edit the article because it is not used for the prior sentence. ...Eyes peer is better than strain and reason why. I like better now. ....Edit the ha-ha laugh because it is not needed and stupid and should be written with quotes if written at all. ...Edit sentence for Dick doesn't peak and is staring. ...Edit out ellipsis for the pause and reconstitute of thought is not needed. ...Edit wrap for hang for he hangs it around neck. ...Edit and write thought that is okay, but not really Dicks' first thought. His first thought is to doubt. Or give the impression of something esle. The words This is bad could mean many things too until it is defined by the thoughts that follow and that is also more reason for this better thought. ...Edit to remove with with towel and then remove lots of words that are redundant. ...Edit the of and a better way to write of the voice of child with few words, too. ...Edit for wiping with towel over for that is the best description feel because it doesn't have the with. ...Edit the dialog of Psycho for government to be Department Offense Defense for that is what is used in the previous sentence. ...Edit to remove of. ...Edit and write a sentence of dialog of Psycho to show and complete the thought flow. ...Edit another wipe with. ...Edit to A smile fades.

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r28568 | kalab | 2008-09-27 22:03:03 -0700 (Sat, 27 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The taxi's roof occupancy light turns off. ...Edit to remove turn off for it is bad words for the sentence. Thought of dim, but it is more of a flicker. ...Edit becuase the sentence was seeming from now wear and relying on words not written. ...Edit the cap for it is lower. ...Edit common for period for there is more of a practiced pause. ...Write rickshaw to keep the object. ...Write Doorway is to show the object. ...Edit the sentences to paragraphs. ...Edit to <|No business.> I tilt head and see upside-down town. <|Republicans do pay good to fuck a global.>

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r28545 | kalab | 2008-09-25 22:03:49 -0700 (Thu, 25 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit the word mass from paragraph for it isn't need at the time, and I had issues with how to write the hyphenated verb with or without an s. ...Edit to add possession to the people's mass for it feel better. The mass as far as a mass singers or something on sings like singing mass is better defined. This shows more religion than group if Dick is religious. ...Edit to write focus as think for focus is too much confusion. ...Edit then don't edit the words people mass with possession for it needs to remain people mass for it is now part of the record. Then I removed the words mass. ...Edit and write to replace mass with dance for the new metaphor is of the record. ...Edit and write close eyes to sigh because he is not closing eyes then I would need to open eyes and I think close eyelids over eyes is the records showing of the process. ...Edit and write the words of building row description for there felt to be a lot missing from the words in the flow. I think the flow is better now. ...Write to edit sentence to show that Dick is looking through a doorway and not in the room he is in. ...Edit to place the ceiling fan above and not in room. ...Edit to remove redundant opposite. ...Edit paragraph about standing people by writing of the people standing. ...Edit words to split paragraph to have a paragraph work from the people's head defined by the thought prior to show the focus sway. ...Edit a space. ...Edit above for over to, welll, because I want to. ...Edit mass for dance for that is the last and combined metaphor. ...Edit to write wheels just because it is specific. ...Write comma for it is needed. ...Edit to define everything as all for they are all connected. What was written was not enough. ...Edit the rattle for the glass and the ruler are what needs to be defined. ...Write something written to show the focus of the fact the ruler is still holding window open. ...Edit coat for covers for the connotations because of the denotations of coat are too many. ...Edit sentence to maybe better define the act of Dick leaning back. ...Edit a few to just Cicadas for a few is, well, it doesn't feel right. ...I edited to The chair squeaks. ...The overall edit felt good. I realize the first chapter is something that I need to work and work. it did help the fact I have sent this to someone though I have yet to hear from them. The thought alone make me want to correct. I edited to The chair squeaks, but I hope the next edit to begin with I feel and think, <|The money job.>

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r28492 | kalab | 2008-09-22 10:30:07 -0700 (Mon, 22 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The pack hits stair. Sound echoes. ..,Edit for Vibration spreads. ...Edit dialog for a single thought will be enough and is better. I edited to end.

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r28467 | kalab | 2008-09-18 14:52:39 -0700 (Thu, 18 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from the beginning. ...Edit the lead to open for the door opens to something. ...Edit forward for it is defined with open. ...Edit the placement of the wrapping of red button for it needed to be the first action with limbs. ...Edit to show the height and size of the load better. ...Edit by removing words not needed for anything. ...Edit to use metaphor to define record accepted metaphor. the record hasn't the metaphor recently. With in 1111. ...Edit to show sliding. ...Edit to end.

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r28446 | kalab | 2008-09-17 06:37:06 -0700 (Wed, 17 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from A wave of hollow pain fills body then fades. ...Edit syntax of a mission thought mark. ...Edit words by removing for they are not needed. ...Write and edit of a Nothing is for I feel one is needed then. The existing, but fading feeling. ...Write and edit a sentence that needed to be for there was the pool stopped before. And there is a meaning on protecting above while getting wet below. ....Edit K Street to K when Dick is thinking or speaking. This may change, but I feel it should be this way for it would be a word to scan and change record to begin to warn of the thought that could be bad or good. And living there he likes to use the letters alone. The way of being there. ...Edit by removing water. ...Edit by moving and showing Psycho moving before dick an Dick following Psycho for Psycho always leads. The flow is better. ...Edit out an of. ...I edited to Water drips from nose, drips from shirt cuff, drips from collar.

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r28423 | kalab | 2008-09-15 21:52:44 -0700 (Mon, 15 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit words for they are not needed. ...Edit thought by removing words to find the flow. ...read the worrds from beginning to end. I feel that it is near something complete, but don't know the something. I do know that I edited what was needed and to the end.

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I edited from the beginning. ...Edit to remove words defining the pour more than than the pour. ...Edit to remove ofs. Edit to write a sentence of Psycho answering questions. ...Edit to remove words to make more of who is in the door. ...I edit to the end. ...I think I follow the chapter. I believe that it is near something. I think the idealism of Dick and thought to may save people drives his motives. I think this action is in character.

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r28394 | kalab | 2008-09-14 06:12:01 -0700 (Sun, 14 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and read aloud from the beginning. ...I edited for the face to be shown after the head is. ...Edit and write by moving a sentence and writing a sentence to show Dick doesn't move that fast after being tossed from Always. ...Edit to change the sentence. ...Edit by moving a sentence of dialog that occurs quicker to show the process speed of Psycho and better story flow. ...Edit space between stage coaches. ...I edited to <|Follow jester away from Psycho,> I think.

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r28369 | kalab | 2008-09-13 08:43:22 -0700 (Sat, 13 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I began editing from the beginning of the chapter. ...I edit the headrest to head rest then the specifics need not be. The following sentence I wrote headrest and an of because it needed to be shown. Then the headrest was written to show what is pressed by Richard. ...More definition to define row helps the show and shows a more technical military name which is never a bad thing. ...Until they split the Army is a column. ...The edit of the soldier line is better. the detail is needed because Dick knows exactly what it is. ...I move sentence to better have a flow with the new paragraph of the end splitting. ...I edited the column to be lines and the row to have lines. The row will is now better used with all the specific direction the terms and use of how to define is better. The edit a lot but makes the description of a lot more fluid and shown. ...I wrote of Dick moving to show an instance of self awareness of poistion. ...I wrote a couple ofs so I removed one. ...Betty smiles and Richared is seen by Dick for reason for Richard to say they stare. A few words edited here and there to better the very near good story and details of that story. ...Write a sentence to define a line from Always' door. ...I edited to One man steps away. One man does not move.

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r28258 | kalab | 2008-09-01 16:00:39 -0700 (Mon, 01 Sep 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from The tanks turn turrets left and right. ...write for the sound. Then talk of the sound. The sound i felt needed to be written. Then the dialog. ...Write to show Dick doing something for there is a moment of seeing. ...Edit for less words and one less obvious verbs. The smiles then the words. ...Edit singular verb for plural. ...Edit to have fewer words for Exit sign for fewer are needed for clarity and prose. ...Edit for it is into. ...Edit the smile out for there is no need. ...Edit an of. ...Edit for sound to stop and not fade for it doesn't fade. ...Edit the object being. ...Write of Geoge plugging nose after the fart to show what was removed from telling. ...Write of Richard showing the snapping of the mood. ...Edit for I say be before words. ...Write for surface. ...Edit for article of a column. ...Edit landing for walkway for landing it is not. A walkway it is. ...Outside handle should remain consistent and now is. . ...Edit and write the words used and should be used to define the door that shuts. ...Edited to end of chapter.

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r28237 | kalab | 2008-08-31 15:45:12 -0700 (Sun, 31 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Richard looks at me and smiles. Richard pivots head side to side. ...Edit pops for thumps for I have been and like thumps. ...Edit thought to rid of not and less words with why remember. ...Edit an of for poles is better without. ...Write hand for that is how it was written for the other. The record within constraint. ...EDit thuds for thumps. ...Edit an of for me for my. ...Write with of proper way to dance. ...Edit floor for level for there are levels. ...Edit for rolling wheels. ...Write to define the action of slowing blue. ...Edit the fact Eleanor is speaking for Richard. ...Edit sentence for it is not needed. ...Edit and of and bad way of writing the sentence. ...Write the Richard saying the slang ot better to conversation flow the acknowledge of the team favorite. ...Edit to remove words that are not needed. ...Edit dialog of have and need to make clear that the talk and jumbled and not thought out. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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r28221 | kalab | 2008-08-31 06:05:38 -0700 (Sun, 31 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Even if cap. Injection.> and read back. ....Write words I wrote A BANG booms and echoes through the sky...People jumps and put hands to chest. They look side to side and up. from last edit into story after thought for I liked it and I wanted the words to be, but they were not were they needed to be. This is. ...Edit sentence for the object is redundant and the words at end confuse. ...Write and edit to have the verb say used some what less to then show an action of the character. ...Write out words of Dick becoming and showing a little more paranoia. And the read for the looks and the thought about believing it is taken care of and not a scare tactic. There are levels of belief one needs now from the government. ...Edit for better scene and few words with armored Army. ...Edited verb for less words. ...Edited to Eleanor turns handle on door.

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r28207 | kalab | 2008-08-30 11:08:04 -0700 (Sat, 30 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Richard's pupils focus upon me. ...Edit to write an active verb and remove useless words. ...Edit to rid an of. ...Write And me because the thought is created by the action. ...Edit and write to better the show of Richard's tense jaw. ...Edit and extra e not needed. ...Write of the yawn as it should be. ...Edit thought because I was going to remove it. I removed some words. ...Edit to removed words not needed. ...Edit for action to be before the words of Eleanor. ...Edit walk to shuffle step for there are people. ...Edit butt for ass for butt is better. ...Edit to remove words for only squint is needed. ...I edited to George shrugs. He looks forward.

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r28181 | kalab | 2008-08-28 06:22:39 -0700 (Thu, 28 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited and wrote from The stagecoach before taxi stops. ...Edit after reading North East knowing the Northwest I changed during recent edit to Northwest needed to be North East. Edit to remove ad adjective because it was too much for the sentence with the use of the of....Edit or rewrote the sentence because it was only almost complete. There is much better, ...Edit pedestrian for people and person for pedestrian is not lexical or rather of a group of words not of this record. The write a sentence about the people moving from front of taxi. ...Edit Richard from dialog because the sue of the name is informal, and he last spoke, I left a later use of his name as Betty speaks because it was commanding and sort of mother like. Disappointed. ...Edit to leave the Richard for it is commanding then remove a Richard of Oh, relax for it is not commanding and he just spoke. ...Edit clench for pulse for pulse was confusing. ...Write the call of Dick when bettyu speaks for she want his attention from silence. ...Write another yawning after Betty. ...Edit adjective for Dick is not into the ass detail. His thought are n other things. ...Write ass to butt, edit of and edit and write the sentence. ...I edited to <|Am I a yellow?>

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r28144 | kalab | 2008-08-25 06:02:32 -0700 (Mon, 25 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Tell congov.>. ...Edit jump suits of body suits for not all party members wear jump suits, and I feel most are. ...Edit the thought from for there is no answer for there was an answer before the words. ...Edit dialog by removing words that george doesn't say. I want the confusion of the fact white may be shinning. ...Write smile to better to give read to thought and the nature of Dick. ...Edit to remove few words for one good. ...Edit by changing volume from soft to strong, so betty need not always shout. ...Edit of to stagecoach movers. ...edit sound with an is for fewer and better words. ...I edited to Soft thuds hit below.

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r28120 | kalab | 2008-08-23 16:04:31 -0700 (Sat, 23 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from Oak fumes. Deep peat fills nose and head. It feels to fume from eyes. ...Edit to clarify a sentence. ...Edit punctuation. ...Edit a sentence to write a verb. ...Edit Betty while eating. The close of the eyes is weird. ...Edit the act of George swallowing the fajit for eat is too much and feels to take more time than is written. ...I edited to remove a stupid useless sentence about the food. ...Edit dialog of Richard for he wouldn't then say create excitement. ...Write to better define the cutting of food by Eleanor. ...Edit words by removing dialog of dick that isn't needed. ...Write more dialog of George. ...Edit a with for a holding for the verb is better. ...Edit Eleanor's full name for it is not needed. ...Edit the drink of scotch and the description to write a verb. ...Edit for George adjusts brim. ...Edit by removing words and replacing them with words the are fewer and less metaphoric. ...Edit to use level to define the levels of the place. And floor to define the surface below feed. The level is better. This may not be universal. Thought it may. ...I edited to the end.

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r28108 | kalab | 2008-08-22 22:45:56 -0700 (Fri, 22 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from <|Why before midnight?> ...Edit to remove words that are not needed an beyond the detail and focus of the mind for the record. ...Edit mark for it becomes a question. ...Write for Eleanor must look up from something. ...Edit to have it be louder and not above. Above used with sound is a metaphor I am not liking. ...Edit, write the use of my for the record uses the words my. ...Edit a comma for a period for it needs to be a period. ...Edit the walk of busboy because busboy doesn't need to walk to be by now after grabbing tray. ...Edit to remove at that is not needed. ...Edit to use pronoun and not a proper. ...Edit to remove around for around is not a good word to use. Surround is better with sound. ...Edit by removing the word body for it is not needed and only confuses. ...Edit sentence that to me had confusion for the verb sit defined to me that an action to place. Sitting is much better. ...Write action of dick. ...Write, edit for another action required. ...Write, edit for some fucked reason I wrote the record of Dick smelling a cup of bourbon not in hand or action that would require focus in the record. It is now. ...Edit the word to to toward for to write as if the body is stopping on Now. ...Edit and write the lifting and lowering of brow of Betty for the process was near complete. It now is. ..Edit and write an and to complete. ..Write then to separate object and subject. ...Edit articles that conflict and are not needed. ...Edit to removed words of people in a booth. I used time to thing of at and booth and around and what the fuck it all meant. What is now is something that is better, I feel. ...Edti to better the people leaving action. There was confusion for me. Not now. ...Edit the drinking of bourbon to make good. ...I edited to <|Working me.>

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r28018 | kalab | 2008-08-17 14:20:49 -0700 (Sun, 17 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I began edit at Empty seat is before Mustang. ..Edited by removing words for the were not needed. ...Edited two sentences to one because the second should have been part of the first. ...The chin description is too much and the description not needed. The hair is better. ...To right is direction. ...There were a few grammar edits needed. ....Richard smells of beer. ...I edited to We stare into other's eyes.

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r27992 | kalab | 2008-08-16 06:15:05 -0700 (Sat, 16 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Leaves flap and flutter. ...I wrote flutter because I like flutter. ...I check dialog syntax before the beginning words for I found on off. Then another. ...I edited to the end.

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r27977 | kalab | 2008-08-15 14:30:24 -0700 (Fri, 15 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence for the stars are first seen. ...I removed thought to edit the thought for the thought was internal dialog too much. ...The shout of sam louder thought to get rid of the ofs. ...Edit for fume is the verb. ...Green has two and moves slow. Human and other labels don't define. If party then few. ...I edited to I step to corner of block.

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r27920 | kalab | 2008-08-10 18:52:28 -0700 (Sun, 10 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the street call out for it is to be more grid like and like the thought record of the previous chapter. ...Oak should be the description. It is still seen for the wood. ...I edited by removing a sentence for it was redundant of action and a the lesser of the two descriptions of moving the box with a sentence. ...I edited tools for implements for tools is a better metaphor and accurate description. ...Removed dialog that doesn't need to be for it confused the flow of the dialog focuse. ...Edit dialog because an explination needs not be. ...Lighten up is redundant metaphor. Only lighten is needed. ...The granola bar needs to be on cooling rack. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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r27881 | kalab | 2008-08-06 19:21:43 -0700 (Wed, 06 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed article because it is a general recognition of sound. ...I edited to I hear clank and spirt of sump pumps.

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r27869 | kalab | 2008-08-06 06:06:43 -0700 (Wed, 06 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I edited the second paragraph to be a better description and then entrance. ...I removed words because I need not have a specific creator or controller of Psycho. And Psycho was not created for the government. ...I edited slow to Silence is. Bass shakes wall and windows.

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r27835 | kalab | 2008-08-04 06:46:17 -0700 (Mon, 04 Aug 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words for the end was not needed. I wrote of dancing object because it had better flow with the paragrpah. I wrote words for head needs to be show or told of guiding bodies of the abstract tangent. ...Everything windowed wall is just window wall. ...Leopards are all dead, so some thing like liver spots is a better metaphor. ...I moved words to better define the motion. ...I wrote a what thought to flow to the feel and think, what was being thought. ...Removed thought for the thought was too tangential. ...I removed words from thought to better flow. ...I edited from beginning to end. The chapter is near being a chapter.

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r27785 | kalab | 2008-07-30 23:26:25 -0700 (Wed, 30 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words that read more like redundant words. Like stab. ...I removed thought for the thought is not that focused. ...I edited to the end.

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r27762 | kalab | 2008-07-29 06:18:10 -0700 (Tue, 29 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from beginning. ...I removed a not needed word. ...I moved to better time and flow. ...I spoken words be thought words. ...I like the effort of defining the tunnel. I did think why tunnel\? Psycho calls it a tunnel. ...I wrote more detection of the green button and steel door. ...I removed dialog of Psycho not needed or able to caste easy. ...I moved words because Dick would want the limb off before getting lost in detail about the state of Psycho's blanket. ...I have the attempt to close the door note, but Psycho's programmed need to survive can minimally control all the Gee Forty three nano machines to create a basic limb nano particles grip to the ground to get the force to pull. ...I had to read and rewrite the moving of Dick to better define what goes on and the shown resistance to be controlled by the limbs. I think the changes are good. ...I edited to end.

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r27743 | kalab | 2008-07-28 16:41:41 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote I feel it true to define the feeling of connection loss beyond words. ...Moved thought to edit timing to after a reconnection to reality through the body feeling. ...write another feeling it true. Edit the feeling and thought to be more quick and confusing. A sured feeling of truth to what could be a total lie, but it is beginning to feel true. ...Dick has no jacket. ...The description needed to be moved. ...I edited to the end.

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r27741 | kalab | 2008-07-28 15:57:33 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked an of better than an if. It was needed. ...Edited placement of thought to be after the flow stops with Richard's question. ...The sentence moved because it was best out of the paragraph and had nothing to do with the paragraph. ...I edited to the end.

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r27727 | kalab | 2008-07-28 12:23:06 -0700 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed words for the smell was not. ...Thought removed for that thought is thought after and better after. ...Butt is better than ass. ...Words removed from two near sentence after of is felt to be very bad. With of and more word removal the words are more. ...I thought is silly that the type of taxi wasn't defined, so I began searching with taxi cars and taxicabs and then types of cars I know and if they were to make could cabs and then through that found Checker Taxi and read the history and the car will be a Checker Taxi. It's perfect. ...Sound change for fewer words. .I had Dick better command people to enter the car. George comes after called. ...I read more about the car to find what kind of transmissions they had. They were automatic typically. I think i can make something of this when Richard critiques the fiber glass or plastic body parts. ...I found need to place knees. ...I arranged sentences to complete the thought. ...A few less ofs and words and better writing. ...Edit the transmission acting up. I feel it is near complete and correct as I have experienced transmission issues. ...I wrote dialog to talk about the transmission for Jo brings it up to talk about it. Richard takes if further. ...I wrote words here and there for the stop of taix and go of taxi across intersection. ...I continued the placement of soft thumps. ...I didn't like the talk into the politics. I wanted to also have Republican and Democratic a terrorist watch word. So I changed the dialog. Made it better I think. ...I wrote body language of Dick looking at the speakers to reply to to show focus and truth. ...Clubs hitting window would be fun to write but I just replaced club with building for club is just thinking of hitting. ...Another ass became butt for butt was better. Maybe for the b. ...Then I removed the butt because the window should be down. ...I read of the roll down after fart, so I checked for the state of window and I had to change a plural to singular, but nothing else to have dick roll down the window. ...I edited the use and the description of the red wheels to use the spokes and be seen as glowing. ...I like the rage of Richard post A.P.P.. Both wind up to rage I think are written as they should and as seen. ....I had to better the position of the taxi and order the action and the braking and the slower speed. ...I removed the mention of the chinese embassy because it would trigger maybe. The road is the one travelled so it to is a good word used. ...I edited to the end.

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r27692 | kalab | 2008-07-27 09:06:37 -0700 (Sun, 27 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from Two drones float. ...I removed words not needed. I wrote a word to define the quadrant. ...I removed a word to open the definition. I changed the question to current tense instead of total....I was going to remove read from end of dialog, but thought and remembered that Psycho always qualifies or define vague answers to define its version of the question. ...The congov look away. ...Because it the plural use. ...I found a few syntax issues. ...I removed dialog that needs not be for the question is answered. ...Dick cares not if Psycho is seen above the people for they won't shoot at each other. I edited the dialog and removed the thought of looking for a guard for it is not as important a subject for Dick because he is not going into the building. Psycho and shooting is the better subject and now the thought as reason and flow. ...Condo is a row house. ...I wanted the sentences to be a paragraph for they are of a lead subject completed by sentences. ...I removed of and used few words to define the hearing of the gyration of hovercopter. ...A thought removed that was confused. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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r27661 | kalab | 2008-07-25 22:15:59 -0700 (Fri, 25 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I edited a left for a right for there were a few many lefts. There has to be right. ...I removed the guns thing because Psycho doesn't care about guns for guns will not stop Psycho. ...Of removed and useless words. ...I thought of the how Dick begins to have Psycho talks againg and was silent and reasons the reporting by feeling and saying and not feeling and thinking. Psycho believes a question. So while editing to Rickshaws, bikes, stagecoaches roll around traffic circle. I edited Rickshaws, bikes, stagecoaches roll around traffic circle, and I changed the dialog to show and tell of the reporting and reason for not seeing voice.

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r27641 | kalab | 2008-07-24 20:02:16 -0700 (Thu, 24 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked sizzle better than sizzling and now it reads better. ...Dick doesn't smile. ...There is no wine . ...I edited to <|Where's Psycho?>

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r27606 | kalab | 2008-07-22 06:31:57 -0700 (Tue, 22 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...Grammar issues and dialog mark and periods and commas. ...Some left over words. ...I will write skates for there are inline and paired. ...I edited to The traffic left to right and right to left stops before intersection.

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r27604 | kalab | 2008-07-22 05:26:27 -0700 (Tue, 22 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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Edit dialog syntax for case after reading the first few paragraphs of 0011 and realizing I didn't case the internal dialog.

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r27583 | kalab | 2008-07-21 06:29:04 -0700 (Mon, 21 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...The taxi can not honk horn so written as it should be. ...I removed words and a repeated action. ...The edit to explain the mission of Psycho for life... ...I found more reason for the yawn. To see if the machine yawns and if the machine thinks it a communication from dick or response at all. ...I rewrote a sentence after removing a question that need not be and after finding better words for the meaning. ...I edited to <|Two actors. One bad writer. Psycho...Please...>

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r27575 | kalab | 2008-07-20 22:03:04 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edit with spellcheck leading the way the dialog mark. The words did flow from beginning to end.

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r27573 | kalab | 2008-07-20 21:25:29 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning to the end now that I know the dialog mark.

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r27571 | kalab | 2008-07-20 20:48:42 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from the beginning to the end of the chapter. I followed through the spellcheck by checking grammar of dialog mark.

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r27569 | kalab | 2008-07-20 20:14:10 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited for spelling and dialog mark from beginning to end. I was able to read a bit. Liked it. Lots of commas replaced by periods.

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r27558 | kalab | 2008-07-20 10:32:05 -0700 (Sun, 20 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning to the end of the chapter. I followed through the chapter with the spellcheck. I would then read the internal and external dialog mark. Things are coming together.

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r27541 | kalab | 2008-07-19 21:16:25 -0700 (Sat, 19 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning to Eleanor looks forward, jaw tense. Eyes wide and reflect the flame light. I edited from grammar and spelling and found af ew minor things that I wanted to change. The grammar is becoming.

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r27534 | kalab | 2008-07-19 17:43:37 -0700 (Sat, 19 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from end of prior edit to the end. I edit mark. I did edit some dialog for better flow. It was simple. I did scan the words, but most of the editing was using the spellchecker advance the page. The grammar feels to be better.

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r27517 | kalab | 2008-07-18 23:04:45 -0700 (Fri, 18 Jul 2008) | 1 line
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I edited the chapter for spelling and grammar. I think I found most of the spelling and grammar. The chapter was edited from beginning to end.

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I edited the chapter for spelling errors. I found some. The main focus of the edit was the grammar. The grammar with punctuation marks and dialog and internal dialog marks. I need a standard. i need to see how the commas and periods are used in flow of action. I don't know. I think I now know. I am getting close to knowing. I need to read more of grammar dialog marks and write the standard.

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I spellchecked and correct some punctuaion issues found with the thought. I still need to think how thought flows. I did find a misspelled word.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I had to rid the book of another of. ...It should be flashlight and not flash light. ...I edited to the end of the book only finding minor issues and liking what was read.

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I edited from the beginning. ....I wrote thought at the beginning for the thought needed to be to show the new seer. ...I wrote thought after in the building to express Dick's sense of the situation. ...There was a verb missing and a plural verb state that need not be. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence from the paragraph for it was not the subject of the paragraph. ...Puddles much better than sheets. ...I removed the second talk about the asking permission because it is out of flow and not there really. Nothing in it for anything. ...The thought after of teaching I is better and is more of the story than what was written of being taught to be less of a Psycho. ...I replace road with street. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from the beginning of the chapter. ...I had to edit the many ofs of a sentence. ...Another of removed. i want the of removed because Psycho used the same of and thought Psycho may be Dick I don't want it to be further defined. ...George is referring to the barrels. I don't see George knowing what a turret is. ...I removed the dialog of Dick defining always like an advertisement for it is not of Dick to do this and it is out of place and odd. The flow is off to, so all the sentences were removed. ...Edit because they go between not through. ...I read of a heel and edited all heels with soles for sole is more meaning and definition and obvious double meaning. ...I edited the global S.S. warning to its standard form. ...The sound of shoes needed less ofs and better writing. ...Minor verb and description edits of the flow down the stairs. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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I edited from Eleanor stares forward then at me then at Jo's head. ...Name and speaker where off. So I changed. ...There were syntax issues. ...Then Richard needed to be Betty. Confusion somewhere between the two. ...Edited thought for flow. ...Edited an of. ...I removed detail that was out of place and not needed. ...Of removed. ...Liked the thought flow. I wanted to ad a quick thought to show the thrown loop of focus. ...I removed more thought for the thought of Dick now is calm and few. ...I remove more ofs. Many ofs. ...I didn't like speed as a verb. Roll is better. ...Moved sweat description for it happened before and the dialog flows better. ...I edited to Rickshaw before taxi stops. Taxi stops. Two people walk along side of queue and shine light beams at faces of guiders, movers and passengers.

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I edited from Pizza smell and sweat fill cab then fade. ...Edited of grammar for edit was needed. ...I edited nation for greatest for George wouldn't say nation. ...I wrote of the walkers for everyone is in the street. ...I removed a sentence for there is the... ...I had to fix the words for Richard looking for Army after the apple pie. ...The dialog now flows better. It is better. There are more things. ...I edited to standardize the global terrorist call. ...I edite teh we're going to always because Betty forgets then remembers again. ...I edited to Blue spoked stagecoach stalls in mass of people.

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I edited from <|Psycho reading mind\?> I uncover eyes with eyelids. <|Controlling drone.> ...I edited to Jo twists the key.

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I edited from the beginning. I edited Street for Road for Street is the word to use. ...Richard needs to be more specific and shades is more specific. ...I left random thought for dick is feeling loose from the alcohol. ...The window is not down and it is not automatic, so it Dick opens the door. I also removed ofs. ...There is a need to define the type of congov. ...I removed a thought about scanning. Dick doesn't think this. ...I edited to We shift legs, butts and shoulders. We look out taxi windows.

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I edited from the beginning. ...An of was removed. ...I edited to Richard's jaw joint pulses. He steps forward, puts hands on Eleanor's shoulder.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I replaced road with street for road seems more long and connecting between towns or cities. ...A needed to go with the first sentence. ...Psycho can not give an exact time for Psycho is unable to know what energy will be used. ...I edited to here The man pivots his head side to side. I am liking what I read.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed the white of illluminate for it wasn't defined before. ...Around is better than around. ...Meter is feet for the metric system is not primary measurement. ...Of removed. ...Pass instread of past for pass is a verb. ...One of removed. ...Seats are waited. Other unneeded words removed. The question thing arose with the questions to Dick. I had to write more of the area and the things that are. I wanted more sights and sound around the white hotel. ...I had the specific type of tree and car first be a thought because it is specific then loading and general. ...I write of the move sounds that is everywhere. I wrote of a merge. I wrote of a feel and think as thought feels to reason. ...I edited to <|Always a deep quagmire.>

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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited thought for the thought needed to have an unfocused thought flow. ...I remove sentences for the need not be. ...More words removed for they need not be. ...I few changes for action. ...I edited to end.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I liked the beginning. I had to change the forth because the ing and the of really hit me deep. The thought of the record needs to be. ...I had to change the moved of hands to head. ...The description of the sound in mind needs to use mass and still have bass. The paragraph has it. ...I want it spirt not spurt. ...Mouth is better than jaw. ...I like what has become of the thought. ...the crossing traffic is the same traffic on the other street, so It should be more people and only on stagecoach. I edited more to even the people walking for there are people walking. There is more nonpeople traffic than on the road dick is on. ...The taxi is still in the crowd The bikers are not. ...Like river's edge more. And there is one less of. ...I liked the thought and the action. there exists now a flow to the words: The river is a pond. ...I stopped edit at The river is a pond.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the sentence because the metaphor need to flow and descriptive and specific. Sexy was not. ...I removed sentences for they were not needed and redundant. ...I the use of return is much better for it is a very old command. ...I wrote words. I removed words that were out of place. ...I moved thought for it needed to be before the talk and after the thought. ...I edited smell to be good. ...I edited to the end.

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r27183 | kalab | 2008-06-29 16:26:45 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with a spell check. ...I found internal dialog marks missing. ...I edited from the beginning. ...The second though needed to be better for it need to complete the paragraph seen and the thought of the beginning. Time passes and the thought begin again. The rewrite and write was needed. ...There was another sentence I wanted to complete define the building for the paragraph...I moved a thought for better flow. ...I removed all other time because only the one is wanted or needed after reading the first time I thought to remove. ...The type of people for Lawyers, politicans , interns internal dialog for I have decided for it to be. The thought of doing it as internal has been in mind for a time. Now I want it so the adjectives are internal. They are metaphors before description. A label. ...I removed more ofs. One removal create a good sentence paragraph. ...I thought of leaving out the yellow talk, but then thought to leave it for the feel and think set it off. I conformed and labeled the leather cyclists. ...I have to think of how dick is positioned. ...More ofs and flow found. I read and read. ...I removed more words that were useless. ...I made the most of leather cyclists. And i moved sentences to better flow the time of the flash and the after desciption. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I want it all happening at once after the hit. The scream is what is needed after all feels to happen at one time. It is better with the and. ...I like the hit. Things are at the flow and path liked. ...I edited to I stuff sex cap in mouth.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I had the two sentence become action at the same time by using and. I like better for only one sentence or general action is to be defined. It reads better. ...I like lead better than open. ...I needed to edit the fall of Betty and Richard. It is now written as it should be. ...The talk of red button needed to be more fluid. ...I removed a sentence because it didn't need to be. The wrote a question, so Psycho could be answering some one. ...I read to the open of the steel door then thought that the reason Psycho can't enter the white door with body is because it is two different nano, and only the core can enter the nano pool. ...Dick needed to stand. ...there were syntax errors. ...I edit to end.

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I edited from beginning. ...I wrote how for I want Dick to ask the question because Psycho never just gives information. ...I shortened questions because mind is looking for thought to complete not begin. The short. The burst.Psycho doesn't answer because he is selective about the question answered. . ...bluild not block. ...Another verb. ...I moved a sentence because both the flow and build is better for the release. ...The page is better as a child. Labor, indentured, slave, force labor, any labor for the poor. ...I need Dick in the revolving door, so he can stop it. He needs to step in. The flow is better. The setup is better. ...I edited to the end.

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r27092 | kalab | 2008-06-24 20:17:32 -0700 (Tue, 24 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from: Drones hover. White light pulses from bases of drones. ...I wanted to complete the scream. ...There were grammar issues. ...I needed to clarify the entering of building. ...There were some you removed. ...I edited to <|Become lost in data.>

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I edited from the beginning. ...I wanted to add more show of people getting out of the soldiers. ...I edited and changes seeing Eleanor for Dick doesn't bend down and see Eleanor. ...I have the door being show open. ...I removed Psycho dialog for on one was needed and only after the edit. ...I changed the dialog to have congov read the thoughts for that's how it would work. Congov fucking it all up. ...Then the talk with the Army needed to be changed. Richard asks the question of knowledge is better for it is basic. The other question was too analytical for the moment, and Richard is only analytical when calm and focused and working. ,,,i wrote stairs for the climbing for it is needed. ...The decent down was written better. ...The walk out was edited thinking of Ben being in front because there isn't enough room for side. They walk out. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from Bass and treble flow through mass. ...People stand...was enough to define. Removed talk because it wsan't. ...George is a talker. More than most...There was dialog that was George and not Betty. ...There was shorter dialog for better talk asn some slang that won't be defined. Belt Wall. There is no more way. ... I like the words with Ash and the action. Some ...The taxi must be shown to stop. ...The hands left and right is an obvious metaphor. ...The thought of having all the ofs thoughts when they are an expression of a deep metaphor. Or one just sort of still thought and not how the mind lablels the symbol of data. ...I like word flow and the sound of the transmission stopping once stopped. ...I removed dialog because the talk and raction was not needed. The dialog before and after better for it. ...I had to change the dialog to focus on Richard paranoid. I needed to go further with the idea I felt, and I think it makes it all better. ...I edited to George coughs. Betty coughs. Eleanor sneezes.

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I edited from the beginning. ...There was the need for the dark word. ...Just illuminate is enough. ...Only dialog of Dick requires not verb to show process out. ...I removed Psycho talk for it was not asked. ...There small things that needed to be changed. ...I moved dialog for the flow was better one sentence up. ...Moved another sentence of algae to better set off and show the sentence of people being for people are. ...I edited to I lean toward Richard, twist handle on door counter-clockwise. <|Tell Betty, at Always. Then get out.>

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r26991 | kalab | 2008-06-17 21:32:21 -0700 (Tue, 17 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I began edit at Mustang and others look, <|at me,> and talk. ...I wrote some description of Richard and George. ...Ofs were removed. ...There was a verb issue. ...I edited to <|Bourbon.>

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I read aloud from the beginning. I read paragraphs then decided to check stage coaches and make them stagecoaches. I stopped the edit.

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I edited an read aloud from the beginning. ...The reading was good. Found some minor things. A dialog bar missing. There were things. I liked the read. Where did this come from\? ...The curve needed to be better written. ...Ofs were written out or removed with words. The removal was good. I edited and read a loud. ...Less ofs where need make for better description. ...I wrote data warehouse to drop the idea and show what was the other way. ...I liked the story. There is a flow. ...I edite to Sweat drop forms on nose. <|Psych injection will reason reaction.>

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I edited from the beginning aloud. ...I had issues with plurals. But the read did flow. ..It's bumps not pumps. And I didn't like Goose. Define the feeling of a goose bump. ...I have to have three moves. ...The work with plurals is becoming. ...Ofs I removed some ofs for they were making the ofs used useless. ...comma not good. need new sentence. ...The blonde boy thing is a bit much. Young man doesn't do ti. I don't want to define further. Not needed. A couple of people. Focused away. ...The read is better. ...Of and plurals. ...A few less words of description that was contrary to what was seen. ...river banks is better. ...Group is better defined by people for people is a group of people no need for group. ...Ofs and verbs needed reading. ...Ofs and case and pluras and verbs. Better with the words removed. ...I edited and read aloud to the end.

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I edited from Everything is. I did not read aloud. ...I wrote an I say because it felt like the flow needed.. ...I have reason why They arrive needed to be used for a misplaced leaving and weird eating. ...I had pussy cunt for cunt is deeper meaning these days in the nation's capital as sexism is becoming more. ...The end should not needed for the cunt is enough end dialog with others. When pussy is was to be working with that thoughts of action, but reallly Dick is not going to hear a singles shout of shouts of pussy. Cunt yes. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from the beginning. I read aloud. ...I realized with out hearing the subject, the object.of dialog ...I seen the red and blue description. And the dialog. It goes. The please is needed to show Dick is polite or shown to be polite. ...I edited the sphere colors. I read them not aloud after the third and forth and other readings of the flashing colors. ...I edited to The window rattles. And I want to begin at The window rattles. next edit now that the flashes see to be what they need to be to The window rattles.

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I was editing, I am editing, chapter 0011. I read of a glass and have been wanting it to be cup, so changed it to cup then thought of this chapter probably having some glass that should be cup.

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I edited and read aloud from the beginning. ...I added a question mark then a maybe because it need be. ...I then began to edit without reading aloud and only in mind. ...I edited to The red and blue flash dims.

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I edited and read aloud from Drop drips to mass of people. ...I wrote think fast to have the reader think....The door was misplaced. ...Head is saying yes to Mustang moving for... ...Hinges creek is better. ...After is better than all those other words for the thought flow. ...Iss needed. ...I edited and read aloud to the end. I liked.

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I edited from I stand on left leg. ...I had the arm reach for it did. ...I wrote out ofs that were too of. ...not rainbow colors is bad. gray is good. ...I think I like the end. ...I edited to the end.

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I edited from the beginning. I moved a sentence to show then tell. The words better formed to show. I removed the move or motions to move because I like where things are before Dick moving....I like the length of the fall because the time should sort of slow as Dick focuses on it. ...For the hit I removed forehead and socket because it is not. That would be and is too much. Make only one cheek and add jaw being broke ...I remove words of a sentence to make prose of broken face pain. ...I had a couple of verb issues. One ing one missing. ...Then another missing verb. ...I removed a thought for it was not needed. ,..I removed more thought for it was not thought. ...I removed the internal dialog is brief. Focus is room and pain. ...I edited to Sweat drips from nose and falls into a bowl in floor. Read the head hitting was tense.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote a sentence to show the fall to fall. First the citizen then the contractor. ...I edited and wrote words to show the pose after the fall. ,..I worte site move away for the action. The flash thought quick, ...An object was needed. ...I say was something fun. The read was flowing and good. .,,I wrote words to complete the question. ... There is no windowed. ...I had the door open after the green button. This are rewriting Psycho's words for they were to far from Psycho. The door opens. A white door is behind completes. ...I removed two sentences for the open was open no need to talk and the excitement of Dick too much. Dick is calm and waiting to stop Psycho. ,,,of gone. ...I had description internally create the use of the record. The thought becomes the recorded perception. ...I removed sentences of the opening. Good the open happens sooner for more words were removed.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I removed thought and action to continue the skipped process of belief and denial. ...I moved thought to better set the thought in its flow. The thought moved in a couple of paragraphs. ...I edited by deleting and maybe rewriting ofs. The words then better. ...I removed a sentence for it was some thing that could be removed. It was nothing. ...I made a question where one was needed. ...White Noise talk is better. ...I like the radar detecting something. It needed to close. Few words. ...I used level and not story for level is better. ...I had to do the friction ray, some thing thought of by what was read for there would be tool that tries to stop the human body with some force or pain. It doesn't effect Psycho. .It is aimed only at Dick. I like the Ray burn. The Ray burn is the effect one gets from the friction ray. ...I have the rod warning of move away see three time with more going as Dick runs. There isn't that much time of moves to be. The go. ...I like the levels of pain to be more sever once warmed up or closer or believed. The charging. ...I edited the move away. ...I edited to the end.

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I began with the beginning the edit. No reading aloud. ..I thought of sight and thought of the green glow of touch pads...I edited words from book for they were not needed. ...I chcange the name of Army column to be a formation Dick knows. ...I wrote out ofs and made the words better. ...I add possession and a difference in the words of pyshco and Dick. ...I removed a replication of action. ...I removed ofs and words. ...The soles of secret sentry was an of that need not be. ...Another sentence that was better without the of. ...Soles is much more accurate than heels and is a better double word. Call it a metaphor if one will. A twisted hint of some thing else. ... I wrote words to set off dialog and define it. And define other forms of input. ...The S.S. never kneel just shake a finger. ... I moved words because their placement was better before to show the walk. They just stepped in. The walk beings after Dick steps between George and Betty. ...I then add more description by giving the name of the hall they enter a proper noun that is referenced often. ...freeze in just needed to be hold. in was the reason to begin the change. in\? ...There were a few verby issues with the first movement. ...There are women in suites too. ...A show of act and verb for some of the unconnected dialog. ...I had a comma need. ...I edited to the end.

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r26683 | kalab | 2008-06-01 09:15:58 -0700 (Sun, 01 Jun 2008) | 1 line
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I edit from: Jo jams stick-shift forward. ...I read aloud and like. I thought of an of of person and people and the words were what I wanted to have written. ...I removed of mass and group of people to people group and people mass. The words are near better. ...And was need to two actions for says. ...rows of removed for row houses defines the row. ...I removed instances of Adam's Morgan because the boundries of Adam's Morgan is unbound in mind. And because I don't know how the record reacts with the use in the none internal or external words. I know internal or external trigger new record, but don't know if the id or internal mind data. A definition of fact and not a focus of thought. I removed because it seem to specific. I edited by reading aloud to The soft thumping stops. And I like it.

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r26670 | kalab | 2008-05-31 22:54:07 -0700 (Sat, 31 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at: Taxi jerks, pops, rolls over street. ...I change the soft thud to thuds for there is more than one. ...I found a verb issue and corrected it. ...For some reason I wanted to make the congov a color for more description The color white used because white things are thought to be pure. ...Another verb that was need. is was the verb. ...The word from is better then at for caste I feel. ...I wrote words of the soft thuds of transmission. A noise that will soon fade from notice or record all the time. ...I edited the sound that is when the second congov shouts of terrorists. ...I removed a from when defining silence for I felt there need not be a direction. ...I wrote more to redefine the people. Because there is a recent record with the people and because Dick's attention is not on the people the record additions are not many for many is not needed. ...I am trying to remove all speak and thought of the word terrorists from Dick's speech and thought. I think I have most so far. ...I read after the talk with Ash then thought then need to write to show that Betty and George and most remember most of being with Dick giving reason for them to still feel friendly. ...I removed some ofs for some needed to be removed. ...I wrote People are just to show that there are many. ...I checked the state of Dick's window being up and down and made sure it followed the state. ...I edited to: <|Apple Pie Paranoia.>

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r26660 | kalab | 2008-05-31 09:51:50 -0700 (Sat, 31 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with There is no smell of oak. The taste is immature. ...I wrote a thought of the age of the barrel for I had a tangent thought and realization than a very old and used and non quality barrel would create a less oak body. ,,,I wrote Richard dialog because it needed to be writen to show Dick getting friendly with Richard. ...I removed an of. ...I didn't like picks up. Gets feels better. ...I moved the We eat for it was best after the throat clearing and better shows some amount of time. ...Dick is eating tacos and fajitas but still fajitas remain. ...I wrote an and for it was needed. ...I moved the see of the column of congov upstairs for it is better placed. ...I need to add a verb. I edit to the end.

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r26620 | kalab | 2008-05-28 06:00:42 -0700 (Wed, 28 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I read and edited and like what I read. ...There was the change in dialog about the dump to show the exact reason and not some off the wall reason why and why not the dump will kill. ...I edited the graveyard to better defjine the record and define ...The fir tree should be an oak. ...The gray is black or white for color of cloths. ...I moved description to where the focus is. ...The empty seat location needed to be edited for placement. Side is better than by. ...I removed dialog because the words were not needed and I didn't want George saying them or Betty. ...I remove tree from pine tree for pine is a scent the tree doesn't smell like the sent. ...I read and liked what was read. the flow found. There were a few stops, but those stops are pauses if they remained. I edited to: <|Grip still Mustang.>

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r26607 | kalab | 2008-05-27 05:31:26 -0700 (Tue, 27 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with Smell of shit and piss flows past. ...I removed a singular state from a verb by removing the verbs s. ...I edited a paragraph for another sentence because I want to have the turn left obvious for it is in mind. The turn also had a sentence with too many after words. Step left for now feels to be enough. ...I removed words of dialog that didn't need to be spoke and were not on mind or from lips. ...I wrote a sentence are the change of Dick look at faces instead of feet and the faces not make eye contact. The glasses of S.S. or congov are not many. ...Holding is better than with.And a with is gone. ...I liked flow better than run. ...I liked the propaganda bomb. ...I removed a double the. ...I mad eone sentence two. ...I edited to the end.

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r26586 | kalab | 2008-05-26 11:47:25 -0700 (Mon, 26 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from Red-hand glows. ...There were slow case letters that needed to be uppercase. ...I needed the upon for step for just sidewalk confused. ...I had step to sidewalk and didn't need curb. ...I edited to <|No door guards.>

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r26559 | kalab | 2008-05-25 06:57:53 -0700 (Sun, 25 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote people of crowd for people crowd to better define the sentence. ...I removed an of. ...I move word and removed space to better define that around and have less time ...I edited the subtarget dialog response for better comprehension. The words of why and amount needed to be defined as they are now defined. ...I removed words and space to better show and see the world known around. ...I edited dialog of warning to better define the flow and the words and the feel. ...I edit wheels to wheel for it is one on the rubber road. ..., I edted to The smell of rubber and sweat is.

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r26552 | kalab | 2008-05-24 22:19:35 -0700 (Sat, 24 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginnning. I added minor detail and some thought to better the flow. ...I edit the thought and talk of Dick to better show the flow of talk they get for they know each other well. The have the smae thoughts. ...I edited the granola carrying and whipping to remove what was not needed and to show more reason that Mustang is testing the realness of Dick. ...I edited near the end to quicken the departing embrace for they are both in a hurry. The both need to go and the great pause isn't hurry mode. A quick kiss is. ...I edited to the end.

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r26521 | kalab | 2008-05-22 21:07:30 -0700 (Thu, 22 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with: Lights shine, SHINE, then pass. ...I removed description from the actions of drive for there is no sorry said. ...I removed the reply by dick to use human minds for he is focused on other things and at the time thinks only of the limit of time. Three hours. This is also answered after always, so it need not be answered at this point of the story. ...I completed the story at: Red light on street lamp Flor fades.

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r26500 | kalab | 2008-05-21 06:23:25 -0700 (Wed, 21 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at the beginning. ...I edited the pace of the thought and the action to inhale and exhale to show focus to then rid focus as a verb and use a sense. The sense must be used. Feel and focus. Is better. ...I the edited and wrote Dick moving to plug ears after hearing the wind up of motor. I like the one sentence for it quickens the pace, the time. The reason Dick is able to plug ears. And show the awareness. ...Drone stare. I wrote that and didn't use that as a already defined metaphor. I used drone stare to define the stare that spreads. That was an obvious edit. ...I edited in mind for where else would it be\? ...I wrote hanging of shirt because Dick likes a clean shirt. ...Better definitions of page through showing Page Pins. ...I think I want stagecoach as on word. I feel this is a standard. It may be the other way,. I now like it as one word. ...I wrote more of the shouting of move for it is overwhelming and hard to ignore. I think what is written completes the idea and creates more of a book. I had to write, but that is okay for the words written are worth the words and meaning. I then removed the old one sentence of defining the sound and found that it could be removed, so there was a balance. ...I wrote and ended edit with I feel and think, <|Mustang will.> This to complete the reality and feeling and show the connection between Dick and Mustang.

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r26481 | kalab | 2008-05-20 06:05:29 -0700 (Tue, 20 May 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. ...The limb catching definition didn't need all those words. ...I removed a the for it may imply all. ...I read a lot then read the need to fix the reason for the being alive. The question loop. The question loop was then edited for answers for questions is. ...I read on and found the mention of the G44 again. I read and liked it. ...I defined the building a Secret Sentry for it is. ...I removed thought because the thought was not needed. One sentence between dialog. No. ...I had to answer the question of the steel door. ...I used the dance metaphor for it is part of the record definition for outside. ...I edited to the end. I liked the words and the words written complete the book.

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r26451 | kalab | 2008-05-18 19:59:21 -0700 (Sun, 18 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning of the chapter. ...I got rid of an of. ...I moved words to better define the subject. ...I continued the dance metaphor. ...I continued the metaphor by replacing mass with dance. Dance was a dance. Smooth and going. ...I used the choreograph word for taxi for the thought is still in Dick's mind. There is there reality there are a lot of dance clubs. ...I removed and of and Group of for the plural bikers is enough. Group feels redundant. ...There was a need for a plural then a verb. ...The replace of to with and for to is objective and and is better for it is what happened. ...I changed the singing metaphors to dance then nothing as the dance ends as does the metaphor for the screaming stops. ...I wrote the internal dialog of maybe wanting a hot dog for dinner to begin the reference to sam's hot dogs. ...I edit to the end.

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r26368 | kalab | 2008-05-06 23:27:22 -0700 (Tue, 06 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I like the new beginning of the sound. And the words written bring me into the scene better and the thought better and the flow better than it did before the prior edit. ...I read felt the need to removes some words that included face because it just wasn't need to show the change in attention of the vision. Then I edited it all for it wasn't of the flow of the story and the narrative. ...There were edits to show the sex flow back and forth. ...There was a word to be more specific and make things better. ...I removed and move and change minor this and that for this and that reasons. ...I removed and it to make a thought more relaxed and free flowing. ...I removed some specific description of which hand scratch the stomach for it is not needed. It in facts makes the record dumb. The mind wouldn't focus. The record is the mind. ...I changed words to make a confusing sentence something of sense. ...I remove s sentence for the site would have changed the thought and I didn't want to change the thought. ...I had to make one sentence two to clarify. ...I edited to the end.

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r26317 | kalab | 2008-05-04 09:47:40 -0700 (Sun, 04 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I didn't like the beginning for the definition of the light below was vacant. The scene felt empty and incomplete. There were some minor changes made to have the flow be. There weren't much changed. ...I removed words to increase story. A few ofs removed which made for better definition and story. ...There were a couple of verbs missing. They were written. ...I removed a sentence defining center tap when walk back to it for it was not needed. ..I edited the room in all description to be a circle to follow the definition of the all. ...I edited right forearm to left forearm for it is the left that saves from Psycho. ...I edited to the end. I need to read just the end over and over and find the words. I think I have them. Maybe, but see it some times and not others.

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r26300 | kalab | 2008-05-03 13:43:07 -0700 (Sat, 03 May 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I wrote the I hold breath to define that critical fact. ...I need to decide if it will be Gee Forty-three or Gee forty-three. Think it will be Gee Forty-three. ...I removed the use of back pack for pack is enough. ...I moved a thought because it needed to occur sooner and before. ...I removed an action of mouth close with told cause that can be shown. It's obvious it is closing to help the breath. ...I edited to The white door pops open.

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r26274 | kalab | 2008-05-01 23:22:20 -0700 (Thu, 01 May 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I thought about changing the beginning. I thought if it needed. And if not then what could it be. It may change if I feel or see Dick isn't that suspecting of America. It could be changed with terrorist. It will be for that is perfect. Terrorist has already been removed and replace with the slang global. I will need to search am ensure that terrorist isn't thought or spoke by Dick. ...I remove 'from the sky' for where else can rain fall from when out in the open.. ...I removed more words of rain description for they were redundant. ...I replace upon with over for water flows over. ...I replace create with are for are is better. ...I replace Psycho seeing eight bits of data to Dick's mind with talk because it destracts and there is no reason for it. This caused following changes of Dick's words and thought that did and does make the story better. ...I removed begin because begin is not needed. ...I edited a detailed description of a face and wrote just face for that is the drip. ...I mOved sentence to better define Psyhco's reason for not entering though window. ...I edited to the end. With the changes, this chapter is very near complete.

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r26221 | kalab | 2008-04-27 10:02:27 -0700 (Sun, 27 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edit the words of the beginning. ...I edit the description of shoes for shiny white shoes is only needed. Less is more. I wrote the description of the Secret Sentry again. ...I edited the talk of Psycho about asking questions then reading the minds for their some times automated response. ...I edit to to from for Dick walks from. ...The moving from tank and the walking from tank are two different things. I had to edit the walking away. ...I replace queue with people line for the words written so far and the record doesn't use queue. ...I replace want with like because want is a better word. ...I wrote the words of the people going through the Army line. The descriptoin needed so cleaning up and it reads better now. I also wrote the action of people being disarmed. ...Edit to the end. The changes made to the chapter make me feel better about it, but I don't full like it with this read. Too many edits to know.

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r26172 | kalab | 2008-04-24 07:30:04 -0700 (Thu, 24 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I removed two sentences of dialog for they ask and answer a question Dick knows. I thought long about the words of Dick and the asking of the human mind by Psycho. I think I have words that are near complete. They are better and focus more on what I am trying to write. I could be missing the mark, but I may not. I also tried to make dick's response more natural wthout removing the use of you to teach Psycho...I edited an action of Dick to an action of blacksuits because it was a separate thought that didn't been to be told. The congov use is better as blacksuits. ...I removed the sentence of congov shouting for global terrorist. This is not needed. ...I should label the formation Mark and Read for that is the formation's name. ...I like the site of big wheeled stagecoach wheels that tower over people and can be seen by Dick.

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r26146 | kalab | 2008-04-23 05:51:17 -0700 (Wed, 23 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I thought of dick questioning more of Psycho in the office about what dick and betty do, and I might write a few more evasive answers if I feel Dick is not trying to detect enough. ...I needed to continue and complete the creation and showing of the Army wall. I did that. ...I removed some commas that were followed by and of a series. ...I wrote Secret Sentry for the raised heels and then congov to throw and define congov lot. ...I removed sentence for thhe mind scan is not visible. ...Laughter is is all that is needed. ...I removed the direction of dialog from Richard to Betty to everyone. ...I removed dialog before open and a thought because the action is quick and the dialog long. dick doesn't thing or annouce as little as possible. The thought was edited that was too much of a pointer. Dick has his mind trained. I t does slip with now for there is some tension. ...I read to the end of the chapter. I like the chapter. The flow is there. I did think of needed to write the description of some one having their gun pulled from their stunned numbed hand. I really liked the travel out of Always. It is nearing good or at least okay which is good enough to publish.

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r26140 | kalab | 2008-04-22 21:11:26 -0700 (Tue, 22 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from: People walk from condominiums. ...I removed corners from a sentence for it didn't need to be. and the lights are more than at corners. ...I wrote ten instead of six because there are ten congov. ...I wrote an exclamation point after Richard's second fuck for it is exclaimed. ...Having had read the words many times I see the taxi veering left and not right through tunnel. ...I had to edit the position of the stage coach or red in left lane as it should while under the tunnel. ... edited to the end. I like the read.

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r26129 | kalab | 2008-04-22 06:36:03 -0700 (Tue, 22 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with: Jo's elbows hold steering wheel. ...I read back a couple of sentence and combined one with some for someone. I don't like the separate words. ...I removed a thought for it went too far. the thought would stop before the count of possible Psycho people. ...I moved the description of all the people standing in the streets because it needed to be read before the movers. The position was bad. ...I edited the popping of transmission out of gear because Jo is not holding the stick shift, but is plugging ears. The sentence needed to be edited and show and not told. ...I removed a sentence that was redundant of description written the sentence before. ...I then read back to read the move sound of the red and blue spoked coaches. I read a words that needed to be spreads and was spreas. ...I wrote move move move move move where needed. I think having written the words the story is better. It was only move. ...I wrote no music is for Dick notice the music has faded and is gone. ...I have Richard say stagecoaches to show the transition of definition and have the transition for the record to record with out spoke. ...I edited the write of the sound of the oxygenators. Like any good white noise you only notice the beginning and the end. ...Spins is better than the other description. ...I write an and and change smiling to smile then I removed the words because Jo smiles soon after. ...I edited some of the dialog of Dick talking Football with Richard because it needed better words and flow. ...I wrote but... to vaguely complete the dialog. ...I edited very well to good for good is more defining and command like for the congov to say. I think because of the movement that Dick will notice the algae exhaust. ...I had to edit Regan to Reagan ,which I sometime spell Ragan. ...I then thought of the need to edit chapter 0100 for I probably spelled it the same. ...I edited the look of George past Dick to removed the description of what George may be looking at. ...I wrote description to define the congov. ...I edited to: Six congov approach right of taxi. Four congov approach left of taxi.

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I began the edit from Breeze blows through taxi window. ...I had to edit the words after the beginning of the edit because I feel Richard should have spoke some of the words. ...I edited from in to on because one walks on a street and not in it unless it is s tube. ....I read to the next edit. The words and action and things feel like the flow is. The things are felt and seen. The dialog what it needs to be. ...The edit of Us focused to We focus that is better. ...I wrote to have Ash smell of whiskey for he is drunk. ...Richard saying should be a shout because of all the noise. ...A two sentence paragraph needed two verbs. The were written. ...I removed an of taxi to taxi windows for the flow is better and an of was rid. ...I moved a dialog sentence of the better flow as found sentences later. ...I edited to An ass leans upon window.

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r26103 | kalab | 2008-04-20 22:58:25 -0700 (Sun, 20 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with: Car pops, slows behind stagecoach. ...I made soft thumps plural for it needed to be. ...the description of nose is what it is for it is the words to be. ...I was going to remove the giving of cash, but thought it best to leave. ...I edited to The mass swarms upon the streets and sidewalks, left and right..

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r26095 | kalab | 2008-04-20 13:12:47 -0700 (Sun, 20 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at: I grab glass of scotch. Rim hovers bellow nose.. ...I needed a then. ...I removed a sentence to remove the words because Betty doesn't take the salt. ...I wrote a sentence we eat for time does pass and feel the need to generally show what is. ...I rid the words of another with. ...I used a conjunction to join two sentence that could be two the replaced a to with an at for it is at Eleanor. ...I removed some smiling and winking of Dick for he was to be more calm. I replace with a slow head nod. ...I added words to have Dick burping because of beer then exhaling. I am using nod with pivot for pivot is more exaggerated or expressive. ...I replaced Con with Conn for it should be Conn. ...I removed words of a thought desription that no longer is. ...I replaced a comma with a period. I wrote a sentence of we following betty for it was kind of felt to be needed after editing the sentence of a head and drink. The head and drink was able to remove a with ...I edited to the end. The words felt to flow.

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r26076 | kalab | 2008-04-19 17:57:45 -0700 (Sat, 19 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at the beginning. ...I removed a sentence that was not needed for it was defining motion that happened in the chapter before. ...I wrote the process of Dick buttoning up his shirt before the tie is tied. ...I removed internal dialog that was too out of flow with the action and the thought. It felt too forced and fake. ...The action to the line to enter the place of Larry's Fajita's I reallly liked. I think it is of a flow. The editing of the past to crosss the street has improved the words and the story. I did read it a couple of time and think I read it slow enough to focus. ...I removed thought telling of level three. This was not needed. ...I removed words that read to have Dick step on level three twice. ...I minor edit to dialog to give reason Dick doesn't order the Larry's Fajita. ...I edited I to me for it should be me. ....I edited to <|Bourbon.> The words have the flow wanted. I liked. Nearing done or so it feels.

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I began the edit from the stop seen. ...I removed street for that is too specific and the record would trigger. For Q it would not. I removed a sentence that should have been two sentence, but really should have been removed. ...I removed the thought for hunger and the inspection of thin fence because Dick is focused on Psycho and the seeing and expecting of a thin fence is a thought of lack of integrity and some thing that is more thief like than detective. ...There was a non plural and word that needed to be one word. ...I removed words because I want exhales gone and the speaking has no base or reason even if the reason is chaos. I made the step left more explicit. ...I removed report. ...I thought of the fact Psycho is still reporting about Mustang talking with Richard about Redskins. So I returned to the turning off of reporting and included with exception mom, dad, Mustang or clue people. ...I then edit to Shrubs emit rise and fall of the cicadas buzz.

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I began the edit with The movers drip sweat. The movers pull past. ...I edit the position of a lean. ...I edited traffic to the description of traffic to the actually objects. ,,,I added a verb where needed. ...I sync verbs of speech so they are now the same. I again edited the scan and focus of the layout of the area of the circle to show some focus and better define to Dick the scene. I added more repetition of definition to show a focus of placement. ...I edit a though to Dick to define some thing as gentree though the official record defines it as a tree. ...I replace a comma with an and because an and was needed. ...I removed most of a sentence for it was repeated with the following paragraph and was better with the detail removed to be in the following paragraph. ...I moved the thought for it had to be after the action of Psycho's fading voice. ...I removed description because the fact is lees is more and the desciption in and leaving the circle was just not needed and convoluted things. ...I also thought of the need to have Psycho's number mentioned in the introduction of Psycho. I think I will. I will let this be a thought until the next read and edit through. ...I edited to: A murder of drones forms a circle. I had thoughts of the words that make me feel the words are near complete.

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I edited from the beginning of the chapter. ...I replaced take flight for that is to metaphoric. ...I remove description of the door because it has long been logged and no longer is a focus of anything Dick thinks. ...I remove else because it is a thought and the thoughts are short and free of useless words. ...The action of every other step was removed for it was not needed and was not some thing focused. ...I edited the walk up to better show the entire walk. ...I liked the change of replacing step with stair where needed. ...I edited another verb of words of sound that I now realize I sort of just read over. ...I removed a sentence for the words need not be. ...I removed the pivot of Dick pivoting head up and down because it is sign that he wants to convince and Dick doesn't need to convince. It is true. It is an action that just is not Dick. ...There was a dialog mark that was incorrect and corrected. there was a removal of word that was not needed and the thought better. ...I removed a sentence that was confusing exchange between Mustang and Dick. The dialog sentence is now better. ...I need to write of Dick standing for it is not read....I edited a sentence by removing it. ...I changed mane to hair for mane is way to metaphoric. ...I edited the walk down stairs to better show the pace and the flow of footsteps. This will be better. ...I edited to the end.

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r25972 | kalab | 2008-04-13 14:21:13 -0700 (Sun, 13 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at: The sound of combution is. ...I better defined a car passing from behind. I think I had a better show of what could go on. ...I removed a few words here and there. ...I edit the description of cars to better show flow. ...I edit the beginning of the description of the Chinese embassy to show cause of the focus which is because Dick believes dick sees a shadow of maybe Psycho. ...I replaced Con with Con for I think I am using two n's. ...I wrote dialog of description for it is better as description. ...The words as a whole have some flow. ....I edited to the end of the chapter and found the words new done. ...I did write for the chapter the growth of white oaks for they are nut bearing tree.

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r25960 | kalab | 2008-04-13 08:38:41 -0700 (Sun, 13 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning of the chapter. ...I edited a sentence by removing it for ti was too metaphoric, and it had a repeated meaning not needed for a focused mind. ...I do think I will lessen the amount of ofs used for they slow the thought and pace of many of the words. ...I edited a sentence of description that needed to have less words and now does. ...I moved a sentence to better place and time the words. ...I added a verb. ...I moved sentence that define the siren soon after the siren to show how the siren spreads soon after its beginning. ...More editing of the people and their actions. I actual wrote an of. I think and of is good when the object remains the focus of the paragraph, but needs to be attached to another object. ...I am finding some of the description to be cluttered in places. ...I edited to the opening of plastic drawers. I had the thought of editing chapter 1 again to focus on ofs. I think the withs a done, but now the ofs are.

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r25952 | kalab | 2008-04-13 00:26:04 -0700 (Sun, 13 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I change terrorist to global for that is what it needs to be. ...I replace all the words of core with sphere. ...I edited thought for better flow. ...I edited this and that. I made sure sphere was everywhere. The dialog with Dick and Psycho has a flow. It is a bit much, but this is a detective asking questions in a secure place. ...I moved a sentence to better have the flow. ...I like the chapter. Some changes were made, but not many. I edited to the end.

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r25942 | kalab | 2008-04-12 14:52:49 -0700 (Sat, 12 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at the beginning of chapter. ...I change frame of door to door frame to use the better from read with the two sentences of the paragraph. And to sync the paragraph I thought to change to be the same. ...I wrote out another of for better alliteration and better definition with upon and not over. ..I move the physical description of what Psycho is wearing for it should occur sooner and it was stopping the flow, so there wss no way this is how the reacord reads. The story reads better. ...I will have Psyhco use lots of ofs and Dick use less. Few. But some. To show but not tell if one is learning from the other or could be the other or be just some that happens to be. ...I read the words of of of the prior chapter. It is uses a lot. And I think it is use a lot during the book. Maybe that is just how the record is and it is why Psycho speaks like the record because that is what Psycho reads. ...Remove of of Dicks' thought. ...edit to remove the use, the metaphor, next door because it is a metaphor. ...I rationalize the craziness of the ofs by thinking that the record is Pycho and the Psycho is the rocord. The thoughts of Dick will not and should not have to many ofs. No more than now. ...I don't know what the word meld was written for. Why. Connect is better. ...I thought of the ofs. I use ofs a lot. I think I will not use many ofs after this book. The next not many. I will think of removing ofs of ths chpater fi needed. It could be used as some thing to slow or show a different focus. ...I edited to the end. Even with the of question the chapter feels very near complete.

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r25922 | kalab | 2008-04-12 08:09:40 -0700 (Sat, 12 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit on the line Mouth is dry. ...I remove the to that defines a purpose of action that need not be. ...I edited the removal doctors description because there are few doctors and the focus is the subjects. ...I moved a sentence to better create the needed flow of action that change the focus by distraction and direction. ...I wrote an adjective to define the position. ...I edit words to better describe the dress of the leather bikers. ...There was a sentence that needed to be take from one paragraph to the prior. I edited to this change to put bike description with bikers.

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r25914 | kalab | 2008-04-11 22:29:39 -0700 (Fri, 11 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit at The darkness becomes blood red. ...I had to edit the words of the stepping for they didn't feel; like there was a step. There was lots of changes to the words and actions of the stepping. The entire action nearing fucked. The edit will help clarify. ....I removed description of the walls for it was too much. ...Ire mvoed more description words for they were not needed and counter to the entire story. .. I need to add a verb to words. ...I edited to the end. The removing of all the Psycho and Dick talk makes the story end as needed. At lease, that is how i read it now.

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r25900 | kalab | 2008-04-10 23:00:23 -0700 (Thu, 10 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ... I removed a word because it was not needed. ...I edited and enjoyed the story flow. ...I head to change the sentence about teeth to broken teeth for it is what came to mind when I edited the words. ...Dick reach for medstick after a thought. The thought to show focus. ...I made one sentence two for the inhale and exhale is separate from saliva spraying. ...I removed the words thoughout room because there really hasn't been a room defined for the pain is the only thing defined. ...I removed the word here from thought because here made the thought too complete. ...I felt I needed to better define the rainbow glow. ...I edited to the rainbow glow.

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r25875 | kalab | 2008-04-08 21:38:25 -0700 (Tue, 08 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit near the thought to clean the air. ...There was the two descriptions of the mouth that needed to be changed. ...I replace and's with comma's because I wanted things to happen fast. The coughing. ... ...I edited o the separating of items.

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r25801 | kalab | 2008-04-07 05:27:05 -0700 (Mon, 07 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning and edited to the change of state of mind to nothing is. ...The words have the flow.

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r25782 | kalab | 2008-04-06 06:54:17 -0700 (Sun, 06 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I wrote a missing letter. ...I moved the definition of podium position for the order read to me better now after the edit move of words. This change also shows the difference between Richard speaking and the record. ...I removed two telling sentence for they don't need to be spoke to tell. Even if they did I would remove them for it is like reading a bad script when the two sentences were read. ....I read of the core and what the core was and is. I edited around there and stopped.

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r25777 | kalab | 2008-04-05 23:36:31 -0700 (Sat, 05 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning of the chapter as I always do. Or if I have not edited from the beginning on a prior edit an stop edit before the chapter is read. ...I wrote chest burn for it does. Dick's chest burns. ..I wrote the It before the will of the thought because the pain make the thought focused and complete. ...I like the action and verb of bang better than the words once used to define. ...I like the use of is and are to define state of body during the emotion and reality and thought and belief of Mustang being dead and parent really in danger. ....I don't like tos. I prefer ands snd verbs. ...I edited to Imsorry.

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r25767 | kalab | 2008-04-05 15:12:20 -0700 (Sat, 05 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the congov with yellow tie to be the red tie secret sentry of the prior chapter. ...The thought of Dick after is too con gov the congov a silent what of insulting without alarming or incite Psycho has to feel to intercede.

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I edited from the beginning. ...I still like the beginning. Though I am jaded of editing The Detectives Store, reading the sentence did want me to read more words....I thought of defining the high of the buildings and thought I will write something Richard asks which is which building is taller than the washington monument Dick will say, The Regan Hotel. then the height of the buildings and the height of the flight of the drones is defined. ...I changed a says to a look because a says was written. A Always to the There because she is just general. ...Jo looks at not in mirror. ...I thought of small definition of words a lot. How to present. The types of congov . I thought of all of The Detective Store. ...I had to make some thing and write more of the congov that was with yellow tie is now red for it is Secret Sentry. There is the talk of Richard to show Richard has befriended Dick and is a worker maybe of higher level than the field worker. ...Maybe I won't define. Maybe Richard is just thinking he wants to show off and shouldn't. This will better the words and actions of this simae Secret Sentry of the next chapter. ...I wrote sentence for we step for there is a feeling of we stepping up with the thought goes. ...I removed Dick relaxing body for he is shocked and numb and not tense and resisting. ...I edited to the edit. The reading smooth to the end.

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r25713 | kalab | 2008-04-02 05:30:11 -0700 (Wed, 02 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with I remember name. I read and edited. I edit read. ...I found a work that wanted to be handkerchief. ...I edit read. ....I read and edited and wrote spoked when needed. After Dick tales of the stagecoaches as red and blue the spoken must be written. ...I the edit read back near to the first site of the stagecoaches and made sure all I seen was spoke stagecoach. ...I corrected a couple more lower case stagecoach at the beginning of sentence caused by find and replace for full document prior edit. ...I read edit the same words again. I still like the conversation prior to I remember the name. It was a quick edite read. ...then I began to edit read in the middle of the race where I left off. ...I edit read to the beginning of the lobe scan. I liked what was read. I think the flow of the race is enough that I can begin here next time. I am still happy with what was read and think the edits will be clean up of typos and punctuation. maybe an s for a begin Stagecoach.

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r25687 | kalab | 2008-04-01 11:52:09 -0700 (Tue, 01 Apr 2008) | 1 line
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I edit began with talking with Ash. I began and read aloud to Ezra. The words. ...I wrote the slang shades to elude to the type of congov and show more detail of knowledge. George having been longer in the city. ...I removed a sentence for the position of back is not a focus. The raising on stilts. ...I wrote I think to show focus of the creation of the direct thought. To set it off. ...Edit to change a dialog that should be Betty. ...I edited through the words of talking of free jazz and I like the free flow. ...The apple pie I liked. Ezra was looking at me paying attention. ....Ezra liked the way move when reading aloud. He smiled. ...I edited to to I think I can see an S.S. to speak and a little after.

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r25673 | kalab | 2008-03-31 21:36:54 -0700 (Mon, 31 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with making sure Richard looks back and makes a comment after congov walk to taxi then run because of the red and blue stage coaches. ...After the edit of this I thought to make sure all glasses were spectacles. ...I read and edit for a location to put the report that Psycho has dumped waste, but I think that will be saved for next chapter.

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r25648 | kalab | 2008-03-30 21:29:05 -0700 (Sun, 30 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I begin with the ordering of scotch. ...I edit and read the words of the scotch. I liked. ...I moved a sentence defining the FaJITa to have ti come after the plate is defined and before the actual label is applied to the object. ...The words of dinner are there. there was a need to move sentence to better the order. And I addded more of Dick chewing and eating unlike everyone else. ...I read to the end of the eating when they were leaving and I realized that some one will have to say some thing to Mustang. The words written feel complete. I edited to the end.

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r25619 | kalab | 2008-03-30 06:52:41 -0700 (Sun, 30 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I edited the walk across street to define a shyffle. ...I edited a sentence with no verb. ...I remove words and half a sentence and made two sentence paragraphs a paragraph to better define the object. ...I made paragraph to group the action of Dick. ...I edited the stepping through to Larry's Fajita to better time with walk across given the words, the story and the timing of where and when. ...I edited away some dialog that I read a couple of time and it just wasn't lasting or needed or real or of this scene. ...I neeed to define congov in some instances more than I have been. I did during this edit and I can think of on e other instance where I probably need to use blacksuits or Secret Sentry instead of congov. That is next chapter. ...I removed words to better define the flows and bed of truck. And clarify the definition. ...I thought for more than a few minutes about the Psycho and the mention of dumping nuclear waste. While I reasoned that I will contineu to leave this in for the nano machines could contain a nano nuclear reactor (or the core. The outter shell. I thought of removing this. I thought of replacing it with some way to and explination of running out of power, but that has been done. Leaving this will further show Psycho is at the end of a power cycle. I only need to remember to dump the waste. Psycho will dump the waste while Dick is in Larry's Fajitas. I need to remember for next chapter to dump the waste or report. In fact, Dick will suggest to go find a safe place to dump while inside so Psycho is detected. ...I better defined the vehicle gardens and what is in them. I wrote of a Hummer for I thought a Hummer wold make and will make a great cage for rats and pigeons. ...I remvoed more words defining people with red things on. Two sentence paragraphs. They were useless. ...I read on to the entrence. I like what is now written for the journey to the doors. I think next edit the read will be smoothing adn the edit minimal for the slow edit now found many of what I think are the last things needed to complete the book. ...I searched and replace all the , and with and for all things of a series. ...I edited to the walk up the stairs and the beginning of the search for Mustang and clue people.

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r25610 | kalab | 2008-03-29 17:50:02 -0700 (Sat, 29 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. ...I moved a sentence becuase the clouds are noticed before the stars. ...I removed a sentence that was left after a move or for some reason there was a duplicate. ...I will not begin to edit the comma and of a , and of a series of items. I think think is how the record is. This is the record. ...I replaced all Connecticut with Conn for the system could be triped. ...A ministry is better a church for a church is a building. coffee shop\? More like a cafe. No need to define what is drank. ...I replace 'out into' with to because I can't reason or think of what the out into means. ...I removed words that were redundant description and making things over defined. I removed more words. That felt good because the one gone made many. ...I found better adjectives to define because the ones used were misplaced. ...I moved and wrote a couple of sentences to better define the talk and though of Dick and Psycho. ... I changed detective company to just company of a thought for dick has no reason and begins with the general. ...I replaced side walk with sidewalk. ...I edite by moving and removing of words at the beginning of the walk through the circle and with the S.S.. The order was off and the flow of the record seemed to skip somwhere. The flow is better now with the removal of conflicting definition and moving of description to find the words flow. ...I need to look more at all the flow and scene and found thing that didn't mean much. ...I read the walk out to the edge of circle and I wrote words to show standing on edge waiting for light. Stands by people waiting. Doesn't draw attention because everyone is talking with some one. ...I moved sentences to define the people after the crowd for the people come are the crowd. ...I moved redundant location and seeing of Psycho. I removed two sentences but the meaning remaind. ...I edit read a couple of missing verbs. Only a couple. ...The words from the beginning to the crossing of the circle are very near complete. The changes made I think will just about put this chapter or this part to rest in the mind. I like it. I can read it. I can feel the prose and see the story and know the characters. ...I edited on. ...I wanted to show and complete the action of the stage coach almost hitting the two men grappling. ...I removed sentence paragraphs of thought and description of input of a specific vehicle guardian because of it's detail of the body. This si not going to be a thought or a focus for Dick would have noticed and defined it long ago. Only the plants change to register change and make record if a focus. ..Removing more rubber adjectives for it is known most of the time I have written or read and transposed the record of mind to page. ...I removed more words and wrote to edit the description after the flash. And after the flash I had to write the recognition of the hovercopter. ...I like better the beginning of thought and self and record after the strobe flash. It is becoming. ...The walk to the propaganda bomb is what is needed. There some verb issues, but those were easy to edit once edit read. ...Near the end I wrote a with for it was the best way to define. ...I read to the end. ...The edit read of the propaganda bomb read some thing I liked. Not as deep as the half flash, but effective for the people around to control the crowd incase something does happen. ...The edit to the end made me feel the chapter is very close to some feeling of complete.

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r25599 | kalab | 2008-03-29 00:53:20 -0700 (Sat, 29 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from before crossing con. I removed that that was not needed and was showing too much with words....I read and made better the scene of Dick closing eyes then opening for flash The right of defining people was neat, but dick's eyes are closed and right then he is either focused on thought or more controlled thought. ,,,I read and liked what was read. ...I edited and read and like what I read. ...Then I edited for Mass for full name has been edited to part name so the system won't trigger the record if this is a record of anything. ...I worked with commas and ands to passe the action. Slow or fast. I edited to the edited to the end. The words feel to be good.

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r25556 | kalab | 2008-03-26 04:43:13 -0700 (Wed, 26 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with body through people. ...The edit of writing a verb for pin sentence had me edit and read the paragraph again and then I want to better write the Page line sentence and did. ...I edited to the walking across of street. I will begin after the cross next edit.

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r25534 | kalab | 2008-03-25 13:29:43 -0700 (Tue, 25 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I edited from the beginning. I removed the use of song as some metaphor tool for it was not needed. ...I removed the verb of hear in sentence near beginning because that has been shown. ...I edited by removing words that were just not needed. They were too much of everything. They where remove and made words more. ...I edited articles to focus the and a or rather a and the. ...There was refining of words and object and subects and verbs. Some to make it better. Some that needed correction. Nothing was really added and there were words taken away and moved to better define and show. ...I read the shaking and thought the walls vibrate. ...I like the sound and the flow to the thought. It is the action of the record. ...then I read more thought that needed to be removed. Then I edited and removed. I edited read the words. ...I edited read the words will be the way of defining all reads. I edited read the words and edited wrote by removing. ...I really like the flow from desk to exit. The walk down stairs. The thought the show the movement is good. At least, I believe it to be. ...The edit of the hall better for is is not passive. The along sort of slowed thing down. ...I need a verb for a long sentence i like long. ...

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I read from the beginning to the end. I edited from the beginning to the end. There were changes of removing words. More removing worfds than anything. Lots of words were removed to make more of what is. What is is something very near complete. I edited from beginning to end. The flow and dialog what is needed. Some of the description written and refined to show a bit more. The focus is on the words and the minor details to find out facts of the situation. The thought read and thought and read and thought. I like the thought and the flow. Most the old prose description has been edited. The chapter read. I liked it.

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r25500 | kalab | 2008-03-24 06:10:40 -0700 (Mon, 24 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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From first sentence, I edited. ...There are two sidewalks. ...There was a need to make a sentence to shorten the sentence and focus on the object. ...There was the need to write internal dialog to focus the thought. This with Clean and dim. ...Before I edited by moving internal dialog for the dialog to be set off properly ,,,I realized when editing that there is no dialog. Only internal dialog...Thought. ...I removed plastic for there was no reason for there to be the mention of plastic. ...I had to add sweat early for it felt too long of the story fo there not to be sweat and checking the record there is sweat, so there is sweat. ...I read from the beginning three times. I am a bit disappointed at the amount of editing having not read much of the chapter, but I do like what was edited and written. What needs to be thought is now thought. It is becoming like the other chapters. This first good, but it is now of the style of the other chapters. And though there should be prose as there still is because the thought is more relaxed and not focus on a case, thought is thought and should be shown as such. It, the chapter, is better for it. ...The words come along. ...I edited to the end. After about the middle, it was more smooth and thought and edited. Most of the edit time was with th ebeginning. I am sure the amount of change will show this. I read and read the end. I liked. A few issues found, but good. Near...

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I had a flash thought while getting fishstick out of oven. I had after thought of the past edit. Something about stairs. ....I thought of the falling and the fact Dick is alone. And was with people. Then I thought of why Dick didn't try to talk to the suits. So I felt it was because he was shocked. A shock rod. He will look at the column and try to tell Benjamin. I wrote words so the scene is complete. I think what I wrote is good. I figure the reason Dick doesn't struggle or shout to Betty and George and Richard is because he is shocked with shock rod and lost. The focus returns out. He looks for Betty in tube. ...I edited the beginning. I think I have the words to show Dick. This completes more of the chapter. It shows what is needed to show may things.

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I read from the beginning. ...I read and found less in more is more now. I left a with because a with was needed. I found a missing period. ..I liked the hope and lost. ...I wrote the elipsis for some reason. Read good. I like the words. I edited to the press of the first medstick push. ...I think it is near good. There were words that were better in a few sentences. ...I edited a few verb instances. The verb instances made the sentence better after the change. ...I removed orders of some confusing prose, so the words were prose. ...I removed a thought that just wasn't a thought. Not one had for reason or insanity or pain. ...I added the thought for the test because it is. ...read and read. ...I changed flat to smooth for it is not flat. ...I move thought for the thought was written out of order. I like the words. ...What dick felt and thought after the shakes is that it is safer on the edge for the drill is likely drilling for middle. ...Dick is drawn to the center thinking the nano machines are going to connect Psycho to the system in the center and dick want to stop it. And it could be, but it could be a way to draw Dick to the center to be killed by the drill. The other feel and think thought was just removed for it is not a thought of the record. ...I read to the changing of the ceiling. I edit to the same location.

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I began at the beginning. ...The description of tunnel light flashing needed an edit. It is better now. It is more.. ...I think I have decided that in will not be comma and (, and), but will be just and. for a series of words. ...I moved a sentence to better time of entering. ...I like the edits made for last edit. The banging is better and easier to explain for no shaft is really needed. ...The leaving of cube and the light description needed to change flicker is better than flash for it is more of a flickerr. and not a flash. And there is only one fan. ...I wrote more showing of the effects of the gas. ....The description of staircase at end was copied. the other description felt confusing. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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I read from the beginning to the minor correction of making in to into into. After this I stopped the edit.

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r25425 | kalab | 2008-03-19 05:54:48 -0700 (Wed, 19 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning and then edited the prior chapter. ...I edited a word for water hasn't built up that fast. ...I read to the edge of the pond and near the scuring of Psycho to white light. ...I like the words now. I think the reason is sane and of charater. What is shown is what is felt. ...I think. Becoming complete.

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r25423 | kalab | 2008-03-19 05:42:39 -0700 (Wed, 19 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning of the chapter to begin the edit. ...I removed a to and removed some words that were redundant in description. ...I wrote sentences to describe a congov coming and walking up to Dick on the ground. ...I remove dialog of the whole answer question internal and external dialog. I read and read and read this section. I had to edit some words by removing or replacing. I believe the words better written. ...I actually move a sentence because Psycho reacts quick, but not that quick to skip the mind. The skip was a good idea. I think I will use it for some thing else. Instead. Psycho moves then Psycho grabs Dick. ...I read to end. I removed some words to make the description better.

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r25402 | kalab | 2008-03-18 12:16:03 -0700 (Tue, 18 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from description of Dick speaking to Betty and gang about always. The the scream of the global read. ...I reordered words with space to better show how the event is. It read better in the talk of Richard now asking as he does. ...I like the Army change. Better. ...I removed words of lines and focused on a sidewalk object and found what was needed for words. ...dick needs to be aware of the man behind and is aware. I needed to make more of the man behind you always need to look out for. ...One sentence made two because one sentence was two sentences of the record. ...I wrote more description of walking between. I like what was read. It is what feels to be need. Most so far is complete. I like that. ...I read to the questioning of the strenght of the tube.

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r25390 | kalab | 2008-03-18 06:41:03 -0700 (Tue, 18 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the stop of the soft-thumps. I read and removed a few words. I read and liked the people waving. The edit last edit created a better sentence. ...The talk by the Hotels I like. Feels good. I did write words of sweat after focus is shifted after Betty and Richard talk of cool and dry. ...I had the color of stage coaches inncorrect for I want red left and blue right while hidden under the tunnel. ...The write of the drones is to show drones in the sky. Many more than normal....the write of more of Betty talking with hands and not words is good because she is lost in thought and not totally away she is talking with hands. But that is find. I am sure this is also me learning or beginning to learn sign. ...I wrote better description for the stage coaches entering the people of U turn of Con. ..I edit moves to chants. I like the verb chants. And giving the subject move sounds chants behind. I kind of like. I may edit next thinking too abstract. But I think the record is unique and inn the frame the best record. ..I read to the end. I removed the second to last sentence for Dick doesn't need or doesn't say twice thank you and I know the next chapter has Dick saying thank you and that is just not an accurate record.

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r25375 | kalab | 2008-03-17 17:04:26 -0700 (Mon, 17 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from after the scan. I will leave the changes in order for the next edit. I haven't read the last log, but I am sure it is what it needs to be. ...Then I change the lobe scan write to mind and not spoke. ...After writing and thinking of the sentence for the lobe scan beginning, i wrote dialog to tell how weird it is. It's a good reason to begin Betty and George's dialog. And the Richard. ...I scanned the internal dialog during the scan and found a few punctuation errors with a missing horizontal bars. ...I remove a second shift of Jo's taxi. Two found. The first on used, but moved it in a position that is about between the two instances.

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r25353 | kalab | 2008-03-16 16:10:15 -0700 (Sun, 16 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with George saying, You get to tell the S.S.. ...I read of the description of the intersection and read a sentence that was okay, but confusing, so edited the sentence by removing words and wrote another that was more showing and clear and understood. ...There were a couple of verb writing issues. ...I removed another with. ...I moved a few sentence around the space to better order the timing and the thought and the action for that is how it happened. ...I had to rewrite the sentence of congove raising white tent because it was out of order. ...I moved a sentence before another to have a better description flow and how what is seen and what is revealed. ...There were sentence issues that were depressing because the words shouldn't be that fucking out of order. The stage coach passing from behind taxi is where the fucked ordered words were. ...The words A GLOBAL TERRORIST RED IS IN AREA. BE AWARE was written a couple more times as they pass because it needs and is shouted more. ...I removed words of Dick saying he is a yellow. this was removed because after Dick sees Eleanor's gun he becomes less than honest for fear of his life. ...And still more sentences that were not of the order or decription needed. ...I thought about the honesty of Dick in the taxi before the sound is heard that makes them forget even thought Eleanor has a gun. I think he will still be honest and open until he sees that Eleanor grabs the gun, before she forgets, making it know to him that honesty of an uncertain truth to some one with a gun is not a wise idea. ...I also have the gun moved to the jacket, or under the jacket, so that correction was made. ...I had to arrange the actions of Richard and the group before the siren sounds. The act of Richard yellig needed to be pushed back to before the siren sounds and not spaced through the action. I also had to make sentences paragraphs to make the action at the same time or not so spaced. The result I think is better telling. The words are of an edit that shouldn't be, but it. ...I believe the flow and order better now. ...I had to read both movements of the Red and Blue stage coach to be sure the sequence works. ...I have George and Eleanor looking at dick after the siren to show that they many not know who he is or not as well as they did before. ...I forgot that the record has Jo being more watchful of Dic after the siren because he doesn't forget teh prior conversation and the screaming. I think I will have this staring the entire drive. Jo doesn't say anything because he is more scared of what any one will do and just wants them out. ...I read to them talking about dancing to Jazz and Free jazz again. I like what was read. There were more edit than i would hope, but the edits made have mde the chapter very close to completion.

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r25314 | kalab | 2008-03-15 08:11:14 -0700 (Sat, 15 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the scream: YOU'RE THE FUCKING RED... ...I edited the sentence because having the pupils move felt weird. This was the second read of the sentence. ...I wrote an three words sentence to write further define and show Richard waking. ...I moved a sentence to write the true order. ...I read the words of as for with and as need to go. I created another sentence. Better now. Even was able to remove a word. That word was as. ...I had to make one paragraph two then edit the first paragraph sentence because it was needed and now helps set up other description. ...I became picky with description. I just didn't think that many words were needed and found if I seen a better verb and used it or placed it that the words became better. ...I removed an as in dialog because it made the dialog feel more natural. And it was an as. ...I removed adjectives of Jo guiding taxi for they were not needed. ...I lift multi subject paragraphs as one to better show the action at once or the order. ...Wrote dialog to improve the flow of thought. ...I changed yes to something to open and give a effortless answer. ...I found another with when defining three congov. The sentences were made better. ...I edit Dick's though after the stilted congov are seen to make in vague then sharp then vague like a focused then relaxed thought. ...I moved around some sentence after writing silence is to show sound probably triggering the talk of Betty, who is tired of the silence. and wlik everyone else is looking for some thing to talk about. Everyone, but Jo and Eleanor and sort of Richard. ...I read to the apple pie.

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r25276 | kalab | 2008-03-12 23:10:27 -0700 (Wed, 12 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the comment about the guy saying Adam Morgan long and loud.... removed a with with a new sentence. ...I moved a few sentences around to better flow after the 18th street preacher. ...I then thought ohave a thought of dick think Psycho is the red, but Dick reasons that the government probably can't detect Psycho. ...there was the edit to make two sentences that needed to be one. ...I read to the talk of the cycles and going to museums.

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r25227 | kalab | 2008-03-11 05:58:04 -0700 (Tue, 11 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. I and a word to point to a speaker. ...I read. ...I removed a with and worthless detail. ...I read. ...I read to Eleanor talking with Dick about willing to go.

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r25209 | kalab | 2008-03-10 06:09:00 -0700 (Mon, 10 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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...I began with a verb correction. I began a little before the conversation to dump. I read and found issue with Dick having a belly for he and everyone doesn't eat much. The jacket old, nice, but difficult to replace. ...I had to write Psycho answer to question. ...I rewrote a witty scenario using graveyard. I left out graveyard with the edit last write. The sentence change and now the reinclusion of the words graveyard complete it. ...I removed words of a sentence to make the chatter really come from everywhere....I edited and read. And then I reread to read slow. The words read. The verbs I want were written and read. I did have to reread to make sure I was reading slow enough to catch the filled in verb. ...I rid the words of a comma who because it should be she and a new sentence. ...I found the order of objects didn't properly define the movement of main object. ...I grammar error with continued dialog. Glasses needed to be glass cups. ...I read to the arrival of food. I like what was read.

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r25200 | kalab | 2008-03-09 22:14:40 -0700 (Sun, 09 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the thought and internal dialog of Dick thinking of football for the propaganda bomb. ...There was a grammar issue with the internal dialog. ...I read of a verb missing and wrote it. ...I wrote of the hovercopter blade to make it a blade and not something else. ...There were a few verb issues that shouldn't have been, but they were and they were corrected. ...then I found a few more verb issues and that sucked, but they were corrected, too. ...I fond some space issues. I read and like the beginning and the end of the Propaganda Bomb. I think it flows as it should. The chapter feels to be done. ...I read to the end.

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r25179 | kalab | 2008-03-09 06:57:52 -0700 (Sun, 09 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began from the inner circle.... I wrote a sentence paragraph and edited by removed sentences from a paragraph. I read. ...I found the correct dialog quotes and changed them....Edited words for words and Edited and wrote on sentence to be two. ...There was the edit of the plural and possessive. ...I edited the telling of guns. I want to do the showing. ...I made a paragraph of sentences more paragraphs. ...I remove paragraphs sentences and words. Didn't need the thought, but wanted the thought action.

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r25151 | kalab | 2008-03-06 20:08:24 -0800 (Thu, 06 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. ...I first edited by removing words for they words less were more. ...I remove repeated description. And more words of useless description. It felt good just yanking the words and reading on. ...I focused on the fact all the windows should be closed for they don't want to lose the cool. ...Another with removed. ...And another with was removed. The description written as a sentence. ...I made the internal dialog better with editing. ...I read to the end of the chapter. The chapter is.

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r25123 | kalab | 2008-03-05 08:27:05 -0800 (Wed, 05 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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I began after leaving the mass of Adam's Morgan main and waking toward the Duke's Bridge. ...I removed a few words because the adjectives were not needed. There was sentence that was not needed. ...I remove I from a sentence and created a better sentence. ...I read and I read and I read and I liked what I read. A period here. A comma there. A few words removed. A feel and a think and some thought to play with words and show the suspect mind of Dick. The words read. ...I read of the people of the row houses and found the need to made some changes for subject and verb. ...I read the withs and liked most the withs. ...I read to the edit. There were a few verb edits. I like the chapter. The flow is feeling near complete.

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r25049 | kalab | 2008-03-01 23:12:30 -0800 (Sat, 01 Mar 2008) | 1 line
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...I read from the beginning. I read to after the sound of the siren from the drone faded and Dick remember about Psycho. I think what is now written is what is needed. There were a few thoughts and words removed because the thought or description was a bit much. More than needed.

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r25015 | kalab | 2008-02-28 22:00:01 -0800 (Thu, 28 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit from the beginning. ...I removed Psycho voice detection because it was too much. ...I removed a few more words of the thought to make the thought not too focused for a new entity is before. ...I removed more thought with a feeling of being embarrassed which feels to flow better than the thought. It defines what I wanted to define. ...I read the beginning then realize Psycho was using I a lot and should not be as of the beginning of the story, so the Is of Psycho were removed. ...I removed 'maybe' from the thought of A.I. Detectives for Dick has used A.I. Detectives. ...I edit more instances of Psycho using I or you when it should not. ....I removed more I's from the words of Psycho. ...I wrote an I to make one long sentence two. ...There was a verb correction. ...There were words written that are now written. ...I read to the end of the chapter.

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r24995 | kalab | 2008-02-27 21:33:37 -0800 (Wed, 27 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I spellchecked the file.

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r24974 | kalab | 2008-02-27 04:14:48 -0800 (Wed, 27 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with 'Clean air fills lungs.' ...I removed thought from the second paragraph read. It needed to go. Lots of thought is not much thought. Know the facts. Feel the facts. Remove the thought a few paragraphs after because the thought was stupid. ...I wrote description and showed and refused to tell. I removed more internal dialog for Dick just knows and feels. . I wrote more of a cough because it is more of a cough. ...I removed thought for it need not be told to Dick, the self. I though of changing hand but not know that one is used more than another is some thing I can read while eating. Eating is left. Dick is able to use hands left or right to do what left and right can do. ...I read to the end.

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r24956 | kalab | 2008-02-26 15:01:56 -0800 (Tue, 26 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with adding the attempt to roll Psycho out. But ca't then I thought of the down command and removed that because the down of the elevator is automatic. Somehow. I know how...Maybe. ...In fact there is no down feeling. The sound will get more distant above. ...I read from the beginning to the roll.

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r24954 | kalab | 2008-02-26 14:41:29 -0800 (Tue, 26 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I only need to move a sentence. Thought this edit while editing prior chapter, the last edit. I thought I would need to edit the order of Dick seeing the people in richshaw but it is written as it should be, so I only had to move a sentence.

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r24932 | kalab | 2008-02-26 06:19:41 -0800 (Tue, 26 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with Psycho creating a heat coil for Dick. ...I replaced watched with read for everything is a read process for the record and for the machine. ...I got lost in the action of Dick and read near the beginning and felt like writing more walking. I read and found the words to be. ...I edited the walk. I read the walk to better reason and think of the walk and the stands. This took much time. I moved words. I wrote sentences. I removed sentences. I did lots of focused reading of the description. I did focus upon the internal dialog, but the walking was the primary focus of the edit during most the edit. Then I edited to the corner of the building and the white light of K Street. I then realized that I need Dick in action to stop Richard and Betty as soon as he gets to the corner because to show and tell of urgency Dick leaves the corner as soon as he reaches the corner to either warn the guards or Tell Richard and Betty. I removed many words. It was like a balance. I wrote. Then I removed. I removed a lot of words to better time the trying to get to not enter. ...I read to the end. Everything happens fast now. That is good. The chapter is becoming better and better. Words written. Words edited. It is some thing now.

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r24902 | kalab | 2008-02-24 15:54:47 -0800 (Sun, 24 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning. ...I liked the new beginning with the change of the prior. As read as only a chapter it should begin this way for it is the easy way to begin to question other than self. The prior chapter will show Dick has reason and even after given reason to blame another blames self. The meaning changes with the prior chapter and knowing more about Dick and the situation. With the introduction to information, more is understood. The character is defined. And bad is not able to be assumed. It will be defined true of false. ....I felt upon and not against for the rain isn't against the pond and Dick's total mind doesn't define things as against. Dick knows the use of lots of against in the record will show the congov, those reading, there is conflict in Dick's total mind. ...had time to think and I thought of the walk and definition of Psycho. I thought of brush or scurry and scurry was better. Dick sees it as a scurry. ...I had a great thought in having Nothing is to define when everything is lost in total mind. There is no focus because there is just no thought no mind. Nothing is. Everything is is another. Some time, but anohter writing if ever for another. The Nothing is done twice is a bit much and I will question the next edit, but I like because Dick is strained from everything is. ...I edited a building definition show for it was an odd tell if felt. It felt it needed to show. ...I wrote more thought process of internal dialog. I wrote another nothing is to show the stop and final total lose for Dick to control all thought for he has allowed the reality to be that Mustang may be dead and he can't reason away. Almost lost. Or maybe it is all a ploy\? A set up. To get Dick in. ...I wrote and edited to the sentnce of psycho giving the okay to not feel bad or guiltly for killing Mustang.

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r24897 | kalab | 2008-02-24 14:08:44 -0800 (Sun, 24 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning and thought to add the direct thought soon after blaming America of blaming self for one can only blame self. ...I don't think that Dick should blame America first. Or should he\? How should he\? Thinking right now of it. I am thinking either America didn't kill Psycho or America didn't or...Hmmmmmmmmmm...I think I will have it be near the same. The blame of self. I will change the end of the last chapter to have the blame of Mutang's death be given to U.S. by Psycho. ...I read to the mind write of Psycho to Dick's mind and a ltttle after. The feeling of the death thought overwhelming is where or very near to the completion I want.

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r24885 | kalab | 2008-02-24 06:07:21 -0800 (Sun, 24 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. ...Only the congov the ass. The government just controlled by congov. ...Thought of the epithet was of the time. I read a bit beyond the epithet by not far beyond. ...We are a nation of epithets.

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r24878 | kalab | 2008-02-23 20:02:49 -0800 (Sat, 23 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning....I wrote I think to the first thought to follow what I think is a standard of some odd sort. ...I wrote or rather I copied sounds that occur and are used to show the shield of the words spoke by Richard later to show how the sound greets Dick as he leaves the taxi. ...I also wrote some smells of all that is. ...I wrote description that is more specific of the turrets. I wrote ...there were a few edits to fix the formation of the Army wall to better define. ....I had tha thought of Dick be the thought to :Psycho. The seeing. ...I had to add a verb that a sentence needed. ...I read to Richard getting out of cab.

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r24874 | kalab | 2008-02-23 17:04:35 -0800 (Sat, 23 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the people running from Jo's taxi. ...I then added a verb to the sounds from behind. ...Then I read of Jo's taxi and thought that it should be just taxi and changed all that I read. ...I better write the look of the guiders of stage coach and the stage coaches roll down hill. I think the showing is better now and Dick's telling is not needed. ...I reordered the shift of stick shift to better show the true use of a standard transmission. ...I had to change some thing Richard says to some think Dick says because Dick saying and talking about the sub hotels is more likely and not some thing Riehard would care about after the disappearance of the bikers...I wrote to add the moving of vehicles into a single. ...I read to Betty seeing Psycho. Or think she saw Psycho. Or maybe seeing a new drone.

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r24844 | kalab | 2008-02-21 19:53:31 -0800 (Thu, 21 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the stage coach race. I read to the new words written defining the Regan Hotel. I read between and found a few verb errors. I had to clarify in mind the football talk. All done.

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r24819 | kalab | 2008-02-19 18:04:10 -0800 (Tue, 19 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit near the end of last. The first edit was of removing words from thought to make the flow of thought more realistic. ......Then on page I read short jean shorts. The words are now jean shorts. ...I had to move a sentence for the strobe pulse. The moved sentence is now better moved. ...There were a couple of space issues where one needed to find the right place ment of words. ...I moved the sight of sign until asked that Dick answers that read to George asking for name. I like the flow a lot better and the move was good. It made all words in two places better. ...I found the need to describe. The description is where it is at. The sounds from inside none. The words after give time to silence. Dick focuses on sound. ...I edited and made better the restart of the car. The ignition sound is closer to being defined. The flow after putter out of car is now much better. The words are what I want to be felt. The state is now there. ...Found less thought was better all the time. Words were removed from much thought.,,,Removed thought of Joe and Richard about tip because Richard knows. The words were more after the words were removed. ...I had to write more about the soft thumps. I think Jo had acutally created a way to soften the thuds of bad transmission. ...I edited then wrote the question of Betty asking about Free Jazz and Dick answering. The answering preprecise because it needs to be. Dick has said it before. ...The words did flow. There were what was needed and felt to be needed. The lost and utterance of Dick about Free Jazz and the free thought. The thought of him thinking it with words or internal dialog. ...I read to after the sound of the conarmy drone. I thought of changing the conarmy to congov, but decided to leave it. ...The words are becoming. The edits are.

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r24784 | kalab | 2008-02-18 07:25:27 -0800 (Mon, 18 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning. ...I had the need to removed a word from description. I read the words t define the congov mock and found some of the words worthless. Too much to be a frame of Dick's now thought flow. ...I found some internal dialog edits where the sentence needed to be incomplete and fragments for Dick's time and thought not that quick. I also ordered events into paragraphs to make things happen almost at the same time. ...I edited to the shaking of hand of Dick and Jo.

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r24780 | kalab | 2008-02-18 05:03:43 -0800 (Mon, 18 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the arm around shoulder. I read and read and then edited. I had to slow things down. ...I removed thought and action because it was not needed and not of the story record. ...I changed removed altered sentences for better dialog. I wrote words, but removed words to better stage the scene character. The acts short. The food shoved in. I like. ...I read and edited to the beginning of the eating and asking of Betty how the squab is.

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...I began wit the begin. I read and read edit for the verb The verbs were needing some change to be the way they needed. There were a couple different verb fixes, but they were read and changed. Once edited, changed, the sentence read as sentences of the book. ..There was some space added to paragraphs by making three because the paragraphs. ...I thought again if it was going to be ,and or just and with the last of sequence of objects or items. ...there were some need for a work or two of though or of feeling to show the realizeation and the mind of Dick. ...I read longer than expected without feeling to make change. I like the flow of Dick not talking an talking. This is some thing I think I actually have done good and not bad. ...I read to a server stops. I like it. I will read on tomorrow. The words are near something.

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I began somewhere. began and I did read through the hot dog request to the pedestrian. ...I did write a sentence to define and show a stage coach an not just elude to one. Dick does pivot left. .,,I read the inspecting circle a lot. I do not

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r24727 | kalab | 2008-02-14 20:23:10 -0800 (Thu, 14 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I thought yesterday or the day before the need to have opening and closing of window something to talk about because one doesn't want the window to let out the coolness. This I have written in with a few words. I think it words. I am sure there are errors, but it is here. The words make more of less.

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r24704 | kalab | 2008-02-13 17:53:47 -0800 (Wed, 13 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the departure of Mustang. An edit to better define the departure with what is shown to be shown. These words still have something.

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dick was running over bridge when I began to read the record. I read and read and read most words to be the words of the story. ...I had to think of crossing the street to the Regan Hotel. simple is better because it is an act. Unless wanted some action there. ...I moved sentence of white truck moving to better define white truck moving. The action paces and process as the record is. I found more truth of the record. ...Verb changes and additions. The usual. ...I read to the end. I like the read. It is very near some thing done. Now reading on to next chapter.

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r24677 | kalab | 2008-02-12 12:34:33 -0800 (Tue, 12 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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One sentence off change the possession and plurality of verb, after I began the edit, I made one paragraph two. ...Then there were semi colon were now periods. ...I have words for what is needed. There were descriptions that need more clarity. ...I made description better while words less. Not much thought edted. The words editing. Most was punctuation. ... A change for blacksuites. ...I believe the blacksuits are a type of congov. They were black suits and enforce the physical will of others. The act. ...I added more detail of the Jersey Dikes that hold back. The step between. ...The crossing needed some show of sweaty palms. ...There was some small addiions to make a lot more, to show more, with less. ...I read the words of running and I liked. ...I read to the run across of the Duke bridge. I edited to that word location too.

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r24664 | kalab | 2008-02-12 05:05:12 -0800 (Tue, 12 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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Description I feel I like. I enjoy the internal dialog. I did need to edit and write some dialog for it is. Not much. The word balance and letter balanced with the edit with decrease of words. ...There was a need to make one sentence two. It was needed. There was a sentence that was confusion Kalab prose shit. Now it is a sentence. It is prose, but readable by more than the writer. Not very good for the official record. ...I believe most the thought and description near complete. I did have to remove a word here and there when thought.

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r24659 | kalab | 2008-02-11 21:27:12 -0800 (Mon, 11 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the talk about payment to Dick. The first thing I found was the punctuation. ...I edited redundant action. ...The thought was a focus of the flow. The flow needed to be corrected to make it short and brief as he talks but not that brief. ...I read the dialog and sort of felt good for it. There was noise in the room preventing true focus to edit. ...I moved some dialog because it gave the flow better than it was. ...I read to the end. I think the flow was there and is there.

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r24606 | kalab | 2008-02-10 07:39:52 -0800 (Sun, 10 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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Beginning from the beginning I removed more words from the opening sentence for looking at the mirrored wall is not needed because the focus is on the being at the door. I moved the words to a few paragraphs later to be sure the focus is quick. The look for more people outside. A sanity check. Something that will be shown and not told. ...More removing of thought words. Less is more. ,,,I found Psycho using a pronoun which shouldn't be. ...I editing the beginning of Psycho's reason for questions to make the sentences short by making it two and by better framing the reason. ...I had a need to fix the placement of the towel. ...I read the chapter from beginning to end. I liked it. I did make some changes that were needed. I need to read the next chapter to be sure Dick mocks Psycho's process of finding life.

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r24599 | kalab | 2008-02-09 22:10:44 -0800 (Sat, 09 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began in the middle by removing space. I read an remove some description that wasn't. ...I remove all the thought about the Democrat and Republican case because it is out of flow. I don't want it there. I did rewrite it to use the think and feel and allude. I had to remove the big obvious thought and replace it with a thought and feel and little thought along the way. this change made me feel the need to write more description to show a relaxed state. ...There were verb issues which disturbed me. They were fixed. ...I removed some thought about individuals that remained from an old thought of the book. This is just not what is needed. ...There were more issues with this chapter than thought. Too much writing was needed for me to feel good about it. I did complete the read of the chapter.

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r24549 | kalab | 2008-02-07 22:07:00 -0800 (Thu, 07 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I removed the ellipsis and the word The from the first thought for it wasn't need and felt too stages. It felt too much like the beginning of something and not the continuation of thought. ...I removed words that didn't fit. There weren't that many words removed. They were good words, but they felt lost when read in the paragraph or sentence read. ...There were a few issues with commas and punctuation, but overall, the words written, I liked. I read to the middle of the chapter.

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r24504 | kalab | 2008-02-06 05:20:04 -0800 (Wed, 06 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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Pain is and pain was where I began with the edit. A few more pain words were added. The act. The thought. The focus. ...I felt more needed to be written after Dick wakes from nano surgery. I did balance the word creation with editing by removing words. Most were of thought. Pain and focus and silence in mind are reasons Dick could not be thinking. ....I almost edited the sentences of leg pain, but read them and realize their for was complete. ...I removed thought for it is becoming internal and connected to deeper understanding with few words. All those thing to silence maybe find a way to think with only self. ...With pain going and more questions of a Detective become the thought is exact. ...There was lots of focus on thought. So I focused on thought and edited thought. The description of rainbows I had to find and and read and reread and make a few removals of words of description. ...I think now I have removed more words than wrote, so there is the same balance I want. Dick focused on action and everything. ...I removed sentences of a thought because Dick is not think of that right then. ...I read to the end. I like the confusing conversation with Dick and Psycho for it is rushed. The thought lost. The mood different. I did write the question of Dick to all of dick created Psycho for it needs to be. ...I read to end.

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r24499 | kalab | 2008-02-05 20:00:34 -0800 (Tue, 05 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit by removing an apostrophy s. ...I made paragraphs of sentences of a paragraph because the thought is not in same instance or with the other instance or related. Or a stream. Like a connected action. Possible an unthought of thought of a trained mind wanting to get in. Or just thought needing to out because it realizes it is in. ...I removed thought from a long thought span for the thought was too detailed and more detailed then Dick would want it to be even if not focused on other thought and actions and things. ...I removed words of description and thought for they were not needed even the a little bit. The where worthless. ...I had a few verb state issues, but not many. ...I removed more words of some nano dust for that is old thought. ...I arranged some coughing and added some to make the pain felt. ...Near the end I had some edits for the fall and the set up. It seems the change I last made were only some of the changes needed to be made. I pretty much began at the beginning of being in the lift and read to the end. I like most. There were corrects, but things are reading good.

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I read from the beginning. I focused upon the thought. The thought is near better now that I removed words to focus on the quick thought. There was too many words in a span of excitement. Dick knows to begin to trust instinct and an agile mind. ...IThe thought of subject was a focus, and I think now the words are better and the thought more honed with a flow and reason and want to slow it down. ...The words are. ...I read to Plastic walls are smooth.

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r24427 | kalab | 2008-02-01 23:03:23 -0800 (Fri, 01 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I read the beginning. I still like what is read. The changes of prior edit are read and like. Good thought. There was one change, but it was minor and needed to show slight change instead of a lot of spinning. ...The words are what need to be to flow flow from the prior chapter.

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r24425 | kalab | 2008-02-01 22:29:31 -0800 (Fri, 01 Feb 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the trip of Dick. I removed thought. I read and made some verb corrections. After reading to the end I found that the chapter is very near complete. The edits of the chapter made during last edit did what was needed to create a story and a character of the scene.

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r24404 | kalab | 2008-01-30 23:28:19 -0800 (Wed, 30 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began with a misspelled words. I saw it and didn't need to check. ...I then rid a paragraph of pavement for the word is for some thing paved not for the rubber sidewalk. ...I read to find the flow from the prior chapter and found that it was already found in the words read.

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r24400 | kalab | 2008-01-30 21:38:51 -0800 (Wed, 30 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I removed a reference of me for me is a thought of self and I didn't want one there. ...I made an edit to remove up from raise up for it is redundant. Why do people write rise up\? Why not just rise\? ...I read to the column of soldiers to better define the formation. ....I like the pace and what was read. It is becoming some thing.

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r24393 | kalab | 2008-01-29 21:34:13 -0800 (Tue, 29 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the apple smell. I wrote words to make more the story and feeling and the sound. ...There was a paragraph that needed to be a sentence. ...There were a few things here. I believe all of all was good. ...Then read more. ...I read from the center and the speaking of terrorist and thought of putting away of neckerchief, so I read back and edited then wrote. The sneeze words make the story more. ...I read and read and read and read and reread with the edit. ... thought the gen prefix more, but won't decide now. I have a few more chapters. ...Then I read and read and read for the edit more and found a minor error here and there. Overall I like what was read and read and read. ...I edited to the end of the chapter.

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r24351 | kalab | 2008-01-27 22:27:46 -0800 (Sun, 27 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began the edit with the reading of the mat falling for it was the last thing I remember editing last. ...I removed some words because they were not needed. They made everything more. ...I moved a sentence about eh army preacher to be sure the text was what was needed in order. it was. ...I read a few words before I actually found an error. The error was verb error. No surprise. I corrected it. ...More removing of thought words for they were not needed. ...I add the sniper harness to the story for it will support the description of the prior chapter and give an idea of how Dick may have programmed drone to allow himself to thing he is being lifted from always to K Street if that is the reality. ...As I read more and more I like the words more and more. there were still words to be removed, but the words were easy to find and define as ones that would be removed and add more to the story. ...There were moments when I had to slow the edit down because it became more of a read than an edit. ...I edited to the Apple Pie Paranoia thought.

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r24287 | kalab | 2008-01-24 00:28:50 -0800 (Thu, 24 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I don't know if I want the record template to have a comma, and after a series or just and to lead to the last item of a series. ...I began the read with the beginning (as I always seem to do). The beginning does change. ...I thought of a twist on an old saying. ...early to bed early to rise to make me healthy, wealthy and wise. ...My way of writing for me or some thing or some where ....Just the word. ...Early to bed early to rise to become a morning person. ...So,...The words read I liked. ...I found more than a few instances when there were words missing or still there from last write and I forgot to remove or unwrite. ...I had a few cabs that neeeded to be taxi. ...there were minor issues like a missing S. ...What I read I like. some time I just wanted tore read and read and not edit. Most of the time actually. It's getting more difficult to edit and not just read. ...I need to edit the speaking loud for it is loud when they are getting into taxi. ...I read to everyone getting in to the taxi. ...I am too tired to edit and to comfortable with reading. I like it now.

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r24270 | kalab | 2008-01-23 06:08:33 -0800 (Wed, 23 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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...I began near the order with Hurry who will now be Hurry instead of that servant. I edited. ...I edited and wrote some action other than smiling. I Dick didn't smile much. Dick will smile, but only when needed. Dick does love to smile. ...Made change in dialog of Mustang an Dick's meeting for it then had more meaning, and the order is better on how the prior sentence sets up the dialog, so everything feels the change makes the story better. I am removing the use of last names. unles during introduction. ...I read to the ordering of food and after. I began reading. It has been a tiring morning.

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r24248 | kalab | 2008-01-22 11:55:09 -0800 (Tue, 22 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read the first paragraph and wanted moving more than stage coach. ...The thought to spot Dick is what is needed. I like the flow and the lead to follow dick to more clues.

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r24220 | kalab | 2008-01-21 05:25:28 -0800 (Mon, 21 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the circle. I read and edited redundant definition. The changes are needed. They are missing and making everything else better. I found naming of street issues that were easy to fix. ...There were ing verb issues that were easy to correct for the record form. ...I like the use of internal dialog to help his attention to focus upon cars and change the process to not think of congov and tension or anything. ...I read to the strobe pulse that pulses Dick. I like it.

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r24206 | kalab | 2008-01-20 19:13:04 -0800 (Sun, 20 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning and found words that were not needed. I found a description that needed better object and verb definition and less words. ... I wrote words to show what was in the cages of the Jeep quarter panel and as a show and act of something that needs to be seen. ...The thought of Dick should become less detailed for Dick doesn't want to give away the details. ...I found my usual cryptic description prose defining a few things. ...There were the usual verb issues. Those issues were fixed.

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I began with the talk of Dick and Mustang. ...I liked most of the dialog. I did edit and write some description. time and focus created some thing to like. The talk does create (more) the character Dick. ...There were a couple places were the dialog was rewritten and edited and written to better find the flow of the conversation and what they do say to another. I had to omplete an action and that action completed the dialog and the flow of the story.

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I read the beginning for the flow. ......I removed the D.C. Cafe name from last for it should be in this for D.C. is the trigger of a location. ...The beginning now is. ...The few words read after, and I liked.

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r24155 | kalab | 2008-01-18 05:40:25 -0800 (Fri, 18 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I removed two a's before I changed anything else. The article was too much and conflicted with a plural. ...I removed parts of sentences because there was over description. ...The change of river to pond because the water way is full and not flowing. The Watergate dam is not pumping fast enough. ...I removed words that were not needed. They explained too much without logic so really the words explained nothing to someone other than me.. There were edits to change a word, but not many unless words were removed. ...I need to remove the street names. ...I think. ...Let me think of this. I just realized that if the parse is to be some what simple yet flawed...Dick's state of record would break on Florida. That being written. What do I do to complete the definition. ...Thoughts. ...I changed the street names to different for they are named different because the district complained that their records were getting filled with lots of files created because people were thinking and talking about the street names which some of are states. ...Every state will be a few less words. I like the idea of con street. ...After the thought and the edit of changed some street names, the flow of the edit was lost. I just wanted to read.

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r24133 | kalab | 2008-01-17 05:39:39 -0800 (Thu, 17 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning. ...I edited distant to soft because soft is a more used adjective and soft is what it is and not distant. Soft to sort of control the mass and hard, the hard is in chapter 1000. I change movement off head to sync with thought of mind. ... I edited internal dialog to better order the thought and rid the thought of thought not thought by Dick. ...I like the thought of Dick in sentence that are similar to the spoken. The talking and not yet calm and focused has the mind prime. The thoughts do slow during the end until the words are with action. The do become complete when the thought is seen. ...I changed EMPTY and the action for EMPTY to full. ...I broke up a few paragraphs to separate action with input. It is better now. ...I defined an alley way far better than it was. Good enough to probably leave after next edit. ...I thought of the end for a brief moment and the thought and site conversation about the percentage was only a poll of data and it was not accurate. this has obvious to the current state of polling. ...There were some nasty sentences that were lost in poetry that needed to be written and not abstractly thought. I there will be a few more. The are almost fun to find a way to rewrite for another and still see what I see with the convoluted words. ...I edited from the beginning of the chapter to the crossing of the intersection.

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...I read and begin with a removal of a word. I don't know if Rock Creek is a key. I removed it for that reason and because I think I will have the local to call it the creek. The words read from the beginning. I only read a few paragraphs.

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r24102 | kalab | 2008-01-15 19:54:12 -0800 (Tue, 15 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I begin from the top I read and liked. I found an edit with the use of last was not as good as using prior. There wasn't much wring but and obvious typo. The typo lead to a minor swap and words and removal of confusion. The words read from beginning were good. I like. I thing the flow from the chapters to this is.

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I began with reading of the short. I removed the from internal dialog for the article is not a record and too focused. ...I found a few more is verb issues. I found a few verb issues. overall the sentence read with a flow to form to the frame, but felt to read that is something shown and some thing to be doing. I read and reread some things. The edit was an even flow of reading and feeling and seeing then finding a verb issue a typo. I read from beginning to end and the flow I felt to be what is need and had. This is it. A few more typos to be found an few verbs to be fixed, but this is very near complete.

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I read after the hit. I had to rewrite one sentence. It is better. I feel the pain more. ...I read and slowed to edit. at times but most just read and read again. I editing that which I didn't read last edit. ...the wods to better define the reason Dick didn't press the nano med to skull during fall. ..I liked the internal dialog. I did have to edit questions for Dick mind is going fast and focuse and not needing complete everything. He is not speaking or seeing to another. He is thinking to self and self is a unique version of a language. Unless focused, internal dialog is in a self dialog. ...I wrote one sentence to further show reason to believe the need to stop Psycho by stopping from the center. ...I liked the end. I did have to move a paragraph for better thought flow. I like the thought flow that was removed, but it was redundant and Dick is thinking fast and knows mind must be calm and focused and doesn't succumb too much re thoguht and rethinking the same question twice when there are too many questions to ask. ...the transition to running to the center is much better now. The action picks up. ...I removed some thought and seeing of Psycho and Dick for it isn't needed. The talk feels some thing. I don't know. I like the end of the chapter and the end of it all. I like the chapter. ...I think I need to think about the coversation between Dick and Psycho at the end for I have thought of all the others with more time (I think.) The thought does need to be refined.. ...

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I like the beginning. ...I am happy to have removed the sentence that had Dick putting the med stick into head because Dick doesn't want to live if the fall will kill him for not only has he lost some hope and believe death on a mission is not suicide, but he knows if he suffers enough harm to have killed he doesn't want to be alive due to nano healing. ...Or maybe this is a way to show every one he is not a terrorist. ...Maybe\? Maybe, it is all in his head. I read from the beginning to the hit and read through to the first injection of the nano meds. The search of the stick. ...Words are reading.

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I like the frustration of Dick slamming shoulder against the white door to get out tension and chaos of hopelessness. I felt the want. I seen some of it. I read and I slow read and found a few sentences that need less words for more clarity. ...I removed all the nano particles on the floor for there are none. ...I read to the stripping of Dick. I read from the beginning. The words read and edited can wait to be edited again. I do believe I was slow enough and focused enough to edit beyond what it was and near to what it will be.

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I like the beginning of the chapter. It is not the convoluted mess it was at the beginning of last read. it is becoming. I did need to remove a few more words because they were still not needed. ...What was written was to complete the description and the spoken and required action. ...I read from beginning to end and I think I like the chapter enough to really like the chapter. I feel what was removed is what will be removed and needs to be removed and that everything is good. Or very near good. I liked what was read.

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I thought about change the beginning of the chapter, but thought against it. I read and like the words and the story and had only typo like edits. If I were not tired and having a time focusing to edit and remain awake I would edit on. The beginning I wonder.

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I removed words that were not needed. there were some words that were too much, but the way that they were written read to be for other works. Just not these. ...I read and changed shaft to column because column can be a shaft and defines bottom to top. Shaft can be side to side. ...I rewrote cylinder as column after Dick calls it a column. ...I removed some sentences for their description is of no fact for it didn't occur. There just isn't the logic now that the flow has been edited. I removed thought for thought is not being had by Dick right now for Dick has thought near all. I read to the end and found edits, but the flow and the words were very good. I liked. The changes needed. Now to read on.

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r23981 | kalab | 2008-01-11 23:26:24 -0800 (Fri, 11 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I felt to remove the sue of Fuck for it is already know data and Dick doesn't get tense right then for it is not felt. It is not felt then it is not of the record. ...I read from the beginning to the parking of the limbo. The flow from chapter to chapter now better.

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I began the read after the strobe shock. I found a few typos. I read a sentence that need to have the subject become the object and the object the subject. I moved a sentence to better order the record action. I removed internal dialog for the internal dialog was about who has a gun and that is already known. ...I removed words that had Dick lying. I removed the words because I Dick doesn't lie because he is honest and because it just was not needed. It wasn't some thing said. I did like the talk of the strobe pulse. Removing what I didn't like required me to remove what I did like, but the total edit makes the words feel better. I read a little after Dick talks with Ash. I like what I read. What was removed made it better.

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I began the edit were last left of. The speed limit and the beginning of the Global read call. I read it all and found I still like the words. I believe they are what are needed. I read and removed a few words. I read and I also read and changed a few words. I read from that point to Eleanor making a face and need two sentences instead of one, but the showing was needed. ...I read to the talk of Richard under reason for paying for the ride through. I fixed is answer to not be as spaced. It read better.

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I edited to change the beginning because the more I think about it the more I realize that Dick will use D.C. instead of Washington.. The location of the sentence to define Eleanor having a gun has been written. The tell will show a lot, so it is more of a show than tell, but even people tell things to each other. ...I removed more words that just were not needed. I wrote a word or two to complete a written thought. ...I did like what I read. I like reading with Betty, George, Richard and Eleanor. I like them as characters and i think they are likable as they are likable beings. ...I read from the beginning to near the talk of fuel in the car. The words read good. I read slow.

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I read from the ordering to the end. I had to remove a few thoughts to make better. I remmeber rewriting some thing but it wasn't that much. I just wanted less words. I wrote senteces to improve the act of Dick getting water and pouring the water. The words removed and replaced to make Dick a character. Dick is alive with these words. The chapter is read and edited for now.

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r23865 | kalab | 2008-01-06 00:22:06 -0800 (Sun, 06 Jan 2008) | 1 line
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I read from the walk to circle and mostly remove words and actions and thought that Dick doesn't have and conversations that don't occur. I left some of the reaction or talk delayed with using detail, but that delay is needed for Psycho can be slow replying for it is still learning English. I read and read and liked what I read. I think I read it well. I think. I must have removed a lot last edit, but that is good for there needs on the record to exist. I actually was able to read to the end of the chapter. A chapter that had a lot of words removed. It will be better without the words.

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I read from the beginning. I had to remove words to make things read as they should. I feel a lot better about the beginning. I did write to for further show and less tell. A quick dialog so thought may stop. ..I moved words to better order the flow of action and sequence. The mind isn't pulled and the record is not as it was read, so things needed to be moved. I read from beginning to Dick walking down the street to the circle.

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I read from the talk of Mustang to the end. I did write more words than I thought, but what was written were few words compared to many and they were words that were written to show and not tell. The showing is better in this case. I did remove more thought to make the thought had less and more focused for Dick thinking undercontrol with Dick acting under control with Dick being in control of self. I like what was read. If I read as deep as I did I think the corrections and changes create a chapter near complete.

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I read the beginning to continue the edit of the prior chapter and begin the edit of this chapter. I read and edited from the beginning to the door of the apartment of Mustang. Few but meaningful things removed, but the removing made everything else feel more meaningful. Too much for what is written though I did like were reasons for some edits. A few edits.

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I read through. I removed and changes some internal dialog to continue to perfect the words. I read through the beginning to the mass of people. I did write a sentence of description for smell. The smell should be pretty powerful when it changes and there for Dick notices a new smell. ...The words are. Most of the tales is what it needs to be. The line to walk is done without showing the outline. It has a smooth flow for the words and sentences and paragraphs. ...I read to the first intersection. The flow of the words mostly there. I will begin the next read at this location or near it.

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A read through thought to be focused. I almost read from beginning to end loud. It was intent in the mind. I felt it. Now I feel the need to relax. The thinking and removing of a few words or writing a few to complete this or that intense now that it is getting near the state of reading easily through. from beginning to end this chapter was now read.

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That chapter was smooth. I had to remove a few words that made the words that remain more. I like what was read and I like what was written and how it was written. It read to be to be the chaos that is chaos in bored thought of a becoming relaxed mind. ...I will read on to the next chapter.

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I began with beginning. I am in a work removing mood. Thought but no loose thought for Dick for Dick knows the text of life exists. I read from beginning to end removing lots of thought and replacing lots of words with a word for lots more thought. More thought for thoughts with one words is better than many jumbled words. ...I wrote words to use words written and said. The words added from quick edits to copy dialog from other chapters that were for this chapter is further near complete. It is somewhere. I liked the read.I think I will llike it better when read now that the excess thought and unthought thought is now not of the record of truth.

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I read from begging to end felt only to remove thought and some action like leftovers of edits of past edits. What was removed made the words left more. Better. That much was too much. The timing of the coughing was reasoned and ordered by edit to read as they should. The meaning found in the words. I like what is now read. The chapter feels so near complete. Complete now that the nano dust is gone for is should be gone until it falls into Dick's eye. I liked the chapter. More reads should be smoother and required less if not no moving of words.

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During the last edit and write while writing of Dick pushing against the revolving door and for the first time I thought of the revolving door and seen it then thought of maybe having Dick think how big it is for it is big. I thought where it is place now fits. It feels right now, but may change or just be removed. I do like the meaning and subversive meaning. ...I also read the end to read the end and moved a sentence for better time and flow.

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r23693 | kalab | 2007-12-29 23:37:07 -0800 (Sat, 29 Dec 2007) | 1 line
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I didn't begin with the beginning. Instead, I began with Dick thinking thought to stop Psycho. I read and removed a few more instances of thought. I add a few words of warning from Dick. I added a hint of thought of what Dick is doing and hope to show that Dick is at first trying to get them not to enter then trying to stop Psycho from entering after the alarm systems or something prevent Dick from warning Richard and Betty. Dick also tries to sound the alarm, but he will find once he enters that the guards are waking from sleeping and trying to see what is going one. Too late to react against Psycho. ...The chapter is better. I think i will return to it after a few edits. I do feel that it is far better and more logical and more in character for the book and the characters. Dick does what Dick things best to stop Psycho only to find he can't.

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r23655 | kalab | 2007-12-27 22:50:28 -0800 (Thu, 27 Dec 2007) | 1 line
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I began with the beginning though I really had not desire to read and edit the from the beginning but I need to. It does need to be done, so it will get done. ...I add description bacause Dick is in some shock and notices detail. That stark moment of remembering exactly what is going on around. ...I removed more internal dialog for the focus is basic. Not fully complete sentences, but still complete in logic. ...I removed more internal dialog. The shock detail is needed. I better define some thing observed by Dick and not thought thus making even the meaning of the font type more. ...I removed more dialog that was point less and really not of the mood. The lack of thought, but deep thought. ...I think I have the logic and reason Dick turns around. Everything else is another good intention to hell. What is the thought once inside. ...Just trying to remain alive. Survival. I think I have the in. I think I have the turn around and the means with curiosity that has Dick going in to it. ... I think I have Psyhco's curry to the white light edited to scurry properly and not stop and start so much. ..I like the sequence of Dick saying Fuck you to Psycho now. With the written words, it is now much more.

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r23595 | kalab | 2007-12-23 06:47:33 -0800 (Sun, 23 Dec 2007) | 1 line
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I read some of this chapter with last edit to see if the words from chapter 1011 were good to place in these words, but they were not, but reading had an idea that gew to an edit. That edit was to tell that the office of Dick is protected from congov reading things (and only congov). The will show why Dick doesn't think beyond walls of office.

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I removed lots of thought and the focus mantra because it is not needed until the sound begins to shout in mind. The pain. I can forget the pain. The pain will occur next chapter and only be on Dick. ...The pain must exit. The pain of th esounds is shared withthe pain of the flesh being vibrated. ...

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I removed talk that will be talk for chapter 3 (probably three). After the edit it was time to just delete all the words of internal dialog I had any question of it need or it likely hood tha these are the thoughts of Dick. They just are not. So, because they are not, I removed them. ...I read on and read and wrote the part of Dick trying to shout and warn Betty and Richard, but finds that no sounds come from mouth. The sound is being removed for security reasons, but it is also preventing Dick from trying to tell Richard and Betty to run. I like having had add the words to show Dick trying to warn, and with the removed dialog, I feel whate was written and what remains of the edit creates an ending and shows who Dick is and where Dick lives.

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The beginning is much better now than when it was a before the edit. The words were what is seen. I didn't change much for I didn't have strong feelings or many feelings to change anything. I only had a feeling about change when reading the thought of Dick in I am still thinking of it. I don't hate it. I don't think it should be removed. I did change the location of the feel after adding dialog for Psycho to also give Dick forgiveness by increasing the probability of Mustang's death if Mustang knew nothing.

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I removed government for not only the government killed Mustang in Dick's mind. For Dick thinks Congov and he killed Mustang. ...Reading the beginning of the chapter and what I remember of the last chapter during the read and the edit that reading the first of this makes me like the end of the last more. ...I found removing words made things better. I rewrote some dialog and thought to better define the thought of Dick. The thought then the action would have him and does have him thinking. ..I removed dialog and internal dialog knowing that I needed to improve the thought process to the point of dick deciding to enter the K Street Building. I think I have a though process that is of some logic and sense and of the character. I will have to read it again and probably again and again. ..I did add more Psycho dialog to have Psycho say to Dick that inside the building Psycho could show the turh about Mustang and his mom and dad. ...I read from the beginning to the turn of dick to enter the building.

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I hope to show with this chapter that you can't walk away from a psycho because it will always be after you. I read the thoughts. I didn't focus much on the action and movement for I want the thought to help show if not show all. I think it is near something that is complete or works, but it may not be. I thought about what was written and liked, but I don't know if the internal dialog flow is all Dick now. Need to focus upon it.

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I began to read and like what was read, but the mind wants to rest and can't keep up with the tension which is good. Really I just need a nap. I will take one. I did read the beginning few paragraphs. I like the description now.

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read and reread from the beginning ot the flick fo the cicada. I like the flow fo the words after. What has been written works. I can begin to change the placement of Psycho and get to the edit of the motivation for Dick entering K Street building.

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I removed the second thought because it was not needed nor did it make anything better than it was. It was something that was too much for the instance or rush of trying to land gracefully. I read to the direction Dick is given of location of Psycho as him going the other direction for Dick is going in an other direction away from Psycho.

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I began with the beginning. I added fuck for I want to show and tell of Dick realizing Richard and Betty change the tap Pycho wants to enter. I used the I feel because I don't want some stream of consciousness bullshit. It's felt when the time is said. Betty got a little more The soldier movements getting better. I need to create a sentence of a compound sentence for clarity. I also edited a few verb sentences. I few sentences were made in to two sentences to better define the show and not convolute the scene with too many verb types. The single very offers more clarity. The words are near something. I did change dialog, but only because Dick saying move was not what would say. ..I removed a useless words that were repeating and confusing. I don't know why I ever wrote the follow at the end of the sentence that had follow. ...I read to the 'I look at detonation tube. I read aloud from the beginning to Ezra. I found lots of things i may have missed.

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I began with what is now an injection of congov and soldiers into the streets of D.C.. I had to rewrite and write some words about the shifting of the gears to show the fact the transmission is shot for first gear. I should include starting out with second on the hill. ...Maybe. If I remember it the next go around then I will create the words. ...The words of the moving troops was what had me reading from the beginning of the tunnel drive to the drive and stop because I wanted to get it right. I knew I only sort of edited the scene last read. Now I wanted to change. I did. The words are better now. The show what I am beginning to feel and see. The words now can be read and not lose interest. The bad words just skipped maybe\? I got them this time. Now I like to read.

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I read before the stop of car. I read through the words and did have to change the description here and there. Not many issues. I moved dialog for better effect. I add dialog to ltell many thinks. All these things are coming together. There were a few mistakes with spellings of some words, but not all was a loss. ...The words read. They read how I want them to be seen or at least how I am seeing it now. The words and how they are written and the words that they tell have created (after reading and reading with the focus being the edit of the words written have found something to be felt or seen. The words can actually define now some thing to me. ...I read to the end and found only a few things new to change. A few out of many that were every near good.

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I read the need to edit a thought, and I wanted to begin at a location before the thought of the stage coach. I don' think Dick needs to think of the stage. Of course he is Drunk, or no so much Drunk, but rather feeling buzzed with the high proof alcohol. I won't mention or tell, but rather show, because it could be Dick is just nervous or it could be because Dick is guiding the thought. I know what is left. ...I had to write Richard getting intense. I think I did. ... I re moved some internal dialog that was not needed. More than enough showing...And what became of it was something more complete and ready to written and read. I wrote a feel and think. The feel better blended with the words removed and the words rewritten. Most internal dialog. ...I read through the race and the scan and ended with the scan. More thought...Internal dialog was removed.I also moved sentence to better pace the action and the thought and to show the focus and attention. Some of it just seemed to spread and separate. I liked the thought and the constant. It has better flow.

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I read word of Ash standing and almost falling. The words begin and continue. They read through. I had to move Ash to show more than tell. I did remove some internal dialog of Ash for Dick wouldn't think of involving another than could be killed. I read and read. There were a few verb edits. The pace in car felt as it should. It flowed. ...The Apple Pie scene words and flows in and how. It does what is needed to be done. It goes and goes. It is where it needs to be here and done. ...I removed thought for the thought that was removed was getting too much. I do want the thought after the Apple Pie to remain for it does cause a paranoid reaction to cause the thoughts in mind to enhance and expose themselves. I read to the taxi passing by the Army.

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I edited the preacher talk to make in more of a song. I also had all the words in caps for all the words are loud for everyone to hear about all the other noise. I read this and I read past. And I read it again.

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When I opened the file, I skipped a head for some reason and read. It took three sentences then I found a grammar error. I corrected it. Then I found the location last read and read before it fast to it. Then read with the world indentured alien in mind. Algae was used instead of sugar for there is more water surface and no sugar. ...I wrote to words of the cleanness of the taxi and a few more to define a clean people and area to show at least that things are clean and effort is put in to making things look good even if they don't function. I also wanted to show Richard after speaking Jo to show Richard is being the truth sayer for Jo and to make Dick assured that he can believe Jo. This to sightly show that Richard is demeaning Jo. I also wanted to show a beginning of slight drunk talk with the desire to just pass the thought and time with idle chatter. I want to show how Dick gets information through talking and observing like any Detectives should. ...I changed car to taxi for I want it to be seen as a taxi. ...I removed words describe how George sits. i did like the description, but it just wasn't needed. ...I had to remove excessive description of some one shouting. I also wrote to add another shouter for I wanted more than one. I think the increase amount is needed. ...while the reds are being called out I changed the order of Jo asking if they had a good night for the silence and Ricahard's mumblings provoke Jo to talk to break silence. I ended after the sentence displacement and better order of events.

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An edit for less is more for these words. I read to the building of the scene and the charater for the scenc is created and is becoming. The words do flow from one to the next so the next chapter, now this chapter, will be what is read next read.

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...I read from the walk up the second store to the third floor to the table and through the talk and to the receieving of the food. I removed more thought of Dick because the thoughts that Dick would not only want to repress but wouldn't have for the thought is complete. The actions of Dick and everyone else are near complete. The main focus of the edit was the flow and the grammar and typos. ther were only a few verb edits that were fixed. There were a few grammar edits that were needed. A couple of sentences had bad flow so words were removed or rearranged. The thought and talk removed about this that has improved. I am happy that what was read is near a complete state. A complete state that is near complete, but still needs some reading. I will begin after the reception of the food next edit. Or I will likely begin at the point I ended.

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I read from the beginning. I am glad I did for there were minor things that needed to be edited and words that needed to be removed. Less thought and dialog with Psycho.. The action and some of the sentences needed better order for comprehension flow, story and style. The story just was getting lost in abstract prose. Now the abstraction won't lose a read of the words prior. There were a few verb issues but that was corrected. There was lots of rereading and thinking and inner meaning thought. The removing of more description from Psycho because Dick only needs to look for Mustang. ...I read from the beginning to the stepping to the lobe scan. The words read and reread to not repeat definition. I like much better now and will have a better feeling of reading the action inside. ...I thought of the beginning of next chapter and some things to read for when exiting.

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...I read from where I left off after last read, which was during the ordering. I didn't get beyond the ordering for I was lost most in thought about what I would and would not need to change about the book now that Psycho wants Dick to enter the building before midnight. Yes, this is the choice I havce made yesterday while walking to work and thinking of The Detective Store. Not only is the meaning have more meaning, but it will require less editing and better fits the story. ...I read and liked what read. Ther ewere a few things there where corrected. but most of the thought during this write was about timing of midnight before or after, and I have decided it was after.

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The obvious call to show all where he is. Not caring or maybe want to be shown as not caring. ...I just read the other chapter. I have the flow still with this chapter. The scene character continues to develop.

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Read and write to the crossing of the leaving if circle. The walk to the other side. The walk to the crowd. The crowd more detailed now and better. Or at least I feel it is better, but it has been worse. The description feels to becoming something. I like what I read while stepping through the people. ...I did try to add more people or show more people for I want show more people for there are a lot of people. ...I did have verb issues. Once I fixed the verb issues, the sentence improved. A small change like that and things get better. ...I removed some thought and talk in response to thought for the thought was not needed and should not be thought and is not thought by Dick, so why have it on story record\? ...I read to after the flash and near the Mustangs. I feel better for the edits.

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I read the words from the hot dog to the white hotel. I am across the circle. A few words that needed to be changed. Those pesky verbs. The overall story is something that is there. The flow and movement now found now that all thoght of action or targets is out of mind and not thought or spoke unless thought or spoke by Psycho. The story is becoming. It is near complete of something. I will begin the next read after the circle. The words read good. Near something of done.

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r22885 | kalab | 2007-11-09 05:53:25 -0800 (Fri, 09 Nov 2007) | 1 line
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The words were read. The words were read and read. I like the words more now that the converstaion about the primaries are gone from chapter. They are not needed. The are where they needed to be. They just didn't fit, so they were removed. There were more words found that were related to the subject, so they were removed during this edit. ...I read from the beginning to the beginning of walk across the lanes to the circle. ...Only a few sentenc movings and verb changes. I good read. The words read good now that the coverstation that was is gone.

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These are the rest of the edits I didn't seem to save before the last publish to the depot.

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A few change to improve the words and complete the thought I want injected into the words. I also need to find the flow of the story, but I didn't read much, so the words are likely to need to be edited once again. The words and thought do and are needed, I think. They will be something I will need to think of.

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I have been looking at the sentences witten for a half hour. They need to be more complete. They need to be moved probably. They raise a good question. I was looking nad thining hoping for an answer. This is something that I will have to think of more. I can't believe I couldn't think of what Psycho says.

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I read to the beginning of the circle walk. I took me a long time to remove words that I had written and liked. Most of the edit was the thinking of why it was good, but not right and needed to be thought. I did go off on thought tangent a couple of time but only for a few minutes. I did think of the publication when I began to read and think of all the communication he day. ...The words removed made less words better. They sound and flowed pretty, but not what was needed. ...There were verb issuses. More were corrected. am sure therea re move. The dialog and description to becmoing. I took away from here and their to make better. It is all near complete.

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I read from beginning to end. I removed words to make the flow better and the story better. There were a few more words for dialog to have the flow go. I was readding and I was actually seeing and feeling the words. No longer are these words just letters and space. The have come beyond text in my mind. I think of a good reason. I do feel that these words are near complete. There are, there werre, a few mistakes I found that once fixed shown and told a story that formed thought in mind. These words are very new something. They are very near.

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I have read the chaper. I did begin from the run from the Chinese Embacy. I looked at the map fo the area to edit the run after Regan Hotel. The words are becoming they are near. With the removal of the words removed with this edit the words are more. They smellling becoming and the knowning. The meaning of the words becoming. They are. The.

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I didn't want to remove the sentence <|...Like pork prodded to run the ramp to be actioned for sale. Meat primed for porking with congressmen's barrels. Psycho is everywhere.> But this sentence is too much thought about describing something for the focus and slowed process of Dick's mind. It's too much, and it is just not right for the chapter. It has been removed and now everything else is better for it. ...There were more sentences than thought that needed to be ordered better or improved by changing the use of the verb. The words are becoming. The internal dialog is now better. I did removes some to remove thought too direct and obvious. Dick knows not to think about a subject too much if is a subject of government interest. Feelings and emotions few to avoid showing passion and reason and more data to collect and record. ...I read from the walk down stairs to the walk to D.C. Cafe. I could have read to the end, but I wanted to reread some of the chapter to find more possible changes, and I did want to need to read the next chapter, so I stopped very near the end, a few sentences after the last edit of the page.

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I read the beginning. I read from the standing to the leaving and the first feeling of the mass as one with the mass. I think it is near. I read the exit from the hall and the mass a lot. I made changes. These changes removed words because there were too many. Thoughts were edited for a more natural flow. There wasn't much editing thought to be needed for the internal dialog because it is near complete. These words are better than when last edited. The edits are becoming more difficult to make because sometime I just don't want to delete what is described or read, but I just see things correct and that once word or sentence is not. ...There was the obvious verb issues. The second sentence. Now I a few more needing to find the verb have found the verb.

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A read of the beginning. I slow read of the beginning read and edit that is now creates a beginning the should begin. The words now have more meaning. ...I didn't read too far in to the chapter. I thought most about the beginning sentence.

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A read and a think of this chapter and all chapters. The words do flow. Some beginning words changed because they needed to be changed. The words do flow. And they will flow.

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A couple edits. One to change a work to better use the local lingo and give a more acurate definition of the height. The words move for edit was because the thought, the internal dialog, should flow after the object. ...I read the beginning to edit and read the flow from one chapter to next. The chapter flow feels as it should.

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Reading for free thinking with a focused mind not wanting to focus. Does things to keep the mind afloat. I did read the last chapter near after the beginning ofht read and edit. I wanted to read the beginning again and make sure it read in mind how it reads on page and it does. The ending now feelings complete with the book. The words of this chapter had issues with verbs. Rather, it was not the words it was the sentences for sentences have verbs. The words do read. The thought and internal dialog needed cleaning. REmoving words to edit is not always easy some times, but knowing the words are saves somewhere makes it easier to remove them.

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I began this read with the intention of just reading the chapter then begin to read chapter 0001. I read the three sentences. I like all three. I thought of the first because the first must flow with the previous sentence, the last sentences and flow of chapter 1110. I read the first and didn't feel like it was a natural flow. The sentence also felt slow. More a point than a subtle point. I thought of the other sentences and thought to write It's the United States of America because it flows with the prior sentences and is more interesting a thought and speech without the prior sentences. Thinking of the other words made these words better.

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I read from about the middle to end. As Dick looked into the tap the first time. The words read. there was a removal of words and a write to change how Psycho conntects to the nano machines. I want the way it is written now to show the action of the system to get Pscyho. I read and thought about the completion, the why, the thoughts of Dick. i though and think that the end is near complete, but I need to read again and agian before I find the end. The words are here. The words are written, but they still need more reading for me to find and undertand. The words are.

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I read from the beginning to the center and the look at the tap and I am finding what I read to be what i want it to read. The flow and the words and the space to define the pain and process are all there. There were a few things that need to be chanaged, but overall I like the show of a mind slowed because of pain. A person not wanting to die, but knowing it may be. The words and the actions are beginning to complete the story.

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I read the beginning to check the flow from chapter to chapter, and the flow is good. I did make a couple of syntax fixes, but nothing too difficult. I didn't read much beyond the beginning of the chapter.

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The change of second paragraph was for the verb. It is better now. Everything else was minor clean up. I like the way it is written. I wanted to read more, but I am tired. I read to the entering of Dick.

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The internal dialog needs some major help. I used most of the time writing and editing the internal dialog of dick. It just didn't read and feel like the thoughts of someone confused, worried and wondering. I also added Dick's growing thought about what is inside the building that has maybe cost him so much. He is a detective after all and now that the truth may be revealed inside, he is slowly beginning to think: <|What is inside\?>. The internal dialog with the edits I feel is better. I do feel that i will need to begin at the beginning of the chapter next read because there were more than just the internal dialog edits. The internal dialog edits were actually the only write and edits needed. The scene and the actions of Psycho and Dick do need some editing, but are near what is needed for completion. I only edited as far as Dick beginning to return to the white light. The walk to discover the information to ease the curiosity of human nature.

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I read from beginning to end, and I like the chapter. There were a few sentences and paragraphs that needed a bit of a rewrite. They were edited. There were more than a few senteces needing verbs. I had found that the internal dialog mark and the seeing mark to Dick needed to be corrected in a couple locations. Most actually, but it is becoming and I think i was able to get all the grammar issues with this mark corrected. The flow of thought was good, but there some words and thoughts of Dick that just were not needed or part of the character, so they were removed with ease. ...The read was complete. I thad thought about inner meaning of the sentences and did enjoy the thought and found the meaning to be there if one wanted or not if one just wanted to enjoy the story. ...I did correct the jester scene and the shocking and the blessing of a sneeze ot show disconcern for violence. ...The overall chapter and the specifics I like. Soon this chapter will becomeplete after a couple of edits.

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I read from beginning to end. It did take a few minutes to warm up to the idea of reading and editing, but once the mind became aware I was able to edit. I found the chapter to flow smoothly. I like the description. I had a few edits for verbs in sentences. A few sentences were removes because they were of a dialog sequence that just didn't need to be written or read. The words from the beginning ot end did flow. The action I think is enough to define to the read what needs to be defined to the reader. Dick's record is becoming and something that I think is near completion. I will read these words again and again, but for now I will read on to the next chapter knowing what is read is what is needed.

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The write of change. The reading of knowing. The edits when needed. ... I read from the last scan to the end of the chapter. I think there is the thought that is needed to begin to complete the chapter. I can see the area and I am beginning to feel it I think. I could be wrong for the words are of my own mind. I could be reading them too much and seeing what I want. The story and the dialog and the interaction I do like. I will now read the next chapter and begin to move on with the words.

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I read what I read last edit. I read it again to be sure it is near complete, and though I did need to make a few changes I am happy to write that I will begin the edit tomorrow at the stage coach race. The words are there. I did remove some internal dialog and change some internal dialog, but that was to make the thought more fluid.

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...The words and the talk have some flow from the read of the second shout of the Global to the smell to after the smell. I had to read to find what I wanted to show and once I seen I found that i need to write and edit and read. I have written and read and read the words and now think they are better. Some internal dialog was removed for it wasn't needt. Actions have been move because the timing was off. Some dialog added to better show time and character. The words of thiss are complete and done for now. I have lost the focus for the story for I am lost in only these words having had focused upon them as much as I have for this edit.

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I read from curb to The Detective Store. The words do flow. I read slow some of the scenes and made minor corections. Some more dialog was written to make complete the talk. The words of description edited and the edit made better. More fluid and close to complete. The words are feeling near complete. The dialog I do like. There is the feeling of a flow. There is something. Now it is nearing go. The next edit will begin at The detectives Store. ...I did near the end maybe read too much and get lost in the words because I was having fun reading. I did reread and slow to an edit and find the needs of correction. It is becoming more and more. ...The chapter longer than I thought it was. I may not complete with this by this time tomorrow.

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I read the first three sentences of the 1000 and thought of the sweat that needed to be shown for 0110. I read and decided for the sitting and after. While reading the sitting, I did write sweat and read for it. Near something. I also then focused on making sure the names of people at table are not written of with name before they should be written of by name. All this while writing of sweat so the change of cool to hot is more maybe felt or remembered. These change are good change to go and read back.

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I read from the beginning to the getting in of taxi. I read and I read and I found that I wanted to make the movers behind the taxi to increase their should and there for the tesion. The record remembers the change of them getting louder. They get louder and Dick goes into action before people get tense, things flash or congov take notice. Or Psychos has to act. Or people start becoming mean and yelling. ...So the words needed to be written and thought and read more than a few time to see what there is to see then rewrite to see what it should. I think I worked the words to see what needs to be. ...I did during the edit have a few verb changings that were needed. There were some grammar issues with seeing from mind to Psycho. ...The words are coming. Most are there. This has been a start I have worked with. Most seems there. Read and editing and editing and reading.

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Only a slight change to some words. More eating. Dick gets his food now by eating fast as it should be shown. What is seen now is good enough thought I may have more eating fast of Dick. No one else but Mustang eats. The converstation I like. The flow down the stairs is there. The walk the talk. I see it somehow. The words and the sentence tell the tale I want them to. Or at least they are beginning to.

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I read from the beginning to the last introduction. I removed the process of Dick getting information from Psycho. The voices and images are not needed as long as there are names and Mustang, who is good at observing without being noticed. The words of what is and what will be. The words from the road to the sidewalk to the inside now better for it reminds the record of state and on would when thinkning, as I do. The walk and find of the way in more natural and fluid showing Dick moving and looking and waiting and not thinking about everything. Just going with the flow to think and focus on what is. ...These words are. The are becoming. After I removed the show and telling to dick, with the name and knowing Mustang Dick finds the names shown in the record. I like the proces and the read much better. More, much more than existed. The words are becoming. The edit can begin with the table.

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After the circle to the end. I think I finished enough to feel if I read again I will be able to begin near the propaganda bomb. The words where a read. I did find a few sentence rewritten for the record. The story has the flow. The words feel as they should. Some corrections with action to show movement, but the words added added more than a word's worth of words. ...The does flow. I think it is told as the record. The record shown that Psycho was the one who brought him back to the focus of going to the building after his thought was lost. ...So the time passes and it is a process to cause dick to create a Psycho to ask or a Psycho for real. ..Don't know. Thought of it. Don't know. Depends on who one is. For there are many other stories beyond these two I see. I try to see a victory for peace.

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Getting the words read that need to be read to clean the words free of noise that is not needed. It took a while to focus fo the read. ...Thoughts slowing to find the specifics. of the story and not a specific point. Sentence read and read.

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More words. More reading. More thought. I continue to remove the useless internal dialog. I have made internal with external record. Don't want to have Dick thinking for he has focused though on what is aroound with other senses to focus to think of who or what Psycho is. The words read better with the edtis. The words are near there.

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I read and read from the box to othe end. I read before the box. I thought of the form and the flow of the talk, and I found it to be what is needed for it to be. ...The Words Are Nearing Completion. There were a few sentences with verbs needed. And a couple of change to follow word flow. The word flow there. The end and the speed up of the record becaue dick is more calm after talking with Mustang.

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...Thinking, thinking, thinking. I read and made minor edits. I began lost in thought if it should be hot dogs. I feel it should. There is something about Sam's Hot Dogs that feel right. The smell. The taste. All these things make for a story that needs to be told some day in some short piece of words. ..All the cars may have onions for the hot dogs. ...The thought...But what about the left...The rats. The hot dog of rats. Thoughts.

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I read to the sounds of the door. I wrote to the sounds of the door openning. I like what was read. I found that verbs are missing. I added some. I am sure that more will need to be added as I read on through the chapter.

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More reading and editing. I like what I read of crossing the bridge and the run to intersections. There were a few sentences that need to be written out, so they were. The verbs of Dicks' thoughts sometimes being removed. The object not needed for complete thought. ...The object become one. I like the focus of Dick to not go inside head and thought. The focus works all ways. ...The story becoming. I thought of making vehical gardens garden vehicles. A change back. ...The words read on.

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I edited from middle of crowd to open running. I edited some of the enternal dialog to get rid of a keywords and slightly alter to improve everything. The words I read are becoming. I still found more verbs needed for some of the sentences. I am getting rid of the use of I or me in long thought. The worfds are becoming.

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I began with the beginning and ended with the walk down the stairs. I read and reread and thought and edited by removing worfds. I made more basic and fast the internal diaog. I focused on time and timing of words thought that are as, so they should be at time like broke language.Object verb. ...The though should maybe, and I think does, chage as he enters crowd. Thoughts... I liked what I read.

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The beginning and after the beginning to near the last edit which was around the read of the discovery of self after siren. ...The words didn't need much change. I only added to extend and make more natural and slow the rediscovery of client Psycho. The words read.

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Got into the words too much and just wanted to read. I read from the beginning to about the 2/3'ds point. Lot of reading. Lots of writing. More words and thought. ...I like the dialog. The thought is becoming. I had to decrease some internal dialog for Dick's mind was talking and acting and thinking was fast to keep the pace. ...the dialog I like. I think I have the flow for the one big change and the onte that took the movement, when I edited the reason how Dick was selected, to better define how it is took some time and focus. The words I like. I think the words are near something. Getting better. ...I did need to include some verbs with sentences that needed verbs.

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I read from beginning to end. There were a few sentences that needed berbs, but not many. I focused on the dialog both external and internal and found it needins some correction. The correction will be better. The talk of Psycho has the pace it needs for it hasn't learn much from Dick. I like the chapter. Most the bad places seem gone. Now i will read on to the next chapter.

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Some change for clarity. ...The words read were not much. I did read the prior chapter to make sure everything is sync'd. The words read. The words of the chapter seem to be in better shape than the prior, but I could be wrong and find it bad when I read it next edit.

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...I removed the internal dialog telling of some Democart and Republican cases. I removed it because it seems unnatural and really isn't needed, and it may or may not be something that has happened, but it just has no really place. I believe what I have left will make the thouht more for it will hint at something and not tell. The hint feels more like show. it too me time to decided to remove these words for these words were something I worked with for a while and were words that I felt were needed for a long time. So I thought and thought then just removed and reread and liked the chapter better withou8t. ...Other edits include having the blow job offered and not takin for Dick is in a committed relation ship. The rest were sentence improvements to make the sentence of the record as the should be. I will probably begin where I began this time which was a few sentences before the first smell of pizza. More editing of the chapter is needed.

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I read from the point of the chapter after the nano machine fix Dick to the end when Dick is broken down. There were more than a few sentences that needed to be rewritten for this chapter because they did fit the standard form for the record. The words were fragments and not complete, so I needed to make them complete and now they are complete. I think. I coulc have missed a few, but not many. I also focused on the removing of articles from thought because thought is now quick and much considering the pain the pace. Dick's actions further refined. Word were removed to make less more. Some clutter with verbose shit, but that shit was removed. I have what the record needs. i read and I edited and reread and I edited and I reread and I think it is nearing something that other will read soon.

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I remove and move the last sentence from this chapter to the beginning of the next for the it belongs in a paragraph and that paragraph is of the next chapter for Dick thinks a keywords of the record scan beginning a new record.

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I read from beginning to end. The word from beginning to end to read. A did have to remove some of the words because they just were not needed. Most these words were the description of the area. ...I focused upon the internal dialog. I wanted to make it read more natural, but also the dialog needed to be as it would be for the scene. Fast when Dicks tense and collected and complete when he has time to think. I think I have everything written that needs to be writte for the chapter. It reads and i want it. I will needed to read and study again cyanide, but that can be done next edit when I spellcheck.

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The words are. I read from beginning to edit. I had to make some grammar edits to the see log. I had to make some change to a few sentences to clarify description. I removed two sentences that contained the old idea of having the key a cross. The eidts of pace and timing during the last edit were what were and are needed. The words do flow. the action and is what is needed now. The pace and timing feels as if it is on track to be what it needs to be. The chapter is something I can leave in the past and I read on to the next. The ending read as it probably should. I will read the next chapter and make changed if needed. I did like what was ready.

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I read the first few sentences. The last edit was were I stopped. I like the beginning, but did need to change revolving to spinning because spinning is all Washington D.C. does to the information. The words are what they need to be. I like what was written during next write. I read the end of the last chapter and the beginnnig of this chapter a couple of time and feel the connection is there and that I won't need to make the changes that I made during the edit of the previous chapter when I removed a sentenc. It is all coming together. It is all here. Now on with this chapter and the next and the next.

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The previous log was not for this file put for the previous file but while writing out the log on command line I typed 1011 and not 1010, so disregard log entry 21607. The change I did make to the words for the changes committed for 21607 was a change to remove the letter e from the word apartement to have the word correctly spelled apartment. I the paused to read the beginning again and read the first and remember that the previous chapter ended with an action of Dick. And then I thought it should not, so I changed it and wanted to commit and did then I moved one to editing 1011. ...I editing 1011 beginning with the beginning and read and edit to the nearing of the K Street building. There were more than a few sentences needing to be reordered for the record to read. Some sentences need verbs. Some paragraphs needed sentences removed because the words were just not need or really bad and therefore not needed. I read more of the story and focus a lot on the reasoning of Dick and what make and convinces him to pivot and go into the K Street building. He goes because it is the only choice he is given for life. ...Or is it\? There is enough information before and after for the reader to define to self. I read and believe I can begin where I left off for the remaining edits will be few and the thought and edit of the push to get Dick inside logic and within character.

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I removed the last line because I now realize it conflicts with the beginning line of the story by not conforming how the record is formed. The rules are broke by it. And I don't think it is needed, so there is more reason to remove the line.

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Read from middle to end. The words were what are needed. I only really needed to remove some words to make less more and remove confusion. There was the need to add verbs. ...I now realize as I edit and read these words again I will need to edit Psycho's dialog to add verbs for he just talks like a thought of killing. The words did flow as I want them to. There were a few words added, but not too many. ...the thought and the time did and does flow. It will flow. It flows now. I like what was read. I think what was read is very near complete.

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I read the first and didn't read much further. I made changes to sentences that needed changes becaues of the type and lack of verbs or them needing to be internal dialog. I edited the first sentence because though it is long and needs to be obvious it is too long and should also possibly be natural for it should be because Dick may or may not know. I like the beginning now and read only to the words of him landing, but I didn't focus on the too much. The transition from the last chapter to this chapter is what i focused upon and it is what is edited and now good.

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More words read. This time to the entrance into Always. I had to make some corrections to the flow of the words to better define. I removed words and only added words to add a verb and an object to make sure the record is recorded as it should. I wrote on. And I wrote on and on and on. I read things over and over. When I did add words I made sure it added to the detail of the story or an action that wasn't defined. Mostly I removed reords from sentences because the words on the sentence only add confusion not definition. The words I did read I like. The words that remain I now feel should remain. I feel comfortable enough to beginning inside Always next read.

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I read the beginning. I like the way it began. I made a minor verb change. The words have some flow. Didn't read too far.

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Before my mind loses focus, I will stop the edit. The edit had some write for I wrote words that were mostly dialog to complete a though or an action or create more character for character. I want to show the tension between the primary and secondary targest. I wanted to sho how Betty and Richard get along more than Eleanor and Betty. I wanted to show the chase and the chase was already shown. I edit dialog by adding the pionter to the people who were talking and separating some of the dialog both for clarity and pace. The words I like. What was added was more more not less. The more is everywhere for I really did like what was read during the story. I want to read more, but the mind is becoming tired and I don't want to do some sloppy edit job. ...I began the edit near the beginning of the race of the red and blue stage coaches and ended it as they neared Du Pont Circle.

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The words added to better define the confusion of the action after teh sound scan. The words do flow. Not much edited.

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More reading. I read where I last left. I even made an edit by changing a b to a p. There were are sentence edits to better from frame the words and the actions. The edits were need to relieve confusion. The words I did like and I read to site of Th eDetective Store being scanned. The words i like and I found a good flow and time until I found a sentence that needed to be change. Good thing that even after stopping for edits I was able to continue on with out much issue or need to focus. I like what was read.

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I read from the curb to the drive. To the last edit committed with this filed change. The words are there. I did find a few sentences with space issues. I also needed to add some verbes to description sentences. And I found that some sentences were out of sync. I only needed to move them around to make the flow and feel better. After making a change, I read the sentences before again and again. This caused a slow progression forward with the words. I think the chapter to the ending point is complete. I will begin again where I ended. These words are nearing. Nothing new added. The edits done.

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I read from the beginning againg to the curb of while getting ready to get in to the cab. ...The words needed more close and slow reading to find those sentences that needed a verb or two where a verb or two was not. I also moved some sentences here and there to be sure that the order more natural. ...While reading, I thought the need to better show and tell of Dick's focus on conversation with Psycho by adding a few more instances where what he undestands and what is record is not what is said because the focus is somewhere else. This needs to be done only a few more times for Dick's mind is a mind trained to think quickly and of many things at once. ...So I read and read and had to only write a few words to clarify detail and show. The words I like and I feel I CAN begin reading at the curb next edit.

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I read the remainder of the chapter and only found minor error that needed to be corrected. I think the flow of thought and action is what is needed. There is natural feel about the conversation that I like and will maintain I hope through the remaining chapter. I do like this chapter and don't feel right now there is much more than needs to be changed. After all the fixing and changing and editing I do believe these words to be complete or very near complete that I will be able to copy them to editing and begin the final edit for publication.

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I read from the beginning of the conversation to the drinking of the scotch. The words flow I did like. The meaning I liked. Some of the thought I thought needed to be changed so it was changed. The actions of this and that good enough for the words. the thought and dialog I thought flowed and felt natural. Good enough. Ready. Nearing ready. I will read on at the Scotch.

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The read was of the beginning and crossing the street and making the crossing be shown why it takes long to cross and show the many people and show the slow traffic and show the area. The words read and read and read. ...The first read was read for for everything. I think I found most common mistakes. The words and standards and paces followed. I even swapped the terms that have become the description. ...The words found to be what is needed. I can move on after the crossing for the crossing is near something of complete.

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The chapter was read from the hovercopter to the end. I like the read. I did wonder and question the scan. I had edited a sentence until I realized it was a though of the scan. ...I believe I read slow enough to read all the verbs missing and write thm to edit the sentence. A sentence edit and not a work edit. There is a difference. ...Word edits was a typo by adding a letter. ...What was read was like. Some dialog, like the end, edited for better voice of character and to show reaction time. ....I read into the submeaning and found it interesting. The fast read was good too so the sub meaning was there for the slow read. ...Some of the meaning though good for the overall story was serendipitous. ...The thought there. Writing on...

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I read from the beginning. I fround the flow but had to read and reread to make sure what was written was what was needed. For instance, when I read of the second shut of something related to the drone recording I thought mentioned only once. I had to check the twice then found the flow again. Once I assured self of edits I was able to read to the walk to the center of circle. ...I also thought long of the use of danger and immidiate danger thought. ...The words are now better written. and will remain I think in the book for after the circle Dick reasons the record is too much a record in a logic flow to it. ...The thought of the scene and confusion in the description had things removed. ...The words extra dialog for the married thing to show Dick's purpose of saying the reason he knows Betty and Richard are having sex. ...Then it will be shown why. ...More words. ...Less words. ...Pullers now movers. The words read will ot need to be read again this read.

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I read from beginning to end. The write were most edits from verbs. There were a few sentences and words added to the other words for more showing and better definition of action. I removed or completed actions depending on their meaning an if less was more. ...I had to edit and complete the end better for I didn't need or want all the kissing for it is only needed for what was written. The drink and edit of genmilk because all the genetic created items will just be gen appended for define the genetice. Mustang will not call it genmilk. Dick does. ...The words I like. I add says and pronouns. The words written were few and made more. ...I had the verbs needed, but I still found a few that needed to be written. ...I am beginning to like the use of is and are at the end of the sentence.

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I read the remainder. I did feel there were too many verb edits, but t not enough to think this is near complete. I did read some words fast, so all the senteces that either need verbs or need to be thought may not be changed, ...I did focus to change the description and the lead to the definition of Chinese Embassy. I figure only internal and external dialog is what triggers the record. I do want to show the focus that Dick inspects when he passes for it never changes. The detail. I think it is near something near good. Or at least ready to be read and complete. I will read on to the next chapter, but may read the last again before the next chapter as I did hurry through it.

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I read from beginning to end. A few verb edits. I did focus on changing some of to to show result of process. I changed these to ands. The words of this chapter in better form than the words of the prior chapter. There were some things that needed to be done for not every thing was and is perfect (until published). The Psycho says, some thing played with and made into a standard non standard and once lost and changed in record because of a consious question of origin of the voice. That was something addition I focusied on during the edit like last chapter. How the record of what is recorded and how it is acuralte in internal and external dialog, and with the description, but that chnages with question and perception and that is bettter shown. The words I like.

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I was a bit disappointed with the state of this chapter. Everything is in the words but the form less refined in some place than I hoped. Most of the edits were edits and writes because the verb just wasn't there. I suppose it takes time to find a the pattern for the record. ...The voice of the child was lowered for the child is two and just asks a question having not had seen its parents' death. And edit and a write. ...I write to identify every instant when Psycho speaks. ...I read from beginning to end. For a second chapter I believe there are just about enough words. ...The words needed more edits then I thought possible. It could have been the need to write so much last edit. or think of it. For now. I like. I will read on for I think I have most of the edits. Near the edit of the edit I kinda slacked off because I just wanted to read.

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The slow read from beginning t end read words and actions that were not needed. I remove when in doubt for during the pain and the process of focus less is much more. ...The words are coming out. I have read and seen the book more now. Where there was space added it was added because I don't want to confuse the flow of the story with objects and subjects creating chaotic prose. ...I do like the words. They are near. The words removed were not needed. ...I will need to read and read and read again for grammar errors, but I think the flow is found in the words. ...Of course I write this and know I stared ling and hard at the end thinking of the internal dilog at the end about dieing will remain and if I will and The smell of shit and piss drips before face (for the smeill of the quagmire. ...Maybe that should in the next chapter. Of course in any chapter near the end would have focus upon it and there for seem comical or something beyond...I don't know what beyond.

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Edit to change fuck cap to sex cap because sex cap is better is more general of what it does. Fuck cap also makes other use of fuck read to be jaded. ...I also checked the lower case of the descriptoin of the items of the pack.

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I read from beginning to end. I read the beginning then the end and while reading the end I realized that there was no reason for Dick to carry the pack all the way up the stairs, so I set to editing that after readin through and removing what I think to be all the words about a sliver of something. ...Those words are oremoved. Other words were removed because they were words that supported the story when action was in a different sequence. ...I had a feeling and a need to rewrite and edit and think of how to write the walk up the stairs. The walk how it was written had some good ideas, but over all was sloppy because the stair are in sections of five. The action is now, I feel better with the flow. The colors are and are not that bad. I like the pack staying on the lower floor. This will still allow for the flash light to break his hand.

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The read to begin the chapter may need some editing. ...I read to the thought of clearing the cube Dick is in. The idea to have dick use the seeing thought to something mark is used because it should. It was an edit that was there and read though and to find. I did kind of fast read. after staring at the first of the chapter and finding and removeding the right words to edit. The words I do like more. There may be some sort of thought of door opening in or out, but maybe not because Dick knows. There is a thought start and begin again. I have the last chapter in mind when reading and think i could edit the beginning to remove or add content to make more without hindering the end of the prior chapter.

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The ball rolling removed. There was no need for some of the thought for the thought was not needed. I read the first then had to read the end of last chapter. The end of last chapter is has all the motion of Psycho so I removed that. The attention is now on upon the door and getting in and then the elevator. ...Once in the elevator there needed to be some description edited by removing for it wasn't needed. Some needed to be changed to be made better. I thought of the whole chapter for a couple of couple of minute spans and thought more of the motion and what Dick does. I remember needed to write and read this chapter a lot the last time I focused upon it. I read to be something that is a bit over written, but not too much. I read the decent and the thought of light.

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I don't know what to do about the frist. With the from now written, I feel I reads as I want it to read. ...The words are find after or near complete. ...I did add more move aways to show the frequency of the warning, alarm. The words fun to read.

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After reading the beginning and the chapter and read of the thought where Dick is telling Psyhco of the reality of the test no matter the reality. Some of the worfds removed for they were not needed and removing them made the story more. The words I did like and now I am not too worried about the edit of the chapter. I think it will take only a couple of day to edit. The words and flow and idea seems to exist. The only change will be, I think the next chapter.

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I began reading from the army shouting number and ready. I found errors with typos and misspellings. I then read of the wrapping of limbs and began to edit. I thought of the talk of Psycho and Dick and Psycho will begin to reference Dick as you all the time for he is now in Psycho and there is that idea has allowed Psycho to begin to understand You. I will come with the other G43 killing machines arrive. ...I think. ...I focused time on the description of what Dick sees of the Army line. I have thought of this a bit. I just wrote it out. Then once wrote I read on. I may have too much at once. ...I read to the veiw of the killing machine and read of it and thought of it and like what was written. The names of Psycho and Dick will be removed from the records in places, but not all places. The conversation becoming one as far as the record reads it, but it is or is not. There could be any number of reasons. ...I should, I have thought label them all, of course there are bugs in every program.

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r20780 | kalab | 2007-08-01 22:13:14 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I began by reading and editing the description of the tanks clearing 18th, but then thought that it was a shitty prose piece and that Dick was not standing yet so he would not be able to see the tanks clear the road. This may change, but for now the detail may remain out or someplace else like in the sky. ...I read of the standing and the need and wrote of Dick standing then though of the fact the tanks should be idling and spewing exhaust, so I read at the first and found a good location for Dick to notice the idling. ...I found a few mistakes with tying. I had the verb issue again. The records that need verbs do not have them so some of the words changes exist because a verb was needed. ...I was writing for a time the description that is now after Dick standing. I can't find the words I want to write to define what needs to be written in a way to show with the language. ...I don't know. I will find it...

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r20761 | kalab | 2007-08-01 05:28:38 -0700 (Wed, 01 Aug 2007) | 1 line
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I read from jester to being in Psycho. I read and reread. Edited. And read. Wrote and read and edited, edited, edtied. The story is becoming. The description of this chapter in areas needs to be show and not tell. Lots of tellling found when telling is now wanted. At least this is how I feel after reading and rereading these words today. I was stuck on the descrition of Psycho. The rain. The everything. I think I will be deleting some sentences but I am not in the mood right now to do that. What of the sight and seeing the line move, and the people, and the G43 Killing Machines. ...The story does continue. It read on and builds. Tension reads to be held.

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r20741 | kalab | 2007-07-31 05:37:39 -0700 (Tue, 31 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning. There were reads that needed editing because the use of verbs was bad or read better than another. Some sentences are full of too much action and decision, it told, and now it more shows. The flow improved with more thought and stronger, grammar and spellchecked sentences. There are a few things needing be fixed, maybe, but only because I want to read the words and not edit them. The words are there. Most are more than becoming. The are. The description add is the description needed because there is a lot of things everywhere. ...I am thinking of the show of the this chapter of the clearing of the road and the tightening of the army wall and how Army marks and read and detains suspects into pockets of congov groups. ..The chapter and the tensions will be stronger and better shown through the sky view when Dick and Psycho are in the air.

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r20726 | kalab | 2007-07-30 05:47:06 -0700 (Mon, 30 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read the chapter. I wrote as much I edited and removed. The words becoming. I gave definition to the person of the beginning of the next chapter. I read and and read and though there are spots were there is change. There was a story, pace and natural prose reads to me to be nearing something. Maybe the next chapter should be read. ...Those words I have wrote recent for the chapter now read better (after removing the mindless sentence).

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I read from beginning to end. I read of things I liked. I corrected a few things but just wanted the read and round the read and the description enough. The end description of Dick leaving always may need more complete Object verb sentences, but the fragments could be good for the confusion. For there is not the pure record with chaos, so I t will probably remain. ...The walk to the Army I feel reads to be what is need to be something more than just filler for description. I did think for few minutes about the actions of the Army next. Next chapter they will begin to move. I liked the chapter. I feel it is very near what is needed for the chapter.

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r20689 | kalab | 2007-07-29 06:49:10 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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The read from the beginning to them entering Always was read and edited. I removed what needed to be removed. A paragraph and sentences that were not written. Talking is something that no only helps Dick not think, but is some thing required as Richard is nervous of what is going on and feels the need to try and calm himself. I wrote more of the Army line to increase the amount of control being created, but also I hope to set up the image of a parameter of Army that tightens and filters everyone to the epicenter, the White House (or maybe it is K Street. This filtering will give proof that soon if Dick does nothing then all his past records that are now loaded and he needs to be accounted for. This is a good set up for further reason for Dick need to chuse to put the head in the tap. ...Maybe. I will have to read again. The words added and removed do create a balance that I believe is something worth reading.

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r20682 | kalab | 2007-07-28 20:06:39 -0700 (Sat, 28 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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Read from after the scan to the drive. I removed the people after the departure from scan because there shouldn't be that many people. I like what I did read to the stop of the cab and the time Dick focuses more on the environment outside the cab. I read things over and over and found a better flow by removing detail or writing or editing. I think I need more definition when the near 18th and Connecticut. I actually looked on Google Maps to see it and find the flow the government takes to pick up people to service them at the White house and the surrounding goncov buildings. Top secret for they are close to K Street. The path is how I had thought it and remembered. ...More detail. I think in the next chapter I have the detail defined as they leave the cab. Maybe if there is more detail there then the reason that Dick only focuses on outside when outside because now Psycho could be really. Or there is more reason for Psycho to be real... ...I wrote more dialog at the end. It may remain for it seems general and revealing of character and shows and tells and creates. I read things and read things. And I want the scene to be as impressive as I think it is. The words did read on and on and on. More words to read and things to do. I do need to keep up the intensity on the next chapter. I should read that right now.

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r20662 | kalab | 2007-07-27 16:27:23 -0700 (Fri, 27 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the talk of the of the coach to nearing the passing of Du Pont Circle. The read was in pace and flow. I did like what I read. The words were there. I like the sequence of the race and of the scan.

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r20647 | kalab | 2007-07-26 19:07:19 -0700 (Thu, 26 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read after the U.S. A. to the clearing of intersection. I made more than one edit to clarify definition of scene and action. I moved internal dialog of the Apple Pie Paranoia of Jo. The definition of the people walk past more clear. There were changes for this and that. Things are better now then before the edit. I think the definition is enough, maybe more sweat, and is better and more defining now clear. ...I wrote of the sneeze and cough to show of character scene and to show the characters and their reaction to the change and how the clean up and the temptation of maybe a gun. ...I had hoped to read to the stage coaches, but I began to read then and thought the race can wait to find these things and create these words. To read and write a better flow.

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r20628 | kalab | 2007-07-25 17:49:03 -0700 (Wed, 25 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from An Army tank and after the edit and write of the sentence, I read on. The definition of the sound became an issue that taught me choir and orchestra and symphony to create and show dick lick symphonies. The definition better. The machines seen and show. The third party with the machine wins but only for so long. They all end up lost in the crowd. The race an obvious attempt to change the subject that the record will denote and is and doesn't need to mark because it is so obvious. A few more verbs and another 'to be' verbs. Need for the flow fits. ...So before all the reading past. Something I should write about now because it was thought while writing the symphony part. The thought is that I think pullers should now be called movers because it is a better name and because they say move, move, move so naturally we will call them movers. ...Pullers will be movers. ...I think the definition in the cab during the ride is okay. There will probably need to be more thought or more description because Dick is either trying not to think or thinking a lot so on or the other is needed. Of course I am also thinking he is not think or recorded just in a slowed mental state having had reasoned and be in a sort of meditative state. Maybe a few more details or comments. Sudden comments. I now have a thought of the words so I hope to read from the beginning again before dick notices the race coming with the two coaches of Senators.

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r20612 | kalab | 2007-07-24 17:49:36 -0700 (Tue, 24 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I began reading around where as is and read on to after the apple pie and nearing the second call out of the terrorist. I liked the flow of the internal and external dialog of everyone. I like the flow and the logic. There was some need to simplify the words and the thought because less was more. ...At times I may need more thought, but I think with this read and edit I have the locations where thought is needed. It flowed well. In fact I could have missed typos and misspelled words because the words were just there. For the most part. The characters and their talk becoming them.

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r20603 | kalab | 2007-07-23 20:38:05 -0700 (Mon, 23 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I began the read before the smell propaganda bomb. Then read through. I focused on the flow and the thought then read on through. After the bomb fades the focus is more clear for a second or two then the thought begins again. The though recycles the thought to make sure that is the thought Dick believes and will base the actions he believes to be real. The movement forward for the people begins. The crossing of the street and leaving of the people is here. I need to begin again where the flash occurs to edit the words written the prior read and edit.

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r20574 | kalab | 2007-07-22 20:11:46 -0700 (Sun, 22 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I began to edit by moving a sentence of dialog before other occurrences for the dialog should occur after Betty speaks because Dick needs and does answer the question right after Betty asks to further show it is the truth if it is the truth. ...I have decided Dick's record should be defined by acts and traits of the people in cab for that is what he is focused upon. These words that were written to help further define. ...I do like the flow better with the description given making both the showing of actions makes the words more show than tell. ...I noticed more than a few grammar errors, so I fixed them to make the errors more correct. ...I read and read and tried to add the detail the question of who has the the gun because it is a question any smart would ask during any situation just to be sure who one should avoid. ...The extra internal dialog is because Dick is thinking when not being aware. ...I add more verbs. ...I add and wrote and I think next write and edit will begin after the flash. The clean beginning to get the clean view.

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r20543 | kalab | 2007-07-19 22:22:54 -0700 (Thu, 19 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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The reading I like up and to the point of them talking about the moving to a different place which to me read to be out of place, so I removed it. I have been thinking of removing and now I have. What I have replace with the words with the other worfds is far better word and flow than existed before. I alos add more body motion to show that maybe Richard claims Dick is global red to change the subject about the Democrats and Republicans having sex with people they are not married to for he and Betty are having sex, so Richard screams. ...I think what was written ( which to the the time of the write has better flow and better placement. I am glad I removed the moving suggestions. With it gone, all the other words read to be better. Now i can read through these words and read on to other words.

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r20502 | kalab | 2007-07-17 22:29:04 -0700 (Tue, 17 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the taxi moving to the moment Eleanor asks Dick if he is a read. I read and reread words an sentences to make sure they were what has needed. I removed what was not needed and imporved what was. I think the detail written is enough of id s is taking in a lot, so the record quick and small. The mannerisms few for they all want to remain calm while they sit and listen to the calls for a global terrorist. I stopped because I want to be able to focus on what happens next. I also stopped because I began to think I was getting lost in the words to much and just wanting ot read and not being able to slow self to edit.

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r20472 | kalab | 2007-07-16 20:16:22 -0700 (Mon, 16 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read again from the beginning to the taix. I add enough description to show and thoughts and dialog to show. I do feel I like the flow as it is though it may change after I read it again after I complete reading the next chapters for I hope to begin to read at the taxi next read feeling comfortable that what has been written for the first is enough to begin the chapter. These words to become and are becoming. Here it goes. One more word, or more words.

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r20439 | kalab | 2007-07-14 16:23:23 -0700 (Sat, 14 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to the entering the taxi. I thought of the description and changed what needed to be change because it was just not right. The change were few. The words did flow. I didn't feel the need to write more dialog. Some of the description slightly altered. Not much more than that was really done. The read too place. I had to slow self down to focus and find those minor mistakes I may still have read over. The flow there. I may make a couple of adjustements, but the talk and walk and what is is. It reads. I thought of the book as a whole and the meaning of actions of this chapter while sitting here read and writing. I like what I read.

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r20422 | kalab | 2007-07-12 21:57:16 -0700 (Thu, 12 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read the first paragraphs. I move the description of people actions from the humidity because having both together was confusing. ...I like the beginning and don't feel the need to change it. the words the follow are the flow I feel that is need to continue on with the chapter.

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r20400 | kalab | 2007-07-11 18:51:20 -0700 (Wed, 11 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I began the read and edit at the conversation of jobs. I made some minor adjustments of the internal dialog to make the flow more logical and natural. I read and reread the words about the discussion of going to always. I like it but I am questioning my choice to not add more description of the area because Dick knows the area and because he is focused upon other things like talking and think and eating. The food. The food should be defined. The hunger should be defined. The lack of hunger should be defined. I will define it when I have a better, more clear, mind.

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r20363 | kalab | 2007-07-09 05:09:31 -0700 (Mon, 09 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read and I wrote from the taste of scotch to the getting of food. The edit was linear because I read and wrote. I did fast read to the point, but didn't focus on any one thing and didn't find the errors that could have been, but found no obvious issues. ...I read the words fast and slow. I had to write the food getting for it reads that I forgot to have Betty get her food. There were edits to space to show action was all at once. ...I do like the added dialog. I believe it adds more with lass and the flow now seems something to be read. The words are going good. I read until a page or two (if a page were 8 x 11 and the font ten) the getting of food to the beginning of eating. I thought of adding more crowd interaction, but I will not before the food for I think there is enough definition of the environment and Dick is now focused on the people, the contractors, so the action of other are not a focus and do not call for attention unless a major change in position or sound. ...I will begin to edit next, I believe, where they begin to eat. The words that read to then read to be ready. The change I should wait to may find to edit.

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r20310 | kalab | 2007-07-06 05:27:36 -0700 (Fri, 06 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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I read before the arm throw and after the arm of Richard being thrown around Dick's shoulder. I read after. Then I sat and got lost in thought in how to write the vague thought I had yesterday with the last journal of change. I think the reason for Richard and thought is shown and told by Dick. This could man anything. I think the words found while thought was lost looking into the scene the words create and stepping from the story to compose the words. After finally changing what Dick is given for food, read the edit of the bourbon and made sure it was both ordered correctly and flowed with the shoulder grab, which inspired more words to add more with the less. ..It took me a time to begin to define the taste of the scotch. I did end with the taste of scotch. I will have to come back to it. I should begin with food next read.

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r20265 | kalab | 2007-07-04 08:02:45 -0700 (Wed, 04 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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Losing focus for the edit and just want to read or write. The words are there, but the thought is distant for I keep slipping into read mode just wanting to read and enjoy the story and not take it apart sentence by sentence, word by word. I read from Eleanor's order to the arrival of food. I have more words written and a few removed. The ones written make the story more and not less. The dialog to make it flow from the page as it should. Confusion and all. The scene becoming a character. The touch is needed. I Dick wants to wipe something like his collar line. He wants to wipe it down, but doesn't want to be rude, so hbe does not. I may write this. ...The words as a whole were fun to read. With the additional definition, I believe I can begin the story as the food arrives. The order order was correct. ...I change glass to cup and glasses to goggles because glasses and glass are just too nondescript. The change I believe is what is in need. I did do a search and replace on the term, so I can only edit to find if the changes are good for all instances that used glass or glasses.

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The words written to make the dialog flow and feel natural. The description read to be good. I like the variation. The characters are becoming. The scene has been. More senses to e written. The focus of mannerisms for ease the purpose are being watched, but soo the focus will widen and smells and tastes willl be overwhelmed with food. I need to improve the food words. ...I read from the talke of Rude to the order of Eleanor. The words written and wrote fit. I hope to begin with the order next. I have read these words enough. I know the words to be written.

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r20222 | kalab | 2007-07-02 05:38:42 -0700 (Mon, 02 Jul 2007) | 1 line
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Reading for smell and hearing. The sounds and smells of a restaurant are needed for a restaurant. I read from the line into the the ordering of food. The focus was on writing more detail about the people and their mannerisms that Dick always looks at to see how one acts and if one is acting. The focus of what makes them separate people. It is needed to identify, so Dick looks, but Dick feels to define the person with the mental profile. More data Dick collects. ...There were some change to the dialog to make it better. ...I thought more of what each character looks like. I have the image in mind, but they are still becoming with time. The words did read. Most of them ready for something. I ddi focus upon the dialog because it had the interaction with the people. The words read.

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r20183 | kalab | 2007-06-29 05:28:10 -0700 (Fri, 29 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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I read from BROOD and i found actions of Dick pouring water. These lines were moved and place after words written of words and water. I read to change what Richard calls squab to pigeon because its pigeon to him and not squab. Squab is too European. ...I read of the water and found the place for the water sentences and found way to use the sentences to add more detail and add more showing of how Dick is civil and nice. Dick, despite who he may be, is a courteous and a gentleman. I read over and over and read the words to find what was needed to write. I am happy with the words. I think I have the only water process. I like the ordering, but I need to read past the setting of drinks. That's where I think I will begin next read and edit.

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r20151 | kalab | 2007-06-27 05:05:06 -0700 (Wed, 27 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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I read from BROOD to the talk of the water. The read was easy. The words did flow, I think. I found some errors. Once I found the palm sized description, I found a better place to show how the description was created then becomes part of record for the day at least or the remainder of the record. I like the read. It was easy. There were a few places where thought is a lot and thought makes a wander and a jump but I feel that is what is needed. Not everything is smooth. Some moments in life are difficult. There is no universal timing we humans can reset. The words have a flow. I like. The lack of sleep has me unable to focus, but still I seen the book and found the typing errors.

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r20128 | kalab | 2007-06-26 05:21:26 -0700 (Tue, 26 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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...All those years of being into 60's American cars, and I can't spell chrome. ...The read of the words was good. ...Well, most of them. I did have to write and edit the walk from the door to the table to sit. the words were jumbled. They told a story and didn't show a story enough, so the words were use and move and edited and written and read. They read better now. I feel they will later. I replace waiter with server for server is more likely to be a dominate word once the words is connected by computers, machines, serving us data. Waiter was just... ...When searching for water I read Clear by the door guard and thought it best to use good. I want to use good for it has many way to be defined. I want good to be used occasionally in the book to. ...I read from the entrance to the beginning of the ordering. Then I read here and there as I edited words to change. I found a few places to improve with the thought I have in mind for now.

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r20098 | kalab | 2007-06-25 05:33:04 -0700 (Mon, 25 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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The write of the talk and tell of Psycho leaving the nuclear waste before it wrapped up Dick and took Dick to K Street. The location where written is a good place for I think that the words even help have the thought of Dick that now follows have more meaning.

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I read from the look around after being across the street. I read from somewhere. What I wrote I think is actually pretty good and actually became better than I thought it could. The use of the 911 Aquarium to have a fish pulled out and lead the group with Dick left. There is symbolism. The gun checkin begin to the right soon after is more of this symbolism that wrote from a thought of just adding more detail and input Dick thinks and focuses upon to be able to understand the scene surrounding. The words did flow. Some changes that followed made for better internal dialog and description. Even if the new description and way Dick enters is not all that better I feel improves the story.

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More editing internal dialog to give more flow. I found another memory sentence without a verb. Moved a sentence to better time the event. The need to remove the double action of putting back on the jacket was removed because the jacket was on. The words were easy to remove. The change form Margaritas being the free drink was because I reasoned whisky and the genCorn and genWheat and genRye would give away free whiskey which can be made local and not very expensive tequila. Whiskey is more American. I removed the inclusion of Larry's Lounge because it was too confusing. I did want to give more words to the idea and though I thought of it once I did think I realized it didn't need to exist. It is a shout-out, but I an do that with promoting telling people about how the name Larry's Fajitas was created (because across the street there is a bar called Larry's Lounge. It is place Valerie and I would go when meeting people to eat at Laural (or however that is spelled) Plaza. It was also a good half way meeting point to meet friends living in Dupont Circle. Valerie and I, because I could never remember the name of the place with the Fajitas starting calling the place Larry's Fajitas). No, to me, it represents the control of someone with at least an American name but very influenced by the past cultures. The place is high brow for it is different. ...I read from beginning of chapter to the entrance of Larry's Fajitas. I feel I can begin in the line to the entrance of Larry's Fajitas next write. Time will tell the tale.

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I focused upon the edit of the internal dialog that was once mental recordings of memory. The read of the first. The change of a few things to make the internal dialog flow better. The feel I like. The focus of the edited faded a couple of time for I am sleep. What was interesting is the thought I had while closing the eyelids over eyes.I thought of The Detectives Store's themes and plot points and process and flow. The information is becoming. If I were more awake, I would edit more.

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I editing the location description to something more basic. The location is establish at the first of the chapter, so that is another reason to remove the words T and 18 with intersection. ...I moved a sentence for it had a trigger to inspire a thought. ...I removed an article for it was not needed. I removed a few articles. I turned mind record to internal dialog for it is a focus of a detective after all. I moves some sentences and add the description to show the movement of the people from road and the traffic moves. I see it. The talk of the nuclear waste something to be thought still. I removed the topic from the previous chapter. The sequence shows more now than just nuclear to be pooped. The words feel like they are okay ...I read from the beginning to near the entrance. The reading was more quick. I started to read too fast. I liked. The first needed some reading and needs a bit more, but the flow is found and with a few more details, the beginning will be near complete.

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The one obvious bad paragraph I think found and edited. From reading before the strobe pulse to end I found a few places to write and edit. The writing and editing more to the end took time. after reading almost to the end I thought again about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb. And then read it again. Then changed the names and the position of the first play. I read it again and thought it was more of a logic of also what the Propaganda bomb does. It uses thing the mind enjoys and enhances them with things and people you hold dear then creates a feeling of connection with that object of American with the U.S.A.. Or something like that. Dick is able to change the rules by prethinking because he feels it best to keep his mind and not lose it when there is a Psycho on the loose. ...I like the name change. I think it will remain as it is.

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I read and edited. I change a few sentences for clarity. Removed a few because they were redundant. The only real moving of story and losts of though were on the sentences before the propaganda bomb. I thought of the description and thought it neat and off hand and random to think to show Dick's mind focused, but unfocused. Change is the focuse. Knowing it can happen. ...The read from after the strobe flash to the propaganda bomb. The read I liked. The words of the propaganda bomb are near complete. The will be a good beginning to begin to read next edit. The sequence of record now better with the sentence move and merge of the propaganda bomb scene. ...The word and thought I did have sometime when I got to caught up in story were interesting thought I hadn't know of, or read of, in a while in these words.

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...I remembered after reading the scan that Dick was in the street. I also felt the words that were written after needed to be more and less, so a few more words were written. The thoughts and what was written to show more complete. More with less, or so I feel. ...I read from before the scan. I felt the process of coming to thought again needed more pace and flow. I think it now has something close to what I feel is needed. I did think about changing the names of the players in the propaganda bomb be Mustang and Dick. But I didn't change because what I add is something that makes the transition and the setup to remember the thought before the propaganda bomb. ...The internal dialog edited for a more natural and less focused flow after the propaganda bomb begins to wear-off. I read from before the propaganda bomb to the end. More reading and editing. I need to also focus an edit on from strobe flash to propaganda bomb. I think I felt it okay. I would like to read once more. ...I think on Wednesday or Thursday I will read through and begin reading the next chapter. Feeling much better about this chapter.

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Non dialog sentences missing verbs should not be. ...The thought of the propaganda bomb a good progression into the effect of the propaganda bomb. I like the flow of thought now. It is becoming better shown. There has been more than enough telling of the object. I still want to read over the after the bomb again. I like what I have but the very end my be redundant. I read to the end and I didn't read the next chapter for I want to reread this near end again and again before I move on. I think by the end of the week

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The range of edit wasn't the long. From before the propaganda bomb to the rethinking of cowboys. What are the Cowboys\? I clarified the memory attachments, so though it will expand the thought to flow ot other thoughts the amount of memory connects allows the time and mood and walking and the data references for him to remember. The edit was good. I like what has been written, but there my need be more readings of these words. I do need to focus closer on the thought. I skimmed most of this read. maybe I should read it allowed\? I must admit I am becoming jaded of editing these words. But I feel and see the chapter is near completion. I am nearing reading these words like I read the owrds of the first chapter feeling the words written near completion. That feeling is near for these end words. They do deserve just as much time. Sometimes I think I edit too linear therefor and become jaded on focusing for edit upon something for too long so by the time i edit to the end of a chapter I just want to be done and hurry. I don't think this too much with the other chapters. ...I will still be reading everything backward.

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A few edits. A few words read. The edits of sentences so they were slow. I have been having a hard time focusing this morning. Thoughts from tangents of this book and the meaning and relation of the story with the stories of the world in this non-fiction world. I thought of details of the meaning and a couple of time got lost on tangents of how to Publish The Detective Store. I am feeling a little jaded of mind. I am sleepy, but awake. If I was not walking in a couple of ours I'd go for a walk now to clear the mind and begin to focus upon the words.

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A very slow read from the Jeep and two men wrestling to right before the focus of Dick to prepare to enter the cone of white. I found some needed sentence edit which required me to rewrite or write a sentenc. Those did take time. I did read a few sentences that were written before the exact grammar and style of the story. Those few were easy to edit because I only needed separate and make a new sentence. I found a few typos by reading. ...I did become lost in thought about the characters of the book. I kind of just realized Dick is Gay and G43 is for the forty-third President of the United States.

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Dick needs to focus self to focus upon people too show show the record of Psycho that people are around and matter and should be seen as life like the plants in the garden. The people add to the scene too. I want the place to feel crowded and now there is a reason for it and purpose for it. ...I began by the White Hotel. I editing by adding people and read on. I removed some internal dialog that was witty and worked with the words but it was too manufactured and I have not desire to have it in the story because when I read it just now it just didn't feel like it belonged. The fact it was a sentence that was a recent write makes me feel better about removing the words. ...I thought about making the flash sequence internal dialog, but then thought I should not. Most time for edit used to better incorporate, write, the process of Dick Discovering thought again after the indirect flash. What I have written in the past was good, but it just feels to need to be a bit more gradual. I think what is written will be what is needed. A gradual understanding of the reality. The reconnection and recreation of the thought. The mind finding ways to recreate the reality.

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I couldn't find the right sentence and description of the invisible stage coach so I made it a bit thick steel stage coach pulled by many pullers. I read and edited from 18th the almost to the propaganda bomb. The words did flow. The mind is slow. It can't focus right now.

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After this write, and after reading the words of the edit, I feel the words from the circle to 18th are what they need to be. I added more words, a new focus, and a completion of thoughts and focuses. These words should be read again and I should now focus after them because by the time I focus on them to edit for an hour and find edits and make long thinking sentence change I get burnt to slowing down the reading. I just want to read. I want to enjoy the story more than just creating it. I wonder if I ever will.

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r19707 | kalab | 2007-06-09 06:58:53 -0700 (Sat, 09 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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Write to add more description after reading and editing the first paragraph to read to the next chapter to read if the flow of the words is good or bad. The read was short, therefore, not much to write.

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r19695 | kalab | 2007-06-08 18:17:59 -0700 (Fri, 08 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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A read from the danger to the question of danger. The internal dialog edited to be more natural and be influenced more by what is around. The thoughts going though mind. I wanted to also prolong the effects of the strobe and have Dick forget something and remember after Psycho uses his name. I think that the thought one focus on will be lost for the strop pulse. So Dick should be thinking about everything, but nothing to leave it it the chaotic mess that does exist. The sound clears the mind of thoughs connected to the prefronal lobe. Infact so does the strobe. The shock gets rid of the thought and the connected. If it is directed it is more effective. Because Dick doesn't catch the flash's full effect it won't make him totally forget. ...The words arecoming. The description is close to what I want, I think. I only think because I have to doubt for the edit. What was removed wasn't needed and was making the story less by the words being part of it.

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r19665 | kalab | 2007-06-07 05:37:55 -0700 (Thu, 07 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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A read of what was read and written during the prior edit session. I found grammar errors. I read sentences here and there. I sort of read in a linear flow from outer circle to street to strobe pulse and after. I read fast to some words beyond, I read that there were some sentences that needed working and there is not time, so maybe I'll edit those setences and read botton to top.

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r19641 | kalab | 2007-06-06 05:28:21 -0700 (Wed, 06 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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I move and removed sentences to decrease thought that wasn't needed, decrease the time it takes Dick to cross the road, I rewrote sentences for there were many sentences that read as chaos. I read a some of the words at first, but I really focused, as I am sure the edits will reflect, upon the walk along outer circle down road. The detail written for better flow and description. Not to abstract, but abstract enough to be written. The thought found. Once I began reading after the pop of the drone to stop two wreastling men I thought there were a lot of words, but liked it because Dick is trying to focus away from internal dialog.

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r19616 | kalab | 2007-06-05 05:31:45 -0700 (Tue, 05 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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Editing one sentence near the completion of sentences can be difficult. Some times I stare too long at the change and think of how to do it with less words. Less is more. There was a sentence move because the sentences moved allowed for the focus to refocus upon what is near. The flow to more description. Words were add to make more of other words and complete the scene. I still need to think of scene. And reread now that those few sentence that didn't want to change easily are edited and ready for a read.

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I wrote the fun thing for the day. The passing off of teaching Psycho what he considers a danger (things that kill) and passes off the task of having, requiring, teaching Psycho that killing things are a danger to life. This is change in the use of the reason Dick calls out the people and rates them with danger or immediate danger. Dick does this now as a teaching tool to Psycho and to protect. The many reasons is for Dick to show Psycho a pattern while protecting and focusing. This is carried through to the story. ...The other words editing while crossing to the circle. Words were changed after because the words were not good enough or too much. Some of the thought flow as just not in the flow it needed to be. Removing a few words fixed some of the flow problems. The words I like. Most do read. I think a few more reads to get the passages through and from circle to be what I want it to be. It is near. The more showing edits of last edit read to be something near what I want it to be...What I see it to be.

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r19565 | kalab | 2007-06-03 09:37:00 -0700 (Sun, 03 Jun 2007) | 1 line
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I read. I read from before the cross to after the flash from the drone and the hearing of the hovercopter. The read went well. There were edits for clarity. I was able to slow read and think and see most of the story. I added a few details to show Dick's discovery and focus upon information either by cause or trigger. The words read good. I made some edits to show and not tell with the detail. The words read good. They had a flow when I let my self just read. It was hard and is now getting hard to slow read and not read. I want to just read the words, but I can read in words. As I have found, I do read in words. ...The thought of the book continues. Adding the completing the thought and story that exists. Writing to show and see so one may feel.

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The read from the first. I thought of reading some of the recently editing passage near the first. The main focus was on the corner near congov. Before and after dialog and internal dialog the focus. It wasn't until the end of the edit that I read sentences without verbs. The description I did read here and there in a sort of linear flow and I liked it. There was some internal dialog added for a natural flow and lesson and insite of Dick as he is seeing and thinking.

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From beginning to the last sentence written, the words where read and written. The words written during writing times past read as they should. More written to make less more. To show. To think. To give the scene character. The scene I believe now has the characer needed to continue these words. I feel I can begin after the pool crowd, after the last sentence written, because I think the words I have written should be read at a later time after i forget their existence. I do believe, like the writing of this book, after the first of this chapter, I then was able to find character in the scene, so near the last of this chapter is also what I am thinking of as I write for only a memory can tell of its having character. A character that may need some characteristics, but won't be as trying as the first of this chapter...I feel. I don't know. ...I had always feared this chapter after the last read for it is now the weakest, but could become the strongest if done write. After this chapter I believe the words do flow better if only because of the characters.

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r19489 | kalab | 2007-05-29 23:20:52 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007) | 1 line
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I have decided to replace all the thought to define a danger and immediate danger to be written with the detail of the vehicle gardens dick sees. He will focus internal dialog away this way for the basic thought because that is what everyone does to avoid too much personal thought from being recorded for everyone is being recorded. Dick just want to be sure it is not a terrorist listening in. Dick doesn't know if Psycho can read all his thought, knows it said it could, to be safe it is best just thinking of something else. This is also away to protect the thought from Psycho. The read was good. I wrote dialog to show Dick further teaching Psycho and trying to make the dialog more natural. A long conversation Dick wants to have with Psycho. The dialog addition made things more with less. More because it adds to the character of Dick, Psycho, the Scene, Washington, D.C. and can define the times if one were to think of it. ...The reading began walking from the circle.

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I began the edit by writing a sentence. This felt more like a write but only because the changes needed writing. I wanted to show guns guns guns and a clean city. The shine of things, so a sentence was added. I wrote the name for I think Dick would ask the name soon to get Psycho to think of the names as humans or show that he wants to make Psycho think of the idea of a name to further teach Psycho or show that he is trying to help to think and show others something that may not be real. The name of Smith is going to be the named used for both Richard and Betty. If this is a story of America and is Edited by United States of America it is only fitting to have a Smith. The other words edited then written were edited and written because of some confusion. For a few sentences, I wanted the description to be more show and not tell as it was. ...The thought of show and tell is something I think of as I read every sentence. ...The amount read during this edit was not great, but what was read and written is now more complete.

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I am getting to much of a fast reader for I want to read the story and not slow read and edit and write the story that is written and not the one I can fill in when I see a grammar error. My concentration is lost on the edit for I want to read. I read from the beginning to the crossing before the congov truck and before crossing to the center of the circle. I believe next write I will read and edit beginning with the the jeep down the sidewalk somewhere. I want to read into the story with the yes and no and see if it flows. Did I forget. There is a space in description maybe. Maybe there should be because this is Dick focusing in the fact he is talking with a killing machine. The acts of and focus seems consistent. I add some mmore action to show and not tell the manner's of Dick. The flow and the detail I believe to be becoming what it needs to be.

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I can now read the words. I can now find the flow with the thought of dick. I need, and I read a lot of time on the first few paragraphs that need verbs. I didn't use verbs for it is written more like a record. Do there need to be verbs\?

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I read from beginning to end. I am ready to move and read to the next chapter. I feel the dialog both internal and external can be understood many different wanted ways and read to be natural for Dick and Mustang. It is all almost complete. It needs more read thoughts, but only after I read the remainder of the book because this is feeling very near copyedit. The chapter being done for now. ...Th eedits were needed for clarity. I like the interaction with Mustang. ...Thinkings reviewed I think of things that were redundant.

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I read fast from first to the Dick in the apartment. Then I read slow. Or it felt like it was slow because I found more mistakes with the words after Dick enters the apartement. I did a little more telling this chapter, but it also a show and tell, so I don't feel too bad about being direct. I wanted to be more vague, but they have to have the conversation of Dick informing Mustang. It's not like I can summerize it with a paragraph. The conversation, I hope, has more words and dialog to help the dialog feel more natural. A few mistakes once in a while is needed. There are pauses. There are stops. There are things said because of thought that need to be shown to tell the tale. The words are becoming. I like the read. Next time I begin the edit of The Detective Store I will begin with this chapter again, but not many reads remain for this edit of The Detective Store chapter.

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I read from the smell of the cookies and remembered I wanted to change the cookies to something more healthy and wouldn't require sugar or chocolate. I had thought of using figs, and I may still, but after researching I thought not to use them because they are not accessible to D.C., so how would they be grown except as gen. They may still be used. I don't know. I do know I have granola bars which was something I thought of after thinking of having fig bars. The words were not read passes, and I began reading with search and return engine about the food. I have made this change, and I will pause the edit for I can't see the story as I want.

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The words of the first read. There was the addition of words spoke to continue the creation of the character scene. The time the thought. The flow I like. I stop now because I want and sort of need to focus upon other things. I did have the thought while reading that the fact I had written so much of the first before finding the frame and form of the story that it requires a lot more editing than the final chapter and a few of these middle chapters. The dialog already written for any form. ...Lost that thought. Is what I am trying to write is that I see the difference in how these words were thought and written first than the words of the first chapter that I find a need to edit the flow.

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The words were slow read. I did get lost during a time in some of the scenes. The flow. I think I now see the words. ...I only read and edit from first edit to the Jersey Dikes. I was paused and thinking, sometimes too much, about how to write the scene with the scene in my mind. Now that the words are considered to be written they are had to writew with a scene. Hard, but not difficult. ...I will try to begin at the Dikes for next read.

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Slow reading for the run. There were sentences and movement and definition and hidden meaning to be read and edited. The book and the between the lines book becoming. I read from the mind thinking of Psycho reading thoughts to the running across Connecticut. ...The words have been written and thought. More sweat maybe. For Dick is sweat and notices the sweat. The notice of the object to run around shouldn't be the only object of change observed by the mind of Dick.

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The end. The pace of movement focused upon the expanding plastic ball. To show many things. The end of the chapter. The end of the chapter. This is what was thought during the morning walk. The Word Prostitute(R) subversion log entry prior to this on defines the many ways Word Prostitute(R) sess these words.

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I changed the end because the end needed to be changed. I began at the walk to the jersey dikes. From there I read and I do think the read read well. I like the words. I like were the words are reading. There were some needed corrects to make the thought more natural. Too exact while running is good for Dick, even he wants to be lazy of thought to be more vauge.. ...I add the catch of the pastic bag. Now that I think of if I don't have Dick doing any thing with the plastic bag. I think Dick will forget about the plast until the end of the run at the door. That what may be at the end, but I want to read the first of the next chapter before I choose to make that choice. ...The words are becoming. I did need to edit some of the sentences for clarity, but the overall way it is written is how it needs to be written. There may and could be more description of the character scene.

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...I read from the cicada, maybe a litll before, to the end of the crowd. The locations where the first edit began and the last edited ended. The words becoming more and better. I think the flow it better than what it was. I editing the intersection crossing because it was not written well enough. I saw nothing. The words flow better.

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More reading from beginning to end. I just need to find the right words because some of the words are just bad. I did need to think about the words that were deleted. Some of them I thought of long time. Others were just bad, The word and grammar and form thought and further edited. ...The story is clear. I think I will try to begin the edit after the exit of the office. I believe I removed or change things needed to be thought of. Punctuation will come.

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Read from the beginning to where I add words to the chapter to better show and not tell. The words need some work. They are good in places and lost and confused other places. I did read a lot and deep. I found things that I do have a tendency to over look. The change of proper name of club seemed better, more fitting. I need to think of tastes more, I think now as I write this. The story does more along. The internal dialog as it needs to be, but I do want to try to remove articles because it is focused thought, but still thought and all the rules or detail is sometimes lost from the focus when looking for proof of a killing machine while thinking. ...There were grammar mistakes, but all in all all is not bad. There grammar is defined, so the grammar is in mimd. It's easy for me to see if I slow read and don't replace with my mind.

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r19052 | kalab | 2007-05-08 19:55:44 -0700 (Tue, 08 May 2007) | 1 line
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The knowing of when you are going to die that you don't want to be some place you have come to hate. Dick doesn't, I think, hate D.C.. Dick hates Adams Morgan and all the sin and corruption of companies and government. The beginning better now that I ended the prior chapter with something that is not Dick's thoughts. The end of the last chpater also is better. The change is what was needed. The beginning of the chapter show me some weird paranoid push for Psycho to get out. How crazy is the mind\?

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The flow from chapter to chapter is a good flow. The end of the prior may change to add more description to separate the occurance of action of Dick. ...I added more question to show a mind thinking of everything. The thought beginning flows as it should. The first of chapter was read, but only a few 'pages' into the chapter were read.

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I read and I read. I read things I always correct to quick to read over for it should be that way, but it was not. I edited. I edited the words. Now the words are near complete. I read from the beginning to the talk of Dick to Psycho to gain time. ...I changed the like of the size of Psycho's core to head because it is a better definition. The like for other things something to be used to tell, but also help Dick command himself to say something a certain way to pose in mind with words how to pose for the act. The words were read slow. More physical description will be written. Some was added. More not needed, but I don't want to make myself feel restricted.

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r18986 | kalab | 2007-05-06 17:57:55 -0700 (Sun, 06 May 2007) | 1 line
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The chapter read from beginning to end. The thoughts and words added to show the thoughts. The talk of Dick is caught up in the chaos of the face Psycho is before him for that Unique moment. The chapter does read. I think I read it slow enough to read most of the mistakes onces had. The internal and external dialog now read to be natural. Less force with most things. The chaper reads a a chaper should. Or I think should without having a complete definition of what the chapter should be.

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r18958 | kalab | 2007-05-05 09:24:34 -0700 (Sat, 05 May 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the beginning to the description of Psycho defining the reason for thinking life is made. I read for more time than wanted for there was a space. There was words edited. The flow at the first of the chapter now found. The words are what they need, so next write I will not be hung up with words and a space between paragraphs.

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r18944 | kalab | 2007-05-04 06:01:28 -0700 (Fri, 04 May 2007) | 1 line
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I read words after Dick is told of how Psycho came to be. The reason Psycho is in Dick's office is nearing what it needs to be. The idea os more focused. I also changed the Internet to Internet to create a charater of Internet and to show Psycho calls it Internet like it is a being because it has a name it exists. The words to the thought are becoming. Some of the sentences needed to be separated to clarity. Some sentences have been removed for clarity. The words were moved at first to show and tell in order. The story I like. The reason Dick's parania becoming. The reason for Psycho being Psycho and not killing becoming. More reads are needed. This is the one interaction of the book that really needs to work for the book to be. Actually there are many things of the book that make the book. The definition and description of how Psycho and why Psycho is in the room needs the most improvement to be any good. It is improved.

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I read the chapter from beginning ot end. Some changes were made that ahad a lot to do with butts. The words butt and the placement of butt. I read and I like what I read. I removed some sentences to clean up the end and be sure that action is not repeated or overdone because it could be read either way, so words were removed. words were written to show and tell the chapter. The chapter reads. I founds some new meaning of the beginning. I like more the What was I thinking, to be of the beginning to not only bring the reader along, but caste two different meanings of What was I thinking. Literally or as soomething thought or said rhetorically after an act that is considered stupid or dumb. ...So from beginning to end the words read. I think I have separated the words that needed to be separated. Next read I will read the next chapter.

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r18891 | kalab | 2007-04-30 06:40:58 -0700 (Mon, 30 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to sentences after the last edit. The honking of horn phases where read. Sentences were removed to continue to remove too much focus for Dick is trying to focus, but is too bored with being in office all day that his thought is focused and random. Dick's thoughts with better flow where words were written. I did like the words. I wish I had time to continue to read. They are nearing a state of completion.

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While I was reading the prior chapter, I had words for the begining of this chapter, but after reading the beginning of the chapter I have choosen to keep what is written. I did read the first few paragraphs to read the beginning. There were changes for comprehension. Words were... Now I forget the other beginning I wanted. I only remember it was good, but what is needed for the chapter. I think it was, ,,I don't want to die in Adam's Morgan.' ...Which I may use for the next chapter.

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r18849 | kalab | 2007-04-29 07:02:21 -0700 (Sun, 29 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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A read from beginning to end. The beginning now D.C. for it is more generic and encompases Dick's area where he grew up. It is also more appealing. It is also the focus of Dick's thought for him getting out of D.C. is what he wants. More internal dialog was removed. More action was written of. There were a few punctuation errors were found. A few more do exist. I liked the flow now. I feel I want to read and write again one more time before I move the focus to the next chapter. This begins and continues. I want to read and write and edit. It is new the frame and voice and record wanted for the book, for the story.

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r18828 | kalab | 2007-04-27 06:05:48 -0700 (Fri, 27 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I followed the flow after the read of the 0001 chapter and found that the beginning words needed to be fewer for the lifting of the head is not an action or something to be aware of. He is sitting up in chair, and Dick is not one to stare at the ground or lower eyes even when in thought.

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From beginning to end the words were read. The Fuck Cap is now a sex cap becaue I don't want to over use Fuck. There was some change to some of the words because the word used was too powerful and encompasing when I don't want to overwhelm the moment with definition. The words did flow. This happen and do feel as if they are timed. The words are becoming. I will now read the end of the book to follow the flow of the words.

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From beginning to end. The flow of the words better now that a few have been removed. Again there was duplicate action. I removed the action. There was a flow. I liked. I did read things over and over to be sure I read detailed sections of the story. ...I think the showing of contaminated lungs is good. it will read. The words to me do read and are near complete. From beginning to end the words were read and the words read were and are liked.

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r18795 | kalab | 2007-04-24 17:44:43 -0700 (Tue, 24 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I read from beginning to end. I don't think I read fast too much and there for read in the story. I removed sentences because there was some dublication in action. There also needed to be more description near the end. I believe the scene and the description is nearing completion. The image I have in mind is of some clarity. There is something to read. There are words for one to see. The chapter from beginning to end did read.

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r18790 | kalab | 2007-04-24 05:54:05 -0700 (Tue, 24 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The words are there. From beginning to end the words were read. The words do now read. There was a need (needs) to edit the words to better create the voice of the character. I read slow and I read fast. I edited my sentences. I add some words to define the character say or thinking the thoughts. The words do flow better now than they did before. I am finding all those little mistakes I make. As with all the edits of this cycle, I used the program TextEdit. The program helps me see the words better than the terminal which I may change to get a better font and size and color to see the words. I use the terminal more than textedit to edit. ...Anyway. The story continues to the next chapter.

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r18762 | kalab | 2007-04-22 14:11:33 -0700 (Sun, 22 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The words that begin the chapter should begin the chapter. I read from the beginning to the last edit which wasn't too many lines of words. I wanted to read on, but there are many other things to read. I need to lose the focus to read if there is interest in the chapter only.

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r18743 | kalab | 2007-04-22 07:05:44 -0700 (Sun, 22 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The words flow as they should. The obvious turn of a new record. Dick wants to begin again. The flow from the first flows well. I had to fix internal and external dialog for typos, errors, jumbled words. I did read much. I read to the Jester playing on tank. I thought about the jester and like the idea still. I though of some mention of a king or queen to further show the america of now ruled by a select group of people. Now that I write the idea, I will not talk of a King or Queen for it best not to define it for the reader. Let them think of it or not.

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r18733 | kalab | 2007-04-21 21:50:42 -0700 (Sat, 21 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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A quick read to read the beginning having had just read to the end of the prior chapter. The read is a good transition. I didn't read many words beyond the edit of the sentence, so the sentence could be read.

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r18718 | kalab | 2007-04-20 06:03:26 -0700 (Fri, 20 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I read and edited from terrorist to terrorist. The words did flow. There were a couple of sentences that had not flow and were a jumble of words. The words I did like. I have nothing to add or take way because it is full of ideas and talk and action. I think the story of the story is being told. The thought does have a flow. Now the third shouter will say what there is to be said and the sound will raise and fall. That was almost read. ...I did begin the read page before the the second call of a Global Terrorist Red. The flow to it works, I believe. The preacher and jester words are what need to be.

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r18694 | kalab | 2007-04-19 05:40:35 -0700 (Thu, 19 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I began the read by reading the fist to check the words added yesterday about the guns. It works, but only if it has been thought in a chapter prior, so I will think of who to write in more gunsm which will be easy. After a stop and a long read and stare of scene before getting into taxi, I read from announcement of global reds to the Army Preacher. The words I ended with read, but the thought of if it should be an Amry Preacher is in mind. I believe it will, but I will think.

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r18671 | kalab | 2007-04-18 05:47:23 -0700 (Wed, 18 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I wanted to keep reading, but there are other thoughts I want to have this morning for they are thoughts soon to complete. I read from the beginning. I thought over sentences. I slowly read. My mind was able to read words that were too many and causing confusion. There where sentences that needed to be written to push the action along. Three were thoughts removed becaue there were not thoughts. There were thoughts made into thoughts and not internal dialog as it was. There is now a flow I want to read more of. There is a more fluid flow to Dick's character when he is around other people and talking with them. I like the flow. The pace of people brings life to any charater.

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r18664 | kalab | 2007-04-17 21:52:17 -0700 (Tue, 17 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I forgot the write this morning. I forgot I am reading the next chapter after I began fast reading this one then thought of something to write that will complete something written. The Dick part needed more because I felt I had left it hanging. Now it is zipped up and tucked away. The words and characters brought out more. This the talk of the know. The natural flow. Some things to arise, I think, if they were read. The read only really near the location of the edits. I did begin at the top, but only stopped to edit punctuation. Then after punctuation thought of the scene completion and completed it.

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r18652 | kalab | 2007-04-17 06:21:14 -0700 (Tue, 17 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I read from before food was brought to the exit of the group. there were more misspellings and typos to be fixed than sentences and paragraphs. There were sentences and paragraphs, but the usual act of deleting words and make the sentences more exact fixed the amount of confusion a sentence created. There we other edits, but not many thoughts of the need to change the story. Infact. there wasn't any this read. The words, I think, flow how they need to go, so it works, on some level. With the end of the read of this chapter there is the next.

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r18634 | kalab | 2007-04-16 05:41:15 -0700 (Mon, 16 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I like what I have read. I have read from beginning ot the introduction. There were change to focus thought. There were thoughts of changes like to change Dick's replay to George's fajita and dick question more relaxed, but he tries to make a joke. I don't think I will have a wink though I may to give show that it is a joke, a bad joke, brought up and Dick just wants to get past it without making George feel uncomfortable for Dick needs to focus upon gather information. The words read. Words were edited because they were split, or too much, or in the same paragraph. I liked the showing and what the showing told. The staring of George, the turn from hate to like is a reason for Dick not wanting to make George feel more uncomfortable by letting him feel bad. The words to read. I will read again.

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r18610 | kalab | 2007-04-15 16:50:48 -0700 (Sun, 15 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The read of the chapter was near the end. I fast read from beginning reading here and there. i read the places i have needed to read and have written these reads and writes of this chapter. The end I think is in a state that needes to exist. The words to define the mind once thinking of thought, forced thought, of the government finding its way to the thought before the connact. The talk is slow and focusd.

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I read from the words, around the words, a bit before, where I read to last night. The words needed some adjusting. Sentences here and there edit to be more complete and define more not less. The words to have the pase. I read from that point to the end. I liked what is read. The change enough. The description enough. Maybe more smells, but Dick isn't thinking too much of smell unless it is powerful enough to change the normal smell. The words do read. The will be read again.

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r18574 | kalab | 2007-04-13 05:36:23 -0700 (Fri, 13 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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What was written are words to make clear the path of Dick. I tried to focus upon the action, but I did find my self reading over to catch the overall. I like the overall, but found sentences and paragrasphs that was not a paragraph or sentence. The words did flow, but there were rough waves when I wanted no waves. The read of what happens during the strobe pulse is, it think near what it should be. It reads.

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I believe the description written for the walk from the circle is now in a state that I will be able to read through and begin to read without worrying about confusion. I willl read it first, or try to, during the next edit. ...Words were removed for the edit because they confused and were written for another book. ...I have found that most my consfusion is I try to do too much in a sentence or a paragraph. I also try to create a fake tension sometimes. ...The words I do like. The have better flow. The read to the two men grappling is tension. I like the words. Some change to a word vine because there are no vines on the jeep.

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r18535 | kalab | 2007-04-11 05:34:53 -0700 (Wed, 11 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I stared at the words now removed for many minutes thinking of a rewrite when I lost thought and then had a thought to just remove the words. The the idea of having the definition of the tree line and improve the definition and the flow of the walk in. Editing the words by removing the words edited a lot of the confusion I once had because the walking couple think was somehow thought to be needed and was and is a focus of Dick. The new words and the flow that they have found have create more thought and better story and better words. I am not confused now. The story continues and doesn't read to be lost.

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I read and edited from the beginning to the walk around the circle. I think the walk to the circle is about complete. I may read through again, but I think I have the clarity, words and flow I want for the walk to the circle. The walk in the circle I am not sure about. I like the bash of men and women married couples swinging, but I am wondering if it is needed. I don't know. It may be too obvious and not needed because the primary and secondary targets are needed and used to bash on man and woman only marriage being this pure thing when it is not. I think I will begin the next read crossing to the circle the rewrite the center of circle scene. What it will be will be a with couples of men and women, but maybe not as clock work like. More natural. While the entire book is exteme this should not be, I feel. There words words I read and noticed misspelled and even corrected them without issue. Typos. During the read I versed my self with punctuation of dialog to see when a capital letter is used to begin dialog.

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r18498 | kalab | 2007-04-09 05:48:47 -0700 (Mon, 09 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The beginning does begin. I like it. I am question the mental check off of people Dick passes with labeling them danger and more danger. A thought that may be edited again. I haven't decided.

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Only a few words changes and lots of words read. I read to the beginning of the talk between Mustang and Dick. The coversation is something I like. It flows how it should. I didn't read much. What I did read I did like. The chapter begins fast and descriptive. I like the flow and the words.

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I read from the beginning to the embassy. The words and mind focused on those few sentences that a just bad. The ideas iin the sentences good, but the sentences them selves are bad. They read like a crazy person writing. They have no logic or flow, but once the logic or flow is found with editing then the sentences read and fit. The sentences are not many, but enough to have some worry. I think in the past with the different U.I.(s) like the terminal it was easier to read past. The was good. Most of it I liked. I had e to change some things about the run across Duke's bridge because I felt I didn't want to show construction on the bridge. I just want and needed to have Dick run across. Showing the contstruction was too much and moved the focus of the story away from the story. The tangent a tangent and not a need part of the story to make it be. The words moving. The senses feel like they are shown.

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r18456 | kalab | 2007-04-07 18:23:10 -0700 (Sat, 07 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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I read the chapter. I was slow were the edits of more more than a misspelled words or grammar mark issue was found. The rewrite of the words was for clarity. Some of the edits were words I just read a certain way for a few read. I was writing with my mind by reading what i wanted. near the end of the chapter when Dick says he will not help Psycho is a direction I will go with this story as Dick doesn't want to help, but must know if Psycho is real, so he follows through. Or Dick creates Psycho as a reason to enter the tap. This sentence will change the story for it will show someone who is living in the land of realities.

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I almost read to the end. There is a time constraint for the finish. The read was a read of writing of the reason. A reason I will be rewriting for the prior chapter. The words are there. There were a few issues, but as a whole I flowed over most of the words and focused and three sections and talk. I got lost once, but that could be because the wine I just drank made me more fuzzy than I thought it would. The chapter reads as it needs to be. I thought for a few minutes about the end and how and if to add anything to the internal dialog, the seelog, about Dick inventing Psycho in his own mind.

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r18435 | kalab | 2007-04-05 17:50:49 -0700 (Thu, 05 Apr 2007) | 1 line
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The change of the G43 to Gee Forty-three to sound the word from mind. Extropy has been removed. The rewords have been read. I like the flow except those places that i removed words. I like the flow of the words. There are few places I want to think about changing. The words read. The dialog and internal dialog what I want. I will probably not begin at the beginning again next edit.

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The read of the first few paragraphs. I stopped reading beyond were the last edit was written. I then read and thought of the chapter and the beginning. I thought of the end of last chapter and the last sentence. I stopped reading the words of this chapter and decided to return to read the previous chapter.

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From beginning to end. I reall read from beginning to end. The edit to edit the talk of Psycho consumed much of the time for I kept writing and editing and reading and writing and editing and reading and writing and writing. I believe the words and the idea are there in the words now. The words were written, but they were written sloppy and needed to be cleaned up. The story now has some pace. I began and ended the paths and flow of characters around the area. This is good. The read through revealed a lot about the story. I think I have further uncovered more with less words for I did do some deleting of more words that were just not of this book, so they had to be removed. They did help me know a bit more about the story, but the read of the book will be best not to know for the words may not be true. The read was read using textedit and not vi as I have been. I think I will reread the first chapter with textedit for it is easier to see the words and focus upon the words when reading with textedit. This is something I can do next read through. I will now continue to read the chapter again the read to the next chapter.

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That was a good read. I replace cab with taxi because taxi is more universal and a word that would be used. The reading from front to finish was good. I think the end where I wrote the competion of the altercation between the bikers and the car driver was needed and helps complete the chapter. The thoughts of Dick are better, if not near complete. I removed more because the thoughts were not needed because focus was slow and looking at the sights out side. The thoughts were too leading and not thoughts of a slow mind, too, so they were removed. The descirption needed to be edited for there was a few words that were off here and there because of lack of completion of a thought. Sentences made into smaller sentences to find the focus of the record and the words. I don't want ot confuse with object switching prose. The chapter, I think, I will probably read again though I should continue on to the next. I need to read just the end again. I suppose I could wait.

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The read and write of the first sentence needed to be edited because it makes Dick's thought read to be too unnatural. The second sentence is good internal dialog, but not the proper description of the surrounding envrinoment. The words read and thought and edited. Now they are changed. I read the words of Dick's beginning thoughts and the beginning thought seem too focused, but once I read that Dick has thought the thoughts many times before it reads better. The following thought beginning to show the chaos of a bored unfocused mind. It also seems pleading and for the record after the other chapters are read like it was almost planned, or could be planned to have recorded for the record. I read to the sound of something falling. I read most with focus, but thought expanded the focus after focusing on the beginning sentences.

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r18306 | kalab | 2007-03-31 18:06:30 -0700 (Sat, 31 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read from the conversation with Psycho to the ends. I wrote more words to better show and tell of the story. Words were removed because they add too much. I think the end is near how I want it to read. I will read it again, I am sure. I almost feel like leaving it and beginning to read and edit from the beginning again, but I know not.

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r18284 | kalab | 2007-03-29 05:41:54 -0700 (Thu, 29 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I focused upon the stepping. I read near, by, the words about Dick falling and crawling. I bega with the stop of the walk to the wall. I foucsed upon making the definition of the wall accurate and simple. I removed words because the words needed to be removed. for they had no place. There were those words that did not fit.

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r18267 | kalab | 2007-03-28 05:26:23 -0700 (Wed, 28 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I forgot about the shell of nano, but remembered after reading of Psycho's fall. The journey to Psycho's fall is now better written, I think. It will give cause to begin reading where I began editing today. I did get a few sentences read before I read something almost ready of a critique. The swing and step shows and doesn't tell and showing for this book is better than telling. The voice of Psycho is now found for Psycho's current state. I read to the end, but need to read again. More change to the seelog. The coversation is fluent now for Psycho is focused. Did Dick want to enter\?

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r18237 | kalab | 2007-03-27 05:31:55 -0700 (Tue, 27 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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The last edit was the holding of the med stick instread of tossing. I began the edit by editing the getting of the stick after the fall. There were two instanes. There only needs to be one thought two could show confusion, but... ...There was then the seeing and changing Open to Straight because straight is better. Some internal dialog was removed because it is of a different topic that is an old thought and doesn't fit with the edits to focus the story line. Too much of a tangent of what is when Dick knows. The words I did read and I did like. I think I have a flow enough to begin the next edit after the fall.

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The taking of the medstick is needed, so Dick can be smart and inject self with the nano machines before hiting the ground to increase chance of life. The action is different for now both hands are full of items. I like the movements more they way they now are.

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No other thought ii is needed before Dick puts head into tap. Less is more.

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I want to ride the book of the term Entropy core. I only want core. I read the pace of the chase of Psycho to center and thought i will read it again this read was slow and focused on aspects and those words read. The sentences remove because those sentences didn't need to exist. The internal dialog more because Dick is thinking. He knows that he is to put his head in the tap. Or at least that is the story.

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The write to have Dick unzip the pack to see Psycho.

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I read from beginning to words after last edit while reading down. I have read and like what was read. i do need to make sure Psycho is in the backpack during the fall, so there doesn't need to be too much thought of why the nano machines didn't capture and rebirth Psycho.

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The slow read. I went of on tangent while read the words. I thought of the chapters and words. A few words removed. I do like the slow progression ot Dick being analytic again after the head injury. I read some sentence more focus than other when focusing on more than just one sentence or word.

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More is less. I need no more for the chapter. The use of Entropy is pointless and should be done no more and it will be removed from the book. Lesss is more with the key words. United States of America is better for it focuses upon us all.

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r18122 | kalab | 2007-03-23 05:56:56 -0700 (Fri, 23 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read from walking to wall to leaping for core of Psycho. I focused on the first words I read. I edited the seelog, the internal dialog. I read fast. I did focus when reading and found edits. Those edits became the focus because they required more knowledge of what came before and after, so the fast reading became slow reading and I found the flow and the places to edit then I began to write. The words removed needed to be removed. The dialog is always something to improve. More thought of Dick before the action happens. Dick the detective.

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The though for the new scene of the Gee Forty-three turning into nano-machines is a thought I have thought for more than just today. The thought will add more thought and questions of Dickc while he is walking to the edge of the room with the beam of light in the center during the next chapter. The thought and the description is now better. I do like the shadow upon the floor. That's probably a few words I can think of as keepers.

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Instead of removing the thought of broken ankle and the forgetting of the broken ankle, I decided to leave the words for I want to show that the pain of the knee and face gone he forgot about the minor pain of a broken ankle. An ankle fixed of a changed Dick. I finished the thought because I want to further show the changing of Dick and the deconstruction of his body. I hope to show with this excessive breaking of Dick a thought that Dick has no choice for he has been broken by the system (whatever that system may be). I want to further show how technology will never work as well as natural process. In this case it is the natural process to heal. The broken Dick exposed. I read after the write of the last healing of the broken Dick.

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I may have thought I read the chapter slow and focused last edit, but I didn't for I found words that needed to be removed for they referenced the occurrence of an event that had been moved. I thought while focusing on the move of the words last edit, I guess I thought I removed them and I forgot about the other words occurrence last write. What ever the reason for the words being out of sequence, they are now in order and flow better. I did, and have, thought of moving some words for the words deleted. I thought of the amount of time pain is used, which I have decided is what and how it should be written for that doesn't tell and is basic show it shows. It is also the best way for the record to define what Dick is feeling. This is how the record shows pain.

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Less is more. Small change create big things. I focused on change the events that used the medstick. They, words, were not written to show the pain and the stabbing of life and the defect of too much technology. I removed this and that becuase the sentence was either too abstract or there were too many words or there were words that just didn't have reason to exist. I read front beginning to beginning to search the walls. I didn't read with lots of focus after the hole for I began thinking of an edit for the end of the previous chapter.

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While reading the beginning of the next chapter, I thought of the reason, which I didn't write, for calling it, the security system, stairs to heaven. I wrote why, which is because it is an endless staircase that will always go up and the only why to break the system is go down. I thought of this and the fact I need to begin detailing names as I once did and then I realized I probably misspelled heaven.

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I read from elevator ride, near the front of the chapter, slowly to end. I found some issues with a few words needed to complete a thought. A needed to fill in a grammar error or two. I didn't feel like I need to add more words to the end. I may take a few more away. Even the space I like. I will probably read the end on more time for the sake of knowing the words that are could remain and become the words that be.

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r18032 | kalab | 2007-03-19 05:49:24 -0700 (Mon, 19 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read about two pages of the first words. The grammar edit is to show that this is a new chapter and new frame there for the dialog and thought marks are new. Though this rule is optional for chapters this chapter needs to have the new beginning of internal and external dialog marks for it is a new record. The words I read I like. The words read well. The carry the pace and they bring up the pace.

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The next thought. The fourteen stages of the cross. The twelve holding back the Dick from entering the womb bellow chasing evil all the away. To help contain and separate it from society. The drive for greater cause. The thought of the people. But Dick always gets fucked for his devotion to republic. ...The words do flow. I have more words and another read for this chapter, but I think what I have written is there. I may write or edit and remove the action to get the crosss. I got lost in this thought and that thought. I was lost in other thoughts. The Detective Store created thought while I read, and I read the story as those thoughts... ...It was weird. The edit was good. The flow there. I got lost in random reads and edits while trying to change the number of panels to fourteen.

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r17985 | kalab | 2007-03-17 14:34:16 -0700 (Sat, 17 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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From the beginning to the setence of last edit, these words were read and edited and written. I deleted words and sentence because they are not needed and too much, and were written for some reason. I do not now know that reason. The grammar edits are to fit the flow with the added seeing of the warning rod. That idea I like a lot how it has added to this chapter and shows, not tells, of the alarm stopping. Fun words to thing and write. I am getting lost in the reality of it. The action and pace at a flow I believe is what is needed. The words remaing, and the words arranged, are creating words soon to be complete so they can be read by others.

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r17975 | kalab | 2007-03-17 08:55:23 -0700 (Sat, 17 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read. I changed the words to what the words need to be. I read a few sentences beyond where I stopped reading the words from the beginning. I changed the first of the sentence because it needs to be a short thought of it is one of those things that was triggered to be in mind. It is not a focused sentence like there was beginning this chapter. Short. Pointed. Here. I read the words and I liked the words. If I didn't, I removed the words. I did remove a few senteces of dialog. That was because it was not needed.

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I read and edited. Removing more words was needed. There were the sentences that where just wrong. The words that did not need to be. Words were read. I didn't read anything new tonight. I hope tomorrow's first write will be will words not yet read. The words read I like. The words I didn't like were for the most part removed.

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r17959 | kalab | 2007-03-15 22:12:44 -0700 (Thu, 15 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read from a couple of paragraphs before the first edit and read to the last edit. Not much focused. There were some words remove because the words were not needed and crazy not logical or thought with flow. Jumbled crap I think I wrote this week. I was able to delete words and found the words that were needed and wanted. The story does flow. My mind now too tired to finish.

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What read from top quick. I found some errors and edited. I read after the walk back. The focus of words to find the right thought. There were words removed because they had not place or need for the story. The words almost read to be of a different story. I actually found during edit reference. Sentences needed to be removed for the dialog was bad. Most the dialog was bad. It is getting better. This part of the chapter doesn't feel as refined as other chapters. The beginning of the chapter I like. And I think I will like this part of the chapter more after I read to edit again. There is a flow becoming, but the record hasn't been transcribed. It will be. The next edit I plan on reading the words to and upon the corner. I will find the street and continue with the edit.

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r17921 | kalab | 2007-03-13 21:43:00 -0700 (Tue, 13 Mar 2007) | 1 line
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I read to the description of the buildings and focused most on the events before and after Dick turning to walk toward the white light. I thought of the need to maybe remove all time. I may. I may not. I don't want this to be about time, but I feel it needs to be in the story. I will think of the time timed after midnight. I like the idea of no time after midnight. I read the words after the turn to return, and I do like them but will read them again. I removed words that were not needed for they were of a flow that was uncertian of carrying anything to the end of the chapter or the book. What I read I like. The description I believe to be set. There is no more need to write many words. I do need to edit. I will begin with the turn again tomorrow when the mind is fresh.

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I read and edited and wrote the beginning of the chapter to find the place and write the flow from and to K Steet. I have out now the thoughts of Dick to show and tell motivation right now because Dick's mind is going very fast with thought of Murder in an unknown reality or reality. Every possible metaphore is hoped to be in the words of description. Iti is simple for the memory, but complex in the depth. I will likely read the first of the chapter again to feel the flow of the words as I read beyond Dick's turn around to walk to the white light and the reason why. The reason why is better. The flow and thought I think are where they should be...Or how they should be. When the should be.

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Feeling and being more. There were some sentences written to clarify the scene for the scene became confusing. I removed some sentences near the Gee forty-three discovery for the words were not needed. The feeling and of the wind and the coldness is to show drastic climate change and the actaull sensations felt by dick showing physical simulation. The words I wrote added to the flow. I feel I can read to the next chapter and begin to edit it. The next chapter I have thought of for it is a chapter I have had difficulty with while writing.

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I think the description will fit. I will read the words again for there is more thought for the story. Thought that is the story. I thought of the story the need to have water and quagmire to fall Dick's face during the last chapter. The swamp around desciption and the words and thoughts written up the the everywhere thought to show the range of technology and show what is around. Captiive on in the very obvious for mind is talking and seeing with Psycho while thinking of ways to find reality and discover what is to be to allow time to find a way to maybe reason from the trap. To give confidence to the continuing mission.

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I read from the first of the chapter to the landing of Psycho. I removed a lot of sentences for they were not needed to define the flight and glide of Dick. I willl reread the flight and landing of Dick and Psycho because it needs to be done. The words up and to the flight are, I think, something I don't read again. This read through clarified the few remaining sentences that were not wanted or desired. There were the typos and grammar issues that I always find, but I am happy I do find. I do want to add something more to what is told of the flight, I think. I don't know. I will read the words again and begin with the flight.

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I read from the first of the chapter to the sentence of Dick rubbing against a sweaty chest. The words read as they should. I think description is what it should be. There is a sense of chaos of the senses and the attempt to find control. What the mind of Dick sees and feels is overwhelmed with the motion of everything. This is what I want. I hope in chapters before this chapter I have captured this type of description of a scene both know therefor everydetail is not defined, but also a scene new therefor detail focused upon is defined. I like the flow. I will probably begin a few 'pages' back when I read next to adjust to the flow, but I don't know. I will wait until the next read for such an action to be defined. I have found that there are a few more than normal typos, but this I am not shocked or too surprised for I am a typo person.

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I read the chapter from beginning to end. I added the description at the first of the chapter for it was needed. I do not think more is needed, but I may add a word or two during the next read and edit. I had to remove sentences because they were not needed because they were excessive or out of sequences. The words read I liked, and I am happy not much in the chapter needed to be changed for I was able to follow the flow and not get lost. It having had been a time since I last read the words I did forget the chapter, so I am happy the images and sounds and feel remain during this read. I will now continue on to the next chapter for this chapter for this edit is complete. The next edit the copyedit will be the focus however I may add a bit more detail though as I think now I do noth think it will be needed.

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I fast read to the stopping point of last edit. On the way down I read two places I wanted to change, so I did because of redundancy and clarity. The read from under the circle flowed as I see it in mind. I think did add more description to show a croweded city. I did read and edit some typos and wrong words use. All in all I think the chapter very near completion and very near publication. I would like to try to read it all the way through before doing the final copyedit edit.

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The read from the first edit to the last edit. The edit was only really for clarity and flow. The description here and there needed to be rewritten, so it could be understood and define. The dialog what it needs to be. I don't think it's too bad, and it is of the character it should be. The description of the stage coach race I think reads as it should. I have a mental image when I read. Every thing read I think will last and is good enough to remain. I will want to edit for grammar and typos again, but overall the read went well. I will begin from the frontal lobe scan, which was the biggest change of the chapter. I still don't know if it will be called a frontal lobe scan, but a suspect it will remain called such.

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The words flow as they need to flow. There are a few sentences and paragraphs needing correction. Over all the story does flow and tell tale I want to to tell. I read where I edited. I read to after the Apple Pie smell that influences the senses. I will probably begin the edit before for I may add Dick seeing the drone. I may not. I know not right now. I will wait to read the words to decide if I will add more to show and tell.

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I read from the first to the last edit. I read from the departure of the resturant to the first flash of the strobe pulse after Richard suspects Dick of being a global red. The words have flow. I did have to change the internal dialog of Dick for it went of on a tangent I no longer think fits the story nor the flow of the thought of Dick. The internal dialog was pointless, so I wrote internal dialog that had a point. The internal dialog does show a thought process of someone thinking of the state of now, but also planning for what to do and thinking of the options available now that he doesn't need to go dancing, and that Mustang should have his parents out of town by the time they reach Always, so he can leave too. The conversation flow was good. I did and do like it. There is enough description and dialog to show the focus of Dick both familiar with the area and focused upon the state of now. The few writes of description are enough for this state of the frontal lobe read. The words up and to the point I think good enough for now. I think I found all the unreadable sentences and out of flow words that take the plot off on a tangent it needs not flow.

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I read a few pages into the story. There were a few grammar errors. I did a search and replace to input the lower quite. I also replace all the congov with hyphen to congov without hyphen. I may need a bit more thought and description for the first. I may not. I am unable to read that far right now. I will begin with this chapter next edit.

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The mean is complete. They are getting ready to leave.The read reads as it should. The description enough for the scene and the mind of Dick. There were a few grammar issues. I also can believe I forgot to have Now serve Dick's food. The dinner scene I think is complete. I will read again to insure it's flow, but with the corrects in flow made during this edit I don't think there is much more to write. ...I began the read near the sentence with first edit. I stopped the read and edit after eveyone pressed palm on pad.

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The first of the chapter description a little less choppy. I do need to probably reread it again after I forget. I may reread then skip the conversation to the point of the last edit. I read from the beginning to where the last edit occured. The conversation I like. If anything of this novel will be good it will be the interaction with the characters. At the first of the chapter. The inspection of the clothing maybe removed but it may remain for I think it is how dick will throw his thought to something else even thought he said he will not focus upon something on purpose to avoid having the thought read. The read was good. The chapter strong. I like the flow and where it is going.

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I have what may be the words to show the propaganda bomb and its effects. The edit near the end of the chapter to remove words that are not needed and are a bit excessive for the story. They point the finger too much at another and not you. The end also to obvious and read like too much of some jaded rant. The words edited and written with words that give more meaning to the story and show the movement of the congov. The congov finding people and beginning to search the area. The way the chapter ends also allows for some tension, which isn't needed and will be played off, or rather written off. I think the chapter for the most part is complete. I will need to read it again for there were enough changes that I need to ensure the flow of the pace is what it needs to be. I need to be sure Dick does notice everything there needs to be seen for the story.

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The read and the edit. From the beginning to the end. I didn't focus too much on the words from the steps to the circle, but I did read them and did edit them. I feel they were good enough to continue. I added a lot of thought for more thought was needed for Dick to think while he walked along the way to Larry's Fajitas. The thought is needed to show Dick is still activily thinking of who it could be that is controlling Psyhco. The thought will also show that it could be a company, a rival company which is something I want to show. I did also edit some of the longer sentences for they were too long and needed to be shortened for clarity and to find the way the record is defined. I add the words to tell of a hyperscan and what it doesn to show that it creates a written record...actually not show, but tell. I removed the talk about Psycho needing fuel and when because it was redundant. I move the talk of waste near the thought and record of Dick's focus on food because that is how the question is shown. I did read to the end, but after focusing from the circle to the propaganda bomb I read fast and on did some editing. Next edit I will begin before the propaganda bomb and read and focus to the end to complete the chapter and move on to the next chapter edit.

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I read and edited from the first to the circle. The words have an okay flow. I may add a bit more description. I may not. I think I like the idea of the yes and no be danger and potential danger. The walk is good. I do get a little confused. I remember having problems with this part of the book. I will probably begin reading the chapter from the beginning again to make sure its got the flow I want.

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The reading where the first edit is found to the last of the chapter. I began at the top and I ended at the bottom. The words are there. I was surprised at the breaks of conversation and logic, but there wasn't that much that needed to be written to complete the edits of the break in flow. The words are more here now. There was some dialog added where needed for further character development. The words removed were removed because the dialog was no longer apart of the story, so it was not needed, and it only acted to be a deviation from the story line.

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I search and replaced the hyphens with the dialog marks. I read about three or four pages worth of words. I like the flow. I feel i have the flow with this chapter. I will wait to finish editing to make sure the search and replace of all hyphens didn't replace hyphens not of dialog marks after finishing the edit of the remianing chapters.

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The replace of the hyphen with dialog mark. The read of the entire chapter stopping to write and edit where needed. Again, I read with textedit and not with vi and was able to see it differently exposing a few mistakes of grammar. The words are now reading better. The flow is there, I think.

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I editing the dialog marks and the T- of t-shirt to begin to edit syntax. I read sentences here and there from the first and wanted to make minor changes. I removed the mention of the global terrorist yellow because I didn't think it needed to be so much a focus of thought. I may need to be, but I don't think it needs to be on the first chapter. I began the edit to fix the dialog mark, but found more and went with the flow. I used textedit and not the terminal with vi to edit and found that it was easire to find some syntax issues that are now corrected.

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I began reading where I edited, and I stopped a few sentences after I edited.

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The chapter read from first to last edit. Only about two page worth of words. The words to read and have the flow of the record. the detail an account of what is the same to be sure that nothing is different.

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The read and edit from the beginning of chapter to where the last write for edit was made. The words written written for I think the internal dialog needs to increase. There are spaces where there should not be space of empty thought for Dick is thinking thought trying not to think for he knows his mind is being recorded. The edits in discription made because the description made no logical since and was probably over looked during the final write through of the chapter. The overall flow reads good. The few words added will probably be the only words that need to be added up and to the point of where I stopped reading tonight.

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I read from beginning to end. The ends were edits needed for the grammar fixing. I think I will remove the time need to of the tap. The after midnight thing is something ot use, but there should also be the need to find a way to gain the trust of the primary target or something, so Dick can help Psycho... ....I don't know. This is something I will think about next write. I left the dialog near the end in the story about the threee hour time need, but figure will like edit and remove most of it during the next edit. I like the chapter. I do think more sweating and some description is needed during some of the dialog exchanges.

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The time needs to be timed for the time. The book will being at after 10 P.M. for won't be that much time during the meal at Larry's Fajitas. Also the book shouldn't be a record of that much time for like anything American it should be fast.

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The internal dialog mark to being the chapter shouldn't have a vertical slash for it is the beginning of a new record. I read only about a page into the chapter. The words seemed okay. I will return to read later. I have been thinking of printing these words, with the other chapters, to paper.

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There is no button to push, so the button sentence was removed. I have changed Entropy to Extropy for I found the term Extropy earlier this week (see the FunWork123 or FunWork122 logs) and have since been thinking of it. I like Extropy better than Entropy for Extropy as it is define. I do not know if this is correct for as I have read the definition of Extropy I am not sure if the book The Detective Store is about order or about the chaos of life. For now it will remain though it is liable to change back to Entropy which to me represent more of a chaotic state. I have been thinking about not using either term and just calling it the system tap or something else. I will edit the chapters and while editing of cousre keep this in mind.

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The end is becoming. I think it is near completion. I believe it is near what I see it needing to be. I will read it one more time before beginning the edit of the words of the other chapters while returning to this chapter to be sure the end is the end needed. I am not sure if the need to show and tell Dick to an actual Global Terrorist is needed. I am not certain what is shown. Maybe I never will fully know\? For now I feel these words do define the end needed, or close version of an end needed, to complete the book.

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I had to edit more of the seelog. I removed some words that were not the seelog, but of the subconsious definition for it wasn't how it is to be defined any more. I read and edited around the words that have been removed or added. The word are reading as they should be. The story and the end is completing. It is nearing something to resemble a chapter of The Detective Store.

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The read was a good read. I think the words are near where I want them to be before I continue with reading and editing the chapters in from the beginning to end. I still need to think of the site between Dick and Psycho. I need to read in more. I feel there are the words needed to complete the chapter, but I do question the need to have them all. Some of the seelog to me now seems too much and shitty. I question therefore I need to reread and edited this chapter a couple of more writing sessions before I begin read and focus upon the the edit of the other chapters with this chapter being the back thought and secondary focus.

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These words are close to the words I want to have for the end of the book. The idea, or the beginning of the thoughts I want to resovle and create to begin a new are written, but do need more reading and editing. I think that it maybe a good idea to read this last chapter after each chapter to help think of the ending while I think of the words written for the chapter to ensure I don't write too much meaning into the story. I do think I will and should edit some fo the words of the first chapter. Some of the detail is not needed.

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The words for the action of running to the center of the room. I think the words are the words that are need to define and describe the action. I do feel this, but I also feel that I need need a few more words to define the run. I do think I ran is all that is need to show some action, but how much. I thought while writing (for that is all that i did because I didn't read much of the words except for the comments removed and the comments that follow) ...I thought while writing if the running will be enough. I also thought if the story and the meaning is in doubt and too deep and thick of 'layer' to confuse, but then I realize that confusion is needed and desired and part of the story as long as in the end Dick has a good reason to see the state and the United States of America survive by sticking his head in to not only hopefully live in some state, but also make sure that Psycho isn't trying to enter the system to destroy the system. Dick will feel like an idiot, but we all should for allowing war to exist.

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I read from beginning to end. The flow is there. There does need to be some editing to the description, but how things read reads in a flow that I feel is the natural way Dick thinks. I do need to think of time for I am not confident that the time is right. I also may need to think of a bit more description of things. I also need to think of more thought. It should be a focused thought, but this is some one who is not only thinking of what to tell mom and dad over and over, but is a person who is bored, so that needs to be thought when reading again. There were a few grammar errors, there are probably few more grammar errors to find and fix. I think this chapter is very near being complete. This is good for it needs to be complete, so I can complete the book. ...As I sit here and write, I do think more description of somethings is need to allow Dick to focus upon the world around and lose the sense of time like on does when one stares at something. How to show\? I may use some ellipsis.

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...didn't read a few sentences at the beginning. Once I began reading I began editing then I began writing. I think I have the words to show Dick standing. The thought, the seelog is getting better. It is almost where I believe it should be. I also wrote more to discribe the knee pain. I think I have the knee pain now where it needs to be for description. The jaw and the continual knee pain description will need more reading to know if the words written are the words to remain.

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I had to read the first chapter to see what it was written like. I read that i will need to write and edit some for the seelog read needs editing. The editing needs to be both by removing words and by adding more thought. I do also think I will be changing the time to 22:24. I do think editing will be needed, but the editing won't comsume much time for the words are enought. I do think I will need to reason the reason Dick is needed, but I have thought about the entire book enought that this will be easy to do.

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There are words that will probably need to be added to this chapter to complete it, but for now the words that I have read from the beginning to the end of the end reads of words ready to be edited for the final edit. The chapter feels almost complete. There may need to be a few more visual details, but I think that the record is the record of Dick being recorded during his climb to break the security. ...Some of the seelog was edited because it was not natural for Dick's mind that is not too focused on article or complete and full sentences.

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A thought had during the walk to work on Friday while thinking of The Detective Store and this scene and the use of the word. I thought of the need to further show prejudice, and I thought of being able to further show it by writing these words that Dick thinks. This will also show Dick's analytical skills and humor and his now jaded outlook.

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The words from top to bottom. The thoughts of Dick going down. Dick commanding the elevator with God like power for he is commanding with mind and going down and down and down into the depths of a hell or a heavan. Dick knows not, but Dick is going into the womb of America. Down and down and down and down and down Dick goes for he may know. He may known becaue he may have and is creating everything.

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Thoughts and words I think of writing for the slow going down. The thought will be long and the description needed. The thought focused yet distracted. The thoughts of Dick are coming, but are coming slow. The descrition found, but more is needed to show the focus and the chaos, and how quickly both change in an instant. The thought switches.

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The slow read and edit. I began with the beginning. I read, I focused. I wrote. The edit of the move of words is needed for Dick will not be naked until after he is out of the cube. I am also thinking of just replacing all description, word, elevator to cube thus editing. The words do read, but some does need to be written. I now remember this is going to need some writing, which I am happy to do. I am wondering how graphic to be about Dick's naked body beyond thinking he should do sit-ups.

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The words of the detective store were thought this morning during the walk to work. I wrote them on the funwork file. The walk had many thought and there were some of these thoughts.

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There will be no A.I. Detective ever made for Dick either doesn't need to or isn't thinking. It. He either has planned in advance to create the A.I. Detective after the input or doesn't know there is an input. The thought removed, the words read from first to sentences near the edit last (if the beginning of the file is firs) of page. The words read well. After the last edit I look up cyanide on CDC website and read the site again. More thoughts of the book. I did think of the last chapter for a few minutes during the final minutes of the read, edit, write of this file. The words to have some flow.

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The read of the chapter has the edits and the flow to now read and edit to the next chapter. I did read the next chapter to find the thought for the end of this chapter. I move the words for the word there slowed the pace down. I think when I wrote it before I just needed a place to get it out, or it was from paper. I have the logs if I need to know. The move is at the end. I read from the first and lingered more. I didn't read edit, I focused. There will probably need to be more description of the scene charater, but the character now is developed to read, write, edit to the next chapter.

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The chapter short. There may need to be more description Sweat. The dril will remain. It needs to remain for the scene is symbolic and absurd and close to true form. The words of the tent not needed. Why hide\? There is not need. I do need to read it all in one write through. Next read I will write more through the entire work. I will start reading and in the middle after the drill. The read up to helped write. It read to be what is needed. More of self awareness and description.

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The chapter is of lenght. The words okay. I have the words in the mind. Now I will want to think of the words through time, here and there, in flashes of words of thought until tomorrow or a few hours of a few minutes. The space removed removed because it needed to be removed for no more is needed for the chapter. Only less is probably needed and that removed may be replaced. The space needs editing. The pace an objects of paragraphs do change and will change. I need a mind that hasn't completed a chapter today and a chapter days before. I need a few hours to see these words an focus upon them. I do like the first. I focused the read on the first and though space may be change I feel most the words will remain. Next read I should begin a couple of page after the beginning.

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The read through at the edits. No many words removed. There does need to be a removal of space for there are in somplaces too much space. There will be paragraphs of some of the action of dialog that are of a subject of action and time. The words and the chapter for now I think are in a state that with ease I will be able to complete. I will now read the next chapter and read the chapter to begin to complete The edit of The Detective Store with the write and the read.

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The read and the write then the read and the edit. More words removed, so more can be defined and a path the end choosen. The processes of edit needed to remover and write the words to move the story along. I wrote the meeting of Dick and Richard and Betty three times and the last wrote is the one that will remain. More words removed because they because telling when it will be shown. It will be shown now.

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I read real fast the words written. I scanned the length. There are more words than I thought. I will be removing many. ...Maybe. The time for Richard and Betty arriving willl need to be thoughts. The words are liable to all change.

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Dick know has bet because he thinks the government is smarter than to think to record all data because all data will just lose data with data.

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The writing of more words. The writing of Dick walk into the alley and of Psycho taking Dick from the crowd and taking him to the K Steet building to stun Betty and Richard as they entere to slip inside. Or maybe Dick is guiding a programmed machine to act, or maybe its all in Dick's mind. The hole is nearing. Dick is trying to find the meaning the physical feels read thought it may be a cap, and Dick could be in his chair with a cap. What is Dick doing\? Is this real. The sites are real for the time. A time never to find.

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The jester a thought to rid dick of the jacket. No he must be rid of it, so it will need to be edited. The thought for giving the jacket thought while writing. Many other chapter thought while writing. I thought of a conversation between Dick and Psycho at the penultimate chapter of The Detective Store. I thought of the fact Psycho will be fueled by the nano machines and the hole in the surface of the floor is only for the human heads. The nano machines that are part of the human trap are also able to fuel Psycho. Psycho can also connect to the system with the nanomachines. The action written will reamain iin the chapter. But that is another chapter. This chapter the words written is to continue to define and write the record of change of Dick of the store. The words that were moved were moved for timing and redefinition. The words removed have only been scanned over in the past. The nearing of Psycho coming.

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The read I liked. What was written of the Jesters begging for alms is something that was and is needed. The alms begging of different styles should be somewhere else, or at least homeless sleeping somewhere for it is Washington, D.C., which had many homeless and probably still has many homeless living around D.C.. The begging is needed for it is of the jobless ness and the job the environment. I may have some one beg when Dick leaves The Detective Store.

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The edit and read of the first and a quick scan and read of the entire chapter to get an idea of what happens during the chapter. I think this chapter (after a very quick read) won't be too difficult to edit and write. There doesn need to be some editing and thought of Dick to reason the reason for going along and carry on the thought thought, but by this point he just wants to get Psycho far from people, so when he leaves Psycho he doesn't put other in danger. I think the driving force (of thought past) was the rage of wanting to know and realizing that there will be no life after this day because no matter where he goes he will not be able to live in the United States, so he may as well enter then building where he will not only be able to find truth, but maybe some how survive or die because death is better than living out side of the city-state.

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The words and the move a shout of the security. The descent to the level ground. The lounge is easy to pass, so no one is pushed. I need to read of the floors. The thought of move with the write. The words not as free written as I thought. Something forcing me to write the words with thought after thinking of including MOVE to the motion.

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To the top and from the top. I feel the wordd are filler words for words to be later written to fill the void that may exist. I need to edit these words some time, but now I will just write to the end of the chapter, so I can have some completion and move on giving the entire book a structure. A structure the entire book has only in my mind and needs to be expressed to words in these files. I will also need to think of how things are done and what is said.

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These are the some of the words written earlier today while inspired by reading many things about high cocaine use and after hearing a Please Explain segment of the Leanord Lopate Show. The data of the show helped define what dopamine does and how it effects the mind. I figured George would ask and that walking up a tube would be interesting to show while asking about coke for the tube is very straw like and they are getting higher.

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The walk from the door to the shaft read, edited and written. The words are words to remain. I will use the line my line accounts until Dick is tackled by the security of Always. The next write I think I can complete the walk to the top of the shafter ending with the departure of Dick and Dick tripping the alarm. ...I have been thinking about the desciption of color and light and that description may change.

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Inside Always the stand. The words to describe near complete to get Dick and Betty and George and Richard to always. They walk, talk and wipe sweat. The images and the sounds. The smells may help. The ideas of defining the T refined to further defined many things. The flow of thought of Dick talking with those of Always to show them his knowledge of his existence. The flow to door ready to move to the building and the walk to the tube which forturnatly is written and only needs to be read, edited, written, but more reading and editing which is a process easier than writing.

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Readin the words and finding what is written and what is not written. I have read, edited, written for the first to the exit way in. I want to read again before I conitnue the flow to the words already written and edited. I read words I want to and will change.

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More thought. I hope all the descrition will not confuse. I wll begin to create longer paragraphs and the thought of Dick increases. The Description becoming focused thought once contact with Psycho is made. The connact with Psycho...

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From the taxi and to Always. The sight, the sound, the smell, the taste. No more fan blowing on face. The touch pad and shutting of doors something thought once the thought of the story was thought. The action of Dick and a transfer from one place ot another. Dick also will begin to think of the people around. Who is Con-gov, Army, S.S., or Senators, or just always wanting good times. Dick to think of people of surrounds now changing because Psycho is near. When will Psycho appear\?

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Removing Eleanor and removing all those words I will not be using because the story is better and those words though good (I like most of them) they are not needed for this book. The departure of Eleanor a good character move. A good part of the story. The chapter short, but will still probably be long. I need to have more thought. The thought of wondering if he is being sold and guided to do what he is doing. Always, the capitalists play ground.

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The continuation of the ride to Always. The completion of the ride. The words written will at least offer beginning words to help write more words so I can see what is being written and not just read the words. I like the addition of the tanks blocking more traffic. The humor of Betty is evident. I like her as a character. I still don't know if they name the have will remain the names they have. I like Betty, but may change. I like Eleanor. I like George. I like Jo. And I like Richard because I like the fact Dick is a form of Richard and I see Richard to be an opposite yet the same as Dick. The chapter is near to completion. I will probably end the end for the first of the next chapter, but for now the writing and editing of this chapter will not be the focus.

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There isn't much more to write. I can't think of the end. After looking at online maps I now remember the area. I think I will have them stop at a light to show the people and have the conversation of seeing Pyscho and how Betty doesn't believe it. The is something that gives the read some proof of Psycho. And Dick some proof of Psycho.

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I wrote then read teh words after the words I wrote. I need more thought for the rolling of the stage coach, which is something I will think in small burst thoughts through the day and until the next I write The Detective Store. I will also try to remember to think of the description of tunnel under the circle. Thoughts... I read the words at the end and actually had forgotten Psycho was to appear. I have been thinking of what event to write for after the circle, and then I read and remembered the sighting of Psycho. The sighting to go after a ffew thoughts of Dick wondering of Psycho after beginning the thought after seeing the cab. I will probably remove the talk of terrorists reds for that is jaded and has been done and undone. I will wait to edit the words from the file next write. I need to see a map to remember the intersections and angles. The buildings of the area I remember and need to be defined and will be when Psycho is spotted.

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The flow from the top of the hill to the bottom. The thought of telling and showing everything is short and talking about the sub levels of living, but only in vague terms, will be enough to show and tell. The talk about the weather is something thought of now. I think it is fitting. It should survive an edit. I had some thought about chapters 1001 and 1010 and the content. I think those chapters are written. I only need edit. I think. If that is so then I have the words in my mind. ...That was a thought I had for about five minutes during the write. The write began with a quick read and some edits to find the flow then thought of the words to help to see and feel the words. I think I have some of the words. ...When editing I focuse on the dialog because I feel there are characteristics I need to focus upon. There are words I need to use and not use. The see log is better. The seelog will return soon. After the circle.

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Now I read and think from the scan. The scan almost written. The the conversation of football will continue. More thought about the area and detail of it in seelog. The building of thought to avoid thought and allow for reaction. The thought of chapter 1010 was had. I thought of how it will also be a way from Dick to have more time to reason a way out of the Psycho. The Psyhco will return. I think the Psycho will return after the taxi arrives at Always and before the keywords are spoke and the record file created a new.

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I have read around the words where there are edits. I scanned and read with focus then scanned and read with focus and edited. The reading helped write the words to begin to focus up the stage coach ride. I am thinking of leaving it where it is at for now and return to the words next read and see if I can find a way to focus (if I choose to find a way for I may not want to) write more and greater detail for the race. I am thinking of leaving the thought, the see dialog dim and right now the mind is prime to write it all at once and write the words to the end of the chapter to get to the next to allow the scene to be read with a mind not full of other words and other lines of stories not yet written.

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The words to write to the race of the stage coache. Thought needs to be thought of and written and will be good thought to begin the read and the edit of the race and the thought of Dick and lead to the scan. The words read okay, so I figure a fresh read will get me through the words quick to begin to write from the scan to Always. The car will be driving fast and there will be a blur of time and the description will be greaterand the thought detailed and the talk vague and about nothing, or maybe very detailed.

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The read of the write in the taxi. I think of the amount of words written and i wonder if the words written are too many. I do not think they are for it is a slow ride, but it may be weird speeding up the travel distance and the change and how thought changes with change and obvservation of the environment such as when running or crossing a bridge. I think also of the time and the fact I have and will probably only write after midnight to define time because I will leave the time after midnight so it is vague and because there is more symbolism with midnight than some other time with numbers that is not binary.

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More words to show that forgetting is not better than knowing and remembering. For it would allow Dick to not think of it in the short term, but the long term if something can be done and thought of than all thought will be needed. The seelog with Dick I believe is enough to get to the race. The action now needs to be written. I think I will wait to write that for the next write so I can focus upon those words and write with the ones now written.

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The story continues. The Blue Coach will try to pass before leaving thecrowd of people and will leave the crowd of people and begin the race on the left and the red stage coach will be on the right. The thought of the story continues. The actions of the siren something to show ignorance and knowledge of the defense systems and more of how the system will cancel each other out almost everytime if they are too controlling.

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Through the intersection. The talk of hearing the message again and the faint memory of hearing it before. The roll of the taxi and the passing of the red stage coach I hope shows and tells as I want it to show and tell. The lead up to the race of the two stage coaches.

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The end of the traffic. The traffic clears. The definitions of motion to define subversive definitions of the time. The lane now open and the crossing now possible. Another peacher will warn. The conversation from the words of the preacher will talk to a joke and be forgot until Dick tells them during the next chapter.

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The slow ride through Adam's Morgan. The slow ride to show the slow ride. I think the stop at Columbia has the slow ride slow enough. The talk seems to flow, but I will need to edit to make the flow with a couple of errors and less fluid with some flows of the story. The dialog I like. I do want to have Dick have error with speaking. Everyone errors.

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The words to be tossed with from Bejamin. These words are written for the targets Betty and Richard will have been escorted out and will see this occur and think Dick is crazy and will think nothing of his plea to be written. This chapter will also be shorter for there is less need for the scene and the scene has been altered by the process of Dick telling Betty of Psycho while climbing the stairs to the top floor. Dick triggers an alarm after telling Betty that locks the targets in the bar staircase to protect them from Psycho for a few seconds until he could think further for he knows even a Psycho will eventually get through the bars.

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Some thoughts. The reading more than the writing. The ideas to keep the reader interested in the slow ride and the detail of life to define needs to be interesting and related to the state of thought of Dick. The words flowing slow, but they are flowing. There are ideas. The idea of removing road is one that will probably require edits of chapter 0001. Maybe. The rubber pathway and having no defined road is just to show the change after putting in rubber roads. Everything is even and separated by vehicle gardens in someareas because it is cheaper and easier and last longer.

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The thought and talk after the flash. i looked at the map to confirm the streets of the streets and the placement of the events and the actions of the events. The label cab was removed for it is a taxi. The flow of words to next gap I think written well enough to begin where there is the gap next write. I think by Monday these words will bre read and editing end to end for the next phase of editing and reading. More thougts of the seeing. I thought about grammar a lot. More focus upon the truth of Dick and needing to always speak the truth of Dick.

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I need remember the sweat and use the sweat to that is a marker to record Dick's body tempurature and a tell to tell if Dick lying or nervous or hidding something, but can be mistaken for heat alterations, so Dick notes the slowing of the fan in mind because either Dick wants to believe he is sweating more because the fans are slow, or for Dick to note that the fans are slow because they are. The thoughts and questions of if it is okay to kill a terrrorist or the government. Does one deserve more rights to live. All in this chapter. All these questions to be answered by actions to define Dick's character and action of the words. I thought of the conversation in words while writing this time frame of writing The Detective Store. The thoughts were of what Psycho after being restarted tries to convince Dick putting head in tube will not work.

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The thought becomes short while Dick is talking. I am beginning to see the scene and teh buildings. I saw no image of photos taken, but I did think of what was there in D.C. on the streets of the flow of the chapter when I lived there. The D.C. buildings of the change. The streets the same. The thoughts of talk and somthing to change and stall the telling until after midnight and after they are away from more people because Dick doesn't know what will happen if he tells them which he will begin to think of.

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The write of the scene for as I read I thought of the need to not only show the need to stop the coversation for fear it will take a long boring argument and make it longer. The content good because it defines why Betty wanted a cab, tells how the cab is broken and the showing of the human conceived machine not of sperm and egg not begin able to be repaired, and the use of the human machine for power.

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Read from the first of the chapter. I read to find the the pace and place of the streets of the flow. I read from the beginning, but did not focus too deeply unttill Jo began to go forward again. I did read. I just think the wors maybe becoming something that are actually easy to read. There is good placement. There was the need to remove words to rewrite the process and removed something I though witty. The thought of the people being globals needs to be thought more and more before the scan. Dick is either obsessed or is using for the scan block to show the government that he suspects the people in the taxi therefore will be scanned as an American of no harm or less, or he really is concerend because this is how terrorism has now been created and how information is used by the terrorists to get more information and object to create terror.

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A thought to think with other thoughts and ways and reasons for Dick to continue the conversation with the thought to remain alive while being seen to by a Psycho.

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The thought to have Dick be questioned then requestioned but in a diffrent frame is a good thought for the ride. The words t speak of it in a joking manner written after the read of write of the words from beginning of taxi. Lots of brief scanning to get the mood and catching obvious grammar and words choice editing. The words written to continue the thought. I did think I about the need for Dick to think of the group as con-gov once during the walk to Larry's Fajitas.

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Some beginning thought of how the shock of the drone will restart the conversation. This conversation with be had again after hovercopter scan. These words are to beginning thinking of how the flash effects the mind. I believe it removes before last moment of confusion or anger. You see you extend and then you be in the frame of time in the past. The subject there. The reset of the mind.

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Inspired by the sound while reading.

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I read the scenes before the hovercopter hyperscans the car while near Dupont Circle. The read of the scene in Adams Morgan. I then read backwards to the words with Pscyho and the scan and began writing were an edit was found and corrected. The read to the departure in cab and decided to have the hovercopter fade to reappear at the stop. The fade of Psycho happens before. Both times to show the either the hovercopter was casting or wasn't and just read Dick somehow and wants to wait to read more at the stop or many other things that could be thought. I will have Dick try to tell Betty at Always, but he will get taken away by the private security because Psycho is detected. The intension is to get to Always where there are no scans.

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I read here and there. I am trying to get to know what is to come in the chapter for right now I don't. I know see the ride to and through will be long. The story being created. I think and will think.

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Read and edit and write. I looked at the image of the streets of Adam's Morgan taken while in D.C.. Then I looked at GoogleMaps to get the streets and the flow of the taxi ride. The ride is now mapped. I placed the street corners in order and in place that they are likely to be described for the next write. Or for the write after next. I think I can now continue on with the image and begin to see the words to write to find the flow and define the words to show what is to be shown.

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Slow in the writing. I think I need to look at the pictures and the maps to get an image of what is and what is not. My memory is not that good. This chapter will take some time because this chapter will be likely long due to the slow travel of the taxi through Adam's Morgan.

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Move of words to flow the words to one. The scene now more fluid. I still don't know where Dick will be sitting. This is not something I want to decide right now. The scene read and edited and I want to think before more is created. Actually I want to read the scene as it is now after the word move to read it as a continues story as it was not with the words that were moved in the location where they were displaced.

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The flow from the building to the edge of sidewalk. The thought flow the thought. Words enough to maybe begin on the side walk to continue the story. The walk a story in mind I have written many times. The people, lots of them. are everywhere. People, people, people. Where will the caller and cryer and god-gov be\? On the corner before the Adam's Morgan trip.

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A thought while typing the words and thinking how once Dick is behind the elevator walls is the place for him to begin to write the A.I. Detective.

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The words were of 1000, but are moved here to give reason for the statement beginning the next chapter. The words written to add more detail to the exit and to show the con-gov holding open the doors, wasting even more energy.

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A thought of the thought alarm. More description in words before with words before may be needed. This thought here and now are words that will remain, but likely through edits. Another thought and words to write on the remaining chapters.

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Reading from the first of the chapter. The words flow good and what is written are probably going to be words that will remain. The thought of the dialog improving. I think the talk and the flow of the chapter will be easy. Thoughts for after the check poinnt by the Red Embassy under dupont (another scan) to Always and another stop. To always and out. I had the thought of beginning the thinking to all to show > and < for thinking ot all and not to self or a specific entity.

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I think the first will be how it will begin. The other beginning is not enough. I only read the frist few sentences of the chapter and gave a lot of thought to the beginning. I then skipped down to the taxi ride to write something I thought of again today that needed to be in the book and thought that this chapter somewhere would be the best place for the thought. The location was chosen at random during the scan. I read and then thought that the place the words are written are the best place for the conversation and topic of marriage.

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Words and flow for to the end. From the first end to the end I read. I like the flow, but there does need to be thought and description added to complete the end of the chapter. So far, I like what I read. I hope that remains after I read the chapter again.

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Trying to find the place to pay. I think I have found the place in the story where the money transaction takes place. The pace quick and fast. I also thought of adding during some part of the book Dick slipping a slippery slope and some one telling him to watch out because it is a slippery slope. Slippery slope needs to be used.

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The first edit and write is were the words began. The write was quick but the thoughts of the story are thoughts being thought so the purge of the words easy and smooth. I will need to return to add more detail of Dick's thought and the description of all things around. I do think I need to have Dick listen in on conversations of other tables, but haven't decided. The smells and tastes around need to be written. There is also the thought of other descriptoin that of a resturant I can't think of. I do think that the words are almost ready to be merged with the words that have been written and this is something I hope to do next write then I can be done with this chapter edit and write and continue on to the next chapter that has less words to edit and more words to write.

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I read where frist edit occured to edit to the talk of jobs.

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Read of where the worlds needed to be written. I read the words before to write the words after, but I didn't begin many lines before written words. There is a need to remove more words than remove. The dialog just doesn't fit now that Larry and Psycho are not characters to create the character scene. The thought of the virtual cap was just thought of and thought while some tangent thought about secret sentry and congov technology. The virtrual cap will not only allow for more showing of things, but allow Dick to more naturally, for he is a Detective, define for the reader reasons why Dick does what he does.

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Edit of Psycho and complete removal of Larry is closer. The writing of the words to move the story along. I have been thinking of the edit of the coversation about Dick and who Dick is for I don't know if I want to Dick and the coversation of where he lives and what he did in collage to be of the story. Is there something else to talk about and why talk about anything like that. To show some sort of size and racism because Dick is big it is assumed he played football. To how how Dick once played Football is maybe a reason to show his further joy. If I do get this deep about football do I need use football terms to define things...no, I don't. I don't because Dick is old and doesn't think and never has thought of the world in terms of football.

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Sentences removed for they were excessive and not in keeping with the description style of the record and were there fore removed. Other sentences edited or written to creat the flow for the eating of food. More thought is needed, but only after there is some flow with how food is ate and how the conversation continues which will probably focus on food or sex. Maybe both.

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I begin reading a few sentences before the the brace [] comment and read to where the new brace comment is located. The deleted the old [] comment and read backwards from its location to where food is placed on ordered after I tried to write the food getting process and realized I didn't know what they ate, so scrolled and read to the order and past and read and removed the HE food for it is not needed. I then read and edited and wrote to the distribution of food, which I think I can read next time and write beyond without needed to reread the getting of food. ...I have decided that Psycho will not be seen until Dick is outside. Why can be defined in the follow chapter.

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I read from were new meets old and read the old and edited the old. I read the frist iin places too, but not much. My main read was to the end from the words most recently written to page. The read, I think, is okay. The words need to be edited. I like it more without Larry being involved. The talk that was removed will make the coversation flow more natural. The words can detail the description to show and tell. The thought and talk with Psycho will be interesting...maybe.... I may remove the words. I may not. A thought for a name was Sue-z.

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The read and the write of the words what one would hope from a read and write session. The editing was good too. Losts of typos and missing marks. The read read well. I like the story and the additions to the conversation and interaction for I don't want it to seem too rushed. I want this (for it needs to be) a believable interaction. The suspects unknown of the intensions of Dick for he is smooth. The intensity my be too much. I hope it is too much. I have my doubts. I think the way it is written is close to its final form. I mean the pace. I blieve the pace and the seelog and dialog have flow that is near the flow needed for the words to be read and thought as the words need to be. The cycling of the tables must be remembered. And I remember it by writing it in every possible way. The mannerisms are becoming, but still need to be found and shown with grace and not like a joke or a cartoon.

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The read began where the first edit was made. The words read and written and editing to where the comment was written. The chapter is flowing well. The words and actions that needed to be rewritten because of the change of how the seating was first done is nearing complete, I think. The dinner should be easy to finish up this week. I think there is enough there to complete that which needs to be completed.

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The words now merged and in a flow to be read. The beginning for next write will at the hand shake of Frank and and Dick. The words will need to be removed.

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The cool air actually the last thought of the write and edit. The read began at the entrance and went to sitting of Dick. When sittiing I thought that I wanted Dick to be not sweaty, so and have no one else sweat, so to seem pure.

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Read from the beginning to the last write...as Dick approaches the hyperscan he will be thinking of what is around in relation to football. I may have Dick think a conversation to the guy and the guy replace to him after he passses through with a yes or no. I thought of adding squab to the dinner meat menu (with rat being the other choice) after hearing of squab earlier today on the radio. The forked FunWork113 log entry from today has the events as they were thought and heard. I will add more to the story. The thoughts of the night and description of what is around may neeed to be more. I do need to mayube add an Advertiser who shouts raps and songs and jingles from the corner. But what products to sale\? More thoughts of the characters.

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From the first edit to the last edit the words were read and edited. The words are written for the opening flow of the story but need to be edited in the format found since the words were written. The pace more detailed and paced if that is something that reads to be logical. I do not have a good visual depiction of the scene outside Larry's Fajitas as I do inside, so I will likely need to read and edit the sequence before entering Larry's Fajitas a few more times.

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Reading the first of chapter. The first of chapter needs some editing for the paragraphs are either senseless or the sequences, the dialog, the seelog, not needed for the story flow has shifted to the last chapter. I like some of the description read but some of the description is total shit and has been rewritten or is awaiting the rewrite. I didn't read much, but what was read was both liked and hated for there needs to be thought given to the words.

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The write of the words after reading from the cicle. I believe I have something that will be able to be called a propaganda bomb. I do need to write it more. After the read I feeling I can begin on 18th street next write. I need to begin on 18th if I am to finish this chapter and move on to the next. The edit and write almost complete.

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What I read I liked, but I am too tired to remember what I read. I was able to see the scene and feel it when I was reading, bu tonce I stop and thought too long because of a tired mind I was unable to quickly find the flow again all the time . Really tired.

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Random words written during the flight home today. These words had me thinking of the rubber sidewalk thing and how I may have some rubber side walks, but will wait to have them only if needed. I think mainly around the embassies and condominiums there will be rubber sidewalks. Nothing read. Just trasposed words.

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From the circle the words are good. Near the last edit from the first edit words where read. Before and after the last edits more thoughts need to be written. Dick is thinking a lot right now so there should be thought. Thought. I did like what I read, but then again I understand the grammar.

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I believe this to be the place to where the golden dome glow and Dick has accomplished the need to get beyond midnight. He now needs the realized it could be real and there is a killing machine and that even if it is a Psych Injection unless you can control it and flow the injection out of the mind. This will also be of pursuit because now there are road block that they get through along the bridges now canvased by police and con-gov. And drones, and a helocopter scanning and looking around. The diversion of going through three blockades to get to Always. The lack of human intelligence. Animal Intelligence of an animal think more than killing another with signals that are only one aspect of a binary world that we all seem to want to believe exists. Are we only able truly understand two states. The tangent and the reason I should be writing other words, but I had thought of these when I began the FunWork.

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The pace and the direction almost found. I looked at the picture. I began the edit near 18th and read and wrote on. It took some time to write the scene with the stage coach o Riggs. REading and writing to find the right place too time. The order and pace I believe to be okay. Close to be completed if the chapter were a distance.

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The read and edit began after the circle. There wasn't a lot of focus up the words until Q Street then I read and reread and began to edit. The removal of more words will be needed. I do believe by this time next week, I will be editing the next chapter. I quickly read ahead and now there insn't much else written that will remain, but I have ideas in my mind on how to finish the chapter and still continue to develop the story.

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Read of words. Minor edits. The mind feeling slow and needs to waken before I can edit. What was read was liked and the words seem to be find a flow.

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I looked at the actuall photos I took of the walk to the P Street apartment to Larry's Fajitas and I looked at google maps and between the two I realized I need to change the description of the buildings for the building structure should be the same for that will not change. I will label everything a hotel or a condo for there will be no apartments. I may need to shorten the talk of the walk from the circle to 18th. I will probably leave it. I also read and edited the words more than looked at the timage. The words a reading well enough to begin to move on. I hope to have this chapter finished with this edit by Sunday. I realize I may need to change a lot of the last for there are a lot of words and they will probably no support the need for Dick to ignore Psycho. There is the Propaganda bomb too which is going to interesting to write. I have many ideas. Lots of thoughts and sights that are pro America. Slogans and sayings and colors and images and feelings while the helicopter passes. The existence of the helicopter could be a reason for Dick to begin to talk with Psycho.

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Will I ever write through this chapter\? I feel like it is such a convoluted mess that is finally begin edited and written to clarity. I feel this but know there are so many more edites and so many more words needed to complete this chapter and move on. Is it too boring to read. Is there too much or not enough. I think of what it reads like. It is likely I will be the only one able to read these words and understand these words. Maybe... Maybe not. I hope the latter, but I am not getting my hoping too much. I do suppose that this chapter was alway on for the chapters that I knew would be a fucked up mess. This is also how I feel about the chapter from Larry's Fajitas to Always. I do believe the other won't be such a fucking mess. Time will tell that tale.

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Read from the first edit location. I think I can safely begin after the circle and begin the reading there. The words after the circle becoming more fluid and descriptive. Alomst to the point of completeness. I think I have the location of where the streets would be. This may change. I do need to maybe add a bit more description in all the dialog that occurs between Dick and Psycho before the right turn onto 18th. The propaganda bomb will be soon. On 18th.

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From the Contrator Government. The I started and read and edited top to bottom begin near where the edit began. I read slowly and read for flow and logic and sequence of events. There were the typos and the one too many words written removed, changed. There was some thought as to the scene in the center of circle, but I choose only edit for further clarification. More thought on the next two chapters. Specifically the chpater two chapter's away, the taxi ride and the thought of trying to reverse the Psych Injection if it is a Psych Injection. More thought on the noise of the wheels and how it needs to be shown earlier that the wheels are rimmed with steel and are all the wheels. Maybe even the trucks.

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More reading and reading and reading. More thought of the coversation. I know not now the conversation of the pronouns and where that thought will lead. Maybe it is over. Maybe the clues are there and the words and thought need not exisst until later in the story if I remember to write it. It may be removed. The other words where more of an edit to what has been written and is not logical.

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The edit from the sidewalk and to the center of circle. The dog removed because dogs are dead. The married couples to who married couples will destroy marriage not a redefinition of it. The state of America is such that marriage will always between a man and a woman and thus its value dimished. Because Dick is gay, he can not marry Mustang in the United States of America even in the future as Dick is, so the cicle is a play for married couple to go swing, for the government to find other's to fuck.

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I believe the words form the beginning as I have read them and edited them now are as they should be. What is good is that I didn't need to edit too much and the scene with the truck and the addition of the Church improve the chapter and the story and all the tropes of the story and chapter. My mental picture engraved in mind after many writes fo the scent, first beginning with words, the becoming more is now, almost, seeing what should be. More thoughts. Next write I hope to begin by the governmennt truck to note of the inner and outter lanes, but also to edit and write more of the dialog with Dick. More definition of the circle is needed for as it is written now it seems so small and the images of again in my mind, fresh from seeing the pictures I took months ago, have thoughts to of words to write.

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More walking and thinking. The words read from the circle and that is where the edits began. The words removed needed to be removed for they seemed forced and too much. Too obvious. Very Obvious. The idea of filtering and subduing being built upon. The flow seem okay, but I will probably begin again in the circle after I look at the pictures I took of the walk from the circle shot when I was in D.C. last. I will also try to access Google Maps to begin to get the street name and an idea of the a lay out to help improve the words that are now actually creating an image and not just words. I wish everything began as an image to me.

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The read began from the first and was read through to the place where Pyscho talks of cross talk. I was going to begin from the circle, but I read the first and read of closing the door and thought push was better, so I began the read and write from teh first sentence. As I read Psycho's voice after writing, I think what Psysho's voice is and will become is the voice of Pscycho. During the edit, I realized I a now able to separate what should be thought and what should be internal dialog. The description and detial begn the dialog. Thoughts of were the story are good. I did read the words of the read me to find Cross Talk and did read them for further use throughout the book.

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While I wrote I would begin at the circle, I can't continue the conversation if I don't know the state of the conversation, so I began once again near the first and ended where the last edit occured. The dialog and seelog is now something that read ok up and to the description of the Two contractors, which is where I will try to begin next write.

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Editing and writing through the chapter. This will be one that will probably be another week to edit unless I can get through it tonight and tomorrow. About four or five more hours. I do have the way Psycho talks now and have more of the pace of the chapter, so I now only need write read and edit and write the words.

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The talk of Psycho moves the story along. It will be easy and fitting for to write Psycho's new talk. The idea of using the Army words for the voice of Psychos that slowly change as it talks with Dick creates the character Psycho. The thoughts of the Psych Injection builds, needs to build, to show that this could all be in his head. Some hints of Dick having been in some sort of Army is suggested. Mustang, I believe, will probably be of the Army.

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I think I have found the style of the chapter. This will now be good instead of just okay. Dick will have to note and check off every object of potential harm while talking with Psycho two talks like their mission is a war objects follows Dick to Larry's Fajitas. Psycho talks like an army commander on a mission. Dick doubts Psycho exists, but is waiting for more proof to define Psycho does exist. The proof being if those people do exist. Which will further give proof to Dick to think Psycho is real and not just a Psych injection. The Psych Injection is on so complex or so Dick thinks unless more than on people are in volved in the Psych Injections projection making more people play along. At larry's Fajitas the question then becomes if Must has a Psych Injection. The checking of of all objects will be for this chapter. Thoughts. Still thinking of a Propaganda Bomb.

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Read and edit of more words. The last change is where I stopped. I began where the frist change is. The words are reading better. I think I will have enough content written that it will only needed to be edited. The editing will be difficult though for the dialog and seelog does suck. I can't remember much of the chapter except there is the hidding of Psycho. And the helicopter scan and probably will be the Proganda Bomb.

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Some thoughts of where to go. The confusion of the departure from the apartment.

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The chapter needs a lot of work. The dialog and seelog sucks. The flow and thought written needs to be edited more than I had hoped. More reading and more writing and more editing (deleting) of the words. I had hoped this chapter had more words that would remain, but after reading the words there are I feel that all the dialog seems forces and that Dick is some ranting fake character that is shallow and boring. Thoughts: More reading and editing.

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The read and the write and the edit. The read focused upon the edit. of the words then the write of the words once the edit were completed. The read began with the talk of the A.I. Detective. I believe the words and the use of Mustang talking about creating an A.I. Detective is both character building, storybuilding, scene building and doesn't seem forced or fake. Or as at least near a state with a flow that doesn't seem forced or fake. The ending open for change.

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I read and began to edit and write from the process of Dick wiping down and dressing. The words removed removed because they are not needed and useless. I sitll need to read and edit and write from the point where I added the creator thought. The dialog about the sleeping with A.I. needs improvement or removal.The character of Mustang becoming in the mind a character, a being. I can now see the person and not just an entity, an object.

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These words were thought as I thought of music and wanting to listen to music and thought of how when I first began writing The Detective Store music inspired me to write something about fool proof plan spoke from a track of MF Doom of a cartoon I assume was the Fantastic Four. This thought then thought of the need to include the sentence of sentences written from those words when I really thought about the words fool proof. I do believe we Amercians are fools.

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The thoughts of reading the story and of the character. The dialog is written to be more direct for there is no reason to have witty dialog with two people who know and care about another. The pace much better. The removal of the words and the direct talk of the record removed for between the two removed for it is known. The talk of as what Psycho may be is removed becaus Mustang is a fucking bounty hunter. The dialog and words and action better. The time read and found froom chapter one. The idea.

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Minor grammar edits. I only read what amounts to about three pages. I need to edit the first of the chapter by rewritting and writing more words. The flow as I read it now flows, but some of the description is lacking and shallow. More thought and a nother read may change the thought of the words.

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Edit of space. Write of dick to step up stairs to help place Dick for the end of the last chapter. No more than the first six sentences read.

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The read to were the chapter begins so I know where the chapter 0100 ends. The write to write the location and not just D.C.. D.C.. seems so...something. Too obvoius. The write of sweat because Dick was running. The sweat and breathing will need to be written.

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No editing just writing. The words written. I question the thought and the pace, but feel that when one runs the actual conscious thought is few. What is seen is limited to the focus. Becaue the recording of Dick needs to be limited to data that matters because the Government is recording everything, only that which Dick uses as identifiers to navigate home are recorded.

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From beginning the last edit these words were read and thought of. Mor words need to be read and edited and the edits will be many. Dick is now running and with Dick running there is less description for Dick is focused thought upon focus the body. I thought of the over all plot alot and the end and I thought of how what ways I can think to better create the story and write the words to give an ending with not answering any questions of why and what, but giving enough to allow the reader, the individual to define the why and what and how and when and where. I thought of the voices if Dick and the three voices there are in this story. Is this the voices test I have been searching for. The view points of three\? I know not. Probably more thought to guide mind away from the focus and fact that the words need more reading and more editiing. I do believe I can begin where I lift off this revision with the edit for although there are things to edit wit the words before the end of edit today there are further along then the words at the last half of this chapter. These words need the focus and editing for the are...

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The words were read and edit for top to bottom from the first location of the end to the last edit of this file. I did not begin read it from the first. The words read probably will need to be read and edit again. The flow seem correct, but I am uncertian of the way the description has been written. It seem forced. It read to be something that does need to be separated with more thought from the thought of Dick. What is thought and what is fact of description. This has been a question I continue to ask myself everytime I answer and have answered, but the question still remains for the next write.

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Reading reading reading. More writing. The walk from office to Mustang's lacking the thought and detail need and time need from the walk. Though thought is beyond time thought does take mind away from the passage of time and the passage of object before the mind. The descriptions needed and enough, but my need to write now the description of the peeople talking and the crowd of Adam's Morgan to improve the description for I do't think that the crowd is defined well enough at the beginnning of Chapter 1 and should be for Dick's detective attention should be of more detail when focused upon the envorinoment. Thoughts of words for later during the write. Next write I can begin with the first stree crossing instead of the first of the chapter.

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The edits should have removed the words no longer needed. The edits should have clarified words already written. The chapter for now is complete enough for me to begin to read and edit and write the next chapter. This chapter is far from complete for the seelog, the dialog and the scene may need more words or less words or different words. There may need to be more thought, too. I know not. A read after editing the remainder chapters will make it more known. I fear now that the dialog as it is written is bad.

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More reading and editing. The repeat of questions to see the level of intelligence or amount of ablility Psycho as an A.I. is able to function and to test if Psycho is real and not a puppet. How good the script is of the Government. I am lost in the chapter and know that the last words. The words beyond the last write and edit of the submit will require lost of rewritting and editing. This chapter is a mess. Need to clear it out of junk. I was going to include an Oxygenator in the chapter but will wait until the crossing of the bridges over the Rock Creek.

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Removing skin color for Dick will have noe skin color defined by the words of The Detective Store. This begin one of the thought thought this morning while walking to work this morning.

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Read from top to the point of last edit. The words read. There will be some repeating in the story to try to convince Dick that Psycho in some form is real and not a puppet.

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Hit a block. The words to introduce Pscyho need more editing after a refocus of thought. Next read will begin with these words for these words needs to read like words independent of supporting thoughts and words. The dialog flow somewhere. I know how it should read and this is not yet the worfds that are needed. I also question oof the the sequence of questionss is logical. Does Dick think like this. How does Dick think? The internal dialog difficult to pace with dialog. The story...

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Reading. Editing. Writing. The words of how Psycho becamse Pschyo and of Pscyho entering the room are words that need to be read, editing and wrote. I need to at first have Psycho talk object verb subject and only use Psycho. Then Psycho begins to think and talk like Dick and everyoone else as the chapters progress. The first of the chapter read OK. I needed to move the defining of Psycho becase the words removed where too detailed. The definition of cyber scan is not needed.

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Read, edit and write to the BANG\! the drop of body or box. The words read. I edited enough words that I feel the words written are well enough that they may be the words of the book. That is up to BANG\! And that is with the thought that some of the I's left maybe removed and some of the seelog edited for more passive flow. Ariticles are objects of focused thoughts.

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The I's removed create words that seem as if they belong in a chapter of a book. Once the head is healed with the nano meds the pain and is gone and body and mind become one and I returns for the human Dick. The flow flows well enough to lead into the thought of body and mind once again begin departed from body and mind. The detachment. The reattachment of body and mind and then the loss of body of mind.

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Minutes of a few sentences. I wrote the presure sentece a few sentences after the location it is now written. Inspired by the fall of the fuck cap upon the contractor badge. I want to save the words for they read to be words that may remain within this chapter of a book.

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Thoughts of the end. Words written to begin to find the words to define the why or whys, but not define the why. The words removed where removed for they were no longer needed and described too much of the actions leaving the readers imagination out of the story process.

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The words to define the fall and the pain are needed for the current description is lacking. The description now is better, but still could use some reading and editing. Time will tell. I am now thinking of the remaining instances of the chapter and feel there are things to be written, but know it is all here to create the frame to write the words.

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Read and edit of the words once written for the story, but now no longer the story. The time has been used to focus upon the end by reading it and trying to find the flow, but the flow jsut isn't near the end. I need to read and think of the end and what needs to be said and felt for the end idea is there, but the words remain distant.

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Dick inspect the contents once now to see what is in the pack. The water will be added to the elevator contents to be used to help against the poison gas.

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The end of the chapter now written to complete the build up of the breaking of the security system. Dick needs to search the back in elevator while searching for a gas mask which isn't in the pack. Dick needs to build up the sweat after the run up the stairs through. Dick shold also be reading and thinking about the obvious state of the environment to avoid thinking.

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SO... The thought is the answer to the question of why Psycho is not abosrbed or recognized by the nano machines as they leave the elevator. I figure the reason why is that Psycho will not only be in bag preventing direction conection recognition, and because it is in security system mode. The security system is old.

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The action of the push to be remembered for a later write.

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The thought of this occurred since last write with thoughts here and tere. As I was writing the last chapter I remember the piece thought and made the thought whole by writing the thought.

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Write of thought thought while reading the news. The addition of the question of suppression. While writing I thought of the thought of the writing the fall of Dick in the stair shaft. During the write of the words I realized I need to edit all the seelog needs to be editing for thinking and seeing. Seeing being explained as when Dick thinking thought while focusing thought to Psycho.

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The edit to edit the thought. The descent almost to a state of something resembling words for a book. I need to read the end of thechapter 1110 to have a better knowledge of the words written before the words of the first of the chapter.

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The green button doens't need an to define what it is needed to do. There should be something in the previous chapter that identifies the green button and the fact the it is glowing and glowing is on.

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The descent needs to be as if Dick doesn't know for sure that everything is made of nano machines. The descent needed to be and needs to be more decriptive. The fall and the hit is a better time and place for Dick to see and discover what above.

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That is what is needed for the mind and seeing between the two and reason for Dick not to put head in the tap. The idea of Mustang really being alive and the Psycho report disinformation a ploy to further guide Dick to put his head in the Entropy Tap. The Government to be framed that they want dick to do what he has done. The frame of the Capitalist wanting Dick To commit head to Entropy Tap needs to be written.

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More story line to define the chapter. The end read and the change of the last sentence to give focus to the action. More thought of the nature of the staircase. The need to go down up and down.

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The words to make the the chapter filled with words. The thought of Dick and his loved ones and their states. The other words more to begin define the test Dick does to see if the staris are nano-machines. The words removed were removed for they were not needed.

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The beginning did not have a thought or dialog to begin the new recording. The And Fall was removed for it may be moved to the last chapter.

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The walk up the stairs will need some point of inspection of location, some event that shows how people try to convince themselves they are going the right way when they are really going the wrong way. The words added to begin th thought of the walk up. The stairs better than whay was written. I need to make the beginning floor gratted too.

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The door knob is useless, so it is to be removed from this chapter and the next chapter.

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Upon reading I read of the tube and the cylinder lights. I also deleted the removal of the core and most the talk of the core because the words were not needed and were bad. There was a few sentences I did save and may use at the first of the next chapter.

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The second paragraph too much. The separated paragraph better for it keeps with the pace, the flow. The addition of the seelog of the focus thought and processes better, I think, with a few more before it begins to be rewritten read like a motion more natural and buiding to show the break down of thought with focus for the body to live.

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The words to begin the chapter. The words to begin the chapter written here are written well enough to actuall not need to change. The abstract thoughto of mixing up the thought that ended the last chapter is a good idea and totally random and though only because I was going to write the same thing every other line and was going to write it out instead of copy and through the processs of writing it out thought of doing the thought the way it has been written.

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I have actually thought of the meaning of the slave and while it was once slave labor it will change for that has been displayed and shown the entire book with teh people pulling carts for people after the animals have all died for they can not be sustained. The humans need to further represent forms of control like slavery and after hearing of a U.S. Congressman soliciting sex with a Congress Page to a Congress Page I can help put add the Page in to the story for it is a pair of government contractors, but even the government helps out the capitalists to be capitalist for they are capitalists. Should Dick think it\?

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The thoughts of Dick and the questions for Psycho to answer in one rage of spat of questions of why there isn't anyone around Psycho exept him now.

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The read, the read, the read. The words of the read read that the end needed to be rewritten with edit and write and read processes. The words of the other ending may be transposed to the first of the next Chapter. The new end a good way to begin the chapter off and keep the emotion through the entire chapter and not end it and need to recreate it the beginning of next chapter. The end of the last was good when the story was to be departure of Dick because of betrayal. The end of the now good because it ends the chapter with uncertainty.

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Now I read and begin to know the chapter. I think, if I have wrote already, that the resond Psycho needs to leap high in this chapter will be to avoid Government and Capitalist detection, so Psycho must leap fast up and through the clouds and fast down and the Government and Capitalistss will not detect. This happens while Richard and Betty are fucking, maybe in a bus stop, or maybe in the rail tunnels, or maybe in the shadows near Dick and Psycho's side of the street near the Cyber scan...which is for next chapter, but needs to be thought.

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The chapter read to have a a pace and a flow to begin a chapter, a record. I almost feeel the excitement of Dick and the Rickshaw, but feel it does need something else. Quick exchange, action. No dialog. I know not.

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The sentence form is still reading better than it had. The words of the T were too few to define the action and now that there are almost enough I am thinking of removing the words.

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Fitting words as I read not to end the chapter. I would like to write more, but time is not something that I have to give to writing right now. The words are the end I do believe for they keep the flow needed to end and begin again. The record.

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Words that can define and begin a chapter. Those words, of course have been written before and probably for this file. The words write on. More words to show drunkenness and more words to show movement and the scene and the fact there government is always looking the wrong way or the wrong place.

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The idea of having the numbers flash in mind is something to show that the mind can be written to, and how Dick has known the time during the past.

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An edit to sentence one helped think of a beginning last sentence of chpater 0111. The short sentence read better and feels better for it is no long and obvious.

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Reading the edit there were many attempts to write words, but no words were found to write for the end. The middle needs to be read. Or maybe the end again tomorrow with a clear mind and not a mind prone to tangents.

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The detailed actions of Dick for Dick to flow through and find the definition of the environment and as recorded by the government write and read.

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Reading to edit flow. Editing to improve the flow. removing words and moving. More reading needed.

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Read of end to read the end into mind. Change of chapter label.

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More thought and words to change the story line of the reason Dick went to the apartment. The words added to ease into the description of Larry's Fajitas to show the building thought of the focus of Larry's Fajitas and getting to know Richard and Betty. This chapter write and edit I want to finally decide on the names of Betty and Richard.

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The recognition of Larry's Fajita's should not be until next chapter.

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Replace needed action with shitty dialog once exsiting in the space that is now filled with words of action and tension to begin to build the chase and the possibility Dick may or may not be as innocent as Dick is acting because Dick may or may not want to tap the Entropy Tap.

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The end was bad. Every word written around bad dialog and seelog between Dick and Psycho. The entire sequence was too obvious an attempt to be witty, a bad attempt. Now removed, the chapter's remaining words already feel better than they felt while reading the removed words. All other changes are for having a flow between the remaining words.

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The thought of the Secret Senators to further define the environement. The thought and rubbing of plant then flows to tallking about the plant with another who may be the government.

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The thought needed to be released to define the dependence of both the Democrats and the Republicans.

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Thought to add a scene of Dick using the restroom. Dick will be peeing (for shitting is to shocking and distracting like George sucking so much Dick).

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Looked at pictures and plotted path of Dick with pictures and a map. The pictures for chapter six unlike the pictures of chapter four, are of the path. I just need to find the flow of the pictures and the circle of the circle of Dick's path that goes of on a tangent. The image are helpful to remember what the walk is like, the past. I can now begin to further write of the journey for I know the path.

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Quick thought of the need to begin to read and rename the tag of with the new chapter name allowed me to see one grammar edit and remember the need to add a reminder to continue an action.

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Read of new dialog read like new dialog. The chanes reflects the need for the words to become Dick and Mustang. The meaning of the dialog has a flow to follow, but amy need more words to dampen the conversation and the suddden desire of Mustang to not talk about the the subject.

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The conversation that allows Dick to talk his way into the friendship of the Lobbyists and Contractors. And talks of the cicada's existence. This is not science after all, but should at least read like really good bullshit.

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Chapter tag name change. The read and thought of what to do with cicadas took time for I even read web page on cicadas to reason if they should be alive because fo the changing environment. Because the actually time of this sis during an adoption/survival, I reason that there hasn't been any new construction for years allow the last cicada brood to release on last time. It should maybe be mentioned that the brood of all the cicada will be the last.

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Thoughts of last long trnasposed to file as words for The Detective Store. The garden filter for water was a good idea both for the book and for something to use once the individual will need to filter their own water using natural means.

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Random thought of movement and thought to the P Street Apartement. I also confirmed with Valerie the location of the P Street Apartment using the map I read during the last write time frame. The location is how I thought it to be and will be the route Dick walks.

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Looking at the image from the walk of D.C. to photo the path of Dick for The Detective Store. The words of the time of Dick and the Detective Store and equates to moving forward wtih the journey. The addition to th coversation is what began the write for the words inspired the mind to go from reading to editing to writing.

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Edit of words where read. The end is further down. More words are needed from the location the President Was Shot place to the turn down Embassy Row. Some tangent thoughts of dialog and see log form for this portion of chapter and the instance of neededing focus on an on coming truck changes the seelog from verbose to minimal.

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r13316 | kalab | 2006-09-14 19:36:09 -0700 (Thu, 14 Sep 2006) | 1 line
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Edit then read more. Beyond the edits I have read. I want to commit the change so I do not need to think of the change. The change was a sentence that was written the object possesion and adjective fuck as much as my understanding of what was wrote. The words needed to be moved to create logic. The other sentence correction with word addition is to add clarity to the sentence. Reading on..

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The mind slow. The words are there and I wanted to read them to be sure. Minutes, 20, The words read to the edit of FUCK. The FUCK need to move because the FUCK is a release action, so one can build to the release. The words read and there are still changes to be made, but the beginning reads like a beginning of a chapter of this book.

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The chapter needs to end with Psycho leaving the room to begin the next chapter with Dick alone.

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r13290 | kalab | 2006-09-13 06:01:40 -0700 (Wed, 13 Sep 2006) | 1 line
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Just reading here and there read for dialog and seelog that is bad, which is about the only dialog and seelog to read because it all reads bad. The talk too verbose and the though too clear. The words of Psycho too complex and contain I's and shouldn't until the end of this chapter. Lots more edits needed to edit the dialog and seelog now the characters are known.

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I have a desire to make the wall out to Adam's Morgan from The Detective Store one way with the wall to room, but figure that may be too much. The read and edits made to help the talk and the seeing progress. Confuse with thought and flow with action and dialog. I do suppose aslong as the remainder of the wall were defined as old warped rotting wood that the balance of having three really neat walls that were one way so one could see all the action would not only show our invention, but also our a lack of adoption or usefullness for used materials. Show the age were one has to recycle. For jaded this entire act will be defined. For The Dective Store three walls will one way mirror type walls vaguely defined.

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The end description changed because the limbs need to be bigger and the length known and the description of pencil used for that is the size and the word is dated, but something in use with the lack of energy available to power anything other than weapons and clubs and churches.

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Read and edit and write of adding the heat and smell. The movement. The read of thought and dialog...the seelog...to edit it's flow or lack there of a flow. More reading then ends and ignoring the words is timely. The words read.

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The addition of the water jug is for what I hope is obvious reasons. The talk of Dick and Psycho must be long for it must be shown Dick is a good Detective by asking questions and reading the environment to continuing to reason the reason of a G43 killing machine in office. While writig these words I had more thought of chapter B and how Mustang dies.

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More thought to smooth the flow of a calm and focused mind. Calm for having a G 43 Killing Machine in the room. The dialog error now fixed. The marks marked. The thought process read to where the last edits were made for this revision change read like words that will remain.

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A typo and with an extra word of verbose description. A copy-edit and an edit.

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People defined for the humans have been defined by Dick as people. People also is a better word to define humans. This does creation the question\? What is the definition of people and the definition of a person\?

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Hind is better word for it is quick and is used to define animals which the chair should have to begin to bring to the reader to defined Psycho a being. The shouting a duplicate word, so it needed to be edited out of the sentence.

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The reason Dick should use all the time begin upset is better used with a subject like death. Dick can be pissed off about the recording, but the Death of Mustang, for that seems to be where things are going for not only with the death of Mustang be metaphoric, but the death of Mustang is a much strong subject the the subject of recording. The recording will remain, but as a further-reason-to-be-mad act to show Dick's way of dealing with the emotional possiblitiy of Mustang's Death.

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A slow write because of the thought that will be needed to write this transistion and this scene. The death of Mustang efffecting Dick is difficult to define. The how-to-give-convincing-enough-evidence-for-Dick-to-go-into-the-building reason may make this to fucking pulp like. The idea of giving the feeling and thoughts is just something to convince the reader that Dick has a moral reason for not caring anymore. It is assumed that who killed Dick is the Government or a Capitalist, but it could be Psycho who killed Mustang, or it could be a lie and Mustang could be a lie. The effects of Psycho's proof will convince Dick to go in with skepticism and the thought that in the S.S. Building Dick may be able to find the truth. Dick only finds that the truth does exist within, but only a version of truth.

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More words and dialog and editing to create doubt while creating reason and proof enough for Dick to know there exists enough information to be returning for many reasons now like life and saving Mustang, and seeing the inside of the S.S. K Street building, tapping the entropy tap, helping Psycho, trapping Psycho, All these ideas may yet to be defined. The words written were mainly to further define a way one who loves someone would react, under control, after learning of their lovers detainment, which would be caused by the lover (Dick). The reaction still needs editing.

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The seelog and dialog becoming. The rage of dick shown. The scene with more description becomes a character. More showing. The reason of Dick leaving needs to be built up in the other chapters. I need to write more of it from the P Street Apartment to Larry's Fajitas about Dick being mad about the mind reading. The question of recording is almost approached, but is cut short with thought and with the arrival at Larry's Fajitas. I do want to leave open the thought of maybe Dick knows all this and this is an act and a way to act within a system that records everything and Dick knows it and therefore thinks and thinks up one story of facts of his life recording it over and over and over to lay a base for Dick to be able to act as if innocent while going through the thought of how to complete the case and not let the Capitalists or the Government know.

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Reading and editing. The paragraph was separated because the building should be separate from the warm rain to allow the reader to focus on both. The change is seelog and dialog and to try to make both thought and speak natural. The seelog needs to be further refined for some of it reads to be too distant from thought even for someone who needs to speak with internal dialog a lot to reasonn and create constructs to help reason without speaking ot anohter and the need to create A.I. Detectives with internal dialog.

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Read and removal of words that should have been removed several revisions ago. Too much dialog still. I will need to edit it. The story and frame of the chapter Too much dialog. I look up at the shell and see the last words and I see not enough seeing. I think I will also be aware of the need to begin to improve Pscyho's seeing because of now begin able to read to the human mind. Psycho shouldl, I think, for humor, be able to see to dogs and birds at first. this could be shown with chapter 4 or 6 ...I think it is four and six. To P street. From P street.

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To better frame the chapter for publication, the words are moved. I hope this will also allow for the story to flow in such a way to begin action of a reader reading only C. Or the end of B.

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A quick read of the words to find what exists of the chapter. What was read was liked. Some of what was read was out oof place and will need to be edited in the future.. The dialog changed to see long then condensed is better fitted now then it was before the change.

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Some thoughts of the scene to be and these seen to be seen. The writing was of the writing thought during the past few hours here and there while living life. The idea is a version of the description of Always to keep the description uniform. The rewrite of seelog and dialog...how about thoughtlog and dialog\?...changed because the flow is still rough and needs to be more focused to continue to the end. I need to read and maybe write the end of Chapter A again. Maybe one more read write later so I can focus on the middle of B as if it were a symphony\?

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The words to introduce water falling from the sky, and an blend of scene to scene to flow with a book.

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Beoming lost in words. Lots of dialog for dialog is needed. What ese to describe during hte acsent\?

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The words read better than they did prior to this next edit. This reads to be a chapter of a lot of dialog which is fine because they are closer and more familar and alone after being around the others for hours and Dick is mad about the mind writing.

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The move of words to a location where they can be used and are useful. More thought of the ascent.

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Reading on for the words to edit. The beginning can reads to set the scene for the chapter and hold the chapter as the flow goes everywhere. What to expect in a buiding but more chaos. This chapter my be shorter than previously conceved. The colors in the cloths, I have thought, should be of onnly natural colors or natural easy to get dyes for the world has no to dye cloths anymore.

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Some bad sentences written for the first of the is chapter. Those sentences, some of them, I beleive have been edited. The mural was inspired by life in the fact we may have a mural painted on our garage doors by Winter and by Jean Joseph and United States of Eden, which I hope the mural to allude to and use to define the state of the nation. There words written read to be, but may be in need of edits.

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The edit and write. I know I can now skip to the more difficult sections from Adam's Morgan to Always. The words read how they should be read...the words that begin...thought another read may find an edit or two.

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Somethoughts of the world beyond Larry's Fajitas. The time decreased because the pace of society is fast for it is life style and function to serve many people in an over crowded city. More my be needed... By this chapter Dick has accepted the mind writing after rationalizing there is no chocie anyway.

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Eleanor saying yes and Psycho seeing to Dick's mind as Psycho reads deeper and deeper into Dick's mind.

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I thought of either removing the fan or having the fan be more of a part of the dialog nad story. I was going to remove the scene so when in the cab of the next chapter Dick was to have confirmation that Psycho is real. Other thought of this chapter were of length and content. I figure the whole meal will be this chapter to the point of leaving. I may move some of chapter 8. Of length of book, I think after this chapter they will again get shorter and shorter in lenth to increase the dialog and though as the mind is focused on action as is how the mind focus and time seems to pass by when focused on something beyond the body.

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The thought of talking about the tickets and the game and the limit of items on can bring lead to the dialog which will help the relation ship of both be defined and show that they have been with each other for a while.

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Thought of the need to have a bomb scan here and not always for Dick goes through the exit. Richard will make a comment about there being no bomb scan at the exit of Always and how it is too easy to enter with outone.

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The words of the end of 5 to begin to replace the words removed and moved to chapter six.

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The words removed for they belong to chapter 6.

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Removing words to move the instance of Psycho leaving its shell and rolling to Dick for reasons noted in 12288.

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Thoughts of going to the apartment and inside. The apartment is of -v-'s and Meredith's P Street apartment, or of what I remember it the few time I met Valerie at the P Street Apartment before she moved to the HAH. The sounds of having a more Go-Go prodouced mixed version of Bhangra was inspired by D.C. of course and today's random thought of what would it be like to mix Bhangra and Go-Go or rather use the instruments to create Go-Go sound. I listened to the Go-Go sound Parker let me 'borrow' so long ago. I also reas about Go-Go a bit and of Bhangra. Randomd sites now logged somewhere on someones servers. The reading was of the instruments. The sounds heard on one web site of a chimta.

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Some thoughts and more words to lead up to the door of Mustang's apartment. I did not add the dialog at the enter box because I feel it is not needed.

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The sound and the smell. The need to define. The black box to control enterence. Thoughts of conversion of state and inhansed with technology. I need to read the last of 4 to see where it ends to insure that both chapters do not over lap.

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The shit paragraph is now an okay paragraph. It sucked.

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The policing sound subdues and will help give reason for Dick not freaking out to the fact THERE WAS A G43 IN OFFICE.

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Read and edit to read and edit. The words beginning to form a chapter. Need to write and add more sites and sounds maybe. Smeills too but I can't remember the smeill of D.C. any more. Like a hotel.

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More thought. Dick realizes he is likely the prey. If Dick is the prey will never be known. Dick realizes he is the one that needs to secure Psycho for himself but also for everyone else.

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The words edited needed the edit and the many words for the words were bad. What shit I wrote. I suppose the shit words were wrote to have something tow write with in the future, but having hte words almost was counter productive.

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The heat and as the body sweats. Where is Psycho. Or is that thought thought. The words of Yasir I like and feel that the words are what they need to be. Odd converasation between two people who know each other as friends.

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The crowd of Adam's Morgan needs to be described better. More showing. tell wit hthe thought sometimes.

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The words need to be read and written again. The dialog removed needed to be removed because it was shitty. More thoughts of heat and rain and other things.

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The words to begin to edit the coversation of how Psycho became Psycho. The edit is needed. The scen outside must become inside as it does. So far the words read from the middle (or so) read well.

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The rewrite of the thought helped make the thought read more like thought and less like a forced description even though Dick's reason for thinking the thoughts and getting them recorded is later revealed. The thought should not seem too forced, and needs to be presented with a flow that is thought like. The words where read from the beginning. Next read I will begin from the middle.

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Reading and writing. Some editing. More thought about evaluated and speculating what and who controll Psycho.

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Reading and thinking. What is the piercing sound. I am thinking is a type of policing. The sounds something to defined later as I police beakon to call upon police to come to the location.

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Words removed becasuse the notes were used and no longer needed to note. The reading went well. Now need to read and write from the end.

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Adding repitition to deepen the hummm of the sump pumps. It should be body for body should be defined one more time to focus upon the body.

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Reading and finding the place to write. The idea is that (the now named Richard and Betty stay a few minutes after Dick is thown out to fuck there and then return to work to checkout and go home. No new insite into what their names will be...

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Thoughts for words that a few but need to be written to continue the story in the mind, the synopsis and these words.

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Thoughts of thoughts. The smells need to be written to create the character scene. For some reason, George is now a lobbyies for I imagine lobbyists as being good time boys ready to do what every it is to make the Government to something for a contractor or a another capitalist.

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Some thought of what to do []. The read went well unil Dick and gang are inside the club the things a re a bit disordered and bland. There needs to be better discritption and dialog and seelog with everyone character and with Psycho. Dicks thought need to be written and relfect on with options he is rying to create.

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A minor explination of payment trasferres.

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New thought is to write a page a day. Or nearly a page a day. The words thought were thought when I began to write this morning. The child will not be paid. and the lights shine bright. Dick is wondering where are the G5 after he is in the building.

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The beginning need to have better description of knee...still Words read were edited because the words were not the words...yet

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Reading reading. The words to begin flow well with the adjustments. The middle seems to drag on and along. More thought is needed. More flow. And better description. More thought about what Dick is doing.

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A read and some edit. The glass comes from the light in the ceiling aboove. More something may not be needed. Maybe. There are the doors for the other offices and services of the K Street S.S. building.

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Read and remove. The words removed will be moved to chapter 6 or 7. The pace should not avert focus. The thought is not of Dick's mind right now for Dick is focused on getting into the K Street S.S. Building.

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Included name to clarify. Read and tried to write, but the end of the chapter prior I need to read and know. I should be reading the last chapter anyway for I believe it still has issues.

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The words to being have been read and edit and flow from the words of B. B needs to be read from front to end before writing the chapter.

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All mind are read. Global Terrorist minds are the only ones recorded.

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Reading into the words. I need to add the question that gives the answer to the time question. The use of this method of giving location and keying the Global Terrorist Tracking System, a chip in the body of Dick, like the chips in the bodies of Richard and Betty to enter the S.S. Building.

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Betty and Richard are on lunch break. Richard works the Second Cycle.

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To time the writing now before I take more time for the words to be written for these words were written during a span fo time when I was also petting Jigga and butting heads with Jigga. Who was just mean to Sassy. Sassy looks pissed off and is stairing at Jigga like she is going to fly over here on the couch were Jigga is sitting next to me and smack the fur off Jigga. Anyway. Show and tell were half the thought of this time was while wriitng these words. Another tangent to filter.

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Writing what was written. To write the words and create the flow so the beginning of the chapter can be overlooked and writing may begin with the wakl and the thought. Dick needs to think more wtih Psycho this chapter to further lead him down the path but to try and learn more about Pscyho. Dick must ask Pscho a lot of questions, and will continue wonder who controls Psycho. Psycho does not care. The question need to be many. I also need to begin to order and archive the images to be used for memory, time, and street names and the embassy locations for this chapter and chapter 5.

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The words of the begging of the chapter nearly found. I think. Need to think of were to go with more thought.

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Some words are good. I have edited this before. The words do get bad as the words are read from first. I need to think of sweat and sounds and smells.

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The thought of removing the thinking cap has been thought. The reason he goes to the apartment is to hopefully create space to think free of the Psycho mind read, and the Government, and is also because he does need to change so he can get inside Larry's Fajitas.

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Words are better but still need to be read. Thought thought while editing. More detail on the movements of Psycho mimicing thigs. The pace and flow orderly and logical. I still not sure what will be done with Psycho's extending limb (the limbs extended toward Dick). I need to know where I define to Dick what is in the Synopsis...that is when does he ask why Psycho. I thought it was the second chapter and may be the second. I just thought of it while editing. The end of this chapter needs to be read, edited, read and written. More sounds of the night. Think of the air. The humidity. The feel, the smell the taste, the touch.

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A read and a write to better write and create the beginning. The thought must flow to the story in what should be a natural feeling yet controlled and disaplined way. Bring the reader to the world then Dick. The words read better and fit the story. The thought patterns and thoughts will continue to be thought as I walk to and from work and thinking how one thinks.

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Edit to change and conform the words and the thought to a single unique patterned form.

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A tangent and some more affirmation to Dick that he is not crazy. Written to show that Dick is still questions.

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Read and edit and write. Thougbts of less and better. Betty, Richard, George, Eleanor are characters I can read coming to being. The need a little more life and mannerisms to define and bring the to being.

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More thoughts with the thougght already written. The words and the flow, there still needs to b e more random tanget thoughts that fade and emerge to then flow back to the thought of sitting there receiting life for the recorder.

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Read and write. Thinking of the riddle near the end and why Dick revives Psycho. For help with the key to open or because Dick believes he needs Psycho\? The words read seemed okay. I began with the first and read and liked it. Read to here and saw the space so I wrote the words. The words do contain a few more I's than I like to read and Dick should be defining.

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Some words for thought. I hadn't thought prior to writing the words that the Ocean would be surrounding the Beltway, but I do believe this will remain for I like the effect it has on the rest of the story. It is the effect I desire. I still need to show and write of the normal, clean (as clean as it is today) state of Washington, D.C..

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Dick continue to build thought. Lots of thought and some description. The thought will com dwon to Dick thinking the Capitolists want to have him enter teh Government S.S. room, and input Psycho into the Government System, but he will not he will try to warn the Government and continue to directo Psycho away from others and to a spot where safest for Psycho to be captured by the Government.

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The mention of the capitalists finally giving the records of Dick to the Government. That is why the G5's are coming.

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Read and rewrite of words. The edit to create the flow of the story. The thought was thought of using proper American cars or cars of the world. It would certianly add a bit of defintion to the scene and something I am likely to write during the next write and edit of chapter 3. This chapter would need some car name for the car gardens of this chapter. The name of the flowers were found on at http://www.usna.usda.gov/Education/blooming.html#apr and follow an early blooming cycles for the flowers, by two month to be hypothetical and only assuming without researchyet that if the glob warm early the natural cycle of plants would change and blooming would happen earlier months if there was only a short cold season. The idea of the blooming early because of the temp change was witnessed at times in D.C. when the would be a warm two weeks durikng the winter and some of the flowers would bloom eearly.

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The words for read and inspired by life. The From top to bottom read. Thought of ideas for other chapters. Some I have forgot already. Maybe using S.S. in the second chapter and not defining S.S. in this chapter will be something to do. The editing of some of the religious data was removed because the data did not need to be in the chapter and the book and had nothing to do with the story. I also read duriing this session of creation about K Street and its history on a few web pages. I found out K Street, parts of it, were onece, either on a street or connected to a street called Water Street. I think I may have Dick call it water Street. In that, You Mean Water Street. I don't know.

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Character for Dick and reason to use the metaphor in the last chapter written within. Dick, iis a very good pool player. While writing this I had the tangent thought of added Walls of D.C. to and security Check points talked about by the Capitalists and Larryy's Fajita's openenly like is day to day work for contractors to upgrad the Beltway around D.C., A wall to guard D.C. and the surround housing, which is owned by the Govern,ent and Capitalists of D.C..

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I was thinking of having a president motorcade with stage coaches but then thought the government uses fossil fuels, so cars still must be driven by the government.

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Inspired by a conversation with Valerie during dinner when I was telling her fo the things I had to show the swamp of D.C. in the future. I had told her before but she acted like I hadn't told her (We were a bit tippsy at BPP (yes it is an acronym now)...anyway. I have sub pumps and dams and Rock Creek as the entire thing a river, but I couldn't think of the on think I was thinking of and what Mike and I years ago were going to install in some guys garage (but then I got spinal meningitis and couldn't help install the sump pump). Valerie just reminded me of a sump pump so now I know what I was looking for and it is written. The sump pumps.

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Words to write to help create a good flow for the first sentence. More words wrote to break the I's and the movement of Dick to develop the character Scene.

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More reading. Just a little of the beginning to make sure the words written read well with the words written.

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The recording program can only recreate the sentence that the thought is related with. Any prior paragraphs are not recovered and under the law of the United States of Amercia by the mind reading program triggered when Dick says United States of America.

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Time, read in sentence and some writing of the human race. Thoughts to research cicadas again for I for got why they always were swarming the door to the Cleveland House the year of the cicadas (the year Valerie and I were married :) ).

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Thought: Do I want to begin every chapter with the words. I do, but they will and may be jaded,which is reason to keep the beginning of every chapter the beginning of the recording, or new recording, of the Capitalists with the law of the Government.

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The citizen capitalist, the individual is also corrupted and tempted by the Capitalists and their creations. I was thinking while writing the need for Dick to considering getting attention, but realizing a G5 killing machine can cloak, hide, get away and people will think Dick crazy. There is jail, and refusing to go along, but through greed and righteousness is compelled to follow through and use the system of recording to use as evidence to help frame a case if Dick lives.

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The write of the end and read of the final chapter written after lots of other words have been written had created the tangent and the tangent created the desire to add this comment to the text to remember and to edit and add more thought, or at least make the change and see how the change read. Tangent from last revision.

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The time may be right. The idea written. The words readable. Need more description and intensity. Moves well, needs to move more. Thought of ideas for the E Chapter. The definition of the reality. Questions of why Dick is going through the motions ...moving.

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Story line to be kept. The seeing to and the recording of Dick, who Psycho is recording to create, or so Psycho informs Dick. Dick wants to beleive Psycho because Dick still wants to, as a Detective and an A.I. Detective, wants to see the technology and the creation. Dick is honest with Psycho for Dick convinces himself Psycho is being honest with him, so Dick tell Pyscho the Artistic Intellingence are best create with Artistic Intelligence can create a good A.I. Detective. A copy can create an A.I. Detective, but not a very good one.

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The time needs to be seen and said at the first of the next chapter. This will also give more definition to the F blank space (pages).

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Reading the words. Adding words where the worfds seem to fouces on character and not enough on scene, a character. Wrods write well and the y read okay. I now realize there will be may sentences to edit that have great ideas but have only part of the words or part of the word order. Thought some of the end whie wiritng thiese words. Thought of the end where Psycho is fueled and moved by the nan-machine to be dropped into the Entropy YouI. I thought of motive again. Reason why Dick is going and am I showing. The reasons: Dick is an allegory of America. Dick feels a his good or right is the right of all and is willing to act without thinking before allowing ones self to live a path that instantly acts upon the though of what is good for self to make it good for everyone. Dick acts while thinking of the act and believes his outcome is the only good.

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The thought to built up why Dick can not learn more about the people he must meet to persuade to leet in to building, the contractors and the capitalist of United States of America.

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Need to see the image captured months ago soon. After I have and idea of where all the words now need to be written, I will look at the images. Someof the words last written read bad. They seemed forced and something that belongs as some shitty first book that has great idea, but whose auther was not skilled enought to write. The words now to me now read like words for The Detective Store. The thought process continuing to create.

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Read and edit and write. The sudden thought of a scene for thought. The flow seeme to read well. Further thoughts of smells. More reading and editing is needed. The words are now in mind and better remembered and reread from mind now that they are in a file alone and in a file for focus.

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Reading and editing and writing. The words read read. Removing I's where one can. The description fitting. More sound and light for the honks and shouts. The thought now is wanting to further record the reason why Dick triggers the scan of his mind for Dick has reasoned that a Government record is needed to protect him form the United States of America and the ruling Capilalists.

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Reading and editing and thought of an A.I. Thought process after reading and editing What emits the sound\?

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A correction on the words order. A correction thought while writing chapter 2 (as remember with the last revision of the system source controlling this file).

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The files of the chapters of the detective store forked from mail file and edited to contain only the words for the chapter so more words maybe written and honed and focused (read, written, editted, published) to complete the story and create a book.

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Chapter E. The story of The Detective Store near completion. The tale told and beginning to resolve. The story of the book near complete and shown and told to further define the process to read, write, edit, publish and critique words and space.

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Chapter C of F of The Detective Store. A story within a story. Begin with tension and end with tensions. The file to contain the words of the chapter supported by the words and the history of the creation of The Detective Store.

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Chapter A of The Detective Store. The words to define and show and tell. The words to become that which will tell the tale of Dick, and beyond one of the Characters, the files will tell the tale of the book.

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The file of Chapter 8. The data to become focused from the branch of origin. The new stream to help form and find the words and the ideas of the book of idea of The Detective Store.

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Words to be of Chapter 6 of The Detective Store. The definition of the processes of the story of the book The Detective Store. More words to become to show how to read and write and edit and publish.

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The file to frame chapter 4 of The Detective Store. The file to help frame and confine the thought of the chapter as written as a whole book which includes the other chapters of The Detective Store that will be create from and edit version of the file this file is copied from then to.

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File to contain the content for chapter 2 of The Detective Store. The single file is to allow the write and the editor and the publisher create and complete The Detective Store and to begin to architect and create the process for Word ProstituteTM to read, write, edit, publish critque a book and words with A.I..

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More thoughts of framing the frame from thoughts of the day. I also decided it should be may and that I need to branch the file now.

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Thoughs had about an hour ago while walking up an incline. I noticed when I focused on the horizon the back ground sort of bouced as did the foreground. There is of course the metaphoric qualities of the sentence. The sentence was written last after reading and wrijting read for the location to write the sentnece. I need to branch the file, or fork the file, Maybe I will do that tomorrow. It is gettin gbig and difficult to manage, and find a focus.

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Reading, writing and editing. The words are actually writing where they need to be written. The addition of why The Story begins were it does is because Dick says United States of America and that is one of the keywords used to begin the reading and recording of Dick's mind Of course, because the Government is reading and recording it does not mean they are listening.

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Thoughts of how to make Dick more of a motive of how and why he hides the thought. Does he just hide it because he can\? Just a thought I have been having about the motive of Dick wanting to access...Or maybe not so much the motive put how to hide the desire. Does he purposuly slipt and think at times of his own desires to access the information and doesn't care if the government is reading his mind and is also figuring that the thoughts alone will or may trigger an alarm for the Government to arrest him. So the thoughts need to be some how written of Dick seeing that he wants the data to see the data and to warn the Government of his plans and alert the Government by hoping the thought filter will see his desires to help a G5.

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More wwords and reading and editing. The thought of how I wrote Psycho to read Dick's mind will be used until Psycho can read and write to Dick's mind.

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Words read of the first of the files for the files ls long and won't be split (maybe) anytime soon. The first of the chapter was read and some editing and writing done. I am still writing for the flow of the narrative and the story. The thought almost the flow and style for Dick. Psycho and the voiced of inidividuals more delveloped, I believe, but could be read as bad if the first doens't define the narrative in a way to entertain and maintain reading.

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MOre reading than editing or writing. Mind is somewhere.

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More of the departure of Mustang for the apartment. And some removal of excessive Dick sucking.

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Thought of finishing the reason for Psycho's transformation had inspired thought. The words written more to create reason and a reasonable story of how and why Psycho is before Dick.

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I wanted to read, edit and write the reason of how Psycho thinks he found life, but I could not find the passage for there are too many words to read to find the words. I instead read and wrote the third and departing chapter. More ideas for time and peronality and movement. The thoughts need to be more often and the thoughts written need to be edited so they are fragments like thoughts.

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More reading and editing and writing of the last of chapter 2. The chapter needs more reading and writing, but is flowing ot chapter 3.

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These words where written yesterday and where timed but needed to be transposed to novel. Theses are terms the military are teaching the public. Any more of these terms heard will be written downn and used.

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More reading and editing of the frist chapter and trying to find the follow for the grammar.

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More reading and editing. I think this will be a week of reading and editing for the file is too big and I woul like to read and edit and think to see what exists and what doesn't. I like what I have read sofar. Lessing use of I is always good. If not good then better for Dick is not a selfish. I have had some thoughts about the end and how it maybe during the rebirth of Psycho, Psycho could become a G5 killing machine again, or Psycho could have been a killing machine all along and was ment to kill Dick because the G5 killing machines and perfect its killing ability so well it wanted to see if it could convince Dick to kill himself. Though this will never be defined, these possibilities need to be thought by Dick. Thought of Dick and the grammaredit will be easier once file is files..

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The detective store write was inspired by today and the past days of hearing some much news that I now have a place to focus. The store and shapping the reason he lies and doesn't want to leave with out Psycho needs to be defined with more detail as the words are written. I am thinking of changing the name of Benjamin Franklin. I know not what the name would be. A name more sympolic maybe\?

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I read the last half of the synopsis and the first of the book adn thought of how see for seeing for sight. There needs to be some more thought. I need read and write someother part of the book to find that thought.

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I am trying to make an effort to write, but I shouldn't be writing the end. I want to write somewhere else for the end is something I need to think about more and how best to write to it.

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Of yesterdays thoughts, The addition of God to those that control D.C.. The continual integration of the feel and see and think. I am happy I don't need to mark everything and that feel is now defined. I need to write and read on to other chapters so I may forget and reread the first of book. Valerie hasn't said anything about The Detective Store exept with words in an email saying she received the file. I haven't asked if she is even reading it. She may. She may not.

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The frame of see and feel thought of during the walk to work while reading Lassivyous aloud the words feel as you feel and then stopped read Lassivyous and thought of The Detective Store and how to frame feel for feel should how to define what is now a non-marked paragraph, the narrative, what you feel. The feel is now frame for The Detective Store and for Word ProstituteTM GrammarTM.

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I think I have found the way the words will be written for the A.I. Detective. The words of the first chapter have been marked with the grammar and the words to define to write the words the way the Detective store is to be written for it best define the form of the Detective Store. I wonder if Valerie has read The Detective Store yet and if not I may have her read this one...actually I may not. I don't know. This is the first time I have actually thought to think if Valerie has read any of it yet. I don't think she has for she has been wanting to finish the book she is reading now before...anyway, I 'll ask later to find if she has read the words yet and if not I may send her this revision so I can get her opinion on the grammar. Maybe...Maybe not. We shall see. I do like what is wrote and how it is wrote and find it should be written that way for it is i an A.I. Detective.

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Thought of what needed to be written. Read here and there. Edititng the Grammar the words. Thinking of why Richard and Betty don't know (or reach) to the Government knowing Psycho nad Dick's exact loation. It think the go to the building to help protect it (and to fuck).

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More reading and editing. The store of the reason G5 is not killing is and needs to be explained. To explain the actaul question/answers process will need to be defined throughout the store. I editing the words I think there is also the possible store line of wondering how a question is asked. Likely this will not.

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A first chapter that has been read and edited enough for now. The thought of Dick needs to be refined to resemble thought that is sort of random yet trained and orderly because the processes to create an A.I. Detective must be orderly.Lots of edits and reading with the commit. The words I suppose rady for another who just wants to read them and not edit them for I am not done editing the words of the first chapter. Nor am I complete with the writing.

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More of the store with the vision. I thought more of the why and thought of symbolism of having Dick naked and keeping Dick naked. I also thought more of the why which is something that I will, may, want to work on before the files become many, which I hope to be next week.

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Think the thought of free thought now that Dick thinks the Government and Psycho can not read his mind.

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I have read and I have thought. More timing and more steps for the words to become.

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A thought thoght on the way home. Writing Dick's thought process now that he is alone. is important.

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The nano machines will be the nuclear fuel depot, so Dick needs to thow Psycho up, which he does, to fuel Psycho.

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More words. Some of them feel pulpy. The words are satisfying enogh for a beginning of the chapter. I now am ready for branching the file.

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I forgot, for a time, about the back pack and the Entropy Core of Psycho. More words removed for there were either useless words or words to remind me what to write.

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More words written than commited. To find the words that are a little better than shiyy, I had to read and stare at words and file (the manuscript, the draft, the words and space.

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Wrote the thoughts again to clear the thoughts and think of other things while writing. The things thought were more thoughts into the conversation and then thoughts of how I will convince both the reader and Psycho that Dick trust Psycho. The thoguht of Dick will be interesting. The hole in center of room will be the Entropy input. I believe there will be holes in the walls labeled with the radioactive material sign to warn that they are nuclear fuel nodes.

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The words to begin the chapter I believe are found for now. Much better than what existed. Something to continue to write with the next couple days. I like the flow of the nano machines. The idea is good. I will have to thank A for this one. As I am now. Thank you for you comment Alex and suggestion of using Nano machines for now I will use them even more because rods are worthless and not needed and because you said -Make sure there are Nano Machines.'

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More of the synopsis. I am thinking of where to write next. I think the building room and the last chapter. As I hope to be converting the repository this weekend, it will soon be splitting the chapters and it would be good to have more of the story in all the chapters.

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More movement down and down and down. The idea of the G5 coming down the shaft an old one but one just know remembered. The G5 will not break through the top of the elevator but will supply a few paragraphs of words and moments of time unil Dick exits elevator for security room with nano machines.

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Synopsis read okay. Will use these words now for the page for Word Prostitute. Too many thens are wat I mostly thought had issues. But not many issues.

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The read of Synopsis. The words, I thought. read well. Added United States Government for the words needed. The reading flow of the synopsis, I believe found and written. The words sound. I can't wait to branch (with Subversion) the file to a single synopsis file so I can begin to create the short versions using the words written.

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More words while Dick Stands and sees. I am almost able to seee the scene and the site that Dick and Neuro see. It is clear in mind, so I guess I am able to see because I am now able to find the words needed to show the site.

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Synopsis read and edied. I like the flow and the words. It is complete, so now I need to translate the repository to Subversion so I can branch the files into sections and branch the synopsis file to the the various forms fo synopsis with the content. The idea is there. The tools need be available. I will need to do this after I archive image for space. Word Prostitute will have to create the process. Another idea. And a tangent that doesn't define The Detectivve Store but is hindering it from becoming.

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Here the words write after another read and edit and write of the Synopsis. I am feeling slow today, and still the words read, to me, something to be understood.

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Some words for the journey to the secret room. The elevator goes down and down and down and down.

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More words for end. Read. The words for end seem to fit. I am just finding I need to build up to it better. I also need to raise the question by asking the question of Dick a lot are you trying to kill us all to have Dick have a thought to say and think that is a habit, somethink he thinks and says often, but also to question the intent of everyone.

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Thoughts I had thought during the walks of yesterday. I have been wanting to change the those words for some time but haven't the desire to read the frist chapter for some time. I have been having furn writing the other chapters. Today I tried to continue make all the voices of the narrative unique but similar to set the words of Dick and Narration are one but seperate.

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More spreading of the story line the creation of the code. More thought for the passages of time and urgency and and pace. I read all over and edited grammar.

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Minor addition with lots of thought. To begin the thought I thought of where to place the thought, where to begin the thought and why the purpose of the thought. The thought is to include the thought Mark thinks when not describing. At the same time of the story he is thinking of an A.I. Detective and constructing and A.I. Detective. How does an A.I. Detective get created. That is something I will need t think of and create. I do know the additional story line could convolute and lose a lot of people, but if done right and if done while trying to actually create a BIOS for an A.I. and a Kernal of self and shell of a persona or character then maybe I can actually create an A.I. Detective. I have the words defined. Kernal, Shell, BIOS, RAM, ROM will all those fun indo European logic loops and syntax and mark.

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Writing the words to immporve the character thought and narration. The thoughts are sometimes too clear and coherent. The First Cha[ter thoughts, which a lot of the words are need to be less writer writing dialog for a charter which every word possible to define the words. I have the words, I just need to remove some of them.

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Read and write of synopsis. It is good I have not read it for sometime for I now where the synopsis becomes a bit lost or could be more to the point. It is long. I should be able to shorten by removing paragraphs.

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Some words for more of the words to for reason Dick continues. I don't know if there data will be erased or not. i will have to think about it. I think the data will be earsed or thought be erased leaving the reader to decide. Psycho says it erased it.

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These words are written because I really want to and need to begin working on this portion of the story because It is now leads to one of the more difficult scenes. Which is actually what I am sort of writing this for, so I can also read and know the words when I write how Psycho convinces Dick to remain on the case.

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More words and more words. The short story is becoming a book. Content and words are begin written at the end. I have the thought in mind. I will try to remember to write of the Security Room next tehen I will try to remember to write the walk to Larry's Fajitas. There is a paragraph which emotionally expressive and unique and while the words used are used to show emotion (Over Mustang's possible capture) and unique, the way the words are written should be used throughout the entire story. Giveing more character.

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A quick read of synopsis and quick write and rewrite of words of the CVS log entry to the synopsis to begin and remember to write of.

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Removing words for the words already exist and will be used on for a different scene if at all.

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Time ticks and Dick and Richard are saved because the Government doesn't want to kill anyone except Neuro and Dick. I didn't change the name to Pycho which i will do now.

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The work and the time. The work and the time. The wait in front of the Government building was an unexpected write. It is were I began reading. The read when well and the changes made and additions made were needed and a create change to the words as a whole. I am still wanting to change the name of Neuro to Psycho and think I will after I think of it more.

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Wrote the words to show the fact Dick knows his mind is being read. Read the words and edited when needed. There are some spots when Neuro and Dick talk of God I may remove for it is a bit much in my mind right now. Maybe I will leave in the active version and remove later\?

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Edit the quote and changed the mark to the actual dialog Mark after finding the editor eclipse could render a lower dialog mark.

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The lights in tunnel and how Dick throws the steel latch has inspired lots of thoughts of how to create the lock for the door by using motion and the lights to need to be triggered in an order. There will be 15 of the illuminating cylinder sections of the tunnel that Dick will have to some how find a way to trigger once the odred of how they need to be triggered is detected. The code will probably be on the back of Richards badge in Hex which will be a good way to introduce the story reader to hex for the riddle to enter the U.I.. Then I think: Riddle\? Or puzzle\?

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More words for the thought. The thought grows. The riddle for now a mystery with the cross.

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Just when I think I am done with the synopsis, I read it slowly and I find that some parts probably only make sense to me so I need to explain like fact.

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Read and wrote the know of Dick having mind read by Government. I read areound reading for the words that says the government will disconnect the line when actually the government can't disconnect the ine for that is the reason for it begin a 24hr secret room of the government.

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Though I am finding it more difficult to want to read, i do believe the writing of the synopsis has been and educational experience. I have never spent this much time with synopsis with other books. figured the meeting was there. And while the meaning is in The Detective Store, This from now on, it is only becoming more meaningful with the creation of the synopsis that I can now further write and find the constaints to write with to complete the thought with words.

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Reading some writing. I ended with thought and words of the journey from Always and to K Street. This is what I will wriie now, I have decided, after reading and editing. This is now, what I feel, needs the most work with words.

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More words in a location inspired by reading the synopsis and the reading and writing of the Secure Government building. I have ways to write words for the scene. I need more of the scene. Too much thinking.

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I read here and there. Don't know where to start. I think I will write the security room and the journey to the Government Building (as I have wrote before) I read all over just seeing where I am at and these two place are weakest, I feel now, with clearity and words.

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More words for another journey to somewhere. The roles caste now they must play out. The mass in Adams Morgan will be metaphor or an allegory of America bars...or something. I still haven't the thought down. I need to think that there is a stop sign and two lights before the mass of the club crowd, which is bigger than when Dick was in office. After the second light the car meets the mass. Maybe the car slowly moving through the mass of people walking and riding bikes is all the meaning the words need.

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The words seem to be written with the synopsis. Now I need only find placement and sequence.

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Now more of the words of chapter six are becoming one flow. Now next time I can write from where I have been writing for a time. Having realized I am almost complete with chapter six, I have been thinking about which chapter to focus on next. I will probably focus on the chapter of travelling from club Always and following the Betty.

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I love the thoughts one has when they just sit and stare at the words and read the words. Things like how to beat a government mind scan is a good reason why starring at the words is writing. With writing comes ideas, and ideas come from experience, and while it is not always best to record eperience for reference for later research of a book of words for I believe experience by memory alone is where they purity is at and I am a purist in some respects even though it could be that in the minds of many if many ever read anything I write they will thinking of me not as a purist. Where was I, Oh, yeah, the government brain scan.

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I have thought for some time the desire to Betty and Eleanor arrive and the words of religon persuade Betty to let Eleanor in. I have been thinking about htis change for sometime, the change of changeing Richard to Eleanor. I did the change just to think about the passage more. It is likely that the characters for the role witll change back to original form but I want it to be this wy for now. I do believe I will leave the religious talk in stead of sex talk.

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Another read and edit of synopsis. I it must be getting close to being complete for I am becoming tired of reading it over and over.

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The read and edit of the edit. Some words written. I am lost on where to go and where Dick and Neuro are and and what time it is. These things I need to know so i can write these things now so it adds to the tension later. Write the words on and on. I scanned the words and saw Kaleb Valerie some how tired to steal a scene by reading Dick's dialog.

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More thought than words. The thought begin 'How to fuel Neuro\?' or rather 'How to explain how and why Neuro can be given fuel in the District of Columbia. More thoughts of the walk and how now that the reason is part of the story and not just part of the synopsis.

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Some day I may be done, or near the words that I want to give, and give to Valerie and A to read.

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Lots of spoken words that need a scene to create an environment for writing. More reason to hurry the fuck up and nano machines. There will be more nano machines which will be described like this one. Nano machines are cool. A was right.

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The dialog was in the mind and so was the scene but it needs to develope. Trace will at Larry's Fajitas. Trace will nano machines to throw the G5 off his trail as he escapes.

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More walk and talk. Maybe that the walk and talk with be about the fact the Government is in Dupont. I do not know if the Government will be in Dupont it was just an idea that may want to work in to the story at that point thereby making the role more intense. Maybe Neuro will throw off the Government with nano machines to throw off the Government and the Capitolists who are on following them after Dupont. Tace escapes we later find.

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Another read and write and edit and read of the synopsis. I will probably send it to A. Thinking of A, after a conversation, he insisted one thing: Have nano machines. I sort of thought of the secret room ( the cube that can create stairs and rooms and doors because of nano machines, but now maybe I am thinking Neuro may have some, and needs some nana machine tools and weapons. The coversation was at Clyde's by what is now the Verizon Center atter he asked be what The Detective Store was about. That coversation also pushed mind to write a synopsis (hence sending it to A even if there are no words sent back). The convesation at Clydes did not last but a couple minutes

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More thoughts on the walk to Larry's Fajitas. The story flows and some new character I have thought of having Dick more in the know of where and what of the K Street Place Secure User Inteface. Dick should know from working with the Virginia security firm and it makes less more in the know of what is going on with G5's and Government. I also thought of the need (and scene) to have (with) Nuero removing the chip in flesh of Richard to inplant into Dick. Dick by then is willing as long as it is clean and doesn't hurt either Richard or Dick.

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Unexpecting words written for I was going to write at the end but then I remembered I needed to read the words to pick up the dialog after the events just written of. Now I shall try to write more words at the end of the section of 6.

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More words for the walk and the path of Dick to Larry's Fajitas. I need to read the first of the chapter again so I can remember the conversation.

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Words of the walk I need to think about. Thought on a tangent for a minute after Valerie found a rug we may want to buy. Thoughts returned focused and found written the words and the description of cars and trucks. I thought of doing this type of scene but figure I'd wait. But now I figure why wait. Set the scene for the more of the book.

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The walk along the way. The scene of the capitol. Dick walks along and realizes getting there maybe the hardest part of the job

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The read and edit of the synopsis.

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I wrote a sentence and read and edited. I am wandering with the read and edit and may write in the same word area but may not so I commit. I have thoughts to about the book but I am not having them now and won't wait just go back to reading and writing and editing.

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I read and edited grammar ending where I began to write. The words written are words written for what has seemed to become a theme, a story, of the section/chapter.

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Some reading and grammar editing. Brain flow slow so I will switch words. Need to think about what I want to write and will begin with next write session. What I want to write is Benjamin in drag. I may also look at the pictures for they are downloaded. If I do look at them I will note them as time reading The Detective Store.

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The chair description is almost there. It could be complete but I won't think complete until it is read again. I should note the clean nature of the chairs. I will leaving it for now and see what my mind remembers. it remembers the words just written and the dialog to begin the talk between Benjamin and Dick.

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The weather will become hot and steamy before they enter building. The rain is working out well. Good idea, I must say even though it is mine so I should not be the one saying what it is. Or should I\? Yes, I suppose I should. I should be writing about the book. The book that now has only more, slight discription which is needed. I do wish I had walked around K Street while in D.C. this time last week. I want to write of club Always.

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Great idea the weather has become. While at first it was to show Global Warming and unstable environments now it will allow Neuro act out forgiveness and offer a minor protection to get away with lying or begin a nascent being for Neuro is a nascent being and doesn't know any better than to record all data against the will.

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The temperature and environment while Valerie was kissing me. I had to say it for the half the time spent was me being rubbed and kisssed. I wanted to stop and have sex but she is going to make me wait unilt later. Anyway, I just need to say that I am horny. It does not reflect the words of this book in anyway. The temperature.

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More words and thoughts of the walk. I can't remember how many block it is from the P Street Apartment to Dupont Circle. I am thinking two, but it could be three or four. I will need the pictures. If more blocks then more words will be written.

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Reading and writing the words of the dialog. The dialog is almost there. I need the sights of the pictures. I think I will download today and maybe use them for more words. I have thoughts of dialog and thoughts of this that for the sections where I wrote dialog. Everything else is fine in mind. The image in mind alone will finish the novel. The image I have yet to see will proved the setting.

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And edit then write with frist dialog of Trace and Dick. The then an edit and read of next section. Read and read. Words where confusing where I edited last.

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I think, if possible, I will have the cap drive Kalormama to get to Always. I believe it to be possible, I have images but I have yet to look at them.

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I read and started writing. I edited the grammar. Something I can reason now with and without the comma. I think of the words and have nothing to add or thoughts to include.

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The cab rides are always and the rides of cabs when in D.C. have helped me write. This is something I do not have pictures of. I just rode by myself but observed and thought what it is to be in a cab.

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More words for the walk before I look at pictures. I am thinking of the walk from the circle to Larry's Fajitas but the thought just isn't there because when I walked the route I was luck I found it without needing to back track.

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Random reads and edits. Some sentences of the ....

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Read the synopsis. Will read and edit by sent to A. Read the first of the chapter a bit with thoughts. May read more.

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More detials of the walk. The thought and the knowledge of the path is helping give the book some more definition and Dick some more character.

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The words of the walk. The grammar edit. I need to think of the embassy row walk.

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Edited the synopsis for clarity and read the first for flow for I wish to (as you will should know) want to hjave Valerie read it soon.

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The elevator version, a synopsis. I did read a bit of the story after most the synopsis was written. More may be added but these words will withhold the need and desire to begin a synopsis after A asked me for the elevator talk version of the book at Clydes while we where having our first Bloody Mary. I said I was to deep into writing and hadn't though about it but after the talk I did.

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How Dick detects by the flow and patterns of Neuro's hover before him that Neuro is a ball of limbs. The words for the DNA story are begin written. Don't know where they will be going. I need to read and edit more for after reading and edting more I realize I need to read and edit more, but not too much. The words and scenes are what is good for now. The words, for the most part, seem mostly complete when written. It is, I guess, more a matter of Story change as I write and think and in mind and I need to read and edit so I can not only write the other pages but also write the words that need to be written so the story is logical.

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More edits than words. I may have read and want to get the words to Valerie of chapter 1. I My change the dialog of Neuro to talk and think in the third person. For example (seeing or saying): Neuro walked or I walked. Some but not all will be Neuro instead of I. The Neuro's instead of I's should be few but effective.

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The words are there. Larry will be in the Story. A better story and tell this will be with Larry as a character. Something thought of in the past hour with the focus of either removing larry and collage talk all together. This is better. Larry will be fun to write with.

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Questions on the way to Larry's Fajitas party created from what was there already and by editing and reading the first chapter which I want Valerie to read.

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More words for the walk from P Street. No thoughts on much else of the story which are new or are more thought to have more thought and therefor not needed to be written. I am still thinking of the unique pattern in the Y chromosome.

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Now I need to read the passage again and think of a riddle needed to open the door. Maybe I will move the time riddle to the door\?

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More of the conversation and the dinner which will be brief. The way they finish their dinners. Richard eats all of his food. Betty a quarter. Eleanor half. George eats only the meat.

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More words for entering the club. Some final changes to Trace like Tracy. I don't know the flow to Benjamin. More words. No new thoughts. Need to write the DNA mapping of Y chromosone to story to make question overload.

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More words of the record argument. The resolution is still being thought but there is something there. I need the scene. I have it in mind but I need to think or be there.

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The talk continues one. The thought of maybe changing Betty's name was thought. Thoughts and mind with decide. I am not sure about the timing of the smile.

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The food arrives for everyone. Trace soon begins to talke with Richard to befriend Richard to help convince Richard to go out to Always. Trace, when asked what he does says he is a bounty hunter as he is a bounty hunter. I still need to resolve some question I have been asking about the conversation with Neuro and Dick during chapter 2, the conversation that convinces Dick to take the case. I also need to make sure Trace isn't some sucker, so maybe he maybe a contractor fo the Department of Offense.

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The flow is found. The store continues. I just realized while writing that there are no lead female characters. While I am okay with the idea of no lead female characters for this very historically male role (at least most of the media I have been exposed too). I do think I will add the twist of Betty and Eleanor showing up at the office instead of Betty and Richard just to add a twist.

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I can't believe I didn't think of the locust seeing how I lived in D.C. during the time of two big broods releasing and mating and birthing and dieing. The cicadas were everywhere near the end of the cycle. Now I can use the experience. ...I also edited other parts.

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Neuro can play the sound using the robe and shirt or a cloak and shirt and no one would be the wiser.

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After the read and edit there was the thought ot move the words to begin the chapter because those words are best to begin the chapter and do not belong where they were for what have written since those words have been written is more fitting for the flow.

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The words for the conversation of human nature and skills learned when not killing pray all the time for the reason that only through long exposure to an entity do we learn its life and home.

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Read and edit and write of 1. Read. I like most of what I read. More thought... No thought now.

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Another idea for the story to build the suspense. A new element to make the time defined. Step by step. The editing of the DJ scene brough on the reason why Neuro needed to DJ and perform: to create questions to confuse the process to kill because the Government is on the way.

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Character, character, character, character. I have decided while the story and plot and words to tell the store are okay, I feel the characters really are bad, or at least not written well enough to carry the story. I need to write them better. I need to think of them more than I have thought about the scene and the plot and the story for those elements now have attributes to define them but the character element hasn't, I think, thought of enough, so I have written more words to define character.

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Refining the transition of chapters C to D. The story and words needed thought.

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The way out of Larry's Fajitas and an attempt to begin to resolve the plot and create the story. Where to go ... I have to use some dialog that uses 'Fahetas as the way some one says it. Maybe it should be Larry's Fajitas and the name described as Larry Fajitas like jit and not he,

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the enterance and why they need to enter there for there needs to be a reason Neuro, at that time with the police and the government hunting them, not to just force ones way into the K Street Place.

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The action of the talking of Dick back on the case. I was thinking after an email to DSR that my characters are, at times, lifeless and after that thought I have since wondered if Dick and Neuro are lifeless, While I have come to the conclusion that they are not, I do know they are not full yet and that is the reason for a book, a novel, instead of a short-story.

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Read and edit chapter 1 for it needs to be refined and parts need to better written and edited.

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Need to write more about the excape during the opening interview and reason how Neuro is not being tracked. The writing went well. I spent about fifteen minutes writing the sentence about the fountian. I Figured I should write most of the scene before I go to DC fo research because it is sort of holding the rest of the store back.

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Reading and editing and thinking about what I have and what I need.

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Thinking of holes in the story and the characters to build. Thinking of what to do with Betty and Richard. Thinking of the stairs as the only security. The key Dick gets from Richard opens the door very easly, I am thinking,

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I think I have the end of the novel. I have been thinking about how to end it for, of course, I while. I sort of knew I how I woujd end the words and the novel with a scene of Dick inputing data then F blank pages. The idea of Dick putting his own head into the machine because he could create a better A.I. was something I though when I started reading and editing and writing minutes ago.

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r8562 | kalab | 2006-03-30 03:17:25 -0800 (Thu, 30 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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More words. Words I thought were complete. Words that further prove there is a deeper book here as long as I remember the details of the story, character and plot.

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r8535 | kalab | 2006-03-28 21:41:01 -0800 (Tue, 28 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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I don't know what I wrote. I do know I took from part of file 2 of jaded the words to create the riddle. I like where the journy is going. I may have Neuro takin Dick to K Street to follow taxi, to follow Richard and Betty. The riddle may be good and if it is good then there will be a good riddle. to keep the mind entertained and smiling.

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r8524 | kalab | 2006-03-28 14:48:22 -0800 (Tue, 28 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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I did some editing for I have been thinking about the way to frame words that are thought and words that are fact. The narrative. It is difficult. I think I have a good beginning to what I hope to come an understanding. I am still thinking of a riddle for the K Street place, the security, or how to enter in the code. I think I will use Kaleb Valerie time and use the game FFFF.

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r8509 | kalab | 2006-03-27 19:47:12 -0800 (Mon, 27 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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More words from Always to Place on K Street. The idea of Neuro taking Dick there is something I just thought of. I have been thinking more about the security but will write more of it tomorrow morning. I need to think I a bit more but not much about the other scenes and over all flow and plot before I can write more right now. I am also a little burnt and feeling the preasure to just write and write and write and want to take it as slow as I should take it.

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r8462 | kalab | 2006-03-26 11:45:30 -0800 (Sun, 26 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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The story continues. The details. I thought a lot about the detials (or so I think :) ) because I have been having a hard time spelling words.

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r8440 | kalab | 2006-03-25 19:47:20 -0800 (Sat, 25 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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I think I will have Dick pick the pocket of Richard for the card while arm is around and when they both flex muscles and Dick easily out flexes Richard. The store continues. There are thoughts in mind that can better think of Larry's Fajitas. We will be going to D.C. to walk the route to take the pictures of the route so I can better define and remember from when I lived there.

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r8413 | kalab | 2006-03-25 04:09:41 -0800 (Sat, 25 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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The character Benjamin Franklin was fun to write. I did some reading of words written last night and like where I was going with the journey to the core where the entire scene is a construct to lose the one seeking the core lost unless they know their way to the core. Something as weird as walking down when you are really walking up and really you are just in a cube of billions of thin tiny rods able to fully simulate everything Once in the elevator the rods take over and move Dick up but also lose Mark in a maze. I imagine the rods extend ot form chairs or stais or a hall and the tiny rods move both forward and backward to extend and side to side for they are on a grid that can move the rod side to side so well that it allows the millions of tiny rods to simulate stairs. The rods are vertical for roof and floor and horizontal for walls and halls. The rods move and swarm so smoothly that on can only tell if they know. Chaos in moved ment is what you need to do if you want know if you are in this type of security system. I was also thinking of a virus that is just an A.I. that can con convince another A.I. to allow Dick to do something.

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r8396 | kalab | 2006-03-24 18:17:47 -0800 (Fri, 24 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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The more of the club. The words and scene will develop somehow. I don't know right now. I do know I will be focusing next on the enterance into the building for I can think about scenes in the club and every where else exept inside the building of K Street, which may not be on K Street and may be Minoti's Law Office Building because I have been inside.

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r8372 | kalab | 2006-03-22 18:44:11 -0800 (Wed, 22 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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The words are here. The words are here. The words are being written. I really want and sort of need to convert to svn for the banching, so I can copy and copy this file and begin it as a book. The is easy to complete. The though is there and character too. The story more than short. Needs to be a bovel.

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r8352 | kalab | 2006-03-22 02:57:33 -0800 (Wed, 22 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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Dick sits down and begin to bond with Betty then George then Richard then Bush.

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r8323 | kalab | 2006-03-21 14:23:34 -0800 (Tue, 21 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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The story and plot thickens. More comes out. Time and need of things destine. It happens. Neuro will eventual hit back all projectiles. When the march of Offense, Neuro simply holds them back as Mark passes security and enters the complex following Betty and Richard as the find a secret place to fuck for their partners went home early because they were bored.

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r8309 | kalab | 2006-03-20 19:34:58 -0800 (Mon, 20 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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I did more research on the two and from the apartment. I realize now that Embassy Row is not the route Dick will be taking. I did get a map from mapquest with directions from Valerie's old apartment to Larry's Fajitas. Now I think I will be able to write on tomorrow morning with little or no problems.

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r8249 | kalab | 2006-03-19 06:53:12 -0800 (Sun, 19 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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Now I can begin to see the story from Larry's Fajita's to Always to the Place on K Street. The group is ceated but the character needs to come. The story of why will likely happen with Dick getting Betty to tell eveyone at Always that she and Richard are fucking at the office in hopes of maybe having a four way.

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r8203 | kalab | 2006-03-18 03:42:40 -0800 (Sat, 18 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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I still want to write with Hyper-Content and as a service so I can get paid for writing time and not publishing time too. I really wish I had subversion branching so I could branch and create the chapters from the file. I suppose. I still need a beginning and end for each section before I am willing to split them up and give them the form of a good so the service is then something that can be defined. The story of the detective becomes a book because it is likely the only detective story I will write. Of course only time will let what I do as I do it Dick. I still need to think of the company, the employees, the alrams and dancing.

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r8169 | kalab | 2006-03-16 16:16:25 -0800 (Thu, 16 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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REad and wrote more words. The walk continues to the P Street apartment. The walk will not go through Dupot Circle on the way to but will on the way from.

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r8128 | kalab | 2006-03-14 19:22:00 -0800 (Tue, 14 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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So the reason Dick is walking over the bridge is so Neuro would have to cross through the creek of Rock Creek and over to Dupont and not over the bridge where Neuro may be seen. Neuro tells Dick later that G5 can cloak and reflect light with the limbs to hide self from sight what walking along the side of the bridge. In day light Neuro can be detected if stared at. At night Neuro can't be seen.

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r8098 | kalab | 2006-03-13 04:09:40 -0800 (Mon, 13 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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Here are the words. The walk across the bridge may need to flow better. I do think there needs to be something that happens after the bridge between it and where the president was shot. After that the shops can define the scene and maintain movement forward. I just have to remember some of what is there.

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r8026 | kalab | 2006-03-09 20:28:03 -0800 (Thu, 09 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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More editing and some writing. I am now stuck on how to get from the P Street apartment to Larry Fajitas through Dupont. I will have to ask Valerie. We shall see. Anyway, I at least wrote to Dick leaving the apartment though I will need to return to it so I can edit it some more to insure the word flow is the way I want it.

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r7933 | kalab | 2006-03-02 19:49:23 -0800 (Thu, 02 Mar 2006) | 2 lines
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Read and edited and made sure the store up to its written point flows and remains in the frame I wnat it to be within.

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r7896 | kalab | 2006-02-28 20:46:45 -0800 (Tue, 28 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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More words to complete the story. After Dick gets the Thinking Cap and talks with Sven he leaves to for the office and upload the data given to him by Neuro. Then goes to Larry's Fajits.

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r7848 | kalab | 2006-02-27 15:04:14 -0800 (Mon, 27 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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The words corrected. The though translated in present to define the script to create the A.I. Detective.

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r7790 | kalab | 2006-02-26 06:32:38 -0800 (Sun, 26 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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The need is that Neuro needs Dick to track people coming to Adam's Morgan to party and Neuro needs Dick to steal the Id from one of the Capitolists coming to Adam's Morgan and use it to enter teh Capitolist building and deploy and A.I. Detective to get and send the program to stop the kill process and create a looped entropy process. To enter the building to access the YouI to input the A.I. Detective Dick must get naked and have a chip implanted into the flesh.

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r7738 | kalab | 2006-02-22 20:54:36 -0800 (Wed, 22 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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The plot is coming to light. I still don't know what the fool proof plan is. I have an idea that Neuro needs a program to get its freedom to speak but what else. What does Neuro need the A.I. Detective for. Maybe to find who has the access to get to its freedom of speech. That is likely going to be what the need will be for at firest. No A.I. Detective will be needed. Just simple chase and find. The once the YouI location is found an A.I. Detective will be needed to get the freedom of speech from the capitolists who are working with the Government. I think that will work for the story.

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r7678 | kalab | 2006-02-20 09:59:51 -0800 (Mon, 20 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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Neuro enters. Neuro is part of the Government. Nuero is machine...maybe...I haven't decided yet and will think about it throughout the day.

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r7589 | kalab | 2006-02-18 03:27:38 -0800 (Sat, 18 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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The store continues and the character is being built and another story line woven into the store. I still don't know the character who hires the service of an A.I. Detective of the nameless main character. I don't think the narrator will have a name in the story. I wonder if the one who hires the detective to create an exact A.I. of the detective, and not just some configured facsimile of the detective. The one who hires the detective wants an A.I. detective that is a whole facsimile of the detective for lots of money.

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r7571 | kalab | 2006-02-16 22:41:01 -0800 (Thu, 16 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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Need to step away from this one for it is becoming a bit jaded. I do like the words that are written. I believe I almost have a case. I have the sub plot. Or rather a sub plot.

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r7493 | kalab | 2006-02-13 19:33:18 -0800 (Mon, 13 Feb 2006) | 2 lines
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The words to begin The Detective Store.

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I inspired by Hyper-Content and Robert B. Parker and Amanda.

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